专题04 高考英语应用文写作提分宝+讲练 -2026届高三英语上学期一轮复习专项

道歉信 道歉信是由于自己的过失、疏忽或不能履行承诺等，给别人带来了麻烦或损失，发觉后为了给对方赔礼道歉而写的以消除曲解，增进友谊和信赖的信函。信件通常包括以下内容：第一段：简明说明写信目的，表明歉意，希望得到对方的谅解。第二段：说明造成过错或自己不能履行承诺的原因，提出补救措施，希望能弥补过失，消除误会。第三段：再次表示歉意，衷心希望对方能够谅解。 【亮点词汇】 1.常用形容词 _____________真诚地 2.常用名词 _____________道歉 _____________不便 _____________约定 _____________疏忽大意 _____________约定 3.常用动词及短语 _____________道歉 _____________原谅 _____________疏忽 _____________弥补 _____________接受某人的道歉 _____________非常遗憾 _____________因某事向某人道歉 _____________向……说对不起 _____________为某事原谅某人 _____________并非故意做某事 _____________赔偿；偿还 _____________给你带来不便 _____________给你带来许多麻烦 _____________更加小心 _____________犯这样愚蠢的错误 _____________应当受到责备 _____________承担责任 _____________难以接受的后果 _____________下不为例 【夺人眼球篇首句】 1. Much to my regret，I am unable to… 让我感到遗憾的是自己不能…… 2. Excuse me for my not being able to… 请原谅我不能…… 3. I would like to give you my apology for... 对于……，我向您道歉。 4. I must apologize to you for…就……，我必须向您道歉。 5. I would like to express my deepest apology for not being able to …对未能 做……，我表示道歉。 6. I’m sorry to tell you that I can’t... 对未能做……，我表示遗憾。 7. I am writing this letter to apologize to you for my failing to…对未能做......, 特写信表示歉意。 【亮点出彩篇中句】 1. Now let me explain what happened to me that day. 2. I had intended to … 3. I am afraid what I have done has caused much inconvenience to you. 4. I am to blame for this silly mistake. 5. Please forgive me for a stupid choice of words. 6. I feel awfully sorry about it and want you to know what happened. 【韵味无穷结尾句】 1.Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused.我对于所造成的任何不便再次道歉。 2.Please allow me to say sorry again.请允许我再一次说抱歉。 3.Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.希望你们能够接受我的道歉，理解我的处境。 4.I sincerely hope that you will be able to think in my position and accept my apologies.我真诚的希望你能够站在我的位置想一想，并且接受我的道歉。 5.I want to let you know how regretful I am feeling now.我想让你知道我现在感觉多么的遗憾。 6.I am sorry that I can’t… but trust that you will be able to understand.很抱歉我不能......，但我相信，你会理解的。 【举一反三】根据汉语提示完成句子。 1.我为我的疏忽大意向你道歉。 _________________________________________________. 2.我为损坏书这件事向你道歉。 _________________________________________________. 3.很抱歉我没有遵守约定在公园门口等你。 _________________________________________________. 4.对于我说的话/做的事，我确实感到很抱歉。但请相信，我并非故意要 _________________________________________________. 5.为此我感到非常内疚，所以想告诉你实情。 _________________________________________________. 6.我们向你保证，此类事件不会再发生。 _________________________________________________. 7. 对于我说的话/做的事，我确实感到很抱歉。但请相信，我并非故意要…… _________________________________________________. 8. 我真心希望你能理解我的处境/设身处地地为我考虑，并接受我的道歉。 _________________________________________________. 9. 对于造成的不便我再次表示歉意。 【典例精析】 假定你是李华，与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店，因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件，内容包括： 1．表示歉意； 2．说明原因； 3．另约时间。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ [四步讲解] 第一步：审题谋篇 1．体裁：_____________ 2．时态：_____________ 3．人称：_____________ 第二步：列提纲、准写词，要点全而不漏 1．约好一起去书店 去书店 _____________ 2．表示歉意 向某人表达真诚的歉意_____________ 3．不能去的原因是要代表学校参加英语辩论大赛 参加英语辩论大赛_____________ 4．另约时间 对……方便_____________ 第三步：由词汇、组成句，表达亮而不俗 1．我们计划这个星期六去书店。 We __________________________ this Saturday. 2．正因为如此，我写信是想表达我真诚的道歉。 Because of this，__________________________. 3．我被选出来代表我们学校参加英语辩论比赛，你知道这对我来说是非常重要的。 I’m chosen to represent our school to take part in the English debate competition，__________________________. 4．如果我们这个星期天去书店你方便吗？ __________________________? 第四步　衔接词、巧串联，佳作顺而不乱 用unfortunately，however等衔接词 【佳作展现】 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【举一反三】 1.假如你是新华中学的学生李华，你的美国朋友Tom一周前给你发电子邮件，询问你暑假里的打算，但你因准备期末考试未能及时回复。请根据双下要点给他回封邮件： （1）未及时回信的原因； （2）你假期的打算（如做兼职、旅行、做志愿者等） 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2. 假如你是新华中学的学生李华，你的美国朋友Tom一周前给你发电子邮件，询问你暑假里的打算，但你因准备期末考试未能及时回复。请根据以下要点给他回封邮件： 1.未及时回信的原因 2.你假期的打算（如做兼职、旅行、做志愿者等）。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 求助信 求助信是当个人遇到一些自己无法解决的问题或困难时向别人请求帮助的一种书信。通常包括三部分内容：第一段：表明写信目的，请求帮助；第二段：要清晰陈述请求帮助的具体内容；第三段：希望得到帮助。注意语气委婉、真诚，并要向收信人表示感谢。 【夺人眼球篇首句】 1. I wonder if you could tell me the information about……我想请问您是否能告诉我有关……的消息。 2. I am writing for the information about……我写信时想知道关于……的消息。 3. I would be forever grateful if you could send me information concerning……如果你能将关于……的信息发给我，我将不胜感激。 4. I would like to know whether you can provide me with information regarding……我想知道你是否能提供我关于……的信息。 5. I wish to request materials for……我想要关于……的资料。 6.Would you be so kind to tell me information about……？你可以告诉我有关……？ 【亮点出彩篇中句】 1. Could you please tell me something about ……?您能向我介绍一下……吗？ 2. I would greatly appreciate it if you could tell me something about ……如果您能告诉我有关……的情况，我将感激不尽。 3. I wonder if /whether you could tell me something about ……. 我想要知道您是否可以告诉我……的情况。 4. I would like to know if /whether you could tell me something about ……. 我想要知道您是否可以告诉我……的情况？ 5. I would be much obliged to you if you let me know something about ……. 如果你能告诉我有关……的情况， 我将不胜感激。 6. I would be grateful if it’s so kind of you to give me some essential information. 如果您能告知一些必要的信息，我将不胜感激。 【韵味无穷结尾句】 1.I look forward to your immediate response.我期待着你的及时反馈。 2.Your attention to this letter would be highly appreciated.感谢你对此信的关注。 3.I am waiting for your quick reply.我在等待你的快速答复。 【举一反三】根据汉语提示完成句子。 1.如果能给我提供……方面的信息我将不胜感激。 ______________________________________. 2. 我写信是想知道您能否给我提供有关……的信息。 ______________________________________. 3. 此外，有没有我要特别注意的事情？ ______________________________________. 4. 您能告诉我……吗？ ______________________________________. 5.提前谢谢你的帮助。 ______________________________________. 6.我期待着在您方便的时候的回复。 ______________________________________. 【典例精析】 小伟减肥以后，感到身体疲倦、虚弱，不知如何是好，于是他写了一封电子邮件向健康专家求教。请根据下面内容，以小伟的写一封邮件，内容包括： 原因：觉得自己太胖，体重不断增加，担心形象不美，有同学嘲笑他； 过程：1)去健身房，两三次就放弃了，感觉太累了也没有时间； 2)节食，坚持了大约一个星期，经常饿的不能继续他的学习； 3)悄悄服用减肥药，一开始有效果，体重迅速下降，但减肥药对他产生副作用。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 第一步：审题谋篇 1.体裁：_____________ 2.时态：_____________ 3.人称：_____________ 第二步：列提纲，要点全而不漏 增加体重_____________ 嘲笑某人_____________ 锻炼_____________ 节食_____________ 减肥_____________ 对------有不良影响_____________ 第三步：由词汇组成句，表达亮而不俗 1.更为糟糕的是我体重一直在增加。 What's worse, I _____________ all the time. 2.我非常担心我的体形和自己的样子。 I _____________ my figure and how I look. 3.我甚至担心有些同学会嘲笑我。 I even__________________________. 4.曾经，我尝试节食。 Once I _____________. 5.我饿得厉害，以至于无法继续学习。 I _____________ I was not able to continue my studies. 6.我最终放弃了，因为我没时间做，而且每次锻炼完都感觉非常累。 I finally gave up _______________________________________. 7.由此，我不知道我应该做什么？ Thus, _____________. 第四步：妙衔接，巧串联，佳作顺而不乱 用适当的衔接词串句成文。 【佳作展现】 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【举一反三】 1.假定你是李华，计划暑假间去英国学习英语，为期六周。下面的广告引起了你的注意，请给该校写封信，询问有关情况（箭头所指内容） 参考词汇：住宿accommodation 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2. 假定你是李华，寒假中你去澳大利亚旅游，可是回国后发现你的相机落在旅馆了，所以你要给旅馆负责人写一封咨询信。要点如下： 1)入住时间：1月27日～2月5日；房间号：608。 2)相机：型号Canon Ixus860，白色；你的17岁生日礼物，很重要。 3)请他/她帮你寻找并寄回，表示感谢。 4)你的地址在信封上。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 叙事记叙文 叙事类记叙文也属于记叙文写作范畴，多以事件为中心，以时间和空间为线索，按事件的发生、发展及结局展开，一般最后要表达对事件或活动的感想或看法。 【亮点词汇】 aid n.援助；救护；辅助器具；vt.援助 apologize vi.道歉 ban n.禁令；vt.禁止；取缔 beg vt.请求，祈求，乞讨 command n.& vt.命令 demand vt.要求 offer n.建议；vt.提供；提议 personally adv.就个人而言 regard n.问候，致意 simple adj.简单的；朴素的；淳朴的 suggestion n.建议 acknowledge vt.答谢；承认；告知收到；致意 aggressive adj.好斗的；侵略性的；攻击的 communicate v.交际；传达(感情，信息等) custom n.风俗；习惯 excuse vt.原谅；宽恕；n.借口；辩解 interrupt v.打断；打扰；中断；阻断 formal adj.正式的；正规的 ignore v.忽略；不理睬 introduction n.介绍；引进 invite vt.邀请 noble adj.高贵的；崇高的；贵族的 plain n.平原；adj.清楚的；易懂的；简朴的，朴素的 private adj.私人的，个人的；私有的；不公开的，秘密的 promise n.& v.答应，允诺 reasonable adj.合乎情理的 slight adj.轻微的；少量的 thankful adj.感谢的，感激的 【常用短语】 forget it没关系 apologize to sb.for (doing) sth./make an apology to sb.for (doing) sth.因(做)某事向某人道歉 ban/prohibit sb.from doing sth.禁止某人做某事 watch out当心 see sb.off为某人送行 wave sb.goodbye向某人挥手告别 congratulate sb.on sth.因某事恭喜某人 wish sb.a pleasant journey祝某人旅途愉快 owe...to...把……归功于…… be grateful to sb.for/be thankful to sb.for/thank sb.for因……感激/感谢某人 turn down拒绝 do sb.a favour/do a favour for sb.帮某人一个忙 ask a favour of sb.请求某人帮忙 help out帮助……克服困境 ring up打电话 answer the phone接电话 ring back回电话 hang up挂断电话 introduce...to...把……介绍给…… 【常用句式】 1.He is generous with his time in offering help to us，for which we feel grateful.他毫不吝啬自己的时间，主动为我们提供帮助，为此我们都对他感激不尽。 2.It is also a virtue to forgive and forget，especially in such a competitive and stressful society.原谅和宽恕也是一种美德，尤其是在这样充满竞争和压力的社会。 3.The majority of students believe that interest will provide them with more opportunities to develop their interpersonal skills，which may put them in a favorable position in the future job market.大部分学生相信，兴趣会使他们有更多机会发展人际交往能力，而这对他们未来找工作是非常有好处的。 4.In my opinion，this relationship should be filled with love，care，understanding，and respect，so we can exchange ideas freely and get along well with each other.我认为，这种关系应该充满爱、关心、理解和尊重，这样我们才能够自由地交换观点，并且能够融洽地相处。 5.I didn’t realize the importance of cooperating with others until I was chosen monitor of my class in my senior middle school.直到上高中时我被选为班长我才意识到与他人合作的重要性。 【举一反三】根据汉语提示完成句子。 1.Our school organised a campus chorus contest themed “love our motherland”in the school hall on Wednesday afternoon, which lasted two hours from 4:00 to 6:00 pm. 我们学校周三下午在学校礼堂组织了一场主题为“热爱我们的祖国”的校园合唱比赛，比赛从下午4点到6点持续了2个小时。 2. In order to arouse students’ interest in English, our school held an English Drama Competition in our school hall last Sunday afternoon, which turned out to be a great success. 为了激发学生对英语的兴趣，我们学校上周日下午在学校礼堂举行了一个英语话剧大赛，结果非常成功。 3. On arriving at the park, what impressed me most was its fresh air and beautiful scenery. 一到公园，最令我印象深刻的是它新鲜的空气和美丽的景色。 4. Attracted by the beautiful scenery, we had a photo taken, capturing the precious moment forever. 被美景所吸引，我们拍了照，将这精彩的瞬间永久保存。 5. Tired as we were, we had a sense of achievement. 尽管我们很累，但是有一种成就感。 6. Although the study tour came to an end, it has a far­reaching influence on us. Thanks to the tour, not only have we improved our speaking skills, but we've also got a better understanding of British culture, which enlarged my knowledge and broadened my horizon.游学结束了，但是它对我们产生了深远的影响。多亏这次游学，我们不仅提高了口语技能，而且对英国文化有了更好的了解。因此拓宽了知识面，开阔了视野。 【典例精析】 假如你是李华，最近收到美国朋友Peter的信，他在信中讲到了高中生活印象最深的活动，并询问你是否愿意跟他分享给你印象最深刻的活动。请你回一封信。内容包括： 1. 简述给你印象最深的活动； 2. 谈谈活动的启发和影响。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【四步讲解】 第一步：审题谋篇 1.体裁：叙事 2.时态：一般过去时 3.人称：第一人称为主 第二步：列提纲，要点全而不漏 给我留下最深刻印象的是What impressed me most is 决定参加decided to take part in 不够强壮 not strong enough to 对我来说都显得异常艰难seemed difficult for me 摔倒了fell dowm 落在了后面fall behind 继续奔跑keep on running. 赢得了勇气和荣誉win the courage and honor 第三步：由词汇组成句，表达亮而不俗 1. 您能分享一下让您印象最深刻的那次活动真是太好了。It is kind of you to share the activity that has impressed you most. 2.给我留下最深刻印象的是去年的运动会。What impressed me most is the Sport Meeting of last year. 3.在运动会开始前，我决定参加 5000 米赛跑。大家都很惊讶。Before the Sport Meeting, I decided to take part in the 5,000metre race. Everyone was very surprised. 4.因为他们认为我身体不够强壮，跑不了 5000 米。 Because they thought I not strong enough to run the 5,000 metres. 5.在比赛中，每一步对我来说都显得异常艰难。During the race，each step seemed difficult for me. 6.突然，我摔倒了，摔坏了眼镜，还落在了后面。但我没有放弃。我站起来，戴上摔坏的眼镜，继续奔跑。Suddenly, I fell dowm，breaking my glasses and fell behind. But I didn’t give up. I stood up，put on my broken glasses and kept on running. 7.尽管我是最后一个冲过终点线的，但我赢得了勇气和荣誉。Although I was the last one to cross the finishing line，I won the courage and honor. 第四步：妙衔接，巧串联，佳作顺而不乱 用适当的衔接词串句成文。 【佳作展现】 Dear Peter, Thank you very much for your letter of March 20. It is kind of you to share the activity that has impressed you most. And I am willing to tell you the most impressed of mine. What impressed me most is the Sport Meeting of last year. Before the Sport Meeting, I decided to take part in the 5,000metre race. Everyone was very surprised. Because they thought I not strong enough to run the 5,000 metres. But I’m determined to finish it. During the race，each step seemed difficult for me. Suddenly, I fell dowm，breaking my glasses and fell behind. But I didn’t give up. I stood up，put on my broken glasses and kept on running. Although I was the last one to cross the finishing line，I won the courage and honor. I also learned we should insist on everything at any time. It is an unforgettable experience which I will remember forever. I am looking forward to your reply. Best wishes for your health and success. Yours sincerely Li Hua 【举一反三】 1.假如你是李华，你的英国笔友John来信说，他的同桌经常打断他，向他请教问题，他担心这会影响自己的学习。请你用英语写一封回信。内容包括： 1.给别人讲题也会提升自己； 2.人人都有长处和不足，可以互相学习； 3.帮助别人学习可以使他们树立自信，从而增进友谊。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【佳作展现】 Dear John， How are things going？In your last letter you talked about your recent worry about your studies， mentioning that your deskmate often interrupted you by asking questions.Now I would like to share my opinion with you. First of all，there is no need to worry about your studies.When you explain something to others，you can get a better understanding of it，which can improve yourself greatly.So it is good for you.Secondly，as we all know，everyone has strengths and weaknesses.Though your deskmate is bad at lessons，he might do well in other fields like sports or art.Therefore，you can learn from each other.In addition，top students can help others gain confidence by helping them with their lessons，which may help develop a friendship that both of you will treasure all your life. I hope my advice can help.And best luck with your learning. Yours， Li Hua 2.假如你是晨光中学高三(1)班的班长李津，得知美国学生Chris作为交换生，下学期将到你班学习。请你根据以下提示，给他写封邮件： 1.表示欢迎； 2.介绍与本地生活相关的信息(如气候、饮食等)； 3.介绍本班情况； 4.希望Chris做一些事情，以增进中美学生间的了解和友谊。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【佳作展现】 Dear Chris， I’ m Li Jin，monitor of Class One，Grade Twelve.I’m very delighted to learn that you’re coming to our class to study with us as an exchange student next term.Welcome to our class! It is a great honour for me to tell you some information relevant to the local life.First，our traditional foods are dumplings and rice.I hope you can enjoy them.In addition，the climate here is very similar to that in the USA，so there is no need for you to worry about it.Now I’ll introduce our class to you.Our class is made up of 52 students，all of whom are friendly and hard­working.There is no doubt that you can get along well with them.Our teachers are kind to us and treat us as their friends.Last of all，to promote the understanding and friendship between the students of the two countries，I hope you can do something，such as helping us practice our spoken English，and introducing something about American culture. Looking forward to seeing you. Yours， Li Jin 3. 假设你是李华，加拿大一所学校将于今年暑假组织学生来你校访问。其间， Andy smith 将借住你家。请你代表全家写信给 Andy ，欢迎他的到来，并告知有关事宜。信的要点如下： ※上午：学校活动 ※下午：游览市区 ※晚上：看电视，玩游戏，聊天 参考词汇：安排 arrange 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【佳作展现】 Dear Andy, I am glad to learn that you are coming to China and will stay at my home y parents and I are very pleased to have you with us. Now let me tell you what we have arranged for you. I know the school will organize a lot of things for you to do in the morning, but in the afternoon show you around and take you to some places of interest. We'll mostly stay at home in the evening watching TV, playing games, and meeting people. I'm sure we'll have a wonderful time and enjoy each other's company. l'm looking forward very much to meeting you soon. Yours, Li Hua 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 投诉信 投诉/抱怨信的话题一般都与我们的日常生活息息相关，学生碰到此类信体不必过于紧张。在当今商品经济时代，商品买卖活动非常普遍。在日常生活中，人们常会遇到对所购商品质量或售后服务不满意的情况，这时可以写投诉信(A Letter of Complaint )求得解决。投诉信与普通书信的格式基本相同。但要注意的是，写投诉信的目的是为了求得一个解决问题的办法而不是为了泄愤，因此写信时一定要注意态度诚恳、直截了当。具体内容为：第一段点明题旨。除常规的问候之外，不妨直接用与“I am writing to tell you ...”类似的句子开头，直截了当，言简意赅。 第二段详细介绍题中所提示的具体内容。为了提高文章的连贯性和条理性，同学们应注意运用一些表示逻辑顺序的词汇，如first, second, what's more, finally等将内容巧妙地连贯起来，从而形成有机的整体。 最后一段应该客气地询问对方的意见，同时表达真诚的祝福和热情的问候，体现中学生文明礼貌素养。 【亮点词汇】 1.常用形容词 ashamed愧疚的 annoyed恼火的 2.常用名词 disappointment失望 dissatisfaction不满 explanation解释 consideration考虑 3.常用动词短语 complain投诉 investigate调查 unsatisfy不满 complain about… 抱怨 convey/express one’s dissatisfaction表达不满 put up with/bear忍受 be content/satisfied with对…满意 poor service糟糕的服务 take measures采取措施 deal with/solve the problem解决问题 prevent…from happening预防…发生 investigate/look into the matter/incident调查此次事件发生 in a rude manner以粗鲁的方式 express my disappointment/dissatisfaction/concern about 表达不满 bring about inconveniences 带来不便 to make matters worse 更糟糕的是 in a rude manner 态度恶劣 put up with/bear 忍受 look into/investigate the matter 调查此次事件 take measures/actions 采取措施 deal with/solve the problem 解决问题 a satisfying solution 一个满意的解决方法 declare a refund 要求退款 【夺人眼球篇首句】 1. I would like to draw your attention to…我希望可以引起你对…一事的注意。 2. It has come to my attention that…这个事情…已经引起我的注意。 3.I am writing to request a full refund of the course fee I have paid.我写信要求得到我所支付课程费用的全额退款。 4. I thought I should draw your attention to the situation since…我希望你能关注此事，因为… 5. A very serious problem has arisen in connection with…关于…的一个非常严重的问题已经出现。 【亮点出彩篇中句】 1.On (date), I bought/rented/had repaired a (name of the product, with serial or model number or service performed) at (location on other important details of the transaction).在某一天，我买/租/修理了…（产品名称包括型号/服务）在…（某地/重要的交易细节） 2. There are some problems with the … that I wish to bring to your attention. First, there is… In addition…关于…出现了一些问题，我希望能引起您的注意。首先…其次…。 3. Unfortunately, your product/service has not performed well (or the service was inadequate) because (state the problem). I am disappointed because (explain the problem: for example, the product does not work properly, the service was not performed correctly, I was billed the wrong amount, something was not disclosed clearly,etc).很遗憾您的产品/服务出现问题（或者服务不够）因为（陈述问题）。我非常失望因为（解释原因：例如，产品运行不够好，服务不好，我被收错了钱，或者有些事情没有说清楚，等等）。 4.It really annoyed me when I found that the computer I bought from your store could not be operated.当我发现从你们商店购买的电脑不能正常操作时我十分生气。 5. The noise coming from your building really disturbed me, leaving me unable to concentrate on---来自你们楼的噪声非常打扰我，让我无法专心… 6. I must warn you that unless you do something about the situation, I will be forced to take legal action. 我必须正告贵方，除非对目前状况采取措施，否则我将被迫诉诸法律。 【韵味无穷结尾句】 1.I believe this is the only way to get this matter settled.我相信这是唯一解决这个问题的方式。 2. It is so bad this unfortunate accident occurred. Otherwise, I was very pleased with your service这种不幸的发生实在是太令人遗憾。你们的服务本来还是很令我满意的。 3.I would be grateful if you would ensure that the same thing does not happen again.我会很感激，如果你保证这样的事情不会再发生。 4.If you could find time to let us know, it would set our minds at rest.如果你能找到时间来让我们知道，我们将感到非常欣慰。 5.A time for further discussion on this issue can be arranged wither by telephoning me at 123456789 or writing to me via the address…可以通过给我电话（123456789）或者写信给我（地址）来安排进一步商讨这个问题的时间。 【举一反三】根据提示完成句子。 1.我可以肯定这种情况正在造成我们极大的不安。 _____________________________________. 2.噪音影响我的睡眠，使得我在上班时间无法集中精力。结果这些天我已经搞错了好几次 _____________________________________. 3.在这样(嘈杂)环境下我无法进行研究，我需要一间安静的房间。 _____________________________________. 4.因为没有地方放书包，我们只能随身携带，这让我们十分疲惫。 _____________________________________. 5. 我刚刚到家就发现从你们商店购买的产品有质量问题。 _____________________________________. 6.我知道你平时并非粗心之人，但是我们需要得到你的承诺，保证此类事件不会再次发生。 _____________________________________. 7.坦白来讲，我不准备再忍受这样的境况了。 _____________________________________. 8.我相信这个问题可以很快地被解决，我也期盼着您尽早答复。 _____________________________________. 9.请尽快让我知道你对于此事的提议。 _____________________________________. 10. 我们深知你们并不经常出错，但我们希望能确保这类差错不再发生。 _____________________________________. 答案：1. I am certain that this situation is causing us considerable anxiety. 2. The noise disturbs my sleep so that I can’t concentrate on my work during thework time, and as a result, I have made several mistakes these days. 3. For me this environment is very difficult to make studies and I need a quiet room. 4. With no place to put our schoolbags, we had to bring it whenever we go, which really made us feel tired. 5. Hardly had I arrived home when I found that the product from your store had quality problems within itself. 6. We know that you are not generally careless, but we should like your assurance that this will not happen again. 7. Frankly, I am not prepared to put up with the situation any more. 8. I trust this matter can be resolved quickly and look forward to your early reply. 9. Please let me know what you propose in relation to this issue as soon as possible. 10. We know that you are not generally careless, but we should like your assurance that this will not happen again. 【典例精析】 假定你是李华，你看过广告买了某家公司的一种面霜(the cream)。广告说这种面霜含有一系列特殊物质，安全、有效，可以消除脸上的斑点(spot)。但当你首次涂在脸上过后的第二天早上，就感到痒(tickle)，像虫子在爬(craw)。而且用得越多，症状越严重。这严重影响了你的工作和生活。请写一封投诉信说明情况，并要求该公司退货、支付医疗费用并严肃调查这件事情。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 第一步：审题谋篇 1.体裁：投诉信 2.时态：一般现在时和一般过去时 3.人称：第一人称为主 第二步：列提纲，要点全而不漏 1.写信目的 抱怨complain about 2.事件简述 一系列的a range of/ a series of 去除keep---out of/ remove 好像as if/ as though 意识到be aware of/ realize 副作用side effect 3.希望 调查look into/ research 打算做某事be intended to do/ plan to do 第三步：由词汇组成句，表达亮而不俗 1.在广告中，你们声称：面霜含有一系列的特殊物质，安全、有效，可以消除脸上的斑点。 In your advertisement, you claim that the cream has a range of special materials and is safe and effective, which can keep the spots out of the face. 2.我第一次将其抹在脸上时，是认真按照说明操作的。 The first time I applied it to my face, I followed the instructions carefully. 3.我感到痒，像虫子在爬。 I felt my face tickling as if something were crawling. 4.这种面霜严重影响了我的生活和工作。 It was the scream that greatly affected my life and work. 第四步：妙衔接，巧串联，佳作顺而不乱 用适当的衔接词串句成文。 【佳作展现】 Dear manager, I’m writing to explain about your “No Spot” cream. In your advertisement, you claim that the cream has a range of special materials and is safe and effective, which can keep the spots out of the face. The first time I applied it to my face, I followed the instructions carefully. To my surprise, the next morning, I felt my face tickling as if something were crawling. And during the following days, the more I used it, the worse the symptom became. And it was the cream that greatly affected my life and work. And I was aware of being cheated. You have guaranted that your products are safe and never have you mentioned the side effect. I want to send back thiscream, meanwhile your company should pay for the cost of medical service for my treatment and look into the matter seriously. If not, I intend to accuse your company. I’m looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Li Hua 【举一反三】 1.假设你是李强，请你就本校图书馆的状况给校长写一封信，内容应涉及图书馆的藏书数量和更新状况、环境、服务等，可以是表扬，可以是批评建议，也可以兼而有之。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【佳作展现】 A Letter to the University President about the Library Service on Campus. January 6th, 2006 Dear Mr. President, I am writing to express my concern over the Library service on the campus. As a major in English, I find that most of the books in English in the library are outdated. So far, I have not come across a single book published after 1995. As a result, we fail to get the latest information of academic development both at home and abroad. In addition, the light in the reading room is far from bright, which does harm to our eyes. Worse still, there is no air-conditioning and we are sweating heavily still while reading. Last but not least, the newly developed electronic information system does not work well and needs further improvement. A great number of books should have been listed in the system. There is no denying that the library has helped us a lot. But it is in urgent need of improvement. When im-proved, the library is certain to provide much more help with our study. Thank you for your time. I am looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, Li Qiang 2. 假定你是李华，你在上周日搭坐102号公交车，该公交车司机的不文明行为让乘客很愤怒。于是你向公交车公司写一封投诉信。要点如下： 1. 司机的不文明行为(大声讲话、紧急刹车、态度粗鲁等)。 2. 希望尽快查清此事。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【佳作展现】 Dear Sir, I am Li Hua. I am writing to complain about one of your bus-drivers’ improper and rude behaviors. Last Sunday, I was taking the No. 102 bus whose driver not only kept on talking with a man loudly but also drove very fast. So some passengers advised him to concentrate on driving, but he didn’t pay any attention. What’s worse, he drove even faster. Then another passenger couldn’t bear it, asking the driver to keep the passengers’ safety in mind. But the driver stopped the bus so suddenly that all the passengers nearly lost their balance. However, he didn’t apologize but said rudely “It’s none of your business.” I sincerely hope you can investigate this incident and proper measures should be taken to prevent such an incident happening again. Sincerely yours, Li Hua 3. 假如你是李华，昨天在商场购买了一台电风扇，回家后发现它不能运转。你回到店里与营业员交涉时，该营业员对你的态度恶劣，对你提出的问题不予受理。请你为此向经理写一封投诉信 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【佳作展现】 Dear Manager, I feel sorry to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint. Yesterday I bought an electric fan in your shop, but when I got home and turned it on, it didn't work. So I took it back and talked to the assistant about the problem. To my surprise, instead of helping me solve the problem, the man, in a rude manner, refused to examine it. Generally, your shop is well-known for good service and that is why I bought the electric fan in your shop. I was really upset to find that such a thing should have occurred in your shop. I am waiting for a reasonable explanation and expecting an early reply. Sincerely yours, Li Hua 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 推荐信 推荐信包括为别人写的推荐信和为自己写的自荐信两种。