内容正文:
应用文写作训练
介绍信
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问 题 定 位
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一、词汇检测
1. 介绍v.
3. 增进n.
5. 事实上
7. 有共同的爱好
9. 对……有益
二、完成句子
1. 我是李华,目前是红星中学的一个学生。
2. 扩大v.
4. 打算
6. 孰能生巧
8. 深造
10. 起决定性的作用
2. 我的口语很好,也能跟外国人流利地交流。
3. 在空闲时间,我喜欢阅读英语小说因为这可以给我提供一个提升英语的机会。
4. 只有通过练习,我们才能在英语的学习过程中取得更多的进步。
5. 有志者事竟成。
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精 准 突 破
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一、 审题判断文章类型和要点
【例题】审题填表并画出写作要点。
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国朋友Jim 在给你的邮件中提到他对中国历史很感兴趣,并请你介绍一位你喜欢的中国历史人物。请你给Jim回信,内容包括:
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1. 该人物是谁;
2. 该人物的主要贡献;
3. 该人物对你的影响。
根据文章的人称、时态、体裁和题材在对应的方框内打 “√”
人称
□第一人称
□第二人称
□第三人称
时态
□一般现在时
□一般过去时
□一般将来时
体裁
□介绍信
□申请信
□感谢信
题材
□欢迎
□旅行
□历史
二、申请信相关词汇和短语
基础
process n. 过程
enlarge v. 扩大
history n. 历史
great adj. 伟大的
interested adj. 感兴趣的
introduce v. 介绍
favorite adj. 最喜欢的
improvement/enhancement n. 增进
what’s more此外
keep on doing sth. 坚持做某事
be familiar with对……熟悉
take an active part in 积极参加
intend to打算
by the way顺便说一下
keep diaries记日记
in order to 为了
play an important/vital role/part in起决定性的作用
提升
be beneficial to/contribute to对…有益
share the same interest有共同的兴趣
considering/given that鉴于
further education深造
as a matter of fact事实上
practice makes perfect孰能生巧
三、介绍信功能句式
基础
1. I am glad to hear from you. (很高兴收到你的来信。)
2. I feel proud that you are interested in Chinese history. (你对中国历史感兴趣,我很自豪。)
3. I am writing to introduce that to you. (我写信的目的是给你介绍。)
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4. My name is Li Hua, a boy of eighteen. (我是李华,一个18岁的男孩。)
5. I’m active and outgoing. (我很活跃和外向。)
6. In my spare time, I like reading English novels and drawing pictures. (在我自由时间,我喜欢读英语小
说和画画。)
7. My spoken English is good and I can communicate with foreigners fluently. (我的口语很好并且我可以很
流利地和外国人交往。)
8. Reading is also one of my hobbies. (阅读也是我的爱好之一。)
提高
1. As for my favorite figure in Chinese history, it must be Lu Xun. (关于我最喜欢的历史人物,一定是鲁
迅。)
2. As a 16-year-old girl, I am fascinated about ..., especially ... (作为一个16岁的女孩,我很痴迷……,尤其是……)
3. Thanks to these interests, I never feel it is difficult for me to find topics to communicate with others. (多亏
了这些兴趣,我从没感到很困难和其他人找话题交流。)
4. In my spare time, I always devote myself to reading English novel. (在我自由时间,我总是把时间花在
阅读英语小说上。)
5. The course is specially designed for beginners like you, focusing on listening and speaking practice. (这门
课程尤其是专门为你这种初学者设计的,专攻听说练习。)
6. In the school English corner, I meet many friends, who share the same interest with me. (在英语角,我遇
到了很多朋友,他们与我有相同的兴趣。)
7. If you need more information, just let me know. (如果你需要更多信息,让我知道。)
【练习】默写原句
1. 知道你对中国文化感兴趣我感到很自豪。
2. 我写信来给你介绍一下。
3. 作为一个十六岁的女孩,我对……着迷,尤其是……。
4. 说到我最喜欢的历史人物,那必须要说是鲁迅。
5. 多亏了我这些爱好,当我跟别人交流的时候我从没来觉得寻找话题很难。
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四、 介绍信句式仿写
【句式1】I am glad to hear from you. I feel proud that you are interested in….
仿写1:很开心收到你的来信,也非常开心你对中国的历史感兴趣。(合成一句话)
【句式2】In my spare time , I always devote myself to…
仿写2:在空闲时间,我喜欢看中国历史小说。
【句式3】Having read many of his books, I was greatly inspired by his wisdom.
仿写3:努力学习,他取得了巨大的进步。
五、 介绍信写作要点和细节补充LV3
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国朋友Jim 在给你的邮件中提到他对中国历史很感兴趣, 并请你介绍一位你喜欢的中国历史人物。请你给Jim回信,内容包括:
1. 该人物是谁;
2. 该人物的主要贡献;
3. 该人物对你的影响。 注意:1.词数不少于50;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Dear Jim,
1. 定要点:
要点1:最喜欢的中国历史人物 favorite figure in Chinese history
对我有巨大的影响 have an immense influence on me
要点2:对中国文化有巨大影响 has a great influence on Chinese culture
教育无界限 education without distinction
要点3: 仁者爱人 The benevolent love others.
Yours, Li Hua
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2. 添细节
细节1:这儿有两点为什么我最喜欢…… There are two reasons why I like…best.
【思路】首先总结为什么选…,其次阐述至少两点原因。
【成句】The person I have chosen is Confucius. There are two reasons why I’ve decided to choose him. Firstly,
. Besides, .
细节2:起因+描述
【思路】贡献一+为什么有影响;贡献二+他的思想具体描述
【成句】One of his sayings “The benevolent love others.” has developed into the kernel of the Confucianism.
His thought has a great influence on Chinese culture. In addition, as an educator, he proposed the thought “Education without Distinction”.
细节3:为了帮你获得对中国文化的进一步理解,我将给你介绍我的最喜欢的历史人物给你。
【思路】引进话题
【成句】In order to help you obtain further understanding on Chinese culture, I will show you one of my favorite history figures to you.
【练习】
要点:我最喜欢的中国历史人物是孔子。(figure Confucius) 细节:这儿有两点为什么我最喜欢……(there be)
成句
六、 介绍信的写作结构和逻辑LV2
介绍信的结构
首段:交际问候+介绍话题中段:介绍原因+对我影响尾段:询问对方+希望回复介绍信模版:
DearXX,
(首段,交际问候+介绍话题) How is it going? I’m glad to hear from you. Knowing that you are interested in , I’d like to share with you.
(中段,原因+影响) The I have chosen is . There are two reasons why I’ve decided to . Firstly, . Besides, . The has an
immense influence on me. .
