专题21 初升高衔接应用文写作（讲义+课件+练习）- 2025年英语初升高衔接课程（暑期自学通用版）

专题21 初升高衔接应用文写作 一、应用文写作概述 （一）定义与特点 应用文是人们在日常生活、学习、工作中为处理实际事务而使用的具有固定格式和惯用表达方式的文体 。它具有实用性、规范性、时效性和简洁性等特点。实用性体现在其直接为解决实际问题而写；规范性表现为有相对固定的格式和用语；时效性指很多应用文只在一定时间内有效；简洁性要求语言简明扼要，避免冗长复杂的表述。 （二）高考中的地位与考查形式 在高考英语中，应用文写作是重要的考查部分，分值占比较高。通常以书信、通知、演讲稿、倡议书等形式出现 。题目会给定一个具体的情境，要求考生根据所给信息，运用正确的格式和恰当的语言进行写作，以考查考生的语言运用能力、逻辑思维能力和对不同情境的适应能力。 二、常见应用文类型及写作要点 （一）书信类 1. 格式 ◦ 称呼：顶格写，Dear + 称呼，如果是比较熟悉的人可以直接用名字，如Dear Tom 。 ◦ 正文：另起一行，空两格开始写。一般分为开头、主体和结尾三部分。开头说明写信目的，主体详细阐述内容，结尾表达祝愿或期待回复等。 ◦ 结束语：常用Yours sincerely, / Yours faithfully, / Best regards, 等，放在正文右下角，“Yours” 开头小写，后面的词首字母大写，后面用逗号。 ◦ 签名：在结束语下方，写上写信人的名字。 2. 不同类型书信的写作要点 ◦ 感谢信： ◦ 表达感谢之情：开头直接表明对对方帮助的感激，如I am writing to express my sincere gratitude for... ◦ 具体描述帮助：详细描述对方给予的具体帮助以及这些帮助给自己带来的积极影响，例如It was so kind of you to... When I was in trouble, your help really made a big difference. ◦ 再次感谢并表达祝福：结尾再次表达感谢，并送上美好的祝愿，如Once again, thank you so much for your help. I wish you all the best in the future. ◦ 道歉信： ◦ 诚恳道歉：开篇就表明歉意，如I am writing to apologize for... / I am truly sorry that... ◦ 解释原因：清晰地说明导致错误或失误的原因，但注意不要找借口，要真诚，例如The reason is that I... ◦ 提出弥补措施：表达自己将如何弥补过错，如I will... to make up for it. ◦ 再次道歉并请求原谅：结尾再次道歉并请求对方原谅，如I sincerely hope you can forgive me. ◦ 建议信： ◦ 表明写信目的：开头说明写信是为了提出建议，如I am writing to give you some suggestions on... ◦ 具体建议内容：分点列出建议，每个建议用清晰的句子表达，如First, I suggest that you... Second,... ◦ 解释建议原因：阐述每条建议的理由，让对方更容易接受，如This is because... ◦ 表达期待：结尾表达希望对方考虑建议的期待，如I hope you will find these suggestions helpful. （二）通知类 1. 格式 ◦ 标题：正上方写Notice或Announcement 。 ◦ 正文：写明通知的对象、事由、时间、地点等关键信息。 ◦ 落款：右下角写上发通知的单位或个人以及通知发布的日期。 2. 写作要点 ◦ 语言简洁明了：用简洁的语言传达关键信息，避免模糊和歧义。例如The English speech contest will be held in the school auditorium at 3:00 pm next Friday. ◦ 突出关键信息：将时间、地点、活动内容等重要信息突出显示，可以使用加粗、下划线等方式（如果是手写，可在重要信息下划横线）。 ◦ 使用正式语言：通知通常是比较正式的场合，语言要规范、正式 。如All the students are required to attend the meeting on time. （三）演讲稿类 1. 格式 ◦ 称呼：开头顶格写，如Dear friends, / Ladies and gentlemen, ◦ 正文：阐述演讲主题，表达观点，可使用举例、对比等论证方法增强说服力。 ◦ 结束语：常用Thank you for listening! / Thanks for your attention! 等。 2. 写作要点 ◦ 主题明确：开篇点明演讲主题，让听众迅速了解核心内容，如Today, I am going to talk about the importance of environmental protection. ◦ 语言生动：运用比喻、拟人、排比等修辞手法，增强语言感染力，如Our earth is like a beautiful mother, but now she is suffering from serious pollution. ◦ 逻辑清晰：按照一定的逻辑顺序组织内容，如提出问题 - 分析问题 - 解决问题，使演讲有条理。 （四）倡议书类 1. 格式 ◦ 标题：一般直接写“倡议书”或在其前加上主题，如“环保倡议书”。 ◦ 称呼：顶格写倡议对象，如Dear fellow students, ◦ 正文：阐述倡议的背景、原因、目的以及具体的倡议内容。 ◦ 结尾：呼吁大家行动起来，常用Let's take action now! / Join us and make a difference! 等。 ◦ 落款：右下角写上倡议人或单位以及日期。 2. 写作要点 ◦ 理由充分：详细说明倡议的必要性和重要性，激发读者的认同感，如Our school environment is getting worse, and it is high time we did something to protect it. ◦ 具体可行：倡议内容要具体、可操作，如We should turn off the lights when leaving the classroom. 三、写作步骤与技巧 （一）审题 1. 明确体裁：判断是书信、通知、演讲稿还是其他类型的应用文。 2. 确定对象：了解写作对象，如写给朋友、老师、全校学生等，以便确定语言风格和称呼。 3. 把握要点：仔细阅读题目要求，明确需要涵盖的内容要点，不能遗漏。 （二）构思 1. 搭建框架：根据体裁和要点，构思文章的大致结构，如书信的开头、主体、结尾分别写什么。 2. 组织内容：思考如何有条理地组织要点，使文章逻辑连贯，例如写建议信时，按照重要性或先后顺序排列建议。 （三）写作 1. 运用正确格式：严格按照不同应用文的格式要求进行写作，格式错误会影响得分。 2. 使用恰当语言：根据写作对象和情境，选择合适的词汇和句式。避免使用过于生僻或复杂的词汇，保证语言准确、流畅、自然。如表达“我希望”，可以用I hope 而不是I am in the hope that （后者过于复杂）。 3. 注意连接词使用：使用连接词如firstly, secondly, besides, however 等，使文章层次分明，过渡自然。例如Firstly, we should save water. Secondly, we can plant more trees. Besides, reducing waste is also important. （四）检查 1. 语法错误：检查时态、语态、主谓一致、词性等语法问题，如He like playing basketball. （应改为He likes playing basketball. ） 2. 拼写错误：仔细检查单词拼写，常见的易错词如“receive”（不是“recieve”）等。 3. 格式问题：再次确认格式是否正确，包括称呼、落款的位置和格式等。 四、经典例题分析 （一）题目 假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Tom对中国传统文化感兴趣。请你给他写一封邮件，介绍中国的春节，内容包括： 1. 春节的时间和意义； 2. 主要庆祝活动； 3. 邀请他来中国体验春节。 注意： 4. 词数100左右； 5. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 （二）分析 1. 体裁：书信。 2. 对象：美国笔友Tom，语言风格可以亲切、自然 。 3. 要点：春节时间和意义、庆祝活动、邀请来中国体验。 （三）范文 Dear Tom, I'm glad to know that you are interested in Chinese traditional culture. Now, I'd like to introduce the Spring Festival to you. The Spring Festival, also known as Chinese New Year, usually falls in January or February. It is the most important festival in China, symbolizing the beginning of a new year and family reunion. During the Spring Festival, there are various celebrations. People clean their houses to sweep away bad luck, put up red couplets to express good wishes, and have a big family dinner on New Year's Eve. Children are especially happy because they can receive red envelopes with lucky money. I sincerely invite you to come to China and experience the Spring Festival. I'm sure you will have a great time. Looking forward to your reply. Best regards, Li Hua （四）解析 1. 格式正确：采用书信格式，有称呼、正文、结束语和签名。 2. 