内容正文:
高频文体10 建议信
近五年考情分析
年份
卷区
体裁
话题
命题形式
2025年
全国一卷
建议信
对外交提出的“Fun at my school”和“Guess who I am”两个选项做出选择
提纲类
全国二卷
咨询信
咨询外交介绍加拿大体育运动的文章进展
提纲类
浙江卷1月
发言稿
发表关于在校园内用手机拍摄短视频的现象的演讲稿
提纲类
北京卷
建议信
给参加联合国倡议征集活动的好友提建议
提纲类
天津卷
推荐信
在论坛交流上围绕“人类文明音像资料收录”提出推荐
提纲类
2024年
新高考I和II卷
告知信
分享在公园上了一堂美术课经历
提纲类
全国甲卷
发言稿
以Development of Transport in China为题的发言稿
图标类
北京卷
建议信
对好友介绍中国的发展成就提出建议
提纲类
天津卷
发言稿
“低碳校园,从我做起”英语主题的演讲稿
提纲类
浙江卷1月
征文投稿
推荐一项适合课间开展的运动
提纲类
上海卷
安慰信
在“排忧解难”专栏回复校友父母不容许自己做饭
提纲类
2023年
新高考全国卷
建议信
提出随机分组存在的问题并给建议
提纲类
全国甲卷
征文投稿
以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿
提纲类
全国乙卷
征文投稿
用英语描述学习一项新技能的经历,及从中获得的体验和感受
提纲类
浙江卷1月
报道
报道“认识我们身边的植物”活动
提纲类
北京卷
建议信
为以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动提供建议
提纲类
天津卷
申请信
申请参加“中国工坊” 活动
提纲类
2022年
新高考全国卷
邀请信
邀请外教做访谈
提纲类
浙江卷
邀请信
校图书馆新开设“小组学习室”
邀请外国留学生一同体验
提纲类
浙江卷 (1月)
回忆经历
回忆中国-爱尔兰文化节
提纲类
全国甲卷
征文投稿
世界海洋日为主题,举办英语征文比赛
提纲类
全国乙卷
征文投稿
英语学习方式图标的调查投稿
提纲类
北京卷
邀请信
邀请好友做一次关于英语写作的线上经验交流
提纲类
天津卷
视频文字稿
用英语为社团纳新活动录制一段短视频
提纲类
2021年
新高考全国卷
征文投稿
庆祝英文报创刊十周年投稿
提纲类
浙江卷
宣传稿
宣传学生国画作品展
提纲类
浙江卷 (1月)
发言稿
欢迎新西兰学生访校致辞
提纲类
全国甲卷
咨询信
咨询国外友人对中国传统文化的看法
提纲类
全国乙卷
发言稿
以 Be smart online learners为题的发言稿
提纲类
北京卷
道歉信
你因故不能赴约周末一起外出
提纲类
天津卷
征文投稿
介绍一个国内你喜欢或去过的地方
提纲类
写作指导
Para.1
开门见山,给出建议的基本内容,提示要写的是建议信
Para.2
提出的建议不应仅是简单的做法陈述,更要包含支撑其成立的理据。请结合原因分析、目的阐释或效果预测来进行说明,以增强建议的可信度与可行性
Para.3
结尾表达希望建议被采纳,期待能有预期效果,或以及愿意提供更多帮助的想法。
【素材宝库】
写作模板
Dear_______,
I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to ______________ (引出对方需要建议的主题).
Here are a few suggestion(引出作者的建议). First, It is important to ______________. Then, it also helps to ______________. Besides, it should be a good idea to ______________. You can also ______________.
(可以根据要求用不同的句式提出建议,如下)
As to ______________ , I suggest ______________ (需要具体到某一方面). In addition, ______________ (其他的建议). I’m sure ______________ (预测可能的结果,给对方以行为的信心和决心).
I hope ______________ (表达愿望).
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
常用表达
给友人或同学提建议
1. I’m more than glad to learn that a Chinese Culture Day activity will be held in your school.
我很高兴得知贵校将举办中国文化日活动。
2. It is a good opportunity for you to learn more about Chinese culture.
这是一个很好的机会,让你更多地了解中国文化。
3. First, a paper-cutting exhibition is a good choice.
首先,剪纸展是个不错的选择。
4. As a traditional Chinese art, paper cutting covers varieties of themes like plants, animals, legends and so on, which is a vivid reflection of Chinese folk culture.
剪纸作为中国传统艺术,涵盖了植物、动物、传说等多种题材,是中国民间文化的生动反映。
5. Besides, holding a Chinese calligraphy competition seems to be another wise option, for it can arouse people’s interest, which is of significance in promoting the communication between Chinese and Americans.
此外,举办中国书法比赛似乎是另一个明智的选择,因为它可以引起人们的兴趣,这对促进中美交流具有重要意义。
6. Additionally, lectures about Chinese history, architecture, poems, or even food are sure to arrest the attention of those keen on Chinese culture.
