Unit 8 Safe and sound写短文（单元同步写作讲义）英语译林版2024八年级上册

Unit 8 Safe and sound 同步写作课讲义-译林版2024八年级上册 ( ⭐话题解读⭐ ) Unit 8 的主题聚焦于 “人与自然：自然灾害与防范”。这一主题引导我们深入认识各种各样的自然灾害，比如地震、洪水、台风等。同时，了解这些灾害对人类社会和自然环境所造成的严重危害性也是至关重要的。认识到自然灾害防范的重要性，能够帮助我们在日常生活中增强自我保护意识，提前做好应对准备。 在具体的英语写作中，同学们应努力做到以下几点：正确运用与自然灾害相关的词汇，清晰描述灾害发生的过程和场景，准确表达自己的感受以及阐述有效的防范措施等。通过这些方面的训练，提升英语综合运用能力，同时也能更好地向他人传达关于自然灾害的知识和应对方法。 ( ⭐写作任务⭐ ) 本单元的写作任务是创作一篇有关自己听到的或者亲身经历过的紧急情况或自然灾害的短文。在写作过程中，需要生动地描述事件发生的经过，包括当时的环境、人们的反应等细节，让读者能够感同身受。同时，也要适当提及从这次经历中所获得的感悟或者学到的防范知识。 ( ⭐审题指导⭐ ) 本单元主要话题是自然灾害及其防范，与之相关的写作题目通常可以与个人经历、社会现象相结合。命题内容大多以描述某次具体的自然灾害为主，要求同学们根据给定的提示，详细记叙或描述灾害发生时的情况。写作时，务必注意短文写作的内容完整性，要涵盖题目所要求的各个要点；格式方面，遵循英语短文的常规格式即可；时态运用上，由于是讲述过去发生的事情，一般过去时和过去进行时会比较常用。 内容一般可从以下几方面着手： Where did the natural disaster happen?（自然灾害发生在哪里？） How did it start?（它是如何开始的？） What were you/people doing when it happened?（当它发生时，你 / 人们正在做什么？） How did you/people feel at that time?（那时你 / 人们感觉如何？） How did you/people deal with it?（你 / 人们是如何应对它的？） ◆ 写作步骤 步骤一：仔细审题 认真阅读写作题目和提示信息，明确写作要求，确定写作主题是关于哪种自然灾害，思考与之相关的细节信息。例如，如果题目是关于一次地震经历，就要回忆地震发生的地点、时间、当时自己所处的环境等。 步骤二：构思提纲 可以在草稿纸上简单列出文章的结构框架。开头部分如何引入话题，比如直接点明发生了什么自然灾害以及时间地点；主体部分分点描述灾害发生的过程、人们的反应等；结尾部分总结自己的感受或从中得到的教训。 步骤三：撰写初稿 根据提纲，开始写作。运用恰当的词汇和句型，注意语法和拼写错误，尽量将自己脑海中的想法清晰地表达出来。写完后，通读一遍，看看内容是否完整、逻辑是否通顺。 ( ⭐写作框架⭐ ) 开头引入： 可以采用开门见山的方式，直接点明发生了自然灾害。例如：Last month, a terrible flood hit our small town.（上个月，一场可怕的洪水袭击了我们的小镇。） 引入话题： 进一步描述一下灾害发生前的一些迹象或者正常的场景，形成对比。如：Before the flood came, our town was a peaceful and beautiful place. People were going about their daily lives as usual.（在洪水来临之前，我们的小镇是一个宁静而美丽的地方。人们像往常一样过着日常生活。） 主体部分： 描述灾害发生过程：使用过去进行时描述当时正在发生的事情。如：While I was doing my homework at home, I suddenly heard a loud noise. The water was rising quickly outside.（当我正在家里做作业时，突然听到一声巨响。外面的水正在迅速上涨。） 人们的反应：描述人们面对灾害时的行为和情绪。Many people were running around in panic, trying to find a safe place. Some were screaming for help.（许多人惊慌失措地四处奔跑，试图找到一个安全的地方。一些人在大声呼救。） 应对措施：讲述人们采取了哪些行动来应对灾害。The local government quickly organized rescue teams. Volunteers came from all over to help distribute food and water.（当地政府迅速组织了救援队伍。志愿者从各地赶来帮忙分发食物和水。） 表达情感： 表达自己在经历或听闻灾害后的感受。I was really scared during the flood, but I was also deeply moved by the help and support from others.（在洪水期间我真的很害怕，但我也被他人的帮助和支持深深感动。） 结尾部分： 总结这次经历带来的教训或者对未来的期望。This flood taught us a valuable lesson. We should always be prepared for natural disasters and work together to protect our homes.（这次洪水给我们上了宝贵的一课。我们应该时刻为自然灾害做好准备，共同努力保护我们的家园。） ( ⭐素材宝库⭐ ) ( 词汇积累 ) earthquake n. 地震 flood n. 洪水；v. 淹没 typhoon n. 台风 storm n. 暴风雨 tornado n. 龙卷风 drought n. 干旱 volcano eruption火山爆发 landslide n. 山体滑坡 tsunami n. 海啸 damage v. & n. 损害；毁坏 destroy v. 摧毁；毁灭 homeless adj. 无家可归的 rescue v. & n. 营救；救援 shelter n. 避难所；庇护 support v. & n. 支持 volunteer n. 志愿者；v. 自愿做 calm adj. 平静的；v. 使平静 shake v. 摇晃；震动 rise v. 上升；上涨 fall v. 落下；掉落 ( 句型积累 ) 1. 基础句型 （1）A terrible earthquake hit the city. 一场可怕的地震袭击了这座城市。 （2）The flood made many people homeless. 洪水使许多人无家可归。 （3）When the storm came, I was at home. 当暴风雨来临时，我正在家里。 （4）People were running out of the building quickly. 人们正迅速地跑出大楼。 （5）We should stay calm in the face of danger. 面对危险我们应该保持冷静。 （6）The typhoon caused a lot of damage. 台风造成了很大的破坏。 （7）Many houses were destroyed in the earthquake. 许多房屋在地震中被摧毁。 （8）After the disaster, people started to rebuild their homes. 灾难过后，人们开始重建家园。 （9）I was so scared that I cried. 我害怕得哭了起来。 （10）The government provided food and shelter for the victims. 政府为受害者提供了食物和避难所。 2. 升级句型 （1）It was a terrifying earthquake that struck the area, causing great panic among the people. 那是一场可怕的地震袭击了这个地区，在人们中引起了极大的恐慌。 （2）The flood, which came suddenly, brought huge losses to the local people. 突然来袭的洪水给当地人民带来了巨大的损失。 （3）While I was sleeping soundly, the ground began to shake violently. 当我正在熟睡时，地面开始剧烈摇晃。 （4）People were in a state of panic, rushing in all directions to escape the danger. 人们处于恐慌状态，四处奔逃以躲避危险。 （5）Not only did the typhoon destroy many buildings, but it also damaged a large number of crops. 台风不仅摧毁了许多建筑物，还毁坏了大量的庄稼。 （6）Despite the great danger, the rescue workers bravely carried out their missions. 尽管危险很大，救援人员还是勇敢地执行他们的任务。 （7）The earthquake left the whole city in ruins, making it almost unrecognizable. 地震使整个城市变成了一片废墟，几乎认不出来了。 （8）With the help of the volunteers, the victims gradually recovered from the shock of the disaster. 在志愿者的帮助下，受害者逐渐从灾难的震惊中恢复过来。 （9）The heavy rain, lasting for several days, finally led to the flood. 持续了几天的大雨最终引发了洪水。 （10）We must take immediate measures to prevent natural disasters from causing more harm. 我们必须立即采取措施，防止自然灾害造成更多的伤害。 3. 高分句型 （1）It was not until the earthquake happened that people realized the importance of disaster prevention. 直到地震发生，人们才意识到防灾的重要性。 （2）The typhoon, with its strong winds and heavy rain, was like a fierce monster, bringing destruction wherever it went. 台风带着狂风暴雨，就像一个凶猛的怪物，所到之处带来破坏。 （3）Had it not been for the timely rescue of the government and the efforts of the volunteers, the consequences of the flood would have been more serious. 要不是政府的及时救援和志愿者的努力，洪水的后果会更加严重。 （4）What impressed me most during the disaster was the unity and courage of the people. 在灾难期间给我印象最深的是人们的团结和勇气。 （5）The earthquake, which occurred without any warning, left thousands of people homeless and caused billions of dollars in damage. 这场毫无预兆发生的地震使成千上万的人无家可归，造成了数十亿美元的损失。 （6）Not only did the local people help each other in the face of the disaster, but they also actively participated in the post - disaster reconstruction work. 当地人民不仅在灾难面前互相帮助，还积极参与灾后重建工作。 （7）It is essential that we raise public awareness of natural disasters and teach people how to protect themselves in case of an emergency. 我们必须提高公众对自然灾害的认识，并教人们在紧急情况下如何保护自己。 （8）The flood, which was the worst in decades, tested the resilience and determination of the whole community. 这场几十年来最严重的洪水考验了整个社区的韧性和决心。 （9）Despite the fact that the tornado caused great destruction, the people in the affected area did not lose hope and worked hard to rebuild their lives. 尽管龙卷风造成了巨大的破坏，但受灾地区的人们没有失去希望，努力重建他们的生活。 （10）What we have learned from this natural disaster is that we should respect nature and take effective measures to coexist with it harmoniously. 我们从这次自然灾害中学到的是，我们应该尊重自然，并采取有效措施与它和谐共处。 ( 谚语名句 ) Nature is kind of a loving mother, but also a butcher in cold blood.（自然不仅是位慈爱的母亲，还是个冷血的屠夫。） All of the disaster, but because of love.（所有的灾难，不过是因为眷恋。） Man is a part of nature, and nature is a part of man.（人是自然的一部分，自然也是人的一部分。） He who goes against the direction of nature will meet a lot of trouble.（违背自然方向的人会遇到很多麻烦。） When nature is out of balance, disasters are not far behind.（当自然失衡时，灾难就不远了。） Respect nature, and nature will respect you.（尊重自然，自然也会尊重你。） In the face of natural disasters, unity is strength.（面对自然灾害，团结就是力量。） Prevention is better than cure when it comes to natural disasters.（对于自然灾害，预防胜于补救。） The earth is our home, and we should protect it from natural disasters.（地球是我们的家园，我们应该保护它免受自然灾害。） Natural disasters can destroy our homes, but they can never destroy our spirit.（自然灾害可以摧毁我们的家园，但永远无法摧毁我们的精神。） We are all in the same boat when facing natural disasters.（面对自然灾害时，我们都在同一条船上。） The power of nature is endless, and we should always be in awe of it.（自然的力量是无穷的，我们应该始终敬畏它。） Prepare for the worst, hope for the best in the face of natural disasters.（面对自然灾害，做最坏的打算，抱最好的希望。） Natural disasters are a test of our humanity and resilience.（自然灾害是对我们人性和韧性的考验。） If we don't take care of nature, nature won't take care of us.（如果我们不照顾自然，自然也不会照顾我们。） The only way to reduce the impact of natural disasters is to work together as a global community.（减少自然灾害影响的唯一途径是全球社会共同努力。） Nature's anger can be fierce, but human's love can be stronger.（自然的愤怒可能很猛烈，但人类的爱可以更强大。） Learning from past natural disasters can help us better prepare for the future.（从过去的自然灾害中学习可以帮助我们更好地为未来做准备。） Protecting the environment is the best way to prevent natural disasters.（保护环境是预防自然灾害的最佳方式。） In the battle against natural disasters, every little effort counts.（在与自然灾害的斗争中，每一点努力都很重要。） ( 写作模板 ) A Natural Disaster I Experienced Last + 时间，a + 灾害类型（如 terrible earthquake/heavy flood/strong typhoon 等） hit + 地点. Before it happened, everything was as usual. People were doing their daily activities, like I was + 当时自己正在做的事（用过去进行时）. Suddenly, there was a + 描述声音或现象（如 loud noise/the ground started shaking 等）. The disaster began. + 描述灾害发生过程中周围的情况（如 The water was rising quickly/Pieces of glass and bricks were falling down 等）. People around me were in panic. Some were + 人们的反应 1（如 running out of the buildings screaming）, while others were + 人们的反应 2（如 trying to find their family members）. I was very + 自己的感受（如 scared/nervous）, but I tried to stay calm. I + 自己采取的应对措施（如 followed the crowd to a safe place/tried to help others 等）. After the disaster, the place was in a mess. Many houses were + 房屋的受损情况（如 destroyed/damaged）. But the local government and volunteers came quickly. They provided + 提供的帮助（如 food and shelter/medical aid 等）. This experience taught me a lot. I realized that we should always be prepared for natural disasters. Also, the unity and help among people are very important in difficult times. I hope we can all work together to protect our environment and reduce the occurrence of natural disasters. ( ⭐参考范文⭐ ) （范文一） A Terrible Earthquake Last year, a strong earthquake hit my hometown. Before the earthquake, I was studying in my room. Suddenly, I felt the ground shaking violently. I heard a loud noise, like bombs exploding. I was so scared that my heart was beating fast. I quickly ran out of the room with my family. Outside, people were running everywhere. The buildings were shaking, and some pieces of glass and bricks were falling down. After the earthquake, the whole town was in ruins. Many houses were destroyed. But the rescue teams came quickly. They worked hard to find survivors. The local people also helped each other. This earthquake taught me that we should stay calm in the face of danger. And the unity of people can help us get through difficult times. （范文二） The Flood Last summer, a heavy flood hit our village. At that time, I was playing with my friends outside. We saw the river water rising rapidly. Soon, the water flooded into the low - lying areas of the village. People were very worried. Some of them were trying to move their things to higher