信的开头通常先向对方阐明从何种途径获得该职位的消息，有时也可直接介绍要推荐的人的姓名。接着向对方介绍被推荐人的相关信息(如学历、学习状况、兴趣爱好、特长等)，这些信息必须是正面的，而且与招聘的职位的性质有关。最后，重申被推荐者是该职位的合适人选，并且能胜任该职位。申请信一般内容包括：第一段说明写信目的；第二段介绍被推荐者，说明他/她的资格、能力；第三段表示谢意，期盼回复。 【亮点词汇】 1.常用形容词 _____________幽默的 _____________诚实的 _____________忠诚的 _____________慷慨的 _____________能干的 _____________有才能的 _____________突出的 _____________勤奋的 _____________有创意的 _____________有潜力的 2.常用动词短语 强烈向你推荐某人 _____________ _____________ 向你推荐我最好的朋友 一名全A优等生_____________ 学业表现/学习成绩_____________ 竞赛获一等奖_____________ 积极参加各种各样的课外活动_____________ 校学生会副主席_____________ 就个人能力而言_____________ 应对各种紧急情况_____________ 办事高效率的/富有创造力的/富有想象力的_____________ 与别人相处融洽 _____________ 做……的合适人选_____________ 对……充满热情 _____________ 有能力做……_____________ 能胜任……_____________ 在……方面有经验/熟练_____________ 一个全面的学生 _____________ 精通_____________ 责任感_____________ 在……方面有经验_____________ 担任兼职助理工作_____________ 有很强的团队精神possess a great team spirit 开朗成熟_____________ 容易相处_____________ 【夺人眼球篇首句】 1.I am writing to introduce我写信是要介绍------ 2. May I introduce---? 我可以向您介绍---吗？ 3.I am pleased to introduce A, our manager of department.很高兴向您介绍我们的部门经理A先生。 4.Allow me to introduce to you the beater,Miss Yang Fei, daughter of an intimate friend of mine, who is going to your city to study towards the end of this month.请允许我向您介绍持信人，杨菲小姐，她是我好友的女儿。她将去您所在的城市学习到这个月月底。 5.It is my great pleasure to recommend A to you, as he was only of my finest students in our class.很高兴向您推荐A，因为他是我们班中最好的学生之一。 【亮点出彩篇中句】 1. It is my honor to recommend Mr. Smith to you.能为你推荐史密斯先生是我的荣幸。 2. In terms of academic performance, she is a straight A student, especially good at art and language.就学业表现而言，她是一名全A优等生，尤其擅长艺术和语言。 3.As the vice chairman of the school Students’ Union, not only can he be strict with himself, but also be able to get on/along well with other classmates.作为校学生会的副主席，他不仅能严于律己，而且还与同学们相处融洽。 4. He is intelligent, imaginative and creative, so he is sure to be qualified for this job.他聪明，富有想象力和创造力，因此，他一定能胜任这份工作。 5. With rich social practice experience, he is capable of dealing with all kinds of emergencies, so I am sure he is the best person for this position.有着丰富的社会实践经验，他有能力应对各种紧急情况，因此，我确信他是这个职位的最佳人选。 【韵味无穷结尾句】 1. It is my belief that with his intelligence, diligence, and rich experience, he has great potential for further development in the field of…我相信，凭借他的聪明才智、勤奋和丰富经验，他在……领域有进一步发展的巨大潜力。 2. I genuinely hope that you could schedule an interview with him at your earliest convenience. 我真诚地希望你能在最方便的时候安排他面试。 3. I recommend him to you without any reservation. Please do not hesitate to inquire further if I can be of help to you. 我毫无保留地向你推荐他。如果我能对你有所帮助，请不要犹豫。 4. Should this recommendation gain your favorable consideration, it would be highly appreciated. 如果这个建议得到您的好评，我们将不胜感激。 5. Should you favor him with the position, I’m convinced that he would live up to your expectations. 如果你支持他担任这个职务，我相信他不会辜负你的期望。 【举一反三】根据汉语提示完成下列句子。 1.我一直想让你们见一面，看来这次是个绝好的机会。 ____________________________________________. 2. 我写信是为了推荐我最好的一个朋友王海伦申请这个职位。 ___________________________________________. 3.他各科成绩优秀，是全面发展的好学生，已获得“优秀学生”称号。 _____________________________________________. 4.如果她被录用，我相信她的这个品质一定会让贵公司受益。 _____________________________________________. 5.他性格开朗，善于与人相处及组织各种活动，完全能够胜任俱乐部副主席这个职位。 _____________________________________________. 7. 因此，我毫不犹豫地推荐她作为你广告中的职位的理想人选。 _____________________________________________. 8. 我相信他会胜任这个职位的。 _____________________________________________. 【典例精析】 学校图书馆需要购置一批新书，现向学生征求意见。假定你是李华，你认为学校图书馆最需要购置科普类图书(popular science books)和文学类图书(literary books)。请你用英语给图书馆王老师写一封信推荐这两类书，并分别说明推荐理由。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【创作示例】 第一步：审题谋篇 1.体裁：_____________ 2.时态：_____________ 3.人称：_____________ 第二步：列提纲，要点全而不漏 1.写信目的 _____________提出一些建议 2.推荐书目及理由 (1)书目 _____________科普书籍 _____________文学书籍 (2) 理由 __________________________帮助我们更好地理解科学学科 __________________________激发我们对科学发现的好奇心 __________________________给我们带来快乐和兴奋 __________________________鼓励我们批判性地思考 3.感谢，希望得到认可 __________________________如果您能考虑我的推荐，我将非常感激 第三步：由词汇组成句，表达亮而不俗 1. 知道我们图书馆要买书，我想提出一些建议。 _________________________________________, I’d like to give some suggestions. 2. 我们最需要的是科普书。 _____________________________ are popular science books. 3. 通常科普书籍以简单有趣的方式解释自然的基本原理。 Usually popular science books explain basic principles of nature _____________________. 4. 它们帮助我们更好地理解科学主题，激发我们对科学发现的好奇心。 They help us understand science subjects better and _______________________________. 5. 这就是为什么我推荐另一类书籍，文学书籍。 ___________________________ I recommend another category of books, literary books. 6. 它们不仅给我们带来欢乐和兴奋，而且鼓励我们批判性地思考。 They not only offer us joy and excitement, _______________________________. 7. 如果您能考虑我的建议，我将非常高兴。 I’ll be glad __________________________________________. 第四步：妙衔接，巧串联，佳作顺而不乱 用适当的衔接词串句成文。 【佳作展现】 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【举一反三】 1.假定你是李华，你的学生陈丽将要去应聘一份在培训机构当外语助教(teaching assistant)的暑期兼职工作，她想请你给她写一封推荐信，向要应聘的培训机构推荐她，介绍她的一些个人信息。要点如下： 1. 陈丽的个性特点以及专长。 2. 陈丽平时在校的表现(她的学业表现和获奖情况等)。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2.假定你是李华，你校外籍教师Williams想暑假期间到中国各地旅游，需聘请一位旅游爱好者做他的导游。请写一封邮件推荐你的朋友李明给他。要点如下: 1. 写信目的；2. 介绍李明的优势；3. 希望安排面试。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 推荐信 推荐信包括为别人写的推荐信和为自己写的自荐信两种。信的开头通常先向对方阐明从何种途径获得该职位的消息，有时也可直接介绍要推荐的人的姓名。接着向对方介绍被推荐人的相关信息(如学历、学习状况、兴趣爱好、特长等)，这些信息必须是正面的，而且与招聘的职位的性质有关。最后，重申被推荐者是该职位的合适人选，并且能胜任该职位。申请信一般内容包括：第一段说明写信目的；第二段介绍被推荐者，说明他/她的资格、能力；第三段表示谢意，期盼回复。 【亮点词汇】 1.常用形容词 homorous幽默的 honest诚实的 faithful忠诚的 generous慷慨的 capable能干的 talented有才能的 outstanding突出的 diligent勤奋的 creative有创意的 potential有潜力的 2.常用动词短语 强烈向你推荐某人 strongly recommend sb. to you recommend to you my best friend 向你推荐我最好的朋友 一名全A优等生a straight A student 学业表现/学习成绩academic performance 竞赛获一等奖get the first prize in the contest 积极参加各种各样的课外活动take an active part in all kinds of after-class activities 校学生会副主席the vice chairman of the school Students’ Union 就个人能力而言in terms of personal ability 应对各种紧急情况deal with all kinds of emergencies 办事高效率的/富有创造力的/富有想象力的efficient/creative/imaginative 与别人相处融洽 get on/along well with others 做……的合适人选the right person to do… 对……充满热情 be enthusiastic about… 有能力做……be capable of / have the ability to do 能胜任……be qualified for / be up to/be equal to 在……方面有经验/熟练be experienced/skilled/skillful in 一个全面的学生 an all-around student 精通have a good command of 责任感sense of responsibility 在……方面有经验be experienced in 担任兼职助理工作work as a part-time assistant 有很强的团队精神possess a great team spirit 开朗成熟with a pleasant mature attitude 容易相处easy to get along with 【夺人眼球篇首句】 1.I am writing to introduce我写信是要介绍------ 2. May I introduce---? 我可以向您介绍---吗？ 3.I am pleased to introduce A, our manager of department.很高兴向您介绍我们的部门经理A先生。 4.Allow me to introduce to you the beater,Miss Yang Fei, daughter of an intimate friend of mine, who is going to your city to study towards the end of this month.请允许我向您介绍持信人，杨菲小姐，她是我好友的女儿。她将去您所在的城市学习到这个月月底。 5.It is my great pleasure to recommend A to you, as he was only of my finest students in our class.很高兴向您推荐A，因为他是我们班中最好的学生之一。 【亮点出彩篇中句】 1. It is my honor to recommend Mr. Smith to you.能为你推荐史密斯先生是我的荣幸。 2. In terms of academic performance, she is a straight A student, especially good at art and language.就学业表现而言，她是一名全A优等生，尤其擅长艺术和语言。 3.As the vice chairman of the school Students’ Union, not only can he be strict with himself, but also be able to get on/along well with other classmates.作为校学生会的副主席，他不仅能严于律己，而且还与同学们相处融洽。 4. He is intelligent, imaginative and creative, so he is sure to be qualified for this job.他聪明，富有想象力和创造力，因此，他一定能胜任这份工作。 5. With rich social practice experience, he is capable of dealing with all kinds of emergencies, so I am sure he is the best person for this position.有着丰富的社会实践经验，他有能力应对各种紧急情况，因此，我确信他是这个职位的最佳人选。 【韵味无穷结尾句】 1. It is my belief that with his intelligence, diligence, and rich experience, he has great potential for further development in the field of…我相信，凭借他的聪明才智、勤奋和丰富经验，他在……领域有进一步发展的巨大潜力。 2. I genuinely hope that you could schedule an interview with him at your earliest convenience. 我真诚地希望你能在最方便的时候安排他面试。 3. I recommend him to you without any reservation. Please do not hesitate to inquire further if I can be of help to you. 我毫无保留地向你推荐他。如果我能对你有所帮助，请不要犹豫。 4. Should this recommendation gain your favorable consideration, it would be highly appreciated. 如果这个建议得到您的好评，我们将不胜感激。 5. Should you favor him with the position, I’m convinced that he would live up to your expectations. 如果你支持他担任这个职务，我相信他不会辜负你的期望。 【举一反三】根据汉语提示完成下列句子。 1.我一直想让你们见一面，看来这次是个绝好的机会。 ____________________________________________. 2. 我写信是为了推荐我最好的一个朋友王海伦申请这个职位。 ___________________________________________. 3.他各科成绩优秀，是全面发展的好学生，已获得“优秀学生”称号。 _____________________________________________. 4.如果她被录用，我相信她的这个品质一定会让贵公司受益。 _____________________________________________. 5.他性格开朗，善于与人相处及组织各种活动，完全能够胜任俱乐部副主席这个职位。 _____________________________________________. 7. 因此，我毫不犹豫地推荐她作为你广告中的职位的理想人选。 _____________________________________________. 8. 我相信他会胜任这个职位的。 _____________________________________________. 答案：1.As you know, I’ve often wanted you two to meet, and this seems like an excellent opportunity. 2. I am writing to you to recommend one of my best friends， Helen Wang，for this post. 3. He is an all-around student with excellent grades in all subjects, and moreover, he has been given the tittle of “Excellent Student”. 4. Such a quality, I believe, will enable her to benefit your company while admitting her. 5. He is qualified for the position of vice president of the club because with an out-going character, he not only gets along well with others, but also is skilled in orgnizing all kinds of activities. 7. Therefore, I do not hesitate to recommend her as an ideal candidate for the post you advertised. 8.I’m sure he will b e fit for the position. 【典例精析】 学校图书馆需要购置一批新书，现向学生征求意见。假定你是李华，你认为学校图书馆最需要购置科普类图书(popular science books)和文学类图书(literary books)。请你用英语给图书馆王老师写一封信推荐这两类书，并分别说明推荐理由。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【创作示例】 第一步：审题谋篇 1.体裁：推荐信 2.时态：一般现在时为主 3.人称：第一人称为主 第二步：列提纲，要点全而不漏 1.写信目的 give some suggestions提出一些建议 2.推荐书目及理由 (1)书目 popular science books科普书籍 literary books文学书籍 (2) 理由 help us understand science subjects better 帮助我们更好地理解科学学科 arouse our curiosity about science discoveries激发我们对科学发现的好奇心 offer us joy and excitement给我们带来快乐和兴奋 encourage us to think critically鼓励我们批判性地思考 3.感谢，希望得到认可 be glad if you can consider my recommendation如果您能考虑我的推荐，我将非常感激 第三步：由词汇组成句，表达亮而不俗 1. 知道我们图书馆要买书，我想提出一些建议。 _________________________________________, I’d like to give some suggestions. 2. 我们最需要的是科普书。 _____________________________ are popular science books. 3. 通常科普书籍以简单有趣的方式解释自然的基本原理。 Usually popular science books explain basic principles of nature _____________________. 4. 它们帮助我们更好地理解科学主题，激发我们对科学发现的好奇心。 They help us understand science subjects better and _______________________________. 5. 这就是为什么我推荐另一类书籍，文学书籍。 ___________________________ I recommend another category of books, literary books. 6. 它们不仅给我们带来欢乐和兴奋，而且鼓励我们批判性地思考。 They not only offer us joy and excitement, _______________________________. 7. 如果您能考虑我的建议，我将非常高兴。 I’ll be glad __________________________________________. 【参考答案】1. Knowing that our library is going to buy books 2. What we need most 3. in a simple and interesting way 4. arouse our curiosity about science discoveries 5. That is why 6. but also encourage us to think critically 7. if you can consider my recommendation 第四步：妙衔接，巧串联，佳作顺而不乱 用适当的衔接词串句成文。 【佳作展现】 Dear Mr Wang, Knowing that our library is going to buy books(动词-ing形式作状语), I’d like to give some suggestions. What we need most are popular science books(what引导的主语从句). Usually, popular science books explain basic principles of nature in a simple and interesting way. They help us understand science subjects better and arouse our curiosity about science discoveries(高级词汇arouse的用法). In addition to reading for knowledge, we read for fun and inspirations. That is why I recommend another category of books, literary books. Classic works, written by masters(过去分词作定语), present great thoughts, fascinating stories and language. They not only offer us joy and excitement, but also encourage us to think critically(not only... but also...句型). I’ll be glad if you can consider my recommendation. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【举一反三】 1.假定你是李华，你的学生陈丽将要去应聘一份在培训机构当外语助教(teaching assistant)的暑期兼职工作，她想请你给她写一封推荐信，向要应聘的培训机构推荐她，介绍她的一些个人信息。要点如下： 1. 陈丽的个性特点以及专长。 2. 陈丽平时在校的表现(她的学业表现和获奖情况等)。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【佳作展现】 Dear Manager, I am Li Hua, Chen Li’s teacher and I would like to recommend Chen Li to you. In my eyes, Chen Li is a friendly and outgoing girl. She often takes an active part in various school activities to enrich her life. Besides, as the secretary of the Students’ Union, Chen Li has gained rich experience of dealing with people and different situations. More importantly, in terms of academic performance, she is a straight A student, who is especially good at English learning. With rich social practice experience as well as good competence of English, Chen Li is able to work as a teaching assistant in your company. Therefore, I strongly recommend her to you as I think she is the right person for this position. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 2.假定你是李华，你校外籍教师Williams想暑假期间到中国各地旅游，需聘请一位旅游爱好者做他的导游。请写一封邮件推荐你的朋友李明给他。要点如下: 1. 写信目的；2. 介绍李明的优势；3. 希望安排面试。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【佳作展现】 Dear Mr Williams, Informed that you want a companion as a tour guide to travel around China, I strongly recommend my friend Li Ming to you. Li Ming is a graduate majoring in English, which helps him communicate with you without difficulty. Moreover, he is enthusiastic about tourism and has worked as a part-time guide. It’s his relevant experiences that ensure him more qualified for this position. What makes him admirable is that under no circumstance will he fail to cope with emergencies. Should you favor him with the position, I’m convinced that he would live up to your expectations. I hope you can schedule an interview with him at your earliest convenience. Please contact me at 12345678. Yours, Li Hua 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 邀请信 邀请信是应用文的一种，也是高考的一个常考体裁。根据邀请信的性质可分为普通邀请信和正式邀请信。普通邀请信在内容和格式上的要求比较放松，只要表明活动的内容、时间、地点等即可。正式邀请信的措辞要正式，语气要热情有礼，然后介绍活动的情况。在信的末尾都要表示出希望对方参加或出席的愿望。具体为：第一段简要说明活动，说明写信目的。第二段介绍活动的具体内容，说明受邀人参加的理由。第三段期待对方接受邀请，并表示感谢。 【亮点词汇搭配】 1.常用形容词 _____________共同的 _____________高兴的 2.常用名词 _____________ 出席，到场 _____________ 庆祝 _____________ 安排 _____________ 周年 _____________参与者 3.常用动词及其短语 _____________ 参与 _____________v．邀请 _____________分享快乐 _____________我想要…… _____________为了纪念 _____________增进，加强 _____________玩得开心 _____________期待 _____________有……的声誉 _____________积极参加 _____________发生 _____________代表 _____________即将到来 _____________在你方便时 【夺人眼球篇首句】 1. I have the honor to invite you to... 我荣幸地邀请您参加…… 2. we would like to extend to you an invitation to... 我们很高兴地邀请您…… 3. we would be particularly honored by your distinguished presence.如果您能出席，我们将感到十分荣幸。 4. If you are interested and free then, we can go to it together.如果你有兴趣也有时间的话，我们可以一起去。 5. I am pleased to invite you to attend... 邀请您出席……，我很荣幸。 【亮点出彩篇中句】 1. It will begin at 2:00 pm and last two hours, during which time 15 well-prepared contestants will deliver their speeches.它将于下午两点钟开始，四点钟结束，在此期间将会有十五位准备充分的参赛者发表演讲。 2. We will start at 8:00 am and arrive there at 9:00.我们将会在上午八点出发，九点到达那里。 3. During the afternoon, we’ll...together.下午，我们会一起...... 4. Remember to take water and lunch with you.记得带上水和午餐。 5. By the way, you may take Bus No. 322 in front of your apartment and it will take you directly to the club.顺便说一下，你可以乘坐你家公寓前的322路公交车，它会直接把你带到俱乐部。 6. I know you are a native speaker of English and an English teacher, and I, on behalf of our school, sincerely invite you to be part of the contest.我知道你的母语是英语，还是一个英语老师。我，代表我们学校，真诚的邀请你来比赛现场。 【韵味无穷结尾句】 1. I do hope that you will be able to come. 殷切希望能够光临。 2. We should be very pleased if you could honor us with your company. 如果您能出席我们将欣喜万分。 3. Will you be available during that time? Please contact me at 1234567 at your earliest convenience.那期间你有空吗?请方便时尽快给我打电话1234567。 4. Would you please let me know as soon as possible if you can accept my invitation?请尽快告诉我你能否接受我的邀请好吗? 【举一反三】根据汉语提示完成下列句子。 1.我怀着极其愉快的心情给您写信，诚恳地邀请您来…….. _____________________________________________. 2.十分高兴能邀请您来…….. _____________________________________________. 3.如果您能…….我们将不胜感激。 _____________________________________________. 4.若您无其他安排，敬请光临我们在二月一号晚七点举办的英语晚会。 _____________________________________________. 5.我希望您不会拒绝我的邀请。 _____________________________________________. 6.是否参加，请早日告之。 _____________________________________________. 7.如果你能来，我们会非常荣幸。 _____________________________________________. 8.我们期待着你的到来。 _____________________________________________. 9.我期待着尽早见到你。 _____________________________________________. 【写作示例】 假定你是李华。你所在的校乒乓球队正在招收新队员。请给你的留学生朋友Eric写封邮件邀请他加入，内容包括： 1．球队活动； 2．报名方式及截止日期。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【四步讲解】 第一步：审题谋篇 1.体裁：_____________ 2.时态：_____________ 3.人称：_____________ 第二步：列提纲，要点全而不漏 1.写信目的 ①告知你一些好消息　_____________ ②校乒乓球队正在招收新成员 _______________________________________ ③邀请你参加　_____________ 2.球队活动 ①除常规训练　_____________ ②参加各种各样的活动　_____________ 3.报名方式和日期 ①把信息发送到intlpssppt @gmschool.com _______________________________________ ②申请时间：2017年10月5至10日 _______________________________________ 4.希望 如果……感激不尽_______________________________________ 第三步：由词汇、组成句，表达亮而不俗 1．我是李华。我写信告诉你，我们学校乒乓球队正在招收新队员的好消息。 _______________________________________that the Student Table Tennis Team of our school is admitting right now. 2．因为你擅长乒乓球，是最合适的人选，我想邀请你参加。 _______________________________________，since you are good at table tennis，and you are the most suitable person. 3．除了常规训练之外，我们队将参加各种各样的活动，例如代表我们学校参加一些国际比赛。 Our team，apart from regular training，_______________________________________，such as participating in some national competitions on behalf of our school. 4．每次活动后我们将挑选最优秀的选手。 After every game，_______________________________________. 5．如果你要参加，请把信息发送到intlpssppt@ gmschool.com. If you will join，_______________________________________ intlpssppt @ gmschool.com. 6．申请时间为2017年10月5—10日。 _______________________________________ October 5­10, 2017. 7．如果在你方便时回复我我将感激不尽。 _______________________________________ 第四步：衔接词、巧串联，佳作顺而不乱 用适当的衔接词串句成文 【佳作展现】 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【举一反三】 1.假定你是李华。你班同学决定为小明举办生日聚会。请你写信邀请外教Susan参加，要点包括： 时间：周五晚8点至9点 地点：学生俱乐部 内容：生日歌、蛋糕、游戏等 要求：备小礼物 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 邀请信 邀请信是应用文的一种，也是高考的一个常考体裁。根据邀请信的性质可分为普通邀请信和正式邀请信。普通邀请信在内容和格式上的要求比较放松，只要表明活动的内容、时间、地点等即可。正式邀请信的措辞要正式，语气要热情有礼，然后介绍活动的情况。在信的末尾都要表示出希望对方参加或出席的愿望。具体为：第一段简要说明活动，说明写信目的。第二段介绍活动的具体内容，说明受邀人参加的理由。第三段期待对方接受邀请，并表示感谢。 【亮点词汇】 1.常用形容词 mutual共同的 delighted高兴的 2.常用名词 presence 出席，到场 celebration 庆祝 arrangement 安排 anniversary 周年 participant 参与者 3.常用动词及其短语 participate 参与 invite v．邀请 share joy 分享快乐 I’d like to 我想要…… in honor of 为了纪念 build up增进，加强 have a good time玩得开心 looking forward to期待 have a reputation for 有……的声誉 take an active part in积极参加 take place发生 on behalf of代表 around the corner即将到来 at your convenience在你方便时 【夺人眼球篇首句】 1. I have the honor to invite you to... 我荣幸地邀请您参加…… 2. we would like to extend to you an invitation to... 我们很高兴地邀请您…… 3. we would be particularly honored by your distinguished presence.如果您能出席，我们将感到十分荣幸。 4. If you are interested and free then, we can go to it together.如果你有兴趣也有时间的话，我们可以一起去。 5. I am pleased to invite you to attend... 邀请您出席……，我很荣幸。 【亮点出彩篇中句】 1. It will begin at 2:00 pm and last two hours, during which time 15 well-prepared contestants will deliver their speeches.它将于下午两点钟开始，四点钟结束，在此期间将会有十五位准备充分的参赛者发表演讲。 2. We will start at 8:00 am and arrive there at 9:00.我们将会在上午八点出发，九点到达那里。 3. During the afternoon, we’ll...together.下午，我们会一起...... 4. Remember to take water and lunch with you.记得带上水和午餐。 5. By the way, you may take Bus No. 322 in front of your apartment and it will take you directly to the club.顺便说一下，你可以乘坐你家公寓前的322路公交车，它会直接把你带到俱乐部。 6. I know you are a native speaker of English and an English teacher, and I, on behalf of our school, sincerely invite you to be part of the contest.我知道你的母语是英语，还是一个英语老师。我，代表我们学校，真诚的邀请你来比赛现场。 【韵味无穷结尾句】 1. I do hope that you will be able to come. 殷切希望能够光临。 2. We should be very pleased if you could honor us with your company. 如果您能出席我们将欣喜万分。 3. Will you be available during that time? Please contact me at 1234567 at your earliest convenience.那期间你有空吗?请方便时尽快给我打电话1234567。 4. Would you please let me know as soon as possible if you can accept my invitation?请尽快告诉我你能否接受我的邀请好吗? 【举一反三】根据汉语提示完成下列句子。 1.我怀着极其愉快的心情给您写信，诚恳地邀请您来…….. _____________________________________________. 2.十分高兴能邀请您来…….. _____________________________________________. 3.如果您能…….我们将不胜感激。 _____________________________________________. 4.若您无其他安排，敬请光临我们在二月一号晚七点举办的英语晚会。 _____________________________________________. 5.我希望您不会拒绝我的邀请。 _____________________________________________. 6.是否参加，请早日告之。 _____________________________________________. 7.如果你能来，我们会非常荣幸。 _____________________________________________. 8.我们期待着你的到来。 _____________________________________________. 9.我期待着尽早见到你。 _____________________________________________. 答案：1. It is with the greatest pleasure that I write to cordially invite you to …. 2. It gives me the greatest pleasure to invite you to …… 3. We should be very grateful if you could ….4. I hope that you have no previous engagement and can join us for the English Evening at 7:00 pm on February 1st. 5. I hope that you won’t decline my invitation. 6. Please confirm your participation at your earliest convenience. 7. We will feel much honored if you could come. 8. We are looking forward to your coming. 9. I am longing to see you soon. 【典例精析】 假定你是李华。你所在的校乒乓球队正在招收新队员。请给你的留学生朋友Eric写封邮件邀请他加入，内容包括： 1．球队活动； 2．报名方式及截止日期。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【四步讲解】 第一步：审题谋篇 1.体裁：邀请信 2.时态：一般将来时和一般现在时为主 3.人称：第一人称为主 第二步：列提纲，要点全而不漏 1.写信目的 ①告知你一些好消息　tell you some good news. ②校乒乓球队正在招收新成员 The Student Table Tennis Team of our school is admitting new members ③邀请你参加　invite you to join 2.球队活动 ①除常规训练　apart from regular training ②参加各种各样的活动　join in a variety of activities 3.报名方式和日期 ①把信息发送到intlpssppt @gmschool.com send your information to intlpssppt @ gmschool.com ②申请时间：2017年10月5至10日 The application time is scheduled for October 5­10,2017 4.希望 如果……感激不尽I would appreciate it if... 第三步：由词汇、组成句，表达亮而不俗 1．我是李华。我写信告诉你，我们学校乒乓球队正在招收新队员的好消息。 I am Li Hua.I am writing to tell you some good news that the Student Table Tennis Team of our school is admitting right now. 2．因为你擅长乒乓球，是最合适的人选，我想邀请你参加。 I would like to invite you to join，since you are good at table tennis，and you are the most suitable person. 3．除了常规训练之外，我们队将参加各种各样的活动，例如代表我们学校参加一些国际比赛。 Our team，apart from regular training，will join in a variety of activities，such as participating in some national competitions on behalf of our school. 4．每次活动后我们将挑选最优秀的选手。 After every game，we will select the best players. 5．如果你要参加，请把信息发送到intlpssppt@ gmschool.com. If you will join，you may send your information to intlpssppt @ gmschool.com. 6．申请时间为2017年10月5—10日。 The application time is scheduled for October 5­10, 2017. 7．如果在你方便时回复我我将感激不尽。 I would appreciate it if you could reply to me at your earliest convenience. 第四步：衔接词、巧串联，佳作顺而不乱 用适当的衔接词串句成文 【佳作展现】 Dear Eric， I am Li Hua.I am writing to tell you some good news that the Student Table Tennis Team of our school is looking for new members right now.I would like to invite you to join，since you are good at table tennis，and you are the most suitable person. Our team，apart from regular training，will join in a variety of activities，such as participating in some national competitions on behalf of our school.After every game，we will select the best players. If you will join，you may send your information to intlpssppt@gmschool.Com.The application time is scheduled for October 5­10, 2017. I would appreciate it if you could reply to me at your earliest convenience. Yours， Li Hua 【举一反三】 1.假定你是李华。你班同学决定为小明举办生日聚会。请你写信邀请外教Susan参加，要点包括： 时间：周五晚8点至9点 地点：学生俱乐部 内容：生日歌、蛋糕、游戏等 要求：备小礼物 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【佳作展现】 Hi, Susan, We’re throwing a surprise party for Xiaoming’s birthday. I hope you can come and join us if it is convenient to you. The party will take place on Friday evening from 8 p.m. to 9 p.m. at the Students’ Club. During the party, we’ll sing “Happy Birthday” to him with the candle on. I am sure Xiaoming will be very happy and moved. After that, we’ll cut the birthday cake prepared for him in advance and share it together. What’s more, we decide to play some games afterwards. By the way, don’t forget to prepare a little gift when you come. I am sure we’ll enjoy ourselves together. We are looking forward to your coming. Yours, Li Hua 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 写人记叙文 写人类记叙文属于记叙文写作范畴，写人主要包括外貌、性格、生平、职业、重要活动事件和贡献影响。写作时要围绕人物组织材料，要主题鲜明，突出重点，内容清楚和结构完整。 【亮点词汇】 1.年龄 _____________一个五岁的男孩 _____________ 一个五岁的男孩 _____________在我十/二十多岁时 _____________在五岁时 _____________我小的时候喜欢…… 2. 出生信息 _____________ 出生在…… _____________出生于富裕人家 _____________出生于一个农民家庭 出生地 _____________ 地址_____________ 国籍 _____________ 省_____________ 州 _____________ 街区_____________ 社区_____________ 3. 衣着和外表 _____________ 一个高1.8米的男孩 _____________胖的 _____________瘦的 _____________苗条的 _____________强壮的 _____________显得比实际年龄年轻 _____________ 长得好看 _____________ 长得一般 _____________ 穿得漂亮 _____________衣着干净整洁 4. 