内容正文:
Section Ⅳ Writing—Giving instructions
for making an unusual picture
一、文体特点
本单元写作话题是“Giving instructions for making an unusual picture”介绍如何制作不寻常的图画,属于说明文。
介绍类说明文是以说明为主要表达方式,用简洁明了的语言来解释说明事物、阐明事理,从而给读者提供知识的一种文体。
在高考中,其主要命题形式为图表式作文,有时也以图画式和提纲式作文来呈现写作材料。
它要求语言要简明扼要,通俗易懂,说明过程讲究层次性和条理性。这种文体通常用第三人称,时态以一般现在时为主。
二、审题谋篇
★审题定调
1.介绍如何制作某事物,目的是让人明白无误地了解它,并且给人留下深刻的印象。因此写作时首先抓住其基本特征。
2.要遵循一定的写作顺序,使文章条理清楚,中心突出。通常采用空间顺序,即按照事物的空间存在形式,从外到内、从上到下、从前到后依次介绍或说明,反之亦然。
3.适当地运用描写,以增加文章的文采,使写作内容更能打动读者,达到最佳的表达效果。
4.此类说明文的时态常用一般现在时,语态常用被动语态。
★谋篇布局
1.介绍需要制作的画;
2.介绍制作过程;
3.对所制作的画加以评述。
三、知识储备
★常用句式
1.Some classic works not only offer us joy and excitement,but also encourage us to think critically.
一些经典作品不但让我们喜悦和兴奋,而且鼓励我们批判性地思考。
2.My elder brother thinks staying at home and reading some classic works quietly in a situation of his own can help him better understand the author's ideas.
我哥哥认为待在家里静心地读一些经典的作品能帮助他更好地理解作者的思想。
3.The school library provides a variety of original works,hoping they will meet the needs of different students.
学校图书馆提供各类原著作品,希望它们能够满足不同学生的需求。
4.I hold the view that if we students want to know as many great works of literature as we can,we had better read the original work.
我认为我们学生如果想尽可能多地了解伟大的文学作品,最好还是读原著。
5.We are always finding new beauties in Shakespeare's poetry.
我们不断地在莎士比亚的诗歌中发现新的美妙之处。
6.The exhibition gives local artists an opportunity to display their works.
这次展览为当地艺术家提供了展示自己作品的机会。
7.Children can learn excellence in painting of good quality,also patience and confidence in the painting.
孩子能在绘画中学到精益求精的好品质,以及耐心和自信。
8.There are painters who transform the sun to a yellow spot,but there are others who with the help of their art and their intelligence,transform a yellow spot into the sun.
有些画家把太阳画成一个黄斑,但有些画家借助于他们的技巧和智慧把黄斑画成太阳。
四、典题示例
请你用家里厨房里的物品,写一篇80词左右的短文,介绍如何制作“披萨脸”。
[语言组织]
1.第一部分:介绍要制作披萨脸
普通表达:
A variety of different foods can help you make a pizza face.
高级表达:
You can use a variety of different foods to help you make a pizza face.
2.第二部分:介绍制作过程
普通表达:
You can use some other foods to create a pizza face.They are onion,pineapple,eggplant and ham.
高级表达:
Other foods you could use to create a pizza face include onion,pineapple,eggplant and ham.
3.第三部分:总结
普通表达:
When you have made the face,you can take a photo of it.This way you can keep your unusual picture forever.
高级表达:
When you have made the face,you can take a photo of it,so that you can keep your unusual picture forever.
[妙笔成篇]
A pizza face
You can use a variety of different foods to help you make a pizza face.Here is a good idea.
Use small slices of carrot or pieces of seaweed as hair,and arrange it in the style that you want.Cut up some tomatoes for eyes,pieces of cheese for ears,and a mushroom for a nose.Next,you need to think about the mouth—you could make a smile from a slice of bacon.Other foods you could use to create a pizza face include onion,pineapple,eggplant and ham.
When you have made the face,you can take a photo of it,so that you can keep your unusual picture forever.
日常生活中,我们会经常使用一些细绳或带子。你能用这样的东西制作出图画吗?可以的话,请用80词左右写一篇短文。
One possible version:
String pictures
To make string pictures,you need some cards,thin string and glue.Think about what picture you want to make.Will it be an abstract pattern,or will it be a picture of things,a scene or people?
First,use a crayon or pencil to draw the outline of the picture on the card.Next,spread the glue where you want to attach the string.You can make solid shapes by using circles of string.Once the string has dried on the card,you could paint different parts of the string.
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