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(尾段,询问+盼复) Interested in knowing more? Let me know. Looking forward to your early reply.
【练习】
Dear Jim,
How is everything going?
Yours, Li Hua
. (得知您对中国历史很感兴趣,我感到很兴奋。我写信是想向您介绍我最喜欢的人物之一。)
(他的名字) is Lu Xun. (事实上), he is (中国最著名的小说家之一), and he was ( 也是一个伟大的老师). He
witnessed the changes of China during 20th century and reflected a lot.
(作为一名勇敢的中国人), he used his pen as a weapon to reveal the darkness of the society, with his novels, he inspired the youth to rediscover the importance of distinguishing right and wrong, justice and evil. It was his compositions that helped Chinese people to find a purpose and fight for freedom.
Having read many of his books, ( 他的智慧极大地启发了我). I started to gain the ability of independent thinking. So I can (面对困难时,跟随自己的内心而不是跟随别人). (此外), I was inspired to write my own novels and it turned out to be a success.
(这是我的分享) Lu Xun, and (期待您的回复).
Yours Li Hua
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效 果 验 证
)
假如你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国朋友Jim得知你要参加CCTV《朗读者》节目的录制,来信询问相关情况。请你给Jim回信。内容包括:
1. 你朗读的内容;
2. 你选择上述内容的原因;
3. 上述内容对你的影响。注意:1. 词数不少于50;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
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首段:寒暄+写作目的:
中间段:介绍所读内容+原因:
尾段:盼回复
道谢信和致歉信
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问 题 定 位
)
一、词汇检测
1. 感激 v./n.
3. 不能
5. 道歉 n./v.
7. 难以言表
9. 做到,达到预定目标
2. 帮助 v./n.
4. 非常抱歉
6. 如果没有
8. 弥补
10. 受伤
二、完成句子
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1. 我写信来感谢你对我的帮助。
2. 非常感谢你的礼物,这是我收到的最好的礼物。
3. 对于没有能够出现我非常抱歉。
4. 如果没有您的帮忙,我就不能完成这项任务。
5. 给您造成的不便,我再一次抱歉。
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精 准 突 破
)
一、审题判断文章类型和要点LV2 例题:审题填表并划出写作要点。
你给英国朋友Chris写一封信,内容包括:
1. 你们原计划7月份一同去云南旅游;
2. 由于脚部受伤,你无法按原计划前往;
3. 表达你的歉意并建议将旅行推迟到8月份。
注意: 1. 词数不少于50. 2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。3. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
人称
□第一人称
□第二人称
□第三人称
时态
□一般现在时
□一般过去时
□一般将来时
体裁
□邀请信
□道歉信
□感谢信
题材
□歉意
□计划
□建议
二、道谢信和致歉信相关词汇和短语
基础
appreciate v. 感激
thoughtful adj. 体贴的
gratitude n. 感激
kindness n. 善良, 好意
apologize v. 道歉
cancel v. 取消
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appointment n. 约会, 约定
forgiveness n. 原谅
express my thanks for为…表示感谢
thanks to多亏了
be not able to不能
prepare for为 做准备
提升
favor,assistance n. 帮助
hospitality n. 好客
beyond words 难以言表
but for/ without 要不是
benefit from 受益
terribly/ extremely sorry 非常抱歉
make it 做到,达到预定目标
fix another time 另约时间
get injured 受伤
put off; postpone 推迟
make up for 弥补
三、道谢信和致歉信功能句式
基础
1. I am writing to express my sincere thanks for…(我写信就……来表达我的谢意。)
2. Thank you very much for your kind hospitality you showed during…(非常感谢你在……期间的盛情款
待。)
3. It was nice/ kind/ thoughtful of you to do…(你做……真是太善良/体贴了。)
4. It was your kind help that …(正是由于你的帮助……(强调句式))
5. I'd like you to know how much your...meant to me.(我希望您知道您的……对我意义重大。)
6. Thanks again for your generous help.(再次感谢你慷慨相助。)
7. I not only enjoyed…, but also…(我不仅享受到了……而且还……(用来描写在对方帮助下所获得的
收获)。)
8. I am writing to apologize to you for my failing to do…(我写信来就不能做……表达歉意。)
9. I wonder whether this plan is suitable for you.(我想知道这个计划是否适合你。)
10. Would you mind if I change the appointment time?(你介意我更改预约时间?)
提高
1. With deepest gratitude, I write you this letter for…( 怀着深深的感激之情,因…… 我给你写这封
信。)
2. My true gratitude is beyond the words/description.(我的感激之情不能用语言表达。)
3. But for your (help/ guidance/ assistance), I wouldn’t have won the prize.(如果没有你的帮助,我将不能
获得这个奖。)
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4. It is such an amazing…that it has allowed me to have a better understanding of…(……如此神奇和令人赞叹以至于让我很快就对……有了更好的了解。)
5. Nothing will be able to erase our wonderful memories and we will cherish them forever.(没有什么可以消除我们之间的美好回忆,我们将永远珍惜这些回忆。)
6. Please do not hesitate to let me know if there is anything I could do to return your favour.(如果我能做些事情来回报你,请一定要告诉我。)
7. I am writing with sincere regret to inform you that I am not able to do sth as scheduled.(我怀着诚挚的歉意写信告诉你,我不能按计划去做某事。)
8. The reasons why I can’t go with you are as follows.(我不能和你一起去的原因如下。)
9. I feel terribly sorry for missing the chance of…(错失这个……的机会,我感到非常的遗憾。)
10. I sincerely hope that you can accept my apologies for… and understand my situation.(我真诚地希望你
能接受我对……的道歉并且能够理解我的处境。)
【练习】默写原句
1. 我写信就……来表达我诚挚的谢意。
2. 非常感谢你在……期的盛情款待。
3. 你做……真是太善良/体贴了。
4. 我写信来就不能做……表达歉意。
5. 我想知道这个计划是否适合你。
6. 怀着深深的感激之情,因……我给你写这封信。
7. 我真诚地希望你能接受我对……的道歉并且能够理解我的处境。
8. 我怀着诚挚的歉意写信告诉你,我不能按计划去做某事。
9. 我不能和你一起去的原因如下。
10. 请接受我对你的帮助的真诚感谢,这一点我将永远不会忘记。
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四、道谢信和致歉信句式仿写
【句式1】我写信来表达我真诚的歉意。I am writing to express my sincere/hearty apology.
仿写1:我写信来表达我真诚的感谢。
【句式2】错失这个和你一起旅行的机会,我感到非常的遗憾。 I feel terribly sorry for missing the chance of traveling with you.
仿写2:错失这个参加讲座的机会,我感到非常的遗憾。(terribly sorry; miss the chance of)
【句式3】我怀着诚挚的歉意写信告诉你,我不能按计划和你一起去北京。I am writing with sincere regret to inform you that I am not able to visit Beijing with you as scheduled.