能力 _____________办事高效率的 _____________聪明的 _____________ 富创造力的 _____________ 能干的男孩 _____________ 一名合格的教师 _____________ 讲流利的英语 _____________ 在某方面有天赋 _____________ 在……方面有经验 _____________有音乐天赋 _____________喜欢 5.健康 _____________ 身体健康 _____________精力充沛的 _____________身材健美的 _____________ 患上…… 6.个人职业 建筑师 _____________ 运动员 _____________ 家庭教师_____________ 将军 _____________ 部长_____________ 演奏者 _____________ 搬运工 _____________ 侦探 _____________ 导演 _____________ 小说家 _____________ 宇航员 _____________ 口译者 _____________ 律师 _____________ 设计师_____________ 编辑 _____________ 牙医 _____________ 厨师_____________ 7.人物性格 有冒险精神的_____________ 有热情的，狂热的_____________ 富有创造力的_____________ 慷慨的_____________ 喜怒无常的；情绪化的_____________ 友善的_____________ 天真的_____________ 孩子气的，幼稚的_____________ 敏感的_____________ 浪漫的_____________ 考虑周到的，贴心的_____________ 幽默的_____________ 自信的_____________ 独立的_____________ 自私的_____________ 无私的_____________ 乐于助人的_____________ 热情的，热心的_____________ 8.主要成就和贡献 _____________取得博士学位 _____________获得诺贝尔奖; _____________ 致力于做 _____________将自己的全部精力/一生投入到做sth.中 _____________发展商贸并促进中国和他国友谊 _____________对sb./sth.有较大的影响 9.评价 _____________ 有了他教我们，我会取得进步的。 _____________ 他不仅很友善、乐于助人，而且让人倍受鼓舞.或感受 【夺人眼球篇首句】 ①...was one of the greatest...in the 20th century.在20世纪……是最伟大的……之一。 ②He/She studied at...and graduated...他/她在……学习和毕业…… ③...is the one who impresses me most.……是使我印象最深刻的人。 【亮点出彩篇中句】 ①...is such a learned/strong-willed person that we all admire/respect him/her.……是一个如此有学问/意志坚强的人,我们都钦佩/尊敬他/她。 ②He/She devoted all his/her life to...他/她把他/她的一生都献给了…… 【韵味无穷结尾句】 ①He/She was highly thought of...他/她被高度评价…… ②In my opinion,he/she... 在我看来,他/她…… ③He/She will live in the hearts of...forever.他/她将生活在……的心中,直到永远。 【举一反三】根据汉语提示完成句子。 1.She is a charming lady of medium height __________________________. 她是一位有魅力的女士，中等身材，留着常常的金发。 2.__________________________, he often takes an active part in after-class activities. 他很乐观而且精力充沛，经常积极参加课余活动。 3. Whenever people around get into trouble, she is willing to help them,__________________________. 每当周围的人遇到麻烦，她乐意帮助他们，这使她受到所有邻居的尊。 4. _______________________________________ but also he cared for human being’s peace and development. 爱因斯坦不仅致力于科学研究，而且非常关心人类的和平和发展。 5. He __________________________ that we all should learn from him.他为我们学生树立了好榜样，我们都应该向他学习。 6. Her spirit inspires me and millions of other girls to live an independent life and __________________________.她的精神激励着我和数百万女孩过独立的生活，并为我们自己的决定负责。 【典例精析】 假定你是高一学生李华。你的英国朋友吉姆在给你的邮件中提到他对中国儒家文化很感兴趣,并请你介绍历史人物孔子(Confucius)。请你给吉姆回一封邮件,介绍孔子,内容包括: 1.基本情况; 2.主要主张:仁、义; 3.重要影响。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 第一步：审题谋篇 1.体裁：_____________ 2.时态：_____________ 3.人称：_____________ 第二步：列提纲，由词汇组成句，表达亮而不俗 1.在中国古代历史上,孔子是我最喜欢的人物。(figure) _______________________________________________________ 2.他是中国的思想家和社会哲学家。(Chinese thinker) ___________________________________________ 3.(一句多译)他的学说和哲学深深地影响了许多亚洲国家。 (1) ________________________________________________(influence v.)  (2) ___________________________________________________(influence n.)  4.(一句多译)他强调善良、责任和社会秩序的重要性。(kindness, duty and order) (1) __________________________________________________________(stress)  (2) _______________________________________________(attach importance to sth.)  5.(一句多译)我们中国人深受他的学说的影响。(teachings) (1) ______________________________________ (2) _____________________________________________(被动)  6.他激励我永远保持善良和礼貌。(inspire) _______________________________________ 7.那就是我想要被对待的方式。(treat) __________________________________________________ 第三步：妙衔接，巧串联，佳作顺而不乱 用适当的衔接词串句成文。 【佳作展现】 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【举一反三】 1.假定你是李华，从互联网上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡(Singapore)举办夏令营，欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。内容主要包括: 1.自我介绍(包括英语能力);2.参加意图(介绍中国、了解其他国家);3.希望获准。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2.假如你是李夏。你看到美国留学生Sharon 在网上发帖，希望有人能帮助她提高普通话(Mandarin)水平，她可以教英语作为回报。请根据以下提示用英语给她写一封电子邮件。 1. 表达给她提供帮助的意愿； 2. 说明你能胜任辅导的理由； 3. 给出讲好普通话的两点建议； 4. 提出你学习英语的具体需求。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3.你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题, 写一篇短文参赛, 内容包括： 1. 人物简介； 2. 尊敬和爱戴的原因。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 倡议信 倡议书可以是针对某项公益事业向公众发出的倡导，倡议大家一起做某事，或提出合理化意见、建议，也可以是针对某个人或某个特定群体向公众发出的求助。倡议书的主要内容：介绍情况，发出倡议；倡议的理由或意义；倡议的具体内容 【亮点词汇】 1.常用词汇 _____________ 乱扔垃圾 _____________ 随地吐痰 _____________ 行为；表现 _____________ 病人 _____________ 活下来；生存 2.常用短语 _____________ 环境友好的 _____________导致 _____________ 对……有积极/消极的影响 _____________ 全力以赴做某事 _____________ 采取措施做某事 _____________ 提高……的意识 _____________ 呼吁某人做某事 _____________对……负责；是……的原因 _____________保护……免受伤害 _____________ 对……有害 _____________保护我们的环境 _____________环境污染 _____________对……大有好处 _____________(为……)做好充分的准备 _____________有责任做某事 _____________即将到来的演讲比赛 _____________给……留下深刻的印象 _____________考虑我的建议 _____________有机会做某事 _____________帮助学生提高英语水平 【夺人眼球篇首句】 1. Volunteering has a positive effect on our community.It can benefit us in several ways. 2.First of all，volunteering can help us learn more about society and gain valuable experience. 3.Secondly，volunteering provides us with a good opportunity to put what we have learned to good use. 【亮点出彩篇中句】 1. Therefore, let’s take the responsibility to build up a low carbon city by riding bicycles. 因此，让我们负起责任来通过骑自行车建设一个低碳城市。 2. Some people hold the wrong idea that ... 有人持有错误的观点：…… 3. We students of Senior Three are called on to give away our used books. 我们高三学生被号召来捐赠旧书。 4. I am strongly for the activity because it is very meaningful and helpful. 我强烈赞同这个活动，因为它很有意义，很有帮助。 【韵味无穷结尾句】 1. I hope my behavior will make a difference. 我希望我的行为可以起到作用。 2. As high school students, it’s our duty to tell everyone around us to save water. 作为高中生，告诉身边的每一个人节约用水是我们的责任。 3. Let’s start right now and spare no effort to do a little every day, every hour and every minute. 让我们从现在开始每天努力一点点，抓紧每一天、每一小时、每一分钟。 4. Remember，we can make a difference to society if we are willing to lend a helping hand，so let's take action. 【举一反三】根据提示完成句子 1. As far as I’m concerned, ______________________________________. 依我看来，保护环境是我们每个人的责任。 2. It is time that we human beings ____________________________________. 该是我们人类采取恰当的措施来维护自然界平衡的时候了。 3.________________________________________________________. 在我们的城市，随着汽车数量的快速增长，我们的环境正日益恶化。 4.There is no doubt that the earth __________________________________ and that it is human activity that _______________________________. 毫无疑问，地球正变得更加暖和，而这正是人类活动所致。 5.After the discussion, students can draw a conclusion that______________________________________________________________________.讨论结束后，学生们得出一个结论：只有保护好环境并且与自然和谐共处，自然灾害才能减少。 【典例精析】 假定你是李华，你校即将举行主题为“Let’s go green now”的英语演讲比赛。请你用英语写一篇演讲稿，要点包括： 1．倡导绿色生活的原因： 2．实践途径(至少三点)。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Boys and girls， I’m honored to give this speech. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all.Thank you. 【四步讲解】 第一步：审题谋篇 1.体裁：_____________ 2.时态：_____________ 3.人称：_____________ 第二步：列提纲，要点全而不漏 1.倡导绿色生活的原因 ①私家车数量的增加 _____________ ②释放大量有毒气体　_____________ ③导致全球变暖　_____________ 2.实践途径 ①提高人们绿色出行意识_____________ ②使用公共交通或骑自行车_____________ ③垃圾分类、循环利用_____________ 第三步：由词汇、组成句，表达亮而不俗 1.随着社会和经济的发展，私家车的数量以惊人的速度发展。 ______________________________________，the number of private cars is increasing at a surprising speed. 2.众所周知，小汽车释放出有毒气体例如二氧化碳，造成全球变暖，频发的自然灾害、疾病等。 As we all know，cars give off poisonous gas such as carbon dioxide，______________________________________，frequent natural disasters diseases and so on. 3.为了保护我们的环境该到我们绿色出行的时间了。 ______________________________________，it is high time that we should go green. 4.首先，我们应该让人们知道绿色出行的重要性。 Firstly，we should______________________________________. 5.其次，使用公共交通或骑自行车而不开私家车对这个问题有重大意义。 Secondly，using public transportation or riding bicycles instead of using cars can ______________________________________. 6.我们应该充分利用水、电、纸张、食物等。 We should ______________________________________ water，electricity，paper，food and so on. 7.在日常生活中垃圾分类，循环利用是个好主意。 ______________________________________. 第四步：衔接词、巧串联，佳作顺而不乱 用适当的衔接词串句成文 【佳作展现】 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【举一反三】 1.假设你是星光中学的李华，将参加主题为“Let’s Ride Bicycles”的英语演讲比赛。请撰写一份演讲稿，主要内容包括： 1．目前汽车带来的空气污染和交通堵塞等问题； 2．骑自行车的益处，如节能环保、有利健康等。 参考词汇：低碳生活 low-carbon life；节能 energy saving 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2. 假如你是育才中学学生会主席李华，针对目前一些地方血库纷纷告急的情况，请参照以下提示，用英文写一份倡议书，提倡无偿献血 (donate blood for free) 要点提示： 1.社会上对献血的错误认识； 2.指出献血的意义； 3.开展相关活动。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 图表类说明文 图表类书面表达常以曲线图形式、流程图形式、柱形图形式、饼式图形式、数据表格形式及平面图形式出现。这类题型具有文字少、信息简洁、要点分散等特征。图表类书面表达在近年的高考中时有出现，主要是一些关于情况调查、生产、销售、发展进程等各种项目统计的示意图。这类统计图在日常生活中应用得非常广泛，因此，读懂它并能用英语清晰地表述出来具有很强的现实意义。图表作文主要是介绍或说明某方面的情况，文体上属于说明文。 【亮点词汇】 1.常用名词 _____________ n．表格 _____________ n．图表 _____________n．数据 _____________ n．图表；曲线图 2.常用动词及短语 _____________v．描述 _____________v．显示 _____________ v．显示 _____________ v．代表 _____________ v．飞涨 _____________ v．上升 _____________ v．下降 _____________ v．下降 _____________v．减少 _____________ v．增长 _____________相反 _____________相比之下 _____________和……一样 _____________和……一样 _____________与……相似 _____________与……不同 _____________总之 _____________简言之 _____________与……相比 _____________大体上说 【夺人眼球开头句(描述图画内容)】 1.As is described in the picture, one boy can be seen waving his sword with enthusiasm. On the rocks beside him stood a rooster, beyond which there appeared a full moon，suggesting that it was before daybreak. 正如图片中所描绘的，一个男孩正努力舞剑。在他身后的石头上站着一只公鸡，后面是一轮圆月，表明天还没亮。 2.This is a picture that describes vividly a kind of common phenomenon in society. Recesently, mobile apps have become the top choice for us to read books. 这幅画生动地描述了社会中的一种常见现象。手机应用已成为我们阅读书籍的首选。 3.It is clear that the picture implies a common phenomenon in our society today.（后面叙述社会现象） 显然，这幅画隐含着一个当今社会上普遍存在的现象。 4.The implied meaning of the picture should be taken into consideration seriously. What the picture shows to us is that．．．（图画含义）应认真考虑这幅画所隐含的意思。这幅画传达给我们的是·..... 5.There's no doubt that we benefit a lot from the scientific advancements in many different ways. 毫无疑问，我们在许多不同的方面受益于科技的进步 6.This picture points out a serious problem which needs to be taken seriously.这幅图揭示了一个必须认真对待的严重问题。 【亮点出彩篇中句(说明图画寓意)】 1.There are several reasons that account for the phenomenon reflected in the picture.有几种原因能够说明图中所反映出的现象。 2.A number of factors lead to the phenomenon reflected in the picture. First of all, Thanks to advanced technology, we are expected to make greater achievements in other fields, which will bring convenience in every aspects of people's life. 图中所反映出的现象是由若干因素造成的。首先，因为先进的科技，我们会在其他领域取得更大的进步，给人们生活的方方面面带来便利 3.As a matter of fact, you can see many such examples in daily life. It clearly reflects ..., which has been a common and serious problem in our society.实际上日常生活中你可以看到很多这样的例子。它很清楚地反映出···，这是社会中的一个常见且严重的问题。 【韵味无穷结尾句(说明个人观点)】 1.What calls for special attention is that Effective measures should be taken to solve this problem as soon as possible. 需要特别注意的是应该尽快采取有效措施来解决该问题。 2.Just as the picture reminds us, something must be done to deal with the problem.正如图画所提醒我们的那样，必须采取措施来解决此问题。 3.In conclusion, the picture tells us that nothing is more important than the fact that...  总之，这幅画告诉我们没有什么比这更重要… 4.We have good reasons to believe that no one can succeed just by thinking without any action. 我们完全有理由相信没有人可以仅凭空想而不行动就能成功。 【举一反三】 1.From the graph/data/results/information above，__________________________ ...从以上图表/数据/结论/信息可以看出/得出结论/显示出/估计，…… 2.__________________________ ...over the period from ...to ...该图表展示了(某事物)从……到……这段时间数量上的变化。 3.__________________________，we can see/conclude that ...根据图表，我们能够看到/得出结论…… 4.The figure has nearly doubled，__________________________.与去年的数据相比，今年已经翻倍。 5.The figures __________________________ ...数值到达顶峰/低谷…… 6.The survey shows that __________________________ the ...调查显示，超过半数的…… 【典例精析】 1.假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，记述你们上周接待外国学生，带领他们体验中国茶文化的全过程。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【创作示例】 第一步：审题谋篇 体裁：_____________ 时态：_____________ 结构：_____________ 要求：_____________ 第二步：列提纲，要点全而不漏 1.体验了地道的茶文化_____________ 2.生动地向他们介绍了茶文化_____________ 3.忍不住时不时地拍照留念_____________ 4.沉浸在迷人的茶文化中_____________ 5.拍了一张照片来纪念这难忘的一天_____________ 6.我突然意识到_____________ 第三步：由词汇组成句，表达亮而不俗 1.上周，我们带着留学生到学校体验了地道的茶文化，收获颇丰。 Last week, we took the foreign students in our school to experience the authentic tea culture, _______________________________. 2.一到茶馆，外国学生就被独特的茶壶和茶杯所折服。我生动地向他们介绍了茶文化，包括茶文化的悠久历史、丰富的品种和精湛的制茶工艺，引起了他们极大的兴趣，然后我开始教他们如何泡茶。 _________________________, the foreign students were impressed by the unique tea pots and tea cups. I _____________________________, including its profound history, its rich variety, and the exquisite craftsmanship of making tea with their interest greatly sparked, I then began to teach them how to make tea. 3.为了表达清楚，我慢慢地详细解释了传统的泡茶程序。留学生们被我的一举一动吸引住了，又一次被这种独特的文化所震撼，忍不住时不时地拍照留念。 In order to deliver a clear presentation, I slowly explained the traditional procedure of making tea in detail. __________________________, the foreign students were once again amazed by this unique culture and ________________________________. 4.接下来，我让他们自己试一试。洗茶壶，加茶叶，往杯子里倒水，他们按照我的指示，真正沉浸在迷人的茶文化中。我们在茶馆度过了一段非常愉快的时光。 __________________________. Washing the tea pots, adding tea leaves, and pouring water into the cups, they followed my instructions and were really immersed in charming tea culture. The tea house ______________________________. 5.在活动结束时，我们拿着茶包，拍了一张照片来纪念这难忘的一天。 At the end of the activity, holding the tea bags in our hands, _____________________________. 6.我突然意识到，像茶文化这样的传统文化有着巨大的魅力和价值。我为向世界各地的人们传播我们自己的文化而感到自豪。 ________________________________________________. And I swelled with pride to spread our own culture to people all over the world. 第四步：妙衔接，巧串联，佳作顺而不乱 用适当的衔接词串句成文。 【佳作展现】 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【举一反三】 1.假设你校举办看图征文活动，题目为“How to Protect Our Eyesight”。请你用英语写一篇短文，指出图中所反映的现象，并从阅读时间、光线、眼睛保健及睡眠等方面，谈谈保护视力的具体方法。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：近视 — short-sighted How to Protect Our Eyesight ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 图表类说明文 图表类书面表达常以曲线图形式、流程图形式、柱形图形式、饼式图形式、数据表格形式及平面图形式出现。这类题型具有文字少、信息简洁、要点分散等特征。图表类书面表达在近年的高考中时有出现，主要是一些关于情况调查、生产、销售、发展进程等各种项目统计的示意图。这类统计图在日常生活中应用得非常广泛，因此，读懂它并能用英语清晰地表述出来具有很强的现实意义。图表作文主要是介绍或说明某方面的情况，文体上属于说明文。 【亮点词汇】 1.常用名词 table n．表格 chart n．图表 figure n．数据 graph n．图表；曲线图 2.常用动词及短语 describe v．描述 tell v．显示 show v．显示 represent v．代表 soar v．飞涨 rise v．上升 decline v．下降 drop v．下降 reduce v．减少 increase v．增长 on the contrary相反 in contrast to相比之下 as ...as和……一样 the same as和……一样 be similar to与……相似 be different from与……不同 in a word总之 in short简言之 compared to/with与……相比 generally speaking大体上说 【夺人眼球开头句(描述图画内容)】 1.As is described in the picture, one boy can be seen waving his sword with enthusiasm. On the rocks beside him stood a rooster, beyond which there appeared a full moon，suggesting that it was before daybreak. 正如图片中所描绘的，一个男孩正努力舞剑。在他身后的石头上站着一只公鸡，后面是一轮圆月，表明天还没亮。 2.This is a picture that describes vividly a kind of common phenomenon in society. Recesently, mobile apps have become the top choice for us to read books. 这幅画生动地描述了社会中的一种常见现象。手机应用已成为我们阅读书籍的首选。 3.It is clear that the picture implies a common phenomenon in our society today.（后面叙述社会现象） 显然，这幅画隐含着一个当今社会上普遍存在的现象。 4.The implied meaning of the picture should be taken into consideration seriously. What the picture shows to us is that．．．（图画含义）应认真考虑这幅画所隐含的意思。这幅画传达给我们的是·..... 5.There's no doubt that we benefit a lot from the scientific advancements in many different ways. 毫无疑问，我们在许多不同的方面受益于科技的进步 6.This picture points out a serious problem which needs to be taken seriously.这幅图揭示了一个必须认真对待的严重问题。 【亮点出彩篇中句(说明图画寓意)】 1.There are several reasons that account for the phenomenon reflected in the picture.有几种原因能够说明图中所反映出的现象。 2.A number of factors lead to the phenomenon reflected in the picture. First of all, Thanks to advanced technology, we are expected to make greater achievements in other fields, which will bring convenience in every aspects of people's life. 图中所反映出的现象是由若干因素造成的。首先，因为先进的科技，我们会在其他领域取得更大的进步，给人们生活的方方面面带来便利 3.As a matter of fact, you can see many such examples in daily life. It clearly reflects ..., which has been a common and serious problem in our society.实际上日常生活中你可以看到很多这样的例子。它很清楚地反映出···，这是社会中的一个常见且严重的问题。 【韵味无穷结尾句(说明个人观点)】 1.What calls for special attention is that Effective measures should be taken to solve this problem as soon as possible. 需要特别注意的是应该尽快采取有效措施来解决该问题。 2.Just as the picture reminds us, something must be done to deal with the problem.正如图画所提醒我们的那样，必须采取措施来解决此问题。 3.In conclusion, the picture tells us that nothing is more important than the fact that...  总之，这幅画告诉我们没有什么比这更重要… 4.We have good reasons to believe that no one can succeed just by thinking without any action. 我们完全有理由相信没有人可以仅凭空想而不行动就能成功。 【举一反三】 1.From the graph/data/results/information above，it can be seen/concluded/shown/estimated ...从以上图表/数据/结论/信息可以看出/得出结论/显示出/估计，…… 2.The graph shows the changes in the number of ...over the period from ...to ...该图表展示了(某事物)从……到……这段时间数量上的变化。 3.According to the graph，we can see/conclude that ...根据图表，我们能够看到/得出结论…… 4.The figure has nearly doubled，compared with that of last year.与去年的数据相比，今年已经翻倍。 5.The figures reached the peak/bottom ...数值到达顶峰/低谷…… 6.The survey shows that more than half of the ...调查显示，超过半数的…… 【典例精析】 1.假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，记述你们上周接待外国学生，带领他们体验中国茶文化的全过程。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【创作示例】 第一步：审题谋篇 体裁：图片介绍 时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。 结构：总分 要求：⑴活动介绍；⑵体验中国茶文化过程；⑶个人感受 第二步：列提纲，要点全而不漏 1.体验了地道的茶文化experience the authentic tea culture 2.生动地向他们介绍了茶文化give them a vivid and informative introduction of tea culture 3.忍不住时不时地拍照留念couldn’t help taking pictures from time to time 4.沉浸在迷人的茶文化中be really immersed in charming tea culture 5.拍了一张照片来纪念这难忘的一天take a picture to memorize the unforgettable day 6.我突然意识到It suddenly hit me that 第三步：由词汇组成句，表达亮而不俗 1.上周，我们带着留学生到学校体验了地道的茶文化，收获颇丰。 Last week, we took the foreign students in our school to experience the authentic tea culture, _______________________________. 2.一到茶馆，外国学生就被独特的茶壶和茶杯所折服。我生动地向他们介绍了茶文化，包括茶文化的悠久历史、丰富的品种和精湛的制茶工艺，引起了他们极大的兴趣，然后我开始教他们如何泡茶。 _________________________, the foreign students were impressed by the unique tea pots and tea cups. I _____________________________, including its profound history, its rich variety, and the exquisite craftsmanship of making tea with their interest greatly sparked, I then began to teach them how to make tea. 3.为了表达清楚，我慢慢地详细解释了传统的泡茶程序。留学生们被我的一举一动吸引住了，又一次被这种独特的文化所震撼，忍不住时不时地拍照留念。 In order to deliver a clear presentation, I slowly explained the traditional procedure of making tea in detail. __________________________, the foreign students were once again amazed by this unique culture and ________________________________. 4.接下来，我让他们自己试一试。洗茶壶，加茶叶，往杯子里倒水，他们按照我的指示，真正沉浸在迷人的茶文化中。我们在茶馆度过了一段非常愉快的时光。 __________________________. Washing the tea pots, adding tea leaves, and pouring water into the cups, they followed my instructions and were really immersed in charming tea culture. The tea house ______________________________. 5.在活动结束时，我们拿着茶包，拍了一张照片来纪念这难忘的一天。 At the end of the activity, holding the tea bags in our hands, _____________________________. 6.我突然意识到，像茶文化这样的传统文化有着巨大的魅力和价值。我为向世界各地的人们传播我们自己的文化而感到自豪。 ________________________________________________. And I swelled with pride to spread our own culture to people all over the world. 【参考答案】1.which turned out be to extremely rewarding 2. On arriving at the tea house; gave them a vivid and informative introduction of tea culture 3. Absorbed in every move of mine; they couldn’t help taking pictures from time to time 4.Next came the moment when I asked them to have a try themselves; witnessed a really enjoyable time for all of us 5.we took a picture to memorize the unforgettable day 6.It suddenly hit me that traditional culture like tea culture was of great charm and huge value 第四步：妙衔接，巧串联，佳作顺而不乱 用适当的衔接词串句成文。 【佳作展现】 Last week, we took the foreign students in our school to experience the authentic tea culture, which turned out be to extremely rewarding. On arriving at the tea house, the foreign students were impressed by the unique tea pots and tea cups. I gave them a vivid and informative introduction of tea culture, including its profound history, its rich variety, and the exquisite craftsmanship of making tea with their interest greatly sparked, I then began to teach them how to make tea;In order to deliver a clear presentation, I slowly explained the traditional procedure of making tea in detail. Absorbed in every move of mine, the foreign students were once again amazed by this unique culture and they couldn’t help taking pictures from time to time; Next came the moment when I asked them to have a try themselves. Washing the tea pots, adding tea leaves, and pouring water into the cups, they followed my instructions and were really immersed in charming tea culture. The tea house witnessed a really enjoyable time for all of us; At the end of the activity, holding the tea bags in our hands, we took a picture to memorize the unforgettable day. It suddenly hit me that traditional culture like tea culture was of great charm and huge value. And I swelled with pride to spread our own culture to people all over the world. 【举一反三】 1.假设你校举办看图征文活动，题目为“How to Protect Our Eyesight”。请你用英语写一篇短文，指出图中所反映的现象，并从阅读时间、光线、眼睛保健及睡眠等方面，谈谈保护视力的具体方法。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：近视 — short-sighted How to Protect Our Eyesight ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【佳作展现】 How to Protect Our Eyesight Nowadays, when you enter any middle school classroom, you can hardly find any student without glasses on their nose, as we can see from the picture above. How to protect our eye sight has become an important lesson that every teenagers should learn. To begin with, students must set a limit to their reading time and guarantee enough sleep. Remember to take a break every now and then while reading. In addition, avoid reading in dim light which will do harm to the eyes. What’s more, it is also important to take eye-exercise and have a healthy diet. If we can do what has been mentioned above, we can protect our eyesight and say farewell to glasses. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 建议信 建议信是向收信人对某事提出写信人的建议和忠告。建议信有可能是写给个人，就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点；也可能是写给某个组织和机构，就改进其服务提出建议或忠告。建议信要写出写信的原因，建议的内容，提出建议的理由，提出的理由要入情入理，语气一定要礼貌当先。因此建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。通常建议信分为三部分：第一段：自我介绍, 说明目的；第二段：委婉地提出建议及改进措施, 或提出忠告；第三段：采纳建议会带来的好处, 礼貌总结或期盼回复。 【亮点词汇】 1.常用形容词 beneficial 有益的 advisable 明智的 appropriate 适当的 desirable 理想的 feasible 可行的 reasonable合理的 sensible明智的 suitable 合适的 unreasonable 不讲道理的；不合理的；过度的 unsatisfactory 不能令人满意的 2.常用名词 advice 劝告,忠告,意见 concern 关系；关心；商行 v.对…有关系；牵涉到；关心 condition 条件；状况；[复]环境；形势 v. 决定；使适应 feedback 反馈 forethought 事先的考虑 guidance 向导 hint 暗示 instruction 指示 matter 物质；事情；素材；要紧；原因 vi. 关系重要 opinion 看法 proposal 建议 regard 当作；注意 ；尊重；关系；考虑 ；[复]问候 reply 回答；答复 schedule进度表，计划安排 suggestion 建议 3.常用动词短语及短语 advise 劝告；提意见 advocate 提倡 arrange 安排;调整；整理；商定 benefit 受益 beware 当心 caution 告诫 consider考虑 counsel劝告 debate 考虑 dissuade 劝阻 encourage鼓励 improve 改良；增进 persuade 劝服 postpone推迟，延期 prefer更喜欢，宁愿 prevent预防，防止 propose建议 rearrange 重新安排 suggest 建议；提出；启发；暗示 consult sb. for advice 向某人寻求建议 for the sake of 为了某人[某事] 起见;为了…的缘故 give sb. some advice about sth. 给某人提出建议 in case 假使,以防[万一] in my estimation/judgment/opinion/view 据我的看法 keep doing sth. 不断[不停]地做某事 out of the question 毫无可能的，绝对做不到的 provide sb. with sth. 向某人提供某物 recommend sb. to do sth. 给某人提出建议 so far as I know 据我所知 stand up for 拥护 stop smoking 停止吸烟 suggest sb. doing sth. 建议某人做某事 take medicine 吃药 to give/advice/hints/tips/suggestions 提供忠告/暗示/提示/建议 accept/reject one’s advice 接受/拒绝某人提出的建议 advise sb. to do sth. 建议某人做某事 ask sb. for advice /a recommendation 给某人提出建议 【夺人眼球篇首句】 1. I am writing to give you a hand/give you some suggestions. 我写这封信的目的是给你一些帮助/建议。 2.I’m pleased to receive your letter asking for my advice on how... 非常高兴收到你的来信,在信中,关于如何……你向我征求建议。 3. As for/When it comes to...I would like to recommend/suggest... 关于/当涉及……我想推荐/建议…… 4.You’ve asked me for advice regarding/with regard to...and I’ll try to make some suggestions. 关于……你向我征求建议,我会尽量提出一些建议。 5. You may consider doing the following things. 你可以考虑做如下的事情。 【亮点出彩篇中句】 1. I feel that it would be beneficial if … 我觉着如果你------会更有益的。/我认为如果------，将会受益。 2. I think it would be more beneficial if you could... 我想如果你能……，可能会更好。 3. If you can make a careful study ---, I am convinced that your skills of ---will be greatly improved. 如果你能认真学习------，我相信你的------能力将极大提高。 4. You may/might as well have a try. 你不妨试一试。 5. If I were you,I would help him. 如果我是你,我会帮助他。 6. Doing...is a better choice. 做……是一个更好的选择。 7. It's necessary for you to read some books about these places before you come to see them with your own eyes. With more knowledge about these places, you will have a better understanding of Chinese history and culture.在你来亲眼看到这些地方之前，你有必要读一些关于这些地方的书。有了关于这璧地方更多的知识，你将会更好的理解中国的历史和文化。 8. Whaf s more, try to communicate with your classmates in English out of class. Only in this way can you improve your listening and spoken English quickly.还有，试着在课外用英语和同学交流。只有这样，你才能够很快的提高英语听力和口语。 