Unit 6 Seasons写短文（单元同步写作讲义）英语译林版2024八年级上册

Unit 6 Seasons 同步写作课讲义-译林版2024八年级上册 ( ⭐话题解读⭐ ) Unit 6 的主题围绕 “人与自然：季节” 展开。认识四季、了解季节变化规律、认识季节中有代表性的自然变化等，不仅有助于我们感受大自然的魅力，也是英语学习中培养观察力与语言表达能力的重要内容。在具体的英语写作中，学生应做到以下几点： 准确运用与季节相关的词汇和短语，描述不同季节的特点。 正确使用合适的时态，通常描述季节的一般性特征用一般现在时，若涉及过去某个季节发生的事情则用一般过去时。 合理组织文章结构，使内容条理清晰、逻辑连贯。 ( ⭐写作任务⭐ ) 本单元的写作任务是写有关自己最喜欢的季节的短文。通过写作，要让读者清晰地了解你最喜欢的季节是什么，这个季节有怎样独特的景色、气候特点，以及你在这个季节喜欢做的事情等。 ( ⭐审题指导⭐ ) 本单元主要话题是季节及其变化规律，与本单元相关的写作题目可以与个人经历、喜好、活动 相结合。命题内容以描述季节特点、个人在季节中的体验为主，根据提示记叙或描述某个季节的情况。写作时应注意短文写作的内容、格式以及时态的运用。 内容一般从以下几方面着手： Where do you usually go in this season? （你在这个季节通常去哪里？） How is the weather in your favorite season? （你最喜欢的季节天气如何？） What special things can you see in this season? （在这个季节你能看到什么特别的东西？） How do you feel in this season? （你在这个季节感觉如何？） How do people usually dress in this season? （人们在这个季节通常如何穿着？） ◆写作步骤 步骤一：确定主题和框架 明确自己最喜欢的季节，思考从哪些方面来描述它，比如季节的天气、景色、活动等，构建文章的大致框架。 步骤二：组织语言和内容 运用积累的词汇和句型，描述季节特点，阐述喜欢该季节的原因，注意语言表达的准确性和流畅性。 步骤三：检查和修改 检查语法错误、拼写错误，语句是否通顺，逻辑是否合理，对文章进行修改完善。 ( ⭐写作框架⭐ ) 1.开头引入 可以通过提问、引用诗句或者直接陈述来引入话题。 提问：Do you have a favorite season? Well, my favorite season is... 引用诗句："Autumn winds rise and white clouds fly." Just like the poem says, autumn is my favorite season. 直接陈述：I love summer more than any other season. 引入话题：进一步说明为什么要写这个季节，引起读者兴趣。 For me, summer is full of joy and excitement, so I want to share it with you. There are so many reasons why autumn has a special place in my heart, and I'm going to tell you all about them. 2.主体部分 Weather：描述季节的天气特点。 Summer is usually hot and sunny. The sun shines brightly in the sky, making everything look so lively. （夏天通常炎热且阳光明媚。太阳在天空中明亮地照耀着，使一切看起来都那么生机勃勃。） Winter is very cold. Sometimes it snows, and the world becomes a white wonderland. （冬天非常寒冷。有时会下雪，世界变成一个白色的仙境。） Scenery：描写这个季节独特的景色。 In spring, the grass turns green, and flowers are in full bloom everywhere. The trees put on new clothes of green leaves. （春天，草变绿了，到处鲜花盛开。树木披上了绿叶的新衣。） Autumn is a season of harvest. The fields are full of golden wheat, and the leaves on the trees turn red and yellow, falling down like dancing butterflies. （秋天是收获的季节。田野里满是金黄的小麦，树上的叶子变红变黄，像飞舞的蝴蝶一样飘落下来。） Activities：讲述在这个季节喜欢进行的活动。 In summer, I often go swimming in the pool. It's a great way to cool off and have fun. （夏天，我经常去游泳池游泳。这是消暑和娱乐的好方法。） In winter, I like to make snowmen with my friends. We also enjoy skiing on the slopes. （冬天，我喜欢和朋友们一起堆雪人。我们也喜欢在斜坡上滑雪。） 表达情感：表达对这个季节的喜爱之情。 I really love spring. It brings me so much happiness and hope. （我真的很喜欢春天。它给我带来了很多快乐和希望。） Summer is truly my favorite. I can't wait for it to come every year. （夏天真的是我的最爱。我每年都迫不及待地盼着它到来。） 3.结尾部分 总结全文，再次强调自己对这个季节的喜爱。 All in all, autumn is the most wonderful season for me. I hope you can also enjoy its beauty. （总之，秋天对我来说是最美妙的季节。我希望你也能欣赏它的美丽。） To sum up, winter has its own charm. I will always cherish the memories in this season. （总而言之，冬天有它独特的魅力。我将永远珍惜这个季节的回忆。） ( ⭐素材宝库⭐ ) ( 词汇积累 ) spring 春天 summer 夏天 autumn/fall 秋天 winter 冬天 season 季节 warm 温暖的 hot 炎热的 cool 凉爽的 cold 寒冷的 sunny 晴朗的 cloudy 多云的 rainy 下雨的 snowy 下雪的 windy 有风的 flower 花朵 grass 草 tree 树 leaf 树叶（复数 leaves） swim 游泳 ski 滑雪 skate 滑冰 picnic 野餐 harvest 收获 temperature 温度 ( 句型积累 ) 1. 基础句型 (1) My favorite season is... 我最喜欢的季节是…… (2) It is + 描述天气的形容词 + in... 在……（季节）天气是…… (3) There are many... in... 在……（季节）有很多…… (4) I like to... in... 我喜欢在……（季节）…… (5) The... looks... in... 在……（季节）…… 看起来…… (6) It's a good time to... 这是做…… 的好时机 (7) The weather is suitable for... 天气适合…… (8) When... comes, everything... 当……（季节）来临时，一切都…… (9) In...，people usually... 在……（季节），人们通常…… (10) I can see... everywhere in... 在……（季节）我到处都能看到…… 2. 升级句型 (1) Among the four seasons, I like... best because... 在四个季节中，我最喜欢…… 因为…… (2) Not only is the weather... in..., but also I can... 在……（季节）不仅天气……，而且我能…… (3) With the arrival of..., the world becomes... 