仿写3:我怀着诚挚的歉意写信告诉你,我不能按计划和你一起去图书馆。
五、道谢信和致歉信写作要点和细节补充你给英国朋友Chris写一封信,内容包括: 1.你们原计划7月份一同去云南旅游;
2. 由于脚部受伤,你无法按原计划前往;
3. 表达你的歉意并建议将旅行推迟到8月份。
注意:1.词数不少于50. 2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。3. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
1. 定要点
要点1:你们原计划7月份一同去云南旅游。 We planned to travel to Yunnan in July.
要点2:由于脚部受伤,你无法按原计划前往。I couldn’t go to Yunnan with you as planned because my foot was injured.
要点3:表达你的歉意并建议将旅行推迟到8月份。I am sorry for that and I suggest we put off our travel to August.
2. 添细节
要点1:你们原计划7月份一同去云南旅游。We planned to travel to Yunnan in July.
【思路】本句可以与写信的首段功能句I am writing to inform you…相结合写成一个含有宾语从句的复合句;as scheduled词组表示原计划。
【成句】I am writing with sincere regret to inform you that I am not able to travel to Yunnan with you as
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scheduled.
要点2:由于脚部受伤,你无法按原计划前往。I can’t go to Yunnan with you because my foot was injured.
【思路】accidentally意外地,副词修饰hurt;during a basketball match将事故具体化;as a result结果,表明两句话的逻辑关系。
【成句】I accidentally hurt my left foot during a basketball match. As a result, I can’t go to Yunnan with you as scheduled.
要点3:表达你的歉意并建议将旅行推迟到8月份。I am sorry for that and I suggest we put off our travel to August.
【思路】表达歉意+希望对方理解+提出建议。I was wondering whether…我想知道你能否……为固定表达句式。
【成句】I sincerely hope that you can accept my apologies for not being able to going there with you in July
and understand my situation. I was wondering whether we could put off our plan to August when my foot will recover from the injury.
【练习】
要点1:我们原计划周末一同去做志愿者活动。We planned to do voluntary work this weekend.
加细节: 要点2:
有一个重要的考试,你无法按原计划前往。I will have an important exam, so that I can’t go there with you.
加细节:
要点3:表达你的歉意并建议将去做志愿者活动推迟到国庆节。I am sorry for that and I suggest we put off our voluntary work to the National Day.
加细节:
六、道谢信和致歉信的写作结构致歉信结构:
基础:
Dear XXX,
(首段:自我介绍+写信目的)How is it going? I am writing to express my apology. I’m very sorry that I can’t go to Yunnan with you in July. I’m writing to tell you the reason for it.
(主体段:解释原因+另约时间+询问意见)My left foot was injured. I’m sorry about it. Can I suggest that we put it off until early August? Is it ok with you?
(结尾段:再次致歉+结尾致意)I am sorry again for it. I wish you could understand me. I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
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提升:
Dear XXX,
Yours sincerely,
XXX
(首段:自我介绍+目的)How is everything going with you? I am writing with sincere regret to inform you that I am not able to travel to Yunnan with you as scheduled. The reason why I can’t go with you is as follows.
(主体段:解释原因+另约时间+询问意见)I accidentally hurt my left foot during a basketball match. As a result, I can’t go to Yunnan with you. I am terribly sorry about this for I know you have been dreaming about
this trip for a long time. I sincerely hope that you can accept my apologies for not being able to going there with you in July and understand my situation. I was wondering whether we could put off our plan to August when my foot will recover from the injury. Will it be convenient for you? Please tell me whether you are available then.
(结尾段:再次致歉+结构致意)Again please accept my most hearty and sincere apology for the changes of
our plans. I am looking forward to hearing from you.
道谢信结构:
Dear XXX,
Yours sincerely,
XXX
(首段:自我介绍+写信目的)How is everything going? (问候) I'm writing to thank you for/ extend my sincere gratitude/show thanks to...(写信目的)
(主体段:解释原因+列举具体感谢细节) 模式一:I'd like you to know how much your… meant to me. Not only did I enjoy..., but also I .../I shall ever remember... as one of the most... in my life.
(主体段:解释原因+列举具体感谢细节)模式二: I've learned a lot about how .../It is such an amazing...that
I just .../It has allowed me to have a better understanding of .../If it had not been for your assistance in ... I fear that I would have been .../
(表示回报可以是邀请来中国旅行、送小礼物等)To pay back your help and love, I would like to...
(结尾段:再次表达感谢)Again,I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude. / Thanks again for ... and I'm looking forward to ...(再次表达感激)
【练习】翻译致歉信:
1. Dear Jim,
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
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(1) (你最近怎样?)(2) (我怀着诚挚的歉意写信告诉你) I am not able to go to your birthday party this Saturday as scheduled.
(3) (我不能去参加你生日晚会的原因如下。)My uncle will come to Beijing from America on Saturday afternoon. My parents want me to go to the
airport with them to pick him up, so it’s a pity that I can’t have fun with you then.
I wish you a happy birthday and hope everything will go well. (4) (顺便说一下), I have bought the latest CD of Jay Chou for you as a birthday present and I will give it to you on Monday.
(5) (再次对不能去参加你的生日晚会表达歉意。)(6) (请代我向我们的朋友问
好。)
Best wishes,
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
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效 果 验 证
)
假如你是新华中学的学生李华,你的美国朋友 Tom一周前给你发电子邮件,询问你暑假里的打算, 但你因准备期末考试未能及时回复。请根据以下要点给他回封邮件: 1)未及时回信的原因;2)你假期的打算(如做兼职、旅行、做志愿者等)
Dear Tom,
How is everything going on with you? I’m writing this letter to express my apology to you for not writing you back in time.
The final exam,(1) (我们大家都很重视的),
was around the corner. It was imperative for me to make full preparations for it.(2)
.(因此,我没有及时给您回信) In your letter, you asked me about my arrangement for the summer vacation. I intend to take a part-time job, (3)
.(在超市做店员,这将给我一个机会来提高我的沟通能力。(定语从句))(4) (除此之外),(5)
. (我不仅可以挣一些钱来买我喜欢的书,而且我可以丰富我的生活。(倒装句))(6) (除此之外), I mean to go on a sightseeing tour around China with my parents, during which we can(7) (不仅
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品尝美味的当地食物,而且享受如画的风景) and have our horizon broadened. How about your summer vacation? Do you have something special to do?