要点齐全：分别介绍了春节时间（usually falls in January or February ）、意义（the most important festival... symbolizing... family reunion ）、庆祝活动（clean houses, put up red couplets, have a big family dinner, receive red envelopes ）以及邀请（I sincerely invite you to... ）。 3. 语言自然：使用了简单易懂又准确的词汇和句式，如I'm glad to... / Now, I'd like to... 等，符合英语表达习惯。 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 专题21 初升高衔接应用文写作 练习一 假定你是李华，你的外国好友Steven沉迷于网络，导致成绩下降。请你用英语给他写一封邮件，帮助他戒除网瘾，内容包括： 1. 表示安慰； 2. 说明网瘾的危害； 3. 介绍戒除网瘾的方法。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Steven, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 练习二 假如你是李华，结束了在美国高中的交换生活。回国后，你选购了一幅中国画寄给你在美国的老师 Claire 表示感谢。请你用英语给她写一封邮件，内容包括： 1. 表示感谢； 2. 挑选此画作的理由； 3. 邀请她来中国。 注意：1. 词数： 100词左右； 2. 适当增加细节，使文章流畅连贯； 3. 开头结尾已写好，不计入总词数。 Dear Claire, _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 练习三 假设你是李华，你所在的学校将于近期开展“职业一日体验”活动，共有两个备选体验场所：①网络科技公司 (network technology company);②社区托儿所 (community nursery)。请写一篇信给你的朋友Mary，谈谈你的想法。信中必须包括： 1．你选择的体验场所， 2．你选择该场所的理由; 3．你准备在体验当天做什么。 注意：1．词数80左右; 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Mary, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 2025年 初升高衔接课程 应用文写作 专题二十一 英语 目录 题型分析 表达提升 常见文体 1 2 3 4 解题策略 题型分析 应用文格式 应用文功能语句 语气风格 主题内容 应用文文体格式： 书信，通知，新闻报道，倡议书，海报，演讲稿 应用文功能语句： 标题，呼语，首段，末端的常用词和常用语句 主题内容： 德育，智育，体育，美育，劳育 交际对象，语言风格 上级对下级，平级，下级对上级 类别 体裁 格式 书信类 书信、邮件 1. 称呼；2. 正文（扣要点，三段式）；3.落款 非书信类 倡议书 1.称呼（Dear fellow students,）2.正文（扣主题要点，三段式） 3.落款（一般为Students’ Union，发文日期） 演讲稿 1. 称呼（Ladies and gentlemen/ Dear friends/ …）2. 正文（扣主题要点）3. 结尾致谢语：Thank you for … 致辞（欢迎辞、欢送辞） 1. 称呼（Ladies and gentlemen/ Dear friends/ …）2. 正文（扣要点，三段式） 口头通知 1. 称呼：Good……，everyone. May I have your attention, please? 2. 正文 3. 结尾：Thank you for your attention! 书面通知 1. 标题(Notice) 2. 正文（分段，扣要点）3.落款（发布者，日期） 报道、宣传稿 1. 标题（反映关键内容）2. 正文；时态：报道----一般以过去时为主； 宣传稿----一般现在或将来时为主 海报 1.标题(Poster) 2. 正文（分段，扣要点）3.落款（发布者，日期） 征稿函 1.称呼（Dear fellow students,）2.正文（扣主题要点，三段式）3.落款（发布者） 招聘/寻物/招领启事 1.标题（……Wanted/Lost/Found）2. 正文（扣主题要点）3. 落款（发布者，发布时间） 考情分析 近四年高考真题应用文写作空考点细目表 年份 卷区 话题 命题形式 2025 浙江卷1月 投稿推荐一项课间运动 投稿 八省联考 分享学习打乒乓球的经验和心得 推荐信 2024 新高考I&II卷 分享公园美术课的感想 邮件 全国甲卷 看图作文中国交通运输业的发展 发言稿 浙江卷月 向校英文报“Sports and Health”栏目投稿 投稿 2023 新高考I&II卷 给外教写邮件，告诉学生随机分组练口语的建议 建议信 全国甲卷 “用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动 提纲类 全国乙卷 用英语描述学习一项新技能的经历，及中获得的体验和感受。 提纲类 浙江卷1月 为校报写上周校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”活动的报道 报道 2022 新高考I&II卷 校广播站“Talk and Talk”节目的负责人给外写邮件邀请做访谈 邀请信 全国甲卷 世界海洋日为主题，举办英语征文比赛 提纲类 全国乙卷 英语学习方式的调查 提纲类 北京卷 邀请英国好友Jim参加关于英语写作的线上经验交流。 提纲类 天津卷 用英语为社团纳新活动录制一段短视频 提纲类 浙江卷6月 校图书馆新开设“小组学习室”，邀请外国留学生一同体验。 提纲类 浙江卷1月 给爱尔兰朋友Chris写一封邮件回忆活动经历并分享个人收获 提纲类 评分原则 1．本题总分为15分，按五个档次进行评分。 2．评分时，应主要从内容、词汇语法和篇章结构三个方面考虑，具体为： （1）内容：内容要点的覆盖情况以及表述的清楚程度和合理性。 （2）词汇语法：使用词汇和语法结构的准确性、恰当性和多样性。 （3）篇章结构：上下文的衔接和全文的连贯性。 3．评分时，先根据作答的整体情况初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来综合衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。 高分写作的两个完美：思维和语言 高分写作 完美思维 结构顺当 层次分明 完美语言 词汇句式 生动灵活 解题策略 一、审题技巧——五审四注意 一般说来，书面表达审题需要考虑五个方面： 1. 审文体； 2. 审时态 (主要用什么时态)； 3. 审对象 (写给谁)； 4. 审人称 (以第几人称写)； 5. 审要点。 (一) 五审 解题策略 (二)四注意 审题最重要的还是不要漏掉要点，漏掉要点是肯定要扣分的。而要点不仅仅是题中所列要点，还需注意以下四点： 1. 题中所列要点前的“情景说明”一定要认真读且要读懂。如本题的写作目的，即信的开头一句就是来自情景说明。 解题策略 2. 如果信是写给跟你不是很熟的人，第一句一定要先自我介绍。如本题是给外教写信提建议，题目已给出首句“I’m Li Hua from Class 3.”，老师一看就清楚是谁写来的信。 I’m Li Hua, one of the students in your class. I’m Li Hua, who is in charge of the English broastcast station. I’m Li Hua, chaiiman of the Student Union. 解题策略 3. 如果题中本身没有给出信的结尾，有必要加上适当的尾句。如“Hope to hear from you soon.” “I’m looking forward to hearing from you.”“Looking forward to your early reply.”等。 4. 段与段之间，句与句之间，要注意语义衔接，过渡自然，在写作过程中要适当增加细节、关联词和过渡句等。 解题策略 情景说明不能少，恰当结尾有必要； 开头过渡要自然，所有要点才齐全。 因此，要点要齐全，需记住： 解题策略 二、增加细节六招 因全国卷的书面表达题的要点很简洁，没有非常具体的内容，需要考生适当增加细节。那应该如何增加细节？增加细节有三个原则：围绕主题；文体常识；生活经验。具体来说，可增加以下六项内容： 解题策略 全国卷的书面表达多为书信或邮件，虽然开头和结束语通常已给出，但大多并非可以直接写正文，有些可能会缺少过渡，因此需增加包括开头、过渡句、相关背景、结尾等句子。 1. 增加开头过渡衔接句(身份介绍、写作背景)和结尾句（期待、感谢等） 解题策略 (2023年新课标Ⅰ&Ⅱ卷) 要点 (1) 说明问题。 I really appreciate your idea of asking us to practice spoken English after class, but putting the students randomly into pairs may have some problems. If the two students who have little in common are in pair, it’ll be difficult for them to find something to talk about. What’s more, if the two students are both weak in spoken English, they won’t be able to help each other. 2. 增加原因或理由 解题策略 (2023年全国新课标I卷)在说明两人一组口语练习的问题中，可以加上分析结果的细节。 This approach may not be effective as students may have different levels of English proficiency and learning styles，leading to some students feeling left behind or not challenged enough. This can be discouraging and unproductive for both parties involved. 3. 增加结果 解题策略 （2021年6月浙江卷）昨天你参观了学校举办的学生国画作品展，请给校英文报写一篇宣传稿。 Aiming to enrich students’ school life and stimulate interest in traditional culture, our school hold an exhibition of traditional Chinese paintings in our stadium yesterday. 