2026届高三英语专项复习读后续写---遗忘的账单，温暖的偿还 导学案

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 I was really starving when I stepped out of the city library after an entire afternoon buried in books. Then I smelt something delicious—the hot dog stand at the street corner. “One hot dog, please!” I nearly rushed to the stand. “OK, ready soon!” The vendor (摊主) replied cheerfully. As he handed me the hot dog, he grinned, “You deserve the best hot dog in the world!” I guessed that was the slogan for his little business, for the words were painted in cheerful yellow letters on his cart. I couldn’t wait to take a bite. The warm bread, the chilli sauce and the juice in the sausage — it was the best thing in the world! Definitely at that time! “Five dollars, young lady,” the vendor said, wiping his hands on his apron. Hot dog in one hand, I reached for my wallet with the other. Just then, “Ouch!” a cry came from behind me. I turned back and found a woman in her 50’s struggling to pick herself up from the ground. Her grocery bag split open with oranges rolling in every direction. Seeing this, I stuffed the rest of the hot dog into my mouth, picked up the oranges and put them back into her bag. “Are you okay?” I asked with concern. “Thank you. I didn’t see the pole on the ground,” she breathed. Noticing her hand was wounded, I remembered the Band-Aid (创可贴) in my bag and dug it out. “Thank you so much for your kindness,” the woman said as I carefully applied it to her wound. Across the street, the bus I was about to take was pulling in. Waving a goodbye to the woman, I dashed to the bus stop and barely got aboard before the door closed. As the bus pulled away, I saw the woman bought a hot dog from the same vendor. On the way, I was always wondering if she would be greeted with the same words, “You deserve the best hot dog in the world!” I was lost in it... 注意： 1.续写词数应为150个左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 But wait — had I forgotten something?_________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ “Someone has paid for it,” the vendor smiled.___________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 文本分析 1．角色：_____________________________ 2．视角：第________人称 3．时空线：from the city library---______________ ---on the bus 4．可能的线索： Why did "I" go to the street corner hot dog stand?： ____________________________________________ What did the vendor say when handing "me" the hot dog?： ____________________________________________ What did "I" do when hearing the woman's cry?： ____________________________________________ What did "I" see as the bus pulled away?： ____________________________________________ What was "I" wondering on the bus?： ____________________________________________ What did "I" forget after getting on the bus?： ____________________________________________ 5．情节线：“我” 从图书馆出来因饥饿去买热狗→_____________________→“我” 听到女士呼救后帮忙→_________________→在车上看到女士买热狗并陷入思考→（续写）“我” 意识到没付钱后返回，发现女士已帮 “我” 付款。 6．情感线：“我”：饥饿（before buying hot dog）→___________（when eating hot dog）→___________（when helping the woman）→___________（on the bus）→___________（realizing forgetting to pay）→___________（knowing the woman paid） 摊主：（热情友好）→（续写）（） 女士：（狼狈感激）→（续写）（） 7．综合以上信息，请用 3-4 句话概括文章大意。（中英各一个） 中文： ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 英文： ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．句式：(3--5个句子） ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．主题（本文属于人与他人）：_______________________ 情节构造 第一段提示句：But wait — had I forgotten something? 衔接句 1——— 对 “forgotten something” 提问 “What did 'I' forget?”：What did "I" realize I had forgotten? 过渡句推演：衔接 1→______←衔接 2 衔接句 2——— 对 “going back” 提问 “How did 'I' feel when going back?”：How did "I" feel on the way back to the hot dog stand? 第二段提示句：“Someone has paid for it,” the vendor smiled. 衔接句 3——— 对 “someone” 提问 “Who paid for 'me'?”：Who paid for the hot dog for "me"? 过渡句推演：衔接 3→______←主题 主题：_______________________ 段落构思 第一段：But wait — had I forgotten something? →①__________________→②__________________→③__________________； 英文： ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 第二段：“Someone has paid for it,” the vendor smiled. →④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥__________________。 英文： ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 文本分析 1．角色：“我”（主角，学生）、热狗摊主、50 多岁的女士 2．视角：第一人称 3．