高频文体14 应用文写作之求助信（写作专练）英语高考复习通用版

高频文体14 求助信 近五年考情分析 年份 卷区 体裁 话题 命题形式 2025年 全国一卷 建议信 对外交提出的“Fun at my school”和“Guess who I am”两个选项做出选择 提纲类 全国二卷 咨询信 咨询外交介绍加拿大体育运动的文章进展 提纲类 浙江卷1月 发言稿 发表关于在校园内用手机拍摄短视频的现象的演讲稿 提纲类 北京卷 建议信 给参加联合国倡议征集活动的好友提建议 提纲类 天津卷 推荐信 在论坛交流上围绕“人类文明音像资料收录”提出推荐 提纲类 2024年 新高考I和II卷 告知信 分享在公园上了一堂美术课经历 提纲类 全国甲卷 发言稿 以Development of Transport in China为题的发言稿 图标类 北京卷 建议信 对好友介绍中国的发展成就提出建议 提纲类 天津卷 发言稿 “低碳校园，从我做起”英语主题的演讲稿 提纲类 浙江卷1月 征文投稿 推荐一项适合课间开展的运动 提纲类 上海卷 安慰信 在“排忧解难”专栏回复校友父母不容许自己做饭 提纲类 2023年 新高考全国卷 建议信 提出随机分组存在的问题并给建议 提纲类 全国甲卷 征文投稿 以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿 提纲类 全国乙卷 征文投稿 用英语描述学习一项新技能的经历，及从中获得的体验和感受 提纲类 浙江卷1月 报道 报道“认识我们身边的植物”活动 提纲类 北京卷 建议信 为以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动提供建议 提纲类 天津卷 申请信 申请参加“中国工坊” 活动 提纲类 2022年 新高考全国卷 邀请信 邀请外教做访谈 提纲类 浙江卷 邀请信 校图书馆新开设“小组学习室” 邀请外国留学生一同体验 提纲类 浙江卷 (1月) 回忆经历 回忆中国-爱尔兰文化节 提纲类 全国甲卷 征文投稿 世界海洋日为主题，举办英语征文比赛 提纲类 全国乙卷 征文投稿 英语学习方式图标的调查投稿 提纲类 北京卷 邀请信 邀请好友做一次关于英语写作的线上经验交流 提纲类 天津卷 视频文字稿 用英语为社团纳新活动录制一段短视频 提纲类 2021年 新高考全国卷 征文投稿 庆祝英文报创刊十周年投稿 提纲类 浙江卷 宣传稿 宣传学生国画作品展 提纲类 浙江卷 (1月) 发言稿 欢迎新西兰学生访校致辞 提纲类 全国甲卷 咨询信 咨询国外友人对中国传统文化的看法 提纲类 全国乙卷 发言稿 以 Be smart online learners为题的发言稿 提纲类 北京卷 道歉信 你因故不能赴约周末一起外出 提纲类 天津卷 征文投稿 介绍一个国内你喜欢或去过的地方 提纲类 写作指导 Para.1 开门见山，交代写信目的 Para.2 具体分条陈述问题，不要太多 Para.3 感谢对方，希望得到帮助 【素材宝库】 写作模板 Dear ______________, How are you doing these days? As ______________ is approaching, I find it still challenging to ______________. Thus, I am writing to you in the hope of seeking for help. Initially, I have trouble in ______________. What’s more, ______________is also very difficult for me to do. Furthermore, what troubles me most is that ______________. Would you please take the trouble to ______________? I do believe you can help me solve these puzzles. I would be greatly grateful to you if you could lend me a helping hand. Looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 常用表达 请求提供建议或行为支持  1. I am writing in the hope that you will be kind enough to offer me some detailed suggestions to improve my English writing. 恳请您不吝赐教，为我提供提升英语写作水平的具体建议。 2. Having been learning English for so many years, I have no difficulty in understanding reading materials of moderate levels. 学习英语多年，我能轻松读懂中等难度的阅读材料。 3. What bothers me is that despite my large vocabulary and my relatively good understanding of English grammar, I still fail to write beautiful sentences, let alone good articles. 最令我困扰的是，尽管拥有丰富的词汇量和相对扎实的英语语法基础，我仍难以写出优美的句子，更不用说完成出色的文章了。 4. I am really at a loss what to do to improve it. 对此实在不知该如何突破。 5. With the College Entrance Examination approaching, I am terribly pressed for time and in desperate need of your help. So your timely suggestions as specific as possible are highly appreciated. 高考日益临近，时间紧迫，亟需您的指点。若能获得详尽具体的建议，将不胜感激。 请求提供信息  6. I am Li Hua, who took the international flight BA793 of your airline company on June 3rd. 我是旅客李华，于6月3日乘坐贵公司BA793国际航班。 7. To be honest, I'm very content with your service during the journey. But I'm sorry to tell you that I lost a suitcase due to my carelessness. Therefore, I am writing to ask if you can help me find my suitcase back. 坦率说，我对旅程中的服务非常满意，但很抱歉告知您，由于我的疏忽不慎遗失了一个行李箱，特此致信恳请协助寻回。 8. My red suitcase is of medium size. With triangle navy blue patterns and a bright yellow belt attached to the handle, it's easy to recognize. 该行李箱为红色中型款式，配有深蓝色三角形图案，把手处系有明黄色绑带，辨识度较高。 9. There are many valuable articles in my suitcase, among which a customized pen is of great significance to me. 箱内有多件贵重物品，其中一支定制钢笔对我具有特殊意义。 10. Not only is it an expensive present, but it is also a witness to the friendship between my best friend and me. 它既是珍贵礼物，更是我与挚友友谊的见证。 11. For the sake of its precious value, I am banking on your assistance. Once you have any clues about it, please contact me at 1334S6 at your earliest convenience.     因物品价值重大，恳请全力协助寻回。若有任何线索，请即刻致电1334S6与我联系。 高考真题精讲 【2020▪全国III卷】 假定你是李华，你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。给外教Miss Evans写封邮件，请她帮忙指导。邮件内容包括： 1. 剧情简介； 2. 指导内容； 3. 商定时间地点。 注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 结束语已为你写好。 Dear Miss Evans, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【2018▪11月浙江卷】 假定你是李华，乘坐FL753航班抵达伦敦后发现钱包遗失。请给航空公司写一封邮件说明情况并寻求帮助。内容包括： 1. 行程信息； 2. 钱包特征； 3. 联系方式。 注意： 1. 词数80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Sir or Madam, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 必背满分范文 1．（2025·吉林松原·期中）假定你是李华，负责组织班级科学展览活动，但遇到了一些问题。请给组织过该活动的Johnson同学写一封求助信，内容包括： 1.说明问题; 2.寻求建议。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Johnson, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Sincerely yours, Li Hua 2．（2025·荆荆襄宜·月考）假定你是李华，准备参加学校组织的英语即兴演讲(impromptu speech)比赛，请给外教 Jack 写封邮件求助，内容包括： (1)说明比赛要求； (2)请教演讲技巧； (3)表达你的感谢。 