9. Last but not least, you should develop the habit of keeping a diary, which helps improve your written English and helps you go over/review the words and expressions that you have learnt最后但也是很重要的一点是，你应该养成记日记的习惯，这会帮助你提高英语写作，也会帮助你复习学过的单词和短语。 【韵味无穷结尾句】 1. I hope my suggestions will be of benefit to you./I hope you will find these suggestions useful. 我希望我的建议对你有益。/我希望你认为这些建议有帮助。 2. I hope you will take my advice into consideration. 我希望你会考虑我的建议。 3. I feel that it would be useful if you stick to... 我认为, 如果你坚持……的话, 会有益处的。 4.Personally/In my opinion/As far as I’m concerned,it would be wise to take the following actions. 在我看来,采取如下行动是明智的。 5. I will appreciate any comments or advice you’d care to give. 对于你所提出的任何评论或建议我都欢迎。 【举一反三】根据汉语提示完成下列句子。 1.来信收到，得知你下个月要对中国进行一次为期十天的访问，我建议…… _____________________________________________________. 2.写此信是要提出我对饭店管理进一步提高和改进的建议——建立我们自己的网站来吸引更多的客户。 _____________________________________________________. 3. 在读了你的信之后,我知道你在英语学习上有困难。 _____________________________________________________. 4. 它还能帮助我们学习英语。 _____________________________________________________. 5.首先，你应该认真听老师讲课。上课做好笔记，以便下课后可以及时复习。 _____________________________________________________. 6. 众所周知，词汇是非常重要的。你应该早上花半个小时的时间背单词和朗读课文。 _____________________________________________________. 7.如果这方面有所改善我会非常开心的。 _____________________________________________________. 8.忠心希望您能考虑我的建议，并在这些方面进行积极的改变。 _____________________________________________________. 9.我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住：一个决心、要成功的人从来不说"不可能"。 _____________________________________________________. 答案：1. I have received your letter saying that you plan to have a visit to China for ten days next month. I recommend that… 2. I am writing to you to present what I think on the further improvement of our hotel so as to establish a website of our own to attract more clients. 3. .I know you have trouble in learning English after reading your letter. 4. It also helps us to learn English. 5. First of all, you should listen to the teacher carefully and take notes in class so that you can go over your lessons as soon as you can after class. 6. As is known to all, vocabulary is of great importance. You should spend half an hour in the morning reciting words and reading texts aloud. 7. I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard. 8. I sincerely hope that my proposal could be considered and positive changes take place in these regards. 9. I hope these suggestions will be of use to you. Remember: The man who has made up his mind to win will never say "impossible" 【典例精析】 假设你是李华，最近你校根据学生的爱好和兴趣，开展了许多课外活动。请你用英语给校报写一封建议信，内容应包括： 1．列举你们学校开展的三项课外活动； 2．介绍你感兴趣的活动，说明原因及这些活动带给你的益处； 3．请你就如何选择课外活动提出两条建议。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear editor， ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours， Li Hua 【四步讲解】 第一步：审题谋篇 1.体裁：建议信 2.时态：一般现在时 3.人称：第一人称为主 第二步：列提纲、准写词，要点全而不漏 1.学校开展的课外活动 ①课外活动　after­class activities ②例如　such as 2.你感兴趣的活动，说明原因及这些活动带给你的益处 ①对……感兴趣　be interested in ②提高英语口语　improve one’s spoken English ③吸引某人appeal to sb. 3.给别的同学提建议 ①最好做某事　had better do sth. ②充分利用　make the best of 第三步：由词汇、组成句，表达亮而不俗 1.如今，课外活动在高中正变得越来越受欢迎。 Nowadays，after­class activities are becoming increasingly popular in senior high school. 2.我们学校有各种各样的课外活动，如英语角、阳光电台、快乐阅读俱乐部等。 We have many kinds of after­class activities in our school，such as the English Corner，Sunshine Radio Station，Happy Reading Club and so on. 3.我对英语角感兴趣，因为它不仅可以帮助我交一些新朋友，也可以提高我的英语口语。 I’m interested in the English Corner，because it can not only help me make some new friends but also improve my spoken English. 4.如果你想参加课外活动，我有一些建议。 If you want to take part in after­class activities，I have some suggestions. 第四步：衔接词、巧串联，佳作顺而不乱 用in addition，first，second等衔接词串句成文 【佳作展现】 Dear editor， Nowadays，after­class activities are becoming increasingly popular in senior high school.We also have many kinds of after­class activities in our school，such as the English Corner，Sunshine Radio Station，Happy Reading Club and so on. I’m interested in the English Corner，because it can not only help me make some new friends but also improve my spoken English.In addition，the Sunshine Radio also appeals to me a lot.There I can have an unforgettable experience and I hope my dream of being a host may come true one day. These after­class activities make me feel more confident. If you want to take part in after­class activities，I have some suggestions.First，you had better choose the activity which you like best.Second，try to make the best of your interest. Yours， Li Hua 【举一反三】 1.你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行，有两条线路可以选择：“长江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信，内容包括： 1. 你建议的线路； 2. 你的理由； 3. 你的祝愿。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Jim， ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours， Li Hua 【佳作展现】 Dear Jim， I’m happy to receive your letter and know you’re coming to China. Of the two trips to the Yangtze River and Mount Tai, both are highly recommended. Personally, I prefer the tour along the Yangtze, the longest river and one of the Mother Rivers of Chinese civilization. You can learn a lot about the history of China and Chinese people. Moreover, the scenery along the river is amazing, with many well­known sightseeing spots. That’s why I think the trip along the Yangtze will be a better choice. Hope you’ll have a good time in China. Yours， Li Hua 2. 假定你是李华，你所喜爱的 Global Mirror 周报正值创刊五周年之际征集读者意见。请你依据以下内容给主编写封信，内容主要包括： 1.说明你是该报的忠实读者； 2.赞赏该报有点 3.兼顾国内外新闻 4.介绍名人成功故事； 5.提出建议：刊登指导英语学习的文章。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【佳作展现】 Dear Editor-in-Chief, Congratulation on the 5th anniversary of Global Mirror！ I’m a regular reader of your newspaper. I like it very much mainly for the following two reasons. First, it covers both national and international news so that, by simply turning the pages, I can learn all important things that have happened during the week. Equally attractive are the success stories of world-famous people, which help me understand how a person can work hard to make the world a better place. As a young student, I suggest that Global Mirror carry articles to guide us in our English learning, and I hope that it will become even more popular. Sincerely yours, Li Hua 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 建议信 建议信是向收信人对某事提出写信人的建议和忠告。建议信有可能是写给个人，就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点；也可能是写给某个组织和机构，就改进其服务提出建议或忠告。建议信要写出写信的原因，建议的内容，提出建议的理由，提出的理由要入情入理，语气一定要礼貌当先。因此建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。通常建议信分为三部分：第一段：自我介绍, 说明目的；第二段：委婉地提出建议及改进措施, 或提出忠告；第三段：采纳建议会带来的好处, 礼貌总结或期盼回复。 【亮点词汇搭配】 1.常用形容词 _____________有益的 _____________明智的 _____________适当的 _____________理想的 _____________可行的 _____________合理的 _____________明智的 _____________合适的 _____________不讲道理的；不合理的；过度的 _____________不能令人满意的 2.常用名词 _____________劝告,忠告,意见 _____________关系；关心；商行 v.对…有关系；牵涉到；关心 _____________条件；状况；[复]环境；形势 v. 决定；使适应 _____________反馈 _____________事先的考虑 _____________向导 _____________暗示 _____________指示 _____________物质；事情；素材；要紧；原因 vi. 关系重要 _____________看法 _____________建议 _____________ 当作；注意 ；尊重；关系；考虑 ；[复]问候 _____________ 回答；答复 _____________进度表，计划安排 _____________ 建议 3.常用动词短语及短语 _____________ 劝告；提意见 _____________ 提倡 _____________ 安排;调整；整理；商定 _____________ 受益 _____________ 当心 _____________ 告诫 _____________考虑 _____________劝告 _____________考虑 _____________劝阻 _____________鼓励 _____________ 改良；增进 _____________ 劝服 _____________推迟，延期 _____________更喜欢，宁愿 _____________预防，防止 _____________建议 _____________ 重新安排 _____________ 建议；提出；启发；暗示 _____________ 向某人寻求建议 _____________ 为了某人[某事] 起见;为了…的缘故 _____________ 给某人提出建议 _____________ 假使,以防[万一] _____________ 据我的看法 _____________ 不断[不停]地做某事 _____________ 毫无可能的，绝对做不到的 _____________向某人提供某物 _____________ 给某人提出建议 _____________ 据我所知 _____________ 拥护 _____________ 停止吸烟 _____________建议某人做某事 _____________ 吃药 _____________ 提供忠告/暗示/提示/建议 _____________ 接受/拒绝某人提出的建议 _____________ 建议某人做某事 _____________ 给某人提出建议 【夺人眼球篇首句】 1. I am writing to give you a hand/give you some suggestions. 我写这封信的目的是给你一些帮助/建议。 2.I’m pleased to receive your letter asking for my advice on how... 非常高兴收到你的来信,在信中,关于如何……你向我征求建议。 3. As for/When it comes to...I would like to recommend/suggest... 关于/当涉及……我想推荐/建议…… 4.You’ve asked me for advice regarding/with regard to...and I’ll try to make some suggestions. 关于……你向我征求建议,我会尽量提出一些建议。 5. You may consider doing the following things. 你可以考虑做如下的事情。 【亮点出彩篇中句】 1. I feel that it would be beneficial if … 我觉着如果你------会更有益的。/我认为如果------，将会受益。 2. I think it would be more beneficial if you could... 我想如果你能……，可能会更好。 3. If you can make a careful study ---, I am convinced that your skills of ---will be greatly improved. 如果你能认真学习------，我相信你的------能力将极大提高。 4. You may/might as well have a try. 你不妨试一试。 5. If I were you,I would help him. 如果我是你,我会帮助他。 6. Doing...is a better choice. 做……是一个更好的选择。 7. It's necessary for you to read some books about these places before you come to see them with your own eyes. With more knowledge about these places, you will have a better understanding of Chinese history and culture.在你来亲眼看到这些地方之前，你有必要读一些关于这些地方的书。有了关于这璧地方更多的知识，你将会更好的理解中国的历史和文化。 8. Whaf s more, try to communicate with your classmates in English out of class. Only in this way can you improve your listening and spoken English quickly.还有，试着在课外用英语和同学交流。只有这样，你才能够很快的提高英语听力和口语。 9. Last but not least, you should develop the habit of keeping a diary, which helps improve your written English and helps you go over/review the words and expressions that you have learnt最后但也是很重要的一点是，你应该养成记日记的习惯，这会帮助你提高英语写作，也会帮助你复习学过的单词和短语。 【韵味无穷结尾句】 1. I hope my suggestions will be of benefit to you./I hope you will find these suggestions useful. 我希望我的建议对你有益。/我希望你认为这些建议有帮助。 2. I hope you will take my advice into consideration. 我希望你会考虑我的建议。 3. I feel that it would be useful if you stick to... 我认为, 如果你坚持……的话, 会有益处的。 4.Personally/In my opinion/As far as I’m concerned,it would be wise to take the following actions. 在我看来,采取如下行动是明智的。 5. I will appreciate any comments or advice you’d care to give. 对于你所提出的任何评论或建议我都欢迎。 【触类旁通】 7.如果这方面有所改善我会非常开心的。 _____________________________________________________. 8.忠心希望您能考虑我的建议，并在这些方面进行积极的改变。 _____________________________________________________. 9.我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住：一个决心、要成功的人从来不说"不可能"。 _____________________________________________________. 【举一反三】根据汉语提示完成下列句子。 1.来信收到，得知你下个月要对中国进行一次为期十天的访问，我建议…… _____________________________________________________. 2.写此信是要提出我对饭店管理进一步提高和改进的建议——建立我们自己的网站来吸引更多的客户。 _____________________________________________________. 3. 在读了你的信之后,我知道你在英语学习上有困难。 _____________________________________________________. 4. 它还能帮助我们学习英语。 _____________________________________________________. 5.首先，你应该认真听老师讲课。上课做好笔记，以便下课后可以及时复习。 _____________________________________________________. 6. 众所周知，词汇是非常重要的。你应该早上花半个小时的时间背单词和朗读课文。 _____________________________________________________. 【写作示例】 假设你是李华，最近你校根据学生的爱好和兴趣，开展了许多课外活动。请你用英语给校报写一封建议信，内容应包括： 1．列举你们学校开展的三项课外活动； 2．介绍你感兴趣的活动，说明原因及这些活动带给你的益处； 3．请你就如何选择课外活动提出两条建议。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear editor， ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours， Li Hua 【四步讲解】 第一步：审题谋篇 1.体裁：_____________ 2.时态：_____________ 3.人称：_____________ 第二步：列提纲、准写词，要点全而不漏 1.学校开展的课外活动 ①课外活动　_____________ ②例如　_____________ 2.你感兴趣的活动，说明原因及这些活动带给你的益处 ①对……感兴趣　_____________ ②提高英语口语　_____________ ③吸引某人_____________ 3.给别的同学提建议 ①最好做某事　_____________ ②充分利用　_____________ 第三步：由词汇、组成句，表达亮而不俗 1.如今，课外活动在高中正变得越来越受欢迎。 Nowadays，after­class activities _______________________________ in senior high school. 2.我们学校有各种各样的课外活动，如英语角、阳光电台、快乐阅读俱乐部等。 ___________________________________________________________________，such as the English Corner，Sunshine Radio Station，Happy Reading Club and so on. 3.我对英语角感兴趣，因为它不仅可以帮助我交一些新朋友，也可以提高我的英语口语。 I’m interested in the English Corner，___________________________________________________________________. 4.如果你想参加课外活动，我有一些建议。 ___________________________________________________________________. 第四步：衔接词、巧串联，佳作顺而不乱 用in addition，first，second等衔接词串句成文 【佳作展现】 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【举一反三】 1.你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行，有两条线路可以选择：“长江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信，内容包括： 1. 你建议的线路； 2. 你的理由； 3. 你的祝愿。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Jim， ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours， Li Hua 2. 假定你是李华，你所喜爱的 Global Mirror 周报正值创刊五周年之际征集读者意见。请你依据以下内容给主编写封信，内容主要包括： 1.说明你是该报的忠实读者； 2.赞赏该报有点 3.兼顾国内外新闻 4.介绍名人成功故事； 5.提出建议：刊登指导英语学习的文章。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 新闻报道 英语新闻报道（或评论）是媒体传递信息最常使用的新闻手段。新闻报道往往从现实生活中选择最新鲜的事实，及时加以报道。文字精炼、主题突出。评论是带有议论性质的新闻，它以新闻事实为依据，对其进行评价与议论。新闻要以事实说话，而事实不是抽象的，而是非常具体的，它是由时间、地点、人物以及事情的起因、经过、结果等要素组成的，时态上一般都是一般过去时和一般现在时的结合。 【常用动词】 _____________v．采访，会见 _____________v．取得；获得；学到 _____________v．告知；告诉 _____________ v．阻止，预防 _____________ v．生产，产生，出产 _____________ v．提供，供给，供应 _____________v．承认；许可进入 _____________v．威胁 _____________ v. & n．浪费 _____________ n．事实；事例；案件 _____________ n．工作；占领 【常用短语】 _____________贫富差异 _____________人口老龄化 _____________社区服务 _____________低收入家庭 _____________农村留守儿童 _____________温室气体 _____________垃圾分类 _____________潜在的危险 _____________惊人的增加 _____________社会秩序 _____________与……和谐 _____________失去控制 _____________去采访 _____________安排采访 _____________过低碳生活 _____________提高……的意识 _____________共同努力 _____________被……给予深刻印象 _____________应……的邀请 _____________使……陷入沉思 _____________参观旅游景点 _____________极端天气 _____________人口老龄化 _____________严重雾霾 _____________名胜古迹 _____________释放压力 _____________快乐地成长 _____________背诵作品 _____________在……的邀请下 _____________被……给予深刻印象 _____________ 鼓励某人做某事 _____________最著名的旅游景 【吸引眼球开头句】 ①To raise our awareness of labour,the social practice was held at the Gardening Base near our School last Friday.为提高我们的劳动意识，社会实践活动于上周五在我们学校附近的园艺基地举行。 ②Last week witnessed our“Loving Parcels” donation activity at our school.上周我校举行 了“Loving Parcels”的捐赠活动。 【亮点出彩段中句】 ①The activity began with a video showing the history of painting facial masks in Peking Opera.活动从一段展示京剧脸谱画的历史的视频开始。 ②While picking watermelons, I realized how hard it was to work in the fields.在摘西瓜时，我 意识到在地里劳作太辛苦了。 ③A large number of students took part in the activity, showing great enthusiasm.大量学生参加 了这个活动，表现出极大的热情。 ④Not only did the activity bring joy to the participants,but it also enhanced their...这个活动 不仅给参与者带来了快乐，还增强了他们的…… ⑤The activity was a great success, leaving a deep impression on everyone.这个活动非常成功， 给每个人都留下了深刻的印象。 ⑥It is believed that such activities will play an important role in...人们相信这样的活动将 在……中发挥重要作用。 【韵味无穷结尾句】 ①It is through the fruit⁃picking activity that we are aware of the value of working hard.正是 通过采摘活动，我们才意识到劳动的价值。 ②All students thought highly of the voluntary activity, from which they benefited a lot.所有 学生高度评价这个志愿者活动，他们从中受益匪浅。 ③In conclusion,the activity was highly meaningful and beneficial.总之，这个活动非常有意义 且有益。 ④Looking forward to more activities like this in the future.期待未来有更多这样的活动。 【举一反三】根据提示完成句子。 1. _______________________________________, our school organized a mountain-climbing on December 10th. 为了鼓励学生参与课外活动，我们学校于12月10日组织了一次登山活动。 2. Not only did it get us close to nature, it also ____________________________. 它不仅使我们亲近了大自然，而且还增强了同学间的友谊。 3. The British students _____________________ the kindness of Chinese students. 英国的学生们对中国学生的友好印象深刻。 4.________________，I find the job fun and rewarding. I'll keep going, for I believe becoming a journalist is a job I'll enjoy for the rest of my life.尽管很辛苦，我认为这个工作是有趣而值得的。我要继续前进，因为我相信当记者是我余生喜欢的工作。 5．_____________________________ depends on whether you work hard enough.你是否能成为一名成功的记者取决于你是否足够努力。 6．To write a good story，not only should I interview many people, but also I should take many photographs, __________________________.要写一个好故事，我不但要采访很多人，而且要拍很多照片，这真是要求很高的工作。 7．Now and then I will be sent to cover the stories happening in the campus, ____________________________.偶尔我会被派去采访发生在校园里的故事，因为他们认为我善于发现新闻。 【典例精析】 上周Shorn Town发生了严重洪灾，损失惨重，为此希望中学(Hope High School)近期举行了一次义卖活动(A Charity Sale Activity)。假定你叫李华，是校英语报的记者。请写一篇短文报道此次活动。内容包含： 1. 活动的时间和地点； 2. 活动的经过； 3. 你的评价。 注意：1．写作词数应为80左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【创作示例】 第一步：审题谋篇 1.体裁：_____________ 2.时态：_____________ 3.人称：_____________ 第二步：列提纲，要点全而不漏 1.义卖原因 ①发生了严重洪灾_____________ ②损失惨重_____________ 2.活动经过 ①时间_____________ ②原因_____________ ③活动_____________ ④地点_____________ 3.活动评价 ①成功_____________ ②意味着很多_____________ 第三步：由词汇组成句，表达亮而不俗 1.上周Shorn Town发生了严重洪灾，损失惨重。 Last week, a severe flood occurred in Shorn Town, __________________. 2.我们在学校操场上举行了一场慈善义卖活动 A charity sale activity ________ on our school playground. 3.为了组织一次有意义的活动，我们做了充分的准备。 In order to organize a meaningful activity, __________________________. 4.一些学生带来了各种书籍、日用品，一些学生甚至自己制作了手工艺品，还有一些学生主动提出设计“特价”、“大幅折扣”和“最后一天”等海报进行销售。 Some students brought various books, daily necessities, some even made handicrafts by themselves, and others __________________________ like “On Sale”, “Huge Discount”, and “Last Day” for the sale. 5.活动非常成功。 The activity _______________________. 6.我们可能没有很多东西可以捐赠，也没有很多钱可以买很多东西，但我们都应该参加这种活动，为有需要的人做点什么。 We may not have many things to donate or money to buy numerous things, but _____________ ___________________________________________________________________________. 7.慈善义卖活动意义重大。 _______________________________________. 第四步：妙衔接、巧串联，佳作顺而不乱 用适当的衔接词in order to, although, and, but等串句成文。 【佳作展现】 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【举一反三】 1.希望中学(Hope High School)近期举行了一次义卖活动(A Charity Sale Activity)。假定你叫李华，是校英语报的记者。请写一篇短文报道此次活动。要点如下： 1. 活动的时间和地点。 2. 活动的经过。 3. 你的评价。 注意：1．写作词数应为80左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2.星光中学（Xingguang High School）近期举行了一次登山活动。假定你是学校英语报记者，请写一篇短文，报道此次活动。内容包括： 1. 时间与地点：4月10日，大青山（Daqing Mountain）; 2. 活动的过程； 3. 你对于这次活动的评论。 注意：1．写作词数应为80左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 演讲稿 演讲稿是一种进行宣传和思想交流的重要方式，常在高考书面表达中考查，写该类文体时应注意：明确演讲对象，观点鲜明，立场明确，不可含糊其辞、模棱两可，同时语言要符合口语的表达习惯，句子不宜过长。 【吸引眼球开头句】 ①Good morning, everybody! My name is Li Hua. It is my honour to speak here. Today, I’d like to talk about how to express love to our parents.大家早上好！我是李华。在这里发言是我的荣幸。今天，我想谈谈如何向父母表达爱。 ②It’s my great honour to have this chance to deliver my speech on... 我很荣幸有机会做关于……的演讲。 ③Thank you from the bottom of my heart for giving me this chance to deliver my speech. 由衷地感谢给我这次机会发表演讲。 ④Thank you for giving me this opportunity to deliver my speech in this special occasion. 感谢给我这次机会在这个特殊的场合发表演讲。 【亮点出彩段中句】 ①As we all know.../As is known to us all.../It is well-known to us all that... 众所周知，…… ②As far as... is concerned... 就……而言…… ③From this point of view, ... 由此来看，…… ④On account of this, we can... 由于这一点，我们可以…… ⑤No one can deny the fact that.../There is no denying the fact that... 不可否认的事实是…… ⑥As the proverb says, ... 正如谚语所说，…… 【韵味无穷结尾句】 ①Actions speak louder than words. Let’s take action immediately. 事实胜于雄辩。让我们立即采取行动。 ②I hope all of you will begin to treasure music and make it a part of your life.我希望你们所有人都能开始重视音乐，让它成为你们生活的一部分。 ③All things considered/In short/In a word... 总而言之…… ④Last but not least, it’s everyone’s responsibility to... 最后但同样重要的是，……是每个人的责任。 【举一反三】根据汉语提示完成下列句子。 1. 在此发表演讲我感到非常荣幸。 _____________________________________________. 2.欢迎大家。感谢你们前来参加我们的节日以庆祝这一令人高兴的事件。 _____________________________________________. 3.我们非常享受你和我们在一起度过的每一分钟。 _____________________________________________. 4.时光飞逝, 我们不得不说再见了, 因为你们将要回到…… _____________________________________________. 5.我无法用言语表达我对你们所有人的感激。 _____________________________________________. 答案：1. It’s a great honor for me to give a speech here. 2.Welcome, everybody.Thanks for coming to our festival to celebrate this happy event. 3.We enjoyed every minute you spent with us. 4.Time flies and we have to say goodbye; because you are going back to... 5.Words can’t convey how grateful I am to you all. 【典例精析】 在成长的过程中，我们总是对未来从事的职业充满憧憬，你班将以“My dream career”为题举办演讲比赛。请你根据以下要求写一篇英语演讲稿，要点如下： 1．你的理想职业； 2．选择的理由； 3．实现的途径。 注意：1.词数100左右； 2．开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数； 3．可根据内容要点适当发挥，以使行文连贯。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【四步讲解】 第一步：审题谋篇 1.体裁：演讲稿 2.时态：一般现在时为主 3.人称：第一人称 第二步：列提纲，要点全而不漏 1.理想职业 ①我的理想职业　my dream career ②旅游向导　a tourist guide 2.选择理由 ①羡慕导游　admire a guide ②分享当地风俗习惯 share the knowledge of the local culture and customs ③欣赏美景　enjoy the brilliant landscapes 3.实现的途径 ①努力工作hard work ②获得资格achieve the qualification 第三步：由词汇、组成句，表达亮而不俗 1.请允许我给你们做有关我未来职业的演讲。 Please allow me to give you a speech on the career I will take up in the future. 2.毫无疑问，正如在场的每一个人一样，我对未来职业有很大的期望。 There is no doubt that I have great expectation for the future job as everyone present. 3.我理想的职业是当一名旅游导游。 My dream career is to be a tourist guide. 4.自从小时候我一直崇拜走南闯北的导游。他们在欣赏壮丽风景的同时分享当地风俗习惯。 From my early age，I have been admiring a guide who travels everywhere，sharing the knowledge of the local culture and customs and enjoying the brilliant landscapes at the same time. 5.此外，导游还是一个高薪工作。 In addition，it is a well­paid job. 6.当一名好导游决不是一件容易的工作。 To be a good guide is no easy job. 7.只有通过努力工作我才能获得资格，才能正常地为人们服务。 Only by hard work can I achieve the qualification and serve the people properly. 第四步：衔接词、巧串联，佳作顺而不乱 用适当的衔接词串句成文 【佳作展现】 My dream career Good morning，everyone！Today，please allow me to give you a speech on the career I will take up in the future.There is no doubt that I have great expectation for the future job as everyone present.And my dream career is to be a tourist guide.From my early age，I have been admiring a guide who travels everywhere，sharing the knowledge of the local culture and customs and enjoying the brilliant landscapes at the same time.In addition，it is a well­paid job. To be a good guide is no easy job.Only by hard work can I achieve the qualification and serve the people properly. Thank you for listening. 【举一反三】 1.假设你是星光中学的李华，将参加主题为“Let’s Ride Bicycles”的英语演讲比赛。请撰写一份演讲稿，主要内容包括： 1)目前汽车带来的空气污染和交通堵塞 2)骑自行车的益处，如节能环保，有利健康 参考词汇：低碳生活（low-carbon life）节能（energy saving） 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【佳作展现】 Good morning, everyone, I am Li Hua from Xingguang Middle School. The topic of my speech is "Let's Ride Bicycles".As is known to us, air pollution and heavy urban traffic are becoming increasingly severe mainly due to the overuse of cars. Therefore, it’s high time we chose another better means of transport, that is, cycling. There are many good reasons to ride bicycles. First of all, compared to cars, bicycles are much cheaper to buy and maintain, and you don't have all the added costs of fuel, and parking. What's more, bicycles are more environmentally friendly than cars, because they hardly make noises and exhaust. Cycling has become a new trend around the world, a good way of energy saving and low-carbon life. Last but not least, cycling is an excellent way to keep fit and live longer. By riding bicycles, you can cut down your risk of heart attacks, high blood pressure and other illnesses. So I think, riding bicycles actually has great effects on us. Let's ride bicycles from today on! Thank you for listening! 2. 假设你是某大学的学生李华，你校英语俱乐部将选举新一届副主席，负责规划、组织俱乐部的相关活动，你欲参选，请按以下提示，写一篇竞选演讲稿。 1.个人的优势介绍（如性格、特长等）： 2.工作设想： 3.表达竞选的愿望。 参考词汇：副主席 vice president 竞选 run for 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【佳作展现】 Good afternoon, my dear friends. My name is Li Hua. Today I am very glad to have the chance to run for the vice president of the English Club. I feel qualified to take the job. Not only have I gained a lot of experience from my job as monitor but I am also good at organizing activities. Looking in the future, I will try my best to assist the president and serve my fellow students if I am lucky enough to be the vice president. For one thing, I will organize some campus activities, like "English Evening", a platform where students can show their English. For another, I will organize more activities to enhance the interschool communication. I sincerely hope YO u will give me a chance. Thank you. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 约稿信 约稿信是指报纸、杂志、文化栏目等媒体邀请别人写稿的信件。在信中需要介绍该媒体的栏目特点和媒体的受众范围。在约稿时要指定稿件的内容(约稿发起人既可以规定要写作的内容，也可让被约稿人根据媒体和栏目的性质自己拟定写作题目和内容)，并且要约定稿件大致的篇幅和交稿日期。 【亮点词汇搭配】 _____________邀请某人做某事 _____________为......写一篇文章 _____________校英语报 _____________目的是为了 _____________使某人了解 _____________设定栏目来刊登...... _____________受到......欢迎 _____________登载着外国学生写关于......的文章 _____________一听到这个消息 _____________迫不及待告诉你 _____________热烈欢迎关于...的稿件 _____________稿件要求 _____________美国人如何度过节假日 _____________美国高中生日常生活 _____________任何相关的内容 _____________只要 _____________寓教于乐 _____________开拓视野 _____________要求要... _____________交稿 _____________截止到 月 日 _____________不超过400 字的文章 【夺人眼球篇首句】 1. I'd like to aske you to write an article for our school's English newspaper. 我想请你为我们校英文报写一篇文章。 2.)I'm writing to invite you to write an article for… 我写信是想请您为……写一篇文章。 【亮点出彩篇中句】 1. The “Foreign Cultures” section where you are expected to contribute articles in our newspaper is very popular among/with us students. 你将投稿的外国文化部分在我们学生中非常受欢迎。 2. It carries articles written by foreign students concerning/regarding the cultures of their home cultures.这个部分通常刊载外国学生写的关于他们国家文化的文章。 3. Would you please write something about/concerning the culture in your part of the United States/back America? 请问您愿意写点关于你们美国的文章吗？ 4. We would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals, and the everyday life of American senior high students. 我们尤其欢迎关于美国人如何度过节假日和高中生日常生活的文章。 5. You can write anything relevant so long as it's interesting and informative. 