内容正文:
第11讲 求助信
目录
01 求助信常用表达
02 求助信常用句型
03 求助信示例仿写
04 真题模拟融合练
求助信常用表达
汉译
英文表达
习惯了的
accustomed
焦急的
anxious
尴尬的
embarrassed
失望的
disappointed
使烦扰;使不安
bother
困惑的
confused
烦恼的
upset
受挫的;沮丧的
frustrated
恼怒的
annoyed
焦虑的;有压力的
stressed
帮助
assistance
指导
guidance
与……相处融洽
fit in with
习惯于
get used/ accustomed to
使自己适应
adjust/ adapt oneself to
做某事有困难
have trouble/ difficulty doing sth.
徒劳地
in vain
帮某人一个忙
do sb. a favor
紧缺
be/ run short of
向……呼吁
appeal to
求助信常用句型
(一)补全句子
1. I don't feel quite accustomed to the life here, and I seem not to be able to fit in well with others.
我觉得我没有完全习惯这儿的生活,而且我似乎不能与他人融洽相处。
2. I long to study English well, but I don't know how, which makes me upset.
我渴望学好英语,但我不知道怎么学,这使我感到烦恼。
3. I can't concentrate on my study these days, and I failed in the last exam, which worries me a lot.
这些日子我不能专心学习,上次考试我没有及格,这使我很担忧。
4. I often feel left out in this school, and I don't know how it has come about.
在这所学校我经常觉得受到冷落,我不知这是怎么回事。
5. I'm so poor at English that I can't make myself understood.
我的英语不好,他们听不懂我的话。
(二)翻译句子
1.我曾试着减肥,但是毫无效果,这使我很沮丧。
I tried losing weight, but nothing worked, which frustrated me a lot.
2.我现在压力很大,能劳烦你给我一些减压的建议吗?
I feel greatly stressed now, so would you be kind enough to offer me some advice on how to relieve stress?
3.面对如此有挑战性的难题,我别无选择只得向你求助。
Faced with so challenging a problem, I have no alternative but to turn to you for help.
求助信示例仿写
1. 示例
假定你是李华,你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。请你给外教 Miss Evans写封邮件,请她帮忙指导。内容包括:
1.剧情简介;
2.指导内容;
3.商定时间、地点。
注意:
1.写作词数应为100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【审题思考】
1.写作任务:写邮件给外教 Miss Evans,请她帮忙指导根据英语课文改编的短剧。
2.写作要素:(1)剧情简介;(2)指导内容;(3)商定时间、地点。
3.细节丰满:(1)构思短剧的剧情,比如这个短剧是根据课本提到的《百万英镑》改编的,主要是金钱影响人们对他人的态度;(2)构思指导内容,可以对改编的剧情是否完整进行指导,也可以指导同学们的发音;(3)商定指导的时间和地点,比如本周六上午十点在学校礼堂进行指导。
【布局思路】
[行文思路]
第一段:说明写信目的。
第二段:简介剧情,说明需要得到哪些方面的指导,商定指导的时间和地点。
第三段:希望得到帮助。
[中文内容]
一切都好吗?我写信是想就一个短剧来寻求你的帮助,这个短剧是我们根据课本内容改编的。
这个短剧讲述的是金钱如何影响人们对他人的态度。然而,我们仍然不确定情节是否完整。此外,为了完美地表演这个短剧,我们特别想知道如何纠正我们的语调和发音。因此,不知你是否方便于本周六上午十点在学校礼堂给我们一些指导?
如果你能帮我们一个忙,我将不胜感激。
【高分范文】
Dear Miss Evans,
How is everything going? I'm writing to seek help from you regarding a short play we have adapted from our textbook.
The play is about how money influences people's attitudes to others. However, we are still uncertain whether the plot is complete. Besides, we are eager to know how to correct our tone and pronunciation in order to perform the play perfectly. Therefore, I was wondering if it was convenient for you to give us some guidance at ten am this Saturday in the school hall.
I’d appreciate it if you could do us a favor.
