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Susan, Max, and Alex were inseparable friends who shared a deep love for the great outdoors and always overcame difficulties together they met. For weeks, they had been planning their latest camping adventure on weekends. This trip was special — they had chosen a spot by a river, far from the busy city. As they finally hit the road on a sunny Saturday morning, they were very excited.
After a few hours of driving through winding roads, they arrived at their destination. The campsite was everything they had hoped for — a peaceful spot by a gently flowing river, surrounded by towering trees. Without wasting any time, they set up their tent, gathered firewood, and started a fire to cook their dinner. The smell of grilled (烤) sausages filled the air as they sat around the fire, sharing stories and laughing at old memories. For a moment, everything was perfect.
As the night grew darker, the forest, once alive with the singing of birds, seemed terrifyingly quiet. Suddenly, they heard a strange noise coming from the woods. It sounded like something was moving through the bushes. Susan, who had always been more careful and resourceful, suggested they go inside the tent. But Max and Alex, ever the adventurers, wanted to investigate and challenge themselves. Armed with their flashlights, they headed into the woods. Susan, who was a bit worried, didn’t want to be left alone and followed them, with a spoon and a pot in her hands in case of danger.
The deeper they walked into the forest, the louder and more intense the noise became. The beam (光线) of their flashlights cut through the darkness, revealing nothing but the thick bushes. Leaves rustled (沙沙作响) and the air grew heavy with tension. Just as they were about to turn back, a sudden movement caught their attention. From the shadows appeared a wild pig. The pig took a step closer, smelling the air as if searching for food. Max and Alex froze in fear, not knowing how to deal with the situation.
注意:1. 续写词数应150个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
At that moment, Susan remembered the spoon and the pot she had bought.
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Seeing the pig walk away, they returned to their tent immediately.
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文本分析
1.角色:_____________________________
2.视角:第________人称
3.时空线:from setting off for camping---______________ ---walking deep into the forest
4.可能的线索:
Why was this camping trip special for Susan, Max and Alex?:
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What did they do after arriving at the campsite?:
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How did Susan differ from Max and Alex when they heard the strange noise?:
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What did Susan take with her when following Max and Alex into the woods?:
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What did they encounter when walking deep into the forest?:____________________________________________
How did Max and Alex react when seeing the wild pig?:
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5.情节线:Susan、Max 和 Alex 计划并出发去河边露营→_______________________→夜晚听到森林异响,Susan 建议回帐篷,Max 和 Alex 坚持探查,Susan 持锅勺跟随→__________________________→(续写)Susan 用锅勺吓退野猪,三人返回帐篷反思。
6.情感线:三人:兴奋(setting off/arriving)→___________(sharing stories by fire)→___________(hearing strange noise)→___________(seeing wild pig)→___________(Susan solving crisis)→___________(returning to tent)
Susan:谨慎(hearing noise)→___________(following friends)→___________(facing wild pig)→___________(after scaring pig)
Max 和 Alex:冒险(wanting to investigate)→___________(walking into woods)→___________(seeing wild pig)→___________(after crisis)
7.综合以上信息,请用 3-4 句话概括文章大意。(中英各一个)
中文:
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英文:
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8.句式:(3--5个句子)
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9.主题(本文属于人与他人 / 人与自然):_______________________
情节构造
第一段提示句:At that moment, Susan remembered the spoon and the pot she had bought.
衔接句 1——— 对 “remembered the spoon and the pot” 提问 “What did Susan do with the spoon and the pot?”:What action did Susan take to deal with the wild pig?
过渡句推演:衔接 1→______←衔接 2
衔接句 2——— 对 “the wild pig’s reaction” 提问 “How did the wild pig respond to Susan’s action?”:What happened to the wild pig after Susan’s move?
第二段提示句:Seeing the pig walk away, they returned to their tent immediately.
衔接句 3——— 对 “returned to their tent” 提问 “What did they talk about or feel after returning to the tent?”:What did the three friends communicate or realize after going back?
过渡句推演:衔接 3→______←主题
主题:_______________________
段落构思
第一段:At that moment, Susan remembered the spoon and the pot she had bought.
→①__________________→②__________________→③__________________;
英文:
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第二段:Seeing the pig walk away, they returned to their tent immediately.
→④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥__________________。
英文:
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参考答案
文本分析
1.角色:Susan、Max、Alex(三位形影不离的朋友)
2.视角:第三人称
3.时空线:from setting off for camping---the riverside campsite---walking deep into the forest
4.可能的线索:
Why was this camping trip special for Susan, Max and Alex?:They chose a spot by a river far from the busy city.