你可以写任何相关文章只要你认为其寓教于乐。 6. 400 words would be fine. / The article is supposed to be within 400 words.400 个字就行了。 【韵味无穷结尾句】 1. Could we have your article before June 28? / We wonder if it is practicable to have it before June 28? 请问您能够在7月28日之前截稿吗？ 2. Looking forward to your reply/confirmation soon. 期待尽快收到您的回复/确认。 3. Would you please write something about Boston? 您能否写一些关于波士顿的内容? 【举一反三】根据汉语提示完成句子。 1.You can write anything relevant _____________________________. 您可以写任何与之相关的文章，只要文章内容既有趣且有信息量。 2._________________________. 300词就够了。 3.It would be better _____________________________.如果我们能在6月1日之前收到您的文章会更好。 4.______________________________. 我期待收到您的回信。 【作文示例】 假定你是校英文报“你眼中的中国(China in Your Eyes)”栏目的编辑李华，该栏目拟刊登短文介绍外国学生在中国的留学体验。请给你校加拿大籍留学生Jerkins写信约稿，内容包括： 1. 栏目介绍； 2. 稿件内容和要求。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 第一步：审题谋篇 1.体裁：_____________ 2.时态：_____________ 3.人称：_____________ 第二步：列提纲，要点全而不漏 1. 栏目，专栏 n. _____________ 2. 培养，促进 v. _____________ 3. 方面，层面 n. _____________ 4. 学术生涯，学术生活_____________ 5. 大约 adv._____________ 第三步：由词汇组成句，表达亮而不俗 1. 本专栏旨在提供在中国学习的外国学生的体验和见解，培养我们学校社团的文化交流和欣赏。(insight, cultural exchange) ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2. 请将这篇文章的长度控制在500字左右，你可以附上一些照片来增进读者的理解。(request, enhance) ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 第四步：妙衔接，巧串联，佳作顺而不乱 用适当的衔接词串句成文。 【佳作展现】 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【举一反三】 1.假定你是李华，你校英文报“英语之声”栏目拟刊登外国笔友介绍怎样学好英语的文章。请你给英国朋友Jack写一封约稿信向他约稿。要点如下： 1)怎样练习听说读写。 2)怎样记单词。 3)稿件长度：约300词。 4)交稿日期：4月20日前。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2.假定你是李华，你校英文报“英语角”栏目拟刊登外国笔友介绍自己家乡近十年的变化的文章。请你给英国朋友Mike写一封约稿信向他约稿。要点如下： 1)衣食住行的变化。 2)环境变化。 3)稿件长度：约300词。 4)交稿日期：5月15日前。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 新闻报道 英语新闻报道（或评论）是媒体传递信息最常使用的新闻手段。新闻报道往往从现实生活中选择最新鲜的事实，及时加以报道。文字精炼、主题突出。评论是带有议论性质的新闻，它以新闻事实为依据，对其进行评价与议论。新闻要以事实说话，而事实不是抽象的，而是非常具体的，它是由时间、地点、人物以及事情的起因、经过、结果等要素组成的，时态上一般都是一般过去时和一般现在时的结合。 【常用动词】 interview v．采访，会见 acquire v．取得；获得；学到 inform v．告知；告诉 prevent v．阻止，预防 produce v．生产，产生，出产 provide v．提供，供给，供应 admit v．承认；许可进入 threaten v．威胁 waste v. & n．浪费 case n．事实；事例；案件 occupation n．工作；占领 【常用短语】 wealth gap贫富差异 the aging of population人口老龄化 community services社区服务 a lowincome family低收入家庭 rural leftbehind children农村留守儿童 greenhouse gas温室气体 waste sorting垃圾分类 a potential danger潜在的危险 an alarming increase惊人的增加 social order社会秩序 in harmony with与……和谐 out of control失去控制 cover/go on a story去采访 arrange an interview安排采访 live a low carbon life过低碳生活 raise the awareness of提高……的意识 make a joint effort共同努力 be impressed by…被……给予深刻印象 at the invitation of…应……的邀请 leave…into deep thought使……陷入沉思 pay a visit to some places of interest参观旅游景点 extreme weather极端天气 aging population人口老龄化 heavy/serious smog严重雾霾 places of interest 名胜古迹 release pressure 释放压力 grow up happily 快乐地成长 recite one’s works 背诵作品 at the invitation of 在……的邀请下 be impressed by 被……给予深刻印象 encourage sb. to do sth. 鼓励某人做某事 the best-known tourist spot 最著名的旅游景 【吸引眼球开头句】 ①To raise our awareness of labour,the social practice was held at the Gardening Base near our School last Friday.为提高我们的劳动意识，社会实践活动于上周五在我们学校附近的园艺基地举行。 ②Last week witnessed our“Loving Parcels” donation activity at our school.上周我校举行 了“Loving Parcels”的捐赠活动。 【亮点出彩段中句】 ①The activity began with a video showing the history of painting facial masks in Peking Opera.活动从一段展示京剧脸谱画的历史的视频开始。 ②While picking watermelons, I realized how hard it was to work in the fields.在摘西瓜时，我 意识到在地里劳作太辛苦了。 ③A large number of students took part in the activity, showing great enthusiasm.大量学生参加 了这个活动，表现出极大的热情。 ④Not only did the activity bring joy to the participants,but it also enhanced their...这个活动 不仅给参与者带来了快乐，还增强了他们的…… ⑤The activity was a great success, leaving a deep impression on everyone.这个活动非常成功， 给每个人都留下了深刻的印象。 ⑥It is believed that such activities will play an important role in...人们相信这样的活动将 在……中发挥重要作用。 【韵味无穷结尾句】 ①It is through the fruit⁃picking activity that we are aware of the value of working hard.正是 通过采摘活动，我们才意识到劳动的价值。 ②All students thought highly of the voluntary activity, from which they benefited a lot.所有 学生高度评价这个志愿者活动，他们从中受益匪浅。 ③In conclusion,the activity was highly meaningful and beneficial.总之，这个活动非常有意义 且有益。 ④Looking forward to more activities like this in the future.期待未来有更多这样的活动。 【举一反三】根据提示完成句子。 1. _______________________________________, our school organized a mountain-climbing on December 10th. 为了鼓励学生参与课外活动，我们学校于12月10日组织了一次登山活动。 2. Not only did it get us close to nature, it also ____________________________. 它不仅使我们亲近了大自然，而且还增强了同学间的友谊。 3. The British students _____________________ the kindness of Chinese students. 英国的学生们对中国学生的友好印象深刻。 4.________________，I find the job fun and rewarding. I'll keep going, for I believe becoming a journalist is a job I'll enjoy for the rest of my life.尽管很辛苦，我认为这个工作是有趣而值得的。我要继续前进，因为我相信当记者是我余生喜欢的工作。 5．_____________________________ depends on whether you work hard enough.你是否能成为一名成功的记者取决于你是否足够努力。 6．To write a good story，not only should I interview many people, but also I should take many photographs, __________________________.要写一个好故事，我不但要采访很多人，而且要拍很多照片，这真是要求很高的工作。 7．Now and then I will be sent to cover the stories happening in the campus, ____________________________.偶尔我会被派去采访发生在校园里的故事，因为他们认为我善于发现新闻。 答案：1.In order to encourage the students to take outdoor exercise 2.promoted the friendship among classmates 3.were impressed by 4.Hard as it is 5.Whether you can become a successful journalist 6.which is really a demanding job 7.because they think I have a nose for news 【典例精析】 上周Shorn Town发生了严重洪灾，损失惨重，为此希望中学(Hope High School)近期举行了一次义卖活动(A Charity Sale Activity)。假定你叫李华，是校英语报的记者。请写一篇短文报道此次活动。内容包含： 1. 活动的时间和地点； 2. 活动的经过； 3. 你的评价。 注意：1．写作词数应为80左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【创作示例】 第一步：审题谋篇 1.体裁：新闻报道 2.时态：一般过去时 3.人称：第一人称和第二人称 第二步：列提纲，要点全而不漏 1.义卖原因 ①发生了严重洪灾a severe flood occurred ②损失惨重cause considerable damage 2.活动经过 ①时间on the afternoon of May 20th ②原因do something to help those in need ③活动a charity sale activity ④地点on our school playground 3.活动评价 ①成功a great success ②意味着很多mean a lot 第三步：由词汇组成句，表达亮而不俗 1.上周Shorn Town发生了严重洪灾，损失惨重。 Last week, a severe flood occurred in Shorn Town, __________________. 2.我们在学校操场上举行了一场慈善义卖活动 A charity sale activity ________ on our school playground. 3.为了组织一次有意义的活动，我们做了充分的准备。 In order to organize a meaningful activity, __________________________. 4.一些学生带来了各种书籍、日用品，一些学生甚至自己制作了手工艺品，还有一些学生主动提出设计“特价”、“大幅折扣”和“最后一天”等海报进行销售。 Some students brought various books, daily necessities, some even made handicrafts by themselves, and others __________________________ like “On Sale”, “Huge Discount”, and “Last Day” for the sale. 5.活动非常成功。 The activity _______________________. 6.我们可能没有很多东西可以捐赠，也没有很多钱可以买很多东西，但我们都应该参加这种活动，为有需要的人做点什么。 We may not have many things to donate or money to buy numerous things, but _____________ ___________________________________________________________________________. 7.慈善义卖活动意义重大。 _______________________________________. 【参考答案】1. causing considerable damage 2.was held 3. we made full preparations 4. offered to design posters 5. was a great success 6. we all should participate in this kind of activity, and do something to help those in need 7. The charity sale activity means a lot 第四步：妙衔接、巧串联，佳作顺而不乱 用适当的衔接词in order to, although, and, but等串句成文。 【佳作展现】 Last week, a severe flood occurred in Shorn Town, causing considerable damage. So on the afternoon of May 20th, a charity sale activity was held on our school playground. In order to organize a meaningful activity, we made full preparations. Although it was hard work, students actively took part. Some students brought various books, daily necessities, some even made handicrafts by themselves, and others offered to design posters like “On Sale”, “Huge Discount”, and “Last Day” for the sale. The activity was a great success. The money raised from the sales would be donated to the Project Hope. We may not have many things to donate or money to buy numerous things, but we all should participate in this kind of activity, and do something to help those in need. In a word, the charity sale activity means a lot. 【举一反三】 1.希望中学(Hope High School)近期举行了一次义卖活动(A Charity Sale Activity)。假定你叫李华，是校英语报的记者。请写一篇短文报道此次活动。要点如下： 1. 活动的时间和地点。 2. 活动的经过。 3. 你的评价。 注意：1．写作词数应为80左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【佳作展现】 On the afternoon of May 20th, a charity sale activity was held on our school playground. In order to organize a meaningful activity, we made full preparations. Although it was hard work, students actively took part. Some students brought various books, daily necessities, some even made handicrafts by themselves, and others offered to design posters like “On Sale”, “Huge Discount”, and “Last Day” for the sale. The activity was a great success. The money raised from the sales would be donated to the Project Hope. We may not have many things to donate or money to buy numerous things, but we all should participate in this kind of activity, and do something to help those in need. In a word, the charity sale activity means a lot. 2.星光中学（Xingguang High School）近期举行了一次登山活动。假定你是学校英语报记者，请写一篇短文，报道此次活动。内容包括： 1. 时间与地点：4月10日，大青山（Daqing Mountain）; 2. 活动的过程； 3. 你对于这次活动的评论。 注意：1．写作词数应为80左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【佳作展现】 In order to encourage the students to take outdoor exercise, our school organized a mountain-climbing on April 10. Hundreds of us took part in it. It was a nice day. At 8:00 am, we gathered at the foot of Daqing Moutain and set out for the top in high spirits. All the way we were chatting, singing and laughing, enjoying the fresh air and the beautiful scenery. When some fell behind, others would come and offer help. About 2 hours later, we all reached the top. Bathed in sunshine, we jumped and cheered with joy. The activity benefited us a lot. Not only did it get us close to nature and give us relaxation from heavy school work, it also promoted the friendship among us. What a wonderful time! 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 叙事记叙文 叙事类记叙文也属于记叙文写作范畴，多以事件为中心，以时间和空间为线索，按事件的发生、发展及结局展开，一般最后要表达对事件或活动的感想或看法。 【亮点词汇】 _____________ n.援助；救护；辅助器具；vt.援助 _____________ vi.道歉 _____________ n.禁令；vt.禁止；取缔 _____________ vt.请求，祈求，乞讨 _____________ n.& vt.命令 _____________ vt.要求 _____________ n.建议；vt.提供；提议 _____________ adv.就个人而言 _____________ n.问候，致意 _____________ adj.简单的；朴素的；淳朴的 _____________ n.建议 _____________ vt.答谢；承认；告知收到；致意 _____________ adj.好斗的；侵略性的；攻击的 _____________ v.交际；传达(感情，信息等) _____________ n.风俗；习惯 _____________ vt.原谅；宽恕；n.借口；辩解 _____________ v.打断；打扰；中断；阻断 _____________ adj.正式的；正规的 _____________ v.忽略；不理睬 _____________ n.介绍；引进 _____________ vt.邀请 _____________ adj.高贵的；崇高的；贵族的 _____________ n.平原；adj.清楚的；易懂的；简朴的，朴素的 _____________ adj.私人的，个人的；私有的；不公开的，秘密的 _____________ n.& v.答应，允诺 _____________ adj.合乎情理的 _____________ adj.轻微的；少量的 _____________ adj.感谢的，感激的 【常用短语】 _____________没关系 _____________因(做)某事向某人道歉 _____________禁止某人做某事 _____________当心 _____________为某人送行 _____________向某人挥手告别 _____________因某事恭喜某人 _____________祝某人旅途愉快 _____________把……归功于…… _____________因……感激/感谢某人 _____________拒绝 _____________帮某人一个忙 _____________请求某人帮忙 _____________帮助……克服困境 _____________打电话 _____________接电话 _____________回电话 _____________挂断电话 _____________把……介绍给…… 【常用句式】 1.He is generous with his time in offering help to us，for which we feel grateful.他毫不吝啬自己的时间，主动为我们提供帮助，为此我们都对他感激不尽。 2.It is also a virtue to forgive and forget，especially in such a competitive and stressful society.原谅和宽恕也是一种美德，尤其是在这样充满竞争和压力的社会。 3.The majority of students believe that interest will provide them with more opportunities to develop their interpersonal skills，which may put them in a favorable position in the future job market.大部分学生相信，兴趣会使他们有更多机会发展人际交往能力，而这对他们未来找工作是非常有好处的。 4.In my opinion，this relationship should be filled with love，care，understanding，and respect，so we can exchange ideas freely and get along well with each other.我认为，这种关系应该充满爱、关心、理解和尊重，这样我们才能够自由地交换观点，并且能够融洽地相处。 5.I didn’t realize the importance of cooperating with others until I was chosen monitor of my class in my senior middle school.直到上高中时我被选为班长我才意识到与他人合作的重要性。 【举一反三】根据汉语提示完成句子。 1.Our school organised a campus chorus contest _____________ “love our motherland”in the school hall on Wednesday afternoon, __________________________. 我们学校周三下午在学校礼堂组织了一场主题为“热爱我们的祖国”的校园合唱比赛，比赛从下午4点到6点持续了2个小时。 2. In order to __________________________, our school held an English Drama Competition in our school hall last Sunday afternoon, __________________________. 为了激发学生对英语的兴趣，我们学校上周日下午在学校礼堂举行了一个英语话剧大赛，结果非常成功。 3. _______________________________________ its fresh air and beautiful scenery. 一到公园，最令我印象深刻的是它新鲜的空气和美丽的景色。 4. __________________________, we had a photo taken, capturing the precious moment forever. 被美景所吸引，我们拍了照，将这精彩的瞬间永久保存。 5. _____________, we had a sense of achievement. 尽管我们很累，但是有一种成就感。 6. Although the study tour came to an end, it has a far­reaching influence on us. Thanks to the tour, ___________________________________________________________________________________________.游学结束了，但是它对我们产生了深远的影响。多亏这次游学，我们不仅提高了口语技能，而且对英国文化有了更好的了解。因此拓宽了知识面，开阔了视野。 【典例精析】 假如你是李华，最近收到美国朋友Peter的信，他在信中讲到了高中生活印象最深的活动，并询问你是否愿意跟他分享给你印象最深刻的活动。请你回一封信。内容包括： 1. 简述给你印象最深的活动； 2. 谈谈活动的启发和影响。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【四步讲解】 第一步：审题谋篇 1.体裁：_____________ 2.时态：_____________ 3.人称：_____________ 第二步：列提纲，要点全而不漏 给我留下最深刻印象的是_____________ 决定参加_____________ 不够强壮 _____________ 对我来说都显得异常艰难_____________ 摔倒了_____________ 落在了后面_____________ 继续奔跑_____________ 赢得了勇气和荣誉_____________ 第三步：由词汇组成句，表达亮而不俗 1. 您能分享一下让您印象最深刻的那次活动真是太好了。It is kind of you to share the activity __________________________. 2.给我留下最深刻印象的是去年的运动会。__________________________ the Sport Meeting of last year. 3.在运动会开始前，我决定参加 5000 米赛跑。大家都很惊讶。Before the Sport Meeting, I __________________________ the 5,000metre race. Everyone was very surprised. 4.因为他们认为我身体不够强壮，跑不了 5000 米。 Because they thought I _____________ run the 5,000 metres. 5.在比赛中，每一步对我来说都显得异常艰难。During the race，__________________________. 6.突然，我摔倒了，摔坏了眼镜，还落在了后面。但我没有放弃。我站起来，戴上摔坏的眼镜，继续奔跑。Suddenly, I fell dowm，breaking my glasses and fell behind. But I didn’t give up. I stood up，_______________________________________. 7.尽管我是最后一个冲过终点线的，但我赢得了勇气和荣誉。Although I was the last one to cross the finishing line，__________________________. 第四步：妙衔接，巧串联，佳作顺而不乱 用适当的衔接词串句成文。 【佳作展现】 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【举一反三】 1.假如你是李华，你的英国笔友John来信说，他的同桌经常打断他，向他请教问题，他担心这会影响自己的学习。请你用英语写一封回信。内容包括： 1.给别人讲题也会提升自己； 2.人人都有长处和不足，可以互相学习； 3.帮助别人学习可以使他们树立自信，从而增进友谊。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2.假如你是晨光中学高三(1)班的班长李津，得知美国学生Chris作为交换生，下学期将到你班学习。请你根据以下提示，给他写封邮件： 1.表示欢迎； 2.介绍与本地生活相关的信息(如气候、饮食等)； 3.介绍本班情况； 4.希望Chris做一些事情，以增进中美学生间的了解和友谊。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3. 假设你是李华，加拿大一所学校将于今年暑假组织学生来你校访问。其间， Andy smith 将借住你家。请你代表全家写信给 Andy ，欢迎他的到来，并告知有关事宜。信的要点如下： ※上午：学校活动 ※下午：游览市区 ※晚上：看电视，玩游戏，聊天 参考词汇：安排 arrange 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 求助信 求助信是当个人遇到一些自己无法解决的问题或困难时向别人请求帮助的一种书信。通常包括三部分内容：第一段：表明写信目的，请求帮助；第二段：要清晰陈述请求帮助的具体内容；第三段：希望得到帮助。注意语气委婉、真诚，并要向收信人表示感谢。 【夺人眼球篇首句】 1. I wonder if you could tell me the information about……我想请问您是否能告诉我有关……的消息。 2. I am writing for the information about……我写信时想知道关于……的消息。 3. I would be forever grateful if you could send me information concerning……如果你能将关于……的信息发给我，我将不胜感激。 4. I would like to know whether you can provide me with information regarding……我想知道你是否能提供我关于……的信息。 5. I wish to request materials for……我想要关于……的资料。 6.Would you be so kind to tell me information about……？你可以告诉我有关……？ 【亮点出彩篇中句】 1. Could you please tell me something about ……?您能向我介绍一下……吗？ 2. I would greatly appreciate it if you could tell me something about ……如果您能告诉我有关……的情况，我将感激不尽。 3. I wonder if /whether you could tell me something about ……. 我想要知道您是否可以告诉我……的情况。 4. I would like to know if /whether you could tell me something about ……. 我想要知道您是否可以告诉我……的情况？ 5. I would be much obliged to you if you let me know something about ……. 如果你能告诉我有关……的情况， 我将不胜感激。 6. I would be grateful if it’s so kind of you to give me some essential information. 如果您能告知一些必要的信息，我将不胜感激。 【韵味无穷结尾句】 1.I look forward to your immediate response.我期待着你的及时反馈。 2.Your attention to this letter would be highly appreciated.感谢你对此信的关注。 3.I am waiting for your quick reply.我在等待你的快速答复。 【举一反三】根据汉语提示完成句子。 1.如果能给我提供……方面的信息我将不胜感激。 ______________________________________. 2. 我写信是想知道您能否给我提供有关……的信息。 ______________________________________. 3. 此外，有没有我要特别注意的事情？ ______________________________________. 4. 您能告诉我……吗？ ______________________________________. 5.提前谢谢你的帮助。 ______________________________________. 6.我期待着在您方便的时候的回复。 ______________________________________. 答案：1. I would be most grateful if you could send me information regarding/concerning… 2. I am writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information regarding…3. Besides, is there anything that I should pay special attention to? 4. Would you be so kind as to tell me…?5. Thank you in advance for your cooperation/assistance. 6. I am looking forward to a favorable reply at your earliest convenience. 【典例精析】 小伟减肥以后，感到身体疲倦、虚弱，不知如何是好，于是他写了一封电子邮件向健康专家求教。请根据下面内容，以小伟的写一封邮件，内容包括： 原因：觉得自己太胖，体重不断增加，担心形象不美，有同学嘲笑他； 过程：1)去健身房，两三次就放弃了，感觉太累了也没有时间； 2)节食，坚持了大约一个星期，经常饿的不能继续他的学习； 3)悄悄服用减肥药，一开始有效果，体重迅速下降，但减肥药对他产生副作用。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 第一步：审题谋篇 1.体裁：求助信 2.时态：一般现在时和一般过去时 3.人称：第一人称为主 第二步：列提纲，要点全而不漏 增加体重put on weight 嘲笑某人laugh at sb. 锻炼work out 节食go on a diet 减肥lose weight 对------有不良影响have bad effects on 第三步：由词汇组成句，表达亮而不俗 1.更为糟糕的是我体重一直在增加。 What's worse, I am putting on weight all the time. 2.我非常担心我的体形和自己的样子。 I am very worried about my figure and how I look. 3.我甚至担心有些同学会嘲笑我。 I even fear that some of my classmates laugh at me. 4.曾经，我尝试节食。 Once I tried going on a diet. 5.我饿得厉害，以至于无法继续学习。 I felt so hungry that I was not able to continue my studies. 6.我最终放弃了，因为我没时间做，而且每次锻炼完都感觉非常累。 I finally gave up because I had no time for it and always felt very tired after doing exercise. 7.由此，我不知道我应该做什么？ Thus, I don’t know what I should do. 第四步：妙衔接，巧串联，佳作顺而不乱 用适当的衔接词串句成文。 【佳作展现】 Dear Health Expert, I have got a problem and I need to ask for your help.I feel I am a little too fat. What’s worse, I am putting on weight all the time. I am very worried about my figure and how I look. I even fear that some of my classmates laugh at me. At one time, I tried to work out in a gym two or three times, but I finally gave up just because I had no time for it and always felt very tired after doing exercise. Once I tried going on a diet. However, after about a week, I could not go on because I felt so hungry that I was not able to continue my studies. Then I bought and took weight-loss pills in secret. Soon after, they did work and I was losing weight fast. But soon I felt tired and weak sometimes. I know those pills usually have bad effects on our health. Thus, I don’t know what I should do. Could you be kind enough to give me some good advice? Best wishes! Xiaowei 【举一反三】 1.假定你是李华，计划暑假间去英国学习英语，为期六周。下面的广告引起了你的注意，请给该校写封信，询问有关情况（箭头所指内容） 参考词汇：住宿accommodation 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【佳作展现】 Dear Sir/Madam, I am a student in China and I plan to go to Britain to attend a summer school during the vacation. I’ve seen your ad, and I’d like to know something more about your six -week English course. First, could you tell me when the course will start and how many class hours there are every week Besides, I wish there would not to be too many students in a class. Moreover, I wonder how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included. Furthermore, I tend to know if there will be a host family or a university dormitory. I’m looking forward to your early reply. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 2. 假定你是李华，寒假中你去澳大利亚旅游，可是回国后发现你的相机落在旅馆了，所以你要给旅馆负责人写一封咨询信。要点如下： 1)入住时间：1月27日～2月5日；房间号：608。 2)相机：型号Canon Ixus860，白色；你的17岁生日礼物，很重要。 3)请他/她帮你寻找并寄回，表示感谢。 4)你的地址在信封上。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【佳作展现】 Dear Sir/Madam, I am very grateful for your great service while staying at your hotel, but I’m writing to ask for your help with sending back my camera that I left in your hotel. I checked in on January 27 and out on February 5 and stayed in Room 608 for the whole time. Perhaps because I left in such a rush for the airport, I made the mistake of leaving my camera in the room. Since it was a gift from my parents on my 17th birthday, it’s very important to me. It’s a white Canon Ixus860. I would be very grateful if you could help me find it. If found, the camera can be posted back to me by using the address on the envelope. I am looking forward to your early reply! Yours sincerely, Li Hua 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 道歉信 道歉信是由于自己的过失、疏忽或不能履行承诺等，给别人带来了麻烦或损失，发觉后为了给对方赔礼道歉而写的以消除曲解，增进友谊和信赖的信函。信件通常包括以下内容：第一段：简明说明写信目的，表明歉意，希望得到对方的谅解。第二段：说明造成过错或自己不能履行承诺的原因，提出补救措施，希望能弥补过失，消除误会。第三段：再次表示歉意，衷心希望对方能够谅解。 【亮点词汇】 1.常用形容词 sincerely真诚地 2.常用名词 apology 道歉 inconvenience 不便 appointment约定 negligence疏忽大意 engagement约定 3.常用动词及短语 apologize道歉 forgive原谅 oversight疏忽 make up for弥补 accept one’s apology接受某人的道歉 much to one’s regret非常遗憾 apologize to sb. for sth. / make an apology to sb. for sth.因某事向某人道歉 say sorry to向……说对不起 forgive sb. for sth.为某事原谅某人 have no intention to do sth. 并非故意做某事 pay for / compensate for赔偿；偿还 cause you inconvenience给你带来不便 cause you much trouble给你带来许多麻烦 be more careful更加小心 make such a stupid mistake犯这样愚蠢的错误 be to blame应当受到责备 be responsible for/shoulder /undertake the responsibility承担责任 an unacceptable result/consequence难以接受的后果 never let it happen again下不为例 【夺人眼球篇首句】 1. Much to my regret，I am unable to… 让我感到遗憾的是自己不能…… 2. Excuse me for my not being able to… 请原谅我不能…… 3. I would like to give you my apology for... 对于……，我向您道歉。 4. I must apologize to you for…就……，我必须向您道歉。 5. I would like to express my deepest apology for not being able to …对未能 做……，我表示道歉。 6. I’m sorry to tell you that I can’t... 对未能做……，我表示遗憾。 7. I am writing this letter to apologize to you for my failing to…对未能做......, 特写信表示歉意。 【亮点出彩篇中句】 1. Now let me explain what happened to me that day. 2. I had intended to … 3. I am afraid what I have done has caused much inconvenience to you. 4. I am to blame for this silly mistake. 5. Please forgive me for a stupid choice of words. 6. I feel awfully sorry about it and want you to know what happened. 【韵味无穷结尾句】 1.Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused.我对于所造成的任何不便再次道歉。 2.Please allow me to say sorry again.请允许我再一次说抱歉。 3.Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.希望你们能够接受我的道歉，理解我的处境。 4.I sincerely hope that you will be able to think in my position and accept my apologies.我真诚的希望你能够站在我的位置想一想，并且接受我的道歉。 5.I want to let you know how regretful I am feeling now.我想让你知道我现在感觉多么的遗憾。 6.I am sorry that I can’t… but trust that you will be able to understand.很抱歉我不能......，但我相信，你会理解的。 【举一反三】根据汉语提示完成句子。 1.我为我的疏忽大意向你道歉。 _________________________________________________. 2.我为损坏书这件事向你道歉。 _________________________________________________. 3.很抱歉我没有遵守约定在公园门口等你。 _________________________________________________. 4.对于我说的话/做的事，我确实感到很抱歉。但请相信，我并非故意要 _________________________________________________. 5.为此我感到非常内疚，所以想告诉你实情。 _________________________________________________. 6.我们向你保证，此类事件不会再发生。 _________________________________________________. 7. 对于我说的话/做的事，我确实感到很抱歉。但请相信，我并非故意要…… _________________________________________________. 8. 我真心希望你能理解我的处境/设身处地地为我考虑，并接受我的道歉。 _________________________________________________. 9. 对于造成的不便我再次表示歉意。 答案：1. I want to apologize to you for being so negligent. 2. I owe you an apology for the damage I have done to the book. 3. Much to my regret I was unable to keep my engagement to meet you at the park gate. 4. I am indeed very sorry for what I said/did, but believe I had no intention to. 5. I feel awfully sorry about it and want you to know what happened.6.We assure you that such a matter will never happen again.7. I am indeed very sorry for what I said/did, but please believe I had no intention to…8. I sincerely hope you can understand my situation/think in my position and accept my apology.9. Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused. 【典例精析】 假定你是李华，与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店，因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件，内容包括： 1．表示歉意； 2．说明原因； 3．另约时间。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ [四步讲解] 第一步：审题谋篇 1．体裁：道歉信 2．时态：一般现在时为主 3．人称：第一人称为主 第二步：列提纲、准写词，要点全而不漏 1．约好一起去书店 去书店 go to the bookstore 2．表示歉意 向某人表达真诚的歉意express one’s heartfelt apology to sb. 3．不能去的原因是要代表学校参加英语辩论大赛 参加英语辩论大赛take part in the English debate competition 4．另约时间 对……方便be convenient for 第三步：由词汇、组成句，表达亮而不俗 1．我们计划这个星期六去书店。 We planned to go to the bookstore this Saturday. 2．正因为如此，我写信是想表达我真诚的道歉。 Because of this，I’m writing to express my heartfelt apology to you. 3．我被选出来代表我们学校参加英语辩论比赛，你知道这对我来说是非常重要的。 I’m chosen to represent our school to take part in the English debate competition，which you know is of great importance to me. 4．如果我们这个星期天去书店你方便吗？ Would it be convenient for you if we go to the bookshop this Sunday? 第四步　衔接词、巧串联，佳作顺而不乱 用unfortunately，however等衔接词 【佳作展现】 Dear Bob， How are you doing？We planned to go to the bookstore this Saturday.Unfortunately，I can’t make it.Because of this，I’m writing to express my heartfelt apology to you. How I wish I could go with you！