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Unit 1 The secrets of happiness Developing ideas - Reading for writing ① 1 Free talk What can you do to make yourself happy? get good grades play with friends chat with family eat an ice cream help classmates with math help the old cross the road 2 Look and say 3 What is the passage mainly about? A young woman grew her hair and sold it to the shop. A young man grew his hair and helped kids with cancer. A. a disease B. a hobby People with cancer may lose the hair. Look and guess 4 Read and answer What’s the type of the passage? A story. A review. A book report. 5 What aspects are mentioned(提及) in the passage? Setting 背景 Character 角色 Event 事件 6 What aspects are mentioned(提及) in the passage? Feeling 感受 7 What aspects are mentioned(提及) in the passage? Opinion 观点 Happiness springs(涌现) from doing good and helping others. Plato 柏拉图 8 What aspects are mentioned(提及) in the passage? Opinion 观点 Feeling 感受 Setting 背景 Character 角色 Event 事件 9 Read and learn How to write a setting(背景)? environment time place The park is usually crowded on a sunny day. Green trees and grass jumped into your eyes making you relaxed. There are many things for you to entertain, such as the tree house, swings and a football. Lovely animals like squirrels and dogs also have a pleasant time here. What a wonderful park! The wind was strong. Zhou Jian’s hat blew off. His long hair waved in the air. 10 Read and learn How to write an event? Tip: We can write in time order to make the story logical. 11 Read and learn How to write about feelings? Day after day, hope grew together with hair. grow hope grow hair metaphor隐喻 Metaphor(隐喻) 是一种修辞手法,通过直接比较两个本质上不同的事物来传递深层含义,强调它们的相似性。它不依赖“像”“如”(like/as)等比喻词,而是直接将一物说成另一物,从而创造生动的画面或抽象概念的具体化。 12 Read and learn How to write about feelings? metaphor隐喻 1. His nice words light up my life. 2. The little girl’s kindness planted flowers in every heart she touched. 3. The child’s laughter wrote a song of summer. nice words sunshine plant flowers plant kindness a song of summer laughter Have a try! 13 Read and learn How to write about opinions? He remembered the words of Plato: “happiness springs from doing good and helping others.” Tip: We can use quotes(引言) to support our ideas. As a saying goes, ... As someone once said, ... According to someone’s words, ... 14 Read and learn Quotes about helping others Roses in her hand, the flavor in mine. 赠人玫瑰,手有余香。 True happiness comes from helping others. 真正的快乐源自帮助他人。 A good deed done today brings a smile to someone’s face and a warm feeling in your heart. 今天做一件好事,会给别人带来笑容,会让你心里感到温暖。 How to write about opinions? 15 Summary 1. Include character, setting, event, feeling and opinion. _ We learnt that: To write a story 2. We can write in time order. 3. We can use metaphor to show feelings. _ 4. We can use quotes to support opinions. _ _ 16 What is the tense of the passage? Past tense 17 Homework Must do: Write your story of feeling happy through helping others. Choose to do: Watch the video Hair to My Strangers to know more about hair donation(头发捐赠). https://www.bilibili.com/video/BV16t41157vX 18 4. Write in time order. 2. Use the words and expressions from the reading passage. 3. Use the past tense. 1. Include characters, a setting, events, feelings and opinions. Checklist Content Language Strategy $$