此外,有关中国历史、建筑、诗歌甚至食物的讲座肯定会吸引那些热衷于中国文化的人的注意力。
给大众或陌生人提建议
7. I am rather willing to offer you my suggestions for perfecting our library and increasing its popularity.
谨就完善图书馆建设、提升其影响力提出几点建议,望能有所助益。
8. Firstly, it benefits a lot to diversify the categories of books and organize more reading-related lectures, thus enabling students to make proper choices and stimulate our reading interest.
首先,丰富藏书种类并举办更多读书讲座大有益处。这既能帮助学生甄选合适读物,亦可激发阅读兴趣。 9. Secondly, more spacious room along with comfortable seats should be designed to provide better reading experience.
其次,应规划更宽敞的阅读空间并配备舒适座椅,以提供更优质的阅读体验。
10. Also, why not hold meaningful activities like donating second-hand books from students for the children in poverty-stricken areas, which can greatly reduce the degree to which resources are wasted.
此外,何不组织捐赠二手书籍给贫困地区儿童这类有意义的活动?此举既能极大减少资源浪费,又能践行社会责任。
高考真题精讲
【2025▪北京卷】
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。联合国正面向全球青少年开展倡议征集活动。你的外国好友Jim打算参加,为此发来邮件,就倡议内容询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复,内容包括:
1. 提出的建议;
2. 建议的理由。
提示词:倡议proposal
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【2024▪北京卷】
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的外国好友Jim准备给其校报的Asia Today栏目投稿。得知今年新中国成立75周年,他打算重点介绍中国的发展成就,发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复,内容包括:
1. 建议投稿内容;
2. 就以上建议简要说明理由。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【2023▪北京卷】
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim正在策划一次以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动,他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复,内容包括:
1. 活动形式;
2. 活动内容。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【2023▪新高考全国卷】
假定你是李华,外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组,让大家课后练习口语,你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件,内容包括;
1. 说明问题;
2. 提出建议。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右:
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
必背满分范文
1.(2025·湖南常德·月考)假定你是李华,你的笔友Tom来信说,因为学习忙、锻炼少,他最近经常生病这影响了他的学习。请你根据以上提示,给他写一封信,要点包括:
1. 锻炼的重要性;
2. 提出锻炼的建议。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Tom,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
2.(2025·浙江杭州·期中)假如你是李华,你的美国朋友Jim要参加你校广播站播音员的面试,他来信向你征求建议。请你写封回信,内容包括:
1. 写信目的;
2. 提出建议;
3. 祝愿期盼。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式作答。
Dear Jim,
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
3.(2025·河南郑州·月考)假如你是李华,你的美国朋友Mike准备参加学校举办的汉语语言知识比赛,希望你给他一些课外汉语学习的建议,请你据此给他写一封邮件。
要求:字数80词,开头结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Mike,
How is it going?
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
4.(2025·河北衡水·月考)假定你是李华,你的外国朋友Jessie写信给你,向你倾诉她深受不良生活习惯的困扰,请你根据下列要点给她写一封建议信。内容包括:
1.不良生活习惯的危害;
2.你的建议,如定期锻炼,保证睡眠等;
3.你的祝愿。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 信的开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jessie,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5.(2025·河北省唐县·月考)假如你是李华,某校英文歌曲合唱团的一员,你的指导老师Mr. Jenkins安排你们近期排练一首英文歌Auld Lang Syne《友谊地久天长》作为春节联欢会的节目,但是你觉得他选的歌曲不合适,请向他写一封信表达想法。要点包括:
1. 提出观点并陈述理由;
2. 给出建议。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Jenkins,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
6.(2025·江西萍乡·开学考)假设你是李华,你的英国朋友Susan在交友方面有些困难。根据下面提示给她写一封信。
1.要交朋友首先要做一个朋友;
2.要和朋友同甘共苦;患难之中的朋友才是真朋友;
3.友谊需要时间和投入。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Susan,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
7.(2025·杭州·月考)假定你是李华,外教Chris计划于下周六组织一次春游活动(spring outing),现面向全班同学征集活动建议。请你给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 具体活动;
2. 你理由。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