注意： (1)写作词数应为80左右； (2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 Dear Jack, I'm Li Hua from Class 3. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 3．（2025·河南·阶段考）假设你是李华，是光明中学的一名高三学生。今年高考英语学科阅读量加大，你的阅读能力较差，因此学习压力越来越大。请根据以下提示向你的外教Mr. Johnson求助： （1）英语学习的困难以及增加阅读量给自己带来的困扰； （2）希望得到他的指导和帮助。 （3）注意：词数为80左右，可以适当增加细节使行文连贯。 Dear Johnson, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua 4．（2025·云南·月考）假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Tom上个月来到北京学习。七月份你将去北京参加暑期中学生英语演讲比赛 (speech contest)，你在资料搜集、语言运用等方面遇到了困难。请根据以下要点给Tom写一封电子邮件： 1.询问Tom的生活和学习情况； 2.谈谈你的困难并请Tom帮忙； 3.告诉Tom你打算赛后去看他。 注意: 1.词数80左右；  2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Tom, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 5．（2025·河北唐县·月考）假定你是李华, 高考后想报考英语专业，但是你的口语太差，偶然的一个机会你从网上发现外籍教师Anna在线辅导英语口语。请根据以下要点写一封求助信，内容包括： 1．介绍自己的情况； 2．向外教求助； 3. 表示感谢并期盼回复。 注意：1．词数80左右； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Miss Anna, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 6．（2025·四川·开学考）假如你是李华，最近，你和好朋友Lisa的关系不好，让你比较迷茫。于是你写信向知音栏目主持人Tom求助。请你用英文写这封求助信。内容要点如下： 1 .影响你们友谊的具体事件或者原因。 2.你的感受。 3.求助的具体内容。 注意： 1. 词数80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Tom, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 7．（2025·江苏南京·调研考）假定你是李华，下个月要参加北京外国语大学入学英语面试，请你发一封邮件向你校的外教Chris请教，内容包括： 1. 口语表达； 2. 面试技巧； 3. 注意事项。 注意：1. 词数80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Chris, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 8．（2025·四川泸县·期中）假定你是李华，你和你的同学决定要在紧张的学习之余，为高三生活拍摄英文纪录片。请你给外教Miss Evans写封邮件,请她帮忙指导，内容包括： 1.告知拍摄的具体计划与内容； 2.请她编写英文字幕； 3.询问对拍摄的建议。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 参考词汇：字幕subtitle；纪录片documentary Dear Miss Evans, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 9．（2025·湖北·阶段考）假定你是李华，你校即将举办“英文读书月”活动——阅读并写读书笔记。请你给外教Alex写一封邮件求助，内容包括： 1.介绍活动内容； 2.请他推荐英文书； 3.请教如何写读书笔记。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Alex, I'm writing to ask for your help. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 10．（2025·广西·开学考）假设你是李华，现就读于多伦多大学。请就你的室友Tom的不文明表现写信向好友David求助。内容包括： 1．不保持房间整洁； 2．休息时间大声播放音乐； 3．随意动用他人物品； 4．常带朋友到宿舍喝酒喧闹。 注意： 1．词数 80 左右； 2．可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯； 3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear David, I came to Canada last month and I’m studying in the University of Toronto. Now I have some problems with my roommate, Tom. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes. Yours, Li Hua 10 / 10 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 高频文体14 求助信 近五年考情分析 年份 卷区 体裁 话题 命题形式 2025年 全国一卷 建议信 对外交提出的“Fun at my school”和“Guess who I am”两个选项做出选择 提纲类 全国二卷 咨询信 咨询外交介绍加拿大体育运动的文章进展 提纲类 浙江卷1月 发言稿 发表关于在校园内用手机拍摄短视频的现象的演讲稿 提纲类 北京卷 建议信 给参加联合国倡议征集活动的好友提建议 提纲类 天津卷 推荐信 在论坛交流上围绕“人类文明音像资料收录”提出推荐 提纲类 2024年 新高考I和II卷 告知信 分享在公园上了一堂美术课经历 提纲类 全国甲卷 发言稿 以Development of Transport in China为题的发言稿 图标类 北京卷 建议信 对好友介绍中国的发展成就提出建议 提纲类 天津卷 发言稿 “低碳校园，从我做起”英语主题的演讲稿 提纲类 浙江卷1月 征文投稿 推荐一项适合课间开展的运动 提纲类 上海卷 安慰信 在“排忧解难”专栏回复校友父母不容许自己做饭 提纲类 2023年 新高考全国卷 建议信 提出随机分组存在的问题并给建议 提纲类 全国甲卷 征文投稿 以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿 提纲类 全国乙卷 征文投稿 用英语描述学习一项新技能的经历，及从中获得的体验和感受 提纲类 浙江卷1月 报道 报道“认识我们身边的植物”活动 提纲类 北京卷 建议信 为以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动提供建议 提纲类 天津卷 申请信 申请参加“中国工坊” 活动 提纲类 2022年 新高考全国卷 邀请信 邀请外教做访谈 提纲类 浙江卷 邀请信 校图书馆新开设“小组学习室” 邀请外国留学生一同体验 提纲类 浙江卷 (1月) 回忆经历 回忆中国-爱尔兰文化节 提纲类 全国甲卷 征文投稿 世界海洋日为主题，举办英语征文比赛 提纲类 全国乙卷 征文投稿 英语学习方式图标的调查投稿 提纲类 北京卷 邀请信 邀请好友做一次关于英语写作的线上经验交流 提纲类 天津卷 视频文字稿 用英语为社团纳新活动录制一段短视频 提纲类 2021年 新高考全国卷 征文投稿 庆祝英文报创刊十周年投稿 提纲类 浙江卷 宣传稿 宣传学生国画作品展 提纲类 浙江卷 (1月) 发言稿 欢迎新西兰学生访校致辞 提纲类 全国甲卷 咨询信 咨询国外友人对中国传统文化的看法 提纲类 全国乙卷 发言稿 以 Be smart online learners为题的发言稿 提纲类 北京卷 道歉信 你因故不能赴约周末一起外出 提纲类 天津卷 征文投稿 介绍一个国内你喜欢或去过的地方 提纲类 写作指导 Para.1 开门见山，交代写信目的 Para.2 具体分条陈述问题，不要太多 Para.3 感谢对方，希望得到帮助 【素材宝库】 写作模板 Dear ______________, How are you doing these days? As ______________ is approaching, I find it still challenging to ______________. Thus, I am writing to you in the hope of seeking for help. Initially, I have trouble in ______________. What’s more, ______________is also very difficult for me to do. Furthermore, what troubles me most is that ______________. Would you please take the trouble to ______________? I do believe you can help me solve these puzzles. I would be greatly grateful to you if you could lend me a helping hand. Looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 常用表达 请求提供建议或行为支持  1. I am writing in the hope that you will be kind enough to offer me some detailed suggestions to improve my English writing. 恳请您不吝赐教，为我提供提升英语写作水平的具体建议。 2. Having been learning English for so many years, I have no difficulty in understanding reading materials of moderate levels. 