Unit 4 写作指导 如何写读后续写-【志鸿优化训练】2026-2027学年高中英语必修第一册 (外研版)

【佳句背诵】Hearing you want to know how to have your written English improved in a short period,I'm writing to give you some tips.[i 用文之建议信] 听说你想知道如何在短时间内提高你的英语写 作水平，我写信给你一些建议。 名师点津该句型的关键在于明白have的 含义 (l)have是使役动词就要考虑have sb doing;have sb do;have sth done. (2)have是及物动词表达“有”的含义时，就 要考虑have sth to do。 作 如何写读后续写 ©感知·文体常识 读后续写以故事类记叙文为主，要求考生根 据提供的语言材料和所给段落开头语，续写成一 篇结构完整、情节相符、逻辑衔接紧密的短文。读 后续写考查考生对所学语言知识的实际运用能力 和发散思维能力。在续写时要注意以下两个 方面： 一、续写段落的主题、人物、线索和语言风格 要与原文章一致。续写时要紧扣所给材料的中 心，遵循上文明示或暗示的线索，按照材料中人物 性格发展的规律，使用与原文风格一致的语言进 行续写 二、所续写内容与所给材料结合在一起，必须 是一个完整的文章或片段。上下文衔接要自然， 前后要照应。 ®牢记·写作素材 (一)增色词汇 1.人物情绪刻画 tremble with excitement激动得直发抖 a broken spirit意志消沉 burst into tears/,burst out crying突然哭起来 写作指导。 【即学即练】单句语法填空/单句写作 DBefore driving into the city,you are required to have your car (wash). 2When he was riding a bike in the street,he had his arm (break) ③I will have Tom (pick) you up at the airport. ④“Do you have any clothes (wash)?”the servant asked. ⑤你不能让空调日夜工作，这很费电。 You can't day and night,which is a waste of electricity. 指导 storm out of/off/into气冲冲地离开/进入 stand there without saying a word站在那里不 说一个字 flush with embarrassment尴尬得脸红 be trapped in regret后悔不已 2.人物动作/活动描写 give sb a sharp scolding严厉训斥某人 praise sb(up)to the skies极力称赞、大肆吹捧 某人 hear the thunder rolling in the distance听到远 处的隆隆雷声 wander over the countryside在乡间漫步 throw oneself into sb's arms投进某人的怀抱 struggle out of the bed挣扎着从床上爬起来 3.地理环境描写 bathe/bask in(the)sunshine沐日光浴 thunder rolls雷声隆隆 be situated at the northern extreme位于…最 北端 in a village among the hills在群山环抱的村 庄里 a room facing south朝南的房间 93· e英语|Unit4 Friends forever (二)精彩句型 1.Unable to answer the teacher's question,all the students kept silent. 因为回答不出老师的问题，学生们都不说话。 2.Having reviewed his lessons for a whole weekend at home,he expected the coming exam with confidence. 在家整整复习了一个周末，他满怀信心地期待 即将到来的考试。 3.I opened the letter carefully,hoping for some clues to the identity of the owner of the wallet. 我小心翼翼地打开信，希望能找到一些有关钱 包主人身份的线索。 4.Out of the darkness came a voice he had never heard before. 黑暗中传来一个他从来没有听过的声音。 5.His wife was in deep sorrow with her eyes filled with tears. 他的妻子伤心极了，眼里满是泪水。 6.Dressed in a Santa Claus costume,she slipped into the room without being noticed. 她穿着圣诞老人的服装，悄悄溜进房间，没有 人注意到她。 ©示例·写作步骤 【写作要求】 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头 语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Robert and Henry were two friends in the same class.They always played together and went home together.One day,Robert and Henry were going home from school,when,on turning a corner,Robert cried out,"A fight!Let's go and seel” “No,”said Henry.“Let us go quietly home and not meddle with(插手)this quarrel.We have nothing to do with it and may get into trouble. Also our parents are expecting to have dinner with us together at home and I don't want them to worry about me.” 。94 “You are a coward(懦夫)，and afraid to go,” said Robert,and off he ran.Henry went straight home,and in the afternoon went to school as usual. But Robert had told all the boys that Henry was a coward,and they laughed at him a great deal.From then on,they looked down upon Henry and didn't want to play with him together. Henry was sad but he wasn't angry with Robert for his rude behavior,because he knew that they misunderstood him,and that he ought to be afraid of nothing but doing wrong.Thus,he just ignored the other boys'laughter and continued to go to school and study as well.However, Robert didn't invite Henry to go home with him anymore.Instead,he went with some other boys who also thought Henry was a coward.Every day after school,they didn't go home directly but went to the riverside or somewhere to play games and had fun. A few days later,Robert was bathing with his new friends in the river,and got out of his depth.He struggled,and cried for help,but he failed.The boys who had called Henry a coward got out of the water as fast as they could,and they did nothing to help Robert. 