Unit 1 School life 专题11 书面表达 2025-2026学年沪教版(五四学制)(2024)六年级英语上册

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2025-2026学年六年级英语上册单元复习考点培优沪教版 (五四学制)(2024)Unit 1 School life 专题11 书面表达 学校:___________姓名:___________班级:___________考号:___________ 1.假如你是王萌,你的笔友Lisa得知你升入初中后,非常想了解一下你的初中生活,请你根据下面表格的信息提示,给她写一封回信。介绍一下你的初中学校生活以及你的感受。 写作要求: 1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。 2. 可适当加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯。 3. 字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。 4. 至少60词。 Dear Lisa, How are you? __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Wang Meng 2.假如你是李华,你的好友Jack想要了解你新六年级的初中生活。请你给Jack写一封信,介绍一下你们丰富多彩的六年级初中生活。写作内容可以参考以下问题提示。 提示: 1. What’s your school like? How do you feel about your school life? 2. What’s your favorite subject and why? 3. What school clubs are you in? What can you learn from it/them? 注意: 1. 70词左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 2. 写作内容包含以上要点,可适当增加细节内容,以使行文连贯。 3. 抄袭试卷内容不得分,不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 Dear Jack, I’m happy to introduce my school. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 3.假定你是李华,国外友好学校计划派部分学生下周一来你校参观,你的笔友Flora是其中一员。请你根据下面表格内容,用英语给她写一封电子邮件,欢迎她来访,并介绍你班每周一的课程及活动安排。 时间 课程及活动安排 7:20 升旗仪式 8:00—9:30 语文、数学 体育活动 10:30—12:00 音乐、历史 午餐和休息 14:00—15:30 英语、体育 15:30—17:00 科学社团活动 注意:1.词数100左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 Dear Flora, I’m happy to hear that you will come to our school next Monday. I’m writing to tell you the Monday activities of my class. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 4.假如你是Li Hua,你校英语口语社团 (English Speaking Club) 正在招募新成员,你想加入该社团,请根据下面提示内容,用英语给Mr. Green写一篇申请邮件。 主要内容: (1)至少列举三条英语方面的爱好或能力; (2)至少列举二条你想加入社团的理由; (3)表达想加入社团的期待。 写作要求: (1)词数不少于60词; (2)须包含以上所给信息,可适当发挥; (3)作文中不能出现个人真实姓名和校名。 Dear Mr. Green, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes, Li Hua 5.假设你是李华,下面是你的美国笔友汤姆发来的电子邮件,请你仔细阅读邮件并回复他。词数60左右 (开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。 Dear Li Hua, How are you doing? I want to know about your school days. Here are some questions. How many subjects do you have at school? What are they? How many classes do you have every day? What is your favourite subject and why? Could you please tell me about them? Write to me. Tom Dear Tom, I’m happy to get your email. Let me tell you about my school days. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 6.假如你是李华,本周英语日的话题内容是“我最喜爱的科目”,请根据以下表格内容,用英语介绍你们组的情况,内容包括: 姓名 最喜欢的科目 喜欢的原因 Linda, Lucy and I 音乐 有趣、学唱新歌…… Mary, Tom and David 数学 有用、可以学习如何解决数学问题…… 要求: 1. 请完整表述以上表格信息。 2. 50词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。 3. 不得出现真实校名、班名及姓名。 4. 有卷面分。 Good morning boys and girls, there are six students in our group. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7.假如你是李华,你的英国笔友Peter给你发来电子邮件询问你们学校的情况。请你根据以下提示内容,给他回复一封邮件,并发表一下你在学校学习生活的感受。 提示信息: 学校 Xiang yang Middle School 建筑布局 1. 运动场在办公楼旁边 2. 教学楼在运动场后面 3. 餐厅在运动场对面 科目 语文数学英语、历史、地理、生物、信息技术、体育、音乐 社团 艺术俱乐部、科学俱乐部、戏剧俱乐部、音乐俱乐部、象棋俱乐部、乒乓球俱乐部 要求: 1.不少于60词; 2.包含所给信息,可适当发挥; 3.邮件的开头和落款已给出,不计入总词数。 Dear Peter, How’s it going? In your last e-mail, you told me a lot about your school. Now let me tell you something about my school. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 8.假如你是李华。你的加拿大笔友David想了解你的生活喜好、学校生活等,请你根据下图,给他回一封信。 要求: 1.书信应从至少五个方面进行介绍,并简单说明理由,可适当发挥。 2.不少于 80个词;书信的开头和结尾已给出、不计入总词数。 Dear David, I’m happy to get your letter. Let me tell you something about my favorites. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ What about you? Please write to me soon. Yours, Li Hua 9.亲爱的同学们,初中生活开启了我们人生的新旅程。假如你是李华,请结合下表提示,以“My Wonderful School Life”为题,写一篇英语短文,介绍你的学校生活。 