places. My parents and I also started to carry important things to the second floor of our house. The flood brought a lot of trouble. Many crops were destroyed, and some houses were washed away. But after the flood, the government provided us with food and clean water. Volunteers came to help clean up the mud and debris. From this flood, I learned that we need to be more aware of natural disasters and be prepared for them. （范文三） A Typhoon Experience A few months ago, a powerful typhoon attacked our city. When the typhoon came, I was at home with my family. The wind was blowing strongly outside, and the rain was beating heavily against the windows. We could hear the loud howling of the wind. We closed all the windows and doors tightly. My father turned on the radio to get the latest news about the typhoon. During the typhoon, a big tree in front of our house was blown down. It blocked the road. Some neighbors and my father tried to move it away, but it was too heavy. We had to wait for the workers to come. After the typhoon, the city looked messy. Many trees were uprooted, and some signs were broken. But people worked together to clean up. I helped pick up the rubbish. This typhoon made me know that we should help each other when facing difficulties. And we should also protect the environment to reduce the damage caused by typhoons. ( ⭐写作拓展⭐ ) ( 考情分析 ) 近三年考情示例 年份 卷区 话题 命题形式 2025年 山东聊城·三模 关于地震来临时我们该怎么做的建议 提纲类 2024年 贵州毕节·二模 关于如何应对与预防火灾的看法 提纲类 ( 变式提升训练 ) 1．近年来，我们身边发生了各种灾害。假如你是一名中学生，正参加英语写作大赛，请你根据以下内容写一篇英语短文，介绍在不同的灾害中保护自己的方法，同时提出预防措施。 Types of disasters: floods, earthquakes, fires... → Ways to protect ourselves: get to high ground; use a wet towel hide under... → Actions to prevent future disasters: plant more trees; protect wild animals... 注意事项： 1. 要点齐全，语句通顺，意思连贯，符合题意； 2. 词数 80 左右； 3. 文中不得使用真实的个人姓名或学校名称。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．上周六，附近的山里发生了火灾。请你帮学校校刊写一篇不少于100 词的文章，介绍该事件的情况，并就中学生需如何应对火灾提出建议。 要点： 1. 事件发生的时间和地点：上周六，附近的山里； 2. 事件发生的起因：雷电天气引燃了枯木，从而引发了森林火灾； 3. 事件发生的经过：19辆消防车、10支救援队伍赶赴现场扑灭大火，没有人员伤亡； 4. 在日常生活中，我们如果遇到火灾，该如何应对? （给出至少两点建议） 参考词汇：消防车 fire truck    救援队伍rescue team ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．2025年1月7日西藏日喀则市定日县发生6. 8级地震（earthquake）。一些年轻的志愿者冒着零下十几度的寒冷前往地震灾区进行救援。请你根据以下图片提示，写一篇英语短文，介绍本次志愿者活动。 set up tents        search for the survivors      give away necessary things      provide meals and water 注意：（1）短文须包含以上提示信息，可适当发挥； （2）短文中不得出现考生真实姓名和学校名称； （3）词数70左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 参考词汇：disaster灾难；search 搜查；survivor幸存者 A big earthquake happened on January 7, 2025, in Dingri, Xizang. In the face of the disaster, volunteers from all over the country went to Xizang to lend a helping hand. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4． 根据下面提示，以“What to do in an earthquake”为题用英语写一篇文章。众所周知，近来地震频发。虽然现在我们可以采取一些措施来警告人们关于地震的事情，但是我觉得学生应该了解更多关于在地震中该怎么做的事情。下面就是我的一些建议： 如果你在室内： 1.不要跳下高楼。躲在桌下，远离窗户和大家具。 2.当地面停止晃动时，快速离开建筑物，但不要用电梯。 如果你在室外： 1.不要站在路灯和电线下面。 2.在山里，小心落石；在沙滩上，快速转移到高地。 总之，遵循以上建议，并且保持镇静。你会安全而且你还可以帮助挽救他人。 要求： 1.要点齐全，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文流畅； 3.不少于80词 (开头已给出，不计入总词数) What to do in an earthquake As we all know, earthquakes have happened several times recently. Although we can do something to warn people about them, __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．假设你是李辉，刚刚在英文杂志上读到一篇关于自然灾害的文章，你非常想要跟你的英国朋友David分享。请你给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括： （1）你最害怕的一种自然灾害； （2）简单介绍并说明原因； （3）期待回复。 注意： （1）词数80—100。开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数； （2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； （3）短文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。 Dear David, Long time no see. David! Recently I have read an article about natural disasters. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hui 6．假如你是李华，在报纸上看到了有关广州遭受台风袭击的新闻报道后，为学校宣传栏“英语天地”写一封倡议信。 内容包括： 1. 倡议的原因： 2. 倡议的内容（筹款、指衣物、充当志愿者等）； 3. 发出倡议。 注意： 1．词数80-100，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2．短文需包括所给内容信息，可以适当增加维节，以使行文连贯。 3．在文中不要出现考生和相关人物的真实姓名和校名。 Dear fellow students, Guangzhou was hit by a typhoon on 14 August. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you for your attention and care. Yours, Li Hua 7．Daming所在的城市昨天晚上发生了一场暴风雪。很幸运，暴风雪时间并不长，他们全家安然无恙。假如你是Daming请描述一下暴风雪发生时家里人的活动情景。 写作要点： 1.写明暴风雪的时间：yesterday evening 2.暴风雪时全家人都在做什么：My mother was... 3.暴风雪时的心情：scared... 4.暴风雪的后果：all safe 提示词：luckily...  Remember to... 写作要求： 1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名； 2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯； 3. 字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。80词左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 My name is Daming. In my city, there was ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．雪可以给我们带来快乐，但同时我们也应该懂得如何在暴雪天气保护自己。请你结合下面图示信息，以“How to protect ourselves during the heavy snow”为题，根据写作要求，用英语写一篇短文，向校刊的英语专栏投稿。 写作要求：1.文中须包含上图提示的所有信息，可适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 3.词数 100 左右。 参考词汇：cleats 防滑鞋 How to protect ourselves during the heavy snow _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．