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板块三写作
一考前精练8种文体和4个技能
题型一
应用文写作
类型1建议信和感谢信
(续表)
【技法突破】
段落
主旨
高分句式
一、建议信满分作文突破3大技巧
1.Besides,
I am
1.建议信写作“三步曲”。
convinced that reading Chinese
建议信是给对方提出建议,所以要求
classics will be also great fun
做到委婉、礼貌,让对方能够接受所提出的
and beneficial to your language
建议,使主体部分突出“先肯定,后建议”
leaming.
的思路,遵循建议信写作的“三步曲”。
2.I'd like to suggest that
第一步:说明写信的目的。
you should make full use of the
time to learn as much as
第二步:先肯定好的做法,然后提出建议。
中段
建议
possible.
第三步:表达希望采纳,期待回复。
3.It would be a wise
2.建议信必背高分句式。
choice if you read a book or
段落
主旨
高分句式
listen to music,which will
calm you down.
1.I'm sorry to hear that
4.As far as I am
you fail to adapt yourself to
concemed.there's no need for
high school life.Therefore,I'm
you to be shy because all of us
writing to give you some tips/
are willing to be friends
suggestions.
with you.
2.I think you can make it
if you follow the following
1.I really hope these ideas
that I offer will be helpful
advice.
for you.
3.(2023·新高考全国卷
首段
目的
2.I believe,with your
I)Learning that we'll be
effort,you can manage to
randomly paired to do the oral
overcome these difficulties.
practice,I feel an urge to
3.The situation is easy to
express my opinion.
4.When it comes to how to
尾段
期待
change if you follow my
advice.
make our activities interesting and
4.I am certain that if you
meaningful,I'd like to share my
follow my advice,you'll get
thoughts and offer some personal
along well with your classmates.
suggestions.
5.I hope these suggestions
will be of benefit to you./I
hope you will find these
suggestions useful.
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3.建议信必背模版。
2.感谢信必背高分句式。
Dear Li Hua,
段落
主旨
高分句式
I'm sorry to hear that you have such a
1.I am sincerely grateful to
difficult problem.In your letter,you said
you for your timely help/what you
D you had some difficulties in learning
have done for me.
English(你在英语学习中有一些困难).
表达
2.I am writing to express/
首段
This is a normal problem that every student
谢意
show/convey my sincere thanks to
could suffer,so I think 2I can give you
you for your help.
some useful suggestions(我能够给你一些
3.I would like to convey my
有用的建议)
thanks to you for your kind help.
1.Thanks to your help,I have
My suggestions are as follows.Firstly,
made rapid progress in my English.
you should listen to the teacher carefully in
说明
2.Without/But for your help
the class.Secondly,the best way to learn
中段
原因
If it were not for your help).I
English is reading it well and knowing the
would not have made so much
meaning of it.Thirdly,you can speak
progress in my English.
English with your classmates and teachers,
1.I would appreciate it if you
3 which can improve your listening and
could accept my sincere thanks.
speaking abilities(它能够提高你的听和讲
再次
2.Your kindness and help will
尾段
的能力).What's more,the most important
感谢
always be remembered.
advice is reading English books before and
3.I deeply/greatly appreciate
after the class.
your hospitality.
In a word,I hope 4my suggestions
3.感谢信必背写作模板。
will be helpful to you(我的建议会对你有
Dear Mary,
帮助).
How are you doing?I am writing this
Best wishes.
letter/these few lines to express my heartfelt
Yours,
gratitude/thanks to you for Doffering
Tom
accommodation to me when I was in
二、感谢信满分作文突破3大技巧
England(我在英国的时候为我提供住宿).
1.把握感谢信的写作框架。
When②I look back(我回首往事),I
感谢信是在收到别人的帮助、馈赠、邀
just can't help thinking of you/what you
请、慰问或祝贺等时,对收信人表达感谢的
have done for me.It was so kind of you to
一种信件。其写作思路框架如下:
3take care of me when I was not used to
问候并交代写信原因及目的
the weather there(当我不习惯那里的天
首段
描述对方帮助自己的经过
气时,你会照顾我).Besides,you④bought
感
中段
及对自己的意义
Chinese food for me(给我买了中国菜),
信
which really surprised me.What's more,I
尾段
再次表达感谢
shall always remember 5 those ancient
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stories you told me,which helped me
Dear Peter,
know more about your culture and
history(你给我讲的那些古老的故事,这让
我对你们的文化和历史有了更多的了解)
Nothing will be able to erase my wonderful
memories,and I will cherish them forever.
I wish to have a chance to express my
Yours,
gratitude to you.I would be very honored
Li Hua
and pleased if 6you could come to China
Test2
for a visit and I will be your guide(你来
(2024·昆明市“三诊一模”教学质检)
中国参观,我将做你的导游).
假定你是李华。你在学校举办的主题为
Thanks again for what you have done
“Adversity and Courage”"的英语演讲比赛中
for me.May you be blessed in everything
获奖,请给指导外教Miss Morton写一封邮
you do.
件表示感谢。
Yours truly,
内容包括:
Li Hua
1.感谢指导:
2.个人感悟。
【抢分演练】
注意:
Test 1
1.写作词数应为80左右:
(2024·甘肃省诊断考试)》
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
假定你是李华。你的外教老师Peter为
Dear Miss Morton,
了提高英语课堂效率,准备组织一些课堂活
动,正在向同学们征集建议。请你给外教写
一封邮件。
内容包括:
1.列举课堂存在的问题;
Yours.