4. 增加目的 解题策略 (2021年全国甲卷) 向外国朋友 Chris了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国友人。 Among topics as Chinese food, painting, architecture, medicine or Beijing Opera, what you think would interest people from your country? As you know, Chinese culture is broad and profound. For instance, there are various kinds of traditional festivals, calligraphy arts, and painting arts in China. I wonder which one appeals to people from your country? 5. 增加举例 解题策略 (2015年全国Ⅰ卷) 邀请外教Lucy去敬老院陪老人过重阳节。 I’d like to invite you to join us for a visit to the nearby nursing home next Saturday for the Double Ninth Festival. It is the day for the elderly in our culture. 6. 增加文化背景 表达提升 你在应用文写作时运用过哪种句式？ 语言表达提升——词汇表达 迁移应用 ①我们邀请交换生演讲。演讲拓阔了我们的视野。 We invited the exchange students to give a speech. The speech broadened our horizons. We invited the exchange students to give a speech which broadened our horizons. 总结1：当句子出现主语与上句话的名词重复时，可以考虑用定语从句which/that指代。句号改为逗号或删去 ②我们带交换生参观了学校，介绍学校的历史。 We showed the exchange students around the school，introduced its history. We showed the exchange students around the school，introducing its history. 总结2：当句子拥有两个及以上并列动词时，保留一个作为谓语动词，其余动词考虑非谓语形式，即分词形式。 ③就在上周五，我们举办了欢迎仪式。（ceremony） Last Friday, we hold a welcome ceremony. It was last Friday that we hold a welcome ceremony. 总结3：句子强调什么，就把该部分放在it is...that中间。（除谓语、定语） ④我的确非常期待你的到来。 I look forward to your arrival. I do look forward to your arrival. 总结4：把助动词提到谓语动词前，表示强调。 九大高级句式 在语言表达准确的前提下，恰当运用高级句式，可体现考生的语言功底，也是获得写作高分的必要条件。常用的高级句式有： (1) 定语从句 如：The Great Wall, which is one of the most famous landmarks in China, attracts tourists from all over the world. 长城是中国最著名的地标之一，吸引了来自世界各地的游客。 1. 三大从句，尤其是定语从句 (2) 状语从句 如：When the Spring Festival comes, people usually get together with their families to celebrate the new year. 当春节来临，人们通常会与家人一起庆祝新年。 (3) 名词性从句(主要是宾语从句) 如：Through this experience, I have learned that positive thinking can transform any situation, and that a positive attitude is the first step to success. 通过这次经历，我学到了积极思考可以改变任何情况，以及积极的态度是成功的第一步。 What we need most to succeed academically is a combination of hard work and effective study strategies. 在学业上取得成功，我们最需要的是努力工作和学习策略的有效结合。 如：Learning that you are about to pay a visit to a Chinese friend and confused about the Chinese customs, I am writing to put forward some advice. 得知你要去一个中国朋友家做客并为中国习俗而困惑，我想写信给你提一些建议。 2. 非谓语动词短语 如：It is because I know you like the culture of China, especially drama, that I would like to invite you to admire it. 正是因为我知道你喜欢中国文化特别是戏曲，我想邀请你来欣赏它。 3. 强调句型 31 如：Only in this way can they grow up to be independent. 只有这样，他们才能成长为独立的人。 4. 倒装句型 如：It is generally acknowledged that effective English learning requires a combination of reading, writing, listening, and speaking practices. 普遍认为，有效的英语学习需要阅读、写作、听力和口语练习的结合。 5. 形式主语句型 如：I’m Li Hua, a senior 3 student in Xinhua High School. 我是李华，新华中学的一名高三学生。 6. 同位语 如：(请求) I’d be very grateful if you could take some time to go through them and make necessary changes. 如果你能花一些时间帮我检查一遍并作必要的修改，我将非常感激。 7. 功能模块句型 如：With the stadium set up, a wide range of sports events are able to be held. 随着体育场的创建，(这里) 可以举办各种各样的体育活动。 8. 介词短语，特别是with的复合结构 如：(1) As I walked, my imagination ran wild, picturing my mother in tears. 我一边走，一边放任想象，构想出母亲泪流满面的情景。 9. 无灵主语句 (2) The harmony of the music created an atmosphere of joy and unity. 音乐的和谐营造了一种欢乐和团结的氛围。 常见文体 文体1　告知信 1．告知信是指一方告诉另一方某一信息的信件。 2．常考的话题有告知上课计划、活动安排、比赛信息、讲座信息、招聘信息、报名事宜等。 3．时态为一般现在时或一般将来时。文章通常以第一、第二人称为主。 4．告知信中的活动介绍是写作重点，需要针对活动的时间、地点、目的、过程、影响、感受及意义等多角度展开。 常见文体 写作框架 书信类功能语句—告知信（真诚细致的语气，平级语气居多） Dear sb, Yours Li Hua 首段： 1.How is everything? I’m so glad that you show great passion for… Now I’m writing to inform you of the details of our next class.（平级语气） 2.得知你对我们学校组织的……很感兴趣，我写信/很愿意与你分享/提供一些相关信息（平级语气） Knowing /Having learned that you’re very interested … organized by my school, I am writing/quite willing to share/give some relevant information with/to you. 3.I am more than delighted that you are so interested in … Now I’m writing to tell you something about it. 4.I’m very pleased to receive your letter asking about….. And I’m quite/perfectly willing to share with you some information about that. （平级语气） 末段： 1 Please tell me know if you are interested and if you have any other questions. I’d be more than happy to help. 2.如果有什么需要我帮忙的，请尽管告诉我（平级语气） If there is anything that I can help you with, please don’t hesitate to tell me. 3.I hope you’ll find this information useful/helpful. （平级语气） 写作模版     Dear________, I’m glad to learn that __________________(了解到的情况）. I’m writing to express the warm welcome from me and my family. Now I want to tell you something about the plans(写信目的）. The details are as follows（告知细节）. In the morning, ____________________(活动安排）. In the afternoon, we will _____________. In the evening, not only will we ____________, but also we will _______________（按照时间顺序活动安排）. I’m sure we will ______________________（表达感受）. If you have any other questions, please let me know. I’m looking forward to your coming.