美丽校园 我的学校既漂亮又现代;有3 栋教学楼,40 间教室。教室里…… 体育场…… 友善师生 我有很多乐于助人的同学和友善的老师;对我很好,互帮互助。 学科 我最喜欢的学科是生物,因为……; 我们学习许多动植物,了解大自然。 活动 我们学校有各种各样的社团,我加入了……社团, 因为……;活动使我非常快乐…… 要求:表达准确,行文连贯。不出现真实的个人信息。不少于70词(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。 My Wonderful School Life I am Li Hua, a new student at Sunshine Middle School. I live a happy life here. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10.根据表格信息,用6至8句话帮助Elsa完成一篇有关学校生活的小作文。 Name City School hours Subjects Teachers & friends Activities Elsa Shanghai 8:00 a.m.—4:00 p.m. Maths, English, Chinese, History, Arts and Crafts, etc. Kind, helpful, warm-hearted Music club, English Festival, sports meeting My School life I’m Elsa from Shanghai. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 11.Write a passage of at least 50 words about the topic “My ideal school life”(以“我理想的校园生活”为题写一篇不少于50个词的短文,标点符号不占格) 每位同学心中都曾构想过自己理想的学校生活。我们可能会期待学校有一些合理的变化。你心目中理想的学校生活是怎样的?请围绕至少两个方面描述你想看到的变化,并给出恰当的理由。 (注意:作文中不得出现考生的真实姓名及其他相关信息,否则不予评分) My ideal school life _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 12.假如你是李明,你今年刚刚从小学升入中学,你的英国朋友Alex对你的初中学校生活非常感兴趣,请根据以下问题给Alex写一封电子邮件。 What’s in your classroom? What do you usually do at school? Who’s your favorite classmate(s) or teacher(s)? Why? 写作要求: 短文应回答以上问题,可适当发挥; 词数:60词左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数; 文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称。 Dear Alex, I’m happy to tell you something about my school life. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes to you! Yours, Li Ming 13.新学期开始了,每个人都很高兴。大家见面后相互做着自我介绍,并谈论自己最喜爱的学习课程。假如你是林涛,请用SELF-INTRODUCTION为题做一下自我介绍吧! 要求:1.至少使用五句话表达相关内容2.不能出现真实姓名、班级和学校。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 14.假设你是阳光中学(Sunshine Middle School)七年级一班的学生李华,下周学校将欢迎来自英国的留学生并举行联谊活动,请根据下面的表格写一篇短文,向你的联谊伙伴介绍你及你的学校生活。 Something about me (school, class, grade, subjects) Something about my school (buildings, teachers, classmates, activities) My feeling (...) 注意: 1.短文须包括以上所有要点,可适当发挥; 2.90词左右,短文的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 Welcome to our school. My name is Li Hua. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 15.Write a passage of at least 50 words on the topic “My school life”.(请以“我的校园生活”为主题,写一篇不少于50字的文章,标点符号不占格):( 10分+ 1分书写分) Suggested questions: 1) How is your school life? 2) Do you like your school life? Why or why not? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 16.假如你是李平,最近收到朋友Paul的电子邮件。请你仔细阅读后回复。词数60左右。 要求: 1. 邮件必须回答Paul的所有问题,可适当发挥; 2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名; To: liping@mail.com Subject: School subjects Dear Li Ping, How is everything going with you? There are many fun subjects in my school this term. Can you tell me about your school subjects? Also, what is your favourite subject and why? I’m looking forward to hearing from you. Paul Dear Paul, Everything goes well with me. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Ping 17.假设你是阳光中学七年级的学生李华。你们学校的英文报社正在举行题为“My School Life”的征文活动。请你根据下面所列提纲和要点,写一篇征文。 有关学校 1.学校不大,但非常美丽 2.有12间教室,每间都非常干净明亮 3.有一座非常现代化的图书馆和两间艺术教室 4.操场周围绿树环绕;有多处小花园 有关校园生活 1.校长(headmaster) 看起来非常和善,经常在食堂和我们一起用餐 2.老师们上课非常有趣,同学们都很友好,他们经常去操场和图书馆 3.学生们每天早上都要做早操并打扫自己的教室 4.有很多俱乐部,比如……我是园艺(gardening) 俱乐部的一员,每周三下午和其他成员一起去照料小花园,了解植物 你的感受 …… 要求: 1.不少于80字; 2.无需按照中文要点逐个翻译,但一定注意行文的逻辑性和连贯性; 3.省略号的地方要适当发挥; 4.文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数。 Hi, I am Li Hua. I am a new student in this school. I’m in Class 1, Grade 7. I am happy to write something about my school. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 18.