Unit 1 Back to school 重返校园（单元应用文写作精练） 英语译林版2020必修第一册

Unit 1 Back to school 重返校园 应用文写作精练（解析版） ( 写作主题 识 ) 主题：给成立学校俱乐部给提议 写作框架： 第一段 问题陈述：开门见山，表明你提议建立俱乐部的基本情况。 第二段 介绍俱乐部的具体内容。 第三段 希望提案被采纳和盼望回复。 写作词汇短语： 1. propose v. 提议，建议 2．organize v. 组织 3．promote v. 促进；推动 4．improve v. 改进；改善 5．Be aimed to doing sth. 计划，旨在做某事 6．hand out 分发 7. hold workshops 组织研讨会 8．give speeches/ talks on 就……作演讲 9. set up 创建，建立，开办 10．sign up for 报名参加 11．provide a platform for 为……提供一个平台 12. a sense of belonging 归属感 13．in the charge of 由……负责 14.be responsible for 对……负责 写作句型： 【开头句】 1.I’m glad to hear the news that you want to found a new club. 得知你想创建一个新的俱乐部, 我非常开心。 2. I’m writing to offer my proposals since you are seeking help for setting up a club. 我写信是为了提供我的建议, 因为你在寻求帮助来建立一个俱乐部。 3. With the aim of improving students’ short story writing skills, I propose setting up a short story writing club. 为了提高学生的短篇小说写作能力，我建议成立一个短篇小说写作俱乐部。 【中间句】 4. It’s important to appeal to more students to take part in activities. 吸引更多的学生参加活动是很重要的。 5.It’s a great idea to make the most of school resources. 充分利用学校的资源是个好主意。 6. Club activities should be designed carefully with good preparations for enough material needs. 俱乐部活动应仔细设计, 并为足够的材料需求做好充分的准备。 【结尾句】 7. I sincerely hope that you can make achievements in. . . 真诚地祝愿你在……取得成就。 8. I sincerely hope you can consider my proposal seriously. 我真诚地希望您能认真考虑我的建议。 9. I sincerely hope you can take my proposal into serious consideration. 我真诚地希望您能认真考虑我的建议。 写作模板： Dear …. I’m writing to propose setting up ____________________________________________________________. The club will consist of _________________. We believe this club can create a_________________. I would appreciate it ___________________. Your support would be invaluable. Looking forward to your reply! Yours sincerely Li Hua 真题示例： 举一反三： 假如你是李华，你最喜欢的歌手Justin Bieber（贾斯汀·比伯）下个月将到你市演出。近日你准备和几个朋友成立Justin Bieber的歌迷俱乐部（fan club）。请你给你的加拿大笔友Freddy发一封e­mail，内容要点如下； 1. 喜欢Justin Bieber的理由； 2. 希望Freddy就如何办好歌迷俱乐部提出建议。 注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。 Dear Freddy, I’m more than delighted to tell you that Justin Bieber, my favorite singer…________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Freddy, I’m more than delighted to tell you that Justin Bieber, my favorite singer, will come to our city to perform next month. I’m so happy to tell you the news that I decided to form a Justin Bieber fan club with some of my friends. All of us like him and enjoy his songs very much. He is very charming and fantastic! His songs make us feel the true love. We can sing most of his songs and would like to know more about him. But we don’t know what we should do, and where we can pick up some useful information about him and his performing plans. Could you offer us some good advice? Looking forward to your reply soon. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文中的书信，要求考生给美国笔友 Freddy写封邮件，介绍自己喜欢Justin Bieber的理由，以及希望Freddy就如何办好歌迷俱乐部提出建议。 【详解】1.词汇积累 开心：glad→more than delighted 好的：good→fantastic 获得：getl→pick up 提供：give→offer 2.句式拓展 合并简单句 原句：I decided to form a Justin Bieber fan club with some of my friends. I’m so happy to tell you the news. 拓展句：I’m so happy to tell you the news that I decided to form a Justin Bieber fan club with some of my friends. 【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m more than delighted to tell you that Justin Bieber, my favorite singer, will come to our city to perform next month. (运用了that引导的宾语从句和同位语) [高分句型2] But we don’t know what we should do, and where we can pick up some useful information about him and his performing plans. (运用了what和where引导的宾语从句) Passage 1 假定你是李华，请根据下面的提示写关于成立英语阅读俱乐部的建议。 1. 俱乐部名称：第一中学英语阅读俱乐部； 2. 俱乐部负责人：李华； 3. 活动时间：每周日下午2点到4点； 4. 成立目的：提高学生的英语阅读能力； 5. 活动内容：朗读英语短文；学生讨论；背诵英语短文；个人展示； 6. 招收新成员的方式：张贴海报，在网站上发出通知。 注意： 1. 词数80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 2 假定你是李华，你校最近新成立了太极俱乐部。请给你的交换生好友Peter写一封信，建议他跟你一起加入太极俱乐部，内容包括： 1. 学校成立太极俱乐部的目的； 2. 建议加入俱乐部的理由； 3. 提出建议。 注意： 1. 词数80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：太极tai chi ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 3 假如你是李华，你的笔友Jack想创办一个手语俱乐部，他发邮件向你征求如何开展活动的建议。请你就此给Jack回信，内容包括： 1.写信的原因； 2.提出三条俱乐部的活动建议； 3.表达你的祝愿。 注意： 1.词数100左右; 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：Students’ Sign Language Club 手语俱乐部 Dear Jack, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua Passage 4 假如你是李华，你最喜欢的歌手周杰伦（Jay Chou）下个月将到你的家乡演出。本周你打算和几个朋友成立Jay Chou的歌迷俱乐部。