(期望表达）. Yours, Li Hua 常见文体 文体2　建议信 建议信是生活中常用的一种应用文文体，一般结合某一问题进行反馈再提出看法、建议或忠告。 审题谋篇 体裁格式 人称时态 要点分段 建议信 第一、第二人称；现在时、将来时 Para 1: 自我介绍/问候/写作背景+目的 Para 2: 主旨句+扩展句：具体建议 （观点并列） Para 3: 表达期待/更多信息支持/期待回复 结构：建议信 I am Lihua. How have you been lately? 开头段 （2句） 写作背景1 I am more than delighted to know that you are interested in ... , 写作目的 Knowing that you are ..., 自我介绍/问候 写作 背景2 I am writing to recommend ... to you. Here are some suggestions which I hope will be of some help to you. Let me introduces sb/sth to you. 第二段 （7句） 主旨句 To begin with, not only ... but also... Meanwhile, ... 推荐理由 What is more, the reason why... is that ... 推荐人的语言能力、性格特点 推荐人/物优势 My suggestions are as follows. The reason why I recommend ... are as follows. Dear_________, I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to___________________(引出建议的主题)． Here are a few suggestions．Above all，it is important to________ ______________________ (建议一)．In that way，________________ (采取建议一的好处)．You can also________________________ (建议二，根据要求用不同的句式提出建议)．This would allow you to have the opportunity to____________________ (建议二所带来的好的结果)．In addition，_______________________ (其他的建议)．I’m sure_____________________ (预测可能的结果，给对方以信心和决心)． I hope you will find my suggestions useful and I’m looking forward to_____________________ (表达愿望)． Yours sincerely, Li Hua 书信类功能语句—建议信（语气委婉，不生硬，上级对下级，平级语气居多） Dear sb, Yours Li Hua 首段： 1 I am writing to you for sake of… 2 I am glad that you are crazy about…I think…is worth introducing. （上级对下级，平级语气） 3你向我征求关于……的意见，我将尽量提出一些有益的建议。 You have asked me for my advice concerning…and I’ll try to make some conductive suggestions. 末段： 1. I hope these suggestions will be of use to you. Remember: where there is a will, there is a way. 2.我相信你会认真考虑我的建议。无论你决定做什么，祝你学习/工作顺利! （下级级对上级，平级语气） I believe that you will take my suggestions into serious account. Whatever you decide to do, good luck with your studies/work! 3. I sincerely hope my advice will be some help for you. If there is more I can do to help, please let me know.平级语气 4. I hope my advice will be of benefit to you and I'm looking forward to your good news.平级语气 常见文体 文体3　邀请信 邀请信是邀请亲朋好友或重要人士等参加某项活动时所发的邀请性书信。特点是简短，热情，给人以真诚、亲切的感觉。邀请信写作需要运用与身份相符的语气和得体的语言措辞，拓展具体信息要清晰明确。 常见文体 写作框架 审题谋篇 体裁格式 人称时态 要点分段 邀请信 第一、第二人称；现在时，将来时 Para 1: 问候+写信背景+目的（邀请） Para 2: 主题句 +意义 +时间、地点 +活动内容 Para 3: 表达期待 结构：邀请信 Dear________， Knowing that you’re interested in/fond of/keen on________ (感兴趣或喜欢的事物)，I’m writing/I’d like to invite you to join in________ (活动)． As scheduled，it will be held________ (具体地点、时间)，when there will be________．Furthermore/In addition，________ (进一步的安排)，after which we will__________________________ (另一个安排)．I’m sure/convinced you can not only __________________ (活动益处之一) but also______________________________ (活动益处之二) through the activity．(介绍活动内容和活动益处) 书信类功能语句—邀请信（礼貌热情的语气；平级，下级对上级语气居多） Dear sb, Yours Li Hua 首段： 1 I take great pleasure in inviting you to…（下级对上级语气） 2 I think it would be a good idea if you could participate in…（平级语气） 3 May I have the honor of your accompany at lunch? （下级对上级语气） 末段： 1 We sincerely hope that you can accept our invitation and join us for this exciting event. （平级语气） 2 We would be delighted if you could join us, and look forward to hearing back from you soon. 3 您的参与对我们来说意义重大，我们希望您能加入我们这一难忘的时刻。（下级对上级语气） Your participation would mean a great deal to us, and we hope that you can join us for this memorable occasion. 4 我们感谢您的考虑，并希望您能参加我们的特别活动。（下级对上级语气） We appreciate your consideration and hope that you can join us for this special event. 5 It would be an honor to have you join us for this event, and we look forward to hearing from you soon. 常见文体 文体4　咨询信 咨询信是针对某项活动或相关情况，希望了解详细信息的信件，表明写信人对某方面的信息感兴趣。咨询信，问句较多，写时要避免句式单调，语气要委婉礼貌，要充分表达获取信息的急切心情以及相应的感激之情。咨询的问题应简洁、清晰、明确，避免歧义和误解，确保所提问题与题目要求的主题相关。 常见文体 写作框架 审题谋篇 体裁格式 人称时态 要点分段 咨询信 第一、第二人称；现在时、将来时 Para 1: (自我介绍)+目的：咨询 Para 2: 具体问题 Para 3: 感谢。期待。 框架：咨询信 语气语言 语气委婉，语言正式、有礼 Dear________， I am________(自我介绍)．Having read_______(信息来源)，I feel interested and want to join in__________(活动)．I am writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with some specific information regarding__________(要询问的内容)．To begin with，could you be so kind as to tell me________(第一个问题)? Besides，I would also like to know________(第二个问题)．In addition，I wonder________(第三个问题)．What’s more，what deserves my special attention is________(最重要的一个问题)． Thank you for your kindness，and your early reply to this letter will be highly appreciated． Yours， Li Hua 常见文体 文体5　求助信 求助信是写信人碰到难题向对方求助的信件。