期盼已久的寒假即将到来，为了能够度过一个愉快而又安全的假期，阳光中学英文网站将举行“防灾减灾，守护安全”短视频创作比赛。假如你是阳光中学的李华，你打算参加本次活动。请根据以下流程图为你的短视频写一篇英文旁白。 注意事项: （1）文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息； （2）文章须包含所有要点，可适当发挥，是短文连贯通顺； （3）词数在90 词左右（开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数）。 Hi, everyone!_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all for my video. 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( 7 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ Unit 8 Safe and sound 同步写作课讲义-译林版2024八年级上册 ( ⭐话题解读⭐ ) Unit 8 的主题聚焦于 “人与自然：自然灾害与防范”。这一主题引导我们深入认识各种各样的自然灾害，比如地震、洪水、台风等。同时，了解这些灾害对人类社会和自然环境所造成的严重危害性也是至关重要的。认识到自然灾害防范的重要性，能够帮助我们在日常生活中增强自我保护意识，提前做好应对准备。 在具体的英语写作中，同学们应努力做到以下几点：正确运用与自然灾害相关的词汇，清晰描述灾害发生的过程和场景，准确表达自己的感受以及阐述有效的防范措施等。通过这些方面的训练，提升英语综合运用能力，同时也能更好地向他人传达关于自然灾害的知识和应对方法。 ( ⭐写作任务⭐ ) 本单元的写作任务是创作一篇有关自己听到的或者亲身经历过的紧急情况或自然灾害的短文。在写作过程中，需要生动地描述事件发生的经过，包括当时的环境、人们的反应等细节，让读者能够感同身受。同时，也要适当提及从这次经历中所获得的感悟或者学到的防范知识。 ( ⭐审题指导⭐ ) 本单元主要话题是自然灾害及其防范，与之相关的写作题目通常可以与个人经历、社会现象相结合。命题内容大多以描述某次具体的自然灾害为主，要求同学们根据给定的提示，详细记叙或描述灾害发生时的情况。写作时，务必注意短文写作的内容完整性，要涵盖题目所要求的各个要点；格式方面，遵循英语短文的常规格式即可；时态运用上，由于是讲述过去发生的事情，一般过去时和过去进行时会比较常用。 内容一般可从以下几方面着手： Where did the natural disaster happen?（自然灾害发生在哪里？） How did it start?（它是如何开始的？） What were you/people doing when it happened?（当它发生时，你 / 人们正在做什么？） How did you/people feel at that time?（那时你 / 人们感觉如何？） How did you/people deal with it?（你 / 人们是如何应对它的？） ◆ 写作步骤 步骤一：仔细审题 认真阅读写作题目和提示信息，明确写作要求，确定写作主题是关于哪种自然灾害，思考与之相关的细节信息。例如，如果题目是关于一次地震经历，就要回忆地震发生的地点、时间、当时自己所处的环境等。 步骤二：构思提纲 可以在草稿纸上简单列出文章的结构框架。开头部分如何引入话题，比如直接点明发生了什么自然灾害以及时间地点；主体部分分点描述灾害发生的过程、人们的反应等；结尾部分总结自己的感受或从中得到的教训。 步骤三：撰写初稿 根据提纲，开始写作。运用恰当的词汇和句型，注意语法和拼写错误，尽量将自己脑海中的想法清晰地表达出来。写完后，通读一遍，看看内容是否完整、逻辑是否通顺。 ( ⭐写作框架⭐ ) 开头引入： 可以采用开门见山的方式，直接点明发生了自然灾害。例如：Last month, a terrible flood hit our small town.（上个月，一场可怕的洪水袭击了我们的小镇。） 引入话题： 进一步描述一下灾害发生前的一些迹象或者正常的场景，形成对比。如：Before the flood came, our town was a peaceful and beautiful place. People were going about their daily lives as usual.（在洪水来临之前，我们的小镇是一个宁静而美丽的地方。人们像往常一样过着日常生活。） 主体部分： 描述灾害发生过程：使用过去进行时描述当时正在发生的事情。如：While I was doing my homework at home, I suddenly heard a loud noise. The water was rising quickly outside.（当我正在家里做作业时，突然听到一声巨响。外面的水正在迅速上涨。） 人们的反应：描述人们面对灾害时的行为和情绪。Many people were running around in panic, trying to find a safe place. Some were screaming for help.（许多人惊慌失措地四处奔跑，试图找到一个安全的地方。一些人在大声呼救。） 应对措施：讲述人们采取了哪些行动来应对灾害。The local government quickly organized rescue teams. Volunteers came from all over to help distribute food and water.（当地政府迅速组织了救援队伍。志愿者从各地赶来帮忙分发食物和水。） 表达情感： 表达自己在经历或听闻灾害后的感受。I was really scared during the flood, but I was also deeply moved by the help and support from others.（在洪水期间我真的很害怕，但我也被他人的帮助和支持深深感动。） 结尾部分： 总结这次经历带来的教训或者对未来的期望。This flood taught us a valuable lesson. We should always be prepared for natural disasters and work together to protect our homes.（这次洪水给我们上了宝贵的一课。我们应该时刻为自然灾害做好准备，共同努力保护我们的家园。） ( ⭐素材宝库⭐ ) ( 词汇积累 ) earthquake n. 地震 flood n. 洪水；v. 淹没 typhoon n. 台风 storm n. 暴风雨 tornado n. 龙卷风 drought n. 干旱 volcano eruption火山爆发 landslide n. 山体滑坡 tsunami n. 海啸 damage v. & n. 损害；毁坏 destroy v. 摧毁；毁灭 homeless adj. 无家可归的 rescue v. & n. 营救；救援 shelter n. 避难所；庇护 support v. & n. 支持 volunteer n. 志愿者；v. 自愿做 calm adj. 平静的；v. 使平静 shake v. 摇晃；震动 rise v. 上升；上涨 fall v. 落下；掉落 ( 句型积累 ) 1. 基础句型 （1）A terrible earthquake hit the city. 一场可怕的地震袭击了这座城市。 （2）The flood made many people homeless. 洪水使许多人无家可归。 （3）When the storm came, I was at home. 当暴风雨来临时，我正在家里。 （4）People were running out of the building quickly. 人们正迅速地跑出大楼。 （5）We should stay calm in the face of danger. 面对危险我们应该保持冷静。 （6）The typhoon caused a lot of damage. 台风造成了很大的破坏。 （7）Many houses were destroyed in the earthquake. 许多房屋在地震中被摧毁。 （8）After the disaster, people started to rebuild their homes. 灾难过后，人们开始重建家园。 （9）I was so scared that I cried. 我害怕得哭了起来。 （10）The government provided food and shelter for the victims. 政府为受害者提供了食物和避难所。 2. 升级句型 （1）It was a terrifying earthquake that struck the area, causing great panic among the people. 那是一场可怕的地震袭击了这个地区，在人们中引起了极大的恐慌。 （2）The flood, which came suddenly, brought huge losses to the local people. 突然来袭的洪水给当地人民带来了巨大的损失。 （3）While I was sleeping soundly, the ground began to shake violently. 当我正在熟睡时，地面开始剧烈摇晃。 （4）People were in a state of panic, rushing in all directions to escape the danger. 人们处于恐慌状态，四处奔逃以躲避危险。 （5）Not only did the typhoon destroy many buildings, but it also damaged a large number of crops. 台风不仅摧毁了许多建筑物，还毁坏了大量的庄稼。 （6）Despite the great danger, the rescue workers bravely carried out their missions. 尽管危险很大，救援人员还是勇敢地执行他们的任务。 （7）The earthquake left the whole city in ruins, making it almost unrecognizable. 地震使整个城市变成了一片废墟，几乎认不出来了。 （8）With the help of the volunteers, the victims gradually recovered from the shock of the disaster. 在志愿者的帮助下，受害者逐渐从灾难的震惊中恢复过来。 （9）The heavy rain, lasting for several days, finally led to the flood. 持续了几天的大雨最终引发了洪水。 （10）We must take immediate measures to prevent natural disasters from causing more harm. 我们必须立即采取措施，防止自然灾害造成更多的伤害。 3. 高分句型 （1）It was not until the earthquake happened that people realized the importance of disaster prevention. 直到地震发生，人们才意识到防灾的重要性。 （2）The typhoon, with its strong winds and heavy rain, was like a fierce monster, bringing destruction wherever it went. 台风带着狂风暴雨，就像一个凶猛的怪物，所到之处带来破坏。 （3）Had it not been for the timely rescue of the government and the efforts of the volunteers, the consequences of the flood would have been more serious. 要不是政府的及时救援和志愿者的努力，洪水的后果会更加严重。 （4）What impressed me most during the disaster was the unity and courage of the people. 在灾难期间给我印象最深的是人们的团结和勇气。 （5）The earthquake, which occurred without any warning, left thousands of people homeless and caused billions of dollars in damage. 这场毫无预兆发生的地震使成千上万的人无家可归，造成了数十亿美元的损失。 （6）Not only did the local people help each other in the face of the disaster, but they also actively participated in the post - disaster reconstruction work. 当地人民不仅在灾难面前互相帮助，还积极参与灾后重建工作。 （7）It is essential that we raise public awareness of natural disasters and teach people how to protect themselves in case of an emergency. 我们必须提高公众对自然灾害的认识，并教人们在紧急情况下如何保护自己。 （8）The flood, which was the worst in decades, tested the resilience and determination of the whole community. 这场几十年来最严重的洪水考验了整个社区的韧性和决心。 （9）Despite the fact that the tornado caused great destruction, the people in the affected area did not lose hope and worked hard to rebuild their lives. 尽管龙卷风造成了巨大的破坏，但受灾地区的人们没有失去希望，努力重建他们的生活。 （10）What we have learned from this natural disaster is that we should respect nature and take effective measures to coexist with it harmoniously. 我们从这次自然灾害中学到的是，我们应该尊重自然，并采取有效措施与它和谐共处。 ( 谚语名句 ) Nature is kind of a loving mother, but also a butcher in cold blood.（自然不仅是位慈爱的母亲，还是个冷血的屠夫。） All of the disaster, but because of love.（所有的灾难，不过是因为眷恋。） Man is a part of nature, and nature is a part of man.（人是自然的一部分，自然也是人的一部分。） He who goes against the direction of nature will meet a lot of trouble.（违背自然方向的人会遇到很多麻烦。） When nature is out of balance, disasters are not far behind.（当自然失衡时，灾难就不远了。） Respect nature, and nature will respect you.（尊重自然，自然也会尊重你。） In the face of natural disasters, unity is strength.（面对自然灾害，团结就是力量。） Prevention is better than cure when it comes to natural disasters.（对于自然灾害，预防胜于补救。） The earth is our home, and we should protect it from natural disasters.（地球是我们的家园，我们应该保护它免受自然灾害。） Natural disasters can destroy our homes, but they can never destroy our spirit.（自然灾害可以摧毁我们的家园，但永远无法摧毁我们的精神。） We are all in the same boat when facing natural disasters.（面对自然灾害时，我们都在同一条船上。） The power of nature is endless, and we should always be in awe of it.（自然的力量是无穷的，我们应该始终敬畏它。） Prepare for the worst, hope for the best in the face of natural disasters.（面对自然灾害，做最坏的打算，抱最好的希望。） Natural disasters are a test of our humanity and resilience.（自然灾害是对我们人性和韧性的考验。） If we don't take care of nature, nature won't take care of us.（如果我们不照顾自然，自然也不会照顾我们。） The only way to reduce the impact of natural disasters is to work together as a global community.（减少自然灾害影响的唯一途径是全球社会共同努力。） Nature's anger can be fierce, but human's love can be stronger.（自然的愤怒可能很猛烈，但人类的爱可以更强大。） Learning from past natural disasters can help us better prepare for the future.（从过去的自然灾害中学习可以帮助我们更好地为未来做准备。） Protecting the environment is the best way to prevent natural disasters.（保护环境是预防自然灾害的最佳方式。） In the battle against natural disasters, every little effort counts.（在与自然灾害的斗争中，每一点努力都很重要。） ( 写作模板 ) A Natural Disaster I Experienced Last + 时间，a + 灾害类型（如 terrible earthquake/heavy flood/strong typhoon 等） hit + 地点. Before it happened, everything was as usual. People were doing their daily activities, like I was + 当时自己正在做的事（用过去进行时）. Suddenly, there was a + 描述声音或现象（如 loud noise/the ground started shaking 等）. The disaster began. + 描述灾害发生过程中周围的情况（如 The water was rising quickly/Pieces of glass and bricks were falling down 等）. People around me were in panic. Some were + 人们的反应 1（如 running out of the buildings screaming）, while others were + 人们的反应 2（如 trying to find their family members）. I was very + 自己的感受（如 scared/nervous）, but I tried to stay calm. I + 自己采取的应对措施（如 followed the crowd to a safe place/tried to help others 等）. After the disaster, the place was in a mess. Many houses were + 房屋的受损情况（如 destroyed/damaged）. But the local government and volunteers came quickly. They provided + 提供的帮助（如 food and shelter/medical aid 等）. This experience taught me a lot. I realized that we should always be prepared for natural disasters. Also, the unity and help among people are very important in difficult times. I hope we can all work together to protect our environment and reduce the occurrence of natural disasters. ( ⭐参考范文⭐ ) （范文一） A Terrible Earthquake Last year, a strong earthquake hit my hometown. Before the earthquake, I was studying in my room. Suddenly, I felt the ground shaking violently. I heard a loud noise, like bombs exploding. I was so scared that my heart was beating fast. I quickly ran out of the room with my family. Outside, people were running everywhere. The buildings were shaking, and some pieces of glass and bricks were falling down. After the earthquake, the whole town was in ruins. Many houses were destroyed. But the rescue teams came quickly. They worked hard to find survivors. The local people also helped each other. This earthquake taught me