假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Tony想通过Emil了解你的校园生活,请你根据他的问题回复邮件,文字要流畅、准确,要求60词左右,Email的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Tony的问题如下: 1. How is your school life? 2. What is your favorite school day? Why do you like this day? Dear Tony, I am very happy to hear from you. Let me tell you something about my school life. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours Li Hua 19.假如你是Li Ming,你换新学校和搬新家了。你的美国好朋友Tim,他很想知道你的学校生活和新家的情况,请根据以下的图示内容,写一封信告诉他你的学校生活和新家的情况。(词数70左右)                    School Life New Home Interesting; kind; Favorite subject; Outdoor activities; … Beautiful; Garden; flowers; A living room; a study; … Your feelings: … Dear Tim, I’m writing to tell you something about my school life and new home. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m looking forward to hearing from you.                                                                     Yours,                                                                      Li Ming 20.假如你是李丹,请根据所给提示,用英文写一封推荐信,推荐王艳同学当选校优秀学生。80词左右,信的开头与结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。 1. 王艳,16岁,一个聪明的女孩; 2. 学东西快,数学、语文、英语学得很好,擅长历史,对中国历史了解很多; 3. 喜爱体育,篮球打得很好,是校篮球队的成员; 4. 善良、勇敢、乐于助人、经常在车上给老人让座,曾(once)用一块湿毯子扑灭过一场大火。 Dear Sir/Madam, I would like to recommend Wang Yan for the Best Student Award. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Dan 参考答案及试题解析 1.例文 Dear Lisa, How are you? I’m excited to tell you about my new life in junior high school. Every morning at 7:30 a.m., I start my day with some morning reading. In the morning, we have four classes and in the afternoon, there are three. After class, I usually do some sports, which I really enjoy. My favorite teacher is Ms. Li because she makes learning so fun and interesting. My favorite subject is math, as it is challenging and meaningful. I also love playing basketball with my friends. I am enjoying my time here and learning a lot. Yours, Wang Meng 【解析】[总体分析] ①题材:本文是一篇应用文,是一封书信; ②时态:时态为一般过去时; ③提示:注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。   [写作步骤] 第一步,表达对收信人的问候,并表明写作目的; 第二步,介绍课程安排和课后活动; 第三步,介绍自己的最喜欢的老师,科目及运动,并表达感受。 [亮点词汇] ①morning reading早读 ②after class课后 ③do some sports做运动 [高分句型] ①After class, I usually do some sports, which I really enjoy. (定语从句) ②My favorite teacher is Ms. Li because she makes learning so fun and interesting.(原因状语从句) 2.例文 Dear Jack, I’m happy to introduce my school. My school is very beautiful with clean classrooms and a large playground. I feel happy and excited about my school life because everything is new for me, and my classmates are friendly. My favorite subject is English because it helps me communicate with people from other countries. I am in the Basketball Club and the Reading Club. From these clubs, I learn how to work as a team and improve my knowledge. I love my colorful school life! Yours, Li Hua 【解析】[总体分析] ①题材:本文是一篇书信作文; ②时态:本文应使用“一般现在时”为主; ③提示:应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充,使文章内容充实。 [写作步骤] 第一步,借用文章已给开头,引出主题是介绍学校生活; 第二步,根据题干的要点,详细介绍学校概况、最喜欢的科目及参加的学校社团和收获; 第三步,点评学校生活,并收尾。 [亮点词汇] communicate with与……沟通 [高分句型] I feel happy and excited about my school life because everything is new for me, and my classmates are friendly.(原因状语从句) 3.