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01课标达标练
02核心突破练
03真题溯源练
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课标达标练
>01(上海市杨浦区20242025学年高三上学期12月模拟质量调研英语试卷)
Directions:Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是明启中学的学生李华,最近参加了一个研究性学习项目,在全体高三学生中开展了题为“高中生对
未米职业规划的认知与准备”的调查。根据下表调查结果,撰写调查报告,内容需包括:
1简要描述数据:
2分析原因:
3提出建议。
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高中生对未来职业规划的认知与准备
0%
40%
35%
30%
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20
15
0%
对来来肌业有明确知
横受过取业规划指导
参与过校外取业体装活神
>02(2023届上海市建平中学高三下学期三模考试英语试题)
Directions:Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
最近明启中学对教师是否会被人工智能取代这一话题开展了调查,调查结果如下图。假如你是该校高三学
生李华,请就此话题谈谈你的看法,写一篇150-180的作文,文章内容需涵盖:
教师是否会被人工智能取代
不能确定,
10%
是,34%
否,56%
1简要描述图表:
2你认为教师是否会被人工智能取代:
3你的理由。
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核心突破练
>01(上海市浦东新区2021届高三下学期第二次模拟英语)
某校针对高一新生进行了“拓展课”(extensive courses)的问卷调查。下面是拓展课选课原因的比例分布图。
请简要描述图表,并结合自己选课经历(1-2门拓展课),说明选择的原因。(注意:不要出现学校名字)
拓展课选课原因
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40
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20
10
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为考试做准备
发展个人兴趣爱好巩固加强课内知识拓展知识面
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>02(2025届上海市松江区高三下学期二模英语试卷)
你是新华中学学生,你校英文报正进行主题为My Favorite Cartoon Character的征文活动。请撰写征文,在
征文中:
1)表明你最喜欢的卡通角色(可参考下图或另选其他):
2)简述该角色最打动你的瞬间:
3)谈谈该角色对你的影响。
Ne Zha
Mulan
The Little Prince
Doraemon
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真题潮源练
(2015上海·高考真题)
学校即将举办“读书节”,目前正广泛征集“读书节”宜传册图片。假设你是该校学生潘阳,你已找到以下三幅
图片,决定给读书节组委会写一封信,推荐其中一幅,你的信须包括以下内容:
1.简单描述你想推荐的那幅图片:
2.阐述你用这幅图片宣传“读书节”的理由。
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第10讲 英语作文之图画图表类
目录
01 课标达标练
02 核心突破练
03 真题溯源练
· 01 (上海市杨浦区2024-2025学年高三上学期12月模拟质量调研英语试卷)
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是明启中学的学生李华,最近参加了一个研究性学习项目,在全体高三学生中开展了题为“高中生对未来职业规划的认知与准备”的调查。根据下表调查结果,撰写调查报告,内容需包括:
1.简要描述数据;
2.分析原因;
3.提出建议。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Report on High School Students' Career Planning Awareness
As a student at Mingqi High, I conducted a survey on “High School Students’ Awareness and Preparation for Future Career Planning.” The results showed that 40% of seniors have a clear career plan, 30% have received guidance, but only 20% have engaged in career-related activities.
Several factors could contribute to these findings. Firstly, the lack of comprehensive career guidance programs may hinder students’ ability to develop clear career plans. Secondly, limited opportunities for extracurricular career activities restrict students’ exposure to various career paths.
To address these issues, I recommend that schools enhance their career guidance programs by offering more regular and comprehensive workshops. Additionally, encouraging students to participate in extracurricular career activities can broaden their horizons and provide valuable insights. Collaboration with local businesses for internships and mentoring programs can further enrich students’ practical experiences and help them make informed career decisions. By strengthening career support systems and increasing practical exposure, we can better prepare students for their future careers.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于图表写作。假设你是明启中学的学生李华,最近参加了一个研究性学习项目,在全体高三学生中开展了题为“高中生对未来职业规划的认知与准备”的调查,要求考生根据调查结果,撰写调查报告。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
组织:conduct→organize
显示:show→present
解决:address→solve
建议:recommend→suggest
2. 句式拓展
合并为复合句
原句:To address these issues, I recommend that schools enhance their career guidance programs by offering more regular and comprehensive workshops. Additionally, encouraging students to participate in extracurricular career activities can broaden their horizons and provide valuable insights.