What did they do after arriving at the campsite?:They set up the tent, gathered firewood, started a fire to cook dinner, and sat around the fire sharing stories.
How did Susan differ from Max and Alex when they heard the strange noise?:Susan suggested going inside the tent, while Max and Alex wanted to investigate.
What did Susan take with her when following Max and Alex into the woods?:A spoon and a pot.
What did they encounter when walking deep into the forest?:A wild pig.
How did Max and Alex react when seeing the wild pig?:They froze in fear, not knowing how to deal with it.
5.情节线:Susan、Max 和 Alex 计划并出发去河边露营→抵达后搭建帐篷、生火做饭、分享时光→夜晚听到森林异响,Susan 建议回帐篷,Max 和 Alex 坚持探查,Susan 持锅勺跟随→三人深入森林,发现是野猪,Max 和 Alex 吓呆→(续写)Susan 用锅勺吓退野猪,三人返回帐篷反思。
6.情感线:三人:兴奋(setting off/arriving)→愉悦温馨(sharing stories by fire)→紧张不安(hearing strange noise)→恐惧慌乱(seeing wild pig)→镇定解脱(Susan solving crisis)→释然庆幸(returning to tent)
Susan:谨慎(hearing noise)→担忧却坚定(following friends)→沉着冷静(facing wild pig)→轻松自豪(after scaring pig)
Max 和 Alex:冒险(wanting to investigate)→好奇紧张(walking into woods)→惊恐无措(seeing wild pig)→感激后怕(after crisis)
7.综合以上信息,请用 3-4 句话概括文章大意。
中文:Susan、Max 和 Alex 三位好友计划了一次远离城市的河边露营。抵达后他们搭建帐篷、生火做饭,围坐分享欢乐时光。夜晚听到森林异响后,Max 和 Alex 执意探查,Susan 持锅勺跟随,三人深入森林后遭遇野猪,Max 和 Alex 吓得僵在原地。
英文:Susan, Max and Alex, three inseparable friends, planned a camping trip by a river far from the city. After arriving, they set up the tent, made a fire for dinner and sat together sharing happy moments. When they heard a strange noise at night, Max and Alex insisted on investigating, with Susan following with a spoon and pot. They encountered a wild pig deep in the forest, leaving Max and Alex frozen in fear.
8.句式:
定语从句(Susan, who had always been more careful and resourceful...);
比较级句式(The deeper they walked...the louder...);
方式状语从句(as if searching for food);
过去分词作状语(Armed with their flashlights...)
9.主题(本文属于人与他人 / 人与自然):友谊的默契与面对危机时的沉着应对
情节构造
第一段提示句:At that moment, Susan remembered the spoon and the pot she had bought.
衔接句 1——— 对 “remembered the spoon and the pot” 提问 “What did Susan do with the spoon and the pot?”:What action did Susan take to deal with the wild pig?
过渡句推演:衔接 1→Susan’s action scared the pig away←衔接 2
衔接句 2——— 对 “the wild pig’s reaction” 提问 “How did the wild pig respond to Susan’s action?”:What happened to the wild pig after Susan’s move?
第二段提示句:Seeing the pig walk away, they returned to their tent immediately.
衔接句 3——— 对 “returned to their tent” 提问 “What did they talk about or feel after returning to the tent?”:What did the three friends communicate or realize after going back?
过渡句推演:衔接 3→the value of friendship and caution←主题
主题:朋友间的相互支持与面对未知时需兼具勇气与谨慎
段落构思
第一段:At that moment, Susan remembered the spoon and the pot she had bought.
→①Susan quickly banged the spoon against the pot to make loud noises→②The sudden clatter startled the wild pig, which stepped back nervously→③After a few more bangs, the pig turned around and ran into the depths of the forest;
英文:At that moment, Susan remembered the spoon and the pot she had bought. Without hesitation, she banged the spoon hard against the pot repeatedly. The sharp, loud clatter cut through the quiet forest, startling the wild pig. It jumped back a step, raised its head alertly, and then turned around and darted into the thick bushes, disappearing in no time. Max and Alex let out the breath they’d been holding.
第二段:Seeing the pig walk away, they returned to their tent immediately.
→④They sat by the fire, talking about the thrilling experience→⑤Max and Alex thanked Susan for her quick thinking→⑥They realized that courage needs to be paired with caution when facing unknown dangers。
英文:Seeing the pig walk away, they returned to their tent immediately. Sitting back by the rekindled fire, their hearts still raced a little. Max and Alex patted Susan’s shoulder, thanking her for her calmness and quick thinking. “We should have listened to you earlier,” Alex admitted. They all agreed that while adventure was fun, being cautious and prepared was more important. That night, their friendship felt even stronger under the starry sky.
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