Unit 4 Writing——Writing an ending to a story（教用Word）-【金榜题名】2026-2027学年高一英语必修第一册高中同步学案（外研版）

Writing——Writing an ending to a story

技法点拨

►写作指导

本单元的写作任务是读后续写。读后续写要求在阅读完一篇350词左右的还未写完的文章之后，根据要求和提示把这篇文章未写完部分补充完整。续写短文多以记叙故事类文章或夹叙夹议类文章为主，线索逻辑强，故事经常曲折跌宕。要求读写并重，阅读需要精确理解，续写需要大胆推断但不能偏离主题。续写步骤如下：

1．精读全文，确定线索。

精读全文首先要解决好五个W和一个H的问题，即理清人物who、地点where、时间when、事件what、原因why及怎样发展how，然后根据关键词理清故事发展的线索。

2．理清逻辑，优化语言。

结合文中划线的关键词语拟写草稿，展开丰富的联想和想象，紧紧围绕主题，按照情节的发展进行延续，写作手法上必须以记叙为主，描写上以动作描写为重心，情节的发展要合乎逻辑地推进。所续写的内容在主题、人物、线索及语言风格上要与原文保持一致，表现为上下文衔接自然，前后情节互相照应。

►常用表达

1．When it comes to...

2．People seem to fail to take account of the fact that...

3．There is no denying the fact that...

4．In fact，we have to admit the fact that...

5．A large number of people tend to...

6．It is commonly thought that...

7．Thrilled at the news，he/she couldn't say a word.

8．He/She stood silently，tears rolling down his/her cheeks.

9．Time seemed to stand still.

10．The thought of fear crossed his/her mind.

►写作训练

阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

On a bright，warm July afternoon，Mac Hollan，a primary school teacher，was cycling from his home to Alaska with his friends．One of his friends had stopped to make a bicycle repair，but they had encouraged Mac to carry on，and they would catch up with him soon.As Mac pedalled(骑行)along alone，he thought fondly of his wife and two young daughters at home．He hoped to show them this beautiful place someday.

Then Mac heard quick and loud breathing behind him.“Man，that's a big dog！”he thought.But when he looked to the side，he saw instantly that it wasn't a dog  at all，but a wolf，quickly catching up with him.

Mac's heart jumped．He found out his can of bear  spray.With one hand on the bars，he fired the spray at the wolf.A bright red cloud enveloped the animal，and to  Mac's relief，it fell back，shaking its head.But a minute later，it was by his side again.Then it attacked the back  of Mac's bike，tearing open his tent bag.He fired at the  wolf a second time，and again，it fell back only to quickly  restart the chase(追赶)．

Mac was pedalling hard now.He waved and yelled  at passing cars but was careful not to slow down.He saw  a steep uphill climb before him.He knew that once he hit  the hill，he'd be easily caught up and the wolf's teeth  would be tearing into his flesh.

At this moment，Paul and Becky were driving their car on their way to Alaska.They didn't think much of it when they saw two cyclists repairing their bike on the side of the road.A bit later，they spotted what they，too，assumed was a dog running alongside a man on a bike.As they got closer，they realized that the dog was a wolf.Mac heard a large vehicle behind him.He pulled in front of it as the wolf was catching up fast，just a dozen yards away now.

注意：

1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2．至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

►审题谋篇

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