例文 Dear Flora, I’m happy to hear that you will come to our school next Monday. I’m writing to tell you the Monday activities of my class. At 7:20, we have the flag-raising ceremony. It’s a great honor for us to watch the national flag rising. Then, from 8:00 to 9:30, we have Chinese and math classes. After that, we have some physical activities. From 10:30 to 12:00, we have music and history classes. At noon, we have lunch and have a short rest. We have English and physical education classes from 14:00 to 15:30. Finally, from 15:30 to 17:00, we have science club activities. I am looking forward to seeing you. I hope you will have a good time here. Yours, Li Hua 【解析】[总体分析] ①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件; ②时态:时态为“一般现在时”; ③提示:写作要点已给出,考生注意不要遗漏提示中的要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步,开篇点题,引出话题; 第二步,根据表格内容,介绍自己班每周一的课程及活动安排; 第三步,书写结语,欢迎她来访。 [亮点词汇] ①the flag-raising ceremony 升旗仪式 ②it’s a great honor for sb. to do sth. 某人做某事是莫大的荣幸 ③from…to… 从……到…… ④look forward to 期待 ⑤have a good time 过得愉快 [高分句型] ①It’s a great honor for us to watch the national flag rising.(it作形式主语句型) ②I hope you will have a good time here.(省略that的宾语从句) 4.例文 Dear Mr. Green, I’m eager to join our school’s English Speaking Club. I love reading English novels, writing essays, and watching English movies. There are two main reasons why I want to join the club. One is that I hope to connect with fellow English-lovers. The other reason is that I want to practice my spoken English. The club’s activities surely boost my skills. Looking forward to joining. Best wishes, Li Hua 【解析】[总体分析] ①题材:本文是一封电子邮件; ②时态:时态为“一般现在时”; ③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步,点题,表明想要参加英语口语社团; 第二步,具体介绍英语方面的爱好或能力以及想要加入社团的理由; 第三步,书写结语,表达想要加入社团的期待。 [亮点词汇] ①be eager to do渴望做某事 ②love doing sth.喜爱做某事 ③connect with与……联系 [高分句型] ①There are two main reasons why I want to join the club.(why引导的定语从句) ②One is that I hope to connect with fellow English-lovers.(that引导的表语从句) 5.例文 Dear Tom, I’m happy to get your email. Let me tell you about my school days. We have ten subjects at school. We have Chinese, English, maths, PE, biology, geography, music, art and so on. There are ten classes in my school every day. PE is my favourite subject, because I like playing basketball. It’s very interesting. But I don’t like maths because it’s too difficult. How about your school days? What’s your favourite subject? Yours, Li Hua 【解析】[总体分析] ①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件; ②时态:时态为“一般现在时”; ③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏邮件提示的内容,适当增加细节,并且突出写作的要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步,表明写作意图,介绍自己的学校生活; 第二步,介绍学校科目、课程、最喜欢的科目以及原因等; 第三步,书写结语。希望Tom也介绍自己的学校生活和喜欢的科目。 [亮点词汇] ①like doing sth.喜欢做某事 ②play basketball打篮球 ③difficult困难的 [高分句型] ①There are ten classes in my school every day. (There be句型) ②PE is my favourite subject, because I like playing basketball. (because引导的原因状语从句) 6.例文: Good morning boys and girls, there are six students in our group. Let me tell you what subjects they like in my group. Linda, Lucy and I like music best because we think it’s interesting, and we can learn lots of new songs. Music can make us happy. Mary, Tom and David’s favorite subject is maths. They like it because they think maths is useful. They can learn how to work out maths problems. 【解析】[总体分析] ①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文; ②时态:时态为“一般现在时”; ③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步,表明写作意图,分享组内成员的情况; 第二步,介绍组内成员喜欢的科目以及原因; [亮点词汇] ① learn lots of new songs学习许多新歌曲 ② make us happy使我们开心 [高分句型] They like it because they think maths is useful.(because引导的原因状语从句) 7.