学习英语多年，我能轻松读懂中等难度的阅读材料。 3. What bothers me is that despite my large vocabulary and my relatively good understanding of English grammar, I still fail to write beautiful sentences, let alone good articles. 最令我困扰的是，尽管拥有丰富的词汇量和相对扎实的英语语法基础，我仍难以写出优美的句子，更不用说完成出色的文章了。 4. I am really at a loss what to do to improve it. 对此实在不知该如何突破。 5. With the College Entrance Examination approaching, I am terribly pressed for time and in desperate need of your help. So your timely suggestions as specific as possible are highly appreciated. 高考日益临近，时间紧迫，亟需您的指点。若能获得详尽具体的建议，将不胜感激。 请求提供信息  6. I am Li Hua, who took the international flight BA793 of your airline company on June 3rd. 我是旅客李华，于6月3日乘坐贵公司BA793国际航班。 7. To be honest, I'm very content with your service during the journey. But I'm sorry to tell you that I lost a suitcase due to my carelessness. Therefore, I am writing to ask if you can help me find my suitcase back. 坦率说，我对旅程中的服务非常满意，但很抱歉告知您，由于我的疏忽不慎遗失了一个行李箱，特此致信恳请协助寻回。 8. My red suitcase is of medium size. With triangle navy blue patterns and a bright yellow belt attached to the handle, it's easy to recognize. 该行李箱为红色中型款式，配有深蓝色三角形图案，把手处系有明黄色绑带，辨识度较高。 9. There are many valuable articles in my suitcase, among which a customized pen is of great significance to me. 箱内有多件贵重物品，其中一支定制钢笔对我具有特殊意义。 10. Not only is it an expensive present, but it is also a witness to the friendship between my best friend and me. 它既是珍贵礼物，更是我与挚友友谊的见证。 11. For the sake of its precious value, I am banking on your assistance. Once you have any clues about it, please contact me at 1334S6 at your earliest convenience.     因物品价值重大，恳请全力协助寻回。若有任何线索，请即刻致电1334S6与我联系。 高考真题精讲 【2020▪全国III卷】 假定你是李华，你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。给外教Miss Evans写封邮件，请她帮忙指导。邮件内容包括： 1. 剧情简介； 2. 指导内容； 3. 商定时间地点。 注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 结束语已为你写好。 Dear Miss Evans, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【范文】Dear Miss Evans, How is everything going! I am writing in sincerity to ask you a favor regarding a play we adapted according to the textbook.  We’d like to combine your culture with ours by adapting the classic novel The Steamboat for a short English play. The play is set on a big storm after midnight, on the raft down the river navigation, we see a steamboat that is going to sink. We saved a scared boy. However, the adaption is quite a challenge. Having written the English script, we don’t want anything inappropriate to spoil the play. So would you please spare some time to review the draft script attached to this email and make necessary changes? If it is convenient, may I pay you a visit at your office next Tuesday to give you more details? Given your busy schedule, I’d be very appreciative if you offer to give some professional advice. Look forward to your early reply. Best regards! Yours truly, Li Hua 【导语】这是一篇应用文。李华和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧，需要给外教Miss Evans写邮件请求指导，内容包括剧情简介、指导内容和时间地点安排。 【详解】 词汇积累： 真诚地：in sincerity → sincerely 请求帮助：ask you a favor → seek your assistance 改编：adapt → reinterpret 经典小说：classic novel → literary masterpiece 背景设定在：is set on → takes place during 具有挑战性：quite a challenge → rather demanding 修改：make necessary changes → provide revisions 专业建议：professional advice → expert guidance 感激的：appreciative → grateful 句式拓展： 原句：Having written the English script, we don’t want anything inappropriate to spoil the play. 拓展句：After completing the English script, we are concerned that any cultural inaccuracies might compromise the quality of the performance. 【点睛】 【高分句型1】"I am writing in sincerity to ask you a favor regarding a play we adapted according to the textbook."（使用介词短语"regarding..."精确说明求助内容，体现正式性） 【高分句型2】"We’d like to combine your culture with ours by adapting the classic novel The Steamboat for a short English play."（通过"combine...with..."结构展示文化融合意识，体现改编的深度思考） 【高分句型3】"Having written the English script, we don’t want anything inappropriate to spoil the play."（使用现在分词完成式作状语，表达剧本完成后的担忧，自然引出求助需求） 【高分句型4】"Given your busy schedule, I’d be very appreciative if you offer to give some professional advice."（运用"Given..."让步状语，体现对老师时间的尊重，使请求更易被接受） 【2018▪11月浙江卷】 假定你是李华，乘坐FL753航班抵达伦敦后发现钱包遗失。请给航空公司写一封邮件说明情况并寻求帮助。内容包括： 1. 行程信息； 2. 钱包特征； 3. 联系方式。 注意： 1. 词数80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Sir or Madam, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【范文】 Dear Sir or Madam, I’m Li Hua, an exchange student from China. I took FL753 to London on November 2, 2018, and the moment I stepped off the plane I found my purse gone. It must have been left on the flight. It is a blue leather purse with over $1,000, my ID card and my passport in it. If you find any clue, please phone my host family at 123456789 or email me at lihua@hotmail.com. I would greatly appreciate your timely help. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】这是一篇应用文。李华乘坐航班抵达伦敦后发现钱包遗失，需要给航空公司写邮件说明情况并寻求帮助，内容包括行程信息、钱包特征和联系方式。 【详解】 词汇积累： 交换生：exchange student → international student 发现遗失：found my purse gone → realized my wallet was missing 遗落在航班上：left on the flight → misplaced aboard the flight 皮革钱包：leather purse → leather wallet 重要证件：ID card and passport → identification documents 线索：clue → information 及时帮助：timely help → prompt assistance 句式拓展： 原句：The moment I stepped off the plane I found my purse gone. 拓展句：Upon disembarking from the aircraft, I immediately discovered that my wallet was missing. 【点睛】 【高分句型1】"I took FL753 to London on November 2, 2018, and the moment I stepped off the plane I found my purse gone."（使用并列句结构，通过"the moment"强调时间紧迫性，清晰说明遗失发生的具体情境） 【高分句型2】"It must have been left on the flight."（运用情态动词"must have been"表示合理推测，语气肯定而不失礼貌） 【高分句型3】"It is a blue leather purse with over $1,000, my ID card and my passport in it."（使用with复合结构准确描述钱包特征和内容，信息完整具体） 【高分句型4】"I would greatly appreciate your timely help."（使用虚拟语气表达感激之情，显得正式而诚恳） 必背满分范文 1．（2025·吉林松原·期中）假定你是李华，负责组织班级科学展览活动，但遇到了一些问题。请给组织过该活动的Johnson同学写一封求助信，内容包括： 1.说明问题; 2.寻求建议。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Johnson, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Sincerely yours, Li Hua 【范文】                                                                             Dear Johnson, I hope this letter finds you well. I am currently organizing a science exhibition for our class, but I have encountered some difficulties, which puzzles us. Firstly, many students are unsure about how to present their projects effectively. Secondly, we are struggling to gather enough materials for the exhibition. Could you please share some advice on how to handle these issues? Your experience would be invaluable to us. Sincerely yours, Li Hua 【导语】这是一篇应用文。李华在组织班级科学展览活动时遇到困难，需要给有经验的Johnson同学写一封求助信，说明问题并寻求建议。 【详解】 词汇积累： 组织：organizing → coordinating 遇到困难：encountered some difficulties → faced some challenges 困惑：puzzles → perplexes 展示项目：present their projects → showcase their exhibits 收集材料：gather enough materials → acquire sufficient resources 宝贵建议：invaluable advice → extremely valuable guidance 句式拓展： 原句：Many students are unsure about how to present their projects effectively. 拓展句：A significant number of students lack confidence in demonstrating their scientific projects in an engaging and effective manner. 【点睛】 【高分句型1】"I hope this letter finds you well."（使用英文书信标准开头语，体现正式和礼貌） 【高分句型2】"I am currently organizing a science exhibition for our class, but I have encountered some difficulties, which puzzles us."（使用which引导的非限制性定语从句，补充说明困难带来的影响） 【高分句型3】"Firstly, many students are unsure about how to present their projects effectively."（通过"how to"不定式结构清晰指出具体问题所在） 【高分句型4】"Could you please share some advice on how to handle these issues?"（使用委婉的疑问句式提出请求，礼貌且得体） 2．（2025·荆荆襄宜·月考）假定你是李华，准备参加学校组织的英语即兴演讲(impromptu speech)比赛，请给外教 Jack 写封邮件求助，内容包括： (1)说明比赛要求； (2)请教演讲技巧； (3)表达你的感谢。 注意： (1)写作词数应为80左右； (2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 Dear Jack, I'm Li Hua from Class 3. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【范文】 Dear Jack, I'm li Hua from Class 3. I am writing to seek your help as I’ll participate in the school's English impromptu speech competition. The competition rules state that we must give a 3-minute speech on a randomly given topic with only 10minutes for preparation. Judges will closely assess our language proficiency, logical thinking, and how well we perform on stage. Given your outstanding expertise in public speaking, I really hope you can share some impromptu speaking tips with me, like how to quickly structure my speech logically, which expressions can make it more engaging, and how to conquer stage fright? Your guidance will be extremely valuable to me. Thank you so much in advance! Yours, Li Hua 【导语】这是一篇应用文。李华准备参加学校组织的英语即兴演讲比赛，需要给外教Jack写邮件求助，内容包括说明比赛要求、请教演讲技巧和表达感谢。 【详解】 词汇积累： 参加：participate in → take part in 随机给定：randomly given → randomly selected 语言能力：language proficiency → language competence 逻辑思维：logical thinking → coherent reasoning 舞台表现：perform on stage → stage presence 专业知识：outstanding expertise → professional knowledge 演讲技巧：speaking tips → presentation techniques 克服紧张：conquer stage fright → overcome nervousness 句式拓展： 原句：Judges will closely assess our language proficiency, logical thinking, and how well we perform on stage. 拓展句：The judges will rigorously evaluate multiple aspects including linguistic accuracy, coherence of thought, and overall delivery effectiveness. 