注意： 1.续写词数应为150左右； 2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 【审题谋篇】 体裁 记叙文 时态 一般过去时 话题 两个朋友重归于好 1.亨利如何救罗伯特（显性要点） 2.罗伯特获救后的反应（显性要点） 要点 1.亨利和罗伯特如何恢复友谊（隐性要点） 2.罗伯特明白什么是真正的勇气（隐性要点） 第一段：描写亨利救罗伯特的经过 框架 第二段：大家向亨利道歉，罗伯特与亨利重归 于好。同时，罗伯特明白了什么是真正的 勇气 【遣词造句】 1.词汇 (1)从旁而过 (2)脱下 (3)请求 (4)感到愧疚 (5)向…道款 2.句式 (1)要点翻译 ①看起来罗伯特快要溺水了。 Robert was drowning. ②听到尖叫声，亨利跑到河边，脱掉衣服，毫 不犹豫地跳入水中。 Henry ran to the riverside,took off his clothes and jumped into the water without hesitation. ③他费了很大的劲，冒着极大的危险，把罗伯 特带到了岸边。 he brought Robert to the shore. ④罗伯特和他的新朋友因称亨利为懦夫而感 到羞愧。 Robert and his new friends that they had called Henry a coward. 写作指导 ⑤他和罗伯特又成了朋友，他们像往常一样 一起回家了。 He and Robert were friends again and they ⑥从此，罗伯特明白了真正的勇气是什么：永 远不要害怕行善，但要永远害怕作恶。 From this,Robert learned never be afraid to do good,but always fear to do evil. (2)句式升级 ⑦用动词-ing形式作状语升级句② ⑧用动词-img形式作宾语升级句④ 【妙笔成篇】 1针对训练 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头 语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 (2025·安徽高一上学期期末) I was a freshman in high school,eager to start a new chapter in my life.Little did I know that my journey would be marked by an unex- pected friendship.My deskmate,Tom,was a 95. e英语|Unit4 Friends forever stutterer(结巴).Sometimes,it made me really uncomfortable. The first day of school was exciting.I found my seat and settled in,only to be greeted by a nervous stutter from my deskmate."H-Hello, I'm T-Tom,he said.I tried to be polite.But inside,I felt embarrassed(尴尬).I was worried about how his stuttering would affect me,espe- cially during class discussions.I avoided him as much as possible,not wanting to be associated with the awkwardness he seemed to bring. One day,during a particularly challenging math class,I was struggling to understand a complex problem.The teacher,Mrs.Lee,noticed my confusion and asked if I needed help.Before I could answer,Tom spoke up..“I-I--I can help,” he offered.His stutter became more noticeable under the pressure.To my surprise,he explained the problem clearly,and I began to see him in a new light.His intelligence and kindness shone through his stutter,.and I felt guilty(内疚的)for my previous behavior. As the weeks went by,I started to pay more attention to Tom.My friends noticed the change and asked about it.I shared my initial dislike and later admiration for Tom.They encouraged me to give him a chance,reminding me that everyone has their struggles.My parents,too,noticed my shift in attitude and discussed the importance of empathy and understanding.They told me about the times when they faced difficulties,showing me that everyone has strengths beyond what people might see as weaknesses. 96 The turning point in our relationship came during the school's annual talent show.Tom, despite his fear of public speaking,decided to take part in it. 注意： 1.续写词数应为150左右； 2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 He chose to recite a poem he had written. After the talent show,Tom and I became close friends.2.①with/to②with/to③corresponding 4corresponding to its location on the page 3.①to take②appointed③appointment Appointed to be manager of the company 4.①on②where ③on④behind the scenes 5.①to admit②a③was very ashamed of being late was very ashamed that ⑤Much to her shame 多义词汇·自主练透 I.①C②A③B Ⅱ.1.拖，拉过得很慢令人厌烦的人 或事 2.性格；个性名人，风云人物特色； 特征 重点句式·多维剖析 1.①is to come true②are to make a difference 3is to keep on studying hard ④was about to give up 2.