2026届高三英语专项复习读后续写---日记里的父爱 导学案

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 An 80-year-old man was sitting on the sofa in his house along with his 45-year-old highly educated son. Suddenly a crow (乌鸦) landed on their window. The father asked his son, “What is this?” The son replied, “It is a crow.” After a few minutes, the father asked his son for the second time, “What is this? The son said, “Father, I told you just now. It’s a crow.” After a little while, the father asked his son the same question for the third time, “What is this?” At this time, some expression of anger was felt in the son’s tone when he said to his father. “It’s a crow, a crow.” A little while later, the father again asked his son for the fourth time, “What is this?” This time his son shouted at his father, “Why do you keep asking me the same question again and again although I have told you so many times ‘IT IS A CROW’? Are you not able to understand this?” A minute later the father went to his room and came back with a diary, which he had kept since his son was born. On opening a page, he asked his son to read that page: Today my little son aged three was sitting with me on the sofa when a crow suddenly landed on the window. My son asked me 23 times what it was, and I replied to him all 23 times that it was a crow. I hugged him lovingly each time he asked me the same question. I didn’t at all feel angry, but instead felt affection for my innocent son. Paragraph 1: After reading the diary, the son was filled with tears and began to reflect on the days when he used to sit together with his father. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2: Feeling ashamed, the son got down on his knees before his father. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 文本分析​ 1． 角色：________________________________________________________________ 2．视角：第______人称​ 3．时空线：某一时刻（父亲与儿子在家中）---______ --- 父亲拿出日记（记录儿子 3 岁时）--- 续写时刻​ 4. 请在文章中将可能的线索都找出来。​ What happened when a crow landed on the window?：______​ How many times did the father ask the son the same question?：______​ How did the son react to the father's repeated questions?：______​ What did the father bring back from his room?：______​ What was recorded in the diary?：______​ 5．情节线：80 岁父亲与 45 岁儿子在家中时，一只乌鸦落在窗边。 →________________________________ →____________________________________ →（续写）儿子读日记后落泪反思，随后羞愧地向父亲下跪。​ 6．情感线：儿子：平静回答（第一次）→________（第二次）→________（第三次）→愤怒大喊（第四次）→________（读日记后）→________（续写：反思时）→羞愧（下跪时）​ 父亲：（平和提问）→________（拿出日记时）→（续写：面对儿子时）​ 7. 综合以上信息，请用 3-4 句话概括文章大意。（中英各一个）​ 中文：__________________________________________________________________​ 英文：__________________________________________________________________​ 8. 句式：(3--5个句子） _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9. 主题（本文属于人与自我、人与他人）：______​ 情节构造​ 第一段提示句：After reading the diary, the son was filled with tears and began to reflect on the days when he used to sit together with his father.​ 衔接句 1——— 对 “filled with tears and reflect” 提问 “What memories might the son recall while reflecting?”：What past memories came to the son's mind during his reflection?​ 过渡句推演：衔接 1→______←衔接 2​ 衔接句 2——— 对 “son's state” 提问 “How did the son's inner feelings change during this process?”：How did the son's emotions develop as he reflected?​ 第二段提示句：Feeling ashamed, the son got down on his knees before his father.​ 衔接句 3——— 对 “got down on his knees” 提问 “What might the son say to his father when kneeling?”：What words might the son speak to his father while on his knees?​ 过渡句推演：衔接 3→______←主题​ 衔接句 4——— 对 “father's reaction” 提问 “How did the father respond to the son's action?”：How did the father react when the son knelt before him?​ 过渡句推演：衔接 3→______←衔接 4​ 主题：_________________________________________________________________​ 段落构思​ 第一段：After reading the diary, the son was filled with tears and began to reflect on the days when he used to sit together with his father.​ →①______（儿子回忆起的具体过往场景）→②______（儿子对自己之前态度的自责）→③______（儿子当下的神态与动作）；​ 英文： ​_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 第二段：Feeling ashamed, the son got down on his knees before his father.