8.(2025·四川泸县·期中)假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Tom最近来中国某中学交换学习,他来信告诉你他不知道如何学好中文,请你给他回一封信,内容包括以下要点:
1. 写信的目的;
2. 具体建议:多用中文交流,提高口语和听力水平;大量阅读,增加词汇量;写中文日记,学以致用;
3. 表达个人期待。
注意:词数100词左右;可适当增加细节,使行文流畅。
an exchange student交换生 spoken Chinese 口语
Dear Tom,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
9.(2025·河南·调研考)假定你是李华。得知你的新同学Mike因为不习惯中餐,经常以零食代饭。请你给他写一封电子邮件。内容包括:
1.指出以零食代餐的危害;
2.提出建议。
注意: 1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mike,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
10.(2025·广西·月考)假如你是李华,你的英国笔友Mary想知道如何保持健康。请你结合以下建议,就How to keep healthy这个话题给她写一封信。
1.合理、健康的饮食;
2. 适当的锻炼;
3.充足的睡眠和休息。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
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高频文体10 建议信
近五年考情分析
年份
卷区
体裁
话题
命题形式
2025年
全国一卷
建议信
对外交提出的“Fun at my school”和“Guess who I am”两个选项做出选择
提纲类
全国二卷
咨询信
咨询外交介绍加拿大体育运动的文章进展
提纲类
浙江卷1月
发言稿
发表关于在校园内用手机拍摄短视频的现象的演讲稿
提纲类
北京卷
建议信
给参加联合国倡议征集活动的好友提建议
提纲类
天津卷
推荐信
在论坛交流上围绕“人类文明音像资料收录”提出推荐
提纲类
2024年
新高考I和II卷
告知信
分享在公园上了一堂美术课经历
提纲类
全国甲卷
发言稿
以Development of Transport in China为题的发言稿
图标类
北京卷
建议信
对好友介绍中国的发展成就提出建议
提纲类
天津卷
发言稿
“低碳校园,从我做起”英语主题的演讲稿
提纲类
浙江卷1月
征文投稿
推荐一项适合课间开展的运动
提纲类
上海卷
安慰信
在“排忧解难”专栏回复校友父母不容许自己做饭
提纲类
2023年
新高考全国卷
建议信
提出随机分组存在的问题并给建议
提纲类
全国甲卷
征文投稿
以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿
提纲类
全国乙卷
征文投稿
用英语描述学习一项新技能的经历,及从中获得的体验和感受
提纲类
浙江卷1月
报道
报道“认识我们身边的植物”活动
提纲类
北京卷
建议信
为以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动提供建议
提纲类
天津卷
申请信
申请参加“中国工坊” 活动
提纲类
2022年
新高考全国卷
邀请信
邀请外教做访谈
提纲类
浙江卷
邀请信
校图书馆新开设“小组学习室”
邀请外国留学生一同体验
提纲类
浙江卷 (1月)
回忆经历
回忆中国-爱尔兰文化节
提纲类
全国甲卷
征文投稿
世界海洋日为主题,举办英语征文比赛
提纲类
全国乙卷
征文投稿
英语学习方式图标的调查投稿
提纲类
北京卷
邀请信
邀请好友做一次关于英语写作的线上经验交流
提纲类
天津卷
视频文字稿
用英语为社团纳新活动录制一段短视频
提纲类
2021年
新高考全国卷
征文投稿
庆祝英文报创刊十周年投稿
提纲类
浙江卷
宣传稿
宣传学生国画作品展
提纲类
浙江卷 (1月)
发言稿
欢迎新西兰学生访校致辞
提纲类
全国甲卷
咨询信
咨询国外友人对中国传统文化的看法
提纲类
全国乙卷
发言稿
以 Be smart online learners为题的发言稿
提纲类
北京卷
道歉信
你因故不能赴约周末一起外出
提纲类
天津卷
征文投稿
介绍一个国内你喜欢或去过的地方
提纲类
写作指导
Para.1
开门见山,给出建议的基本内容,提示要写的是建议信
Para.2
提出的建议不应仅是简单的做法陈述,更要包含支撑其成立的理据。请结合原因分析、目的阐释或效果预测来进行说明,以增强建议的可信度与可行性
Para.3
结尾表达希望建议被采纳,期待能有预期效果,或以及愿意提供更多帮助的想法。
【素材宝库】
写作模板
Dear_______,
I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to ______________ (引出对方需要建议的主题).
Here are a few suggestion(引出作者的建议). First, It is important to ______________. Then, it also helps to ______________. Besides, it should be a good idea to ______________. You can also ______________.
(可以根据要求用不同的句式提出建议,如下)
As to ______________ , I suggest ______________ (需要具体到某一方面). In addition, ______________ (其他的建议). I’m sure ______________ (预测可能的结果,给对方以行为的信心和决心).
I hope ______________ (表达愿望).
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
常用表达
给友人或同学提建议
1. I’m more than glad to learn that a Chinese Culture Day activity will be held in your school.
我很高兴得知贵校将举办中国文化日活动。
2. It is a good opportunity for you to learn more about Chinese culture.
这是一个很好的机会,让你更多地了解中国文化。
3. First, a paper-cutting exhibition is a good choice.
首先,剪纸展是个不错的选择。
4. As a traditional Chinese art, paper cutting covers varieties of themes like plants, animals, legends and so on, which is a vivid reflection of Chinese folk culture.
剪纸作为中国传统艺术,涵盖了植物、动物、传说等多种题材,是中国民间文化的生动反映。
5. Besides, holding a Chinese calligraphy competition seems to be another wise option, for it can arouse people’s interest, which is of significance in promoting the communication between Chinese and Americans.
此外,举办中国书法比赛似乎是另一个明智的选择,因为它可以引起人们的兴趣,这对促进中美交流具有重要意义。
6. Additionally, lectures about Chinese history, architecture, poems, or even food are sure to arrest the attention of those keen on Chinese culture.