请你给你的英国笔友Freddy发一封e-mail，说明你们喜欢Jay Chou的理由，并希望Freddy就如何办好歌迷俱乐部提出一些建议。 注意： 1．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2．词数100左右。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 5 你受学生会委托为学校英语宣传栏写一则关于成立英语阅读俱乐部(English Book Club)的通知，内容包括: 1.简述阅读的重要性； 2.该俱乐部的成立目的及活动内容； 3.欢迎报名并提出建议。 注意: 1.词数80左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.通知的标题和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。 NOTICE ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The Students’ Union 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ ( 4 / 6 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ Unit 1 Back to school 重返校园 应用文写作精练（解析版） ( 写作主题 识 ) 主题：给成立学校俱乐部给提议 写作框架： 第一段 问题陈述：开门见山，表明你提议建立俱乐部的基本情况。 第二段 介绍俱乐部的具体内容。 第三段 希望提案被采纳和盼望回复。 写作词汇短语： 1. propose v. 提议，建议 2．organize v. 组织 3．promote v. 促进；推动 4．improve v. 改进；改善 5．Be aimed to doing sth. 计划，旨在做某事 6．hand out 分发 7. hold workshops 组织研讨会 8．give speeches/ talks on 就……作演讲 9. set up 创建，建立，开办 10．sign up for 报名参加 11．provide a platform for 为……提供一个平台 12. a sense of belonging 归属感 13．in the charge of 由……负责 14.be responsible for 对……负责 写作句型： 【开头句】 1.I’m glad to hear the news that you want to found a new club. 得知你想创建一个新的俱乐部, 我非常开心。 2. I’m writing to offer my proposals since you are seeking help for setting up a club. 我写信是为了提供我的建议, 因为你在寻求帮助来建立一个俱乐部。 3. With the aim of improving students’ short story writing skills, I propose setting up a short story writing club. 为了提高学生的短篇小说写作能力，我建议成立一个短篇小说写作俱乐部。 【中间句】 4. It’s important to appeal to more students to take part in activities. 吸引更多的学生参加活动是很重要的。 5.It’s a great idea to make the most of school resources. 充分利用学校的资源是个好主意。 6. Club activities should be designed carefully with good preparations for enough material needs. 俱乐部活动应仔细设计, 并为足够的材料需求做好充分的准备。 【结尾句】 7. I sincerely hope that you can make achievements in. . . 真诚地祝愿你在……取得成就。 8. I sincerely hope you can consider my proposal seriously. 我真诚地希望您能认真考虑我的建议。 9. I sincerely hope you can take my proposal into serious consideration. 我真诚地希望您能认真考虑我的建议。 写作模板： Dear …. I’m writing to propose setting up ____________________________________________________________. The club will consist of _________________. We believe this club can create a_________________. I would appreciate it ___________________. Your support would be invaluable. Looking forward to your reply! Yours sincerely Li Hua 真题示例： 举一反三： 假如你是李华，你最喜欢的歌手Justin Bieber（贾斯汀·比伯）下个月将到你市演出。近日你准备和几个朋友成立Justin Bieber的歌迷俱乐部（fan club）。请你给你的加拿大笔友Freddy发一封e­mail，内容要点如下； 1. 喜欢Justin Bieber的理由； 2. 希望Freddy就如何办好歌迷俱乐部提出建议。 注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。 Dear Freddy, I’m more than delighted to tell you that Justin Bieber, my favorite singer…________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Freddy, I’m more than delighted to tell you that Justin Bieber, my favorite singer, will come to our city to perform next month. I’m so happy to tell you the news that I decided to form a Justin Bieber fan club with some of my friends. All of us like him and enjoy his songs very much. He is very charming and fantastic! His songs make us feel the true love. We can sing most of his songs and would like to know more about him. But we don’t know what we should do, and where we can pick up some useful information about him and his performing plans. Could you offer us some good advice? Looking forward to your reply soon. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文中的书信，要求考生给美国笔友 Freddy写封邮件，介绍自己喜欢Justin Bieber的理由，以及希望Freddy就如何办好歌迷俱乐部提出建议。 【详解】1.词汇积累 开心：glad→more than delighted 好的：good→fantastic 获得：getl→pick up 提供：give→offer 2.句式拓展 合并简单句 原句：I decided to form a Justin Bieber fan club with some of my friends. I’m so happy to tell you the news. 拓展句：I’m so happy to tell you the news that I decided to form a Justin Bieber fan club with some of my friends. 【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m more than delighted to tell you that Justin Bieber, my favorite singer, will come to our city to perform next month. (运用了that引导的宾语从句和同位语) [高分句型2] But we don’t know what we should do, and where we can pick up some useful information about him and his performing plans. (运用了what和where引导的宾语从句) Passage 1 假定你是李华，请根据下面的提示写关于成立英语阅读俱乐部的建议。 1. 俱乐部名称：第一中学英语阅读俱乐部； 2. 俱乐部负责人：李华； 3. 活动时间：每周日下午2点到4点； 4. 成立目的：提高学生的英语阅读能力； 5. 活动内容：朗读英语短文；学生讨论；背诵英语短文；个人展示； 6. 招收新成员的方式：张贴海报，在网站上发出通知。 注意： 1. 