求助信要用正式的语言提出礼貌的请求，清楚地说明你写这封电子邮件/信件的原因，清楚地提出必要的问题，充分体现写信人诚挚的态度。 常见文体 写作框架 审题谋篇 体裁格式 人称时态 要点分段 求助信 第一、第二人称；时态：现在时 Para 1: 写信目的：求助 Para 2: 总起句 + 具体困难 +需要的帮助 Para 3: 期待、感谢 求助信 Dear______, I am Li Hua, a senior high school student.I am writing to ask you to do me a favor. Faced with confusion in_______ (困难), could you please give me some advice/ suggestions on it? Recently, I am encountering some problems in ________(困难一)which trouble me a lot. Although I have tried all kinds of means to improve/solve it, like_______(做出的努力，记得用动名词), so far my efforts have ended up in failure. To make things worse, ______（困难二）. Thank you for your attention to my problems. I am anxious to get your help and terribly sorry for any inconvenience I have caused.Looking forward to your early reply. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 书信类功能语句—求助信 （语气客气，委婉，真诚） Dear sb, Yours Li Hua 首段： 1 I am writing to ask you a favor regarding… 2 Faced with/Facing so much difficulty, I have to seek your assistance. 3你能好心地帮我解答以下问题吗? Would you be kind enough to give me a hand with the following questions? 末段： 1.如果您能在您方便的时候尽早给我答复，我将非常感激。提前谢谢你。 I would be very appreciative/grateful/thankful if you could reply to me at your earliest convenience. Thank you in advance. 2. I would appreciate it if you could give me a hand and I'm looking forward to your earliest reply. 3. I would highly appreciate your timely/prompt reply. /Your timely/prompt reply would be highly appreciated. 4.Should you be kind enough to give me any help, I would be grateful to you. 常见文体 文体6　感谢信 感谢信是向提供关心、帮助或支持过自己的集体或个人表达感谢的信件。信件需要写明感谢他人的理由，内容要感情真挚、措辞得体。感谢信用语要求精练简洁，详略得当，层次分明。遣词造句要把握好度，不可过分雕饰。 常见文体 写作框架 审题谋篇 体裁格式 人称时态 要点分段 感谢信 第一、第二人称；正文过去时 Para 1: 背景+目的（表达谢意） Para 2: 感谢的原因（如何展开?） Para 3: 再次感谢+期待来信 结构：感谢信 Dear _______, How is everything going with you recently? I am writing to express my sincere thanks for _______. （感谢的原因）But for your help, I wouldn’t have _________. (没有得到帮助的后果) During _______, (时间) it’s very kind of you to __________. First, you _________. What’s more , you _________. There is one thing that I can’t forget. You _________. (列举对方给自己的帮助) Please do allow me to return your favour.（可以省略） Thank you for your kindness again and I am looking forward to seeing you again. Give my best regards to your family! Yours sincerely, Li Hua 常见文体 文体7　申请信 申请信是指写信人想申请某个职位或某个项目而向收信人提出请求的信件。一般常考的内容有申请成为志愿者、申请某个岗位、加入俱乐部或参加夏令营、留学项目等。申请信是非常正式的信件，所用语言也应该正式、简洁和准确，语气要客气礼貌。 常见文体 写作框架 审题谋篇 体裁格式 人称时态 要点分段 申请信 第一、第二人称；现在时、将来时 Para 1: 自我介绍+目的（提出申请） Para 2: 总起句--申请理由 （优势1、2、3+期待加入） （优势：能力、经验、性格、爱好） Para 3: 表达决心/感谢，希望被聘 框架：申请信 Dear______, I am Li Hua, a senior high school student. Knowing from your advertisement in the newspaper that you’re looking for a ___________（职位）, I am quite interested in it. I would like to apply for the position because I believe I am a suitable person for the job. Firstly,I have a good command of English and do well in both writing and speaking(第一个优势). Besides, _________ (第二个优势). Last but not least, I once worked as a _______(申请的职位), so I am sure I can do the job well if I get the position. I would appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration. Looking forward to your early reply. Yours sincerely, Li Hua. 常见文体 文体8　推荐信 推荐信主要是向组织或机构推荐某人，或向朋友推荐某物，希望对方能接受推荐。推荐信的内容要肯定、乐观，并对被推荐人、事、物给予正面评价。同时，语言要简洁明确、理由充足，具有合理性和说服力且内容要真实可信。 常见文体 写作框架 Dear__________， I’m very pleased to learn that you are going to_________(活动事项)．I’m writing to offer my suggestions．Concerning your demands，I shall recommend_________ (推荐对象)to you． The reasons why I recommend___________ to you are as follows．First of all，________________．(推荐理由一)Besides，_______．(推荐理由二) Last but not least，________．(推荐理由三) Your taking my recommendations into consideration will be highly appreciated．I do hope that you can find them beneficial．Looking forward to your early reply． Yours， ________ 审题谋篇 体裁格式 人称时态 要点分段 约稿 第一、第二人称；时态灵活 投稿约稿类 Para 1: 自我介绍+目的（约稿） Para 2: 约稿要求（话题、长度、日期） Para 3: 有疑问请及时提问。期待。 约稿信模板 Dear _______, I’d like to invite you to write an article for our school’s English newspaper concerning___(主题)___. And here are some relevant details about the articles we are eager for. Firstly, articles about ___（具体话题）___ are especially welcome and it would be more than better if you could write about（具体话题）_. Besides, the article is supposed to be within 400 words. By the way, could we have your article before __（日期）__? Looking forward to your reply at your convenience. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 约稿信模板 读者意识！ 语言委婉、客气、礼貌 (2021新高考I卷)你校英文报Younth正在庆祝创刊十周年。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1. 读报的经历；2. 喜爱的栏目；3. 期待与祝福。 