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David Souza, a snowmobiler in Colorado’s Vail Pass Recreation Area, was lucky to be alive after being buried (掩埋) in a snowslide for over an hour. Thanks to the rapid response of the Summit County Rescue Group (SCRG) and their skilled search dogs, the man was found a ware and breathing — an amazing survival story.
At 12:11 pm on February 17, two men were snowmobiling in the Shrine Bowl area when they accidentally caused a snowslide. David was completely buried, and his friend called 911 at once and began searching for him.
The snowslide, thought at 150 meters wide and 100 meters long, occurred during a “high” snowslide risk day (rated 4 out of 5) by the Colorado Avalanche Information Center following heavy storms.
SCRG responded quickly, organizing four dog teams and 27 rescuers. Additional support came from the Rapid Avalanche Deployment team, the Summit County Sheriff’s Office, and snowslide specialists from Copper Mountain Ski Area. However, bad winter conditions prevented a Flight for Life helicopter from approaching.
Snowslide experts warned that survival rates would drop sharply after just 15 minutes under the snow, making the rescue effort a race against time.
Time seemed to fly away without being noticed. Buried under the snow, David huddled (蜷缩) in his airbag that became smaller and smaller under the pressure of snow. Each breath was a struggle against the biting cold, and he felt he could hardly wait any longer. Still, he didn’t give up hope, telling himself to hold on in a low voice.
Above ground, a search dog named Lightning suddenly cried wildly at a snowbank, excitedly scratching at the snow. Noticing that, a rescuer came with doubt in his mind, only to see a small piece of bright-color cloth sticking out of the snow. It was 1:13 pm — about an hour after the burial, just when all seemed lost. He pulled it and realized it was part of the man’s air-filled snowslide airbag. "We’ve got something!" the rescuer called out loudly.
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Hearing that, more rescuers quickly came over.
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David was sent to the hospital by ambulance (救护车) immediately.
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文本分析
1.角色:_____________________________
2.视角:第________人称
3.时空线:from 12:11 pm (snowslide happening)---______________ ---1:13 pm (finding clues)
4.可能的线索:
Why was David lucky to be alive?:____________________________________________
When and where did the snowslide happen?:
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What made the rescue more difficult?:
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What did experts warn about the survival rate?:
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How did David keep himself going under the snow?:
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What clue led rescuers to David?:____________________________________________
5.情节线:David 和朋友雪地摩托时引发雪崩,David 被埋,朋友报警求助→_________________________________→David 在雪下蜷缩坚持不放弃→___________________________________________→(续写)救援人员合力救出 David,David 被送医并表达感激。
6.情感线:David:(遭遇雪崩)→(雪下坚持)→______(被救援时)→______(获救后)
救援人员:(接到求助)→(救援过程)→______(发现线索)→______(成功救援)
7.综合以上信息,请用 3-4 句话概括文章大意。(中英各一个)
中文:______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
英文:______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
8.句式:(3--5个句子)
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9.主题(本文属于人与社会 / 人与自然):_______________________
情节构造
第一段提示句:Hearing that, more rescuers quickly came over.
衔接句 1——— 对 “more rescuers came over” 提问 “What did rescuers do to save David?”:What actions did rescuers take to dig out David?
过渡句推演:衔接 1→______←衔接 2
衔接句 2——— 对 “David’s state when rescued” 提问 “How was David when he was pulled out?”:What was David’s condition after being dug out?
第二段提示句:David was sent to the hospital by ambulance immediately.
衔接句 3——— 对 “sent to the hospital” 提问 “What happened after David was sent to the hospital?”:How did David recover and what did he think of the rescuers?
过渡句推演:衔接 3→______←主题
主题:_______________________
段落构思
第一段:Hearing that, more rescuers quickly came over.
→①__________________→②__________________→③__________________;
英文:____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
第二段:David was sent to the hospital by ambulance immediately.
→④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥__________________。
英文:____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
参考答案
文本分析
1.角色:David Souza(遭遇雪崩的雪地摩托爱好者)、David 的朋友、Summit County Rescue Group(SCRG,救援小组)、搜救犬 Lightning、其他救援力量(如快速雪崩部署队、治安官办公室等)
2.视角:第三人称
3.时空线:from 12:11 pm (snowslide happening)---the rescue process---1:13 pm (finding clues)
4.可能的线索:
Why was David lucky to be alive?:He was rescued by the Summit County Rescue Group and their search dogs after being buried for over an hour.
