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备考2026高考英语应用文写作专练——建议信
一、相关词汇:
1.proposal n.提议;建议 2.suggest v. 建议,提议 3.advise vi.&v. 劝告;建议 4.suggestion/advice n. 建议
5.improve vi.&v.改善;改进;提高 6.improvement n.改进;改善;提高 7.practical adj.实际的,实用性的
8.useful adj.有用的;有益的 9.helpful adj.有帮助的;有用的10.appropriate adj.合适的,恰当的 11.concrete adj.具体的
12.advantageous adj.有利的,有益的 13.constructive adj.建设性的;积极的 14.concerning prep.关于
15.detail n. 细节;详情 16.advocate v.拥护,主张 17.approval n.赞成,同意 18.endorse v.赞同
19.optimistic adj.乐观的 20.theoretical adj.理论上的 21.stress/pressure n.压力
22.deal with great stress/pressure 应付巨大的压力23.relieve stress/pressure 减轻压力 24.be beneficial to 对…有好处
25.take my advice/ideas into account/consideration考虑我的建议/想法
26.be of great help 有很大的帮助 27.stick to/persist in 整神
28.offer some practical suggestions提出一些切实可行的建议 29.at sb.'s request/at the request of sb. 应某人的委求
30.share some advice with you 与你分享一些建议 31.maintain a good state of mind 保持良好的心态
32.pour out one's trouble to sb 向某人倾诉烦恼 33.build up your confidence 建点你的信心
34.make some recommendations about 提出一些美于……的建议 35.present one's opinions 发人盘见
二、精彩句式:
吸睛开头句
1.I have received your letter saying you plan to pay a visit to China for ten days next month.Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful for you.
我已经收到了你的来信,信上说你打算下个月来中国游玩十天。也许下面的建议对你有帮助。
2.I'm very glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to fit in with the new school life. Here are a few suggestions.
我很高兴收到你的来信。信上询问我如何适应新的学校生活。这里有一些建议。
3.I'm very glad to have received your e-mail, Now I'm writing to give you some advice on how to learn English well in high school.
我很高兴收到你的电子邮件。现在我写信就如何在高中学好英语给你一些建议。
4.With regard to the problem you mentioned in your last letter, my suggestions are as follows.
关于你上一封信中提到的问题,我的建议如下。
5.I am writing to offer you some advice on how to improve your spoken English
我写信是想就如何提高英语口语水平给你一些建议。
6.I have learned that you have some difficulty in...and I would like to give/offer you the following suggestions.
我得知你在……方面有些困难,我想给你提如下一些建议。
7.I'm writing to you to present what I think about the further improvement of our hotel so as to attract more clients.
我给你写信是想表达我对于进一步改善我们旅馆,以吸引更多顾客的想法.
靓点正文句
1.When it comes to such a situation, I would like to suggest that... For one thing... For another...What's more...
当涉及这种情况时,我建议………一方面……另一方面……而且….
2.As far as I'm concerned/From my point of view, it is a good idea to do... /it would be wise of you to do... Besides, I strongly advise you to do... Last but not least, you can...
就我而言/在我看来,做……是个好主意/你做……是明智的。此外,我强烈建议你做……最后但同样重要的是,你可以……
3.In my opinion/Personally, it would be wise to take the following action./I think it would be of great benefit /very beneficial if you...
我认为如果你……将会受益匪线在我看来,采取如下行动是明智的。
4.It's necessary for you to read some books about these places before you come to visit them with your own eyes. With more knowledge about these places, you will have a better understanding of Chinese history and culture.
在参观这些地方之前,你有必要读一些关于它们的书。获得了关于这些地方的更多的知识,你将会更好地理解中国的历史和文化。
5.As is known to all, vocabulary is of great importance. You should spend half an hour in the morning reciting words and reading texts aloud.
众所周知,词汇是非常重要的。你应该在早上花半个小时的时间背单词和大声朗读课文。
6.I seldom advise people what to do, but I feel I ought to let you know just what I think about this matter.