词数80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear fellow students, I propose establishing the “No.1 Middle School Reading Club,” led by me, Li Hua. We plan to meet every Sunday from 2:00 to 4:00 pm, aiming to enhance students’ English reading comprehension, confidence, and active participation in English activities. Each session will include reading and reciting articles, completing exercises, engaging in discussions, summarizing learnings, and a brief personal expression segment. Required materials are just paper and pen. To attract members, we’ll create posters for the school and announcements in the school newspaper and on the website. Join us to freely explore and enjoy English! Best, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，写一篇成立英语阅读俱乐部的建议。 【详解】1.词汇积累 提议：propose→put forward 建立：establish→set up 计划：plan→schedule 包括：include→cover 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：I propose establishing the “No.1 Middle School Reading Club,” led by me, Li Hua. 拓展句：I propose establishing the “No.1 Middle School Reading Club,” which is led by me, Li Hua. 【点睛】【高分句型1】We plan to meet every Sunday from 2:00 to 4:00 pm, aiming to enhance students’ English reading comprehension, confidence, and active participation in English activities.（运用了不定式作宾语，现在分词作状语） 【高分句型2】Each session will include reading and reciting articles, completing exercises, engaging in discussions, summarizing learnings, and a brief personal expression segment.（运用了动名词作宾语） Passage 2 假定你是李华，你校最近新成立了太极俱乐部。请给你的交换生好友Peter写一封信，建议他跟你一起加入太极俱乐部，内容包括： 1. 学校成立太极俱乐部的目的； 2. 建议加入俱乐部的理由； 3. 提出建议。 注意： 1. 词数80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：太极tai chi ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Peter, Our school has recently set up Tai Chi Club in order for us to have a better understanding of the ancient Chinese culture behind tai chi and enjoy our school life. I’m writing to suggest you join it with me. Practising tai chi can help us relax our muscles and focus on peace of mind while we perform some tai chi moves. Our balance and flexibility will slowly improve, bringing about a state of physical balance and mental peace. It is also a good chance to explore the Chinese culture behind it. I do hope you can join the club and appreciate the charm of tai chi. Looking forward to your early reply. Best, Li Hua 【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给交换生好友Peter写一封信，建议他跟你一起加入太极俱乐部。 【详解】1.词汇积累 建立：found→set up 集中：concentrate on→focus on 精神的：spiritual→mental 加入：take part in=join 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Our balance and flexibility will slowly improve, bringing about a state of physical balance and mental peace. 拓展句：Our balance and flexibility will slowly improve, which brings about a state of physical balance and mental peace. 【点睛】[高分句型1] Practising tai chi can help us relax our muscles and focus on peace of mind while we perform some tai chi moves. (运用了动名词短语作主语) [高分句型2] Our balance and flexibility will slowly improve, bringing about a state of physical balance and mental peace. (运用了现在分词作状语) Passage 3 假如你是李华，你的笔友Jack想创办一个手语俱乐部，他发邮件向你征求如何开展活动的建议。请你就此给Jack回信，内容包括： 1.写信的原因； 2.提出三条俱乐部的活动建议； 3.表达你的祝愿。 注意： 1.词数100左右; 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：Students’ Sign Language Club 手语俱乐部 Dear Jack, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Jack, I am quite happy to get the news that you want to set up a Students’ Sign Language Club. How exciting! When it comes to how to make our activities interesting and meaningful, I’d like to share my thoughts and offer some personal suggestions. Firstly, it is a good idea to invite some sign language experts to give us lectures on a weekly basis. Secondly, in order to show our care, we can regularly visit the deaf students in special schools and learn to interact with them, which is also a valuable chance to put what we learned into practice. Only in this way can we truly appreciate the beauty of sign language and build a bridge between the hearts of the deaf people. Hope you will have great success in your club! Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假如你是李华，你的笔友Jack想创办一个手语俱乐部，他发邮件向你征求如何开展活动的建议。请你就此给Jack回信。 【详解】1.词汇积累 建议：set up→build up 建议：suggestion→advice 高兴的：happy→delighted 专家：expert→specialist 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：Firstly, it is a good idea to invite some sign language experts to give us lectures on a weekly basis. 拓展句：Firstly, if you can invite some sign language experts to give us lectures on a weekly basis, it will be a good idea. 