(8)
让您等了这么久,我期待收到您的来信。)
.(再次向您道歉,
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。今年寒假你参加了学校组织的赴美游学活动。请给接待你的史密斯夫妇写一封感谢信,内容包括:
1. 感谢对你的照顾;
2. 感谢带你体验西方文化;
3. 邀请他们来中国游玩。
注意:1. 词数不少于50;2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Mr. and Mrs. Smith,
(1) ? (最近怎么样)(2)
.(我写信是为了感谢你让我在美国的美好经历,因为你的热情好客,我非常感激)
(3) .(你真好,把我照顾得这么好。) (4)
. (如果没有你们的热情款待,我就不会有如此难忘的旅行,也不会对贵国有如此深刻的了解。(虚拟语气)) All the places of interest you took
me to impressed me a lot. (5)
. (中央公园
的美丽使我惊叹,给我留下深刻印象的不仅是美国文化,还有贵公司。) I could never thank you more for it.(6) , (除此以外) I truly want to show you my country and introduce my life to you.(7)
. (如果可能的话,请到中国来,我非常愿意做你们的导游,带你们游览北京。
(8) . (我相信你一定会在这里度过一段美好的时光。)
I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
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应用文写作训练
介绍信
(
问 题 定 位
)
一、词汇检测
1. 介绍v.
3. 增进n.
5. 事实上
7. 有共同的爱好
9. 对……有益
2. 扩大v.
4. 打算
6. 孰能生巧
8. 深造
10. 起决定性的作用
教 师 1. introduce 2. enlarge 3. improvement/enhancement 4. intend to 5. as a matter of fact 6. practice makes perfect 7. share the same interest 8. further education
9. be beneficial to/contribute to 10. play an important/vital role/part in
二、完成句子
1. 我是李华,目前是红星中学的一个学生。
2. 我的口语很好,也能跟外国人流利地交流。
3. 在空闲时间,我喜欢阅读英语小说因为这可以给我提供一个提升英语的机会。
4. 只有通过练习,我们才能在英语的学习过程中取得更多的进步。
5. 有志者事竟成。
教师 1.【答案】I am Li Hua, a student from Hong Xing Middle School.
【解析】介绍自己的姓名,来自哪里,a student 是同位语。
2. 【答案】My spoken English is good and I can communicate with foreigners fluently.
【解析】communicate with,与……交流,fluently,流利地。
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3. 【答案】During my spare time, I like reading English novels for it offers me an opportunity to improve my English.
【解析】during my spare time,在空闲时间。
4. 【答案】Only by practicing can we make more progress in the English learning process.
【解析】only位于句首+状语,需要部分倒装。5.【答案】Where there is a will, there is a way.
【解析】这是谚语,需要记住。
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精 准 突 破
)
一、 审题判断文章类型和要点
【例题】审题填表并画出写作要点。
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国朋友Jim 在给你的邮件中提到他对中国历史很感兴趣,并请你介绍一位你喜欢的中国历史人物。请你给Jim回信,内容包括:
1. 该人物是谁;
2. 该人物的主要贡献;
3. 该人物对你的影响。
根据文章的人称、时态、体裁和题材在对应的方框内打 “√”
人称
□第一人称
□第二人称
□第三人称
时态
□一般现在时
□一般过去时
□一般将来时
体裁
□介绍信
□申请信
□感谢信
题材
□欢迎
□旅行
□历史
教师 【答案】第一人称、第二人称;一般过去时和一般现在时;体裁为介绍信;题材为历史。
【解析】介绍信主要涉及第一和第二人称,本文主要涉及一般过去时和一般现在时。由题干中 “并请 你介绍一位你喜欢的中国历史人物”可知,本文为介绍信。
二、申请信相关词汇和短语
基础
process n. 过程
enlarge v. 扩大
history n. 历史
great adj. 伟大的
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interested adj. 感兴趣的
introduce v. 介绍
favorite adj. 最喜欢的
improvement/enhancement n. 增进
what’s more此外
keep on doing sth. 坚持做某事
be familiar with对……熟悉
take an active part in 积极参加
intend to打算
by the way顺便说一下
keep diaries记日记
in order to 为了
play an important/vital role/part in起决定性的作用
提升
be beneficial to/contribute to对…有益
share the same interest有共同的兴趣
considering/given that鉴于
further education深造
as a matter of fact事实上
practice makes perfect孰能生巧
三、介绍信功能句式
基础
1. I am glad to hear from you. (很高兴收到你的来信。)
2. I feel proud that you are interested in Chinese history. (你对中国历史感兴趣,我很自豪。)
3. I am writing to introduce that to you. (我写信的目的是给你介绍。)
4. My name is Li Hua, a boy of eighteen. (我是李华,一个18岁的男孩。)
5. I’m active and outgoing. (我很活跃和外向。)
6. In my spare time, I like reading English novels and drawing pictures. (在我自由时间,我喜欢读英语小
说和画画。)
7. My spoken English is good and I can communicate with foreigners fluently. (我的口语很好并且我可以很
流利地和外国人交往。)
8. Reading is also one of my hobbies. (阅读也是我的爱好之一。)
提高
1. As for my favorite figure in Chinese history, it must be Lu Xun. (关于我最喜欢的历史人物,一定是鲁
迅。)
2. As a 16-year-old girl, I am fascinated about ..., especially ... (作为一个16岁的女孩,我很痴迷……,尤
其是……)
3. Thanks to these interests, I never feel it is difficult for me to find topics to communicate with others. (多亏
了这些兴趣,我从没感到很困难和其他人找话题交流。)
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4. In my spare time, I always devote myself to reading English novel. (在我自由时间,我总是把时间花在
阅读英语小说上。)
5. The course is specially designed for beginners like you, focusing on listening and speaking practice. (这门
课程尤其是专门为你这种初学者设计的,专攻听说练习。)
6. In the school English corner, I meet many friends, who share the same interest with me. (在英语角,我遇
到了很多朋友,他们与我有相同的兴趣。)
7. If you need more information, just let me know. (如果你需要更多信息,让我知道。)
【练习】默写原句
1. 知道你对中国文化感兴趣我感到很自豪。
2. 我写信来给你介绍一下。
3. 作为一个十六岁的女孩,我对……着迷,尤其是……。
4. 说到我最喜欢的历史人物,那必须要说是鲁迅。
5. 多亏了我这些爱好,当我跟别人交流的时候我从没来觉得寻找话题很难。
教师 1. 【答案】I feel proud that you are interested in Chinese history.
2. 【答案】I am writing to introduce that to you.
3. 【答案】As a 16-year-old girl, I am fascinated about ..., especially ...
4. 【答案】As for my favorite figure in Chinese history, it must be Lu Xun.
5. 【答案】Thanks to these interests, I never feel it is difficult for me to find topics to communicate with others.
四、 介绍信句式仿写
【句式1】I am glad to hear from you. I feel proud that you are interested in….