例文 Dear Peter, How’s it going? In your last e-mail, you told me a lot about your school. Now let me tell you something about my school. I study in Xiangyang Middle School. It is a great school. There is a large sports field next to the office building. The classroom building is behind the sports field. And the dining hall is across from the sports field. We study many subjects at school, such as Chinese, maths, English, biology, geography, history, IT, PE and music. There are also lots of clubs in our school such as art club, science club, drama club, music club, chess club and ping-pong club. I really enjoy my school life here. I have learnt a lot and made many friends. The teachers are nice, too. I love my school. Yours, Li Hua 【解析】[总体分析] ①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件; ②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”; ③提示:根据表格中的要点提示进行写作,注意不要遗漏,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步,承接开头,介绍学校建筑布局; 第二步,介绍学习的科目及学校社团; 第三步,表达感受。 [亮点词汇] ①after school放学后 ②lots of许多 ③such as比如 [高分句型] ①There is a large sports field next to the office building. (there be句型) 8.例文: Dear David, I’m happy to get your letter. Let me tell you something about my favorites. My favorite food is fruit, especially apples and bananas. I think they are good for my health. I like doing sports and I like swimming best. Because it is fun and interesting. As for subjects, English is my favorite subject. My best friend is Amy, and we have something in common, such as eating habits and hobbies. My school is beautiful and big, and you can see many beautiful flowers and trees around it. I have four classes in the morning and three classes in the afternoon. The class finishes at 4:00 pm. What about you? Please write to me soon. Yours, Li Hua 【解析】[总体分析] ①题材:本文是一篇书信作文。 ②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”。 ③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏要点,注意行文连贯、逻辑清晰、无拼写和语法错误。 [写作步骤] 第一步:表明写作意图; 第二步:从好朋友和喜欢的食物、运动、学习科目及学校情况五个方面进行介绍,并简单说明理由; 第三步:书写结语,表达期望。 [亮点词汇] ①especially 特别是 ②have something in common有共同点 ③such as 例如 [高分句型] ①I think they are good for my health.(省略that的宾语从句) ②My school is beautiful and big, and you can see many beautiful flowers and trees around it.(and连接并列句) 9.例文 My Wonderful School Life I am Li Hua, a new student at Sunshine Middle School. I live a happy life here. My school looks nice and modern. There are three classroom buildings and 40 classrooms. Each classroom is clean and bright. We also have a large playground where we can do sports and have fun. I have many helpful friends and kind teachers who are always there for me, and we help each other a lot. My favorite subject is Biology because it is very interesting. We study many animals and plants and learn about nature. There are all kinds of clubs in our school. I join the basketball club, because I want to be a basketball player like Yao Ming in the future. The activities make me happy. My school life is wonderful. I always have a good time here. 【解析】[总体分析] ①题材:本文是一篇材料作文; ②时态:时态为“一般现在时”; ③提示:根据提示内容介绍自己的学校生活,适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步,引出话题; 第二步,根据提示内容介绍自己的学校生活; 第三步,书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①do sports做运动 ②have fun玩得开心 ③help each other互相帮助 ④all kinds of各种各样的 [高分句型] ①We also have a large playground where we can do sports and have fun. (where引导的定语从句) ②I have many helpful friends and kind teachers who are always there for me, and we help each other a lot. (who引导的定语从句) ③My favorite subject is Biology because it is very interesting. (because引导的原因状语从句) 10.例文 My school life I’m Elsa from Shanghai. I’d like to tell you something about my school life. My school starts at 8:00 a.m. and finishes at 4:00 p.m.. I have eight lessons every day including Maths, English, Chinese, History and so on. My favourite subject is Arts and Crafts because it’s really interesting. The teachers in my school are kind and helpful. I also make a few warm-hearted friends. What’s more, there are a lot of fantastic activites such as Music club, English Festival and sports meeting. We can have a good time. How about your school? 