【点睛】[高分句型1] Only in this way can we truly appreciate the beauty of sign language and build a bridge between the hearts of the deaf people. (运用了倒装句) [高分句型2] Secondly, in order to show our care, we can regularly visit the deaf students in special schools and learn to interact with them, which is also a valuable chance to put what we learned into practice. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句) Passage 4 假如你是李华，你最喜欢的歌手周杰伦（Jay Chou）下个月将到你的家乡演出。本周你打算和几个朋友成立Jay Chou的歌迷俱乐部。请你给你的英国笔友Freddy发一封e-mail，说明你们喜欢Jay Chou的理由，并希望Freddy就如何办好歌迷俱乐部提出一些建议。 注意： 1．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2．词数100左右。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Dear Freddy， I'm glad to tell you that Jay Chou, my favourite singer, will come to my hometown to perform next month. I'm so pleased at the news that I have decided to form a Jay Chou fan club with some of my friends. All of us like him and enjoy his songs very much. He is very charming and fantastic! While listening to his songs, we feel so energetic and relaxed that we think we can do what we should do better. In addition, we can sing most of his songs and would like to know more about him. But we don't know what we should do, and where we can pick up some useful information about him and his performing plans. Could you give us some good advice? Looking forward to your reply soon. Yours truly， Li Hua 【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国笔友Freddy写封信，介绍自己喜欢周杰伦的原因，并希望Freddy就如何办好歌迷俱乐部提出一些建议。 【详解】1.词汇积累 高兴的：happy→pleased 棒极了的：brilliant→fantastic 此外 ：besides→in addition 建议：suggestion= advice 2.句式拓展 同义句 原句： I'm so pleased at the news that I have decided to form a Jay Chou fan club with some of my friends. 拓展句： Pleased at the news, I have decided to form a Jay Chou fan club with some of my friends. 【点睛】[高分句型1] I'm so pleased at the news that I have decided to form a Jay Chou fan club with some of my friends. (运用了so…that句型) [高分句型2] But we don't know what we should do, and where we can pick up some useful information about him and his performing plans. (运用了连接代词what及连接副词where引导的宾语从句) Passage 5 你受学生会委托为学校英语宣传栏写一则关于成立英语阅读俱乐部(English Book Club)的通知，内容包括: 1.简述阅读的重要性； 2.该俱乐部的成立目的及活动内容； 3.欢迎报名并提出建议。 注意: 1.词数80左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.通知的标题和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。 NOTICE ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The Students’ Union 【答案】                                                                                                           NOTICE Reading is very important in today’s world, as you can gain vast knowledge through varieties of reading materials to meet various challenges in life. To encourage the students to become great English readers, the Student Union will set up an English book club where you can spend time reading together, share good books and attend lectures on reading. Those who are interested in the book club please sign up in the Student Union office by October 20, and any creative suggestions are welcome. The Students’ Union 【分析】这是一篇提纲类作文。要求考生用英语写一则关于成立英语阅读俱乐部的英语通知。 【详解】第一步：审题 体裁：提纲类作文 时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。 结构：总分法 要求： 1.简述阅读的重要性； 2.该俱乐部的成立目的及活动内容； 3.欢迎报名并提出建议。 第二步:列提纲 （重点词组） varieties of；set up；be interested in；sign up 第三步：连词成句 1.Reading is very important in today’s world, as you can gain vast knowledge through varieties of reading materials to meet various challenges in life. 2.To encourage the students to become great English readers, the Student Union will set up an English book club where you can spend time reading together, share good books and attend lectures on reading. 3.Those who are interested in the book club please sign up in the Student Union office by October 20, and any creative suggestions are welcome. 第四步：连句成篇 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。 第五步：润色修改 【点睛】[高分句型1] To encourage the students to become great English readers, the Student Union will set up an English book club where you can spend time reading together, share good books and attend lectures on reading. 动词不定式作目的状语，where引导定语从句 [高分句型2] Those who are interested in the book club please sign up in the Student Union office by October 20, and any creative suggestions are welcome. who引导定语从句 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ ( 9 / 11 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$