that we should stay calm in the face of danger. And the unity of people can help us get through difficult times. （范文二） The Flood Last summer, a heavy flood hit our village. At that time, I was playing with my friends outside. We saw the river water rising rapidly. Soon, the water flooded into the low - lying areas of the village. People were very worried. Some of them were trying to move their things to higher places. My parents and I also started to carry important things to the second floor of our house. The flood brought a lot of trouble. Many crops were destroyed, and some houses were washed away. But after the flood, the government provided us with food and clean water. Volunteers came to help clean up the mud and debris. From this flood, I learned that we need to be more aware of natural disasters and be prepared for them. （范文三） A Typhoon Experience A few months ago, a powerful typhoon attacked our city. When the typhoon came, I was at home with my family. The wind was blowing strongly outside, and the rain was beating heavily against the windows. We could hear the loud howling of the wind. We closed all the windows and doors tightly. My father turned on the radio to get the latest news about the typhoon. During the typhoon, a big tree in front of our house was blown down. It blocked the road. Some neighbors and my father tried to move it away, but it was too heavy. We had to wait for the workers to come. After the typhoon, the city looked messy. Many trees were uprooted, and some signs were broken. But people worked together to clean up. I helped pick up the rubbish. This typhoon made me know that we should help each other when facing difficulties. And we should also protect the environment to reduce the damage caused by typhoons. ( ⭐写作拓展⭐ ) ( 考情分析 ) 近三年考情示例 年份 卷区 话题 命题形式 2025年 山东聊城·三模 关于地震来临时我们该怎么做的建议 提纲类 2024年 贵州毕节·二模 关于如何应对与预防火灾的看法 提纲类 ( 变式提升训练 ) 1．近年来，我们身边发生了各种灾害。假如你是一名中学生，正参加英语写作大赛，请你根据以下内容写一篇英语短文，介绍在不同的灾害中保护自己的方法，同时提出预防措施。 Types of disasters: floods, earthquakes, fires... → Ways to protect ourselves: get to high ground; use a wet towel hide under... → Actions to prevent future disasters: plant more trees; protect wild animals... 注意事项： 1. 要点齐全，语句通顺，意思连贯，符合题意； 2. 词数 80 左右； 3. 文中不得使用真实的个人姓名或学校名称。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．上周六，附近的山里发生了火灾。请你帮学校校刊写一篇不少于100 词的文章，介绍该事件的情况，并就中学生需如何应对火灾提出建议。 要点： 1. 事件发生的时间和地点：上周六，附近的山里； 2. 事件发生的起因：雷电天气引燃了枯木，从而引发了森林火灾； 3. 事件发生的经过：19辆消防车、10支救援队伍赶赴现场扑灭大火，没有人员伤亡； 4. 在日常生活中，我们如果遇到火灾，该如何应对? （给出至少两点建议） 参考词汇：消防车 fire truck    救援队伍rescue team ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．2025年1月7日西藏日喀则市定日县发生6. 8级地震（earthquake）。一些年轻的志愿者冒着零下十几度的寒冷前往地震灾区进行救援。请你根据以下图片提示，写一篇英语短文，介绍本次志愿者活动。 set up tents        search for the survivors      give away necessary things      provide meals and water 注意：（1）短文须包含以上提示信息，可适当发挥； （2）短文中不得出现考生真实姓名和学校名称； （3）词数70左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 参考词汇：disaster灾难；search 搜查；survivor幸存者 A big earthquake happened on January 7, 2025, in Dingri, Xizang. In the face of the disaster, volunteers from all over the country went to Xizang to lend a helping hand. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4． 根据下面提示，以“What to do in an earthquake”为题用英语写一篇文章。众所周知，近来地震频发。虽然现在我们可以采取一些措施来警告人们关于地震的事情，但是我觉得学生应该了解更多关于在地震中该怎么做的事情。下面就是我的一些建议： 如果你在室内： 1.不要跳下高楼。躲在桌下，远离窗户和大家具。 2.当地面停止晃动时，快速离开建筑物，但不要用电梯。 如果你在室外： 1.不要站在路灯和电线下面。 2.在山里，小心落石；在沙滩上，快速转移到高地。 总之，遵循以上建议，并且保持镇静。你会安全而且你还可以帮助挽救他人。 要求： 1.要点齐全，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文流畅； 3.不少于80词 (开头已给出，不计入总词数) What to do in an earthquake As we all know, earthquakes have happened several times recently. Although we can do something to warn people about them, __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．假设你是李辉，刚刚在英文杂志上读到一篇关于自然灾害的文章，你非常想要跟你的英国朋友David分享。请你给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括： （1）你最害怕的一种自然灾害； （2）简单介绍并说明原因； （3）期待回复。 注意： （1）词数80—100。开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数； （2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； （3）短文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。 Dear David, Long time no see. David! Recently I have read an article about natural disasters. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hui 6．假如你是李华，在报纸上看到了有关广州遭受台风袭击的新闻报道后，为学校宣传栏“英语天地”写一封倡议信。 内容包括： 1. 倡议的原因： 2. 倡议的内容（筹款、指衣物、充当志愿者等）； 3. 发出倡议。 注意： 1．词数80-100，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2．短文需包括所给内容信息，可以适当增加维节，以使行文连贯。 3．在文中不要出现考生和相关人物的真实姓名和校名。 Dear fellow students, Guangzhou was hit by a typhoon on 14 August. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you for your attention and care. Yours, Li Hua 7．Daming所在的城市昨天晚上发生了一场暴风雪。很幸运，暴风雪时间并不长，他们全家安然无恙。假如你是Daming请描述一下暴风雪发生时家里人的活动情景。 写作要点： 1.写明暴风雪的时间：yesterday evening 2.暴风雪时全家人都在做什么：My mother was... 3.暴风雪时的心情：scared... 4.暴风雪的后果：all safe 提示词：luckily...  Remember to... 写作要求： 1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名； 2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯； 3. 字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。80词左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 My name is Daming. In my city, there was ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．