2026届高三英语专项复习读后续写---猫咪 Miracle 的午后 导学案

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 The smell of roasted chicken filled the kitchen as we gathered for our usual Friday dinner. Having swallowed a big mouthful of chicken, I took a deep breath and began, “Could I invite some friends over tomorrow? Just for the afternoon?” My parents exchanged a glance, then nodded readily. But beside me, my younger sister, Lily, froze. Her wide eyes locked onto mine. “But... what about Miracle? She’ll be terrified, Ethan.” Miracle was a cat Lily rescued on a rainy day last winter. True to her name, the cat had survived. Yet, it remained a creature of profound shyness: Loud voices sent her trembling under beds; sudden movements made her jump. She wasn’t just a pet; she was a fragile soul Lily fiercely protected. “I promise, Lily,” I insisted, leaning forward, meeting her worried gaze(凝视). “We’ll stay in the living room. No loud music, no shouting games. I’ll keep the back door shut tight, and I’ll warn everyone to be quiet. Miracle won’t even know they’re here.” I saw the conflict in her eyes — her desire to be supportive warring with her deep concern for the poor cat. After a tense silence, she finally gave a small, reluctant nod. Saturday arrived with sunshine and laughter as my friends piled in. True to my word, I guided them straight to the living room, reminding them firmly about Miracle’s sensitivity.Initially, we chatted, played cards quietly. Glancing around, I spotted Miracle sliding silently down the hallway towards Lily’s room. Good, she’s keeping her distance, I thought, relieved. As the afternoon wore on, however, the initial caution disappeared. A competitive board game led to enthusiastic cheers and laughter. Lost in the sheer fun of being with my friends, I forgot everything - he promise, the fragile creature. After friends departed with cheerful goodbyes, I began tidying empty glasses, still lost in the happy scenes when Lily burst through the front door into her room. Then came her scream, “Ethan, Miracle is gone.” 注意： 1.续写词数应为150左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 A cold wave of fear rushed through me. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Luckily, we finally found Miracle in the backyard. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 文本分析​ 1． 角色：_______________________________________________________________ 2．视角：第___________人称​ 3．时空线：from Friday dinner------after friends departed​ 4．请在文章中将可能的线索都找出来。​ Why did Lily worry about Ethan inviting friends over?：____________________________​ What was Miracle like?：____________________________________________________​ What promise did Ethan make to Lily?：_______________________________________​ How did the afternoon with friends go at first?：_________________________________​ What made Ethan forget his promise?：_________________________________________​ What happened after friends departed?：________________________________________​ 5． 情节线：Ethan 周五晚餐时请求邀请朋友周六来家 →________________________________________________→周六朋友到来，起初大家安静活动→_______________________________→（续写）Ethan 因 Miracle 失踪感到恐惧并行动→最终在后院找到 Miracle 及后续​ 6．情感线：Ethan：期待（请求邀请朋友时）→___________（朋友到来初期）→___________（玩游戏时）→___________（发现 Miracle 失踪时）→___________（续写）​ Lily：担忧（Ethan 提邀请时）→___________（答应 Ethan 后）→___________（发现 Miracle 失踪时）→___________（续写）​ 7．综合以上信息，请用 3-4 句话概括文章大意。（中英各一个）​ 中文：____________________________________________________________________​ 英文：___________________________________________________________________​ 8．句式：请找出文中的时间状语从句、条件状语从句、分词作状语、直接引语各一例并标注：​ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．主题（本文属于人与自我 / 人与他人）：___________​ 情节构造​ 第一段提示句：A cold wave of fear rushed through me.​ 衔接句 1——— 对 “fear” 提问 “Ethan 因恐惧会有哪些反应？”：What reactions might Ethan have because of fear?​ 过渡句推演：衔接 1→___________←衔接 2​ 衔接句 2——— 对 “应对失踪” 提问 “Ethan 会做些什么来寻找 Miracle？”：What would Ethan do to find Miracle?​ 第二段提示句：Luckily, we finally found Miracle in the backyard.​ 衔接句 3——— 对 “found” 提问 “Miracle 被找到时状态如何？”：What was Miracle like when she was found?​ 过渡句推演：衔接 3→___________←主题​ 主题：___________________________________________________________________​ 段落构思​ 第一段：A cold wave of fear rushed through me.​ →①___________→②___________→③___________；​ 英文： ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 第二段：Luckily, we finally found Miracle in the backyard.​ →④___________→⑤___________→⑥___________。