​ →④______（儿子向父亲说的话）→⑤______（父亲的反应与举动）→⑥______（父子间情感的缓和与升华）；​ 英文： ​_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 文本分析​ 1．角色：80 岁的父亲、45 岁的儿子、乌鸦​ 2．视角：第三人称​ 3．时空线：某一时刻（父亲与儿子在家中）---父亲多次向儿子提问乌鸦是什么--- 父亲拿出日记（记录儿子 3 岁时）--- 续写时刻​ 4. 请在文章中将可能的线索都找出来。​ What happened when a crow landed on the window?：父亲多次问儿子那是什么，儿子从耐心回答逐渐变得愤怒​ How many times did the father ask the son the same question?：Four times​ How did the son react to the father's repeated questions?：First calmly replied, then with anger in tone, and finally shouted​ What did the father bring back from his room?：A diary he had kept since his son was born​ What was recorded in the diary?：When the son was three, he asked 23 times what the crow was, and the father replied patiently each time and hugged him lovingly​ 5．情节线：80 岁父亲与 45 岁儿子在家中时，一只乌鸦落在窗边。 →父亲四次问儿子那是什么，儿子从回答到愤怒大喊。 →父亲拿出记录儿子 3 岁时的日记，让儿子读，日记中记着儿子 3 岁时 23 次问乌鸦是什么，父亲都耐心回应。 →（续写）儿子读日记后落泪反思，随后羞愧地向父亲下跪。​ 6．情感线：儿子：平静回答（第一次）→略显敷衍（第二次）→带有不耐烦（第三次）→愤怒大喊（第四次）→愧疚落泪（读日记后）→懊悔不已（续写：反思时）→羞愧（下跪时）​ 父亲：（平和提问）→温和且带着期许（拿出日记时）→（续写：面对儿子时）​ 7. 综合以上信息，请用 3-4 句话概括文章大意。（中英各一个）​ 中文：一只乌鸦落在窗边，80 岁的父亲四次问 45 岁的儿子那是什么，儿子从回答逐渐变得愤怒大喊。随后父亲拿出日记，上面记录着儿子 3 岁时 23 次问乌鸦是什么，自己都耐心回应，儿子读罢落泪反思。​ 英文：When a crow landed on the window, the 80-year-old father asked his 45-year-old son four times what it was, and the son gradually went from answering calmly to shouting angrily. Then the father took out a diary, which recorded that when the son was three, he asked 23 times what the crow was and the father replied patiently each time. The son burst into tears and began to reflect after reading it.​ 8.句式： 时间状语从句（When a crow landed on their window...；While his son was reading the diary...）； 定语从句（a diary, which he had kept since his son was born...）； 让步状语从句（although I have told you so many times...）； 9. 主题（本文属于人与自我、人与他人）：亲情中的陪伴与感恩，反思成长中对父母耐心的缺失​ 情节构造​ 第一段提示句：After reading the diary, the son was filled with tears and began to reflect on the days when he used to sit together with his father.​ 衔接句 1——— 对 “filled with tears and reflect” 提问 “What memories might the son recall while reflecting?”：What past memories came to the son's mind during his reflection?​ 过渡句推演：衔接 1→儿子回忆起儿时父亲耐心陪伴的点滴，对比当下自己的态度，内心愈发愧疚←衔接 2​ 衔接句 2——— 对 “son's state” 提问 “How did the son's inner feelings change during this process?”：How did the son's emotions develop as he reflected?​ 第二段提示句：Feeling ashamed, the son got down on his knees before his father.​ 衔接句 3——— 对 “got down on his knees” 提问 “What might the son say to his father when kneeling?”：What words might the son speak to his father while on his knees?​ 过渡句推演：衔接 3→儿子的忏悔与父亲的包容相呼应，凸显亲情的温暖←主题​ 衔接句 4——— 对 “father's reaction” 提问 “How did the father respond to the son's action?”：How did the father react when the son knelt before him?​ 过渡句推演：衔接 3→父亲的温和回应化解了儿子的愧疚，让父子情感更显深厚←衔接 4​ 主题：父母的爱始终如一，子女应常怀感恩与耐心，及时弥补对父母的亏欠​ 段落构思​ 第一段：After reading the diary, the son was filled with tears and began to reflect on the days when he used to sit together with his father.​ →①儿子回忆起的具体过往场景→②儿子对自己之前态度的自责→③儿子当下的神态与动作；​ 英文：After reading the diary, the son was filled with tears and began to reflect on the days when he used to sit together with his father. He recalled how he used to pester his father with all kinds of questions, and his father would always smile and explain patiently, never showing any annoyance. He blamed himself for being so impatient with his father just now; how could he forget the warmth his father had given him. Tears rolled down his cheeks, and he tightly clutched the diary, his body trembling slightly.​ 第二段：Feeling ashamed, the son got down on his knees before his father.​ →④儿子向父亲说的话→⑤父亲的反应与举动→⑥父子间情感的缓和与升华；​ 英文：Feeling ashamed, the son got down on his knees before his father. "Dad, I'm sorry. I shouldn't have shouted at you. I was wrong," he sobbed, his voice choked with guilt. The father gently lifted his son up, wiped the tears from his face, and said softly, "It's okay, my child. I know you didn't mean it." The son hugged his father tightly, and the two stayed like that for a long time, the room filled with the warmth of family love.​ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$