2026届高三英语专项复习读后续写 沙发下的药瓶让Peter明白好习惯的重要性 导学案

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Eight-year-old Peter was a lively and energetic little boy. Every weekend, he would go to his grandfather’s house, although he didn’t particularly enjoy it. His grandfather was very strict with Peter. He demanded that Peter develop two good habits: being punctual (准时的) and staying organized. To help his grandson develop these habits, the grandfather took certain measures. For instance, Peter had to be in the dining room sharply at 12:00 noon for lunch, or else he would have no meal. Peter sometimes felt that his grandfather was too strict, but he dared not voice his dissatisfaction. This week was no exception. Peter arrived at his grandfather’s house as usual. His grandfather was busy cooking in the kitchen, the smell of the food filling the air. Peter, left on his own, wandered into the living room to play. There, he accidentally knocked over the first-aid kit that was placed on the table. The contents in the kit spilled all over the floor, small bottles of pills scattered everywhere. Peter paid no attention to the chaos he had caused. He glanced at the mess, then remembered that David, his friend from next door, was home alone. Awakened by the thought of watching cartoons with David, Peter hurried next door, leaving the spilled contents of the first-aid kit behind. In the kitchen, the grandfather, who was chopping vegetables, suddenly felt unwell. His heart began to race, and he realized that he was having a heart attack. He struggled to the living room to get his medicine. However, when he got there, all he saw was the overturned first-aid kit and the pills scattered on the floor. The grandfather bent down with difficulty, his heart racing with anxiety as he searched for the blue bottle that contained his heart medicine. The precious seconds ticked by, and he felt his strength fading. Time was running out, and Peter didn’t know it. The little boy was completely unaware of the danger his grandfather was facing, immersed in the fun of the cartoon, laughing from time to time. The clock struck 12 but the cartoon was still five minutes away from ending. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Finally, after a desperate search, Peter spotted the small blue bottle hidden under the sofa. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 文本分析 1． 角色：_____________________________ 2．视角：第________人称 3．时空线：from Peter going to grandfather’s house---______________ ---the time when the cartoon is nearly over 4. 请在文章中将可能的线索都找出来。 How did Peter get into the situation of leaving the first-aid kit mess?： ______________________________________________ What mistake did Peter make after knocking over the first-aid kit?： ____________________________________________ How did the grandfather’s condition change suddenly?： ____________________________________________ What was Peter doing while his grandfather was in danger?： ____________________________________________ What was the grandfather struggling to find?： ____________________________________________ How was the grandfather’s state when searching for the medicine?： ____________________________________________ 5．情节线：Peter goes to his grandfather’s house on weekends; grandfather is strict and wants him to form good habits. →_____________________ →_______________________________ →______________________________________. →The clock strikes 12, cartoon still has 5 minutes left. →（续写）→（续写） 6．情感线：Peter：unwilling（when going to grandfather’s）→___________（after knocking over the kit）→___________（while watching cartoons）→___________（续写）→___________（续写） Grandfather：strict（with Peter）→___________（when feeling unwell）→___________（when searching for medicine）→___________（续写） 7. 综合以上信息，请用 3-4 句话概括文章大意。（中英各一个） 中文： ___________________________________________________________________________英文： ___________________________________________________________________________8. 句式：(3--5个句子） _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9. 主题（本文属于人与自我、人与他人）：_______________________ 情节构造 第一段提示句：The clock struck 12 but the cartoon was still five minutes away from ending. 衔接句 1——— 对 “this moment” 提问 “How did Peter feel at this moment?”：______________________________________________ 过渡句推演：衔接 1→______←衔接 2 衔接句 2——— 对 “what happens next” 提问 “What makes Peter realize something is wrong?”：______________________________________________ 第二段提示句：Finally, after a desperate search, Peter spotted the small blue bottle hidden under the sofa. 衔接句 3——— 对 “Peter’s action” 提问 “What does Peter do immediately after finding the bottle?”