Yours,
Li Hua
2. 写作实操
假定你是李华,是一名刚转学不久的学生。你在新的学习环境中遇到了很多问题。你现在写邮件向你的好友 Jack求助,倾诉一下你的苦恼。
注意:
1.写作词数应为100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【审题思考】
1.写作任务:因在新的学习环境中遇到了很多问题,写邮件向好友 Jack求助,倾诉自己的苦恼。
2.写作要素:(1)倾诉苦恼;(2)寻求帮助。
3.细节丰满:构思在新的学习环境中遇到的问题,比如不适应新的学校生活,难以和同学们打成一片;在课堂上难以集中注意力,学习上落后;感到被老师和同学冷落,心情沮丧。
【写作实践】
Dear Jack,
It seems ages since I last saw you. How are you getting on?
These days I feel very worried. I don't feel quite accustomed to the new school life and I find it hard to fit in well with my new classmates. Worse still, I seem not to be able to concentrate my attention in class, and I find myself behind others in study. I often feel left out by my teachers and classmates, which makes me very upset.
I really don't know how to get over all this. Would you please give me some advice?
Yours,
Li Hua
3. 仿写演练
假定你是李华,打算高中毕业后学习文学,但你的父母要求你学习金融。请给你的英国朋友 Jack写封邮件,倾诉你的苦恼并寻求他的建议。
注意:
1.写作词数应为100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Jack,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【高分范文】
Dear Jack,
How is everything going? I'm faced with a difficult situation now and I'm writing to ask for your advice.
As a senior, I'd like to choose literature as my major after graduating from high school. However, my parents are opposed to my choice, insisting that I should major in finance for a more promising future. To be honest, I have been in love with literature since childhood and it's really hard for me to accept my parents' idea. What should I do? Could you give me some advice?
Your suggestions will be highly appreciated. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
真题模拟融合练
1.(2024·天津南开·一模)假定你是高三学生李津,你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。给外教Chris写封邮件,请他帮忙指导。邮件内容包括:
(1)剧情简介;
(2)指导内容;
(3)商定时间地点。
注意:
(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Dear Chris,
I am Li Jin, and I’m writing to ask if you could help me and my classmates in changing our text into a short play.
Our play will be based on the text “horse”. The text tells a story of a king and an artist. In the story, the king asked the artist to draw him a beautiful horse. But the artist misunderstood the king, and in the end the king forgave him because of his effort. My classmates and I are struggling with the lines of the play, as we always stumble over pronoun citations. We will have a rehearsal next Wednesday afternoon in the school hall, and I hope you can come and give us some advice.
Yours,
Li Jin
【导语】本篇是应用文写作。你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧,要求考生给外教Chris写封邮件,请他帮忙指导。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
帮助:help→assist
改编:change→adapt
要求:ask→request
因为:because of→due to
2. 句式拓展
简单句合并为复合句
原句:Our play will be based on the text “horse”. The text tells a story of a king and an artist.
拓展句:Our play, which will be based on the text titled “horse”, tells a compelling story about a king and an artist.
【点睛】[高分句型1]I am Li Jin, and I’m writing to ask if you could help me and my classmates in changing our text into a short play.(if引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2]My classmates and I are struggling with the lines of the play, as we always stumble over pronoun citations.(as引导的原因状语从句)
2.(2025·广东·模拟预测)假定你是李华,即将高三毕业,请你写封信就如何选择职业向校英语报纸编辑王老师求助。信的内容包括:
1. 个人倾向及原因;
2. 个人理想与父母期待不一致;
3. 困惑及请求帮助。
注意:1. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2. 词数100左右;
3. 信的开头和结尾已写好,不计入总词数。
Dear Ms Wang,
I’m Li Hua, a Senior 3 student who is about to graduate from school.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Ms Wang,
I’m Li Hua, a Senior 3 student who is about to graduate from school. I’m writing to ask for your advice on choosing a career, as I’m now facing a difficult dilemma. I’ve always been passionate about environmental science because I believe protecting the planet is crucial for future generations, and I dream of working in this field to make a difference.
However, my parents hold a different view: they think I should pursue a career in medicine, which they consider more stable and rewarding. Though I understand their concerns, I’m worried that choosing a path I don’t love will make me regret it later.