投稿：记叙+说明 (2022全国甲卷)你校将以六月八日世界海洋日为主题,举办英语征文比赛。请你写一篇短文投稿,内容包括: 1. 海洋的重要性; 2. 保护海洋的倡议。 (2023全国甲卷)你们学校正举办主题为 “用英文讲中国故事” 的征文活动。请你以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿。内容包括: 1. 人物简介及事迹; 2. 意义或启示。 (2023全国乙卷)请以向学校英文报投稿的方式，用英语描述学习一项新技能的经历，及从中获得的体验和感受。 投稿：议论 投稿：说明 投稿：记叙 书面通知 审题谋篇 体裁格式 人称时态 要点分段 书面通知 第一、第二人称；时态将来 Para 1: 活动介绍：目的、时间地点 Para 2: 活动介绍：内容、注意事项 Para 3: 期待参加+回复确认 书面通知模板 NOTICE Aiming to _______ (目的)， ___________ (发起者) decides to ________ (组织...活动). Here are some relevant details about it. As scheduled, ______ (活动) will be held + 时间、地点. During the activity, not only ___but also____ (活动的内容、流程). Those interested in ______ are warmly welcome. Besides, all participants are required to________ (注意事项或特别要求). Please come and join it(希望大家积极参加). Your participation will surely make a difference. The Students' Union 书面通知 Notice The Students’ Union 首段： All teachers and students will be required to…(全体师生务必要) Notice is hereby given that…(兹通知) Our school / The Student Union will / is going to hold… 末端： Everybody is expected to attend it. Be sure to attend it on time. Please / Do be present on time. 书面通知功能语句 （措辞严谨，简明扼要） 中间段落： There is going to be a lecture/talk on…有一个关于……的演讲 The meeting/activity will be held/is to be held in…会议/活动将在……举行 The party will begin at…and end at…晚会将于……开始，在……结束 The concert will begin at…and last…音乐会将于……开始，持续…… 所有的成员都要出席。 All the members are expected to attend it. 欢迎任何感兴趣的人参加。 Anyone who is interested will be welcome. 口头通知 审题谋篇 体裁格式 人称时态 要点分段 口头通知 第一、第二人称；时态将来 Part 1: 称呼+过渡语 Part 2: 活动介绍： 目的、时间地点 内容、注意事项 Part 3: 期待参加+感谢聆听 口头通知 Outline (结构大纲) 称呼语 过渡语 May I have your attention, please? Attention please! I have an announcement to make. 正文 结束语 Thanks for your listening. 口头通知 口头通知模板 Ladies and gentlemen, May I have your attention, please? I have an announcement to make. In order to ____(目的), ______ (活动) will be held +时间地点. During the activity, not only ___but also____ (活动的内容、流程). Those interested in _____ (活动主题) are warmly welcome. By the way, don't forget to ______and make sure______(注意事项：时间或其他特别事项). Please come and join it(希望大家积极参加). I am convinced that we will have a wonderful time together! Thanks for your listening. 口头通知 Ladies and gentlemen（Boys and girls）， 首段： May I have your attention, please? Be quite. There is something important I have to tell you. You need to know. I have something to tell you. 末端： That’s all. Thank you. Any questions? Does everyone understand? 口头通知功能语句 （口语化，语言精练） 中间段落：通知中常用的动词短语 1. organize a tour 2. have a picnic, have a football match 3. give / deliver a lecture/ speech, give a talk 发表演说 4. give a concert 举行音乐会 5. attend the lecture, join in the party 6. hold a meeting/celebration 举行会议/庆祝活动 7. meet/gather at the gate of…在……的大门口集合 8. take sth. with sb. 审题谋篇 体裁格式 人称时态 要点分段 倡议书 第一、第二人称（we,us,our,you）；正文现在时 Para 1: 背景介绍 Para 2: 某事物的重要性/好处（2-3点） + 过渡词句 + 措施（2-3点） Para 3: 再次重申呼吁 结构：倡议书 段1：背景介绍 Nowadays/Recently，_______________________________段2：重要性/好处+措施 We can't emphasize the importance of _______ too much. As we all know，重要性/好处1 . What’s more，it can not only 重要性/好处2，but also 重要性/好处3 . Hence, it is very necessary for us to take actions to 做什么事 . First of all, there is no doubt that措施1 is helpful. Moreover, 措施2 will make a huge difference too. It is our duty/responsibility to 做什么事 . 段3：结尾 Therefore，I sincerely call on everyone to do sth together. I /we firmly believe that _______ will be better and better under our constant efforts. Dear fellow students, The Students’ Union 首段： 1. I am Li Hua，Chairman of the students union of ...(机构) In recent years,...(现象) 2. In order to...，I am writing this letter to call on.../we’d like to offer some suggestions. … propose(s) that...should+do...I would like to appeal to... to do... I would like to call on...to do... 末端： 1 Let us unite and work towards a brighter future for all. 2 I implore you to join me in this noble cause and make a difference in the world. With your support and cooperation, we can achieve great things together. 3 With your help, / Because of our participation, ...will...(比较级) 4帮助和爱会让世界变得更美好。/爱使世界运转。 Help and love will make the world a nicer place. /It's love that sets the world going. 5你的好意/关注/努力/慷慨/捐赠/参与将受到高度评价。我将不胜感激。 Your kindness/ attention/ effort/ generousness/donation/participation will be highly valued./...will be appreciated. 6携手合作，我们可以做出很大的改变。 Working hand in hand, we can make a big difference. 