2026届高三英语专项复习读后续写 Mike 与奶奶的舞会故事 导学案

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 One day, Mike and his mom Rose reached his grandma Alondra’s house for lunch. During it, they talked about the school’s approaching prom (舞会). Alondra said, “When I was young, I failed to attend the school’s prom for some reason!” Rose could see that Alondra had dreamed about attending a prom. After returning home, Rose encouraged Mike to ask his grandma to be his dance partner. She wanted to help Alondra to realize her dream. She knew Alondra was outgoing and loved to stay with young kids. Mike initially hesitated but finally decided to follow his mother’s suggestion. His good friend Lily supported his decision, too. The next day, Mike sent the invitation to his grandma. Seeing it, Alondra was surprised and excited. When that big night came, Alondra wore a beautiful dress. When they joyfully walked into the hall of the prom, unexpectedly, there was a loud gasp (倒抽气). Mike could feel all eyes on him. “Wait! Did he bring his old grandmother as his dance partner?” some kids behind them laughed. Mike looked around, finding that every boy had a young girl as their partner. Upset and embarrassed, he whispered, “I’m sorry, Gran. Don’t hate me for this.” Without a second thought, he left his grandmother behind and walked out of the hall, vowing not to return to the prom. Poor Alondra was left alone in the hall. She had never imagined she’d be alone in a hall full of young children. But it happened. Mike sat on the basketball court stairs, thinking about how terrible it was to bring Alondra along. Suddenly, a familiar voice from behind distracted his racing thoughts. “Your grandmother needs you,” it said. “It was very rude of you to leave her alone!” Lily approached him, encouraging him to be back with his grandma. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150个左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Lily sat down on the stairs next to him. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Holding her hands, Mike cried, “Gran, sorry! Thanks for being my dance partner.” _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 文本分析​ 1． 角色：_________________________________ 2．视角：第_______________人称​ 3．时空线：from the spelling test---____________________---talking about the prom---____________________---the prom night---_____________________---Lily approaching Mike---the next morning（续写相关时间延续）​ 4. 可能的线索：​ How did Alondra get the chance to attend the prom? What happened when Mike and Alondra entered the prom hall? How did Lily react to Mike leaving Alondra? What was Mike's inner conflict after leaving? What was Alondra's state when left alone? How did Alondra feel when receiving Mike's invitation? 5．情节线：Mike 和妈妈去奶奶家吃午饭，谈及学校舞会，奶奶提及年轻时未参加过舞会。→_______________________→舞会当晚，Mike 和奶奶进入大厅后遭同学嘲笑，Mike 尴尬离开，留下奶奶一人。→____________________→（续写）Lily 进一步开导 Mike，Mike 醒悟去寻找奶奶并道歉，最终和奶奶在舞会共舞。​ 6．情感线：Mike：____________（inviting grandma initially）→___________________（walking into the hall with grandma）→_______________（being laughed at and leaving grandma）→______________（sitting on the stairs）→__________________（续写中听了 Lily 的话后）​ Alondra：______________（talking about prom）→______________（receiving invitation and at prom night）→____________（being left alone）→_____________（Mike coming back and apologizing）​ Lily：支持（supporting Mike's decision initially）→正直（pointing out Mike's rudeness and encouraging him）​ 7. 综合以上信息，概括文章大意。​ 中文： ——————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————— 英文： ——————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————— 8. 句式：（3--5个句子） _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9. 主题（本文属于人与自我、人与他人）：亲情、友情以及勇于面对和改正错误​ 情节构造​ 第一段提示句：Lily sat down on the stairs next to him.​ 衔接句 1——— 对 “stood outside” 提问 “Lily 坐下后会做什么？”：What would Lily do after sitting down next to him?​ 过渡句推演：衔接 1→______________________←衔接 2​ 衔接句 2——— 对 “talking to Mike” 提问 “Lily 具体会对 Mike 说些什么来打动他？”：What specific words would Lily say to Mike to move him?​ 第二段提示句：_________________________ 衔接句 3——— 对 “Alondra's reaction” 提问 “Alondra 会如何回应 Mike 的道歉？”：How would Alondra respond to Mike's apology?​ 过渡句推演：衔接 3→_______________________________←主题​ 主题： _______________________________________________________________________ 段落构思​ 第一段：The next morning, Karie stood outside Ms. McCormack’s office.​ →①_____________________→②____________________→③_______________________________ 英文： _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 第二段：Holding her hands, Mike cried, “Gran, sorry! Thanks for being my dance partner.”​ →④_____________________→⑤_______________________→⑥__________________________________；​ 英文： _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 文本分析​ 1．角色：Mike（主人公，高中生）、Rose（Mike 的妈妈）、Alondra（Mike 的奶奶）、Lily（Mike 的好朋友）​ 2．视角：第第三人称​ 3．