2.建议有效的课堂活动并阐明理由。
Li Hua
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右:
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
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类型2告知信和邀请信
(续表)
【技法突破】
段落
主旨
高分句式
一、告知信满分作文3大技巧
I.过波句:①Some details
1.把握告知信的“三段式”框架。
regarding/concerning...are as
开头:自我介绍/寒暄问候+写信目的
follows.
告
主体:写明告知的具体事项(时间、地点、准
2Here are arrangements for
备和活动内容等)
this activity./The followings are
结尾:期盼再次联系
arrangements for this activity.
2.告知信必背高分句式。
2.时间、地点:①The
activity is scheduled to last two
段落
主旨
高分句式
hours,from 8:00 a.m.to
1.Thrilled at the
10:00a.m.
upcoming event,I'm writing to
②As scheduled,.·is
confirm/finalize some related
告知
supposed to be launched at
details and...
中段
内容
2:30 this Wednesday afternoon
in the school lecture hall.
2.I hope this email/message
3 The contest was held in
finds you well.I'm writing to
the afternoon of 15th April in
detail the arrangements for the
Classroom 601.It started at 3
coming event.
o'clock.lasting about two
3.I'm very glad/delighted/
hours.
more than pleased to receive
写信
3.感受,意义与收获:The
首段
your email/letter,in which you
目的
activity benefited us a lot.Not
expressed great interest in...I'm
only did it get us close to nature
quite/perfectly willing to share
and give us relaxation from heavy
with you
some relevant
schoolwork,but it cultivated our
information.
spirit of persistence.
4.Learning from your last
1.If you want to know
letter that you take an interest
anything else,please don't
in/have a strong passion for/
hesitate to contact me/drop me
are passionate about...,I'm
a line.
writing in delight to give you a
2.If there is anything I
brief account of it.
can do for you,please let me
期盼
know and I would be more than
尾段
再次
glad to help.
联系
3.On condition that you
have any questions or concerns,
please feel free to contact me.
4.Hoping you'll harvest a
lot and we'll have rosy
memories together.Looking
forward to your arrival.
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3.告知信必背写作模板。
(续表)
Dear Jack,
段落
主旨
高分句式
DKnowing that you are interested in
1.Here are arrangements
(得知您对…感兴趣)the lecture on
for this activity./The following
traditional Chinese culture held in our
are arrangements for this
school,2I am more than glad to share
activity./Arrangements for this
with you the detailed information(我很高
activity are as follows.
兴与您分享详细信息)
2.To begin with,we
3The lecture is scheduled at 7:00
will...Besides,there will be a
next Monday evening at the Student
活动
varieties of activities such
中段
Center(讲座定于下周一晚上7点在学生
内容
as...,which will...
中心举行),which will be delivered by
3.This will be followed
Mr.Wang,a famous expert on traditional
by...At around ten,we will
Chinese culture.4According to the plan
hold
a small
party,at
(根据计划),he will first introduce some
which...
influential Chinese operas,and following
4.The activity is scheduled
that,he will give us live performance of
to last approximately...,from...
Yue Opera,which is popular in Zhejiang
to...
Province.
1.Would you please drop
5You are warmly welcome to attend
me a letter to let me know if
the lecture(我们热忱欢迎您参加这次讲座).
you can come to...?
Yours sincerely,
2.We are looking forward
Li Hua
to your
coming with great
二、邀请信满分作文3大技巧
pleasure.
询问
1.把握邀请信的写作框架。
尾段
3.I would like to meet
期待
邀,首段:说出活动并提出邀请
you there and please let me
中段:说出活动内容和参加活动的益处
know your decision soon.
信
尾段:期待对方接受邀请
4.We would appreciate it
2.邀请信必背高分句式。
if you could confirm your
participation at your earliest
段落
主旨
高分句式
convenience.
1.I'm very pleased/more
3.邀请信必背写作模板。
than delighted to invite you to
Dear Professor Smith,
join in...to be held from...
I am Li Hua,chairman of the Students'
to...in...
发出
2.I am sincerely inviting
Union of Xinhua Middle School.1I am
首段
邀请
you to participate in...on
writing to tell you(我写信告诉你)that our
behalf of....
school will have the Second Culture Festival
3.It is my pleasure/a
next weekend..②We would be honored(我
great honor for me to invite
们会很荣幸)if you could come to give us
you to participate in/attend...
a lecture about the differences between
American and Chinese cultures.
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③The activity will start(活动开始)
注意:
at 9 o'clock and end at 11 o'clock on Nov.
1.写作词数应为80左右:
28th in Classroom 201 of the No.3 teaching
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
building.
As an expert in international culture,
you must have a good knowledge of this
aspect,so we hope you could help broaden
our horizons and clear up some cultural
confusion.
4 Could you please contact us in
Test 2
advance(你能提前和我们联系)at
(2024·辽宁省名校联盟联合考试)
englishtec@163.com if you could come to
假定你是校学生会主席李华。你校决定
our culture festival?I really hope you can
近期举办建校周年庆典活动,请你写信邀请
make it.5Looking forward to your reply
外教Peter参加。
(期待你的回复).