倡议书功能语句 (语言有感召力，说服力） 审题谋篇 体裁格式 人称时态 要点分段 祝贺信 第一、第二人称；正文现在时 Para 1: 写信目的：祝贺事由 Para 2: 表达喜悦 肯定对方的付出和努力 鼓励、夸赞对方 Para 3: 再次祝贺+表示祝愿 结构：祝贺信 学习模板：祝贺信 Dear ﹍﹍, Learning that _________ (祝贺事由), I am writing extend my warmest congratulations to you. You can’t imagine how excited I was when I heard the good news! I am really proud of you. I know that it is your efforts/ perseverance/ diligence that contributes to your success. You have spent days and nights ____ (所做的努力). It is a reward that you really deserve. I believe _____ (鼓励对方) Congratulations again! Wish you greater progress and further success in the future. Yours, 标题(一般题目会给出，多为名词词组) 导语（简要交代新闻事件，主要包括时间、地点、人物、事件及缘由等。一段或一句。） 主体（用充足的事实来描述事件过程，包括具体的地点、人物、活动过程） Part 1 Part 3 Part 2 Part 4 结束语（总结全文或发表评价。一段或一句。） 新闻报道 审题谋篇 体裁格式 人称时态 要点分段 报道 第一、第二人称；时态过去、现在 Para 1: 事件、时间、地点、目的 Para 2: 事件过程 Para 3: 评价、反响 新闻报道 新闻标题 新闻报道开头部分开门见山，一句话简要概括新闻 包括：when， where，who，what Last Friday afternoon, a friendly food ball match was held between our school and the German sister school on the playground. Last week witnessed …held by our school，which was arouse the awareness of doing. 末端： Only through internet voting can everyone express his opinion properly and acquire the real fairness.Only if we take effective steps to deal with this problem now can … 新闻报道功能语句（新闻倒三角结构）（语言精练，语气正式） 中间段落：新闻报道中间部分陈述活动内容 All the players did their best on the field and presented a wonderful and breathtaking performance. It was such a close match that nobody would know the result until the last minute. The match was intense/fierce and hard-fought until the end. The game ended in a draw/tie.平局 The school team scored the first goal in the last minute and won the game narrowly.险胜 89 欢迎词 a welcoming speech 称呼 Dear freinds, boys and girls, Dear Mr./Mrs.., Ladies and gentlemen, Distinguished guests, 开头 (自我介绍) 切入主题：对来宾的热烈欢迎 正文 主体：宾客来访的目的、意义、活动安排等 结尾 1. 对来宾的美好祝愿 2. 感谢聆听（Thanks for your listening. / Thank you.） 发言稿 欢迎词 Ladies and gentlemen, I am Li Hua, president of the Student Union. On behalf of our school, I’d like to express our warmest welcome to you! It is a great honour for me to introduce ______ to you. As scheduled, __活动1_will be held in _地点_ and last about 2 hours. After that, __活动2_, which will definitely leave a deep impression on you. Finally, we would like to show you around our school. If there is anything I can do for you, please don’t hestitate to contact me. I sincerely hope that you will enjoy your stay here. Thanks for your listening. 欢送词 a send-off speech 称呼 Dear freinds, boys and girls, Dear Mr./Mrs.., Ladies and gentlemen, Distinguished guests, 开头 (自我介绍) 切入主题：How time flies! 引出活动结束 正文 主体：对客人来访期间的表现予以肯定，作出评价，或表明其重要意义和影响。 结尾 1. 邀请再次来访+美好祝愿 2. 感谢聆听（Thanks for your listening. / Thank you.） 发言稿 欢送词 发言稿 Ladies and gentlemen, How time flies! Two weeks have passed since you came to our school for the exchange program, from which we all benefited a lot. During your stay here, we __活动1__. Besides, we had a wonderful time together when we ___活动2___. From these activities, we __收获__. I believe all this will be a good memory for us to look back on and I am convinced that our friendship will continue to grow in the future. Now, on behalf of our school, I wish you a pleasant journey home and I truly hope that you will come to our school again in the future. Thanks for your listening. 首段：Good morning/afternoon/evening, ladies and gentlemen, It is my great pleasure to welcome you all to this [event name]. On behalf of [committee/organization/company name], I would like to extend a warm greeting to each and every one of you. We are thrilled to have you here today and we hope that you will enjoy this [event type] that we have prepared for you. 末端：1 Once again, thank you for your presence and we sincerely invite you to participate in the various upcoming activities of our school. 2 It is our pleasure to welcome everyone here tonight to celebrate the beginning of this exciting event. 3 We look forward to what lies ahead and wish all participants the best of luck in their endeavors. 4谢谢你们的出席，我希望你们都有一个有意义和愉快的经历 Thank you for your attendance, and I wish you all a meaningful and enjoyable experience 5 Once again, welcome to the “…” event, and thank you for your participation. 欢迎辞功能语句 （语言简洁，语气热情，友好） Dear friends, 2025年 初升高衔接课程 专题二十一 英语 谢谢 聆听 $$ 专题21 初升高衔接应用文写作 练习一 假定你是李华，你的外国好友Steven沉迷于网络，导致成绩下降。请你用英语给他写一封邮件，帮助他戒除网瘾，内容包括： 1. 表示安慰； 2. 说明网瘾的危害； 3. 介绍戒除网瘾的方法。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Steven, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Steven, I feel more than worried to know that you have wasted lots of valuable time playing the Internet games and that you have been influenced severely by it. As we know, the Internet is a convenient tool to improve our knowledge and skills. However, our life will be greatly affected if we are addicted to it. For example your grades have gone down and your health will be going from bad to worse. To make things worse, it can also damage the relationship with your family. So I think it is high time that you got rid of the bad habit. It is a good idea for you to read some meaningful books and do some physical exercise. I am looking forward to hearing your good news soon.                                                                                                