此外,有关中国历史、建筑、诗歌甚至食物的讲座肯定会吸引那些热衷于中国文化的人的注意力。
给大众或陌生人提建议
7. I am rather willing to offer you my suggestions for perfecting our library and increasing its popularity.
谨就完善图书馆建设、提升其影响力提出几点建议,望能有所助益。
8. Firstly, it benefits a lot to diversify the categories of books and organize more reading-related lectures, thus enabling students to make proper choices and stimulate our reading interest.
首先,丰富藏书种类并举办更多读书讲座大有益处。这既能帮助学生甄选合适读物,亦可激发阅读兴趣。 9. Secondly, more spacious room along with comfortable seats should be designed to provide better reading experience.
其次,应规划更宽敞的阅读空间并配备舒适座椅,以提供更优质的阅读体验。
10. Also, why not hold meaningful activities like donating second-hand books from students for the children in poverty-stricken areas, which can greatly reduce the degree to which resources are wasted.
此外,何不组织捐赠二手书籍给贫困地区儿童这类有意义的活动?此举既能极大减少资源浪费,又能践行社会责任。
高考真题精讲
【2025▪北京卷】
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。联合国正面向全球青少年开展倡议征集活动。你的外国好友Jim打算参加,为此发来邮件,就倡议内容询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复,内容包括:
1. 提出的建议;
2. 建议的理由。
提示词:倡议proposal
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【范文】Dear Jim,
I’m glad to hear you’re participating in the UN Proposal Campaign! Here are my suggestions.
First, focus on climate changes. Rising temperatures and extreme weather affect everyone, especially the youth. You could propose global school programs to teach eco-friendly habits like recycling or planting trees. Such initiatives empower students to drive change locally.
Second, advocate mental health support. Academic pressure is widespread. Suggest establishing online platforms where teens can share stories and access professional guidance. This builds a supportive community across borders.
Both topics address urgent global issues and highlight youth’s role in solving them. I believe your voice will resonate!
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【导语】这是一篇应用文。李华需要回复外国好友Jim的邮件,就联合国倡议征集活动提供建议并说明理由。
【详解】
词汇积累:
参加:participating in → taking part in
气候变化:climate changes → global warming
极端天气:extreme weather → severe weather conditions
环保习惯:eco-friendly habits → environmentally conscious practices
回收利用:recycling → waste recycling
倡导:advocate → promote
学业压力:academic pressure → educational stress
在线平台:online platforms → digital platforms
专业指导:professional guidance → expert advice
跨境社区:community across borders → international network
句式拓展:
原句:Rising temperatures and extreme weather affect everyone, especially the youth.
拓展句:The increasing global temperatures and frequent occurrence of extreme weather events have significant impacts on people worldwide, particularly the younger generation.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】You could propose global school programs to teach eco-friendly habits like recycling or planting trees.(使用不定式作目的状语,具体说明了建议内容)
【高分句型2】Suggest establishing online platforms where teens can share stories and access professional guidance.(运用where引导的定语从句,清晰地描述了平台的功能)
【高分句型3】Both topics address urgent global issues and highlight youth’s role in solving them.(使用并列结构,强调了建议主题的重要性和青年的作用)
【高分句型4】I believe your voice will resonate!(使用简短有力的感叹句,表达了对Jim参与效果的信心)
【2024▪北京卷】
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的外国好友Jim准备给其校报的Asia Today栏目投稿。得知今年新中国成立75周年,他打算重点介绍中国的发展成就,发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复,内容包括:
1. 建议投稿内容;
2. 就以上建议简要说明理由。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【范文】
Dear Jim,
It’s great to hear you’re planning to write about China’s achievements on the occasion of the 75th anniversary of the founding of this country. Here are a few suggestions for your article.
To begin with, talk about China’s economic growth and technological advancements, which are the highlights in the past few decades. Then, projects like the Belt and Road Initiative make a good topic to discuss because it showcases China’s determination to build a shared future with the world. In addition, you can also mention China’s role in helping solving global issues such as the global warming, offering a more comprehensive view.
Looking forward to reading your article!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写。外国好友Jim准备给其校报的Asia Today栏目投稿。得知今年新中国成立75周年,他打算重点介绍中国的发展成就,要求考生给他回复邮件,就此给予他建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
很好的:great →wonderful
成就:achievement→ accomplishment
建议:suggestion →advice
此外:In addition → what’s more
2.句式拓展
句式变换
原句:It’s great to hear you’re planning to write about China’s achievements on the occasion of the 75th anniversary of the founding of this country.
拓展句:It’s great to hear what you’re planning to write about is China’s achievements on the occasion of the 75th anniversary of the founding of this country.