仿写1:很开心收到你的来信,也非常开心你对中国的历史感兴趣。(合成一句话)
教师 【答案】I am delighted to hear from you and know that you are interested in Chinese culture.
【解析】I am delighted to hear from …很高兴收到…;are interested in对…感兴趣
【句式2】In my spare time , I always devote myself to…
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仿写2:在空闲时间,我喜欢看中国历史小说。
教师 【答案】In my spare time , I always devote myself to reading historical novels.
【解析】In my spare time在空余时间;devote myself to致力于
【句式3】Having read many of his books, I was greatly inspired by his wisdom.
仿写3:努力学习,他取得了巨大的进步。
教师 【答案】Having studied hard, he made great progress.
【解析】非谓语having done 表主动、完成。
五、 介绍信写作要点和细节补充LV3
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国朋友Jim 在给你的邮件中提到他对中国历史很感兴趣, 并请你介绍一位你喜欢的中国历史人物。请你给Jim回信,内容包括:
1. 该人物是谁;
2. 该人物的主要贡献;
3. 该人物对你的影响。 注意:1.词数不少于50;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Dear Jim,
1. 定要点:
要点1:最喜欢的中国历史人物 favorite figure in Chinese history
对我有巨大的影响 have an immense influence on me
要点2:对中国文化有巨大影响 has a great influence on Chinese culture
教育无界限 education without distinction
要点3: 仁者爱人 The benevolent love others.
2. 添细节
Yours, Li Hua
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细节1:这儿有两点为什么我最喜欢…… There are two reasons why I like…best.
【思路】首先总结为什么选…,其次阐述至少两点原因。
【成句】The person I have chosen is Confucius. There are two reasons why I’ve decided to choose him. Firstly,
. Besides, .
细节2:起因+描述
【思路】贡献一+为什么有影响;贡献二+他的思想具体描述
【成句】One of his sayings “The benevolent love others.” has developed into the kernel of the Confucianism.
His thought has a great influence on Chinese culture. In addition, as an educator, he proposed the thought “Education without Distinction”.
细节3:为了帮你获得对中国文化的进一步理解,我将给你介绍我的最喜欢的历史人物给你。
【思路】引进话题
【成句】In order to help you obtain further understanding on Chinese culture, I will show you one of my favorite history figures to you.
【练习】
要点:我最喜欢的中国历史人物是孔子。(figure Confucius) 细节:这儿有两点为什么我最喜欢……(there be)
成句
教师 【答案】My favorite figure is Confucius. There are two reasons why I like … best.
【解析】这里的要点是点出人物,添加的细节是原因,目的是让人信服。
六、 介绍信的写作结构和逻辑LV2
介绍信的结构
首段:交际问候+介绍话题中段:介绍原因+对我影响尾段:询问对方+希望回复介绍信模版:
DearXX,
(首段,交际问候+介绍话题) How is it going? I’m glad to hear from you. Knowing that you are interested in , I’d like to share with you.
(中段,原因+影响) The I have chosen is . There are two reasons why I’ve decided to . Firstly, . Besides, . The has an
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immense influence on me. .
(尾段,询问+盼复) Interested in knowing more? Let me know. Looking forward to your early reply.
【练习】
Dear Jim,
How is everything going?
Yours, Li Hua
. (得知您对中国历史很感兴趣,我感到很兴奋。我写信是想向您介绍我最喜欢的人物之一。)
(他的名字) is Lu Xun. (事实上), he is (中
国最著名的小说家之一), and he was ( 也是一个伟大的老师). He witnessed the changes of China during 20th century and reflected a lot.
(作为一名勇敢的中国人), he used his pen as a weapon to reveal the darkness of
the society, with his novels, he inspired the youth to rediscover the importance of distinguishing right and wrong, justice and evil. It was his compositions that helped Chinese people to find a purpose and fight for freedom.
Having read many of his books, ( 他的智慧极大地启发了我). I
started to gain the ability of independent thinking. So I can (面对困
难时,跟随自己的内心而不是跟随别人). (此外), I was inspired to write my own novels and it turned out to be a success.
(这是我的分享) Lu Xun, and (期待您的回复).
教师 【答案】
Yours Li Hua
1. I am excited to know that you have great interest in Chinese history and I am writing to introduce one of my favorite characters to you
2. His name
3. As a matter of fact
4. one of the most famous novelists in China
5. also a great teacher as well
6. As a brave Chinese
7. I was greatly inspired by his wisdom
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8. follow my heart instead of following others when facing difficulties
9. Besides
10. So, this is my sharing of
11. I’m looking forward to your reply
【解析】
1. I am excited to know that you have great interest in… 很高兴你对…很感兴趣;favorite characters,
最喜欢的历史人物
2. his name, 他的名字
3. as a matter of fact, 事实上
4. novelist, 小说家
5. as well, 也
6. brave, 勇敢的
7. be inspired by… 被…激励
8. instead of, 而不是
9. besides, 此外,而且
10. share, 分享
11. look forward to, 期待
(
效 果 验 证
)
假如你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国朋友Jim得知你要参加CCTV《朗读者》节目的录制,来信询问相关情况。请你给Jim回信。内容包括:
1. 你朗读的内容;
2. 你选择上述内容的原因;
3. 上述内容对你的影响。注意:1. 词数不少于50;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。首段:寒暄+写作目的:
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中间段:介绍所读内容+原因:
尾段:盼回复
答 案 Dear Jim,
How is it going? Thank you for your support on my upcoming attendance in the CCTV program The Reader.
The book I have chosen is “ Fu Lei’s Family Letters” in which he shared his view about art and life in order to guide his son. There are two reasons why I’ve decided to read one of his letters to the audience nationwide. Firstly, you can feel the profound fatherly love and his efforts to guide the next
generation, which I believe will touch the youngsters like me. Besides, many traditional virtues, such as integrity, can be found in his works, which can inspire students like us.
The book has an immense influence on me. Actually, it is this book that changed me from a troubled teen to a caring son. Besides, the wisdom in the book helps me shape a positive attitude towards life and future. Thus, it came to my mind the moment I got the invitation.
That’s all about it. I hope my introduction can be of some help. Is there any book that also plays an important role in your life? I’m looking forward to your reply?
Yours, Li Hua
解答 本篇文章属于典型的介绍信,介绍信需要注意以下几点:
1. 开头:开门见山,出现问候句 How is everything going? 功能句 I am excited to learn that you have a passion for…
2. 要点:3个要点完全放开。
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第1点对内容整体介绍,挑选自己熟悉的话题比较好下手。
第2点选择的原因,主题发散需要合情合理,以励志、惜时、回报社会等熟悉的理由为方向。第3点落脚点考生特别注意,是对个人的影响并非对社会。最后,注意衔接词的运用,使得每个要点之间富有逻辑且有层次感。
3. 结束:使用功能句式,向对方表达愿望或期待。
道谢信和致歉信
(
问 题 定 位
)
一、词汇检测
1. 感激 v./n.