①washed②broken③pick④tobe washed 5have your air conditioner working 写作指导 示例·写作步骤 【遣词造句】 1.(1)pass by (2)take off (3)ask for (4)feel ashamed (5)say sorry to 2.①It seemed that②When he heard the screams 3Through his great efforts,and with much danger to himself Ofelt ashamed ⑤went home together as usual⑥what true courage was 7 Hearing the screams,Henry ran to the riverside,took off his clothes and jumped into the water without hesitation. 8Robert and his new friends felt ashamed at having called Henry a coward. 3 【妙笔成篇】 It seemed that Robert was drowning.Just at the moment,Henry happened to be passing by.Hearing the screams,Henry ran to the riverside,took off his clothes and jumped into the water without hesitation.He reached Robert just as he was about to sink.Through his great efforts,and with much danger to himself,he brought Robert to the shore. Thus,Robert's life was saved.Robert and his new friends felt ashamed at having called Henry a coward.They realized that Henry had true courage.They said sorry to Henry for their rude behavior and asked for his forgiveness. Henry forgave them happily.He and Robert were friends again and they went home together as usual.From this,Robert learned what true courage was:never be afraid to do good,but always fear to do evil. 针对训练 He chose to recite a poem he had written. As he stepped onto the stage,I could see his hands shaking and his face turning red.But he took a deep breath and began.His stutter was still there,but his voice was filled with so much emotion and determination.The audience was silent, listening intently.When he finished,the room erupted in thunderous applause.I was on my feet, clapping the loudest,tears welling up in my eyes. After the talent show,Tom and I became close friends.I no longer cared about his stutter but focused on the wonderful person he was inside.We studied together,shared our dreams and fears.I learned that true friendship isn't about surface appearances or speech,but about accepting and supporting each other unconditionally.Through Tom,I grew to be a more understanding and compassionate person. I realized that everyone has their battles to fight and that kindness and acceptance can make a world of difference in someone's life. Unit 5 Into the wild 激情早读·拓视野 【做练习】 1.To observe Tibetan antelopes. 2.Their population dropped dramatically because they were hunted illegally and their habitats were becoming smaller. 3.C Section A Starting out Understanding ideas Part 1 Reading comprehension 第一步速读课文理清脉络 Task 1 C Task 2 1.migration 2.migrations 3.migrate 4.trouble 5.Ways 第二步精读课文领悟细节 Task 3 Activity 1 1.To find food,seek a partner,or in search of warmer weather. Activity 2 2.Every autumn;around 4,000 kilometres. Activity 3 3.Their ability to tell the time of day and to measure the position of the sun. Activity 4 4.A Activity 5 5.B 30 Task 4 略 第三步深读课文融会提能 Task 5 1.to travel 2.where 3.led 4.uses 5.amazing 6.has crashed 7.Sadly 8.The 9.to 10.greater Part 2 Language points ⊙基础落实·必备知识全过关 重点单词 【教材设题】1.charity2.annual;nigration 3.measure;position 4.determine 5.Eventually 6.solution;mystery;amazing 7.has crashed 8.are destroying 【巧用举一反三】1.eventually2.happily 3.possibly 4.truly 5.Basically 重点短语 【教材设题】1.from one place to another 2.in search of 3.A team of 4.cut down trees 5.led to 6.make sure;feed on 7.the number of 重点句式 【教材设题】1.that2.The more;the greater ○重难探究·能力素养全提升 高频词汇·讲练互动 l.①out②after/for③seeking to think of a way out 2.①be measured②neasures ③which measures twice 4measuring twice 3.①to work②determination③on/ upon 4 Because they were determined to complete the job on time 5 Determined to complete the job on time 4.①amazing②to find③at/by④lt