I’m really confused about how to balance my own aspirations with my parents’ expectations. Could you please give me some practical suggestions? I would be grateful for your help.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。 要求考生写一封信,就如何选择职业向校英语报纸编辑王老师求助。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
建议:advice → suggestion
选择:choose → select
重要的:crucial → important
然而:however → nevertheless
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I’m really confused about how to balance my own aspirations with my parents’ expectations
拓展句:I’m really confused about how I can balance my own aspirations with my parents’ expectations.
【点睛】【高分句型1】However, my parents hold a different view: they think I should pursue a career in medicine, which they consider more stable and rewarding. (运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Though I understand their concerns, I’m worried that choosing a path I don’t love will make me regret it later. (运用了though引导的让步状语从句、that引导的宾语从句以及省略关系代词的定语从句 )
3.(2025·山东·三模)兼职工作既可以提升个人能力,也可以缓解经济压力。假如你是李华,一名大学生,想利用暑假时间做兼职,但你的父母不同意,请你用英语在网站上发帖求助。要点包括:
1. 苦恼的问题;
2. 你和父母所持的不同观点及理由。
参考词汇:
做兼职工作 take a part-time job 与不同的人进行沟通 communicate with different people
缓解家庭的经济压力 ease the family’s financial pressure 工作时的安全问题 the security in work
注意:
1. 文中不得出现考生个人真实信息;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 词数 80~120。
June 2
Dear friends,
I’m Li Hua, a college student. ______________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
I don’t know much about taking a job, but I think that could be right. Dear friends, what do you think I should do?
Li Hua-a college student
【答案】
June 2
Dear friends,
I’m Li Hua, a college student. I want to take a part-time job this summer to improve my skills and ease the family’s financial pressure. In addition, I can build a wide network in advance. However, my parents disagree. They worry about the security in work and think it might affect my studies.
On my side, a part-time job offers opportunities to communicate with different people, which can boost my confidence and social abilities. I also want to earn some money to reduce my parents’ burden. But my parents insist that summer is for rest and study preparation, not work. They fear I might face risks or get too tired.
I don’t know much about taking a job, but I think that could be right. Dear friends, what do you think I should do?
Li Hua-a college student
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生用英语在网站上发帖求助,因为想利用暑假时间做兼职,但父母不同意。
【详解】1.词汇积累
提高:improve→enhance
机会:opportunities→chances
此外:in addition→what’s more/besides
减少:reduce→decrease
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:In addition, I can build a wide network in advance.
拓展句:In addition, I can build a wide network in advance, which will be beneficial to my study and social life.
【点睛】【高分句型1】On my side, a part-time job offers opportunities to communicate with different people, which can boost my confidence and social abilities. (运用了动词不定式作后置定语和which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】But my parents insist that summer is for rest and study preparation, not work. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
4.(2025·河北石家庄·二模)假定你是国际学校学生李华,你所在学校打算下个月举办英语诗歌大赛,需要你来筹备,但困难重重。请你给有相关经验的留学生好友Jim写信救助。内容包括:
(1)写信目的;
(2)你遇到的困难。
注意:
(1)词数80左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jim,
How’s everything going?
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
How’s everything going? I’m reaching out because I’m organizing our school’s English Poetry Competition next month, but it’s turning into a bigger challenge than I expected. Since you’ve successfully hosted similar events, your insights would mean a lot!
Despite putting up posters and sharing updates online, only 15 students have signed up so far — most are seniors, while younger grades show no interest. The current plan includes a basic recitation round and a writing session, but feedback from classmates suggests it’s “too predictable.” Worst of all, the local poets I contacted either lack international experience or are unavailable. Could you give me some valuable suggestions?
Thanks in advance for your wisdom!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给有相关经验的留学生好友Jim写信救助,说明写信目的以及你遇到的困难。
【详解】1.词汇积累
尽管:despite→in spite of
基本的:basic→primary
宝贵的:valuable→precious
建议:suggestion→advice
2.句式拓展
句型转换
原句:The current plan includes a basic recitation round and a writing session, but feedback from classmates suggests it’s “too predictable.”
拓展句:Although the current plan includes a basic recitation round and a writing session, feedback from classmates suggests it’s “too predictable.”