【点睛】 【高分句型1】"The competition rules state that we must give a 3-minute speech on a randomly given topic with only 10 minutes for preparation."（使用that引导宾语从句，准确详细地说明比赛规则和要求） 【高分句型2】"Given your outstanding expertise in public speaking, I really hope you can share some impromptu speaking tips with me..."（运用"Given..."短语作原因状语，体现对对方专业能力的认可，使请求更合理） 【高分句型3】"...like how to quickly structure my speech logically, which expressions can make it more engaging, and how to conquer stage fright?"（通过并列疑问词结构具体列出需要指导的三个方面，让求助内容清晰明确） 【高分句型4】"Your guidance will be extremely valuable to me."（使用将来时表达对帮助价值的预期，体现真诚的期待） 3．（2025·河南·阶段考）假设你是李华，是光明中学的一名高三学生。今年高考英语学科阅读量加大，你的阅读能力较差，因此学习压力越来越大。请根据以下提示向你的外教Mr. Johnson求助： （1）英语学习的困难以及增加阅读量给自己带来的困扰； （2）希望得到他的指导和帮助。 （3）注意：词数为80左右，可以适当增加细节使行文连贯。 Dear Johnson, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua 【范文】 Dear Johnson, I am Li Hua, a senior high school student. I am writing to ask you to do me a favor. Faced with confusion in English study, could you please give me some advice/ suggestions on it? Recently, I am encountering some problems in English reading comprehension which trouble me a lot. Although I have tried all kinds of means to improve/solve it, like expanding my vocabulary and doing a large number of exercises, so far my efforts have ended up in failure. To make things worse, my mind often goes blank while reading English. All of the problems bring me great pressure. Thank you for your attention to my problems. I am anxious to get your help and terribly sorry for any inconvenience I have caused. Looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua. 【导语】这是一篇应用文。高三学生李华因高考英语阅读量增加而感到学习压力大，需要给外教Mr. Johnson写邮件求助，说明英语学习困难并希望获得指导。 【详解】 词汇积累： 遇到问题：encountering some problems → facing difficulties 困扰：trouble me a lot → cause me great distress 各种方法：all kinds of means → various methods 大量练习：a large number of exercises → extensive practice 以失败告终：ended up in failure → proved unsuccessful 大脑空白：mind often goes blank → often experience mental blocks 带来压力：bring me great pressure → create significant stress 造成不便：any inconvenience I have caused → any trouble this may cause 句式拓展： 原句：Although I have tried all kinds of means to improve it, like expanding my vocabulary and doing a large number of exercises, so far my efforts have ended up in failure. 拓展句：Despite having experimented with various improvement strategies such as vocabulary expansion and extensive practice exercises, I regrettably have not yet achieved the desired progress. 【点睛】 【高分句型1】"Faced with confusion in English study, could you please give me some advice/suggestions on it?"（使用过去分词短语"Faced with..."作状语，简洁说明求助背景，并通过疑问句式礼貌提出请求） 【高分句型2】"Although I have tried all kinds of means to improve/solve it, like expanding my vocabulary and doing a large number of exercises, so far my efforts have ended up in failure."（运用让步状语从句展示努力程度，并通过具体例子增强说服力） 【高分句型3】"To make things worse, my mind often goes blank while reading English."（使用"To make things worse"递进关系短语，强调问题的严重性） 【高分句型4】"I am anxious to get your help and terribly sorry for any inconvenience I have caused."（通过并列结构表达急切心情和歉意，体现礼貌和诚恳） 4．（2025·云南·月考）假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Tom上个月来到北京学习。七月份你将去北京参加暑期中学生英语演讲比赛 (speech contest)，你在资料搜集、语言运用等方面遇到了困难。请根据以下要点给Tom写一封电子邮件： 1.询问Tom的生活和学习情况； 2.谈谈你的困难并请Tom帮忙； 3.告诉Tom你打算赛后去看他。 注意: 1.词数80左右；  2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Tom, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【范文】 Dear Tom, How are you doing these days? As the English speech contest of middle school students is approaching, I find it still challenging to prepare for it. Thus, I am writing to you in the hope of seeking for help. Initially, I have trouble in collecting useful information. What’s more, using proper English word to express my thoughts is also very difficult for me to do. Furthermore, what troubles me most is that I really want to improve my spoken English, especially the pronunciation and intonation. Would you please take the trouble to give me some suggestions? I do believe you can help me solve these puzzles. I would be greatly grateful to you if you could lend me a helping hand. Looking forward to your early reply. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【导语】这是一篇应用文。李华将参加暑期中学生英语演讲比赛，在备赛过程中遇到困难，因此给在北京学习的美国朋友Tom写邮件求助，同时询问对方近况并表达赛后探望的意愿。 