2026届高三英语专项复习读后续写 一只狗的 “减肥处方” 导学案

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Any day when I had to travel by air was the worst day of my life, but as a salesman, I had to fly quite a bit. On this particular day in 2024, I was assigned to a middle seat. Unfortunately, I was so fat that I couldn’t fit down the aisle facing forward, so I was forced to walk sideways like a crab. My weight varied between 340 and 360 pounds, depending on whether to take it before or after one of my enormous meals. When finally squeezing into my seat, I found the seat belt wasn’t long enough to fit around my 52-inch waist. At that moment, I was stricken by an intense desire to lose weight. I began looking for signs which would guide me toward a better life, and instantly a sign showed up. At the switch of TV, I happened to see an interview with a former world athlete. He said that a doctor put him on a whole-food, plant-based diet and offered a good care of him. He lost weight without feeling hungry, and he was healthier and stronger than he’d been since his twenties. I never imagined my sign would come from him, but there he was. I didn’t know what a “whole-food, plant-based diet” means. I went online and searched for a doctor who could help me. That’s how I found Robert, an experienced medical specialist. Hope fell on me when he promised to see me the next day. The doctor recommended a low calorie diet and some physical exercises to do in my home. He also made a suggestion that I should go to a shelter and adopt a dog. “Excuse me?” I couldn’t believe what he said. But, he added, “A dog is a good companion. While you live in an apartment, the dog has to be walked. Walking your dog twice a day will be your exercise. I’m sure it can improve not only your health but also the quality of your life.” 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: With disbelief and hesitation, I drove up to a dog shelter near where I lived. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: I came back home with the large black-and-white dog with a big round body. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 文本分析 1． 角色：_____________________________ 2．视角：第________人称 3．时空线：from the author traveling by air---______________ ---the author going to the dog shelter and bringing a dog home 4. 请在文章中将可能的线索都找出来。 Why did the author have a bad time when traveling by air?： ______________________________________________ What made the author decide to lose weight?： ____________________________________________ How did the author know about the "whole-food, plant-based diet"?： ____________________________________________ Who did the author find to help him lose weight?： ____________________________________________ What suggestions did the doctor give the author?： ____________________________________________ Why did the doctor suggest the author adopt a dog?： ____________________________________________ 5．情节线：The author, a salesman who has to fly often, struggles with his weight during a flight (can’t fit in the aisle, seat belt too short). →_____________________ →____________________________________→__________________________________ →（续写）________________________________→（续写）The author brings a dog home and starts his weight loss journey. 6．情感线：Author：terrible/uncomfortable（when flying）→___________（when deciding to lose weight）→___________（when finding the doctor）→___________（when hearing the dog suggestion）→___________（续写）→___________（续写） Doctor Robert：（when giving advice） 7. 综合以上信息，请用 3-4 句话概括文章大意。（中英各一个） 中文： ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 英文： ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8. 句式：(3--5个句子） ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9. 主题（本文属于人与自我、人与动物）：_______________________ 情节构造 第一段提示句：With disbelief and hesitation, I drove up to a dog shelter near where I lived. 衔接句 1——— 对 “disbelief and hesitation” 提问 “How did the author feel when arriving at the shelter?”：______________________________________________ 过渡句推演：衔接 1→______←衔接 2 衔接句 2——— 对 “what happens at the shelter” 提问 “What makes the author choose a particular dog?”：______________________________________________ 第二段提示句：I came back home with the large black-and-white dog with a big round body. 衔接句 3——— 对 “the dog’s arrival” 提问 “How do the author and the dog get along at first?”：______________________________________________ 过渡句推演：衔接 3→______←主题 主题：_________________________________ 段落构思 第一段：With disbelief and hesitation, I drove up to a dog shelter near where I lived. →①__________________→②__________________→③__________________； 英文： ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 第二段：I came back home with the large black-and-white dog with a big round body. →④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥__________________。 英文： ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 文本分析 1．角色：the author（a salesman）、Doctor Robert、a former world athlete、dogs in the shelter 2．视角：第一人称 3．时空线：from the author traveling by air---the author seeing a TV interview and finding Doctor Robert---the author going to the dog shelter and bringing a dog home 4. 可能的线索： Why did the author have a bad time when traveling by air?