3. 不能
5. 道歉 n./v.
7. 难以言表
9. 做到,达到预定目标
2. 帮助 v./n.
4. 非常抱歉
6. 如果没有
8. 弥补
10. 受伤
教师 1. 【答案】appreciate, feel grateful; appreciation; gratitude
2. 【答案】help, assist; help, assistance; favor
3. 【答案】be not able to
4. 【答案】terribly/extremely sorry
5. 【答案】apology; apologize , make an apology
6. 【答案】but for; without
7. 【答案】beyond words
8. 【答案】make up for
9. 【答案】make it
10. 【答案】get injured
二、完成句子
1. 我写信来感谢你对我的帮助。
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2. 非常感谢你的礼物,这是我收到的最好的礼物。
3. 对于没有能够出现我非常抱歉。
4. 如果没有您的帮忙,我就不能完成这项任务。
5. 给您造成的不便,我再一次抱歉。
教师 1.【答案】I am writing this letter to express my gratitude/thanks to you for helping me.
【解析】I am writing this letter to express my…我写信来表达我的……;gratitude感激,感谢。2.【答案】Thanks a lot for your gift, which is the most wonderful gift I have ever received.
【解析】which引导定语从句,修饰gift;根据句意“我收到的”从句中时态用现在完成时。
3.【答案】I feel terribly sorry for not having turned up.
【解析】I feel terribly/ extremely sorry for …对于……我非常抱歉。4.【答案】But for your help, I would not have finished the task.
【解析】本句含有语法虚拟语气。根据句意,本句用的是对过去事情的虚拟,标记词为but for,句子动词用would have done sth。
5. 【答案】Once again, I am really sorry for the inconvenience caused.
【解析】inconvenience名词,意为“不便”;caused过去分词做定语修饰inconvenience。
(
精 准 突 破
)
一、审题判断文章类型和要点LV2 例题:审题填表并划出写作要点。
你给英国朋友Chris写一封信,内容包括:
1. 你们原计划7月份一同去云南旅游;
2. 由于脚部受伤,你无法按原计划前往;
3. 表达你的歉意并建议将旅行推迟到8月份。
注意: 1. 词数不少于50. 2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。3. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
(
□
第三人称
□
第二人称
□
第一人称
人称
)
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时态
□一般现在时
□一般过去时
□一般将来时
体裁
□邀请信
□道歉信
□感谢信
题材
□歉意
□计划
□建议
教师 你给英国朋友Chris写一封信,内容包括:
1. 你们原
计划7月份一同去
云南旅游;
2. 由于脚
部受伤,你无
法按原计划前往;
3. 表
达你的歉意并建
议将旅行推
迟到8月份。
【答案】第一人称、第二人称;一般过去时和一般将来时;体裁为道歉信;题材为致歉+建议。
二、道谢信和致歉信相关词汇和短语
基础
appreciate v. 感激
thoughtful adj. 体贴的
gratitude n. 感激
kindness n. 善良, 好意
apologize v. 道歉
cancel v. 取消
appointment n. 约会, 约定
forgiveness n. 原谅
express my thanks for为…表示感谢
thanks to多亏了
be not able to不能
prepare for为 做准备
提升
favor,assistance n. 帮助
hospitality n. 好客
beyond words 难以言表
but for/ without 要不是
benefit from 受益
terribly/ extremely sorry 非常抱歉
make it 做到,达到预定目标
fix another time 另约时间
get injured 受伤
put off; postpone 推迟
make up for 弥补
三、道谢信和致歉信功能句式
基础
1. I am writing to express my sincere thanks for…(我写信就……来表达我的谢意。)
2. Thank you very much for your kind hospitality you showed during…(非常感谢你在……期间的盛情款
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待。)
3. It was nice/ kind/ thoughtful of you to do…(你做……真是太善良/体贴了。)
4. It was your kind help that …(正是由于你的帮助……(强调句式))
5. I'd like you to know how much your...meant to me.(我希望您知道您的……对我意义重大。)
6. Thanks again for your generous help.(再次感谢你慷慨相助。)
7. I not only enjoyed…, but also…(我不仅享受到了……而且还……(用来描写在对方帮助下所获得的
收获)。)
8. I am writing to apologize to you for my failing to do…(我写信来就不能做……表达歉意。)
9. I wonder whether this plan is suitable for you.(我想知道这个计划是否适合你。)
10. Would you mind if I change the appointment time?(你介意我更改预约时间?)
提高
1. With deepest gratitude, I write you this letter for…( 怀着深深的感激之情,因…… 我给你写这封信。)
2. My true gratitude is beyond the words/description.(我的感激之情不能用语言表达。)
3. But for your (help/ guidance/ assistance), I wouldn’t have won the prize.(如果没有你的帮助,我将不能获得这个奖。)
4. It is such an amazing…that it has allowed me to have a better understanding of…(……如此神奇和令人赞叹以至于让我很快就对……有了更好的了解。)
5. Nothing will be able to erase our wonderful memories and we will cherish them forever.(没有什么可以消除我们之间的美好回忆,我们将永远珍惜这些回忆。)
6. Please do not hesitate to let me know if there is anything I could do to return your favour.(如果我能做些事情来回报你,请一定要告诉我。)
7. I am writing with sincere regret to inform you that I am not able to do sth as scheduled.(我怀着诚挚的歉意写信告诉你,我不能按计划去做某事。)
8. The reasons why I can’t go with you are as follows.(我不能和你一起去的原因如下。)
9. I feel terribly sorry for missing the chance of…(错失这个……的机会,我感到非常的遗憾。)
10. I sincerely hope that you can accept my apologies for… and understand my situation.(我真诚地希望你
能接受我对……的道歉并且能够理解我的处境。)
【练习】默写原句
1. 我写信就……来表达我诚挚的谢意。
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2. 非常感谢你在……期的盛情款待。
3. 你做……真是太善良/体贴了。
4. 我写信来就不能做……表达歉意。
5. 我想知道这个计划是否适合你。
6. 怀着深深的感激之情,因……我给你写这封信。
7. 我真诚地希望你能接受我对……的道歉并且能够理解我的处境。
8. 我怀着诚挚的歉意写信告诉你,我不能按计划去做某事。
9. 我不能和你一起去的原因如下。
10. 请接受我对你的帮助的真诚感谢,这一点我将永远不会忘记。
教师 1. 【答案】I am writing to express my sincere thanks for…
2. 【答案】Thank you very much for your kind hospitality you showed during…
3. 【答案】It was nice/ kind/ thoughtful of you to…
4. 【答案】I am writing to apologize to you for my failing to…
5. 【答案】I wonder whether this plan is suitable for you.