【点睛】【高分句型1】’m reaching out because I’m organizing our school’s English Poetry Competition next month, but it’s turning into a bigger challenge than I expected.(运用了because引导原因状语从句)
【高分句型2】Since you’ve successfully hosted similar events, your insights would mean a lot!(运用了since引导原因状语从句)
5.(2025·贵州黔东南·一模)假定你是李华,你校计划举办一场主题为“科技创新与青少年发展”的科技展览,并希望通过英文网站将其展示给更多人。请你写一封邮件给你的外国朋友Chris,向他了解哪些科技创新更吸引外国青少年,内容包括:
1. 阐明写信事由;
2. 征求建议;
3. 表示感谢。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】参考范文:
Dear Chris,
I hope you’re doing well! I’m writing to ask for your help. Our school is planning a technology exhibition on the theme of “Technology Innovation and Youth Development”. We want to share it on an English website to attract more people, especially teenagers from different countries.
Could you please tell me which technology topics are the most interesting to foreign teen-agers? For example, are they more interested in artificial intelligence, space exploration, or maybe something else? Also, do you have any suggestions on how to make the exhibition more engaging and interactive for a global audience?
Your advice would be really helpful and much appreciated.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外国朋友Chris写一封邮件,向他了解哪些科技创新更吸引外国青少年。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
寻求帮助:ask for your help→seek your help
吸引:attract→appeal to
此外:also→besides
建议:suggestion→advice
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Our school is planning a technology exhibition on the theme of “Technology Innovation and Youth Development”.
拓展句:Our school is planning a technology exhibition, the theme of which is “Technology Innovation and Youth Development”.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Could you please tell me which technology topics are the most interesting to foreign teen-agers?(运用了which引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】Also, do you have any suggestions on how to make the exhibition more engaging and interactive for a global audience?(运用了“疑问词+不定式”作宾语)
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第11讲 求助信
目录
01 求助信常用表达
02 求助信常用句型
03 求助信示例仿写
04 真题模拟融合练
求助信常用表达
汉译
英文表达
习惯了的
焦急的
尴尬的
失望的
使烦扰;使不安
困惑的
烦恼的
受挫的;沮丧的
恼怒的
焦虑的;有压力的
帮助
指导
与……相处融洽
习惯于
使自己适应
做某事有困难
徒劳地
帮某人一个忙
紧缺
向……呼吁
求助信常用句型
(一)补全句子
1. I don't feel quite __________________________, and I seem not to be able to ______________________ others.
我觉得我没有完全习惯这儿的生活,而且我似乎不能与他人融洽相处。
2. I long to study English well, but I don't know how, __________________________.
我渴望学好英语,但我不知道怎么学,这使我感到烦恼。
3. I can't concentrate on my study these days, and I failed in the last exam, __________________________.
这些日子我不能专心学习,上次考试我没有及格,这使我很担忧。
4. I __________________________in this school, and I don't know how it has come about.
在这所学校我经常觉得受到冷落,我不知这是怎么回事。
5. I'm so poor at English that I can't make myself __________________________.
我的英语不好,他们听不懂我的话。
(二)翻译句子
1.我曾试着减肥,但是毫无效果,这使我很沮丧。
______________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________
2.我现在压力很大,能劳烦你给我一些减压的建议吗?
______________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________
3.面对如此有挑战性的难题,我别无选择只得向你求助。
______________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________
求助信示例仿写
1. 示例
假定你是李华,你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。请你给外教 Miss Evans写封邮件,请她帮忙指导。内容包括:
1.剧情简介;
2.指导内容;
3.商定时间、地点。
注意:
1.写作词数应为100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【审题思考】
1.写作任务:写邮件给外教 Miss Evans,请她帮忙指导根据英语课文改编的短剧。
2.写作要素:(1)剧情简介;(2)指导内容;(3)商定时间、地点。
3.细节丰满:(1)构思短剧的剧情,比如这个短剧是根据课本提到的《百万英镑》改编的,主要是金钱影响人们对他人的态度;(2)构思指导内容,可以对改编的剧情是否完整进行指导,也可以指导同学们的发音;(3)商定指导的时间和地点,比如本周六上午十点在学校礼堂进行指导。
【布局思路】
[行文思路]
第一段:说明写信目的。
第二段:简介剧情,说明需要得到哪些方面的指导,商定指导的时间和地点。
第三段:希望得到帮助。
[中文内容]
一切都好吗?我写信是想就一个短剧来寻求你的帮助,这个短剧是我们根据课本内容改编的。
这个短剧讲述的是金钱如何影响人们对他人的态度。然而,我们仍然不确定情节是否完整。此外,为了完美地表演这个短剧,我们特别想知道如何纠正我们的语调和发音。因此,不知你是否方便于本周六上午十点在学校礼堂给我们一些指导?