时空线：from the spelling test---at grandma's house for lunch---talking about the prom---Mike inviting grandma---the prom night---Mike leaving grandma and sitting on basketball court stairs---Lily approaching Mike---the next morning（续写相关时间延续）​ 4. 可能的线索：​ How did Alondra get the chance to attend the prom?：Rose noticed Alondra's dream of attending prom and encouraged Mike to ask her to be his dance partner, and Mike did so.​ What happened when Mike and Alondra entered the prom hall?：There was a loud gasp, some kids laughed at them, and Mike felt upset and embarrassed, then left Alondra alone.​ How did Lily react to Mike leaving Alondra?：Lily approached Mike, pointed out his rudeness, and encouraged him to go back to his grandma.​ What was Mike's inner conflict after leaving?：He might feel both embarrassed by others' laughter and guilty for leaving his grandma who was excited about the prom.​ What was Alondra's state when left alone?：She was left alone in the hall, which she had never imagined, feeling probably sad.​ How did Alondra feel when receiving Mike's invitation?：She was surprised and excited.​ 5．情节线：Mike 和妈妈去奶奶家吃午饭，谈及学校舞会，奶奶提及年轻时未参加过舞会。→妈妈鼓励 Mike 邀请奶奶当舞伴，Mike 照做，奶奶很兴奋。→舞会当晚，Mike 和奶奶进入大厅后遭同学嘲笑，Mike 尴尬离开，留下奶奶一人。→Mike 坐在篮球场台阶上，Lily 前来劝说他回到奶奶身边。→（续写）Lily 进一步开导 Mike，Mike 醒悟去寻找奶奶并道歉，最终和奶奶在舞会共舞。​ 6．情感线：Mike：犹豫（inviting grandma initially）→兴奋（walking into the hall with grandma）→尴尬又沮丧（being laughed at and leaving grandma）→纠结（sitting on the stairs）→愧疚又坚定（续写中听了 Lily 的话后）​ Alondra：期待（talking about prom）→兴奋（receiving invitation and at prom night）→失落（being left alone）→欣慰（Mike coming back and apologizing）​ Lily：支持（supporting Mike's decision initially）→正直（pointing out Mike's rudeness and encouraging him）​ 7. 综合以上信息，概括文章大意。​ 中文：一天，Mike 和妈妈 Rose 去奶奶 Alondra 家吃午饭时谈及学校即将到来的舞会，Alondra 说自己年轻时没参加过。Rose 鼓励 Mike 邀请奶奶当舞伴圆她的梦，Mike 照做，奶奶很兴奋。舞会当晚，两人进入大厅后遭同学嘲笑，Mike 尴尬地丢下奶奶离开，坐在篮球场台阶上。好友 Lily 赶来，指出他的不对并鼓励他回到奶奶身边。​ 英文：One day, Mike and his mom Rose went to his grandma Alondra's house for lunch, and they talked about the school's approaching prom. Alondra said she didn't attend the prom when she was young. Rose encouraged Mike to ask Alondra to be his dance partner to realize her dream, and Mike did so, making Alondra surprised and excited. On the prom night, when Mike and Alondra walked into the hall, some kids laughed at them. Mike felt upset and embarrassed, left Alondra alone and sat on the basketball court stairs. His good friend Lily came, pointed out his rudeness and encouraged him to go back to his grandma.​ 8.句式： 时间状语从句（When they joyfully walked into the hall of the prom...）； 形容词做状语（Upset and embarrassed, he whispered...）； 宾语从句（Rose could see that Alondra had dreamed about attending a prom...）​ 9. 主题（本文属于人与自我、人与他人）：亲情、友情以及勇于面对和改正错误​ 情节构造​ 第一段提示句：Lily sat down on the stairs next to him.​ 衔接句 1——— 对 “stood outside” 提问 “Lily 坐下后会做什么？”：What would Lily do after sitting down next to him?​ 过渡句推演：衔接 1→Lily would persuade Mike by recalling Alondra's excitement and her expectation for the prom←衔接 2​ 衔接句 2——— 对 “talking to Mike” 提问 “Lily 具体会对 Mike 说些什么来打动他？”：What specific words would Lily say to Mike to move him?​ 第二段提示句：Holding her hands, Mike cried, “Gran, sorry! Thanks for being my dance partner.”​ 衔接句 3——— 对 “Alondra's reaction” 提问 “Alondra 会如何回应 Mike 的道歉？”：How would Alondra respond to Mike's apology?​ 过渡句推演：衔接 3→Alondra would forgive Mike and express her happiness of being with him, then they would go back to the hall and dance←主题​ 主题：亲情的包容与理解，以及勇于承担责任能弥补过错​ 段落构思​ 第一段：The next morning, Karie stood outside Ms. McCormack’s office.​ →①Lily 坐在 Mike 身边，先安抚他的情绪，然后提起奶奶收到邀请时的样子。→②Lily 讲述奶奶为舞会做的准备，让 Mike 意识到奶奶对舞会的珍视。→③Mike 听后感到愧疚，决定回到舞会去找奶奶；​ 英文：Lily sat down on the stairs next to him. She gently patted his shoulder and said, “Mike, don't be so down. Do you remember how grandma's eyes lit up when she got your invitation? She kept telling everyone how happy she was.” She continued, “She even spent a long time choosing her dress, hoping to look nice for you. She's not here for others' opinions, but just because she's happy to be with you.” Mike's eyes turned red. He stood up and said, “You're right, I should go to find her.”​ 第二段：Holding her hands, Mike cried, “Gran, sorry! Thanks for being my dance partner.”​ →④Alondra 看到 Mike 回来，眼里泛起泪光，温柔地回应他的道歉。→⑤Alondra 拉着 Mike 的手，提议一起回到舞池。→⑥他们回到大厅，在大家的注视下共舞，之前嘲笑的人也露出了善意的微笑；​ 英文：Holding her hands, Mike cried, “Gran, sorry! Thanks for being my dance partner.” Alondra wiped the tears from Mike's eyes and smiled, “Oh, my boy, it's okay. I know you didn't mean it.” She held his hand tightly, “Shall we go back and dance? That's what I've been looking forward to.” Mike nodded. When they walked back into the hall, Lily smiled at them. The music was still on, and they started to dance. Those who laughed before now watched them with warm smiles.​ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$