雪可以给我们带来快乐，但同时我们也应该懂得如何在暴雪天气保护自己。请你结合下面图示信息，以“How to protect ourselves during the heavy snow”为题，根据写作要求，用英语写一篇短文，向校刊的英语专栏投稿。 写作要求：1.文中须包含上图提示的所有信息，可适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 3.词数 100 左右。 参考词汇：cleats 防滑鞋 How to protect ourselves during the heavy snow _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．期盼已久的寒假即将到来，为了能够度过一个愉快而又安全的假期，阳光中学英文网站将举行“防灾减灾，守护安全”短视频创作比赛。假如你是阳光中学的李华，你打算参加本次活动。请根据以下流程图为你的短视频写一篇英文旁白。 注意事项: （1）文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息； （2）文章须包含所有要点，可适当发挥，是短文连贯通顺； （3）词数在90 词左右（开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数）。 Hi, everyone!_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all for my video. Thanks for your watching. 参考答案 1． In recent years, there have been many disasters, such as floods, earthquakes, fires, sandstorms and so on. When there is a flood, we should get to high ground and make sure not to walk through the flood water. If an earthquake happens, we can hide under a strong desk and stay away from a window. If a fire happens, we can use a wet towel to cover our mouth and nose and stay low to the ground. Of course, we should take action to prevent future disasters. We can plant more trees and protect wild animals. We can also share some related information with others. Hope we can have a better world in the future. 【写作解析】 【总体分析】 ①题材：材料作文（灾害应对与预防） ②时态：一般现在时为主**（描述常规应对措施） + 祈使句**（给出建议）    ③提示：需涵盖灾害类型、**自救方法**、**预防措施**三部分，注意80词限制。  ---  #### 【写作步骤】 1. 开头引入：简要说明灾害频发背景和种类。    2. 分述不同灾害的应对方法（洪水→高地；地震→遮挡；火灾→湿毛巾） 3. 提出预防措施（植树/保护动物等环保行为）   【亮点词汇】    ① get to high ground 转移到高地 ② protect wildlife 保护野生动物） 【高分句型】    ① If an earthquake happens, we can hide under a strong desk and stay away from a window.（if条件状语从句） ② Of course, we should take action to prevent future disasters.（不定式作目的状语） 2． Last Saturday, a forest fire hit a nearby mountain. It’s said that lightning struck some dead wood and caused the fire. Nineteen fire trucks and ten rescue teams rushed to put out the fire. Luckily, no one was hurt in the fire. If a fire happens at your home, what should you do? First, you should call 119 for help at once. Second, it’s important to turn off the gas and lights. Third, be careful of the smoke. Cover your mouth and nose with a wet cloth. Finally, get away from the house as soon as possible. If you follow the advice above, you will protect yourself against the fire. 【写作解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，应注意要点齐全，可适当补充。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍事件发生的时间、地点、起因和经过； 第二步，提出应对火灾的建议； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①put out扑灭 ②at once立刻 ③get away from远离 [高分句型] ①Second, it’s important to turn off the gas and lights.（it作形式主语） ②If you follow the advice above, you will protect yourself against the fire.（if引导条件状语从句） 3． A big earthquake happened on January 7, 2025, in Dingri, Xizang. In the face of the disaster, volunteers from all over the country went to Xizang to lend a helping hand. Although the weather was freezing cold at minus ten degrees or more, they were busy setting up tents for the victims. Some volunteers carefully searched for survivors. Others gave away necessary things like clothes and medicine, and provided meals and water. Their efforts brought hope and warmth to the disaster-stricken area. 【写作解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点题，承接上文，说明西藏日喀则市定日县发生地震，引出下文； 第二步，说明救援主体以及细化救援活动； 第三步，书写结语，总结救援意义。 [亮点词汇] ①be busy doing sth.忙于做某事 ②search for寻找 ③give away赠送 [高分句型] Although the weather was freezing cold at minus ten degrees or more, they were busy setting up tents for the victims.（although引导的让步状语从句） 4． What to do in an earthquake As we all know, earthquakes have happened several times recently. Although we can do something to warn people about them, I think students should know more about what to do in an/ the earthquake. Here’s some of my advice. When you’re inside, don’t jump out of high buildings. Hide under a table and stay away from windows and heavy furniture. Leave the building quickly when the ground stops shaking, but don’t use the lift. When you’re outside, don’t stand under the street lights or power lines. In the mountains, be careful of falling rocks. On a beach, move quickly to higher ground. In short, follow the above advice and keep calm. You can be safe and you can also help save others. 【写作解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的每一项提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出“地震时如何做”的话题； 第二步，介绍在室内和室外分别怎么做； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①recently最近 ②stay away from远离 ③keep calm保持冷静 [高分句型] ①When you’re outside, don’t stand under the street lights or power lines. In the mountains, be careful of falling rocks. (when引导的时间状语从句) ②Although we can do something to warn people about them, I think students should know more about what to do in an/ the earthquake. (Although引导的让步状语从句) 5．范文： Dear David, Long time no see! Recently I have read an article about natural disasters. And I want to share my thoughts with you.     