如果你能帮我们一个忙,我将不胜感激。
【高分范文】
Dear Miss Evans,
How is everything going? I'm writing to seek help from you regarding a short play we have adapted from our textbook.
The play is about how money influences people's attitudes to others. However, we are still uncertain whether the plot is complete. Besides, we are eager to know how to correct our tone and pronunciation in order to perform the play perfectly. Therefore, I was wondering if it was convenient for you to give us some guidance at ten am this Saturday in the school hall.
I’d appreciate it if you could do us a favor.
Yours,
Li Hua
2. 写作实操
假定你是李华,是一名刚转学不久的学生。你在新的学习环境中遇到了很多问题。你现在写邮件向你的好友Jack求助,倾诉一下你的苦恼。
注意:
1.写作词数应为100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【审题思考】
1.写作任务:
2.写作要素:
3.细节丰满:
【写作实践】
Dear Jack,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
3. 仿写演练
假定你是李华,打算高中毕业后学习文学,但你的父母要求你学习金融。请给你的英国朋友 Jack写封邮件,倾诉你的苦恼并寻求他的建议。
注意:
1.写作词数应为100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Jack,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
真题模拟融合练
1.(2024·天津南开·一模)假定你是高三学生李津,你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。给外教Chris写封邮件,请他帮忙指导。邮件内容包括:
(1)剧情简介;
(2)指导内容;
(3)商定时间地点。
注意:
(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
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2.(2025·广东·模拟预测)假定你是李华,即将高三毕业,请你写封信就如何选择职业向校英语报纸编辑王老师求助。信的内容包括:
1. 个人倾向及原因;
2. 个人理想与父母期待不一致;
3. 困惑及请求帮助。
注意:1. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2. 词数100左右;
3. 信的开头和结尾已写好,不计入总词数。
Dear Ms Wang,
I’m Li Hua, a Senior 3 student who is about to graduate from school.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
3.(2025·山东·三模)兼职工作既可以提升个人能力,也可以缓解经济压力。假如你是李华,一名大学生,想利用暑假时间做兼职,但你的父母不同意,请你用英语在网站上发帖求助。要点包括:
1. 苦恼的问题;
2. 你和父母所持的不同观点及理由。
参考词汇:
做兼职工作 take a part-time job 与不同的人进行沟通 communicate with different people
缓解家庭的经济压力 ease the family’s financial pressure 工作时的安全问题 the security in work
注意:
1. 文中不得出现考生个人真实信息;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 词数 80~120。
June 2
Dear friends,
I’m Li Hua, a college student. ______________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
I don’t know much about taking a job, but I think that could be right. Dear friends, what do you think I should do?
Li Hua-a college student
4.(2025·河北石家庄·二模)假定你是国际学校学生李华,你所在学校打算下个月举办英语诗歌大赛,需要你来筹备,但困难重重。请你给有相关经验的留学生好友Jim写信救助。内容包括:
(1)写信目的;
(2)你遇到的困难。
注意:
(1)词数80左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jim,
How’s everything going?
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
5.(2025·贵州黔东南·一模)假定你是李华,你校计划举办一场主题为“科技创新与青少年发展”的科技展览,并希望通过英文网站将其展示给更多人。请你写一封邮件给你的外国朋友Chris,向他了解哪些科技创新更吸引外国青少年,内容包括:
1. 阐明写信事由;
2. 征求建议;
3. 表示感谢。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
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