However，I’m chosen to represent our school to take part in the English debate competition，which you know is of great importance to me，for I have been dreaming of having a chance like this to improve my spoken English. Would it be convenient for you if we go to the bookshop this Sunday? I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours， Li Hua 【举一反三】 1.假如你是新华中学的学生李华，你的美国朋友Tom一周前给你发电子邮件，询问你暑假里的打算，但你因准备期末考试未能及时回复。请根据双下要点给他回封邮件： （1）未及时回信的原因； （2）你假期的打算（如做兼职、旅行、做志愿者等） 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【佳作展现】 Dear Tom, How is everything going? I feel terribly sorry for missing the chance of answering your letter in time. You know, I’ve been preparing for the final exams these days, so I forgot to write back. In your letter, you asked me for my plans on summer vacation. Now, I am writing to tell you some specific details. Overall, three things will make my summer vacation meaningful. To start with, doing a part-time job is my dream and I intend to work as a salesman because not only can I earn money by myself, but also it will broaden my horizons. In addition, it is a fabulous choice to visit some famous scenic spots such as Mount Tai during the vacation, in order to enjoy appealing scenery and make more friends. What is more, doing voluntary work, I think, will make a great contribution to the society, which is able to enrich my life. I sincerely apologize again for my mistake. By the way, what’s your plan to spend your summer vacation? I am looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 2. 假如你是新华中学的学生李华，你的美国朋友Tom一周前给你发电子邮件，询问你暑假里的打算，但你因准备期末考试未能及时回复。请根据以下要点给他回封邮件： 1.未及时回信的原因 2.你假期的打算（如做兼职、旅行、做志愿者等）。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【佳作展现】 Dear Tom I'm terribly sorry I couldn't reply to your email which you sent me a week ago immediately. I was so occupied with the final exams. As for the coming summer holiday, I will first do a part time job in a fast-food restaurant. Not only will I earn some money but I will also gain some social experience through it. And then | will go on a trip to Sichuan, where there are a great number of places of interest. Finally, go to Ya'an to work as a volunteer. There is no doubt that children there are badly in need of help. 6 I hope what I will do will make a great difference to them. Best wishes. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 感谢信 感谢信是重要的礼仪文书，是指在日常学习和生活中，当受惠者对给予自己帮助、支持、关心或其他受益时，给对方表示感谢的信件。所表达的情感必须真挚。信件通常包括以下内容：写信的目的（表示感谢）→感谢的原因（详细展开）→对方的作用和对自己的意义→再次表示感谢。文章具体结构：第一段：提出感谢，感谢原因（可以开门见山地表达因为某事对别人表示感谢，也可以先分享好消息紧接着表达感谢）；第二段：细述并赞赏对方给予的帮助；（对方具体做了什么你要感谢他）第三段：再次感谢，如何回报并提出祝愿祝福等。（好好学习，继续努力，祝身体健康等） 【亮点词汇】 1.常用形容词 _____________感激的 _____________感激的 _____________感激的 _____________感激的 _____________慷慨的 _____________衷心的 2.常用名词 _____________感谢 _____________感激 _____________感谢 _____________好客 _____________好意 3.常用动词及其短语 _____________感谢 _____________感谢 _____________欠债，感激 _____________使受恩惠 _____________表达 _____________ 感谢某人--- _____________ 感谢某人--- _____________ 感谢某人--- _____________ 向某人表达谢意 _____________利用这个机会 _____________接受我的感激 _____________ 你真是好…… _____________回报某人的善意 _____________在某人的帮助下 _____________回忆那些美好的日子 _____________我真诚地感激…… _____________由于你的鼓励 _____________对某人有耐心 _____________没有你的帮助，我就不会…… 【夺人眼球篇首句】 1. I’m writing to express my thanks to you for… 2. I am writing this letter to thank you for… 3. I am writing to express my sincere thanks for… 4. I would like to convey in this letter my heartfelt thanks to you for… 5. With deepest gratitude I write you this letter to express… 6. I am writing this letter because I am indebted to you for… 7. I can’t wait to tell you the exciting news that I got the first place in the Speech Contest/ I’ve been admitted into Beijing University… 8. I have received the book/ letter/ comfort from you, which helps me learn American culture further/ solve the problem troubling me/ set me free from the difficulty… 【亮点出彩篇中句】 1. I still clearly remember there was a time when you kept on working when you fell ill, which moved me deeply. 我仍然清晰地记得当您患病时仍然坚持工作，深深地感动了我。(there was a time when ...句型；非限制性定语从句运用。) 2. I will never forget what you have taught me and make every effort to enrich my knowledge and improve my abilities at university so that I can serve the country well in the future. 我难以忘怀您对我的教导，努力丰富我的知识，提高我的能力，让我在未来能为祖国效力。（名词性从句和连词的使用） 3. Your kindness impressed me most, warming my lonely and cold heart when studying abroad. 你的善良给我留下了深刻的印象，温暖了我在他国求学孤独的心。（非谓语动词结构的运用） 4. If it had not been for your(help/ guidance/ assistance)/But for you/ Without your help, I wouldn’t have won the prize／faced the challenge confidently／achieved the success/made such great progress.如果没有你／要不是你，我无法获奖／自信地面对挑战／取得成功/取得这么大的进步。（虚拟语气的运用） 5. It was you who gave me encouragement and courage when I was in trouble, especially when I was not getting along well with my studies. 正是你在我面对困难时给了我鼓励与勇气，尤其是当我学习进展不好时。（强调句型的使用） 【韵味无穷结尾句】 1. Thank you again for… (Your generous help) 2. Please accept my sincere thanks for your help (which I will never forget). 3. I appreciate it more thank I can say. 4. My thanks are just beyond words. 5. Nothing could ever return the favor you gave me. 6. Thank you again for your kind hospitality and the honor you showed me during my visit… 7. Thanks again for your generous help. 8. Please do not hesitate to let me know if there is anything I could do to pay you back. 【举一反三】根据汉语提示完成下列句子。 1.我真的不知道如何表达我对你的帮助的感激之情。 ____________________________________________________. 2.我想表达我对你及时帮助的诚挚的谢意。 ____________________________________________________. 3.你做的给我们留下了深刻的印象，并且我希望我能对你表达我的感激之情对于那些我们曾经在一起度过的美好时光。 ____________________________________________________. 4.是你在我失败的时候一直支持我。你帮我指出错误并告诉我怎样改正它们。 ____________________________________________________. 5.你总是不知疲倦地训练我的耐心。你不断的鼓励是我最大的动力。 ____________________________________________________. 6.对你的慷慨的帮助，我必须再次表示感谢。 ____________________________________________________. 7.我的感激之情超出了文字的描述。 ____________________________________________________. 8.我代表我的全家再次向你所做的一切表达感谢。祝你万事如意！ ____________________________________________________. 【典例精析】 假定你是李华，经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请给他写一封邮件，内容包括： 1. 表示感谢；2. 回顾Alex对你的帮助；3. 临别祝愿。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【创作示例】 第一步：审题谋篇 1．体裁：_____________ 2．时态：_____________ 3．人称：_____________ 第二步：列提纲，要点全而不漏 1.引入话题，陈述感谢原因 _____________即将前往美国 _____________表达我衷心的感谢 2.说明感谢事由或具体情况 _____________难以置信的进步 _____________让我振作起来 3.再次表感谢及真诚祝福 _____________表达我有多么的感激 第三步：由词汇组成句，表达亮而不俗 1.得知你即将启程前往美国，我急切地写信对你的帮助表示衷心的感谢。 _______________________, I’m eagerly writing to ________________________________. 2. 你能给我上一堂实用的学习技巧课真是太好了。 _______________________________ offer me a class of practical learning skills. 3.我在英语上取得了如此难以置信的进步。 I_______________________________________________. 4. 每当我遇到困难，你总是让我振作起来，帮助我走出困境，这激发了我对英语的热情，让我重新获得了巨大的信心。 Whenever I encounter difficulties, you always cheer me up and help me out, _______________________________________________________________________________. 5. 任何语言都无法表达我的感激之情。 ____________________________________________________________________________. 第四步：妙衔接，巧串联，佳作顺而不乱 用firstly, in addition, therefore等衔接词串句成文。 【佳作展现】 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【举一反三】 1.在初中即将毕业之际，假如你是李明，请你给曾经对你有很大帮助的王老师写一份感谢信。文章包含以下内容： 1. 3年前，你来到新的班级，没有朋友，感到孤独。 2. 王老师鼓励你多交朋友，告诉你学好英语。 3. 现在你的变化。（性格变得外向，积极参加各种活动，学习成绩提高） 4. 对王老师表示感谢并祝福老师身体健康。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2.假如你是李华，你和你的家人去朋友Cathy所在的诚实伦敦旅游，回来后你想对Cathy表达感激之情。请根据以下要点给Cathy写一封信： 1.感谢Cathy的热情款待 2.在伦敦玩的非常开心 3.伦敦的风景和美食令人印象深刻 4.邀请Cathy来中国旅游 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3. 假定你是李华，从小喜爱大熊猫 (panda)，一直通过有关网站 (website)关注三年前在美国圣地亚哥动物园出生的大熊猫“苏琳”和她的母亲“白云”。现在苏琳即将三岁。请根据以下要点给动物园工作人员写一封信： 1.自我介绍； 2.祝贺苏琳生日； 3.感谢工作人员； 4.索取苏琳三岁生日昭 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 说理议论文 说理议论文是对某种现象或某种行为的优势和劣势进行对比，一般采用对比法、比较法。要合理安排顺序，分别点明利弊的论点、论据和结论。议论文常用一般现在时，但述说过去的事实时，则用过去时；预测将来时，要用将来时态。 【亮点词汇】 positive aspect积极方面 negative aspect消极方面 far outweigh远远超过 on the contrary相反 obviously显而易见 as far as I am concerned至于我而言 advantages and disadvantages优势和劣势 different attitudes不同的态度 can be seen as follows如下可见 through the above analysis通过以上分析 in conclusion总而言之 more advantages than disadvantages利大于弊 keep balance保持平衡 without (any) doubt毫无疑问 ignore the fact忽略事实 carry out a survey on….=make a survey on….进行了关于……的调查 45 percent of students say/prefer/believe…45%的学生认为 hold different attitudes towards…关于……持不同的态度 a large number of students believe/think… 很多学生认为…… a small number of students believe/think …少量学生认为 in my opinion…, as for me在我看来 【指出现象或争议话题】 1.Recently there is a heated debate in our class on whether middle school students should take up part-time jobs on their weekends. 最近，我们班就中学生是否应该在周末做兼职展开了激烈的争论。 2.No one can deny the fact that the environment is getting polluted more and more seriously. 不可否认的事实是，环境污染越来越严重。 3.There is no denying that people's living conditions are being improved on the whole. 人民的生活条件总体上在不断提高，这是不可否认的事实。 4.It is a common phenomenon in society that people are getting politer than they used to be. 人们比过去更有礼貌，这是社会上的普遍现象。 5.Compared with the previous year, the amount of rubbish thrown into the street has doubled. The reasons are mainly as follows. 与前一年相比，街道上的垃圾数量增加了两倍。其原因主要如下。 【正方观点与反方看法】 1.When it comes to failure, different people have different opinions on it. Some people believe that ..., while others argue that... 谈到失败，不同的人有不同的看法。有些人认为······，另一些人主张······ 2.People's attitudes toward it vary from person to person. Some hold that ... However, others believe that... 人们对此的态度因人而异。有些人认为······。然而其他人却认为·....· 3.In my personal view, health is more important than wealth. 我个人看来，健康比财富更重要。 4.From my point of view, it is up to us ourselves to make a reasonable plan for our future. 在我看来，该由我们自己为我们的将来制定一个合理的计划。 5.I'm greatly convinced that “Honesty is the best policy” in most situations. 我坚信，在多数情况下诚实是最好的策略。 【个人观点与解决措施】 1.This phenomenon exists for a number of reasons as follows. 之所以出现这一现象，有如下很多原因。 2.As far as I am concerned, we must try to find out new ways to deal with the problem. 就我而言，我们必须寻求新的解决该问题的方法。 3.In conclusion, the most important is to raise people's awareness of ... 总之，最重要的是提高人们对······的意识。 4.It is urgent that immediate measures should be taken to stop the situation. 应立即采取措施阻止这一事态的发展，这是迫在眉睫的。 5.It is necessary that effective measures should be taken to end the situation. 有必要采取有效措施结束这种情况。 【举一反三】根据汉语提示完成句子。 1. As a popular saying goes, “Every coin has two sides.” 正如俗语所说：“事物都有其两面性。” 2. As a proverb says, “Everything has two sides”. On the one hand… On the other hand…正如谚语所说，“任何事物都是一分为二的。”一方面……另一方面…… 3. The positive aspects of shopping online far outweigh the negative ones. 网上购物的积极方面远远超过消极的方面。 4. It is obvious that the disadvantages are much more than the advantages. 很明显，弊端大过优势。 5. The advantages gained in…outweigh/are much greater than the advantages we gain from… ……的优点远远超过我们从……中获得的。 6. Many students like… Among them there are two types of attitude in…Some of them think that… Others, however, dont think so. They feel that…许多学生喜欢……。关于……他们有两种不同的观点。有的认为……；而另外一些则不同意这种看法。他们觉得…… 7. Nothing/Few things can approach/equal/match/parallel…没有什么能与……相比。 8. Serious as the problem may be, it pales/disappears into insignificance by comparison to…问题可能很严重，但与……相比就微不足道了。 【典例精析】 我国的手机拥有量为世界第一。手机的利弊众说纷纭，下面是你班就“该不该使用手机”进行的讨论，请你客观地介绍讨论情况并发表你自己的看法。 60%使用者认为有利 40%使用者认为有弊 理由： 1. 方便，可随时随地与人联系； 2. 许多功能满足不同要求，如发短信、上网。 理由： 1. 电离辐射有害健康； 2．减少了人们面对面交流的机会。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【创作示例】 第一步：审题谋篇 体裁：利弊议论文 时态：第一、二人称 结构：总分总 第二步：列提纲，要点全而不漏 1.进行了热烈的讨论 have a heated discussion on 2.赞成be in favour of 3.他们相信…… They hold their view for the reason that... 4.与……联系contact... 5.为……设计be designed to... 6.对……有害do harm to... 7.有机会做某事have changes to do sth. 8.为我们带来了更多的好处和方便bring us more benefit and convenience 第三步：由词汇组成句，表达亮而不俗 1.我们班就我们是否应该使用手机进行了热烈的讨论。 Our class _______________________________________________________. 2.60%的学生赞成拥有手机。他们持有他们的观点，因为它是如此方便，他们可以在任何时间和任何地点与人联系。 60% students ____________________ . They hold their view for the reason_______________ __________________________________. 3.许多功能是为了满足他们的不同需求而设计的。例如，他们可以通过手机发送信息和上网。 Many functions ____________________________. For example, they can send messages and surf the Internet through mobile phones. 4.40%的学生从不认为使用它是正确的。他们认为手机含有电磁辐射，这对使用手机的人有很大的危害。 40% students never think it right to use it. They believe that mobile phones contain electromagnetic radiation, ______________________________________________. 5.使用手机的结果是，人们面对面交流的机会减少了。 _____________________________________, people ________________________________ communicate with each other face to face. 6.在我看来，我们应该有手机，原因是手机是一种现代的通讯工具，它给我们带来了更多的好处和方便。 In my opinion, we should have one, ______________________________ is a modern tool for communication, _______________________________. 【参考答案】1. had a heated discussion on whether we should use mobile phones 2. are in favour of having mobile phones; that it is so convenient that they can contact people with it at any time and in any place 3. are designed to meet different needs of them 4. which does great harm to people that are using it 5. As a result of using mobile phones; have fewer chances to 6. the reason is that a mobile phone; which brings us more benefit and convenience 第四步：妙衔接、巧串联，佳作顺而不乱 用适当的衔接词串句成文。 【佳作展现】 Recently, our class had a heated discussion on whether we should use mobile phones(whether引导的宾语从句). 60% students are in favour of having mobile phones. They hold their view for the reason that it is so convenient that they can contact people with it at any time and in any place. What’s more, many functions are designed to meet different needs of them. For example, they can send messages and surf the Internet through mobile phones. 40% students, however, never think it right to use it. They believe that mobile phones contain electromagnetic radiation, which does great harm to people that are using it(which引导的定语从句). In addition, as a result of using mobile phones, people have fewer chances to communicate with each other face to face. In my opinion, we should have one, the reason is that a mobile phone is a modern tool for communication, which brings us more benefit and convenience(which引导的定语从句). Besides, we should have one in our pockets in case of some emergencies. 【举一反三】 1.现在越来越多的人进行网上购物，网购有它的优势也有它的弊端。请写一篇短文谈谈你对网上购物的看法。要点如下： 1. 网购的优势。 2. 网购的弊端。 3. 你对网购的态度。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【佳作展现】 Nowadays many people prefer to shop online. Generally speaking, its advantages can be seen as follows. First, it’s convenient for us to shop online. Second, it helps save much time, with which we can do more other important things. But just as the saying goes, “Every coin has two sides”. Its negative aspects are also apparent. One of the disadvantages is that we are not sure whether the goods we buy are of good quality. Moreover, buyers may be cheated online. Through the above analysis, I believe the positive aspects of shopping online far outweigh the negative ones. Therefore, I would like to shop online. 2. 我国的手机拥有量为世界第一。手机的利弊众说纷纭，下面是你班就“该不该使用手机”进行的讨论，请你客观介绍讨论情况并发表你自己的看法。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 60%使用者认为有利 40%使用者认为有弊 理由： 1. 方便，可随时随地与人联系; 2. 许多功能满足不同要求，如发短信、上网。 理由： 1. 电离辐射有害健康; 2．减少了人们面对面交流的机会。 【参考范文】 Recently, our class had a heated discussion on whether we should use mobile phones. 60% students are in favor of having mobile phones. They hold their view for the reason that it is so convenient that they can contact people with it at any time and in any place. What’s more, many functions are designed to meet different needs of them. For example, they can send messages and surf the Internet through mobile phones. 40% students, however, never think it right to use it. They believe that mobile phones contain electromagnetic radiation, which does great harm to people that are using it .In addition as a result of using mobile phones , people have fewer chances to communicate with each other face to face . In my opinion, we should have one, the reason is that a mobile phone is a modern tool for communication, which brings us more benefit and convenience. Besides, we should have one in our pockets in case of some emergencies. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 申请信 申请信是应用文的一种，用于向某单位或组织提出请求、帮助或请求等。其类型很多包括求职信，报考申请信，留学申请信等；写申请信应注意语言言简意赅，语气诚恳礼貌，避免夸张。申请信一般包括：申请原因、具备条件、恳请申请单位考虑自己的申请，表示谢意，期盼回复。具体为：第一段引入事件，说明写信目的。第二段介绍关于自己的一些具体内容。第三段提出请求，表示感谢盼复。 【亮点词汇】 1.常用形容词 _____________ 感激的 _____________感激的 _____________自信的 _____________适合的 _____________非常高兴的 _____________重要的 _____________聪明的 _____________有益的 _____________优秀的 _____________富有创造力的 2.常用名词 _____________ 最喜欢的人/物 _____________岗位 _____________业余爱好 _____________职位 _____________申请 _____________可能性 _____________机会 3.常用动词短语 _____________申请 _____________主修 _____________ 毕业于 _____________期待 _____________---擅长--- _____________适合 _____________ 对……熟悉 _____________获得奖学金 _____________对……表现出兴趣 _____________ 在……方面有经验 【夺人眼球篇首句】 1．我写信给你申请成为一名……(apply to be) I am writing to apply to be… 2．我写信申请你登在校网上的岗位(apply for) I am writing to apply for the position advertised on the school web. 3．我坚信我能胜任这个职位(be qualified for) I firmly believe I am qualified for the position. 4．我能达到你们的要求(be competent to meet your requirements) I firmly believe I am competent to meet your requirements. 5. 我写信是想申请加入你们学校的夏令营。 I am writing to apply for the summer camp in your school. 6.我在网上看到你们发布的体验生活的消息，我对此很感兴趣。 I read the announcement of the Experience Life that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it. 【亮点出彩篇中句】 1．首先，我精通三门外语，这帮我顺利的做这份工作(have a good command of) First of all, I have a good command of three foreign languages, which helps me to do the job smoothly. 2．其实，我曾经做过……，这帮我积累了相关的工作经验和拓宽了我的视野(accumulate , broaden one’s horizons) Additionally, I used to be …, which has helped me accumulate relevant working experience and broaden my horizon. 3．最后，我参加了几次关于做……的比赛，并且赢得了一等奖。(be involved in) Last but not least, I have been involved in several competitions concerning … and won first prizes. 4．我具备流利的英语和对运动的激情，因此我认为我可以胜任运动会的志愿者。（With the great fluency in English and the burning passion for sports） With the great fluency in English and the burning passion for sports, I suppose I am qualified to be a volunteer for the Games. 5．我保证我将会给任何参加这次运动会的选手提供最好的服务。（whoever participate in） I promise I will offer the best service to whoever participates in the Games. 6．贵公司目前从事的这种工作特别使我感兴趣。 The kind of work in which your company is engaged particularly interests me. 【韵味无穷结尾句】 1．总之，有好的学习成绩和充足的实际经验，我深信我就是你要找的人(be convinced )。 All in all, with good academic performance and sufficient practical experience, I am strongly convinced that I am the right person that you are looking for. 2．如果你给我这个宝贵的机会，我会很感激(it will be highly appreciated that) It will be highly appreciated if you give me this valuable chance. 3.如果你能给我这个机会，我会非常感激。 I will be much grateful if you can give me the opportunity. 4. 我希望你能提供给我这个机会。 I hope you can offer me the opportunity. 5. 期待你的早日恢复。 I am looking forward to your early reply. 【举一反三】根据汉语提示完成下列句子。 1.我在报纸上看到你们公司在招聘一名秘书。 __________________________________________________. 2.我很高兴在报纸上看到你们招聘家庭教师/助教的广告。 __________________________________________________. 3.我想要暑假申请它。 __________________________________________________. 4.首先，我有很好的写作和交流技巧。 __________________________________________________. 5.最后但也是很重要的一点是，我有很好的性格，并且在生活中很独立。 __________________________________________________. 6.我认为它对我是有好处的。一则，我能够为未来的工作获得经验；二则，我可以交到更多的朋友。 __________________________________________________. 7.我希望我能够成为你们夏令营的一员。 __________________________________________________. 8.如果你需要了解我更多，请给我打电话189...... __________________________________________________. 9.期待早日收到你的来信。 __________________________________________________. 【典例精析】 你校的外教Chris Pearson开设了一个英语辅导班(English Tutorial)，可根据学生的实际需要进行辅导。报名者须根据个人实际情况提出申请并选择辅导内容。假如你是李明，请你给外教写一封电子邮件申请加入辅导班。内容主要包括： 1.介绍个人情况； 2.说明辅导意向(如口语、语法、写作、文化知识等其中的一项或几项)； 3.表达愿望。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Mr Pearson， I am writing to apply for the membership of the English Tutorial.________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely， Li Ming 【四步讲解】 第一步：审题谋篇 1.体裁：_____________ 2.时态：_____________ 3.人称：_____________ 第二步：列提纲，要点全而不漏 1.介绍个人情况 ①擅长　_____________ ②申请　_____________ 2.说明英语学习中的困难 在……方面有困难　_____________. 3.要参加的辅导项目 ①英语口语　_____________ ②语法　_____________ 4.参加辅导的愿望 ①如果……我将不胜感激 _____________. ②申请 _____________ 第三步：由词汇、组成句，表达亮而不俗 1.我认为这是一个提高我的英语技能的好机会。 I think it is _______________________________________. 2.虽然已经学习英语近六年了，我仍然没掌握好。 _______________________________________，I’m still not good at it. 3.我觉得语法很困难，以至于我必须花很多时间在上面。 I find the grammar is _____________ I must spend much time on it. 4.我们的老师只强调英语知识的教学。因此，我们没有机会练习英语口语。 Our teacher only emphasizes the teaching of English knowledge.As a result，__________________________. 5.我确信，在你的帮助下，我的语法和口语可以大大提高。 _____________ grammar and oral English could be greatly improved with your help. 第四步：衔接词、巧串联，佳作顺而不乱 用firstly，in addition，therefore等衔接词串句成文 【佳作展现】 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【举一反三】 1.假定你是李华，将于今年七月从新星外语学校毕业。你从报纸上得知B & B公司要招聘一名英文秘书，你很感兴趣。请给该公司写一封求职信，包括下列要点： 1．年龄；2.学习情况及英语水平；3.兴趣和特长；4.性格特点。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2. 假定你是李华，从互联网 (the Internet) 上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡 (Singapore) 举办夏令营，欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。 内容主要包括： 1)自我介绍（包括英语能力）； 2)参加意图（介绍中国、了解其他国家）； 3)希望获准。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 感谢信 感谢信是重要的礼仪文书，是指在日常学习和生活中，当受惠者对给予自己帮助、支持、关心或其他受益时，给对方表示感谢的信件。所表达的情感必须真挚。信件通常包括以下内容：写信的目的（表示感谢）→感谢的原因（详细展开）→对方的作用和对自己的意义→再次表示感谢。文章具体结构：第一段：提出感谢，感谢原因（可以开门见山地表达因为某事对别人表示感谢，也可以先分享好消息紧接着表达感谢）；第二段：细述并赞赏对方给予的帮助；（对方具体做了什么你要感谢他）第三段：再次感谢，如何回报并提出祝愿祝福等。（好好学习，继续努力，祝身体健康等） 【亮点词汇】 1.常用形容词 thankful感激的 grateful感激的 appreciative感激的 obliged感激的 generous慷慨的 heartfell衷心的 2.常用名词 thanks感谢 gratitude感激 appreciation感谢 hospitality好客 kindness好意 3.常用动词及其短语 thank感谢 appreciate感谢 owe欠债，感激 in debt使受恩惠 express表达 Thank sb. for… 感谢某人--- appreciate one’s doing… 感谢某人--- be grateful/thankful to sb. for… 感谢某人--- convey/ express my thanks/gratitude/appreciation to sb. for… 向某人表达谢意 take the opportunity利用这个机会 accept my gratitude接受我的感激 It was really kind of you... 你真是好…… return one’s kindness回报某人的善意 with one’s help/with the help of sb. 在某人的帮助下 recall those beautiful days回忆那些美好的日子 I sincerely appreciate…我真诚地感激…… thanks to/because of your encouragement由于你的鼓励 be patient with sb./have much patience with sb.对某人有耐心 Without your help, I wouldn’t... 没有你的帮助，我就不会…… 【夺人眼球篇首句】 1. I’m writing to express my thanks to you for… 2. I am writing this letter to thank you for… 3. I am writing to express my sincere thanks for… 4. I would like to convey in this letter my heartfelt thanks to you for… 5. With deepest gratitude I write you this letter to express… 6. I am writing this letter because I am indebted to you for… 7. I can’t wait to tell you the exciting news that I got the first place in the Speech Contest/ I’ve been admitted into Beijing University… 8. I have received the book/ letter/ comfort from you, which helps me learn American culture further/ solve the problem troubling me/ set me free from the difficulty… 【亮点出彩篇中句】 1. I still clearly remember there was a time when you kept on working when you fell ill, which moved me deeply. 我仍然清晰地记得当您患病时仍然坚持工作，深深地感动了我。(there was a time when ...句型；非限制性定语从句运用。) 2. I will never forget what you have taught me and make every effort to enrich my knowledge and improve my abilities at university so that I can serve the country well in the future. 我难以忘怀您对我的教导，努力丰富我的知识，提高我的能力，让我在未来能为祖国效力。（名词性从句和连词的使用） 3. Your kindness impressed me most, warming my lonely and cold heart when studying abroad. 你的善良给我留下了深刻的印象，温暖了我在他国求学孤独的心。（非谓语动词结构的运用） 4. If it had not been for your(help/ guidance/ assistance)/But for you/ Without your help, I wouldn’t have won the prize／faced the challenge confidently／achieved the success/made such great progress.如果没有你／要不是你，我无法获奖／自信地面对挑战／取得成功/取得这么大的进步。（虚拟语气的运用） 5. It was you who gave me encouragement and courage when I was in trouble, especially when I was not getting along well with my studies. 正是你在我面对困难时给了我鼓励与勇气，尤其是当我学习进展不好时。（强调句型的使用） 【韵味无穷结尾句】 1. Thank you again for… (Your generous help) 2. Please accept my sincere thanks for your help (which I will never forget). 3. I appreciate it more thank I can say. 4. My thanks are just beyond words. 5. Nothing could ever return the favor you gave me. 6. Thank you again for your kind hospitality and the honor you showed me during my visit… 7. Thanks again for your generous help. 8. Please do not hesitate to let me know if there is anything I could do to pay you back. 【举一反三】根据汉语提示完成下列句子。 1.我真的不知道如何表达我对你的帮助的感激之情。 ____________________________________________________. 2.我想表达我对你及时帮助的诚挚的谢意。 ____________________________________________________. 3.你做的给我们留下了深刻的印象，并且我希望我能对你表达我的感激之情对于那些我们曾经在一起度过的美好时光。 ____________________________________________________. 4.是你在我失败的时候一直支持我。你帮我指出错误并告诉我怎样改正它们。 ____________________________________________________. 5.你总是不知疲倦地训练我的耐心。你不断的鼓励是我最大的动力。 ____________________________________________________. 6.对你的慷慨的帮助，我必须再次表示感谢。 ____________________________________________________. 7.我的感激之情超出了文字的描述。 ____________________________________________________. 8.我代表我的全家再次向你所做的一切表达感谢。祝你万事如意！ ____________________________________________________. 答案：1. I really don’t know how to express my gratitude for your help. 2. 