The disaster I fear most is earthquakes. They happen suddenly without warning, and buildings may collapse within seconds. Last year, I watched a documentary about the 2008 Sichuan earthquake, and it shocked me deeply. People lost their homes, families, and even lives in just a few minutes. Unlike floods or storms, earthquakes give almost no time to escape, which makes them especially terrifying.    What about you? Which natural disaster scares you the most? Looking forward to your reply!   Yours, Li Hui 【写作解析】 [总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ② 时态：主要使用“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③ 提示：根据题目要求完成写作，包含三个要点（最害怕的自然灾害、介绍及原因、期待回复），可适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步：问候并引出话题； 第二步：描述最害怕的自然灾害及其原因； 第三步：询问对方观点并表达期待回复。 [亮点词汇] ① natural disasters 自然灾害 ② escape 逃离 ③ terrifying 令人害怕的 ④ looking forward to 期待 [高分句型] Unlike floods or storms, earthquakes give almost no time to escape, which makes them especially terrifying.（which引导的非限制性定语从句） 6．Dear fellow students, Guangzhou was hit by a typhoon on 14 August. The typhoon caused severe damage, many people lost their homes and some even lost their lives. They are now facing great difficulties and are in need of help. Therefore, we should take immediate action to help them. We can raise funds, donate clothes, and volunteer to assist with the relief efforts. Your small contributions can make a big difference in their lives. Please extend your helping hands to the victims and contribute whatever you can. Thank you for your attention and care.     Yours,    Li Hua 【写作解析】 [总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示信息中的内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，倡议需要人们的帮助； 第二步，具体阐述倡议内容，从筹款、指衣物、充当志愿者等说明内容。 第三步，发出倡议； 第四步，书写结语，表达感谢。 [亮点词汇] ①in need of需要 ②make a difference影响 ③take action采取措施 [高分句型] ①We can raise funds, donate clothes, and volunteer to assist with the relief efforts.（and并列句） ②Please extend your helping hands to the victims and contribute whatever you can.（祈使句） 7． My name is Daming. In my city, there was a snowstorm yesterday evening. My mother was cooking dinner in the kitchen when it started. My father was watching TV, and my little sister was playing with her toys. I was doing my homework in my room. Suddenly, the wind howled loudly, and the snow fell heavily. We were all scared because it was so loud and unexpected. Luckily, the storm didn’t last long. After it ended, we checked everything and felt relieved that we were all safe and sound. Remember to stay indoors during bad weather. 【写作解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一和第三人称为主。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接开头，首先描述暴风雪的时间及场景——昨天晚上暴风雪开始时家人的活动； 第二步，然后表达暴风雪时感到惊吓的心情； 第三步，最后总结暴风雪不久就结束了，大家都安然无恙，体现幸运的结局。 [亮点词汇] ①Suddenly突然 ②Luckily幸运地 ③remember to do sth记得做某事 [高分句型] ①My mother was cooking dinner in the kitchen when it started.（时间状语从句） ②We were all scared because it was so loud and unexpected.（原因状语从句） 8． How to protect ourselves during the heavy snow It is quite normal to have heavy snow in winter. However, when there is heavy snow, it is also very dangerous, such as falling down and so on. How to protect ourselves during the heavy snow? Here are some suggestions. First, stay away from snow-covered trees and billboards because they can fall and hurt people. Second, it is best to wear cleats to avoid falling down. Third, we had better not go out. If we have to go out, we must pay attention to safety. Also, we must be careful of holes under the snow. Snow can bring us happiness if we learn to protect ourselves. 【写作解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：根据提示内容介绍如何在暴雪天气保护自己，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，详细介绍如何在暴雪天气保护自己； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①and so on等等 ②stay away from远离 ③pay attention to注意 [高分句型] ①However, when there is heavy snow, it is also very dangerous, such as falling down and so on. (when引导的时间状语从句) ②First, stay away from snow-covered trees and billboards because they can fall and hurt people. (because引导的原因状语从句) ③If we have to go out, we must pay attention to safety. (if引导的条件状语从句) 9． Hi, everyone. I’m Li Hua, a Grade 8 student in Sunshine Middle School. Today I want to share how to keep yourself safe during an earthquake. When an earthquake happens, there will be loud noise. Buildings will fall down because of the shaking of the earth and people may be trapped. Now I’d like to give you some tips in case there’s an earthquake. Hide under a table if you’re at home. If possible, you can also go to an open space. Remember to stay away from buildings, or you’ll get hurt. That’s all for my video. Thanks for your watching. 【写作解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，属于材料作文； ②时态：采用“一般现在时”； ③提示：要求包含所有要点提示，内容完整，句子衔接自然，注意标点符号的使用。 [写作步骤] 第一步：自我介绍以及阐述一个灾害； 第二步：提供一些建议； 第三步：结束语，表达感谢。 [亮点词汇] ①because of由于 ②in case以防，万一 ③fall down倒塌 [高级句型] ①When an earthquake happens, there will be loud noise. (when引导时间状语从句) ②Hide under a table if you’re at home. (if引导条件状语从句) ( 7 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$