时空线：from the city library---street corner---on the bus 4．可能的线索： Why did "I" go to the street corner hot dog stand?："I" was starving after staying in the city library for an entire afternoon. What did the vendor say when handing "me" the hot dog?：He said "You deserve the best hot dog in the world!" which was the slogan on his cart. What did "I" do when hearing the woman's cry?："I" stuffed the rest of the hot dog into mouth, helped her pick up oranges and applied a Band-Aid to her wounded hand. What did "I" see as the bus pulled away?："I" saw the woman bought a hot dog from the same vendor. What was "I" wondering on the bus?："I" was wondering if the vendor would greet the woman with "You deserve the best hot dog in the world!". What did "I" forget after getting on the bus?："I" forgot to pay for the hot dog. 5．情节线：“我” 从图书馆出来因饥饿去买热狗→摊主递热狗时说宣传语→“我” 听到女士呼救后帮忙→“我” 赶公交没顾上付热狗钱→在车上看到女士买热狗并陷入思考→（续写）“我” 意识到没付钱后返回，发现女士已帮 “我” 付款。 6．情感线：“我”：饥饿（before buying hot dog）→满足（when eating hot dog）→关切（when helping the woman）→疑惑（on the bus）→愧疚（realizing forgetting to pay）→温暖（knowing the woman paid） 摊主：（热情友好）→（续写）（温和善意） 女士：（狼狈感激）→（续写）（善良体贴） 7．综合以上信息，请用 3-4 句话概括文章大意。 中文： “我” 在图书馆待了一下午，出来后因饥饿去街角买热狗。摊主递热狗时说了宣传语，这时 “我” 听到一位女士呼救，便上前帮忙，之后匆忙赶公交却忘了付热狗钱。在车上 “我” 看到女士也在买这位摊主的热狗，还在好奇摊主是否会对她说同样的话。 英文： After spending an entire afternoon in the city library, "I" went to the street corner to buy a hot dog because I was starving. The vendor said a slogan when handing me the hot dog. Then I heard a woman's cry, helped her, and rushed to catch the bus without paying for the hot dog. On the bus, I saw the woman buying a hot dog from the same vendor and wondered if the vendor would say the same words to her. 8．句式： I was really starving when I stepped out of the city library after an entire afternoon buried in books. （解析：通过 “starving”“buried in books” 等细节，快速建立人物状态与场景背景，为后续情节铺垫。） As he handed me the hot dog, he grinned, “You deserve the best hot dog in the world!” I guessed that was the slogan for his little business, for the words were painted in cheerful yellow letters on his cart. （解析：将摊主的对话与摊位标识关联，既塑造了人物形象，又自然交代了关键信息 “slogan”。） The warm bread, the chilli sauce and the juice in the sausage — it was the best thing in the world! Definitely at that time! （解析：通过视觉、味觉的细节罗列，真实传递出 “我” 对热狗的满足感，情感表达细腻。） Seeing this, I stuffed the rest of the hot dog into my mouth, picked up the oranges and put them back into her bag. （解析：用 “stuffed”“picked up”“put back” 一系列连贯动词，生动展现 “我” 乐于助人的反应，画面感强。） But wait — had I forgotten something? （解析：以简短的反问制造悬念，自然承接前文 “我” 的思绪，引导读者关注后续情节的转折。） 9．主题（本文属于人与他人）：善意的传递 情节构造 第一段提示句：But wait — had I forgotten something? 衔接句 1——— 对 “forgotten something” 提问 “What did 'I' forget?”：What did "I" realize I had forgotten? 过渡句推演：衔接 1→**"I" decided to go back to pay**←衔接 2 衔接句 2——— 对 “going back” 提问 “How did 'I' feel when going back?”：How did "I" feel on the way back to the hot dog stand? 第二段提示句：“Someone has paid for it,” the vendor smiled. 衔接句 3——— 对 “someone” 提问 “Who paid for 'me'?”：Who paid for the hot dog for "me"? 过渡句推演：衔接 3→**the warmth of kindness**←主题 主题：善意在人与人之间的温暖传递 段落构思 第一段：But wait — had I forgotten something? →①"I" suddenly realized I forgot to pay for the hot dog and felt guilty→②"I" got off the next stop and hurried back to the street corner→③"I" apologized to the vendor and said I came to pay； 英文：My hand unconsciously touched my wallet, and I suddenly realized I'd forgotten to pay for the hot dog! My face burned with guilt—I'd been in such a rush to catch the bus that I completely overlooked it. I immediately got off at the next stop and ran back to the street corner, where the vendor was still busy. "Sorry, sir! I forgot to pay for my hot dog earlier," I panted, taking out five dollars. 第二段：“Someone has paid for it,” the vendor smiled. →④"I" was confused and asked who paid→⑤Vendor told "me" it was the woman "I" helped→⑥"I" felt warm knowing the kindness was returned。 英文："Someone has paid for it," the vendor smiled. I froze, confused. "Who was it?" "That lady you helped just now—she said you'd helped her, so she insisted on paying for your hot dog," he explained, nodding at the direction where the woman had gone. I stood there, holding the five dollars, feeling a warm current flowing through my heart—kindness really did go around. 5 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$