6. 【答案】With deepest gratitude, I am writing to you for…
7. 【答案】I sincerely hope that you can accept my apology for… and understand my situation.
8. 【答案】I am writing with sincere regret to inform you that I am not able to do sth. as scheduled.
9. 【答案】The reasons why I can’t go with you are as follows.
10. 【答案】Please accept my sincere thanks for your help, which I will never forget.
四、道谢信和致歉信句式仿写
【句式1】我写信来表达我真诚的歉意。I am writing to express my sincere/hearty apology.
仿写1:我写信来表达我真诚的感谢。
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教师 【答案】I am writing to express my sincere/hearty gratitude.
【解析】I am writing to express …我写信来表达我的……为固定句式;gratitude感激。
【句式2】错失这个和你一起旅行的机会,我感到非常的遗憾。 I feel terribly sorry for missing the chance of traveling with you.
仿写2:错失这个参加讲座的机会,我感到非常的遗憾。(terribly sorry; miss the chance of)
教师 【答案】I feel terribly sorry for missing the chance of participating in the lecture.
【解析】I feel terribly sorry for …对于……我感到非常抱歉;of 为介词后面接doing形式。
【句式3】我怀着诚挚的歉意写信告诉你,我不能按计划和你一起去北京。I am writing with sincere regret to inform you that I am not able to visit Beijing with you as scheduled.
仿写3:我怀着诚挚的歉意写信告诉你,我不能按计划和你一起去图书馆。
教师 【答案】I am writing with sincere regret to inform you that I am not able to go to the library with you as scheduled.
【解析】I am writing to do sth我写信来做某事;with sincere regret怀着诚挚的歉意;be not able to do sth不能做某事。
五、道谢信和致歉信写作要点和细节补充你给英国朋友Chris写一封信,内容包括: 1.你们原计划7月份一同去云南旅游;
2. 由于脚部受伤,你无法按原计划前往;
3. 表达你的歉意并建议将旅行推迟到8月份。
注意:1.词数不少于50. 2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。3. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
1. 定要点
要点1:你们原计划7月份一同去云南旅游。 We planned to travel to Yunnan in July.
要点2:由于脚部受伤,你无法按原计划前往。I couldn’t go to Yunnan with you as planned because my foot was injured.
要点3:表达你的歉意并建议将旅行推迟到8月份。I am sorry for that and I suggest we put off our travel to August.
2. 添细节
要点1:你们原计划7月份一同去云南旅游。We planned to travel to Yunnan in July.
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【思路】本句可以与写信的首段功能句I am writing to inform you…相结合写成一个含有宾语从句的复合句;as scheduled词组表示原计划。
【成句】I am writing with sincere regret to inform you that I am not able to travel to Yunnan with you as scheduled.
要点2:由于脚部受伤,你无法按原计划前往。I can’t go to Yunnan with you because my foot was injured.
【思路】accidentally意外地,副词修饰hurt;during a basketball match将事故具体化;as a result结果,表明两句话的逻辑关系。
【成句】I accidentally hurt my left foot during a basketball match. As a result, I can’t go to Yunnan with you as scheduled.
要点3:表达你的歉意并建议将旅行推迟到8月份。I am sorry for that and I suggest we put off our travel to August.
【思路】表达歉意+希望对方理解+提出建议。I was wondering whether…我想知道你能否……为固定表达句式。
【成句】I sincerely hope that you can accept my apologies for not being able to going there with you in July
and understand my situation. I was wondering whether we could put off our plan to August when my foot will recover from the injury.
【练习】
要点1:我们原计划周末一同去做志愿者活动。We planned to do voluntary work this weekend.
加细节:
教师 【答案】I am writing with sincere regret to inform you that I am not able to take part in voluntary work this weekend together with you as scheduled.
【解析】与写信的功能句I am writing to inform you…相结合写成一个含有宾语从句的复合句;as scheduled词组表示原计划;take part in 也可以变为participate in。
要点2:有一个重要的考试,你无法按原计划前往。I will have an important exam, so that I can’t go there
with you.
加细节:
教师 【答案】I will have a vital exam this weekend which matters a lot to me. As a result, I can’t take part in the voluntary work with you as scheduled.
【解析】as a result结果,逻辑词连接两句话;which引导定语从句修饰exam;matter 对……很重要。
要点3:表达你的歉意并建议将去做志愿者活动推迟到国庆节。I am sorry for that and I suggest we put off
our voluntary work to the National Day.
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加细节:
教师 【答案】I sincerely hope that you can accept my apology for not being able to going there with you this weekend and understand my situation. I was wondering whether we could put off our plan to the National Day when we will have 7 days off.
【解析】表达歉意+希望对方理解+提出建议。I was wondering whether…我想知道你能否……为固定表达句式。
六、道谢信和致歉信的写作结构致歉信结构:
基础:
Dear XXX,
(首段:自我介绍+写信目的)How is it going? I am writing to express my apology. I’m very sorry that I can’t go to Yunnan with you in July. I’m writing to tell you the reason for it.
(主体段:解释原因+另约时间+询问意见)My left foot was injured. I’m sorry about it. Can I suggest that we put it off until early August? Is it ok with you?
(结尾段:再次致歉+结尾致意)I am sorry again for it. I wish you could understand me. I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
提升:
Dear XXX,
Yours sincerely,
XXX
(首段:自我介绍+目的)How is everything going with you? I am writing with sincere regret to inform you that I am not able to travel to Yunnan with you as scheduled. The reason why I can’t go with you is as follows.
(主体段:解释原因+另约时间+询问意见)I accidentally hurt my left foot during a basketball match. As a result, I can’t go to Yunnan with you. I am terribly sorry about this for I know you have been dreaming about
this trip for a long time. I sincerely hope that you can accept my apologies for not being able to going there with you in July and understand my situation. I was wondering whether we could put off our plan to August when my foot will recover from the injury. Will it be convenient for you? Please tell me whether you are available then.
(结尾段:再次致歉+结构致意)Again please accept my most hearty and sincere apology for the changes of
our plans. I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
XXX
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道谢信结构:
Dear XXX,
(首段:自我介绍+写信目的)How is everything going? (问候) I'm writing to thank you for/ extend my sincere gratitude/show thanks to...(写信目的)
(主体段:解释原因+列举具体感谢细节) 模式一:I'd like you to know how much your… meant to me. Not only did I enjoy..., but also I .../I shall ever remember... as one of the most... in my life.