我很少劝人怎么做事,但我想我应该让你知道我对此事的看法
回眸结尾句
1.I hope these suggestions will be of use to you. Remember,where there is a will, there is a way.
我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住:有志者事竟成。
2.I sincerely hope my advice will be of some help to you, If there is more I can do to help, please let me know.
我真诚地希望我的建议对你有一些帮助。如果有更多我能帮忙的,请告诉我。
3.I will be always there for you if you need help.
如果你需要帮助,我会一直在你身边。
4.I will be glad if you take my advice/suggestions into consideration.
如果你能考虑我的建议,我将会很高兴。
5.I hope you will find my suggestions/advice helpful/useful/practical/beneficial.
我希望你认为我的建议有帮助/有用/实用/有益。
6.I hope you can take my advice into consideration. I would be ready to discuss this matter with you for further details.
我希望你可以考虑我的建议。我愿意和你进一步讨论此事的细节。
7.I hope that my suggestions are useful for your decision-making.
我希望我的建议能有助于你做决策。
8.I'm sure if you take my advice , you will become slimmer and healthier.
我确信如果你采纳我的建议,你会变得更苗条,更健康。
6.I seldom advise people what to do, but I feel I ought to let you know just what I think about this matter.
我很少劝人怎么做事,但我想我应该让你知道我对此事的看法
回眸结尾句
1.I hope these suggestions will be of use to you. Remember,where there is a will, there is a way.
我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住:有志者事竟成。
2.I sincerely hope my advice will be of some help to you, If there is more I can do to help, please let me know.
我真诚地希望我的建议对你有一些帮助。如果有更多我能帮忙的,请告诉我。
3.I will be always there for you if you need help.
如果你需要帮助,我会一直在你身边。
4.I will be glad if you take my advice/suggestions into consideration.
如果你能考虑我的建议,我将会很高兴。
5.I hope you will find my suggestions/advice helpful/useful/practical/beneficial.
我希望你认为我的建议有帮助/有用/实用/有益。
6.I hope you can take my advice into consideration. I would be ready to discuss this matter with you for further details.
我希望你可以考虑我的建议。我愿意和你进一步讨论此事的细节。
7.I hope that my suggestions are useful for your decision-making.
我希望我的建议能有助于你做决策。
8.I'm sure if you take my advice , you will become slimmer and healthier.
我确信如果你采纳我的建议,你会变得更苗条,更健康。
三、试题演练
1.假定你是李毕,你的美国笔友Jack来信告诉你他最近在学习方面遇到的问题并向你寻求建议。你了解到Jack的一位老师总是布置很多测试题,让他没有足够的时间学习其它科目;他平时有很多社交活动要参加,有时完不成作业。请你就他的问题给他回信,向他提供一些建议。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数
Dear Jack,
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I hope that my advice is helpful to you.Please write to me if you need any more help.
Yours,
Li Hua
思路点拨:本篇书面表达的体裁属于建议信。建议信是就某一问题给对方提出建议的书信。建议信可以写给个人,也可以写给某个组织或机构。写建议信时要注意:
1.合理安排建议信的结构,一般分为写信目的、具体建议、表达希望这几个部分;
2.建议信的语气要诚恳,让人易于接受,建议的内容要具体且合理;
3.熟练使用建议信的常用句型。
范文:
Dear Jack,
How are you? ①I'm sorry to hear your problem. I'm glad that you are willing to share your worries about your studies with me. Don't worry! ②I think I can offer you some advice.
First,③if I were you ,I would ④talk to the teacher about the tests and I think your teacher will understand. Also, you should ⑤put aside enough time to do your homework and delete some social activities from your calendar.⑥After all, in this period, studies come first. Besides, I think you can ⑦study with your friends after school and will work faster then.
I hope that my advice is helpful to you.Please write to me if you need any more help.