：He was very fat—he couldn’t fit down the aisle facing forward, had to walk sideways, and the seat belt wasn’t long enough for his waist. What made the author decide to lose weight?：The bad experience during the flight—being unable to fit in the aisle and the seat belt being too short. How did the author know about the "whole-food, plant-based diet"?：He saw an interview with a former world athlete on TV, and the athlete mentioned it. Who did the author find to help him lose weight?：Robert, an experienced medical specialist. What suggestions did the doctor give the author?：A low-calorie diet, physical exercises at home, and adopting a dog from a shelter. Why did the doctor suggest the author adopt a dog?：A dog is a good companion; walking the dog twice a day can serve as exercise and improve both health and life quality. 5．情节线：The author, a salesman who has to fly often, struggles with his weight during a flight (can’t fit in the aisle, seat belt too short). →He decides to lose weight after the bad flight experience. →He learns about a diet from a TV interview, then finds Doctor Robert for help. →The doctor gives diet and exercise advice, and suggests adopting a dog to help with exercise. →（续写）The author goes to a dog shelter with hesitation, chooses a dog. →（续写）The author brings the dog home, starts walking it and following the diet, gradually making progress. 6．情感线：Author：terrible/uncomfortable（when flying）→determined（when deciding to lose weight）→hopeful（when finding the doctor）→surprised/doubtful（when hearing the dog suggestion）→nervous but curious（续写，at the shelter）→warm/encouraged（续写，with the dog） Doctor Robert：professional/caring（when giving advice） 7.综合以上信息，概括文章大意： 中文：作为经常需要坐飞机的销售员，作者因肥胖在飞行时极为煎熬，这让他决心减肥。他从电视采访中了解到一种饮食方式，随后找到医生 Robert 求助。医生建议他控制饮食、居家锻炼，还提议领养一只狗 —— 通过遛狗完成锻炼，作者虽疑惑仍决定尝试，驱车前往了宠物收容所。 英文：As a salesman who has to fly frequently, the author suffers a lot during flights due to his obesity, which makes him decide to lose weight. He learns about a diet from a TV interview and then turns to Doctor Robert for help. The doctor advises him to control his diet, do exercises at home, and suggests adopting a dog—using walking the dog as exercise. Though doubtful, the author decides to try and drives to a dog shelter. 8..句式： 定语从句 The old café that lies at the end of the alley has kept its original decoration for decades. 分词作状语 Standing on the top of the hill, we watched the sun sink slowly behind the distant mountains. 倒装句 Not until the rain stopped did the children run out of the house to play. 省略句 She will join us for the trip if free this weekend. 强调句型 It was the encouragement from her teacher that gave her the courage to try again. 9.主题（本文属于人与自我、人与动物）：The power of determination in self-improvement, and how companionship (between humans and animals) can promote a better life. 情节构造 第一段提示句：With disbelief and hesitation, I drove up to a dog shelter near where I lived. 衔接句 1——— 对 “disbelief and hesitation” 提问 “How did the author feel when arriving at the shelter?”：He felt awkward, wondering if a dog could really help, but also a little curious about what would happen. 过渡句推演：衔接 1→A black-and-white dog ran over, wagging its tail and nuzzling his hand, making him soften→衔接 2 衔接句 2——— 对 “what happens at the shelter” 提问 “What makes the author choose a particular dog?”：The dog kept following him gently, not barking, and its round eyes looked warm, which made him decide to take it. 第二段提示句：I came back home with the large black-and-white dog with a big round body. 衔接句 3——— 对 “the dog’s arrival” 提问 “How do the author and the dog get along at first?”：At first, the dog was a bit shy, but soon it explored the apartment, and the author named it Max. 过渡句推演：衔接 3→He started walking Max twice a day, gradually increasing the distance, and stuck to the low-calorie diet→主题 主题：Small steps with the dog’s companionship help the author start his weight loss journey and find hope. 段落构思 第一段：With disbelief and hesitation, I drove up to a dog shelter near where I lived. →①The shelter door creaked open, making him pause.→② Suddenly a large black-and-white dog trotted over.→③It stopped in front of him and he smiled, deciding this was the one.； 英文：With disbelief and hesitation, I drove up to a dog shelter near where I lived. The shelter door creaked open, and barks poured out, making me pause. I walked in slowly, and suddenly a large black-and-white dog trotted over, its tail thumping the floor softly. It stopped in front of me, tilted its head, and I reached out—its nose was warm, and I smiled, deciding this was the one. 第二段：I came back home with the large black-and-white dog with a big round body. →④I named him Max.→⑤The next morning, I took him out.→⑥Day by day, our walks got longer.； 英文：I came back home with the large black-and-white dog with a big round body. I named him Max; he sniffed every corner, then curled up by the sofa, looking up at me. The next morning, I put on sneakers and took him out—we walked for ten minutes, and I didn’t feel too tired. Day by day, our walks got longer, and with the diet, I started to feel lighter. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$