Yours,                                                                                                Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外国好友Steven写一封邮件，帮助他戒除网瘾。 【详解】1.词汇积累 非常：more than→very 众所周知：as we know→as is known to all 改善：improve→upgrade 影响：affect→influence 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：To make things worse, it can also damage the relationship with your family. 拓展句：What makes things worse is that it can also damage the relationship with your family. 【点睛】【高分句型1】I feel more than worried to know that you have wasted lots of valuable time playing the Internet games and that you have been influenced severely by it.（运用了that引导的宾语从句） 【高分句型2】As we know, the Internet is a convenient tool to improve our knowledge and skills.（运用了As引导的非限制性定语从句） 练习二 假如你是李华，结束了在美国高中的交换生活。回国后，你选购了一幅中国画寄给你在美国的老师 Claire 表示感谢。请你用英语给她写一封邮件，内容包括： 1. 表示感谢； 2. 挑选此画作的理由； 3. 邀请她来中国。 注意：1. 词数： 100词左右； 2. 适当增加细节，使文章流畅连贯； 3. 开头结尾已写好，不计入总词数。 Dear Claire, _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Claire, How’s everything going? I have a safe journey back. I’m writing to express my heartfelt gratitude for your help, support and everything you did for me. Besides, I carefully chose a Chinese painting as a gift for you. Hope you will like it. The reason why I choose this painting, named shrimps, is that you’re a nature lover, just like the painter Qi Baishi. Qi is a household name in China, known for his unique style and mastery of traditional Chinese painting techniques. His works primarily focus on nature, especially lovely creatures like shrimps. They are full of life and stand vividly on the paper. Of course, China has more than Qi and his works to offer. You’re warmly welcome to visit China and have a wonderful personal exploration. Looking forward to seeing you here! Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给在美国的老师Claire写一封邮件，表示要寄一幅中国画给他表示感谢。 【详解】1.词汇积累 感激：gratitude→appreciation 此外：besides→what’s more 独特的：unique→particular 充满：be full of→be filled with 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Qi is a household name in China, known for his unique style and mastery of traditional Chinese painting techniques. 拓展句：Qi is a household name in China, who is known for his unique style and mastery of traditional Chinese painting techniques. 【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m writing to express my heartfelt gratitude for your help, support and everything you did for me.(运用了省略that引导的定语从句) 【高分句型2】The reason why I choose this painting, named shrimps, is that you’re a nature lover, just like the painter Qi Baishi.(运用了why引导的定语从句和that引导的表语从句) 练习三 假设你是李华，你所在的学校将于近期开展“职业一日体验”活动，共有两个备选体验场所：①网络科技公司 (network technology company);②社区托儿所 (community nursery)。请写一篇信给你的朋友Mary，谈谈你的想法。信中必须包括： 1．你选择的体验场所， 2．你选择该场所的理由; 3．你准备在体验当天做什么。 注意：1．词数80左右; 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Mary, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Mary, Today, I want to share my thoughts on the upcoming “Career Day Experience” at our school. We have two options available: a network technology company, or a community nursery. After careful consideration, I have decided to choose the former as my preferred experience. The reason behind my choice lies in my fascination by the advancements in the digital world and how it connects people globally. On the day of the experience, I plan to engage in conversations with employees to learn about their career paths and seek advice on pursuing a career in the technology sector. I am excited about this opportunity and look forward to the insights and experiences that await me at the network technology company. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给朋友Mary写信，关于学校将于近期开展“职业一日体验”活动的两个备选体验场所谈谈自己的看法。 【详解】1.词汇积累 选项：options→choices 谨慎：careful→cautious 选择：choose→select 寻求：seek→pursue 2.句式拓展 同义句替换 原句：After careful consideration, I have decided to choose the former as my preferred experience. 同义句：After thoughtful deliberation, I have concluded that I will opt for the first option as my preferred choice. 【点睛】【高分句型1】On the day of the experience, I plan to engage in conversations with employees to learn about their career paths and seek advice on pursuing a career in the technology sector.(运用了不定式作目的状语) 【高分句型2】I am excited about this opportunity and look forward to the insights and experiences that await me at the network technology company.(运用了that引导的定语从句) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$