随着……（季节）的到来，世界变得…… (4) It is a season full of... 这是一个充满…… 的季节 (5) The most attractive thing in... is that... 在……（季节）最吸引人的事情是…… (6) In...，the scenery is so beautiful that it makes me... 在……（季节），景色如此美丽以至于让我…… (7) Compared with other seasons,... has its own unique charm. 与其他季节相比，…… 有它自己独特的魅力。 (8) Whenever... comes, I always feel... 每当……（季节）来临时，我总是感觉…… (9) It's a season when people can... 这是一个人们可以…… 的季节 (10) One of the reasons why I love... is that... 我喜欢……（季节）的原因之一是…… 3. 高分句型 (1) Just as the saying goes, "April showers bring May flowers." Spring, the season of hope and renewal, never fails to enchant me. 正如谚语所说：“四月雨带来五月花。” 春天，这个充满希望与新生的季节，总是让我着迷。 (2) Summer, with its scorching sun and clear blue sky, provides the perfect backdrop for outdoor adventures that fill my heart with joy and freedom. 夏天，有着炽热的太阳和湛蓝的天空，为户外探险提供了完美的背景，让我的心充满喜悦和自由。 (3) Autumn, a season painted in warm hues of gold and red, not only brings a bountiful harvest but also evokes a sense of tranquility and nostalgia within me. 秋天，一个被金色和红色温暖色调描绘的季节，不仅带来了丰收，也在我心中唤起了一种宁静和怀旧之情。 (4) Winter, with its magical snow - covered landscapes and cozy indoor gatherings, is a time when the world seems to slow down and we can cherish the simple pleasures of life. 冬天，有着神奇的白雪覆盖的风景和温馨的室内聚会，是一个世界似乎慢下来，我们可以珍惜生活中简单快乐的时候。 (5) The changing of seasons is like a grand symphony, with each season playing its unique melody, and my favorite among them is... 季节的更替就像一首宏大的交响乐，每个季节都演奏着它独特的旋律，而我最喜欢的是…… (6) Spring, emerging from the slumber of winter, awakens the earth with a burst of vibrant colors and the sweet symphony of chirping birds, making it a season truly worth celebrating. 春天，从冬天的沉睡中苏醒，用一阵鲜艳的色彩和鸟儿欢快的歌声唤醒了大地，使它成为一个真正值得庆祝的季节。 (7) Summer, the season of endless sunshine and carefree days, offers a plethora of opportunities to create unforgettable memories, from beach vacations to star - filled nights. 夏天，这个充满无尽阳光和无忧无虑日子的季节，提供了大量创造难忘回忆的机会，从海滩度假到繁星点点的夜晚。 (8) Autumn, as if nature's own artist, transforms the landscape into a breathtaking masterpiece, where every leaf tells a story of the passing year. 秋天，仿佛是大自然自己的艺术家，将风景变成了一幅令人惊叹的杰作，每一片叶子都讲述着过去一年的故事。 (9) Winter, with its icy touch and silent beauty, brings a sense of peace and stillness that allows us to reflect on the year gone by and look forward to new beginnings. 冬天，有着冰冷的触感和寂静的美丽，带来一种平和与宁静，让我们反思过去的一年，期待新的开始。 (10) Each season has its own allure, yet... holds a special place in my heart, for it is a season that resonates with my soul and fills my life with countless precious moments. 每个季节都有它自己的魅力，然而…… 在我心中有着特殊的地位，因为它是一个与我的灵魂产生共鸣，用无数珍贵时刻充实我生活的季节。 ( 谚语名句 ) April showers bring May flowers. 四月雨带来五月花。 One swallow does not make a summer. 一燕不成夏。 If winter comes, can spring be far behind? 冬天来了，春天还会远吗？ Make hay while the sun shines. 晒草要趁太阳好。（抓紧时机） The spring wind blows and the flowers bloom. 春风吹，百花开。 Summer is the time when one should enjoy the outdoors. 夏天是享受户外时光的时候。 Autumn is a second spring when every leaf is a flower. 秋天是第二个春天，每片叶子都是一朵花。 In winter, nature goes to sleep, but hope stays awake. 在冬天，大自然沉睡，但希望清醒着。 Spring is the time of plans and projects. 春天是制定计划和项目的时节。 A snow - year, a rich year. 瑞雪兆丰年。 Summer smiles at us with its warm sunshine. 夏天用温暖的阳光对我们微笑。 Autumn paints the world with colors of gold and red. 秋天用金色和红色描绘世界。 Winter's cold is a test of our strength. 冬天的寒冷是对我们力量的考验。 The spring breeze rejuvenates everything. 春风使万物复苏。 Summer days are filled with endless possibilities. 夏日充满了无尽的可能。 Autumn's harvest is a reward for hard work. 秋天的收获是对辛勤劳作的回报。 Winter's silence is a canvas for new dreams. 冬天的寂静是新梦想的画布。 Spring is nature's way of saying, "Let's party!" 春天是大自然在说：“让我们狂欢吧！” Summer nights are made for stargazing and storytelling. 夏夜是用来观星和讲故事的。 Autumn leaves dance in the wind, telling tales of the past. 秋叶在风中舞动，诉说着过去的故事。 ( 写作模板 ) My favorite season is [season name]. There are several reasons why I love it so much. Firstly, the weather in [season name] is [describe the weather, e.g., warm and sunny]. It makes me feel [your feeling, e.g., energetic and happy]. Secondly, the scenery in this season is really amazing. [Describe the unique scenery, such as flowers blooming in spring, golden fields in autumn]. I can see [special things, e.g., colorful butterflies flying among the flowers]. Moreover, I enjoy many activities in [season name]. I often [mention your activities, e.g., go hiking in the mountains in autumn, swim in the river in summer]. These activities bring me a lot of fun. In a word, [season name] is the best season for me. I really look forward to its coming every year. ( ⭐参考范文⭐ ) （范文一） My favorite season is spring. Spring is like a lovely girl who brings hope and joy. The weather in spring is warm and comfortable. The sun shines gently, and the wind blows softly. It makes me feel relaxed and full of energy. Everywhere in spring, there are beautiful sceneries. The grass turns green, and colorful flowers are blooming. The trees put on new green clothes. I can see bees and butterflies flying among the flowers. In spring, I like to fly kites in the park. It's so interesting to see the kite flying high in the sky. I also enjoy having a picnic with my family. We sit on the grass, eat delicious food, and enjoy the warm sunshine. In conclusion, spring is a wonderful season. I love it because it makes the world full of life. （范文二） Summer is my favorite season of the year. It is a season full of excitement and fun. The weather in summer is usually hot and sunny. The bright sun makes everything look so lively. I can wear my favorite T - shirts and shorts. During summer, the scenery is beautiful. The blue sky, the clear rivers, and the green trees form a wonderful picture. I often go to the beach, where I can see the sea stretching as far as the eye can see. There are so many activities I can do in summer. Swimming is my favorite. I feel so cool and happy when I swim in the pool. I also like to go camping with my friends. We sleep in the tent, listen to the sounds of nature, and watch the stars at night. To sum up, summer is really great. I love it and can't wait for it to come every year. （范文三） Autumn is my most beloved season. It has a unique charm that attracts me deeply. The weather in autumn is cool and pleasant. The sky is clear and blue, and the air is fresh. It is very comfortable to go outside. The scenery in autumn is extremely beautiful. The leaves on the trees turn red and yellow, just like a painting. The fields are full of golden wheat, and the farmers are busy with the harvest. In autumn, I like to go to the orchard to pick fruits. It's so much fun to pick apples, pears, and oranges. I also enjoy taking a walk in the forest, listening to the sound of the fallen leaves under my feet. All in all, autumn is a wonderful season. It gives me a lot of beautiful memories. ( ⭐写作拓展⭐ ) ( 考情分析 ) 近三年考情示例 年份 卷区 话题 命题形式 2024年 四川 介绍家乡（包括及季节变化）并邀请来访 书信类 ( 变式提升训练 ) 1．假如你是李华，你在美国的笔友David要来中国参观，他向你询问中国的天气情况以及来中国的最好时间等。请你根据提示给你的笔友写一封电子邮件，介绍一下中国的气候特点，并为他的参观提供一些建议。 要点提示：(1)What’s the weather like in each season in China? (2)What’s your advice? 写作要求：(1)不少于80词；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； (2)所写内容必须包括提示的信息，可作适当发挥。 Dear David, I’m very glad that you will come to visit China. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 2．你在学校英文校刊KIDS MAG上看到征稿启事。请根据征稿要求，用英语写一篇短文投稿。 Your favourite season at school Different seasons give us different feelings. We would like you to share your ideas about your favourite season at school. You need to write about: ★What does the school look like during that season? ★What do you often do at school in that season? ★What kind of activity would you like your school to hold in that season? 