【点睛】【高分句型1】To begin with, talk about China’s economic growth and technological advancements, which are the highlights in the past few decades.(运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Then, projects like the Belt and Road Initiative make a good topic to discuss because it showcases China’s determination to build a shared future with the world.(运用了because引导的原因状语从句)
【2023▪北京卷】
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim正在策划一次以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动,他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复,内容包括:
1. 活动形式;
2. 活动内容。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【范文】
Dear Jim,
Hearing that you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Green Beijing” and need my help, I am writing to offer you my suggestions.
I think you can carry out this activity in an interactive and experiential manner, which means students can participate and have a better understanding of “Green Beijing” through getting involved in different activities by themselves. You can showcase garbage classification on site, plant trees and publicize sharing economy, which will all fit into the theme of “Green Beijing”.
Hopefully, you will get some inspiration from my suggestions. Wish you success.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给好友Jim策划的“绿色北京”社团活动给出一些建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议:suggestion→tip
提供:offer→provide
开展:carry out→conduct
主题:theme→topic
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:Hearing that you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Green Beijing” and need my d help, I am writing to offer you my suggestions.
拓展句:Since you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Green Beijing” and need my help, I am writing to offer you my suggestions.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Hearing that you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Green Beijing” and need my help, I am writing to offer you my suggestions. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] I think you can carry out this activity in an interactive and experiential manner, which means students can participate and have a better understanding of “Green Beijing” through getting involved in different activities by themselves. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
【2023▪新高考全国卷】
假定你是李华,外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组,让大家课后练习口语,你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件,内容包括;
1. 说明问题;
2. 提出建议。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右:
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【范文】
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3. I think it’s not a good idea to randomly pair up students for the spoken English training after class. The reasons are as follows.
To begin with, randomly pairing up students may lead to unbalanced language abilities within the groups. This can hinder the progress of students as the more advanced one may dominate the conversation, leaving little room for the other students to improve. Besides, students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with someone who they don’t get along with or have difficulty communicating with.
My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners. This way, everyone can feel more comfortable practicing and improving their spoken English together.
Thank you for considering my suggestion.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇是应用文写作,要求考生给外教写一封邮件,告诉他将学生随机分为两人一组,让大家课后练习口语,你认为这样分组存在问题。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
首先:to begin with → first of all
提高:improve → progress
建议:suggestion → advice
选择:choose → select
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners.
拓展句:My suggestion is that we are supposed to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
This can hinder the progress of students as the more advanced one may dominate the conversation, leaving little room for the other students to improve.(运用了现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2]
Besides, Students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with someone who they don’t get along with or have difficulty communicating with.(运用了省略句和who引导定语从句)
必背满分范文
1.(2025·湖南常德·月考)假定你是李华,你的笔友Tom来信说,因为学习忙、锻炼少,他最近经常生病这影响了他的学习。请你根据以上提示,给他写一封信,要点包括:
1. 锻炼的重要性;
2. 提出锻炼的建议。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Tom,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
【范文】
Dear Tom,
I’m sorry to hear that you have studied so hard that you have no time to do any exercise, which led to sickness and-did harm to your learning. It is well-acknowledged that exercise is of benefit to our physical health as well as mental health. Doing sports can build up our bodies, thus helping us stay energetic and fit. Moreover, we may become more contented, confident and determined while working out. To fully enjoy these benefits, here are some tips for you.
First, choose the sport that interests you most and suits you best. Just find a form of physical activity that you enjoy and make it a part of your routine. Second, make preparations such as stretching your body to prevent injuries. Lastly, find some good workout partners. That way, it’s more likely that you’ll exercise regularly.
I would be very pleased to see you have a stronger body.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。笔友Tom来信说,因为学习忙、锻炼少,最近他经常生病这影响了他的学习。要求考生给他写信告诉他锻炼的重要性以及提出锻炼的建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
导致:lead to→cause
健康的:fit→ healthy
此外:moreover→besides
贴士/建议:tip→ suggestion
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句: Second, make preparations such as stretching your body to prevent injuries.
拓展句: Second, make preparations such as stretching your body, which can prevent injuries.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m sorry to hear that you have studied so hard that you have no time to do any exercise, which led to sickness and-did harm to your learning. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】It is well-acknowledged that exercise is of benefit to our physical health as well as mental health.(运用了it作形式主语,that引导主语从句)
2.(2025·浙江杭州·期中)假如你是李华,你的美国朋友Jim要参加你校广播站播音员的面试,他来信向你征求建议。请你写封回信,内容包括:
1. 写信目的;
2. 提出建议;
3. 祝愿期盼。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式作答。
Dear Jim,
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【范文】
Dear Jim,
I hope this letter finds you well. I was delighted to receive your letter seeking advice about your upcoming interview for the position of announcer of the school radio station. Here are a few tips to help you shine:
First, research the station’s style and programs beforehand. Showing familiarity with their work highlights your genuine interest. Next, prepare a brief, engaging self-introduction that emphasizes your strengths, like clear pronunciation or teamwork skills. A portfolio of any past broadcasting experience or related projects is a plus. Additionally, practice answering common questions like “Why do you want to join us?” to stay confident. Finally, dress neatly, smile warmly, and maintain eye contact to leave a positive impression.