：______________________________________________ 过渡句推演：衔接 3→______←主题 主题：_________________________________ 段落构思 第一段：The clock struck 12 but the cartoon was still five minutes away from ending. →①__________________→②__________________→③__________________； 英文 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 第二段：Finally, after a desperate search, Peter spotted the small blue bottle hidden under the sofa. →④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥__________________。 英文： ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 文本分析 1．角色：八岁的 Peter、Peter 的祖父、Peter 的邻居朋友 David 2．视角：第第三人称 3．时空线：from the spelling test---Peter 在祖父家打翻急救箱后去邻居家看动画片，祖父突发心脏病找药 ---the next morning（原文未涉及，按情节发展为事件发生当天相关时间） 4. 可能的线索： How did Peter get into the situation of his grandfather being in danger?：Peter 在祖父家玩耍时不小心打翻了急救箱，未清理就去邻居家看动画片，而祖父恰好突发心脏病需要从急救箱拿药。 What mistake did Peter make?：Peter 打翻急救箱后未及时清理，且因沉迷看动画片忽略了时间和祖父的状况。 How did the grandfather try to save himself?：祖父心脏病发作后，挣扎着到客厅找急救箱里的蓝色药瓶。 What was Peter’s inner state before realizing the danger?：Peter 沉浸在看动画片的乐趣中，完全没意识到祖父正面临危险，还不时大笑。 What was the critical thing the grandfather needed?：装有心脏病药的蓝色小瓶子。 How was the grandfather’s condition when searching for the medicine?：祖父身体不适，心跳急促，力气逐渐流失，情况危急。 5．情节线：Peter 周末去祖父家，祖父对他要求严格，希望他养成准时和有条理的习惯。→Peter 不小心打翻急救箱后，没清理就去邻居家看动画片。→祖父突发心脏病，到客厅找药却发现急救箱被打翻，药片散落一地，艰难寻找。→Peter 沉迷动画片未察觉，时钟 12 点已到动画片还有 5 分钟结束。→（续写）Peter 可能意识到时间或听到动静，回到祖父家发现状况，帮忙找药。→（续写）Peter 找到药，祖父服药后好转，Peter 认识到错误。 6．情感线：Peter：不情愿（去祖父家时）→随意（打翻急救箱后）→投入、开心（看动画片时）→（续写）慌张、自责（发现祖父危险时）→愧疚、领悟（祖父好转后） Grandfather：严格（对 Peter 时）→不适、焦急（心脏病发作找药时）→（续写）虚弱、欣慰（服药后） 7. 综合以上信息，概括文章大意： 中文：八岁的 Peter 周末去严厉的祖父家，不小心打翻急救箱后未清理就去邻居家看动画片。祖父突发心脏病，挣扎到客厅找药却因急救箱被打翻而艰难搜寻，而 Peter 对此一无所知仍沉浸在动画片中，当时时钟已到 12 点，动画片还有 5 分钟结束。 英文：Eight-year-old Peter went to his strict grandfather's house on the weekend. He accidentally knocked over the first-aid kit, didn't clean it up and went to his neighbor's house to watch cartoons. His grandfather suddenly had a heart attack, struggled to the living room to get medicine but had to search hard because the first-aid kit was knocked over. However, Peter knew nothing about it and was still immersed in the cartoon. By then, the clock had struck 12, and the cartoon was still five minutes away from ending. 8. 句式： 定语从句 The old bookstore that stands at the corner of the street has witnessed decades of changes. 分词作状语 Walking through the forest, she heard the cheerful singing of birds. 倒装句 Only when we take action immediately can we prevent the problem from worsening. 省略句 He will come to the party if invited. 强调句型 It was his perseverance that helped him achieve his lifelong dream. 9. 主题（本文属于人与自我、人与他人）：养成良好习惯的重要性，以及责任心与亲情的关联 情节构造 第一段提示句：The clock struck 12 but the cartoon was still five minutes away from ending. 衔接句 1——— 对 “stood outside” 提问 “Peter 当时的状态如何？”：Peter was a little anxious about missing lunch but still couldn't take his eyes off the cartoon. 过渡句推演：衔接 1→Peter heard a weak call from his grandfather's house and rushed back→衔接 2 衔接句 2——— 对 “talking to Ms. McCormack” 提问 “Peter 看到了什么？”：He saw his grandfather on the floor, searching for something, and the scattered pills reminded him of the first-aid kit he knocked over. 第二段提示句：Finally, after a desperate search, Peter spotted the small blue bottle hidden under the sofa. 衔接句 3——— 对 “confusion” 提问 “Peter 当时做了什么？”：He quickly picked up the bottle and handed it to his grandfather. 过渡句推演：衔接 3→Grandfather took the medicine and gradually recovered, then looked at Peter with a sigh→主题 主题：Peter realized his carelessness almost caused a disaster and promised to be more responsible. 段落构思 第一段：The clock struck 12 but the cartoon was still five minutes away from ending. →①Peter bit his lip, but the funny scenes on the screen made him hesitate.→②Suddenly, a faint "Peter..." came from next door, and he froze.→③He turned off the TV, only to see his grandfather lying beside the scattered pills, face pale.； 英文：The clock struck 12 but the cartoon was still five minutes away from ending. Peter bit his lip, thinking of his grandfather's strict rule about lunch, but the funny scenes on the screen made him hesitate. Suddenly, a faint "Peter..." came from next door, and he froze. He turned off the TV and ran back, only to see his grandfather lying beside the scattered pills, face pale. 第二段：Finally, after a desperate search, Peter spotted the small blue bottle hidden under the sofa. →④He dashed over.→⑤Grandfather took the medicine, and his breathing steadied.→⑥"I'm sorry, Grandpa. I won't be careless again"； 英文：Finally, after a desperate search, Peter spotted the small blue bottle hidden under the sofa. He dashed over, grabbed it and held it out to his grandfather, tears in his eyes. Grandfather took the medicine, and after a while, his breathing steadied. "I'm sorry, Grandpa. I won't be careless again," Peter whispered. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$