(主体段:解释原因+列举具体感谢细节)模式二: I've learned a lot about how .../It is such an amazing...that I just .../It has allowed me to have a better understanding of .../If it had not been for your assistance in ... I fear
that I would have been .../
(表示回报可以是邀请来中国旅行、送小礼物等)To pay back your help and love, I would like to...
(结尾段:再次表达感谢)Again,I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude. / Thanks again for ... and I'm looking forward to ...(再次表达感激)
【练习】翻译致歉信:
1. Dear Jim,
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
(1) (你最近怎样?)(2) (我怀着诚挚的歉意写信告诉你) I am not able to go to your birthday party this Saturday as scheduled.
(3) (我不能去参加你生日晚会的原因如
下。)My uncle will come to Beijing from America on Saturday afternoon. My parents want me to go to the airport with them to pick him up, so it’s a pity that I can’t have fun with you then.
I wish you a happy birthday and hope everything will go well. (4) (顺便说一下), I have bought the latest CD of Jay Chou for you as a birthday present and I will give it to you on Monday.
(5) (再次对不能去参加你的生日晚会表达歉意。)(6) (请代我向我们的朋友问
好。)
Best wishes,
教师 (1)【答案】How is it going? / How is everything going?
【解析】书信常用问候语。
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
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(2) 【答案】I am writing with sincere regret to inform you that.
【解析】I am writing to inform you that…我写信告诉你……(书信功能句);with sincere regret
怀着诚挚的歉意,介词短语做状语,表示写信时的心情。
(3) 【答案】The reason why I can’t take part in your birthday party is as follows.
【解析】The reason why …不能做某事的原因;as follows 如下。
(4) 【答案】by the way.
【解析】固定词组。用来引起下文。书信写作时要有相应的逻辑词汇。
(5) 【答案】Sorry again for my not being able to attend your birthday party.
【解析】Sorry again for my not being able to …再次对不能做某事表示歉意。
(6) 【答案】Please send my best regards to our best friends.
【解析】Please send my best regards to ….代我向……问好的固定句式。
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效 果 验 证
)
假如你是新华中学的学生李华,你的美国朋友 Tom一周前给你发电子邮件,询问你暑假里的打算, 但你因准备期末考试未能及时回复。请根据以下要点给他回封邮件: 1)未及时回信的原因;2)你假期的打算(如做兼职、旅行、做志愿者等)
Dear Tom,
How is everything going on with you? I’m writing this letter to express my apology to you for not writing you back in time.
The final exam,(1) (我们大家都很重视的),
was around the corner. It was imperative for me to make full preparations for it.(2)
.(因此,我没有及时给您回信) In your letter, you asked me about my arrangement for the summer vacation. I intend to take a part-time job, (3)
.(在超市做店员,这将给我一个机会来提高我的沟通能力。(定语从句))(4) (除此之外),(5)
. (我不仅可以挣一些钱来买我喜欢的书,而且我可以丰富我的生活。(倒装句))(6) (除此之外), I mean to go on a sightseeing tour around China with my parents, during which we can(7) (不仅品尝美味的当地食物,而且享受如画的风景) and have our horizon broadened. How about your summer vacation? Do you have something special to do?
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(8)
让您等了这么久,我期待收到您的来信。)
答案 (1)【答案】which all of us attached great importance to
【解析】which引导定语从句修饰前面的exam;attach importance to 重视
(2) 【答案】Therefore, I was not available to reply to your letter in time
【解析】be available to do…没有空做……;reply to回复。
.(再次向您道歉,
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
(3) 【答案】working as a shop assistant in a supermarket, which will offer me an opportunity to improve my capability of communication
【解析】which引导定语从句修饰前面的整句话。
(4) 【答案】In addition
【解析】逻辑词,引起下一个要点或者是下一个方面。
(5) 【答案】not only can I earn some money to purchase my favorite books, but also I can have my life enriched
【解析】not only…but also..不但……而且……;have sth done让某事被做。
(6) 【答案】Apart from that
【解析】逻辑词,引起下一个要点。
(7) 【答案】not only taste the delicious local food but also enjoy the picturesque scenery
【解析】not only…but also…不但……而且。
(8) 【答案】Once again, I apologize for having you wait for such a long time and I am looking forward to hearing from you
【解析】再次致歉+结尾功能句。
解答
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。今年寒假你参加了学校组织的赴美游学活动。请给接待你的史密斯夫妇写一封感谢信,内容包括:
1. 感谢对你的照顾;
2. 感谢带你体验西方文化;
3. 邀请他们来中国游玩。
注意:1. 词数不少于50;2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Mr. and Mrs. Smith,
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(1) ? (最近怎么样)(2)
.(我写信是为了感谢你让我在美国的美好经历,因为你的热情好客,我非常感激)
(3) .(你真好,把我照顾得这么好。) (4)
. (如果没有你们的热情款待,我就不会有如此难忘的旅行,也不会对贵国有如此深刻的了解。(虚拟语气)) All the places of interest you took
me to impressed me a lot. (5)
. (中央公园
的美丽使我惊叹,给我留下深刻印象的不仅是美国文化,还有贵公司。) I could never thank you more for it.(6) , (除此以外) I truly want to show you my country and introduce my life to you.(7)
. (如果可能的话,请到中国来,我非常愿意做你们的导游,带你们游览北京。
(8) . (我相信你一定会在这里度过一段美好的时光。)
I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
答案 (1)【答案】How is it going?/ How is everything going? How have you been lately?
【解析】书信问候语。
(2) 【答案】I am writing to thank you for my wonderful experience in the US because of your hospitality and I am so grateful for it
【解析】I am writing to …书信作文功能句;hospitality热情;be grateful for对……感激。
(3) 【答案】It was so nice of you to take great care of me
【解析】固定句式It is + adj. +of sb + to do sth. 做某事对某人来说真是太……了。
(4) 【答案】But for your hospitality, I would not have had such an unforgettable trip and the deep understanding of your nation.
【解析】句中用了虚拟语气。but for如果没有……,后面句子谓语动词用would have done表示对过去情况虚拟;have a deep understanding of对……有一个深度的了解。
(5) 【答案】The Central Park which amazed me with its great beauty, left me a great impression of not only American culture but also your company.
【解析】which引导定语从句修饰the Central Park;not only…but also…不但……而且,可以用来替换and。
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(6) 【答案】Besides
【解析】此外,表示逻辑上另外一个要点。
(7) 【答案】If it is possible, please visit China, and I am so willing to be your guide and show you around Beijing
【解析】功能句,回馈对方好意;be willing to do sth.乐意做某事;show sb around… 带领某人参观……。
(8) 【答案】I believe you will definitely have a great time here
【解析】definitely一定会。
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