【详解】 词汇积累： 即将来临：is approaching → is drawing near 准备有挑战：challenging to prepare → difficult to get ready for 寻求帮助：seeking for help → asking for assistance 收集信息：collecting useful information → gathering relevant materials 表达思想：express my thoughts → articulate my ideas 改进口语：improve my spoken English → enhance my oral proficiency 发音语调：pronunciation and intonation → articulation and intonation patterns 给予建议：give me some suggestions → offer me some advice 感激不尽：greatly grateful → deeply thankful 及时回复：reply to me promptly → respond in a timely manner 句式拓展： 原句：Using proper English word to express my thoughts is also very difficult for me to do. 拓展句：I also struggle with selecting appropriate English vocabulary to accurately convey my ideas. 【点睛】 【高分句型1】"As the English speech contest of middle school students is approaching, I find it still challenging to prepare for it."（使用as引导时间状语从句，自然引出备赛背景和当前困境） 【高分句型2】"Thus, I am writing to you in the hope of seeking for help."（通过"in the hope of"短语委婉表达求助意图，体现书信的正式性） 【高分句型3】"Furthermore, what troubles me most is that I really want to improve my spoken English, especially the pronunciation and intonation."（运用主语从句强调最困扰的问题，并通过especially具体说明需要改进的方面） 【高分句型4】"Should you be kind enough to reply to me promptly, I would be highly appreciated."（使用倒装虚拟语气表达委婉请求，显得格外礼貌和正式） 5．（2025·河北唐县·月考）假定你是李华, 高考后想报考英语专业，但是你的口语太差，偶然的一个机会你从网上发现外籍教师Anna在线辅导英语口语。请根据以下要点写一封求助信，内容包括： 1．介绍自己的情况； 2．向外教求助； 3. 表示感谢并期盼回复。 注意：1．词数80左右； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Miss Anna, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【范文】 Dear Miss Anna, Leaning on the Internet that you help students online with oral English, I am writing to ask you for help. During the past ten years, I’ve learnt about 3,500 English words and some basic grammar. I am planning to major in English in college after graduating from high school. However, my oral English is so poor that I can’t communicate with others in English fluently. Therefore, I’m dying to improve my oral English. I would appreciate it if you could guide me and I’m looking forward to your early reply. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，李华高考后想报考英语专业，但是他的口语太差，偶然的一个机会从网上发现外籍教师Anna在线辅导英语口语。要求考生以李华的身份给外籍教师Anna写一封邮件，介绍现状并求助。 【详解】第一步：审题 体裁：应用文 时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时、现在进行时，少许现在完成时。 结构：总分法 总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。 要求： 1．介绍自己的情况； 2．向外教求助； 3. 表示感谢并期盼回复。 第二步:列提纲 help sb. with sth., oral English, ask for help, plan to do sth., major in English, communicate with sb., be dying to do sth., improve oral English, look forward to 第三步：连词成句 1. Leaning on the Internet that you help students online with oral English, I am writing to ask you for help. 2. I am planning to major in English in college after graduating from high school. 3. However, my oral English is so poor that I can’t communicate with others in English fluently. 4. Therefore, I’m dying to improve my oral English. 5. I would appreciate it if you could guide me and I’m looking forward to your early reply. 根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步：连句成篇 1. 表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including（供参考） 2. 表转折对比关系：However 3. 表因果关系：so…that…, Therefore 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。 【点睛】[高分句型1] Leaning on the Internet that you help students online with oral English, I am writing to ask you for help.（该句使用了现在分词短语作状语和宾语从句） [高分句型2] However, my oral English is so poor that I can’t communicate with others in English fluently.（使用了so… that…引导结果状语从句） [高分句型3] I would appreciate it if you could guide me and I’m looking forward to your early reply.（使用了“I would appreciate it if you could …(如果你能…我将不胜感激)”句型和并列句） 6．（2025·四川·开学考）假如你是李华，最近，你和好朋友Lisa的关系不好，让你比较迷茫。于是你写信向知音栏目主持人Tom求助。请你用英文写这封求助信。内容要点如下： 1 .影响你们友谊的具体事件或者原因。 2.你的感受。 3.求助的具体内容。 注意： 1. 词数80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Tom, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【范文】 Dear Tom, You are a celebrity in aiding those who are in trouble because of personal life and work. I'm writing to ask you of a favor and hope you will be kind enough to give me some instructions. Recently, Lisa, my best friend from my childhood, didn't treat me the way before. What made our relationship less close was an accidental argument on how to get on well with parents. We hold quite different opinions on that. Since then we have seldom spoken to each other, which really makes me sad and depressed. I am at such a loss over what I can do to make up and in need of your help. I will be extremely grateful if you could give me some advice. Looking forward to your early reply. Best wishes for you. Yours Li Hua 【分析】本篇书面表达属于求助信，要求考生给知音栏目主持人Tom写信，就如何处理好与好朋友Lisa的关系向他寻求帮助。 【详解】1.词汇积累 帮助：aid →help 最近、近期：recently →lately 争论、争吵：argument →quarrel 观点：opinion →view/idea 2.句式拓展 原句：Recently, Lisa, my best friend from my childhood, didn't treat me the way before. 