Yours,
Li Hua
范文评析:①表达同情 ②说明写作目的——提供建议 ③使用虚拟语气,假设自己遇到对方面临的问题会怎样做
④建议1:与老师谈一谈 ⑤建议2:留出足够的时间做作业,减少一些社交活动
⑥给出建议2的理由,让对方更易于接受建议 ⑦建议3:放学后与同学一起学习。给出的几条建议具体且可行。
⑥给出建议2的理由,让对方更易于接受建议 ⑦建议3:放学后与同学一起学习。给出的几条建议具体且可行。
亮点词句:
重要词汇:1.be willing to do sth 愿意做某事 2.share sth with sb 与某人分享某事 3.offer sb sth 给某人提供某物
4.put aside 留出(时间) 5.delete...from... 从...中删去 6.after all 毕竟 7.come first 放在首位
高级句型:
1.I'm glad that you are willing to share your worries about your studies with me.(that引导宾语从句)
我很高兴你愿意和我分享你在学习上的焦虑
2.First,if I were you ,I would talk to the teacher about the tests and I think your teacher will understand.(if引导虚拟条件句;省略that的宾语从句)
首先,如果我是你,我会和老师就测验的事谈一谈,我相信你的老师会理解的。
2.假定你是李华,你的美国朋友Andrew对中国文化很感兴趣。他目前在北京学习汉语希望你能就提高普通话(Mandarin)水平给他一些建议。请根据提示给他写封电子邮件:
1.表达给他提供帮助的意愿:
2.给出提高普通话水平的建议(至少两点);
3.祝他学习进步
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯
Dear Andrew,
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Yours,
Li Hua
思路点拨:本篇书面表达的体裁属于建议信,要求学生以李华的身份给美国朋友Andrew写一封电子邮件,就如何提高普通话(Mandarin)水平给他提供一些建议。结合要求,这封建议信可以采用三段式结构来写:
第一段:说明事由,道明意图,表示愿意为对方提高普通话水平提供帮助
第二段:陈述观点和建议,可以简单说明理由
第三段:表达鼓励与祝愿
范文:
Dear Andrew,
Knowing you're seeking advice on improving your Mandarin,I'm glad to help.
②Enchanting as Mandarin is, learning it is by no means an easy task, which requires patience and self-discipline. ③Therefore,it is necessary to create a study schedule and stick to it. Undoubtedly,listening and speaking are important skills in any language learning.In my view, it's important to ④listen to Mandarin as much as possible and practice speaking with native speakers.
⑤Hard work always pays off. I hope you can make much progress in learning.Mandarin. Whenever you need help, turn to me.
Yours,
Li Hua
范文评析:①首先交代了写信目的 ②亮点句,说明第一点建议的理由,句中的“by no means”表示强调
③衔接成分“Therefore”,“Undoubtedly”,In my view”的使用使句与句之间过渡自然、衔接流畅 ④给出的建议很具体⑤表示祝愿时,使用了高级表达“pay off”和“make progress in sth”
亮点词句:
重要词汇:1.be glad to do sth 乐意做某事 2.enchanting adj.迷人的;令人陶醉的 3.by no means 决不 4.stick to sth坚持某事
5.native speaker 母语使用者 6.pay off 成功;奏效;达到目的 7.turn to sb 向某人求助
高级句型:
1.Enchanting as Mandarin is, learning it is by no means an easy task, which requires patience and self-discipline.(as引导让步状语从句,此处使用了部分倒装;which引导非限制性定语从句)
虽然普通话很令人着迷,但学习普通话绝非易事,需要耐心和自律。
2.Whenever you need help, turn to me.(whenever引导让步状语从句)
无论你什么时候需要帮助,你都可以来找我。
5.exhausted adj.筋疲力尽的 6.out of breath 上气不接下气 7.breathe fresh air 呼吸新鲜空气 8.benefit from 从...中受益
高级句型:
2.Whenever you need help, turn to me.(whenever引导让步状语从句)
无论你什么时候需要帮助,你都可以来找我。
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