Good luck with your interview! I can’t wait to hear your voice on air soon!
Best regards,
Li Hua
【导语】这是一篇应用文。要求考生给要参加学校广播站播音员面试的美国朋友Jim写封回信,给一些建议。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
寻求:seek → ask for
强调:highlight → stress
此外:additionally → in addition
保持:maintain → keep
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Showing familiarity with their work highlights your genuine interest.
拓展句:If you show that you are familiar with their work, it can highlight your genuine interest.
【点睛】【高分句型 1】I was delighted to receive your letter seeking advice about your upcoming interview for the position of announcer of the school radio station. (运用了现在分词短语seeking advice作后置定语)
【高分句型 2】Next, prepare a brief, engaging self-introduction that emphasizes your strengths, like clear pronunciation or teamwork skills. (运用了that引导的定语从句)
3.(2025·河南郑州·月考)假如你是李华,你的美国朋友Mike准备参加学校举办的汉语语言知识比赛,希望你给他一些课外汉语学习的建议,请你据此给他写一封邮件。
要求:字数80词,开头结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Mike,
How is it going?
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【范文】
Dear Mike,
How is it going? As for how to improve your Chinese, such tips as the following I think may be of great help to you.
First, read books as often as possible,which will surely enrich you knowledge.
What’s more, I do recommend to listen to news reports, and watch films when you are free. Last but not least, you should take every opportunity to practise your spoken Chinese by communicating with others. Meanwhile, it is also a great way to further your understanding of the Chinese culture.
I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】这是一篇应用文。李华需要给美国朋友Mike写邮件,就汉语学习提供建议。
【详解】
词汇积累:
提高汉语:improve your Chinese → enhance your Chinese proficiency
建议:tips → suggestions
丰富知识:enrich your knowledge → broaden your understanding
推荐:recommend → suggest
新闻报道:news reports → news broadcasts
利用机会:take every opportunity → seize every chance
练习口语:practise your spoken Chinese → practice oral Chinese
加深理解:further your understanding → deepen your comprehension
句式拓展:
原句:As for how to improve your Chinese, such tips as the following I think may be of great help to you.
拓展句:Regarding ways to enhance your Chinese proficiency, I believe the following suggestions could be very beneficial.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】First, read books as often as possible, which will surely enrich your knowledge.(使用which引导的非限制性定语从句,说明阅读的重要性)
【高分句型2】What's more, I do recommend to listen to news reports, and watch films when you are free.(运用强调动词do recommend,加强了建议的语气)
【高分句型3】Last but not least, you should take every opportunity to practise your spoken Chinese by communicating with others.(使用by引导的方式状语,提出了具体的实践方法)
【高分句型4】Meanwhile, it is also a great way to further your understanding of the Chinese culture.(运用形式主语it,强调了文化理解的重要性)
4.(2025·河北衡水·月考)假定你是李华,你的外国朋友Jessie写信给你,向你倾诉她深受不良生活习惯的困扰,请你根据下列要点给她写一封建议信。内容包括:
1.不良生活习惯的危害;
2.你的建议,如定期锻炼,保证睡眠等;
3.你的祝愿。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 信的开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jessie,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【范文】
Dear Jessie,
Sorry to hear that you are bothered by some bad life habits, which will surely make you worn out and do harm to your physical and mental well-being. The following are some tips on how to break these habits.
First of all, adjust your lifestyle to have a balanced diet and enough sleep, which is of critical significance for you to stay dynamic. Also of equal importance is to work out regularly. Only in this way can you not only keep yourself in shape but also get refreshed. Besides, to change yourself for the better, self-discipline really matters/counts.
For your health and future, take action straight away!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外国朋友写一封建议信,帮他解决不良生活习惯的困扰,内容包括:1.不良生活习惯的危害;2你的建议,如定期锻炼,保证睡眠等;3.你的祝愿。
1.词汇积累
困扰:bother→trouble
疲惫:worn out→exhausted
重要:be of critical significance→be very significant
保持活力:stay dynamic→stay energetic
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句: Adjust your lifestyle to have a balanced diet and enough sleep,which is of critical significance for you to stay dynamic.
拓展句: Adjust your lifestyle to have a balanced diet and enough sleep,which is of critical significance for you to stay dynamic,if you feel exhausted from time to time.
【高分句型1】Sorry to hear that you are bothered by some bad life habits,which will surely make you worn out and do harm to your physical and mental well-being.(运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Only in this way can you not only keep yourself in shape but also get refreshed..(运用了only+状语引导部分倒装)
5.(2025·河北省唐县·月考)假如你是李华,某校英文歌曲合唱团的一员,你的指导老师Mr. Jenkins安排你们近期排练一首英文歌Auld Lang Syne《友谊地久天长》作为春节联欢会的节目,但是你觉得他选的歌曲不合适,请向他写一封信表达想法。要点包括:
1. 提出观点并陈述理由;
2. 给出建议。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Jenkins,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【范文】
Dear Mr. Jenkins,
I’m Li Hua from the school English song choir. Regarding the song chosen for the Spring Festival party, I’m writing to express my opinions and suggestions.