拓展句：Recently, Lisa, who has been my best friend from my childhood, didn't treat me the way before. 【点睛】[高分句型1] You are a celebrity in aiding those who are in trouble because of personal life and work. (运用了who引导的限制性定语从句) [高分句型2] What made our relationship less close was an accidental argument on how to get on well with parents. (运用了what引导的主语从句和how引导的宾语从句) [高分句型3] I am at such a loss over what I can do to make up and in need of your help. (运用了what引导的宾语从句) 7．（2025·江苏南京·调研考）假定你是李华，下个月要参加北京外国语大学入学英语面试，请你发一封邮件向你校的外教Chris请教，内容包括： 1. 口语表达； 2. 面试技巧； 3. 注意事项。 注意：1. 词数80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Chris, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【范文】 Dear Chris, I’m Li Hua, a student in your class. I’m writing to consult you about my English admission interview by Beijing Foreign Studies University next month. Language proficiency is of vital importance for such an interview, so I’m in urgent need of your professional guidance in my oral English. Besides, any constructive advice on interview techniques will be highly appreciated. Finally, if there are any do’s and don’ts in terms of dressing, manners and so on, please do let me know. Looking forward to the reply at your earliest convenience. Heartfelt thanks! Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封邮件向外教请教关于参加北京外国语大学入学英语面试的建议及注意事项。 第一步：审题 体裁：应用文 时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时，部分一般将来时。 结构：总分法 总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。 要求： 1. 口语表达； 2. 面试技巧； 3. 注意事项。 第二步:列提纲 （重点词组） consult about; English admission interview; Beijing Foreign Studies University; proficiency is of vital; important; be in urgent need of; professional guidance; Besides; constructive advice; interview techniques; highly appreciated; Finally; in terms of; dressing; manners; and so on; looking forward to; reply; convenience; heartfelt. 第三步：连词成句 1. I’m writing to consult you about my English admission interview by Beijing Foreign Studies University next month. 2. Language proficiency is of vital importance for such an interview, so I’m in urgent need of your professional guidance in my oral English. 3.Besides, any constructive advice on interview techniques will be highly appreciated. 4. Finally, if there are any do’s and don’ts in terms of dressing, manners and so on, please do let me know. 5. Looking forward to the reply at your earliest convenience. 根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步：连句成篇（衔接词） 1.表文章结构顺序：Firstly/First, Secondly; And then, Finally, In the end, At last(供参考) 2.表并列补充关系：Besides; Additionally, moreover(供参考) 3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Some…,while others…, so…that…(供参考) 4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result(供参考) 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。 【点睛】 [高分句型1] Language proficiency is of vital importance for such an interview, so I’m in urgent need of your professional guidance in my oral English. (由so引导结果状语从句。) [高分句型2] Finally, if there are any do’s and don’ts in terms of dressing, manners and so on, please do let me know. (由if引导条件状语从句。) 8．（2025·四川泸县·期中）假定你是李华，你和你的同学决定要在紧张的学习之余，为高三生活拍摄英文纪录片。请你给外教Miss Evans写封邮件,请她帮忙指导，内容包括： 1.告知拍摄的具体计划与内容； 2.请她编写英文字幕； 3.询问对拍摄的建议。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 参考词汇：字幕subtitle；纪录片documentary Dear Miss Evans, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【范文】 Dear Miss Evans, How is everything going? I am writing to ask you to do me a favor. As Senior Three students，we are having a busy but very meaningful year. Therefore we intend to make a documentary in English for it. We have decided to focus on both our study and life. On the one hand, we will record some wonderful scenes in time; on the other hand, we are going to insist on videoing once a month to record our life. However, we find it demanding to write English subtitles. I would really appreciate it if you could offer us the English subtitles and give us some valuable suggestions. I am looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外教Miss Evans写封邮件，请她帮忙指导拍摄英文纪录片。 【解析】 第一步：审题 体裁：应用文 时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。 结构：总分法 总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。 要求： 1.告知拍摄的具体计划与内容； 2.请她编写英文字幕； 3.询问对拍摄的建议。 第二步:列提纲 （重点词组） do sb. a favor； intend to；decide to do；focus on； in time；insist on；look forward to 第三步：连词成句 1.I am writing to ask you to do me a favor. 2.As Senior Three students，we are having a busy but very meaningful year. 3.Therefore we intend to make a documentary in English for it. 4.We have decided to focus on both our study and life. 5.On the one hand, we will record some wonderful scenes in time; on the other hand, we are going to insist on videoing once a month to record our life. 6.However, we find it demanding to write English subtitles. 