2.I would like to convey in this letter my heartfelt thanks to you for your timely help. 3. 3.What you did gave us a deep impression and we hope to express our thanks to you for the wonderful days we spent with you. 4.It was you who always stood by me when I was fall. You pointed my mistakes and told me how to make them right. 5.You always worked tirelessly to train my patience. Your continuous encouragement is my greatest motivation. 6. I must thank you again for your generous help. 7. My true gratitude is beyond the word’s description. 8. I, (on behalf of) my whole family/class/school, would like to thank you again for what you have done for me/us. May you be blessed in everything you do. 【典例精析】 假定你是李华，经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请给他写一封邮件，内容包括： 1. 表示感谢；2. 回顾Alex对你的帮助；3. 临别祝愿。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【创作示例】 第一步：审题谋篇 1．体裁：感谢 2．时态：一般现在时为主 3．人称：第一人称为主 第二步：列提纲，要点全而不漏 1.引入话题，陈述感谢原因 leaving for the United States soon即将前往美国 express my heartfelt gratitude表达我衷心的感谢 2.说明感谢事由或具体情况 unbelievable progress难以置信的进步 cheer me up让我振作起来 3.再次表感谢及真诚祝福 convey how grateful I am表达我有多么的感激 第三步：由词汇组成句，表达亮而不俗 1.得知你即将启程前往美国，我急切地写信对你的帮助表示衷心的感谢。 _______________________, I’m eagerly writing to ________________________________. 2. 你能给我上一堂实用的学习技巧课真是太好了。 _______________________________ offer me a class of practical learning skills. 3.我在英语上取得了如此难以置信的进步。 I_______________________________________________. 4. 每当我遇到困难，你总是让我振作起来，帮助我走出困境，这激发了我对英语的热情，让我重新获得了巨大的信心。 Whenever I encounter difficulties, you always cheer me up and help me out, _______________________________________________________________________________. 5. 任何语言都无法表达我的感激之情。 ____________________________________________________________________________. 【参考答案】1. Learning that you’re leaving for the United States soon; express my heartfelt gratitude to you for your help 2. It’s so nice of you to 3. have made such unbelievable progress in English 4. which fuels my enthusiasm for English and promotes me to regain tremendous confidence 5. No words are strong enough to convey how grateful I am 第四步：妙衔接，巧串联，佳作顺而不乱 用firstly, in addition, therefore等衔接词串句成文。 【佳作展现】 Dear Alex, Learning that you’re leaving for the United States soon, I’m eagerly writing to express my heartfelt gratitude to you for your help. Honestly speaking, it’s so nice of you to offer me a class of practical learning skills. Under your professional guidance, I have made such unbelievable progress in English. It’s indeed a pleasant surprise for me to even rank first in a recent English speech contest. Whenever I encounter difficulties(whenever引导的时间状语从句), you always cheer me up and help me out, which fuels my enthusiasm for English and promotes me to regain tremendous confidence(which引导的定语从句). No words are strong enough to convey how grateful I am. Thanks again and wish you a pleasant journey home. Yours, Li Hua 【举一反三】 1.在初中即将毕业之际，假如你是李明，请你给曾经对你有很大帮助的王老师写一份感谢信。文章包含以下内容： 1. 3年前，你来到新的班级，没有朋友，感到孤独。 2. 王老师鼓励你多交朋友，告诉你学好英语。 3. 现在你的变化。（性格变得外向，积极参加各种活动，学习成绩提高） 4. 对王老师表示感谢并祝福老师身体健康。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【佳作展现】 Dear Mr. Wang, How time flies! I’ll graduate from the junior school soon, words can’t show my thanks to you. Three years ago, I was new in the class. I had no friends here and felt lonely. You encouraged me to make more friends. And you also told me to study English hard. With your help, I changed a lot. Now, I am outgoing. I would like to take an active part in various activities. I also improve grades a lot. I’m so thankful to you for your kind help that I’ll work harder and try to do better in the future. I wish your body health. Best wishes! Yours Li Ming 2.假如你是李华，你和你的家人去朋友Cathy所在的诚实伦敦旅游，回来后你想对Cathy表达感激之情。请根据以下要点给Cathy写一封信： 1.感谢Cathy的热情款待 2.在伦敦玩的非常开心 3.伦敦的风景和美食令人印象深刻 4.邀请Cathy来中国旅游 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【佳作展现】 Dear Cathy, Hello! Thank you for your help and good treat while we were traveling in London. You were so kind and friendly to treat us with good meals, and show us around the city. It is really nice to visit London, whose beautiful scenery and delicious food gave me a good impression. I had a great time there and learned a lot about London. Cathy, are you free these days? I would like to invite you to visit China. I'll show you around the interesting places, such as Beijing and Xi'an. Looking forward to your reply. Best regards Yours, Li Hua 3. 假定你是李华，从小喜爱大熊猫 (panda)，一直通过有关网站 (website)关注三年前在美国圣地亚哥动物园出生的大熊猫“苏琳”和她的母亲“白云”。现在苏琳即将三岁。请根据以下要点给动物园工作人员写一封信： 1.自我介绍； 2.祝贺苏琳生日； 3.感谢工作人员； 4.索取苏琳三岁生日昭 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【佳作展现】 Dear Sir/Madam, Greetings from China! This is Li Hua, a student in China, I've been fond of pandas since my childhood. Since three years ago, when the panda Baiyun gave birth to a baby panda Sulin, I have been visiting your website to keep myself informed about how things are going for them. If Iremember clearly, she will turn three soon. I want to say happy birthday to her and express my thanks to you for your hard work, with which she has been brought up and has been living happily with her parents in the US. By the way, I wonder if I could have a photo taken of Sulin on her third birthday. Thank you very much in advance. Yours truly, Li Hua 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 申请信 申请信是应用文的一种，用于向某单位或组织提出请求、帮助或请求等。其类型很多包括求职信，报考申请信，留学申请信等；写申请信应注意语言言简意赅，语气诚恳礼貌，避免夸张。申请信一般包括：申请原因、具备条件、恳请申请单位考虑自己的申请，表示谢意，期盼回复。具体为：第一段引入事件，说明写信目的。第二段介绍关于自己的一些具体内容。第三段提出请求，表示感谢盼复。 【亮点词汇】 1.常用形容词 thankful 感激的 appreciate感激的 confident自信的 suitable适合的 pleased 非常高兴的 considerable重要的 talent聪明的 helpful有益的 excellent优秀的 creative富有创造力的 2.常用名词 favourite 最喜欢的人/物 position 岗位 hobby业余爱好 post/ position职位 application申请 possibility可能性 opportunity机会 3.常用动词短语 apply for申请 major in主修 graduate from 毕业于 look forward to期待 be good at--/ do well in---擅长--- be fit for适合 be familiar with 对……熟悉 gain scholarship获得奖学金 show interest in 对……表现出兴趣 be experienced in 在……方面有经验 【夺人眼球篇首句】 1．我写信给你申请成为一名……(apply to be) I am writing to apply to be… 2．我写信申请你登在校网上的岗位(apply for) I am writing to apply for the position advertised on the school web. 3．我坚信我能胜任这个职位(be qualified for) I firmly believe I am qualified for the position. 4．我能达到你们的要求(be competent to meet your requirements) I firmly believe I am competent to meet your requirements. 5. 我写信是想申请加入你们学校的夏令营。 I am writing to apply for the summer camp in your school. 6.我在网上看到你们发布的体验生活的消息，我对此很感兴趣。 I read the announcement of the Experience Life that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it. 【亮点出彩篇中句】 1．首先，我精通三门外语，这帮我顺利的做这份工作(have a good command of) First of all, I have a good command of three foreign languages, which helps me to do the job smoothly. 2．其实，我曾经做过……，这帮我积累了相关的工作经验和拓宽了我的视野(accumulate , broaden one’s horizons) Additionally, I used to be …, which has helped me accumulate relevant working experience and broaden my horizon. 3．最后，我参加了几次关于做……的比赛，并且赢得了一等奖。(be involved in) Last but not least, I have been involved in several competitions concerning … and won first prizes. 4．我具备流利的英语和对运动的激情，因此我认为我可以胜任运动会的志愿者。（With the great fluency in English and the burning passion for sports） With the great fluency in English and the burning passion for sports, I suppose I am qualified to be a volunteer for the Games. 5．我保证我将会给任何参加这次运动会的选手提供最好的服务。（whoever participate in） I promise I will offer the best service to whoever participates in the Games. 6．贵公司目前从事的这种工作特别使我感兴趣。 The kind of work in which your company is engaged particularly interests me. 【韵味无穷结尾句】 1．总之，有好的学习成绩和充足的实际经验，我深信我就是你要找的人(be convinced )。 All in all, with good academic performance and sufficient practical experience, I am strongly convinced that I am the right person that you are looking for. 2．如果你给我这个宝贵的机会，我会很感激(it will be highly appreciated that) It will be highly appreciated if you give me this valuable chance. 3.如果你能给我这个机会，我会非常感激。 I will be much grateful if you can give me the opportunity. 4. 我希望你能提供给我这个机会。 I hope you can offer me the opportunity. 5. 期待你的早日恢复。 I am looking forward to your early reply. 【举一反三】根据汉语提示完成下列句子。 1.我在报纸上看到你们公司在招聘一名秘书。 __________________________________________________. 2.我很高兴在报纸上看到你们招聘家庭教师/助教的广告。 __________________________________________________. 3.我想要暑假申请它。 __________________________________________________. 4.首先，我有很好的写作和交流技巧。 __________________________________________________. 5.最后但也是很重要的一点是，我有很好的性格，并且在生活中很独立。 __________________________________________________. 6.我认为它对我是有好处的。一则，我能够为未来的工作获得经验；二则，我可以交到更多的朋友。 __________________________________________________. 7.我希望我能够成为你们夏令营的一员。 __________________________________________________. 8.如果你需要了解我更多，请给我打电话189...... __________________________________________________. 9.期待早日收到你的来信。 __________________________________________________. 答案：1. I have read in the newspaper that a secretary is wanted in your company. 2. I am extremely pleased to see your advertisement for an English tutor in the newspaper.3. I would like to apply for it during the summer vacation. 4. In the first place, I have strong written and spoken communication skills. 5. Last but not the least, I have good personality, and I am independent in life. 6. I think it's of great use to me. For one thing, I can gain some experience for my future job; for another, I can make more friends.7. I hope I can be accepted as a member of your summer camp. 8. If you need to know more about me, please contact me at 189...... 9. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. 【典例精析】 你校的外教Chris Pearson开设了一个英语辅导班(English Tutorial)，可根据学生的实际需要进行辅导。报名者须根据个人实际情况提出申请并选择辅导内容。假如你是李明，请你给外教写一封电子邮件申请加入辅导班。内容主要包括： 1.介绍个人情况； 2.说明辅导意向(如口语、语法、写作、文化知识等其中的一项或几项)； 3.表达愿望。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Mr Pearson， I am writing to apply for the membership of the English Tutorial.________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely， Li Ming 【四步讲解】 第一步：审题谋篇 1.体裁：申请信 2.时态：一般现在时为主 3.人称：第一人称 第二步：列提纲，要点全而不漏 1.介绍个人情况 ①擅长　be good at ②申请　apply for 2.说明英语学习中的困难 在……方面有困难　have difficulty in... 3.要参加的辅导项目 ①英语口语　oral English ②语法　grammar 4.参加辅导的愿望 ①如果……我将不胜感激 I would appreciate it if... ②申请 application 第三步：由词汇、组成句，表达亮而不俗 1.我认为这是一个提高我的英语技能的好机会。 I think it is a good chance for me to improve my English skills. 2.虽然已经学习英语近六年了，我仍然没掌握好。 Though I have been learning English for nearly six years，I’m still not good at it. 3.我觉得语法很困难，以至于我必须花很多时间在上面。 I find the grammar is so difficult that I must spend much time on it. 4.我们的老师只强调英语知识的教学。因此，我们没有机会练习英语口语。 Our teacher only emphasizes the teaching of English knowledge.As a result，we have no chance to practise oral English. 5.我确信，在你的帮助下，我的语法和口语可以大大提高。 I’m convinced that my grammar and oral English could be greatly improved with your help. 第四步：衔接词、巧串联，佳作顺而不乱 用firstly，in addition，therefore等衔接词串句成文 【佳作展现】 Dear Mr Pearson， I am writing to apply for the membership of the English Tutorial.I think it is a good chance for me to improve my English skills. Firstly，I’d like to tell you my present situation.Though I have been learning English for nearly six years，I’m still not good at it.I find the grammar is so difficult that I must spend much time on it.In addition，to ensure students can get good marks in exams，our teacher only emphasizes the teaching of English knowledge. As a result，we have no chance to practise oral English. From time to time，I can’t get my ideas across to others.Therefore，I hope I can be a member of the English Tutorial.I’m convinced that my grammar and oral English could be greatly improved with your help. Looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely， Li Ming 【举一反三】 1.假定你是李华，将于今年七月从新星外语学校毕业。你从报纸上得知B & B公司要招聘一名英文秘书，你很感兴趣。请给该公司写一封求职信，包括下列要点： 1．年龄；2.学习情况及英语水平；3.兴趣和特长；4.性格特点。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【佳作展现】 Dear Sir/Madam, I learned from the newspaper that your company needs an English secretary. I'm really interested in this position and hope I can work for you. I'm 20 years old and will be graduating from Xinxing Foreign Language School this July. I'm an excellent student，among the top 5 in my class of 50 students. Having learned English for years (分词的完成式作原因状语), I have a good command of spoken and written English, as well as computer. I have been one of the editors of the newspaper of our school for the past few years. In my spare time, I read a lot, especially poems. I enjoy music very much too. Being an active young person (现在分词作原因状语), I like sports and outdoor activities. Besides, I'm easy to get along with and I like to make friends. The most important thing is that I like office work very much (表语从句). I'm sure I can do it well. I'm looking forward to your reply. Sincerely yours, Li Hua 2. 假定你是李华，从互联网 (the Internet) 上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡 (Singapore) 举办夏令营，欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。 内容主要包括： 1)自我介绍（包括英语能力）； 2)参加意图（介绍中国、了解其他国家）； 3)希望获准。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【佳作展现】 Dear Sir or Madam The other day I happened to read your advertisement on the Internet, saying that you are holding a summer camp aimed at students from around the world, and I'm interested to participate in it. I'm Li Hua, a middle school student in China. As a teenager, I'm interested in making friends with kids of my age from around the world. Your camp will provide a good chance for to know a lot about other countries and tell them something about China. What's more, I can improve my English, communicating with people from other countries. I do hope that I can be lucky enough to be admitted to your camp. Looking forward to your reply. Regards, Li Hua 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 演讲稿 演讲稿是一种进行宣传和思想交流的重要方式，常在高考书面表达中考查，写该类文体时应注意：明确演讲对象，观点鲜明，立场明确，不可含糊其辞、模棱两可，同时语言要符合口语的表达习惯，句子不宜过长。 【吸引眼球开头句】 ①Good morning, everybody! My name is Li Hua. It is my honour to speak here. Today, I’d like to talk about how to express love to our parents.大家早上好！我是李华。在这里发言是我的荣幸。今天，我想谈谈如何向父母表达爱。 ②It’s my great honour to have this chance to deliver my speech on... 我很荣幸有机会做关于……的演讲。 ③Thank you from the bottom of my heart for giving me this chance to deliver my speech. 由衷地感谢给我这次机会发表演讲。 ④Thank you for giving me this opportunity to deliver my speech in this special occasion. 感谢给我这次机会在这个特殊的场合发表演讲。 【亮点出彩段中句】 ①As we all know.../As is known to us all.../It is well-known to us all that... 众所周知，…… ②As far as... is concerned... 就……而言…… ③From this point of view, ... 由此来看，…… ④On account of this, we can... 由于这一点，我们可以…… ⑤No one can deny the fact that.../There is no denying the fact that... 不可否认的事实是…… ⑥As the proverb says, ... 正如谚语所说，…… 【韵味无穷结尾句】 ①Actions speak louder than words. Let’s take action immediately. 事实胜于雄辩。让我们立即采取行动。 ②I hope all of you will begin to treasure music and make it a part of your life.我希望你们所有人都能开始重视音乐，让它成为你们生活的一部分。 ③All things considered/In short/In a word... 总而言之…… ④Last but not least, it’s everyone’s responsibility to... 最后但同样重要的是，……是每个人的责任。 【举一反三】根据汉语提示完成下列句子。 1. 在此发表演讲我感到非常荣幸。 _____________________________________________. 2.欢迎大家。感谢你们前来参加我们的节日以庆祝这一令人高兴的事件。 _____________________________________________. 3.我们非常享受你和我们在一起度过的每一分钟。 _____________________________________________. 4.时光飞逝, 我们不得不说再见了, 因为你们将要回到…… _____________________________________________. 5.我无法用言语表达我对你们所有人的感激。 _____________________________________________. 【典例精析】 在成长的过程中，我们总是对未来从事的职业充满憧憬，你班将以“My dream career”为题举办演讲比赛。请你根据以下要求写一篇英语演讲稿，要点如下： 1．你的理想职业； 2．选择的理由； 3．实现的途径。 注意：1.词数100左右； 2．开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数； 3．可根据内容要点适当发挥，以使行文连贯。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【四步讲解】 第一步：审题谋篇 1.体裁：_____________ 2.时态：_____________ 3.人称：_____________ 第二步：列提纲，要点全而不漏 1.理想职业 ①我的理想职业　_____________ ②旅游向导　_____________ 2.选择理由 ①羡慕导游　_____________ ②分享当地风俗习惯 _________________________ ③欣赏美景　_____________ 3.实现的途径 ①努力工作_____________ ②获得资格_____________ 第三步：由词汇、组成句，表达亮而不俗 1.请允许我给你们做有关我未来职业的演讲。 Please ______________________________________ I will take up in the future. 2.毫无疑问，正如在场的每一个人一样，我对未来职业有很大的期望。 ______________________________________ I have great expectation for the future job as everyone present. 3.我理想的职业是当一名旅游导游。 ______________________________________. 4.自从小时候我一直崇拜走南闯北的导游。他们在欣赏壮丽风景的同时分享当地风俗习惯。 From my early age，I have been admiring a guide who travels everywhere，______________________________________ and enjoying the brilliant landscapes at the same time. 5.此外，导游还是一个高薪工作。 In addition，______________________________________. 6.当一名好导游决不是一件容易的工作。 ______________________________________. 7.只有通过努力工作我才能获得资格，才能正常地为人们服务。 ______________________________________. 第四步：衔接词、巧串联，佳作顺而不乱 用适当的衔接词串句成文 【佳作展现】 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【举一反三】 1.假设你是星光中学的李华，将参加主题为“Let’s Ride Bicycles”的英语演讲比赛。请撰写一份演讲稿，主要内容包括： 1)目前汽车带来的空气污染和交通堵塞 2)骑自行车的益处，如节能环保，有利健康 参考词汇：低碳生活（low-carbon life）节能（energy saving） 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2. 假设你是某大学的学生李华，你校英语俱乐部将选举新一届副主席，负责规划、组织俱乐部的相关活动，你欲参选，请按以下提示，写一篇竞选演讲稿。 1.个人的优势介绍（如性格、特长等）： 2.工作设想： 3.表达竞选的愿望。 参考词汇：副主席 vice president 竞选 run for 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 说理议论文是对某种现象或某种行为的优势和劣势进行对比，一般采用对比法、比较法。要合理安排顺序，分别点明利弊的论点、论据和结论。议论文常用一般现在时，但述说过去的事实时，则用过去时；预测将来时，要用将来时态。 【亮点词汇】 _____________积极方面 _____________消极方面 _____________远远超过 _____________相反 _____________显而易见 _____________至于我而言 _____________优势和劣势 _____________不同的态度 _____________如下可见 _____________通过以上分析 _____________总而言之 _____________利大于弊 _____________保持平衡 _____________毫无疑问 _____________忽略事实 _____________进行了关于……的调查 _____________45%的学生认为 _____________关于……持不同的态度 _____________很多学生认为…… _____________少量学生认为 _____________在我看来 【指出现象或争议话题】 1.Recently there is a heated debate in our class on whether middle school students should take up part-time jobs on their weekends.最近，我们班就中学生是否应该在周末做兼职展开了激烈的争论。 2.No one can deny the fact that the environment is getting polluted more and more seriously. 不可否认的事实是，环境污染越来越严重。 3.There is no denying that people's living conditions are being improved on the whole.人民的生活条件总体上在不断提高，这是不可否认的事实。 4.It is a common phenomenon in society that people are getting politer than they used to be. 人们比过去更有礼貌，这是社会上的普遍现象。 5.Compared with the previous year, the amount of rubbish thrown into the street has doubled. The reasons are mainly as follows. 与前一年相比，街道上的垃圾数量增加了两倍。其原因主要如下。 【正方观点与反方看法】 1.When it comes to failure, different people have different opinions on it. Some people believe that ..., while others argue that...谈到失败，不同的人有不同的看法。有些人认为······，另一些人主张······ 2.People's attitudes toward it vary from person to person. Some hold that ... However, others believe that...人们对此的态度因人而异。有些人认为······。然而其他人却认为·....· 3.In my personal view, health is more important than wealth.我个人看来，健康比财富更重要。 4.From my point of view, it is up to us ourselves to make a reasonable plan for our future.在我看来，该由我们自己为我们的将来制定一个合理的计划。 5.I'm greatly convinced that “Honesty is the best policy” in most situations.我坚信，在多数情况下诚实是最好的策略。 【个人观点与解决措施】 1.This phenomenon exists for a number of reasons as follows. 之所以出现这一现象，有如下很多原因。 2.As far as I am concerned, we must try to find out new ways to deal with the problem.就我而言，我们必须寻求新的解决该问题的方法。 3.In conclusion, the most important is to raise people's awareness of ...总之，最重要的是提高人们对······的意识。 4.It is urgent that immediate measures should be taken to stop the situation.应立即采取措施阻止这一事态的发展，这是迫在眉睫的。 5.It is necessary that effective measures should be taken to end the situation.有必要采取有效措施结束这种情况。 【举一反三】根据汉语提示完成句子。 1. _________________________________ 正如俗语所说：“事物都有其两面性。” 2. _________________________________. On the one hand… On the other hand…正如谚语所说，“任何事物都是一分为二的。”一方面……另一方面…… 3. _________________________________. 网上购物的积极方面远远超过消极的方面。 4._________________________________ the disadvantages are much more than the advantages. 很明显，弊端大过优势。 5. The advantages gained in…_________________________________… ……的优点远远超过我们从……中获得的。 6. Many students like… Among them there are two types of attitude in…_________________________________… Others, however, dont think so. They feel that…许多学生喜欢……。关于……他们有两种不同的观点。有的认为……；而另外一些则不同意这种看法。他们觉得…… 7. _________________________________…没有什么能与……相比。 8. _________________________________, it pales/disappears into insignificance by comparison to…问题可能很严重，但与……相比就微不足道了。 【典例精析】 我国的手机拥有量为世界第一。手机的利弊众说纷纭，下面是你班就“该不该使用手机”进行的讨论，请你客观地介绍讨论情况并发表你自己的看法。 60%使用者认为有利 40%使用者认为有弊 理由： 1. 方便，可随时随地与人联系； 2. 许多功能满足不同要求，如发短信、上网。 理由： 1. 电离辐射有害健康； 2．减少了人们面对面交流的机会。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【创作示例】 第一步：审题谋篇 体裁：_____________ 时态：_____________ 结构：_____________ 第二步：列提纲，要点全而不漏 1.进行了热烈的讨论_____________ 2.赞成_____________ 3.他们相信…… _____________. 4.与……联系_____________ 5.为……设计_____________ 6.对……有害_____________ 7.有机会做某事_____________ 8.为我们带来了更多的好处和方便_____________ 第三步：由词汇组成句，表达亮而不俗 1.我们班就我们是否应该使用手机进行了热烈的讨论。 Our class _______________________________________________________. 2.60%的学生赞成拥有手机。他们持有他们的观点，因为它是如此方便，他们可以在任何时间和任何地点与人联系。 60% students ____________________ . They hold their view for the reason_______________ __________________________________. 3.许多功能是为了满足他们的不同需求而设计的。例如，他们可以通过手机发送信息和上网。 Many functions ____________________________. For example, they can send messages and surf the Internet through mobile phones. 4.40%的学生从不认为使用它是正确的。他们认为手机含有电磁辐射，这对使用手机的人有很大的危害。 40% students never think it right to use it. They believe that mobile phones contain electromagnetic radiation, ______________________________________________. 5.使用手机的结果是，人们面对面交流的机会减少了。 _____________________________________, people ________________________________ communicate with each other face to face. 6.在我看来，我们应该有手机，原因是手机是一种现代的通讯工具，它给我们带来了更多的好处和方便。 In my opinion, we should have one, ______________________________ is a modern tool for communication, _______________________________. 第四步：妙衔接、巧串联，佳作顺而不乱 用适当的衔接词串句成文。 【佳作展现】 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【举一反三】 1.现在越来越多的人进行网上购物，网购有它的优势也有它的弊端。请写一篇短文谈谈你对网上购物的看法。要点如下： 1. 网购的优势。 2. 网购的弊端。 3. 你对网购的态度。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2. 我国的手机拥有量为世界第一。手机的利弊众说纷纭，下面是你班就“该不该使用手机”进行的讨论，请你客观介绍讨论情况并发表你自己的看法。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 60%使用者认为有利 40%使用者认为有弊 理由： 1. 方便，可随时随地与人联系; 2. 许多功能满足不同要求，如发短信、上网。 理由： 1. 电离辐射有害健康; 2．减少了人们面对面交流的机会。 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 约稿信 约稿信是指报纸、杂志、文化栏目等媒体邀请别人写稿的信件。在信中需要介绍该媒体的栏目特点和媒体的受众范围。在约稿时要指定稿件的内容(约稿发起人既可以规定要写作的内容，也可让被约稿人根据媒体和栏目的性质自己拟定写作题目和内容)，并且要约定稿件大致的篇幅和交稿日期。 【亮点词汇】 invite/ask sb. to do sth.邀请某人做某事 write an article for... 为......写一篇文章 the school's English newspaper校英语报 with the purpose of doing sth./ be aimed at doing sth./ with the aim to do sth. 目的是为了 make/help sb know sth about使某人了解 set up comumns/sections to publish设定栏目来刊登...... be popular with/among sb受到......欢迎 carry articles written by foreign students about.../ There are articles written by foreign students about... in it. 登载着外国学生写关于......的文章 on hearing the news一听到这个消息 can't wait to tell you about sth. 迫不及待告诉你 welcome articles about.../ welcome you to contribute to..热烈欢迎关于...的稿件 requirements about the article稿件要求 How American spend their holidays and festivals美国人如何度过节假日 the everyday life of American high school students美国高中生日常生活 anything relevant/concerned任何相关的内容 as/so long as/ on condition that只要 interesting and informative寓教于乐 broaden one's horizons开拓视野 be expected/required to do要求要... hand in one's articles交稿 be due on.../the deadline is.../ no later than... 截止到 月 日 an article within 400 words不超过400 字的文章 【夺人眼球篇首句】 1. I'd like to aske you to write an article for our school's English newspaper. 我想请你为我们校英文报写一篇文章。 2.)I'm writing to invite you to write an article for… 我写信是想请您为……写一篇文章。 【亮点出彩篇中句】 1. The “Foreign Cultures” section where you are expected to contribute articles in our newspaper is very popular among/with us students. 你将投稿的外国文化部分在我们学生中非常受欢迎。 2. It carries articles written by foreign students concerning/regarding the cultures of their home cultures.这个部分通常刊载外国学生写的关于他们国家文化的文章。 3. Would you please write something about/concerning the culture in your part of the United States/back America? 请问您愿意写点关于你们美国的文章吗？ 4. We would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals, and the everyday life of American senior high students. 我们尤其欢迎关于美国人如何度过节假日和高中生日常生活的文章。 5. You can write anything relevant so long as it's interesting and informative. 你可以写任何相关文章只要你认为其寓教于乐。 6. 400 words would be fine. / The article is supposed to be within 400 words.400 个字就行了。 【韵味无穷结尾句】 1. Could we have your article before June 28? / We wonder if it is practicable to have it before June 28? 请问您能够在7月28日之前截稿吗？ 2. Looking forward to your reply/confirmation soon. 期待尽快收到您的回复/确认。 3. Would you please write something about Boston? 您能否写一些关于波士顿的内容? 【举一反三】根据汉语提示完成句子。 1.You can write anything relevant _____________________________. 您可以写任何与之相关的文章，只要文章内容既有趣且有信息量。 2._________________________. 300词就够了。 3.It would be better _____________________________.如果我们能在6月1日之前收到您的文章会更好。 4.______________________________. 我期待收到您的回信。 答案：1.so long as it's interesting and informative 2.300 words would be fine 3.if we could have your article before June 1 4.I'm looking forward to hearing from you 【典例精析】 假定你是校英文报“你眼中的中国(China in Your Eyes)”栏目的编辑李华，该栏目拟刊登短文介绍外国学生在中国的留学体验。请给你校加拿大籍留学生Jerkins写信约稿，内容包括： 1. 栏目介绍； 2. 稿件内容和要求。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 第一步：审题谋篇 1.体裁：约稿信 2.时态：一般现在时 3.人称：第一、二人称 第二步：列提纲，要点全而不漏 1. 栏目，专栏 n. column 2. 培养，促进 v. foster 3. 方面，层面 n. aspect 4. 