拓展句:To address these issues, I recommend that schools not only enhance their career guidance programs by offering more regular and comprehensive workshops but also encourage students to participate in extracurricular career activities, which can broaden their horizons and provide valuable insights.
【点睛】[高分句型1]The results showed that 40% of seniors have a clear career plan, 30% have received guidance, but only 20% have engaged in career-related activities.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2]To address these issues, I recommend that schools enhance their career guidance programs by offering more regular and comprehensive workshops.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
· 02 (2023届上海市建平中学高三下学期三模考试英语试题)
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
最近明启中学对教师是否会被人工智能取代这一话题开展了调查,调查结果如下图。假如你是该校高三学生李华,请就此话题谈谈你的看法,写一篇150-180的作文,文章内容需涵盖:
1.简要描述图表;
2.你认为教师是否会被人工智能取代;
3.你的理由。
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【答案】 Recently, our school conducted a survey on the topic of whether teachers will be replaced by artificial intelligence. 10% of respondents were unsure. 34% said they thought teachers would be replaced by artificial intelligence, while 56% said no.
Personally speaking, teachers won’t be replaced by artificial intelligence. Because in addition to teaching students knowledge, teachers have a more important mission, which is to educate people. In terms of educating people, teachers possess qualities that cannot be replaced by artificial intelligence. Teachers are rich in feelings and wisdom, knowing how to imperceptibly into the excellent quality of education.
Besides, artificial intelligence is only a partial replacement of teachers’ labor, and cannot replace the role of teachers. This is because although robots have communication functions such as dialogue and movement, they are far from the rich and delicate feelings of human beings.
That is to say, the possibility of teachers being replaced is very small, and teachers become one of the jobs that artificial intelligence is difficult to replace.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于图表作文,最近明启中学对教师是否会被人工智能取代这一话题开展了调查,调查结果如下图。假如你是该校高三学生李华,请就此话题谈谈你的看法,写一篇150-180的作文,文章内容需涵盖:1.简要描述图表;2.你认为教师是否会被人工智能取代; 3.你的理由。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
取代:replace→supersede
拥有:possess→take possession of
重要的:important→significant
也就是说:that is to say=in other words
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Teachers are rich in feelings and wisdom, knowing how to imperceptibly into the excellent quality of education.
拓展句:Teachers are rich in feelings and wisdom, who know how to imperceptibly into the excellent quality of education.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Because in addition to teaching students knowledge, teachers have a more important mission, which is to educate people. (运用了because引导的原因状语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Teachers are rich in feelings and wisdom, knowing how to imperceptibly into the excellent quality of education. (运用了现在分词作状语)
· 01 (上海市浦东新区2021届高三下学期第二次模拟英语)
某校针对高一新生进行了“拓展课”(extensive courses)的问卷调查。下面是拓展课选课原因的比例分布图。请简要描述图表,并结合自己选课经历(1-2门拓展课),说明选择的原因。(注意:不要出现学校名字)
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【答案】Recently, a survey on extensive courses has been made to find the reasons why students choose certain courses. And below are the results.
As the chart shows, about 50 percent students surveyed choose a certain course in order to develop their own interest while 40 percent are to enlarge their knowledge. Less than 10 percent choose a course with the aim of consolidating their subject knowledge and preparing for exams.
From my personal experience, I can see why. I once chose Robot Programming as my extensive course. That is because I have showed interest in computer and robots since in elementary school. I hold the firm belief that interest is the best teacher, and my future career is sure to be combined with programming. Therefore, Robot Programming became my extensive course.
【分析】本文属于图表作文,要求对拓展课选课原因的调查结果进行描述,并且结合自身的经历说明其原因。
【详解】1.词汇积累
旨在:in order to→ with the aim of
对……感兴趣:be interested in→ show interest in
小学:primary school→ elementary school
认为:believe→ hold the belief
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I once chose Robot Programming as my extensive course. That is because I have showed interest in computer and robots since in elementary school.
拓展句:The reason why I once chose Robot Programming as my extensive course is that I have showed interest in computer and robots since in elementary school.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Recently, a survey on extensive courses has been made to find the reasons why students choose certain courses. (运用了why引导的定语从句)
[高分句型2] I hold the firm belief that interest is the best teacher, and my future career is sure to be combined with programming. (运用了that引导的同位语从句)
· 02 (2025届上海市松江区高三下学期二模英语试卷)
你是新华中学学生,你校英文报正进行主题为My Favorite Cartoon Character的征文活动。请撰写征文,在征文中:
1)表明你最喜欢的卡通角色(可参考下图或另选其他);
2)简述该角色最打动你的瞬间;
3)谈谈该角色对你的影响。
Ne Zha
Mulan
The Little Prince
Doraemon
…
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【答案】 My Favorite Cartoon Character
Among all the cartoon characters, my favorite one is Ne Zha. I’m deeply attracted by his rebellious spirit and his courage to face difficulties.
The moment that touches me most is when Ne Zha decides to sacrifice himself to save his parents and the people in his hometown. Despite being misunderstood and facing great pressure, he still chooses to shoulder the responsibility.
Ne Zha has had a profound impact on me. He teaches me to be brave in the face of challenges and to never give up easily. Whenever I encounter difficulties in my studies or daily life, I think of Ne Zha’s spirit and gain the strength to move forward. In a word, Ne Zha is not only a cartoon character to me, but also a role model that encourages me to be a better person.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以新华中学学生的身份,撰写一篇征文介绍自己最喜欢的卡通角色、打动自己的瞬间及该角色对自己产生的影响。
【详解】1.词汇积累:
吸引:attract→draw
牺牲:sacrifice→give up one’s life
面对:face→be faced with
获得:gain→attain
2.句式拓展:
同义句
原句:The moment that touches me most is when Ne Zha decides to sacrifice himself to save his parents and the people in his hometown.
拓展句:What touches me most is the moment when Ne Zha decides to sacrifice himself to save his parents and the people in his hometown.
【点睛】【高分句型 1】The moment that touches me most is when Ne Zha decides to sacrifice himself to save his parents and the people in his hometown.(运用了that引导的定语从句修饰the moment以及when引导的表语从句)
【高分句型 2】Whenever I encounter difficulties in my studies or daily life, I think of Ne Zha’s spirit and gain the strength to move forward.(运用了whenever引导的时间状语从句)
(2015·上海·高考真题)
学校即将举办“读书节”,目前正广泛征集“读书节”宣传册图片。假设你是该校学生潘阳,你已找到以下三幅图片,决定给读书节组委会写一封信,推荐其中一幅,你的信须包括以下内容:
1. 简单描述你想推荐的那幅图片;
2. 阐述你用这幅图片宣传“读书节”的理由。
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【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,
Since the Reading Festival is around the corner, I’m writing to recommend a picture which can be used in the brochure to remind the students of the pleasure of reading.
In the picture, three students are sitting at the table, discussing heatedly what they have just read. It seems that they have had a lot of fun through the discussion. Though it is admitted that reading is mostly a personal activity which needs quietness and concentration, as far as I’m concerned, it can also be a sharing experience when the same book is being appreciated. Just imagine that you have read a terrific detective story with fascinating and intricate plots. You are so amazed by the genius of the writer and you can’t help sharing it with your classmates or best friends, who turn out to have been deeply impressed as well. The moment you mention the book, the passion and enthusiasm about the story will explode which can never be gained on your own. My ideal atmosphere of reading is just like that, through which you can not only appreciate the content by yourself, but also have the pleasure of sharing the plots or opinions with your peers, which will ultimately enhance your understanding of the book. To sum up, the reason of my recommendation is quite simple and apparent that reading, instead of being dull and isolating, can be full of participation and common interest.
I sincerely hope that you will take my suggestion into consideration and I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Pan Yang
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给读书节组委会写一封信,推荐自己找到的三幅“读书节”宣传册图片中的一副。
【详解】1.词汇积累
将……考虑在内:take…into consideration→take…into account
真诚地:sincerely→genuinely
提高:enhance→promote
错综复杂的:intricate→complicated
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Just imagine that you have read a terrific detective story with fascinating and intricate plots.
拓展句:Just imagine that you have read a terrific detective story which has fascinating and intricate plots.
【点睛】【高分句型1】In the picture, three students are sitting at the table, discussing heatedly what they have just read.(运用了现在分词短语作伴随状语和what引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】You are so amazed by the genius of the writer and you can’t help sharing it with your classmates or best friends, who turn out to have been deeply impressed as well.(运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句)
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