【解析】[总体分析] ①题材:本文是一篇材料作文; ②时态:时态为“一般现在时”; ③提示:考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示中的介绍要点,适当添加细节,突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步,表明写作意图,介绍自己的学校生活; 第二步,从“上学时间、科目、教师、朋友、活动”等方面来介绍学校生活; 第三步,书写结语,询问对方的生活。 [亮点词汇] ①make friends交朋友 ②what’s more并且 ③have a good time玩得开心 [高分句型] ①My favourite subject is Arts and Crafts because it’s really interesting.(because引导原因状语从句) ②What’s more, there are a lot of fantastic activites such as Music club, English Festival and sports meeting.(there be句型) 11.例文 My ideal school life I’m a Grade 6 student. I have too much homework every day. I don’t have time for after-school activities. I think my school life is terrible. I think my ideal school life is meaningful and colorful. During the rest time, I hope our after-school activities are rich and colorful. There are many organizations and clubs in our school. I would like to join in the organizations which I am interested in. Learning online is part of the school life, but the work is not much, and very easy. We often use emails to send our homework to the teacher. Our teachers and classmates are very helpful and kind. Students will get along well with each other and help each other. Our school will have a school trip at least once a month. In this way, we will know more about the world. This is my ideal school life. I hope my dream will come true some day. 【解析】[总体分析] ① 题材:本文是一篇话题作文; ② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”; ③ 提示:根据所给话题和提示完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步,介绍目前的学校生活情况; 第二步,具体描述你想要的学校生活是什么样的; 第三步,最后表达总结。 [亮点词汇] ① would like to do想要做 ② be interested in对……感兴趣 ③ get along well with sb和某人相处得好 [高分句型] ①I would like to join in the organizations which I am interested in.(定语从句) ②I hope my dream will come true some day.(宾语从句) 12.例文 Dear Alex,     I’m happy to tell you something about my school life.     I am in Class 3, Grade 7. My classroom is big and bright. There are many desks and chairs in my classroom. In the corner of the wall, there is a bookshelf. After class, we often read books together. I have four classes in the morning and three classes in the afternoon. Most of the classes are very interesting. I like P.E. class best because I can paly basketball. My classmates and I often play basketball in the sports hall. I often go to the library to read my favorite books. My favorite teacher is my English teacher Miss Li. When I have trouble, she always try her best to help me. I love her and I like studying English.     Best wishes to you! Yours, Li Ming 【解析】[总体分析] ①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件; ②时态:时态为“一般现在时”; ③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏。可适当添加细节,突出重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步,引出主题,介绍学校生活; 第二步,重点介绍教室里的情况,平常在学校的活动和最喜欢的老师及原因; 第三步,书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ① in the corner of在角落里 ② like...best最喜欢…… ③ try one’s best尽力而为 [高分句型] ①I like P.E. class best because I can paly basketball. (because引导原因状语从句) ②When I have trouble, she always try her best to help me. (when引导时间状语从句) 13.例文 SELF-INTRODUCTION Hello! My name is Lin Tao. I’m a boy. I’m twelve years old. My birthday is on May 15. I like playing football very much. I like English best because I think it is very interesting. 【解析】[总体分析] ①题材:本文是一篇话题作文; ②时态:时态为一般现在时; ③提示:本文主要是介绍自己的个人信息以及自己喜欢的课程,适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步,介绍自己的个人信息; 第二步,介绍自己喜欢的学习课程。 [亮点词汇] ①like doing sth.喜欢做某事 ②play football踢足球 ③like...best最喜欢 [高分句型] I like English best because I think it is very interesting.(because引导的原因状语从句) 14.例文 Welcome to our school. My name is Li Hua. I study at Sunshine Middle School. I am in Class 1, Grade 7. I study maths, music, history, English, Chinese, biology and IT. I don’t like maths because it is too difficult for me. Music is my favourite subject. I like singing because singing can make me happy. We can learn a lot of new songs in class. I want to be a singer in the future. There are two classroom buildings, a library and a dining hall in our school. The teachers are all good with us. My classmates are friendly, and I have many friends here. We often play volleyball in the gym. I love my school and always have fun here. I hope you can have a good time in our school. 【解析】[总体分析] ①题材:本文是一篇材料作文; ②时态:时态为“一般现在时”; ③提示:写作要点已给出,不要遗漏表格中信息提示,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步,介绍自己的基本信息以及喜欢的学习科目和喜欢做的事情; 第二步,从学校建筑、老师、同学以及活动几个方面介绍学校的基本情况; 第三步,介绍自己的感受,希望大家能在学校过得开心。 [亮点词汇] ①in the future今后,将来 ②be good with善于和……相处 ③have fun= have a good time玩得开心 [高分句型] ①I like singing because singing can make me happy.(because引导的原因状语从句) ②There are two classroom buildings, a library and a dining hall in our school.(there be句型) 15.例文 My school life My school life is quite colorful. Every day, I get to learn new things in class and meet lots of friendly classmates. The teachers are kind and friendly. I really like my school life because it’s not just about studies. We have different activities like sports, music, and art that make learning fun. And I enjoy chatting with friends and sharing stories. Overall, my school life is enjoyable. I learn a lot and make many good memories too. 【解析】[总体分析] ①题材:本文是一篇材料作文; ②时态:时态为“一般现在时”; ③提示:根据所给提示完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步,介绍你的学校生活是怎么样的; 第二步,介绍是否喜欢自己的学校生活以及原因。 [亮点词汇] ①colorful丰富多彩的 ②friendly友好的 ③kind友善的 ④enjoy doing sth.喜欢做某事 ⑤chat with sb.与某人闲聊 [高分句型] I really like my school life because it’s not just about studies.(because引导原因状语从句) 16.例文 Dear Paul, Everything goes well with me. We also have many interesting subjects in our school this term. They are biology, geography, history and IT. My favourite subject is geography. Our geography teacher Mr Wang is very kind. His classes are amazing. From this subject, I learn about many famous lakes and mountains, and I know the delicious food in different places. It’s so exciting. I love traveling. I want to be a guide in the future. I really like this subject. Yours, Li Ping 【解析】[总体分析] ① 题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件; ② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”; ③ 提示:根据邮件问题提示完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步,介绍自己最近的状况; 第二步,介绍自己的学习科目以及最喜欢的科目和原因。 [亮点词汇] ① learn about了解 ② love doing sth喜欢做某事 ③ want to be想成为 [高分句型] From this subject, I learn about many famous lakes and mountains, and I know the delicious food in different places.(and并列句) 17.例文 Hi, I am Li Hua. I am a new student in this school. I’m in Class 1, Grade 7. I am happy to write something about my school. My school is not big, but it is very beautiful. There are 12 classrooms, each of which is very clean and bright. And there is a very modern library and two art classrooms. There are green trees surrounding the playground and many small gardens. Our headmaster looks very kind and often eats with us in the canteen. In addition, the teachers’ classes in our school are very interesting, and the classmates are very friendly. They often go to the playground and library. What about the students? Students do morning exercises and clean their classrooms every morning. By the way, there are many clubs in our school, such as football clubs, swimming clubs, gardening clubs, and so on. I am a member of the gardening club. I go to take care of the small garden and learn about plants with other members every Wednesday afternoon. All in all, my school life is great and colorful. It is not only a good place to learn, but also a good place to play. 