When and where did the snowslide happen?:At 12:11 pm on February 17, in the Shrine Bowl area of Colorado’s Vail Pass Recreation Area.
What made the rescue more difficult?:Bad winter conditions prevented the Flight for Life helicopter from approaching, and it was a "high" snowslide risk day.
What did experts warn about the survival rate?:Survival rates would drop sharply after just 15 minutes under the snow.
How did David keep himself going under the snow?:He didn’t give up hope and told himself to hold on, huddling in his airbag.
What clue led rescuers to David?:A small piece of bright-color cloth from David’s air-filled snowslide airbag, found by search dog Lightning.
5.情节线:David 和朋友雪地摩托时引发雪崩,David 被埋,朋友报警求助→雪崩规模大且风险等级高,多方救援力量参与,但直升机因天气无法支援→David 在雪下蜷缩坚持不放弃→搜救犬 Lightning 发现线索,救援人员看到 David 安全气囊的布片→(续写)救援人员合力救出 David,David 被送医并表达感激。
6.情感线:David:惊恐无助(遭遇雪崩)→坚韧执着(雪下坚持)→激动庆幸(被救援时)→感恩不已(获救后)
救援人员:紧急专注(接到求助)→紧张焦灼(救援过程)→兴奋迫切(发现线索)→欣慰释然(成功救援)
7.综合以上信息,请用 3-4 句话概括文章大意。
中文:2 月 17 日中午,David 在科罗拉多州的雪场骑雪地摩托时引发雪崩被埋,朋友随即报警。尽管雪崩风险高、天气阻碍直升机救援,SCRG 等多方力量仍紧急展开搜救。David 在雪下坚持不放弃,最终搜救犬 Lightning 发现其安全气囊的布片,救援人员在他被埋约一小时后找到线索。
英文:On the afternoon of February 17, David was buried in an avalanche while snowmobiling in Colorado’s snow resort, and his friend called the police immediately. Despite high avalanche risk and bad weather that stopped helicopter rescue, SCRG and other rescue teams launched an urgent search. David held on under the snow, and finally, search dog Lightning found a piece of cloth from his airbag, leading rescuers to him after about an hour of burial.
8.句式:
被动语态(David Souza...was lucky to be alive after being buried...);
时间状语从句(At 12:11 pm on February 17, two men were snowmobiling...when they accidentally caused a snowslide.);
分词作定语(a search dog named Lightning);
宾语从句(Snowslide experts warned that survival rates would drop sharply...)
9.主题(本文属于人与社会 / 人与自然):救援力量的专业与高效,以及人类在极端环境下的生存意志
情节构造
第一段提示句:Hearing that, more rescuers quickly came over.
衔接句 1——— 对 “more rescuers came over” 提问 “What did rescuers do to save David?”:What actions did rescuers take to dig out David?
过渡句推演:衔接 1→rescuers dug quickly and pulled David out←衔接 2
衔接句 2——— 对 “David’s state when rescued” 提问 “How was David when he was pulled out?”:What was David’s condition after being dug out?
第二段提示句:David was sent to the hospital by ambulance immediately.
衔接句 3——— 对 “sent to the hospital” 提问 “What happened after David was sent to the hospital?”:How did David recover and what did he think of the rescuers?
过渡句推演:衔接 3→David recovered and thanked the rescuers←主题
主题:专业救援的重要性与生命在坚持和守护下的奇迹
段落构思
第一段:Hearing that, more rescuers quickly came over.
→①Rescuers used shovels to dig through the snow rapidly→②After 10 minutes of urgent work, they pulled David out from the snow→③David was weak but conscious, able to speak softly;
英文:Hearing that, more rescuers quickly came over. They grabbed shovels and dug through the snow at top speed, careful not to hurt David. The cold wind bit their faces, but no one stopped. After ten tense minutes, they finally pulled David out—weak, shivering, but conscious. He managed a faint smile, whispering, “Thank you… I knew you’d come.” Lightning nuzzled his hand, as if celebrating the rescue.
第二段:David was sent to the hospital by ambulance immediately.
→④Doctors said David only had mild hypothermia and would recover soon→⑤David visited the rescuers after discharge to express gratitude→⑥He emphasized that their quick response and his perseverance saved his life。
英文:David was sent to the hospital by ambulance immediately. Doctors examined him and found he only had mild hypothermia, with no serious injuries. A few days later, David was discharged. He went straight to the SCRG office to thank the rescuers and Lightning in person. “Your speed and professionalism, plus not giving up myself—those are what saved me,” he said. The rescue team replied that it was their duty to protect lives.
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