内容包括:
Yours sincerely,
1.活动时间和地点:
Li Hua
2.活动内容简介;
3.注意事项。
【抢分演练】
注意:
Test 1
1.写作词数应为80左右:
(2024·浙江十校10月联考)
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计人总词数
假如你是某英文网站负责人李华。你们
Dear Peter,
网站近期将举办以“海洋保护”为主题的海
报设计大赛,在华交换生Freddie对此很感兴
趣并写信咨询比赛的相关信息。请你给他回
信,关注收信内容,注意回复信的交际性。
内容包括:
1.大赛目的:
2.作品要求
Yours,
3.参赛方式
Li Hua
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类型3演讲稿和通知
middle school.DI'm very glad to stand
【技法突破】
here and give you a short speech(我很高
一、演讲稿满分作文3大技巧
兴站在这里给你们做一个简短的演讲)】
1.把握演讲稿写作框架。
today.My topic is "I love English".
演讲稿的语言通常要有吸引力,还要
English is now used everywhere in the
明确演讲的对象。演讲稿通常是议论文,
world.It has become the most common
在语言使用上一定要准确简明、通俗易懂、
language on the Internet and for intemational
层次清楚、条理分明。其写作框架如下:
trade.More and more people have begun to
开头:简单介绍,点明演讲主题
learn English now.As for me,2 learning
演讲稿
主体:表达观点,传递信息
English makes me confident(学习英语令我自
结尾:简单致谢,重申主题
and gives me a new colorful world
2.演讲稿必背高分句式。
I know 3Rome was not built in a
节点
主旨
高分句式
day(罗马不是一日建成的),I believe that
I can speak English very well one day if I
1.Today I am very glad to
have the opportunity to make
always study hard.At that time,my dream
this presentation.
will come true.That's all.
2.It's my honor to stand
④Thanks for your listening(感谢倾
here and say something about
听)!
引出
friendship.
二、通知满分作文3大技巧
开头语
主题
3.Good moming,everyone!
1.把握通知写作框架。
It is my great honor to share with
其写作框架如下:
you my opinions on...
开头:说明通知的事情及其目的
4.Today I want to talk to
主体:陈述具体的内容一时间、地点、
you about a very
important
通知
参加者等
subject.
结尾:提出要求和注意事项
陈述
2.通知必背高分句式。
中段
内容
节点
主旨
高分句式
1.Thanks for
your
1.In celebration of....a
listening (to my speech).
meeting/party is to be held
2.That's all I want to say
表示感
at...time on...(date
结束语
谢或进
about this point.
in/at...(place).
行总结
3.I do hope what is
2.With the intention of
mentioned above might be
介绍
开头语
fostering/cultivating/promoting/
helpful to you!Thank you for
缘由
raising people's awareness of.../
your listening!
interest in....a campaign called
3.演讲稿必背写作模板。
named/entitled...is scheduled
Good moming,everyone!
to be held on...date at/
My name is...I'm a student from...
in..(place).
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【抢分演练】
节点
主旨
高分句式
Test 1
1.时间、地点:As scheduled,
it is supposed to be launched
(2024·安徽省“皖南八校”联考二)
at...in...
假定你是校英文报《先锋》(Pioneer)的
2.参加人员:①Students
编辑,受你校学生会委托撰写一份以“珍爱
from...are expected to take
湿地(Treasure the Wetlands)”为主题的海报
part.
设计大赛通知。
具体
(2)Those who have interest
中段
内容包括:
事项
in...are welcome to participate.
1.大赛目的:
3.活动安排:During..·.,a
variety of activities will be
2.作品要求:
presented,ranging from...to...
3.参赛方式。
4.准备工作:All the
注意:
participants are required/expected
1.写作词数应为80左右:
to camry...in view of...
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
1.Your participation/
Notice
表示欢
contribution will surely/certainly
make much difference/make the
结束语
迎或期
待
event a huge success.
2.We are expecting your
attendance/participation.
3.通知必背写作模板。
Notice
①With the aim of improving(为了提
Test 2
)our artistic taste and fueling our passion
(2024·长春市质量监测一)
for traditional art,an exhibition,whose
假定你是李华。你们学校近期开展以
theme is "Traditional Art Lights up
“Say No to Fast Food'"为主题的英语演讲比
Campus",2is scheduled to be held in the
赛,请你写一篇演讲稿。
Art Hall from February8 th to 15th(定于
内容包括:
2月8日至15日在艺术馆举行).
1.快餐食品的危害:
Various brilliant artworks created by us
2.你的建议。
fellow students③will be on show(将展出),.
注意:
including vivid Chinese paintings,graceful
1.写作词数应为80左右:
calligraphy works and delicate paper-cuttings.
2.开头已给出,不计入总词数。
A variety of splendid artworks will greatly
Dear friends,
stimulate our interest in traditional Chinese
art,④holding us entirely in its charm(使我
们完全沉浸在它的魅力中),
5 For those who want to enjoy the
beauty of diverse traditional Chinese art,
this exhibition is definitely the one you
cannot miss(对于那些想欣赏中国传统艺术
之美的人来说,这个展览绝对是不容错过
的)
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类型4短文投稿和报道
3.短文投稿必背写作模板。
【技法突破】
As is often the case,when people are
一、短文投稿写作满分作文3大技巧
attending meetings,having meals or waiting
L.把握短文投稿的写作框架。
for buses,1 you can always find them
短文投稿通常会有特定的主题,通常
addicted to their phones,completely
是写一篇相关话题的小短文,根据需要选
ignoring others(你总是可以发现他们沉
择体裁为记叙文、议论文或说明文。其写
迷于手机,完全忽略其他人).
作框架如下:
This is really a common phenomenon
1.提出问题或现象:具体活动一
短文
in our life.The reason is that mobile phones
投稿
2.分析问题、现象:介绍活动内容
nowadays can be used 2 to play mobile
3.问题结论或活动总结
games and keep in touch with friends
2.短文投稿必背高分句式。
手机游戏并与朋友联络).However,.too
节点
主旨
高分句式
much exposure to phones 3 is bad for
As far as...is concerned;It
people's health(对人们的健康有害).
can
be said with certainty
Moreover,people engaged in phones fail
that...;As the proverb says...:
明确
开头语
It has to be noticed that...;It's
to communicate well with those around
主题
generally recognized that...;
them(很难与身边的人交流).
There's no denying the fact
As far as I am concerned,people
that...;Nothing is more
should wisely 5make use of their phones
important than the fact that...
to help with their work and study(使用手
A case in point is...But
机来帮助他们的工作与学习).And
the problem is not so simple.
Therefore...;But it's a pity
meanwhile they should 6care more about
中段
论述
that...:In spite of the fact
their family and friends rather than
安排
that...:Further,we hold
mobile phones(多关心家人与朋友,少关
opinion that...;Similarly.we
注手机).
should pay attention to...;As it
In conclusion,phones should be used
has been mentioned above...
properly and people should lead a healthy
I will conclude by
life
saying...;Therefore,we have
the reason to believe that...;
二、报道写作满分作文3大技巧
All things considered/In a
1.把握报道的写作框架。
结束语
方法
word/In conclusion:From what
报道是用概括性的叙述方式、简明扼
结论
has been discussed above.we
要的文字,把事件或活动记录下来。
may draw the conclusion that...;
开头:简单交代事件或活动的时间、地点、
It can be concluded from the
discussion that...:From my point
目的和参与者
报道
of view,it would be better if...
主体:叙述事件或活动的过程
结尾:对事件或活动进行评价
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2.报道必背高分句式。
(续表)
节点
主旨
高分句式
节点
主旨
高分句式
1.To help...build....
1.Through the activity,
the Students'Union of our
not only did we master some
school organized a volunteer
basic and practical skills,but
activity last weekend.
our awareness of safety was
2.In order to provide the
raised.
students with a colorful school
2.It's such a meaningful
life,our school held...last
简要概
activity that students are all
开头语
week.
括事件
looking forward to the next...
3.In an attempt to mourn
3.There is no denying that
sb./mark sth....our school
the activity benefits us a lot.It
held an activity on....which
评价或
not only provides us with a
received great attention.
结束语
感受
chance to...,but allows
4.Last Sunday witnessed
us to....
our active participation in the
4.The activity was
community service.
thought highly of.Not only
1.At the beginning,a
can...be
passed down
lecture related to...was arranged,
continuously,but
more
after which our school teachers
importance was attached to...
showed us how to...
5.Apart from knowledge.
2.It was a nice day.At 8:
we also learned to cooperate
00 a.m..we gathered at...and
with each other and came to
set out for...in high spirits.
realize the importance of
3.At the beginning of the
teamwork
activity,a short film was shown.
3.报道必背写作模板。
helping us students know...
A Cross-Country Running Race
4.The opening ceremony
D Last Sunday witnessed an
事件或
started at 9:00 a.m.,and the
extraordinary cross-country running race
中段
活动过
head teacher delivered a speech
(上周日见证了一场盛大的越野比赛),
程
about...
5.The activity was so
which nearly drew the attention of every
student and teacher of our school.
fascinating that more than 500
students signed up for it.
2The students selected from every
6.All the volunteers were
class took part in the race(从各班选拔的
divided into several groups and
学生参加了这次比赛).The route measured
then they went to the nearby
five kilometers,from our school gate to the
communities,where they
foot of Nanshan Mountain.3Every runner
helped the residents do...
tried their best to finish the task(每一个选
7.About 2 hours later.we
手都尽力完成任务),with their classmates
all
reached...
Bathed
in
along the way giving them necessary help as
sunshine,we cheered with joy.