【解析】[总体分析] ①题材:本文是一篇材料作文; ②时态:时态为“一般现在时”; ③提示:写作要求已给出,学生不要遗漏题目中的要点,适当添加细节,写作时保持主谓一致,注意字数要求。 [写作步骤] 第一步,介绍学校的基本信息; 第二步,介绍有关的校园生活; 第三步,谈谈你的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①be happy to do sth做某事很开心 ②In addition此外 ③By the way顺便一提 ④a member of………的成员 ⑤take care of照顾 [高分句型] ①There are green trees surrounding the playground and many small gardens.(There be句型) ②It is not only a good place to learn, but also a good place to play.(not only…but also…不仅……而且……) 18.参考范文 Dear Tony, I am very happy to hear from you. Let me tell you something about my school life. I have a very busy school life. We have four classes in the morning. In the afternoon, we have three classes. We learn many subjects like math, English, history and art. Of all the subjects, I like history best. My history teacher often tells us many interesting stories in class. My favourite school day is Monday because I can have history. I think history is interesting and useful. What about you? Yours, Li Hua 【解析】[总体分析] ① 题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件; ② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”; ③ 提示:写作要点已经给出,考生注意不要遗漏要点;注意适当发挥,丰富文章的内容和层次。 [写作步骤] 第一步,开篇点题,点明将介绍自己的学校生活; 第二步,介绍学校生活,具体包括课程、自己喜欢的科目以及自己喜欢的学习日; 第三步,表达感受。 [亮点词汇] ① hear from 收到……的来信 ② like ... best 最喜欢…… ③ useful 有用的 [高分句型] ① Let me tell you something about my school life. (let sb. do sth. 让某人做某事) ② My favourite school day is Monday because I can have history.(because引导的原因状语从句) 19.例文 Dear Tim, I’m writing to tell you something about my school life and new home. My school life is very interesting. My classmates and teachers are kind to me. My favorite subject is Chinese because it’s easy and interesting. After school, I often do some outdoor activites. I often play basketball or soccer. Sometimes, I go to the school library. I have a beautiful home. There is a garden full of flowers in front of my house.  There is a living room, a kitchen and three bedrooms. My study is next to the living room. I like my school life and new home very much. I’m looking forward to hearing from you.                                                                       Yours, Li Ming 【解析】题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文,要求根据表格提示信息向Tim介绍你的学校生活和新家情况。 写作指导:本文时态采用一般现在时,人称用第一人称;写作时,首先沿用开头,介绍写这封信的目的是介绍学校生活和新家情况;其次分段具体介绍;最后进行总结并表达感想。注意要点涵盖全面,无拼写和语法错误。 20.One possible version: Dear Sir/Madam, I would like to recommend Wang Yan for the Best Student Award. Wang Yan is 16 years old. She is very smart and learns things quickly. She does well in Maths, Chinese and English. She is also good at history. She knows a lot about Chinese history. She likes sports. She plays basketball well. She is a member of the school basketball team. She is kind and brave. She is also helpful. She often gives her seat to the old people on the bus. She once put out a fire with a wet blanket. I think that Wang Yan should get the award. Yours sincerely, Li Dan 【解析】1. 题干解读:题目要求根据提示要点,介绍王艳的基本情况,要给出并突出她能当选校优秀学生的理由,写作时要运用正确的英语表达,要选用恰当的词汇和短语。 2. 写作指导:写作时要承接已给出的开头,本文应该用第三人称来介绍内容;时态采用一般现在时;在介绍内容时,力求语言准确,内容完整,保证行文连贯,条理清晰。 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 $

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