7. I would really appreciate it if you could offer us the English subtitles and give us some valuable suggestions. 8.I am looking forward to your reply. 根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步：连句成篇（衔接词） 1.表转折对比关系：However, On the one hand…,On the other hand… 2.表因果关系：Therefore 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰， 【点睛】 [高分句型1] On the one hand, we will record some wonderful scenes in time; on the other hand, we are going to insist on videoing once a month to record our life.(动词不定式作目的状语) [高分句型2] However, we find it demanding to write English subtitles.(it作形式宾语，真正的宾语是动词不定式) 9．（2025·湖北·阶段考）假定你是李华，你校即将举办“英文读书月”活动——阅读并写读书笔记。请你给外教Alex写一封邮件求助，内容包括： 1.介绍活动内容； 2.请他推荐英文书； 3.请教如何写读书笔记。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Alex, I'm writing to ask for your help. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【范文】 Dear Alex, I'm writing to ask for your help. Our school is planning to hold an event called English Reading Month, in which we are required to read an English book and take notes. I hope you can recommend an English book to me. Considering I'm not an advanced English learner, the book needs to be suitable for my level. It will be better if the book is about the life of teenagers. Meanwhile, I also feel confused about taking notes. Could you offer me some guidance? I'd appreciate it if you could reply to me soon. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外教Alex写封邮件，请他推荐英语阅读书籍并就写读书笔记给出建议。 【解析】第一步：审题 体裁：应用文 时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和少量现在进行时。 结构：总分法 总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。 要求： 1.介绍活动内容； 2.请他推荐英文书； 3.请教如何写读书笔记。 第二步:列提纲 （重点词组） ask for help，be required to，take notes，recommend，considering，be suitable for，Meanwhile，feel confused，offer sb. some guidance 第三步：连词成句 1. Our school is planning to hold an event called English Reading Month, in which we are required to read an English book and take notes. 2. Considering I'm not an advanced English learner, the book needs to be suitable for my level. 3. It will be better if the book is about the life of teenagers. 4. Meanwhile, I also feel confused about taking notes. 5. I'd appreciate it if you could reply to me soon. 根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）（供参考） 1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last 2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including, 3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that… 4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰， 【点睛】 [高分句型1] Our school is planning to hold an event called English Reading Month, in which we are required to read an English book and take notes.使用了介词+关系代词引导的定语从句 [高分句型2] I'd appreciate it if you could reply to me soon.使用了if引导的条件状语从句。 10．（2025·广西·开学考）假设你是李华，现就读于多伦多大学。请就你的室友Tom的不文明表现写信向好友David求助。内容包括： 1．不保持房间整洁； 2．休息时间大声播放音乐； 3．随意动用他人物品； 4．常带朋友到宿舍喝酒喧闹。 注意： 1．词数 80 左右； 2．可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯； 3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear David, I came to Canada last month and I’m studying in the University of Toronto. Now I have some problems with my roommate, Tom. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes. Yours, Li Hua 【范文】 Dear David, I came to Canada last month and I’m studying in the University of Toronto. I am writing to ask for your help because I am having some problems with my roommate, Tom. Tom is basically a good guy. But sometimes he doesn’t care much about his behavior. He seldom keeps the room clean and tidy, often leaving his things about. He plays very loud music during the rest time. At times, I find him using others’ daily things without permission. What’s worse, he often brings his friends here to drink, talking and laughing loudly. I have been trying to ask him not to do that, but he doesn’t listen to me. Would you be so kind as to give me some advice? Best wishes. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就室友Tom的不文明表现写信向好友David求助。 【详解】1.词汇积累 注意：care about→ take care 允许：permission→authorization 更糟糕的是：What’s worse→even worse 很少：seldom→rarely 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：He plays very loud music during the rest time. 拓展句：He plays very loud music during the rest time, which makes me annoyed. 【点睛】【高分句型1】I am writing to ask for your help because I am having some problems with my roommate, Tom.(运用because引导原因状语从句） 【高分句型2】What’s worse, he often brings his friends here to drink, talking and laughing loudly.(运用现在分词作状语) 16 / 23 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $