Unit 4 Accidents（写作突破专项训练）英语Join in外研剑桥英语版六年级上册

Unit4提纲挈领法讲述事故 01 写作方法指引-原文指路 When I was eight, I had an accident with my bike. （引出事故背景） I broke my leg and my right arm. I was in hospital for four weeks. （事故的结果及心情） 02 写作方法指引-提纲挈领法 Introduction: 引出事故背景（时间、地点、人物、活动） Main Body: 描述事故发生的前因和过程 Conclusion: 概括事故的结果及人物的心情 03写作方法指引-示例写作方法指引-示例 Yesterday afternoon, Amy was on holiday with her family in the park. （引出事故背景）She rode her bike happily. Suddenly, she fell off her bike and hurt her left foot. Her mother put a bandage around her foot first and then took her to the hospital. （描述事故发生的前因和过程）The doctor said she needed to stay in bed for a few days. Amy couldn't play with her friends, so she was very sad. （事故的结果及心情） 01 基础知识精讲-句型 1. 介绍事故发生的时间、地点和人物 参考词汇：时间类（yesterday afternoon 昨天下午；last year 去年；last week 上周等）；地点类（park 公园；beach 沙滩；village 乡村；school 学校等）；人物类（I 我；Amy 艾米；my friend 我的朋友；my family 我的家人等）；活动类（go to... 去……；be on holiday 在度假；play football 踢足球；ride a bike 骑自行车等）。 参考句型： 时间 + 人物 + went to + 地点. 例如：Yesterday afternoon, Amy went to the park.（昨天下午，艾米去了公园。） 时间 + 人物 + was on holiday + 地点. 例如：Last year, Linda was on holiday with her parents in the sea. （去年，琳达和父母在海边度假。） 时间 + 人物 + 活动 + 地点. 例如：Last week, I played football at school.（上周，我在学校踢足球。） 2. 描述事故发生的前因和过程 参考词汇： 动作类（ride a bike 骑自行车；fall off 摔倒；cut...on... 被……割伤；trip over 被……绊倒；break... 摔断……等）；物品类（broken bottle 破碎的瓶子；stone 石头；bike 自行车；football 足球等）；感受类（hurt 受伤；painful 疼痛的；scared 害怕的等）。 参考句型： 人物 + 动作 + 物品. 然后 + 事故发生. 例如：She rode her bike happily. Suddenly, she fell off her bike.（她开心地骑着自行车。突然，她从自行车上摔了下来。） - 人物 + 动作 + 地点 + and + 事故发生. 例如：My friend ran near the campsite and tripped over a stone.（我的朋友在营地附近跑，然后被石头绊倒了。） - 人物 + cut + 身体部位 + on + 物品. 例如：I cut my foot on a broken bottle.（我被一个破碎的瓶子割伤了脚。） 3. 概括事故的结果及人物的心情 参考词汇： 处理类（take...to the hospital 带……去医院；put a bandage around... 用绷带包扎……；put a pad on... 用护垫包扎……等）；结果类（stay in bed 卧床；be in hospital 住院；can't... 不能……等）；心情类（sad 难过的；unhappy 不开心的；worried 担心的；happy 开心的等）。 参考句型： 人物 + take + 受伤者 + to the hospital. 例如：Her mother took her to the hospital.（她的妈妈带她去了医院。） 受伤者 + stay in bed / be in hospital + for + 时间. 例如：Amy had to stay in bed for a few days.（艾米不得不卧床几天。） 受伤者 + can't + 活动 + and + 心情. 例如：Linda couldn't go swimming for two weeks. She was very sad. （琳达两周不能去游泳。她非常难过。） 02 基础知识精讲-语法 特殊语法知识：一般过去时 解析： 一般过去时表示过去某个时间里发生的动作或状态，常和表示过去的时间状语（如yesterday, last week, last year等）连用。动词要用过去式，规则动词的过去式一般在词尾加 -ed（如：play - played；look - looked），不规则动词的过去式需要特殊记忆（如：go - went；fall - fell；hurt - hurt）。 提分练 用所给动词的适当形式填空。 1. Yesterday, I ______ (ride) a bike in the park. 2. She ______ (fall) off the bike and ______ (hurt) her leg. 3. Last week, they ______ (go) to the beach. 参考解析 1. rode（ride的过去式是rode） 2. fell（fall的过去式是fell）；hurt（hurt的过去式还是hurt） 3. went（go的过去式是went） 模拟写作提升1 看这个表格，里面有一个家庭的信息。写一篇关于这个家庭的短文。你需要介绍自己、家庭成员以及他们的工作。 要求： 1.书写规范，正确使用标点符号。 2.语言表达流畅。 3.不少于 50 词。 回答以下问题，然后写一篇关于你自己经历的事故的短文： Where did you go? What did you do? What happened to you? Who took you to the hospital? 参考句型 1. Last week, I went to the beach with my parents. 2. I went snorkelling in the sea. But I cut my foot on a broken bottle. 3. My dad took me to the hospital quickly. 参考词汇 beach（沙滩）, go snorkelling（去潜泳）, cut my foot（割伤我的脚）, broken bottle（破碎的瓶子）, take me to the hospital（带我去医院）, get better（好转）, happy（开心的） 范文1： Last week, I went to the beach with my parents. I went snorkelling in the sea. （引出事故背景）The water was clear and I saw many beautiful fish. But I cut my foot on a broken bottle. It was a deep cut and it hurt a lot. My dad took me to the hospital quickly. The nurse put a bandage on my foot. （描述事故发生的前因和过程） After a week, I got better. I was happy to play on the beach again. （事故的结果及心情） 模拟写作提升2 根据表格提示，写一篇短文。 时间 地点 活动 事故情况 后续处理 Last month School Play football Fell and broke my right arm Teacher took me to hospital 参考句型 1. Last month, I was at school. 2. I played football with my classmates during PE class. Unluckily, I fell and broke my right arm. 3. My teacher took me to hospital at once. 参考词汇 school（学校） play football（踢足球） PE class（体育课） fall（摔倒） break my right arm（摔断我的右臂） take me to hospital（带我去医院）be in hospital（住院）miss classes（耽误课程）worried（担心的） 范文2： Last month, I was at school. I played football with my classmates during PE class. （引出事故背景） We were having a great time. Unluckily, I fell and broke my right arm. It hurt so much that I cried. My teacher took me to hospital at once. I was in hospital for a week. I missed many classes and was worried about my studies. （描述事故发生的前因和过程） But my friends came to see me and helped me with my homework. （事故的结果及心情） 四、武汉汉阳区（真题作文） 根据以下提示写一篇短文：你和朋友去乡村游玩，朋友在营地附近被石头绊倒，膝盖受伤。 参考句型 1. Last year, I went to a village with my friend. 2. We set up a campsite there. My friend ran near the campsite and tripped over a stone. 3. I put a pad on his knee and then we went to the nearby clinic. 参考词汇 village（乡村）, campsite（营地）, trip over a stone（被石头绊倒）, hurt his knee（伤到他的膝盖）, put a pad（用护垫包扎）, clinic（诊所）, stay in the tent（待在帐篷里）, unhappy（不开心的） 范文3 Last year, I went to a village with my friend. We set up a campsite there. （引出事故背景）The village was very beautiful with green hills around. My friend ran near the campsite and tripped over a stone. He hurt his knee badly. I put a pad on his knee and then we went to the nearby clinic. The doctor said he should stay in the tent and rest. My friend couldn't go hiking with me, so he was unhappy. （描述事故发生的前因和过程） But we told stories to each other in the tent and had a good time too. （事故的结果及心情） 6 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$