学术生涯，学术生活academic life 5. 大约 adv. approximately 第三步：由词汇组成句，表达亮而不俗 1. 本专栏旨在提供在中国学习的外国学生的体验和见解，培养我们学校社团的文化交流和欣赏。(insight, cultural exchange) This column aims to provide experiences and insights of foreign students studying in China, fostering a sense of cultural exchange and appreciation within our school community./With the intention of providing experiences and insights of foreign students studying in China, this column fosters a sense of cultural exchange and appreciation within our school community. 2. 请将这篇文章的长度控制在500字左右，你可以附上一些照片来增进读者的理解。(request, enhance) The article is kindly requested to be approximately 500 words in length and you may include some photos to enhance the readers' understanding./ It is kindly requested that the article should be approximately 500 words in length and you may include some photos to enhance the readers' understanding. 第四步：妙衔接，巧串联，佳作顺而不乱 用适当的衔接词串句成文。 【佳作展现】 Dear Jerkins, How is everything going? I'm Li Hua, an editor of our school's English newspaper. I'm writing to invite you to contribute to our column “China in Your Eyes”. This column aims to provide experiences and insights of foreign students studying in China, fostering a sense of cultural exchange and appreciation within our school community. Accordingly, for the article, we would like you to discuss various aspects such as academic life, Chinese cuisine or festival celebrations, or any unique encounters you have had here. The article is kindly requested to be approximately 500 words in length and you may include some photos to enhance the readers' understanding. Please let us know if you're interested. We eagerly anticipate receiving your article by February 24th. Yours, Li Hua 【举一反三】 1.假定你是李华，你校英文报“英语之声”栏目拟刊登外国笔友介绍怎样学好英语的文章。请你给英国朋友Jack写一封约稿信向他约稿。要点如下： 1)怎样练习听说读写。 2)怎样记单词。 3)稿件长度：约300词。 4)交稿日期：4月20日前。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【佳作展现】 Dear Jack, I would like to ask you to write an article for our school’s English newspaper. The “Voice of English” section in our newspaper is very popular among us students. It carries articles written by foreign friends about “How to learn English well”. Would you please write something about the learning methods of listening, speaking, reading and writing? And we would especially welcome articles about the best way to remember new words. Would you keep a vocabulary notebook? By the way, your article may have a title made up by yourself. About 300 words would be fine. Could I have your article before April 20th? I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Li Hua 2.假定你是李华，你校英文报“英语角”栏目拟刊登外国笔友介绍自己家乡近十年的变化的文章。请你给英国朋友Mike写一封约稿信向他约稿。要点如下： 1)衣食住行的变化。 2)环境变化。 3)稿件长度：约300词。 4)交稿日期：5月15日前。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【佳作展现】 Dear Mike, I would like to ask you to write an article for our school’s English newspaper. The “English Corner” section in our newspaper is very popular among us students. It carries articles written by foreign friends about their hometowns. Would you please write something about the changes of food, clothing, housing and transportation in recent 10 years? And we would especially welcome articles about the changes of the environment, especially the mountains and the rivers. By the way, your article may have a title made up by yourself. 300 words would be fine. Could I have your article before May 15th? I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours, Li Hua 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 倡议信 倡议书可以是针对某项公益事业向公众发出的倡导，倡议大家一起做某事，或提出合理化意见、建议，也可以是针对某个人或某个特定群体向公众发出的求助。倡议书的主要内容：介绍情况，发出倡议；倡议的理由或意义；倡议的具体内容 【亮点词汇】 1.常用词汇 littering 乱扔垃圾 spitting 随地吐痰 behavior 行为；表现 patient 病人 survive 活下来；生存 2.常用短语 environmentally friendly/ environment-friendly 环境友好的 contribute to/ lead to/ result in/ give rise to 导致 have a positive/ negative effect on 对……有积极/消极的影响 make all efforts to do sth./ spare no efforts to do sth. 全力以赴做某事 adopt/ take measures to do sth. 采取措施做某事 enhance the awareness of 提高……的意识 appeal to sb to do sth 呼吁某人做某事 be responsible for对……负责；是……的原因 protect ... from ... 保护……免受伤害 do harm to 对……有害 protect our environment 保护我们的环境 the environmental pollution 环境污染 be of great benefit to... 对……大有好处 get well-prepared (for)(为……)做好充分的准备 take responsibility to do sth. 有责任做某事 the coming speech contest 即将到来的演讲比赛 leave/make a deep impression on 给……留下深刻的印象 take my suggestion into consideration 考虑我的建议 have the chance to do sth. 有机会做某事 help students improve their English 帮助学生提高英语水平 【夺人眼球篇首句】 1. Volunteering has a positive effect on our community.It can benefit us in several ways. 2.First of all，volunteering can help us learn more about society and gain valuable experience. 3.Secondly，volunteering provides us with a good opportunity to put what we have learned to good use. 【亮点出彩篇中句】 1. Therefore, let’s take the responsibility to build up a low carbon city by riding bicycles. 因此，让我们负起责任来通过骑自行车建设一个低碳城市。 2. Some people hold the wrong idea that ... 有人持有错误的观点：…… 3. We students of Senior Three are called on to give away our used books. 我们高三学生被号召来捐赠旧书。 4. I am strongly for the activity because it is very meaningful and helpful. 我强烈赞同这个活动，因为它很有意义，很有帮助。 【韵味无穷结尾句】 1. I hope my behavior will make a difference. 我希望我的行为可以起到作用。 2. As high school students, it’s our duty to tell everyone around us to save water. 作为高中生，告诉身边的每一个人节约用水是我们的责任。 3. Let’s start right now and spare no effort to do a little every day, every hour and every minute. 让我们从现在开始每天努力一点点，抓紧每一天、每一小时、每一分钟。 4. Remember，we can make a difference to society if we are willing to lend a helping hand，so let's take action. 【举一反三】根据提示完成句子 1. As far as I’m concerned, ______________________________________. 依我看来，保护环境是我们每个人的责任。 2. It is time that we human beings ____________________________________. 该是我们人类采取恰当的措施来维护自然界平衡的时候了。 3.________________________________________________________. 在我们的城市，随着汽车数量的快速增长，我们的环境正日益恶化。 4.There is no doubt that the earth __________________________________ and that it is human activity that _______________________________. 毫无疑问，地球正变得更加暖和，而这正是人类活动所致。 5.After the discussion, students can draw a conclusion that______________________________________________________________________.讨论结束后，学生们得出一个结论：只有保护好环境并且与自然和谐共处，自然灾害才能减少。 【参考答案】1. it’s everyone’s duty to protect the environment 2. took/should take proper measures to keep the balance of nature 3.With the number of cars increasing fast in our city, our environment is getting increasingly worse 4. is becoming warmer; has caused this global warming 7. the natural disasters can be reduced only by protecting the environment and living in harmony with nature 【典例精析】 假定你是李华，你校即将举行主题为“Let’s go green now”的英语演讲比赛。请你用英语写一篇演讲稿，要点包括： 1．倡导绿色生活的原因： 2．实践途径(至少三点)。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Boys and girls， I’m honored to give this speech. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all.Thank you. 【四步讲解】 第一步：审题谋篇 1.体裁：倡议信 2.时态：一般现在时为主 3.人称：第一人称和第三人称 第二步：列提纲，要点全而不漏 1.倡导绿色生活的原因 ①私家车数量的增加 the number of private cars increases ②释放大量有毒气体　give off poisonous gas ③导致全球变暖　cause global warming 2.实践途径 ①提高人们绿色出行意识raise people’s awareness of the importance of going green ②使用公共交通或骑自行车use public transportation or ride bicycles ③垃圾分类、循环利用classify rubbish and recycle it 第三步：由词汇、组成句，表达亮而不俗 1.随着社会和经济的发展，私家车的数量以惊人的速度发展。 With the development of society and economy，the number of private cars is increasing at a surprising speed. 2.众所周知，小汽车释放出有毒气体例如二氧化碳，造成全球变暖，频发的自然灾害、疾病等。 As we all know，cars give off poisonous gas such as carbon dioxide，causing global warming，frequent natural disasters diseases and so on. 3.为了保护我们的环境该到我们绿色出行的时间了。 In order to protect our environment，it is high time that we should go green. 4.首先，我们应该让人们知道绿色出行的重要性。 Firstly，we should raise people’s awareness of the importance of going green. 5.其次，使用公共交通或骑自行车而不开私家车对这个问题有重大意义。 Secondly，using public transportation or riding bicycles instead of using cars can make a great difference to the problem. 6.我们应该充分利用水、电、纸张、食物等。 We should take full advantage of water，electricity，paper，food and so on. 7.在日常生活中垃圾分类，循环利用是个好主意。 It is a good idea to classify our rubbish and recycle it in our daily life. 第四步：衔接词、巧串联，佳作顺而不乱 用适当的衔接词串句成文 【佳作展现】 Boys and girls I’m honoured to give the speech.With the development of society and economy，the number of private cars is increasing at a surprising speed.As we all know，cars give off poisonous gas such as carbon dioxide，causing global warming，frequent natural disasters，diseases and so on.In order to protect our environment，it is high time that we should go green. Firstly，we should raise people’s awareness of the importance of going green.Secondly，using public transportation or riding bicycles instead of using cars can make a great difference to the problem.What’s more，we should take full advantage of water，electricity，paper，food and so on.Last but not least，it is a good idea to classify our rubbish and recycle it in our daily life. That’s all.Thank you. 【举一反三】 1.假设你是星光中学的李华，将参加主题为“Let’s Ride Bicycles”的英语演讲比赛。请撰写一份演讲稿，主要内容包括： 1．目前汽车带来的空气污染和交通堵塞等问题； 2．骑自行车的益处，如节能环保、有利健康等。 参考词汇：低碳生活 low-carbon life；节能 energy saving 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【佳作展现】 Good morning, everyone, I am Li Hua form Xingguang Middle School. The topic of my speech is “Let’s Ride Bicycles”. As is known to all, with the improvement of people’s living standards, cars have become a popular means of transport, bringing great convenience to our life. However, they have also caused some problems such as air pollution and traffic jams. How can we solve the problems then? As far as I’m concerned, riding bicycles is a good solution. For one thing, bicycles don’t need any petrol and they are energy-saving. Therefore, they are environmentally friendly because they won’t give off waste gas. For another, riding bicycles is a good way for us to exercise, which is beneficial to our health. Therefore, let’s take the responsibility to build up a low carbon city by riding bicycles. Come on and join us! Thank you! 2. 假如你是育才中学学生会主席李华，针对目前一些地方血库纷纷告急的情况，请参照以下提示，用英文写一份倡议书，提倡无偿献血 (donate blood for free) 要点提示： 1.社会上对献血的错误认识； 2.指出献血的意义； 3.开展相关活动。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【佳作展现】 Boys and girls, Recently some blood banks across the country are reported to be in short supply of blood. Some people hold the wrong idea that donating blood does harm to the donor's health. But the truth is that when a small amount of blood is taken out, the body will make a quick adjustment to work normally. As we know, donating blood is of great importance. Blood is important to patients, without which many can't survive. Among young people like us, donating blood is a social responsibility. We senior high school students, who have a better understanding of medical knowledge, should set a good example for other people. From now on, our school will hold a series of activities to explain the benefits of donating blood. Donate now and save a life! The Students' Union 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 投诉信 投诉/抱怨信的话题一般都与我们的日常生活息息相关，学生碰到此类信体不必过于紧张。在当今商品经济时代，商品买卖活动非常普遍。在日常生活中，人们常会遇到对所购商品质量或售后服务不满意的情况，这时可以写投诉信(A Letter of Complaint )求得解决。投诉信与普通书信的格式基本相同。但要注意的是，写投诉信的目的是为了求得一个解决问题的办法而不是为了泄愤，因此写信时一定要注意态度诚恳、直截了当。具体内容为：第一段点明题旨。除常规的问候之外，不妨直接用与“I am writing to tell you ...”类似的句子开头，直截了当，言简意赅。 第二段详细介绍题中所提示的具体内容。为了提高文章的连贯性和条理性，同学们应注意运用一些表示逻辑顺序的词汇，如first, second, what's more, finally等将内容巧妙地连贯起来，从而形成有机的整体。 最后一段应该客气地询问对方的意见，同时表达真诚的祝福和热情的问候，体现中学生文明礼貌素养。 【亮点词汇】 1.常用形容词 _____________愧疚的 _____________恼火的 2.常用名词 _____________失望 _____________不满 _____________解释 _____________考虑 3.常用动词短语 _____________投诉 _____________调查 _____________不满 _____________抱怨 _____________表达不满 _____________忍受 _____________对…满意 _____________糟糕的服务 _____________采取措施 _____________解决问题 _____________预防…发生 _____________调查此次事件发生 _____________以粗鲁的方式 _____________表达不满 _____________带来不便 _____________更糟糕的是 _____________态度恶劣 _____________忍受 _____________ 调查此次事件 _____________采取措施 _____________ 解决问题 _____________ 一个满意的解决方法 _____________ 要求退款 【夺人眼球篇首句】 1. I would like to draw your attention to…我希望可以引起你对…一事的注意。 2. It has come to my attention that…这个事情…已经引起我的注意。 3.I am writing to request a full refund of the course fee I have paid.我写信要求得到我所支付课程费用的全额退款。 4. I thought I should draw your attention to the situation since…我希望你能关注此事，因为… 5. A very serious problem has arisen in connection with…关于…的一个非常严重的问题已经出现。 【亮点出彩篇中句】 1.On (date), I bought/rented/had repaired a (name of the product, with serial or model number or service performed) at (location on other important details of the transaction).在某一天，我买/租/修理了…（产品名称包括型号/服务）在…（某地/重要的交易细节） 2. There are some problems with the … that I wish to bring to your attention. First, there is… In addition…关于…出现了一些问题，我希望能引起您的注意。首先…其次…。 3. Unfortunately, your product/service has not performed well (or the service was inadequate) because (state the problem). I am disappointed because (explain the problem: for example, the product does not work properly, the service was not performed correctly, I was billed the wrong amount, something was not disclosed clearly,etc).很遗憾您的产品/服务出现问题（或者服务不够）因为（陈述问题）。我非常失望因为（解释原因：例如，产品运行不够好，服务不好，我被收错了钱，或者有些事情没有说清楚，等等）。 4.It really annoyed me when I found that the computer I bought from your store could not be operated.当我发现从你们商店购买的电脑不能正常操作时我十分生气。 5. The noise coming from your building really disturbed me, leaving me unable to concentrate on---来自你们楼的噪声非常打扰我，让我无法专心… 6. I must warn you that unless you do something about the situation, I will be forced to take legal action. 我必须正告贵方，除非对目前状况采取措施，否则我将被迫诉诸法律。 【韵味无穷结尾句】 1.I believe this is the only way to get this matter settled.我相信这是唯一解决这个问题的方式。 2. It is so bad this unfortunate accident occurred. Otherwise, I was very pleased with your service这种不幸的发生实在是太令人遗憾。你们的服务本来还是很令我满意的。 3.I would be grateful if you would ensure that the same thing does not happen again.我会很感激，如果你保证这样的事情不会再发生。 4.If you could find time to let us know, it would set our minds at rest.如果你能找到时间来让我们知道，我们将感到非常欣慰。 5.A time for further discussion on this issue can be arranged wither by telephoning me at 123456789 or writing to me via the address…可以通过给我电话（123456789）或者写信给我（地址）来安排进一步商讨这个问题的时间。 【举一反三】根据提示完成句子。 1.我可以肯定这种情况正在造成我们极大的不安。 _____________________________________. 2.噪音影响我的睡眠，使得我在上班时间无法集中精力。结果这些天我已经搞错了好几次 _____________________________________. 3.在这样(嘈杂)环境下我无法进行研究，我需要一间安静的房间。 _____________________________________. 4.因为没有地方放书包，我们只能随身携带，这让我们十分疲惫。 _____________________________________. 5. 我刚刚到家就发现从你们商店购买的产品有质量问题。 _____________________________________. 6.我知道你平时并非粗心之人，但是我们需要得到你的承诺，保证此类事件不会再次发生。 _____________________________________. 7.坦白来讲，我不准备再忍受这样的境况了。 _____________________________________. 8.我相信这个问题可以很快地被解决，我也期盼着您尽早答复。 _____________________________________. 9.请尽快让我知道你对于此事的提议。 _____________________________________. 10. 我们深知你们并不经常出错，但我们希望能确保这类差错不再发生。 _____________________________________. 【典例精析】 假定你是李华，你看过广告买了某家公司的一种面霜(the cream)。广告说这种面霜含有一系列特殊物质，安全、有效，可以消除脸上的斑点(spot)。但当你首次涂在脸上过后的第二天早上，就感到痒(tickle)，像虫子在爬(craw)。而且用得越多，症状越严重。这严重影响了你的工作和生活。请写一封投诉信说明情况，并要求该公司退货、支付医疗费用并严肃调查这件事情。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 第一步：审题谋篇 1.体裁：_____________ 2.时态：_____________ 3.人称：_____________ 第二步：列提纲，要点全而不漏 1.写信目的 抱怨_____________ 2.事件简述 一系列的_____________ 去除_____________ 好像_____________ 意识到_____________ 副作用_____________ 3.希望 调查_____________ 打算做某事_____________ 第三步：由词汇组成句，表达亮而不俗 1.在广告中，你们声称：面霜含有一系列的特殊物质，安全、有效，可以消除脸上的斑点。 In your advertisement, you claim ______________________________________ and is safe and effective, ______________________________________. 2.我第一次将其抹在脸上时，是认真按照说明操作的。 ______________________________________, I followed the instructions carefully. 3.我感到痒，像虫子在爬。 I felt my face tickling ______________________________________. 4.这种面霜严重影响了我的生活和工作。 ______________________________________. 第四步：妙衔接，巧串联，佳作顺而不乱 用适当的衔接词串句成文。 【佳作展现】 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【举一反三】 1.假设你是李强，请你就本校图书馆的状况给校长写一封信，内容应涉及图书馆的藏书数量和更新状况、环境、服务等，可以是表扬，可以是批评建议，也可以兼而有之。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2. 假定你是李华，你在上周日搭坐102号公交车，该公交车司机的不文明行为让乘客很愤怒。于是你向公交车公司写一封投诉信。要点如下： 1. 司机的不文明行为(大声讲话、紧急刹车、态度粗鲁等)。 2. 希望尽快查清此事。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3. 假如你是李华，昨天在商场购买了一台电风扇，回家后发现它不能运转。你回到店里与营业员交涉时，该营业员对你的态度恶劣，对你提出的问题不予受理。请你为此向经理写一封投诉信 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 写人记叙文 写人类记叙文属于记叙文写作范畴，写人主要包括外貌、性格、生平、职业、重要活动事件和贡献影响。写作时要围绕人物组织材料，要主题鲜明，突出重点，内容清楚和结构完整。 【亮点词汇】 1.年龄 five-year-old boy一个五岁的男孩 a boy aged five 一个五岁的男孩 in my tens /twenties在我十/二十多岁时 at the age of five在五岁时 As a child, I liked to... 我小的时候喜欢…… 2. 出生信息 was born in ... 出生在…… be/come from a wealthy family出生于富裕人家 was born into a peasant family出生于一个农民家庭 出生地 place of birth/birthplace 地址address 国籍 nationality 省province 州 State 街区block 社区community/neighborhood 3. 衣着和外表 a 1.80-meter-tall boy 一个高1.8米的男孩 overweight胖的 thin瘦的 slim苗条的 strong强壮的 look young for one’s age 显得比实际年龄年轻 good-looking 长得好看 plain-looking 长得一般 well dressed 穿得漂亮 neatly dressed 衣着干净整洁 4. 能力 efficient办事高效率的 intelligent聪明的 creative 富创造力的 a boy with great ability 能干的男孩 a qualified teacher 一名合格的教师 speak fluent English 讲流利的英语 have a gift/talent/genius for sth. 在某方面有天赋 be experienced in 在……方面有经验 have musical talent有音乐天赋 be crazy about喜欢 5.健康 be in good health/shape/condition 身体健康 energetic精力充沛的 well-built身材健美的 suffer from... 患上…… 6.个人职业 建筑师 architect 运动员 athlete 家庭教师 tutor 将军 general 部长minister 演奏者 performer 搬运工 porter 侦探 detective 导演 director 小说家 novelist 宇航员 astronaut 口译者 interpreter 律师 lawyer 设计师designer 编辑 editor 牙医 dentist 厨师cook 7.人物性格 有冒险精神的adventurous 有热情的，狂热的enthusiastic 富有创造力的creative 慷慨的generous, open-minded 喜怒无常的；情绪化的moody 友善的friendly/kind 天真的innocent 孩子气的，幼稚的childish 敏感的sensitive 浪漫的romantic 考虑周到的，贴心的considerate, caring 幽默的humorous 自信的confident 独立的independent 自私的selfish 无私的selfless/unselflish 乐于助人的helpful 热情的，热心的enthusiastic 8.主要成就和贡献 receive a doctor’s degree取得博士学位 win the Nobel Prize获得诺贝尔奖; contribute (oneself) to (doing) sth. 致力于做 sth. devote oneself /one’s energy/one’s life to (doing)sth.将自己的全部精力/一生投入到做sth.中 develop trade and friendship between China and other countries 发展商贸并促进中国和他国友谊 have a great effect /influence/impact on sb./sth. 对sb./sth.有较大的影响 9.评价 With him teaching us, I’ll make great progress. 有了他教我们，我会取得进步的。 He is not only friendly and helpful , but also very inspiring. 他不仅很友善、乐于助人，而且让人倍受鼓舞.或感受 【夺人眼球篇首句】 ①...was one of the greatest...in the 20th century.在20世纪……是最伟大的……之一。 ②He/She studied at...and graduated...他/她在……学习和毕业…… ③...is the one who impresses me most.……是使我印象最深刻的人。 【亮点出彩篇中句】 ①...is such a learned/strong-willed person that we all admire/respect him/her.……是一个如此有学问/意志坚强的人,我们都钦佩/尊敬他/她。 ②He/She devoted all his/her life to...他/她把他/她的一生都献给了…… 【韵味无穷结尾句】 ①He/She was highly thought of...他/她被高度评价…… ②In my opinion,he/she... 在我看来,他/她…… ③He/She will live in the hearts of...forever.他/她将生活在……的心中,直到永远。 【举一反三】根据汉语提示完成句子。 1.She is a charming lady of medium height with long and blonde hair. 她是一位有魅力的女士，中等身材，留着常常的金发。 2.Being optimistic and energetic, he often takes an active part in after-class activities. 他很乐观而且精力充沛，经常积极参加课余活动。 3. Whenever people around get into trouble, she is willing to help them,which makes her respected by all our neighbours. 每当周围的人遇到麻烦，她乐意帮助他们，这使她受到所有邻居的尊。 4. Not only did Einstein devote all his life to scientific research but also he cared for human being’s peace and development. 爱因斯坦不仅致力于科学研究，而且非常关心人类的和平和发展。 5. He set so good an example for us students that we all should learn from him.他为我们学生树立了好榜样，我们都应该向他学习。 6. Her spirit inspires me and millions of other girls to live an independent life and be responsible for our own decisions.她的精神激励着我和数百万女孩过独立的生活，并为我们自己的决定负责。 【典例精析】 假定你是高一学生李华。你的英国朋友吉姆在给你的邮件中提到他对中国儒家文化很感兴趣,并请你介绍历史人物孔子(Confucius)。请你给吉姆回一封邮件,介绍孔子,内容包括: 1.基本情况; 2.主要主张:仁、义; 3.重要影响。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 第一步：审题谋篇 1.体裁：写人 2.时态：一般现在时 3.人称：第三人称为主 第二步：列提纲，由词汇组成句，表达亮而不俗 1.在中国古代历史上,孔子是我最喜欢的人物。(figure) _______________________________________________________ 2.他是中国的思想家和社会哲学家。(Chinese thinker) ___________________________________________ 3.(一句多译)他的学说和哲学深深地影响了许多亚洲国家。 (1) ________________________________________________(influence v.)  (2) ___________________________________________________(influence n.)  4.(一句多译)他强调善良、责任和社会秩序的重要性。(kindness, duty and order) (1) __________________________________________________________(stress)  (2) _______________________________________________(attach importance to sth.)  5.(一句多译)我们中国人深受他的学说的影响。(teachings) (1) ______________________________________ (2) _____________________________________________(被动)  6.他激励我永远保持善良和礼貌。(inspire) _______________________________________ 7.那就是我想要被对待的方式。(treat) __________________________________________________ 答案：1.Confucius is my favourite figure in the ancient Chinese history.  2.He was a Chinese thinker and social philosopher. 3.His teachings and philosophy have deeply influenced many Asian countries./His teachings and philosophy have had a deep influence on many Asian countries. 4.He stressed the importance of kindness, duty and order in society./He attached importance to kindness, duty and order in society. 5.His teachings greatly influence us Chinese. / We Chinese are greatly influenced by his teachings. 6.He inspires me to always be kind and polite. 7.That’s the way(that/in which) I would like to be treated. 第三步：妙衔接，巧串联，佳作顺而不乱 用适当的衔接词串句成文。 【佳作展现】 Dear Jim, It’s great to hear from you.I feel proud of knowing your interest in confucian culture in the ancient Chinese history. As for Confucius,he is my favourite figure in the ancient Chinese history.He was a Chinese thinker and social philosopher.His teachings and philosophy have deeply influenced many Asian countries.He stressed the importance of kindness, duty and order in society.We Chinese are greatly influenced by his teachings.He inspires me to always be kind and polite. That’s the way I would like to be treated. Interested in knowing more? I can even find you some books! Just let me know. Yours, Li Hua 【举一反三】 1.假定你是李华，从互联网上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡(Singapore)举办夏令营，欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。内容主要包括: 1.自我介绍(包括英语能力);2.参加意图(介绍中国、了解其他国家);3.希望获准。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【佳作展现】 Dear Sir or Madam, I'm Li Hua, a middle school student from China. I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am strongly interested in it. I know that you are inviting students worldwide to participate in your activities and I am willing to join you. Having been exposed to English for 10 years, I have a good command of both spoken and written English. What is more, with great honor, I’d like to tell students from other countries about the booming China and learn about their countries as well. I hope I will be accepted as a member of your summer camp. Looking forward to your reply! Li hua 2.假如你是李夏。你看到美国留学生Sharon 在网上发帖，希望有人能帮助她提高普通话(Mandarin)水平，她可以教英语作为回报。请根据以下提示用英语给她写一封电子邮件。 1. 表达给她提供帮助的意愿； 2. 说明你能胜任辅导的理由； 3. 给出讲好普通话的两点建议； 4. 提出你学习英语的具体需求。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【佳作展现】 Hi Sharon, This is Li Xia. I learned from your post that you want to improve your Mandarin. I am quite interested in it. I think I’m fit for it. As a student, I have been learning Mandarin for many years. In addition, I am Chinese, which means Mandarin is a must for me to communicate with others in my daily life. So I’m quite confident that I can help you learn Mandarin. Learning Mandarin takes time, so if you want to learn it well, you should spend much time practicing Mandarin everyday. As the saying goes, practice makes perfect. Besides, you can also read some books in Chinese、see some Chinese films and listen to some Chinese radio programmes. Speaking and listening are very important for a language learning, by which you are sure to make great progress. In your post, you say you can teach English as a reward. It is just what I want. I’m eager to improve my English. So, if you allow me to help you learn Mandarin, you can also help me improve my English. We can contact each other by video chat every night for half an hour in English and half an hour in Chinese, so that we can improve our oral speaking. Hope for you early reply! Yours Sincerely Li Xia 3.你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题, 写一篇短文参赛, 内容包括： 1. 人物简介； 2. 尊敬和爱戴的原因。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【佳作展现】 There are many respectable people around us. Among them, our English teacher is regarded as my favourite one. To begin with, my English teacher is a typical charming lady with slim figure, fair skin as well as infectious beautiful smile. But most importantly, far behind her outstanding appearance, it is her fabulous teaching ability and empathetic feature that make her respectable. She has a talent for teaching, always making her class lively. Following her steps, we can learn English with great pleasure while receiving good grades. Meanwhile, she is the one that you can rely on, can turn to and can share everything with. She is not only a respectable teacher who does huge benefit to you, but also a lifetime friend you ought to cherish. That is my English teacher, my most respectable person. She is the star glowing with high school experience. She is the fragrant rose that beautifies my life. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $