2026届高三英语专项复习读后续写---一个缝满爱的午餐盒 导学案

2025-08-17
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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 A Lunchbox Stitched with Love Michael had watched it all unfold. For twelve long months, the silence between his father Jack and uncle Sam hung heavier than the winter fog clinging to their small town. It started with their late (已故的) father’s old workbench (工作台) — hand-carved by their grandfather, a piece they’d both cherished. When their dad passed away, Uncle Sam took it to restore, but his father Jack thought he’d taken it for himself forever. “You always got first pick,” Jack snapped; Sam shot back, “At least I’m not letting it rot.” Doors slammed, and they’d not spoken since. Jack, once a man who laughed so loud that the neighbors knocked to complain, now moved like a ghost: mornings without the clatter (哐啷声) of his favorite coffee mug, evenings staring at the unlit fireplace in dead silence. One afternoon, Michael found his dad on the porch (门廊), staring at a photo — Jack and Sam, arms slung over each other’s shoulders at the workbench, both grinning wide. “Why don’t you call him?” Michael asked. Jack’s jaw tightened. “Some things can’t be fixed, kiddo.” But Michael shook his head. He’d watched his mom mend his favorite sweater with a needle and thread, turning a hole into something stitched with care. Michael also noticed that Aunt Clara, Uncle Sam’s wife, still called Mom, asking gently how his dad was doing. Maybe broken things just needed the right hands to fix them. That night, Michael slid a list of Uncle Sam’s favorite foods into his pocket — the ones Dad had always bought at the market on weekends, the two of them laughing over plates together. By morning, Michael had come up with a plan: something sweet might fix. With his allowance, he set out to fill his dad’s old lunchbox with what was on the list. Michael hit the market: Mrs. Hernandez’s warm meat pies; Mr. Patel’s spicy mango sauce and buttery cookies. Although his shirt was stained with jam, and his shoes were coated in dirt, Michael smiled, seeing the lunchbox was full. (1)续写词数应为150个左右; (2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 When Michael finally stood on Uncle Sam’s porch, his heart pounded like a drum. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ A few minutes after Aunt Clara’s phone call the front doorbell rang again. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 文本分析​ 1.角色:_____________________________​ 2.视角:第________人称​ 3.时空线:from the silence between Jack and Sam---______________ ---Michael standing on Uncle Sam’s porch​ 4. 请在文章中将可能的线索都找出来。​ How did the conflict between Jack and Sam start?: ______________________________________________​ What change happened to Jack after the conflict?: ____________________________________________​ What inspired Michael to try to fix the relationship?: ____________________________________________​ What was Michael’s plan to mend the relationship?: ____________________________________________​ What did Michael do to prepare for the plan?: ____________________________________________​ How did Aunt Clara show her attitude towards the conflict?: ____________________________________________​ 5.情节线:Jack 和 Sam 因旧工作台产生矛盾,长达一年互不说话。→___________________________→______________________________→__________________________________________________→(续写)Michael 给 Uncle Sam 送午餐盒,后续门铃再次响起。​ 6.情感线:Jack:(曾经开朗)→___________(冲突后)→(续写)​ Sam:(冲突时愤怒)→(续写)​ Michael:(看到父亲状态的担忧)→___________(有了计划后)→___________(送午餐盒时)→(续写)​ Mom & Aunt Clara:(关心两人关系)→(续写)​ 7. 综合以上信息,请用 3-4 句话概括文章大意。(中英各一个)​ 中文: __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 英文: __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8. 句式:比较状语从句(the silence...hung heavier than the winter fog...);直接引语;现在分词作状语(clinging to their small town);让步状语从句(Although his shirt was stained...) 9. 主题(本文属于人与他人):_______________________​ 情节构造​ 第一段提示句:When Michael finally stood on Uncle Sam’s porch, his heart pounded like a drum.​ 衔接句 1——— 对 “heart pounded like a drum” 提问 “Michael 当时的状态如何?”:How was Michael feeling when standing on Uncle Sam’s porch?​ 过渡句推演:衔接 1→______←衔接 2​ 衔接句 2——— 对 “interacting with Uncle Sam” 提问 “Michael 会如何与 Uncle Sam 互动?”:How would Michael interact with Uncle Sam?​ 第二段提示句:A few minutes after Aunt Clara’s phone call the front doorbell rang again.​ 衔接句 3——— 对 “doorbell rang again” 提问 “谁可能会来?”:Who might come when the doorbell rang again?​ 过渡句推演:衔接 3→______←主题​ 主题:_________________________________​ 段落构思​ 第一段:When Michael finally stood on Uncle Sam’s porch, his heart pounded like a drum.​ →①__________________→②__________________→③__________________;​ 英文: ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 第二段:A few minutes after Aunt Clara’s phone call the front doorbell rang again.​ →④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥__________________。​ 英文: ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 文本分析​ 1.角色:Michael(杰克的儿子)、Jack(迈克尔的父亲)、Sam(杰克的弟弟,迈克尔的叔叔)、Clara(山姆的妻子,迈克尔的婶婶)、Michael's Mom(迈克尔的妈妈)、Jack 和 Sam 已故的父亲、Mrs. Hernandez、Mr. Patel​ 2.视角:第第三人称​ 3.时空线:from Jack 和 Sam 产生矛盾(12 个月前)---Michael 发现父亲状态及制定计划当天 ---the next morning(Michael 执行计划时)​ 4. 文章中的线索:​ How did the conflict between Jack and Sam start?:源于他们已故父亲的旧工作台,山姆拿去修复,杰克却认为他要永久据为己有,两人发生争执后不再说话。​ What change happened to Jack after the conflict?:从前爱笑、生活有活力,变得沉默寡言,生活没了往日声响,常陷入死寂。​ What inspired Michael to try to fix the relationship?:看到妈妈用针线修补毛衣化缺点为美好,且婶婶克拉拉仍关心爸爸,觉得破碎的关系或许能被修复。​ What was Michael's plan to mend the relationship?:用自己的零花钱,按山姆叔叔喜欢的食物清单,把爸爸的旧午餐盒装满食物送给山姆。​ What did Michael do to prepare for the plan?:夜里记下山姆喜欢的食物清单,早上去市场买了埃尔南德斯太太的肉派、帕特尔先生的芒果酱和黄油饼干等,装满了午餐盒。​ How did Michael feel after preparing the lunchbox?:尽管衬衫沾了果酱、鞋子沾满泥土,但看到午餐盒装满了,他笑了,内心应是期待的。​ 5.情节线:Jack 和 Sam 因旧工作台产生矛盾,12 个月互不说话。→Jack 变得沉默寡言,Michael 看在眼里。→Michael 受启发决定修复他们的关系,制定了用食物缓和关系的计划。→Michael 用零花钱买了山姆喜欢的食物装满旧午餐盒。→(续写)Michael 把午餐盒送给山姆,山姆有所触动,克拉拉打电话给杰克家,之后杰克家门铃再次响起。​ 6.情感线:Michael:对父亲状态的担忧→受启发后的坚定→准备过程中的用心→(续写)送午餐盒时的紧张与送后的期待;Jack:与弟弟争执后的气愤→长时间的沉默低落→(续写)接到消息后的复杂与最终的释然;Sam:与哥哥争执后的不满→(续写)收到午餐盒后的触动;​ 7. 文章大意:​ 中文:Michael 的父亲 Jack 和叔叔 Sam 因已故祖父的旧工作台产生矛盾,已 12 个月互不说话,Jack 也变得沉默。Michael 受启发后,用零花钱买了 Sam 喜欢的食物装满旧午餐盒,打算以此修复两人关系。​ 英文:Michael's father Jack and uncle Sam had a conflict over their late grandfather's old workbench and hadn't spoken for 12 months, with Jack becoming silent. Inspired, Michael used his allowance to buy Sam's favorite foods, filled an old lunchbox, and planned to mend their relationship with it.​ 8. 句式: 比较状语从句(the silence...hung heavier than the winter fog...); 现在分词作状语(clinging to their small town;staring at the unlit fireplace...); 让步状语从句(Although his shirt was stained with jam...)​ 9. 主题(本文属于人与他人):亲情的可贵,小小的善意与行动能修复破碎的关系​ 情节构造​ 第一段提示句:When Michael finally stood on Uncle Sam’s porch, his heart pounded like a drum.​ 衔接句 1——— 对 “stood on Uncle Sam’s porch” 提问 “Michael 当时除了心跳快还有哪些表现?”:What other expressions did Michael have besides a fast heartbeat when standing on Uncle Sam’s porch?​ 过渡句推演:衔接 1→Michael took a deep breath, knocked on the door, and when Uncle Sam opened it, he nervously explained his purpose and handed over the lunchbox←衔接 2​ 衔接句 2——— 对 “interacting with Uncle Sam” 提问 “Uncle Sam 看到午餐盒和 Michael 后有什么反应?”:What was Uncle Sam's reaction when he saw the lunchbox and Michael?​ 第二段提示句:A few minutes after Aunt Clara’s phone call the front doorbell rang again.​ 衔接句 3——— 对 “doorbell rang again” 提问 “是谁按响了门铃?”:Who rang the doorbell again?​ 过渡句推演:衔接 3→It was Uncle Sam, and Jack went to open the door, the two looking at each other, and finally Jack invited Sam in, the silence broken←主题​ 主题:亲情能跨越隔阂,真诚的行动是修复关系的良药​ 段落构思​ 第一段:When Michael finally stood on Uncle Sam’s porch, his heart pounded like a drum.​ →①He hesitated for a second, then gently knocked on the door. ②Michael held out the lunchbox.③Sam ruffled Michael’s hair, “Come in, kid.”;​ 英文:When Michael finally stood on Uncle Sam’s porch, his heart pounded like a drum. He wiped his sweaty palms on his pants, hesitated for a second, then gently knocked on the door. When Uncle Sam opened the door, Michael held out the lunchbox, stammering, “Uncle Sam, I... I brought your favorite foods. Dad used to buy these for you.” Sam froze, staring at the lunchbox, then his eyes softened, and he ruffled Michael’s hair, “Come in, kid.”​ 第二段:A few minutes after Aunt Clara’s phone call the front doorbell rang again.​ →④Jack walked to the door. ⑤He opened it and saw Sam standing there.⑥Jack smiled faintly;​ 英文:A few minutes after Aunt Clara’s phone call the front doorbell rang again. Jack, who had been sitting silently, stood up slowly and walked to the door. He opened it and saw Sam standing there, holding the lunchbox. “Jack,” Sam said, voice a little rough, “Thanks for the food.” Jack smiled faintly, “Come on in. The fireplace is just lit.”​ 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 $$

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