​ 英文： ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________​ 参考答案 文本分析​ 1．角色：Ethan（“我”）、Ethan 的父母、Lily（Ethan 的妹妹）、Miracle（Lily 救助的猫）、Ethan 的朋友们​ 2．视角：第一人称​ 3．时空线：from Friday dinner---Saturday afternoon (friends visiting)---after friends departed​ 4．线索：​ Why did Lily worry about Ethan inviting friends over?：Because Miracle is extremely shy and gets terrified by loud voices or sudden movements, and Lily fiercely protects her.​ What was Miracle like?：She is a shy cat; loud voices make her tremble under beds, sudden movements make her jump, and she is a fragile soul.​ What promise did Ethan make to Lily?：He promised to keep friends in the living room, no loud music or shouting games, shut the back door tight, and warn everyone to be quiet so Miracle wouldn't know they're here.​ How did the afternoon with friends go at first?：Initially, they chatted and played cards quietly, and Miracle slid to Lily's room, keeping distance.​ What made Ethan forget his promise?：A competitive board game led to enthusiastic cheers and laughter, and he was lost in the fun with friends.​ What happened after friends departed?：Lily burst into her room and found Miracle was gone, then screamed to Ethan.​ 5． 情节线： Ethan 周五晚餐时请求邀请朋友周六来家→父母同意，Lily 因担心猫咪 Miracle 犹豫，Ethan 作出承诺后 Lily 勉强答应→周六朋友到来，起初大家安静活动→后来因玩游戏气氛变热烈，Ethan 忘承诺→朋友离开后，Lily 发现 Miracle 不见了→（续写）Ethan 因 Miracle 失踪感到恐惧并行动→最终在后院找到 Miracle 及后续 6．情感线：Ethan：期待（请求邀请朋友时）→安心（朋友到来初期）→投入 / 兴奋（玩游戏时）→恐惧 / 懊悔（发现 Miracle 失踪时）→急切 / 愧疚（续写）​ Lily：担忧（Ethan 提邀请时）→不安（答应 Ethan 后）→焦急 / 慌张（发现 Miracle 失踪时）→释然 / 心疼（续写）​ 7．文章大意：​ 中文：周五晚餐时，Ethan 请求周六邀请朋友来家，父母同意但妹妹 Lily 因担心救助的害羞猫咪 Miracle 而犹豫，Ethan 作出保证后 Lily 勉强答应。周六朋友来访，起初大家安静活动，后因玩游戏变热闹，Ethan 忘承诺，朋友离开后 Lily 发现 Miracle 不见了。​ 英文：At Friday dinner, Ethan asked to invite friends over on Saturday. His parents agreed, but his sister Lily hesitated, worrying about Miracle, the shy cat she rescued. After Ethan promised to keep things quiet, Lily reluctantly agreed. On Saturday, friends came; they were quiet at first but got noisy playing games, and Ethan forgot his promise. After friends left, Lily found Miracle was missing.​ 8．句式：​ 时间状语从句：After friends departed with cheerful goodbyes, I began tidying empty glasses...​ 条件状语从句：（文中无典型条件状语从句，可补充类似表达示例，如 "If we make too much noise, Miracle will be scared."）​ 分词作状语：Having swallowed a big mouthful of chicken, I took a deep breath and began...​ 直接引语：“Could I invite some friends over tomorrow? Just for the afternoon?” / “But... what about Miracle? She’ll be terrified, Ethan.”​ 9．主题（本文属于人与他人）：亲情与责任，承诺的重要性，对弱小生命的关爱​ 情节构造​ 第一段提示句：A cold wave of fear rushed through me.​ 衔接句 1 答案：He might feel his heart race, hands shake, and be filled with regret for breaking the promise.​ 过渡句推演：衔接 1→I dropped the glasses, my mind going blank with regret, then rushed to search every corner with Lily←衔接 2​ 衔接句 2 答案：He would drop what he was doing, start searching every room, call Miracle's name softly, and check places where Miracle might hide.​ 第二段提示句：Luckily, we finally found Miracle in the backyard.​ 衔接句 3 答案：She was huddled under a small bush, her body trembling, eyes wide with fear but calming a little when seeing Lily.​ 过渡句推演：衔接 3→Lily gently picked her up, and I lowered my head, apologizing for not keeping the promise←主题​ 主题：承诺需坚守，关爱与理解能化解矛盾​ 段落构思​ 第一段：A cold wave of fear rushed through me.​ →①Ethan froze, regret hitting him hard for forgetting the promise→②He and Lily hurried to search rooms, calling Miracle softly→③They checked under beds, behind curtains but found nothing; he felt more anxious​ 英文：A cold wave of fear rushed through me. Regret pricked my heart—I should have kept my promise. I dropped the glass and ran to join Lily, calling "Miracle" softly. We checked under beds, in closets, behind the sofa, but there was no sign of her. My hands shook, worried we'd lost her forever.​ 第二段：Luckily, we finally found Miracle in the backyard.​ →④Miracle was hiding under a bush, trembling slightly→⑤Lily gently comforted her, and Ethan apologized sincerely→⑥Miracle relaxed in Lily's arms, and Ethan decided to be more responsible​ 英文：Luckily, we finally found Miracle in the backyard. She was curled under a rose bush, ears flattened. Lily knelt down, calling her name softly, and Miracle inched toward her. As Lily held her, I said, "I'm sorry, Lily. I shouldn't have let it get noisy." Lily smiled weakly—Miracle was safe, and that's what mattered.​ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$