well as encouragement.At last,all the
-84國通
C
【语篇解读】本文是一篇说明文。文章主要介绍了中国
传统美食—一葱油饼。
1.Essentially解析:考查副词。空处作状语,修饰整个句
子,意为“本质上”,应使用副词形式。住于句首,首字母大
写。故填Essentially
2.mixed解析:考查动词的时态。空处与has been folded、
(has been)grilled or fried并列,共同作hat引导的定语从
句的谓语,此处省略了共同的部分has been。故填mixed。
3,5解析:考查动词的时态和主谓一致。本段主要讲葱油
饼的制作,使用一般现在时。主语To cook a Chinese
scallion pancake为不定式短语,视为单教。故填is。
4.to coat解析:考查非谓语动诃。use sth,to do sth.意为
“用某物微某事”,不定式作目的状语。co阳t在此处用作动
河,意为“给…涂上一层:用…覆盖”。故填oc0at。
5.0解析:考查并列连河。结合句意可知,空处表示选择
美系。故填or。
6.wh解析:考查介词。wh表示“用(某种工具或手
段)”。故填wih。
7.n解析:考查冠词。此处表示“一座情感的桥梁”,且
emotional的发音以元音音素开头,应用不定冠词an。故
填an。
8.ha/who解析:考查定语从句。空处引导定语从句,在从
句中作主语,修饰先行词parents(指人),应使用美系代词
that/whoe故填that/who
9.traditions解析:考查名调复数。根据re可知此处应使
用复数形式。故填traditions。
I0.better解析:考查形容词的比较级。根据than可知,此
处应使用比较级形式,表示“比任何金银珍宝更好”。故
填better
【语篇解读】本文是一篇说明文。文章主要介绍了纸师
的由来及其发展历程。
1.seems解析:考查动词的时态和主谓一致。本句为含让
步状语从句的主从复合句。空处作主句谓语。根据从句
时态可知。主句也应使用一般现在时。空处与主句主语
virtual money(视为单数)构成主动关系。故填seems。
2.as解析:考查介词。此处为think of sth.5..结构,as表
示“作为”。故填s。
3.w心eput解析:考查动词的时态、语态和主谓一致。空处
作句子谓语。此句精迷的是过去发生的事情,应使用一被
过去时。空处与主语These coins构成被动关系(这些硬币
被一条绳子逢接),应使用被动语态。主语These coins为
复数形式,故填were put。
4.whih解析:考查定语从句。空处引导非限制性定语从
句,在从句中作主语,指代先行河ten bunches(指物),应使
用关系代词which。故填which。
5,To solve解析:考查非谓语动诃。空处作目的状语,应使
用动词不定式。位于句着,首字母大写。故填To solv。
6.cld解析:考查非谓语动词。空处所在分句已有谓语
would give,空处为非谓语形式作后置定语,与被修饰词
paper构成被动关系,应使用过去分词形式。故填called。
.2
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7.printing解析:考查名词。空处位于定冠词后、介词前,作
led to的宾语,应使用名词形式,意为“印刷”。故填
printing.
8.h心解析:考查冠词。此处指特定的年代,应使用定冠词
he。故填the。
9.worthless解析:考查形客词。or表示选择关系,根据前
面的“worth quite a lot'”可推知,此处应该表示“无价值
的”。故填worthless。
10.simply解析:考查解词。空处修饰形客词convenient,.应
使用副词形式。故填simply。
板块三写作—考前精练8种
文体和4个技能
题型一应用文写作
类型1建议信和感谢信
【抢分演练】
Test 1
Dear Peter.
How are you doing?To make our class more productive,
I'd like to voice my ideas.
I've noticed that many of us are hesitant to speak up.
probably due to fear of making mistakes.To approach this.I
strongly recommend organizing group discussions and role-play
activities,where the relaxed atmosphere will inspire more
active participation and motivate us to speak confidently.
Additionally.we could organize puzzles and grammar
challenges to make our class more engaging and interactive.
Such activities can foster a sense of competition and teamwork.
I hope you can take my tips into consideration.Hopefully.
they will be of great help.
Yours.
Li Hua
Test 2
Dear Miss Morton.
I'm writing to convey my gratitud(表达我的感激之情)
to you for your invaluable(极宝贵的)assistance in the English
speech contest,with the theme of"Adversity and Courage".
Without your guidance,I could'have ranked the first(虚拟语
气)
Your professional and constructive criticism(专业和有建
设性的意见)has been a key part of my progress.From choices
of words to the presentation skills of engaging()audience.
your lessons have been enlightening(i让人受启发的),What's
rticularly memorable(主语从句)is that your feedback is
ways on point and encouraging(表语从句),forming the core
of my confidence and persistence(坚持)(现在分词短语作状
语).Looking back.,the whole process empowers(使能够)me
to pursue my dream courageously(勇敢地)despite the
obstacles on the way.
Many thanks again for your kind help.
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Yours,
Li Hua
类型2告知信和邀请信
【抢分演练】
Test 1
Dear Freddie.
Extremely delighted to know that you intend to participate
in the poster design contest with the theme of ocean protection,
I'm writing to inform you of some detailed information.
In a bid to arouse the awareness of marine conservation,
our English website organizes this contest,where all the
students are welcome to submit their entries.Originality.by all
means is the first requirement.Plus,the poster you design
should be inspiring and thought-stimulating.clearly illustrating
the significance of the ocean and the urgency to protect it.
Morcover,a powerful slogan is also preferred,which will
make your work more persuasive and impressive.If you are
interested,submit your entry before November 10th to
Englishcluh@163.com.
Looking forward to your participation.
Yours.
Li Hua
Test 2
Dear Peter,
I'm Li Hua,chairman of the Students'Union.I'm glad to
invite you to our upcoming school anniversary celebration.
The event will take place in the school hall on September
10,starting from 9:00 a.m.We have planned a full range of
activities for the occasion.There will be a grand opening
ceremony,followed by various performances showing the
talents of us students.
It would be appreciated if you could arrive ten minutes
prior to the start of the event.We sincerely hope you can attend
the celebration.Your presence as a respected foreign teacher
would be invaluable.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
类型3演讲稿和通知
【抢分演练】
Test 1
Notice
In a bid to raise our environmental awareness and protect
precious wetland resources,a poster design competition called
"Treasure the Wetlands"is organized by the Students'Union.
To begin with,originality,by all means,is the first
requirement.Plus,the poster you design should be inspiring and
thought-provoking,clearly illustrating the significance of the
wetlands and the urgency to protect them.Moreover.a
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powerful slogan is also preferred.All the students are welcome
to submit your entries to pioneer@163.com before January
10th,2024.The winning works will be announced on February
2nd,2024.World Wetlands Day.in this newspaper.
Looking forward to your participation.
Test 2
Dear friends,
Good moming.everyone.I am so honored to give a
speech titled "Say No to Fast Food".
