2026届高三英语专项复习读后续写---爸爸肩上的 “胜利” 导学案

阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Give It All Big Race. Through the cheers, I heard Mom shouting, “Run, Sammy, run!” I knew without looking that she was smiling from ear to ear and clapping her hands for me. I kept my eyes straight ahead running as fast as I could. “Run, run, run,” I chanted to myself in my mind as I passed my friend Justin. I saw Justin’s red face out of the corner of my eye and wondered if my own face was that red too? “Run, run, run.” I was on fire, passing Sarah, leaving her in my dust. The coach was waiting for me at the finish line.holding the medal,for the fastest runner in kindergarten. I would wear that blue and white ribbon around my neck when we go out for ice cream to celebrate and then hang it in my room. Last night I took the collection of caps off the hook on my wall leaving it ready for my shiny new medal .I couldn’t wait to see it every day when I woke up. Dad was there in the crowd also and would pick me up and put me on his shoulders to carry around. “My son!” He would tell the other fathers, “My son won the race!” I was going to win! Faster than Sarah, I came up behind Mikey, giving my legs that extra burst of energy to pass him by. The winner, Sammy! All that running in the park was worth it! Just as I heard the roar of the crowd welcoming me to the finish line,I saw a blur out of the corner of my eye.What?There was Justin with his tomato cheeks running as fast as humanly possible,huffing and puffing like he was going to blow the house down.And then he was ir front of me.I was behind tomato face Justin.Crossing the finish line,I heard the voice over the loudspeaker boom,“Congratulations to the winner,Justin!" Congratulations to Justin? Congratulations to Justin. 注意： (1)所续写短文的词数应为150左右; (2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 I stood there frozen as Justin was handed his medal. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Suddenly, strong hands lifted me onto Dad’s shoulders. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 文本分析​ 角色：___________________________​ 视角：第________人称​ 时空线：from the process of the big race---______________---after the race (when Dad lifted "me")​ 可能的线索：​ What was the "big race" for?：___________________________​ How did "I" feel before and during the race?：___________________________​ What did "I" plan to do with the medal if winning?：___________________________​ Who overtook "I" at the last moment?：___________________________​ How did "I" react when hearing Justin was the winner?：___________________________​ Who was there to support "I" in the crowd?：___________________________​ 故事线：_____________________→________________________→（续写）“我” 站在原地的反应及后续 Dad 给予 “我” 安慰与鼓励的事​ 情感线："I"：兴奋、期待（赛前及赛中）→___________（被超越时）→___________（听到结果时）→（续写）→；Dad：（续写）；Mom：（赛前）​ 文章大意：​ 中文：____________________________________________________________________​ 英文：__________________________________________________________________​ 句式：（3--5个句子） _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 主题：__________________________________________________________________​ 情节构造​ 第一段过渡句推演：衔接 1→___________________________←衔接 2​ 第二段过渡句推演：衔接 3→___________________________←主题；主题：___________________________​ 段落构思​ 第一段：​ ①___________________________②___________________________③___________________________；​ 英文：I stood there frozen as Justin was handed his medal. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________​ 第二段：​ ④___________________________⑤___________________________⑥___________________________。​ 英文：Suddenly, strong hands lifted me onto Dad’s shoulders. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 文本分析​ 角色：“我”（Sammy，幼儿园学生）、Mom（“我” 的妈妈）、Dad（“我” 的爸爸）、Justin（“我” 的朋友，同学）、Sarah（“我” 的同学）、Mikey（“我” 的同学）、the coach（教练） 视角：第一人称​ 时空线：from the process of the big race---the end of the race (when Justin was announced as the winner)---after the race (when Dad lifted "me")​ 可能的线索：​ What was the "big race" for?：It was for the fastest runner in kindergarten, with a medal as the prize.​ How did "I" feel before and during the race?："I" felt excited and expectant; during the race, "I" was focused and eager to win.​ What did "I" plan to do with the medal if winning?："I" planned to wear the blue and white ribbon around the neck when going out for ice cream to celebrate, then hang it in "my" room (where "I" had cleared the hook by taking off the collection of caps).​ Who overtook "I" at the last moment?：Justin.​ How did "I" react when hearing Justin was the winner?："I" was shocked and confused, repeating "Congratulations to Justin?" in mind and standing there frozen.​ Who was there to support "I" in the crowd?：Mom and Dad.​ 故事线：幼儿园的 “我”（Sammy）参加赛跑比赛，比赛中奋力奔跑，想着赢得奖牌后的场景→“我” 即将到达终点时被 Justin 超越，最终 Justin 赢得奖牌→（续写）“我” 站在原地看着 Justin 接过奖牌，心里满是失落与委屈→爸爸将 “我” 抱到肩上，安慰鼓励 “我”，让 “我” 明白努力的价值​ 情感线："I"：兴奋、期待（赛前及赛中）→惊讶、不甘（被超越时）→震惊、失落（听到结果时）→（续写）委屈、难过→释然、温暖；Dad：（续写）慈爱、鼓励；Mom：（赛前）激动、支持​ 文章大意：​ 中文：幼儿园学生 Sammy 参加一场重要的赛跑比赛，比赛中他奋力奔跑，一心想赢得奖牌，还畅想了获奖后的种种场景。就在他即将冲过终点线时，朋友 Justin 奋力追上并超越了他，最终 Justin 赢得了奖牌。Sammy 听到结果后愣在原地，后续将讲述他当时的反应以及爸爸给予他安慰与鼓励的事。​ 英文：Sammy, a kindergarten student, took part in an important race. During the race, he ran hard, determined to win the medal, and imagined the scenes after winning. Just as he was about to cross the finish line, his friend Justin caught up and overtook him, and finally Justin won the medal. Sammy stood frozen when hearing the result. The following will tell his reaction at that time and how his dad comforted and encouraged him.​ 句式： 定语从句：The hook, which I had cleared for the medal, now seemed so empty and cold.（我为奖牌腾出来的那个挂钩，此刻显得格外空荡又冰冷）​ 分词作状语：Running as fast as I could, I almost tasted the joy of winning before Justin overtook me.（我拼尽全力奔跑着，在 Justin 超过我之前，几乎已经尝到了获胜的喜悦）​ 倒装句：Not until Dad lifted me onto his shoulders did I feel the weight of disappointment lighten.（直到爸爸把我抱到他肩上，我才感觉失望的分量轻了些）​ 省略句：Mom said she was proud of me and (she was) happy I tried my best.（妈妈说她为我骄傲，也为我全力以赴而开心）​ 强调句型：It was the effort I put into every practice that made Dad say I was a winner too.（正是我在每次练习中付出的努力，让爸爸说我也是个赢家） 主题：比赛的意义不止于输赢，亲情的鼓励能给予人温暖与力量​ 情节构造​ 第一段过渡句推演：衔接 1→Tears blurred my eyes as I watched the blue and white ribbon around his neck←衔接 2​ 第二段过渡句推演：衔接 3→Dad's voice rang out, warm and steady, breaking my sadness←主题；主题：The warmth of family can ease the pain of failure, and effort is more precious than winning​ 段落构思​ 第一段：​ ①Justin’s smile was bright as the coach put the medal on him.②Mom walked over , but I just stared at the ground.③Why did Justin have to run so fast at the end?​ 英文：I stood there frozen as Justin was handed his medal. Justin’s smile was bright as the coach put the medal on him, and the crowd cheered again. I bit my lip, trying not to cry—all that practice in the park, the empty hook in my room... it felt like it was for nothing. Mom walked over and put an arm around me, but I just stared at the ground. Why did Justin have to run so fast at the end?​ 第二段：​ ④Dad said “You ran your heart out—that’s what matters.”⑤Mom nodded, “We’re so proud of how hard you tried.”⑥I hugged Dad’s neck. 英文：Suddenly, strong hands lifted me onto Dad’s shoulders. “Look at me, kiddo,” Dad said, and when I looked up, his eyes were smiling. “You ran your heart out—that’s what matters.” Mom nodded, “We’re so proud of how hard you tried.” I hugged Dad’s neck, suddenly not caring so much about the medal. Maybe next time, but right then, being on his shoulders felt better than any ribbon.​ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$