Firstly, I’m more than glad and grateful that you have been making efforts to select an appropriate program. However, I’m afraid Auld Lang Syne is not a good choice for its melody. In China, the Spring Festival has been a symbol of reunion and festivity, whose atmosphere should be happy and joyful. What’s more, the performers and audience may be immersed in an ocean of sorrow when appreciating Auld Lang Syne.
Therefore, a song full of happiness and joy can be a better choice. Time permitting, a play reflecting students’ daily life composed by ourselves can leave a deep impression.
I would appreciate it if you could take my suggestion into consideration. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】这是一篇应用文。作为英文歌曲合唱团成员,李华需要给指导老师Mr. Jenkins写信,就春节联欢会的歌曲选择提出不同意见和建议。
【详解】
词汇积累:
合唱团:choir → singing group
表达意见:express my opinions → share my views
选择节目:select an appropriate program → choose a suitable performance
旋律:melody → tune
象征:symbol → representation
团聚:reunion → gathering
节日气氛:festivity → celebratory atmosphere
沉浸在悲伤中:immersed in sorrow → filled with sadness
考虑建议:take my suggestion into consideration → consider my proposal
留下深刻印象:leave a deep impression → make a lasting impact
句式拓展:
原句:In China, the Spring Festival has been a symbol of reunion and festivity, whose atmosphere should be happy and joyful.
拓展句:The Spring Festival, which symbolizes family reunion and celebration in Chinese culture, should maintain a cheerful and joyous atmosphere.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Firstly, I’m more than glad and grateful that you have been making efforts to select an appropriate program.(使用现在完成进行时,表达对老师持续付出的感谢)
【高分句型2】However, I’m afraid Auld Lang Syne is not a good choice for its melody.(委婉地提出不同意见,使用"I'm afraid"保持礼貌)
【高分句型3】What’s more, the performers and audience may be immersed in an ocean of sorrow when appreciating Auld Lang Syne.(运用比喻修辞"an ocean of sorrow",生动地描述了歌曲可能带来的情绪影响)
【高分句型4】Time permitting, a play reflecting students’ daily life composed by ourselves can leave a deep impression.(使用独立主格结构和过去分词作定语,提出了具体的替代建议)
6.(2025·江西萍乡·开学考)假设你是李华,你的英国朋友Susan在交友方面有些困难。根据下面提示给她写一封信。
1.要交朋友首先要做一个朋友;
2.要和朋友同甘共苦;患难之中的朋友才是真朋友;
3.友谊需要时间和投入。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Susan,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【范文】
Dear Susan,
I am sorry to know that you are having trouble in making friends. However, the situation is easy to change if you take my advice. Here are some tips to help you.
To begin with, why not be a friend first if you want to make friends? In addition, wouldn‘t it be a good idea if you share happiness and sorrow with your friend? Just as a saying goes, “A friend in need is a friend indeed.” Last but not least, it would be a good idea if you put your heart into making friends. It is wellknown to us all that friendship calls for time and effort.
I hope you will find these ideas useful.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友苏珊写信寻求交友方面的建议。
【详解】 1. 词汇积累
建议:advice →tips
悲伤:sadness →sorrow
需要:need →call for
此外:besides →in addition
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Putting your heart into making friends would be a good idea.
拓展句:It would be a good idea if you put your heart into making friends.
【点睛】 【高分句型1】 However, the situation is easy to change if you take my advice. Here are some tips to help you.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
【高分句型2】 It is wellknown to us all that friendship calls for time and effort.(运用了it作形式主语,that引导主语从句)
7.(2025·杭州·月考)假定你是李华,外教Chris计划于下周六组织一次春游活动(spring outing),现面向全班同学征集活动建议。请你给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 具体活动;
2. 你理由。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【范文】
Dear Chris,
I’m glad to hear that we’ll have a spring outing next Saturday.
I suggest we go to the botanical garden. There, we can admire various plants and learn about different species, which is both educational and relaxing. Also, we can have a picnic in the garden. It will be a great chance for us to enjoy the outdoors and communicate with each other.
I’m looking forward to the activity.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的建议信。要求考生给外教Chris写封信,就其计划于下周六组织一次春游活动一事给出自己的建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的:glad→ delighted
建议:suggest→ advise
各种各样的:various→ a variety of
机会:chance→ opportunity
2.句式拓展
合并句子
原句:Also, we can have a picnic in the garden. It will be a great chance for us to enjoy the outdoors and communicate with each other.