As we know,fast food does great hamm to our health.Not
only does it lack nutrition that our body needs,it can also cause
obesity and related diseases.as fast food is generally high in
sugar,salt,fat and calorie.
As high school students,we are supposed to stay away
from fast food.First of all,we'd better eat homemade or green
food,which is both healthy and eco-friendly.In addition,call
on our family and friends to choose healthy food.Let's take
action now.That's all for my speech.Thank you!
类型4短文投稿和报道
【抢分演练】
Test 1
Housework,Our Responsibility
Recently,a survey on students'participation in housework
has been conducted in our school revealing that only 18%of the
students regularly engage in(参加)housework,wit地17%doing
0 occasionally and65%not participating at al(现在分词短
语作状语,其中含有hat引导的宾语从句和wih复合结构.
Some reasons are likely to take responsibility for(
this situation.Firstly,the busy schedules often leave
students with little free time.Besides.parents may not expect
their children to assist with housework,which further reduces
e chances of student participation(非限制性定语从句).
Personally,doing regular housework(动名词短语作主
)can help students learn life skills and appreciate parents"
efforts.Schools and parents should encourage regular
participation in housework to help them grow into responsible
individuals.
Test 2
An Interesting Tree-planting Activity
Last Sunday our school organized an interesting tree.
planting activity on campus.Almost all students joined it
actively.
At the beginning,our teachers explained how to plant trees
and then gave us a demonstration(示范).Afterwar本,egot
involved and cooperated with pleasure.Some dug holes,some
planted trees and others watered them.We worked hard.talking
即dain吸appily a the time(现在分词短语作状语),
uring whichochers tookm0 yphotos of5(非限制性定
语从句)
We truly enjoyed the activity.Not only did it help us
英圃
cooperate better and beautify our campus.but it raised our
awareness of protecting the environment(not only...but...
构,其中Not only位于句首,引起半倒装)
题型二读后续写
微技能1寻找四条主线·深度挖掘续写基点
【抢分演练】
Test 1
In the car,I told her I lost again and I was hesitating about
quitting the team.Mom remained silent for a full minute,
tightening(更紧地抓住)her grip on the stecring wheel[手部
动作描写].Finally,she spoke in a measured tone,“Bily,
quitting is not a sign of weakness(软弱的表现).Winning or
losing doesn't define you..What matters(主语从句)is whether
oue pursuin竖something(that bring毁ou joy2(表语从句,其
中h引导定语从句).”Her words cleared up the self-doubt
that had clouded my judgement(消除了扰乱我的判断力的自
我怀疑)and reignited a spark of courage within me(重新点燃
了我内心的勇气的火花).I recalled why I had learned to
wrestle in the first place(宾语从句).“Thanks,Mom.I know
what I should do.
The next day.I walked into the training field again.Coach
McDonald was already there,He smiled[面部动作描写,表达
欣慰之情]hen he saw me wi迪a knowing look(时间状语从
)"Back for more,Billy?"he said,clapping me on the
ack[手部动作描写](动名词短语作伴随状语).I nodded
[头部动作描写],making up my mind to give it another shot
(再i试一次).As I tied my shoes and prepared for the practice,
I felt a surge of determination washing over me[心理描写,下
定决心].Maybe Coach was right.Maybe I do have what i其
akes to be a champion(宽语从句).And if not,.at least1am
pursuing something that brings me joy and a sense of purpose.
Test 2
Then,suddenly,the unexpected happened.Just as Michael
looked nervously.and right in the sight of everyone watching,
Frank somehow tripped over something(被某东西绊倒).
Down he fell onto the ground[动作描述],sending all his
ooks flying and spreading out on the f1oor(现在分词短语作
状语).Time standine stil(独立主格结构),everyone was
taken aback by the sudden occurrence[心理捐写.描述大家震
惊的情景】.Although Michael was just as shocked,his mind
was racing[心理描写]一It was in a split second that Ramon's
randma's words popped into his mind(强调句型),“You can
catch more flies with honey than with vinegar."He knew what
to do.Barely had Frank gotten up with loads of embarrassment
(悲常趁)when Michael went(bary.·when..结构,
表“一…就…”).
Michael bent down and quickly picked up Frank's books
on the floor.After offering them to him,Michael said with a
smile,"You look like you could use an ally.Now.it was
Frank's turn to be numbed there with burning cheeks,as
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Michael'sresponse was way out of his expectations(出乎他的
)He quickly took his books,muttered in a low voice,
"Uh,thanks,”and fled the scene[took,muttered,fled三连动
把Frank快速离开的情景生动地表达出来],Out of the comer
of his eye,Michael caught Ramon approaching with a knowing
smile and a thumbs-up."My grandma would be proud of
you,"Ramon remarked."Well,I guess that's just honey,"
Michael grinned."And I hope it sticks."
微技能2厘清写作走向·确保续写不跑偏
【抢分演练】
Test I
Closing the notebook.they took action.First they decided
to set up a meeting with Mr.Issac to discuss their plan for the
school garden.Drew and Tia were excited to share their idea
with someone who had a passion for gardening(定语从句)[心
]Mr.Issac immediately agreed to guide the students
and provide his expertise(专门技能)in the garden..M.Issac
also suggested inviting other members of the community to get
involed in the project.Then they asked Ms.Milano for advice.
To their surprise,Ms.Milano agreed to let them use a small
plot of land in the school ground for the garden.
"Actually,I was doubtful when you first came to me,"
said Ms.Milano."But after looking at your plan,I must say
I'm impressed that it's well-thought-out and organized.I'm
happy to give you the green light(给你开绿灯)to start the
school garden."Drew and Tia coukdn't believe it.They thanked
Ms.Milano and quickly got to work.Mr.Issac agreed to help
and even donated some of his gardening supplics.The students
were excited to start planting and soon the garden was
flourishing()with an abundance of fresh produce.As the
如dents worked togcther in the garden(时间状语从句),they
learned valuable lessons about teamwork,responsibility and the
importance of eating healthy[升华主题]
Test 2
Just then,an idea came to Mr.Taylor,"How about if I
ke you a loan?I'II let you use a plot of land(一小块地)in
my yard.When y9 ur garden starts to prosper(宽荣)(时间状语
从句),you can repay me with a few tomatoes.”On hearing
that,Mali nodded her head without the slightest hesitation(
不犹豫).The next day,Mali bought some tomato plants with
all her pocket money.Mr.Taylor taught Mali how to prepare
the soil and place the plants.Then they watered and pulled
weeds regularly.waiting in eager anticipation for the tasty fruit
(现在分词短语作状语)[心理描写,描述他们的迫切期待,
When the fruit ripened,there were more juicy.red
tomatoes than even Mali could have imagined.They both were
excited.On Saturday,Mali and Mr.Taylor carried several
crates of ripe tomatoes to the market.The tomatoes received
great popularity(大受欢迎).otQn败did Ma矩back the
money she invested.but she also made a profit of twenty
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dollars(not only..but also..,结构,其中Not only位于句首
引起部分倒装).She handed the note to Mr.Taylor."his is
the wage you have eamed(定语从句).”Mr.Taylor said
softly,The bright and diligent girl beamed(眉开眼笑)[面部动
作描写and suggested,“Maybe yo阅can sell some of your
daffodils and we can run a market stand together."What a good
idea!Maybe neighbors had already started looking forward to
the next summer.
微技能3首尾完美照应·逐步推进秀续写
【抢分演练】
Test 1
Ultimately,it was my turn to perform,and I felt
extremely nervous.I didn't want to be regarded as different
from the others.Isla walked to me and hugged me tightly[
动作描写].“Come on,.Emily!”Isla enoouraged me.“I
believe you will do great because you are a wonderful dancer
(原因状语从句).Don't care too much about what others
think.Just trust yourself."Soon.I took my place on the stage.I
remembered every step and every move.When the music was
ower(时间状语从句),the crowd burst into applause(突然鼓
起学来),At that moment,I fel like a dancing queen!
I stepped off the stage and expressed my thanks to Isla.
who was ready to sing.I was a little worried at the beginning
because the crowd became restless(不耐烦的).Luckily,Isla
ignored it.I stood up,shouting,"Isla.you are the best!"Her
homemade dress was shining in the light,but her eyes clouded
witht忙arsf神态描写].When Isla's singing died down,all the
students were still lost in her unique voice.Some even began
singing like her,and then more.Their singing resounded around
the hall.I rushed to the stage after her performance.hugging
her cheerful业y(现在分词短语作状语).That was enough!We
could never be distanced.
Test 2
Stepping out of the bathroom.Anjali saw some inspiring
posters on the wall.One of them illustrated()with several
instruments and a quote“Never dim(使变暗淡)your light'".
For that very moment.Anjali thought about how she was
mesmerized(使着送)the first time she saw somcone playin哭
tabla,by the beautiful sounds he was creating with his hands.
(宾语从句).She knew that the tabla was meant for her(适合
)When the day of the recital finally arrived.Anjali was
determined to do her very best,regardless of the outcome.She
was not going to let anyone make her feel bad,whether it was
for bein呢od at something or for being a如(让步状语从
句),And as expected.she delivered a flawless(无暇的)
performance.
After the recital,Deepak walked up to Anjali."Very
impressive.”He remarked awkwardly(道t尬地)that he was
just jealous(3是的)because the tabla shoul则be a boys
instrument(宾语从句,其中含原因状语从句),Anjali shrugged
图一
(耸肩)[肩部动作描写].“You know there is no such thing.”
A5 Anjali took one last look at the stae哭(时间状语从句),she
felt such a relief心理描写].Under the spotlight was the set of
the tabla.glittering()on the stage just as she did a few
inuteearher(完全倒装句+现在分词短语作状语).Among
countless compliments (and congratulations from the
audience,Anjali heard a little sweet voice,"Bravo,Anjali!"
She turned to find a little girl looking up at her."I didn't know
girls could play tabla,"she said."Girls can do everything boys
do,”Anjali beamed(笑容满面).“Never dim your light,.”
微技能4依照评分标准·力创续写满分篇
【抢分演练】
Test 1
Realizing the severe situation,Hill ran out for help.She
dashed to[肢体动作描写,表达Hill的急切心情】Ms
Smith's house,ber small heart racing(独立主格结构).“Mrs,
Smith,come quick!Mommy's not moving!"she cried,her
voice trembling with fear(独立主格结构).Mr.Smith,cvcr
the composed neighbor,followed Hill without delay(设有耽
搁),immediatelyrconzin吗eu5gs义of the sitation(现
在分i词短语作伴随状语).pon entering Jennife5homc
(upon doing一…就…),Mrs.Smith found her on the
floor,seizing up."Call 911,Hill,and stay on the line,she
instructed,her voice steady as she gave first aid.Though scared
[心理描写,害怕](状语从句的省略),Hill managed to relay
the emergency to the operator.
Jennifer finally came to herself in the hospital.As she
regained consciousness(恢复意识),she saw Hill's tearful face
and Mrs.Smith's comforting presence.The relief was palpable
(如释重负).She knew i其was her9 uick-thinking daughteran则
reliable neighbor who had saved her lif(强调句型作宾语从
)She was proud of her daughter's calmness and bravery.In
the meanwhile,she expressed her gratitude to(向某人表达感
)Mrs.Smith.The unforeseen accident reinforces the bond(
强了关系)of their little family and the community that
supported them(定语从句).
Test 2
In the park.I would put Ted one meter away from me.
encouraging him to walk.At first,he could not even more an
inch without falling down.But instead of getting discouraged,
he would keep trying until he finally managed to take a few
steps forward with the support of my hands.Gradually.Ted
larned to balance himself and began to walk slowly but
steadily.The park became our secret place where we spent
hours every day(where引导的定语从句),I patiently四iding
him and Ted determined workin哭on his mobility(独立主格结
构
We agreed to keep this secret from our parents until
Mom's birthday.On that day.while everyone was enjoying a
family lunch(while引导的时间状语从句),Ted suddenly
國画
stood up from his chair and took a few unsteady steps towards
our mother.Her eyes widened as she watched her son(as
的时间状语从句),who had bec知mnable to walk for some
time.now taking small,confident steps towards her(who
的定语从句),which was such a heartwarming moment for
ofs(which引导的非限制性定语从句),From that day on,
Ted's progress was nothing short of(无异于)a miracle,and
our family was overjoyed to see him regaining his strength and
mobility.
考前集训·提技能
写作高分练(一)
【.应用文写作
Dear Mr.Green,
I hope this email finds you well.I'm writing to provide
feedback and suggestions on our recent annual English Week.
I first would like to express my fondness for the
exceptional English Week.The various activities and language
games were not only enjoyable but also highly cducational,
reflecting your hard work and enormous devotion.However,I'd
like to offer a few suggestions for improvement.Firstly,I think
it would be beneficial to have more events that encourage
students to actively participate in English conversations.
Besides.group discussions.debates and role-play could boost
our confidence.Additionally,expanding English Week's
duration or having occasional sessions throughout the year could
further improve our language skills
Thank you for your efforts,and I look forward to
attending more exciting events.
Best regar达,
Li Hua
Ⅱ.读后续写
But at mile 19.Jeff began to worry they were going too
slow.Somehow he found the energy to pick up the pace.With
Tony's dream deeply imprinted(把:铭记在心)on his
mind(wih复合结构),he realized he wa5 not alone in this
ate(宾语从句).Clenching his teeth(咬紫他的牙齿),Jcf
sed all his strength and willpower(意志力)to push the racing
chair[动作描写].The audience can't help cheering for them.
With thunderous(雷鸣般的)applause,they were close to the
finishing line.Jeff knew it was time to fulfill Tony's wish
语从句).
leff handed Tony his rolling walker(助行器).Not that
long ago,Tony could barely walk several steps.But after years
of painstaking(辛苦的)work,he increased his step count and
was determined to finish the race on his own.After 15 hours
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and 55 minutes-with just five minutes to spare-the father and
the son crossed the finish line together.As the crowd engulfed
(包围)and cheered on an overwhelmed Tony(时间状语从
句),a weary(疲倦的)Jeff kept a low profile(保持低满)[神
态描写.“He didn't want his finish line moment,”says Tony:
"He wanted it to be mine.
写作高分练(二)
I,应用文写作
Next week will witness an exhibition organized by the
Model Aircraft Club of our school.The exhibition is scheduled
to be held in the Science and Technology Museum next
Saturday,running for two days.
This show.whose theme is "Fly on the Wings of
Science",is surely a good chance for us to learn more about
model aircraft.In the exhibition you will see a great variety of
activities,ranging from the exhibits of creative and
environmentally friendly model aircraft.virtual flight
experiences,to a model aircraft flight display.
It will be an exhibition never to be missed for a model
aircraft enthusiast.
Ⅱ.读后续写
With these tools.Michael started to work.It was freezing
cold(非常冷)and the winter wind stung(刺痛)Michael's
facc[环境描写.描述天气的寒冷],Fortunately,he didn't
have to wet his hands while washing the cars,otherwise,he
ouldn't have made it in such a harsh(劣的)situation(虚拟
语气).As he was spreading soa迎over the wheels(时间状语从
)Greg came to help.He grabbed the towel and started to
dry the car[动作描写],which sped现the washir吗alat(非
限制性定语从句).One car after another,Michael started to
feel the warmth sweeping over(突然袭来)his body and sweat
even hung over his forchead with the last car done.Michael and
Greg came back to the house and Michael counted the bills.
To Michael's surprise,he found he earned more money
than expected.Then Greg asked,"Do you have enough for that
field trip?""Yeah."Michael smiled and a better idea struck
him,Michael winked(眨眼示意)at Greg.“I think the mone义
5cmou史for both of us this year(宾语从句)!”Greg couldn't
believe his ears and opened his eyes wide[神态描写】."You
mean the two of us for the field trip?"he asked with his jaw
ropping(with复合结构)[神态描写,形容Greg的惊讶]·
"Yep!"Michael said with a proud voice.The brothers were
wild with joy(欣喜若狂)[神态描写],for they could finally
enjoy a field trip together.which would witness (the
love of the two brothers(非限制性定语从句).
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