拓展句:Also, we can have a picnic in the garden, which will be a great chance for us to enjoy the outdoors and communicate with each other.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m glad to hear that we’ll have a spring outing next Saturday.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】There, we can admire various plants and learn about different species, which is both educational and relaxing.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
8.(2025·四川泸县·期中)假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Tom最近来中国某中学交换学习,他来信告诉你他不知道如何学好中文,请你给他回一封信,内容包括以下要点:
1. 写信的目的;
2. 具体建议:多用中文交流,提高口语和听力水平;大量阅读,增加词汇量;写中文日记,学以致用;
3. 表达个人期待。
注意:词数100词左右;可适当增加细节,使行文流畅。
an exchange student交换生 spoken Chinese 口语
Dear Tom,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【范文】
Dear John,
I’m your schoolmate Li Hua. I have learned that you have difficulty learning Chinese, and I would like to give you some advice on this.
Firstly, listen to Chinese as often as possible. The first step in learning a new language is to get accustomed to the pronunciation. Secondly, devote time to memorizing characters. Characters are to Chinese what words are to English. Spend at least half an hour memorizing characters every day. Thirdly, read a lot. You can read Chinese newspapers and magazines that interest you.
I hope these suggestions will be helpful to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】这是一篇应用文。李华需要给英国交换生Tom回信,就如何学好中文提供建议。
【详解】
词汇积累:
有困难:have difficulty → struggle with
建议:advice → suggestions
尽可能经常:as often as possible → regularly
适应:get accustomed to → become familiar with
发音:pronunciation → sounds
花时间:devote time to → dedicate time to
记忆汉字:memorizing characters → learning characters
阅读:read a lot → do extensive reading
有帮助的:helpful → beneficial
句式拓展:
原句:Characters are to Chinese what words are to English.
拓展句:Just as words are fundamental to English, characters serve as the building blocks of the Chinese language.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】I have learned that you have difficulty learning Chinese, and I would like to give you some advice on this.(使用并列句,既表达了了解情况,又表明了写信目的)
【高分句型2】The first step in learning a new language is to get accustomed to the pronunciation.(运用不定式作表语,强调了语言学习的第一步)
【高分句型3】Characters are to Chinese what words are to English.(使用"A is to B what C is to D"的类比结构,生动地说明了汉字的重要性)
【高分句型4】You can read Chinese newspapers and magazines that interest you.(运用that引导的定语从句,给出了具体的阅读建议)
9.(2025·河南·调研考)假定你是李华。得知你的新同学Mike因为不习惯中餐,经常以零食代饭。请你给他写一封电子邮件。内容包括:
1.指出以零食代餐的危害;
2.提出建议。
注意: 1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mike,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【范文】
Dear Mike,
Learning that you are not used to the Chinese meals at school and that you have been eating snacks as a replacement, I’m worried that they couldn’t supply enough nutrition and energy, which would be very bad both physically and academically for you.
I am wondering whether you have noticed that our school provides delicious bread and pizza for breakfast. You can buy more and save them for lunch. In the evening, you can go home with me. Surrounded by a big family, you’ll find it much easier to get used to Chinese food. Please take my invitation seriously.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给新同学Mike写一封电子邮件指出以零食代餐的危害并提出建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
提供:supply→offer注意到:notice→note美味的:delicious→tasty习惯:get used to→get accustomed to
2.句式拓展
同意句
原句:Surrounded by a big family, you’ll find it much easier to get used to Chinese food.
拓展句:When you are surrounded by a big family, you’ll find it much easier to get used to Chinese food.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Learning that you are not used to the Chinese meals at school and that you have been eating snacks as a replacement, I’m worried that they couldn’t supply enough nutrition and energy, which would be very bad both physically and academically for you. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句、that引导的宾语从句和现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2] I am wondering whether you have noticed that our school provides delicious bread and pizza for breakfast. (运用了whether引导的宾语从句和that引导的宾语从句)
10.(2025·广西·月考)假如你是李华,你的英国笔友Mary想知道如何保持健康。请你结合以下建议,就How to keep healthy这个话题给她写一封信。
1.合理、健康的饮食;
2. 适当的锻炼;
3.充足的睡眠和休息。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
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【范文】
Dear Mary,
I am very glad to learn that you want to know how to keep healthy. So I am writing to offer you some suggestions.
To begin with, it is a good idea to keep a healthy and balanced diet. You know, we are what we eat. A variety of food can provide us with different nutrients that our body needs. What’s more, we should also take exercise regularly. As the saying goes, life lies in movement. Last but not least, we ought to get enough rest and sleep, which will be good for our body.
I hope you will find these suggestions useful.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生就How to keep healthy这个话题给英国笔友Mary写一封信。
1.词汇积累
高兴的:glad →delighted
健康的:healthy →fit
建议:suggestion →advice
首先:To begin with →Firstly
2.句式拓展
句式转换
原句:So I am writing to offer you some suggestions.
拓展句:So I am writing to offer you some suggestions, which I hope can be beneficial for you.
【点睛】[高分句型1] A variety of food can provide us with different nutrients that our body needs. (运用了that引导的定语从句)
[高分句型2] Last but not least, we ought to get enough rest and sleep, which will be good for our body. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
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