注意： 1.内容涵盖要点，全文连贯通顺； 2.不少于 80词（已给出的文章开头，不计入总词数）； 3.文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。 My favourite season at school My favourite season at school is __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．假如你是Joan，就读于阳光中学，Sandy是你的笔友，下面是她给你的来信，请你根据她的来信，用英语给她写一封回信。 Dear Joan,     The other day, I saw some pictures of your school in different seasons online. How beautiful! I believe your school life must be colourful. So I’m writing to ask for more information about you and your school life. Would you please tell me:     What is your favourite season and why?     How is the weather in your favourite season?     What’s your school like in your favourite season?     What do you and your classmates often do in your favourite season?       Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours, Sandy 注意： 1. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称； 2．条理清楚，要点全面，书写规范； 3．词数100左右，文章的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Sandy, I’m very glad to get your letter. ———————————————————————————————————————————————————————— ———————————————————————————————————————————————————————— ———————————————————————————————————————————————————————— Hope to get your letter soon. Yours, Joan 4．春之繁华，夏之碧叶，秋之硕果，东之静雪，四季更迭，每一季都有它独特的韵味。 你校将开展以“My favourite season in my hometown”为主题的英语演讲比赛，假如你是 Peter,  请你根据以下问题提示并适当发挥想象，写一篇英语演讲稿。 提示： 1. What is the weather like? 2. What does your city look like? 3. Why do you like this season? (at least two points) 4. What activities do people enjoy doing in this season? (at least two points) 5. What do you think of your hometown in this season? 要 求： （1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； （2）必须包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥； （3）词数：100 词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）； （4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。 My favourite season in my hometown Good morning, everyone! My name is Peter. It’s my great honor to introduce my favourite season in my hometown here！ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thank you for listening! 5．为了丰富同学们的课余生活，阳光中学英语俱乐部开展了一次以“一年四季”为主题的演讲比赛。假定你是李华，请你用英语写一篇演讲稿。内容包括： 1. 介绍每个季节（时间、活动等）； 2. 你最喜欢的季节及原因。 注意： 1. 词数为80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称： 4. 开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Good morning, everyone. I’m glad to talk about seasons here today. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thanks for your listening! 6．春赏繁花，夏享纳凉，秋忙采摘，冬乐滑雪，四季流转，各有韵味。鹿鸣英语社团正在组织题为 “一段季节回忆” (A Seasonal Memory) 的征文比赛，请根据以下提示，写一篇短文参赛。 A Seasonal Memory Introduction Which season holds a special memory for you? Main Body What did you do in the season? How did you feel at that time? Conclusion Why do you think this memory is special to you? 注意事项： (1) 文中不能出现真实的班级和姓名等信息； (2) 文章必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺； (3) 词数：100词左右。 (文章开头已给出，不计入总词数) A Seasonal Memory The season with a special memory for me is _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．假设你们学校英文校报正在举办以“家乡美”为主题的征文活动，请根据以下问题，以“Spring in my hometown”为题，写一篇英语短文投稿。 1. What is spring like in your hometown? 2. What do people in your hometown usually do in spring? 3. How do you like your hometown in spring? 要求： 1.短文需包含所有问题要点，并适当发挥； 2.词数：80词左右。 Spring in my hometown ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．盐城的冬季很美，有很多有趣的事情可以做。请以“Winter in my hometown”为题向你的朋友介绍一下家乡的冬季。 提示： 1. What is the weather like in winter in your hometown? 2. What do people in your hometown usually do in winter? 3. How do you like your hometown in winter? 要求： 1. 所写内容必须包含所给要点，适当发挥。 2. 80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 3. 语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，条理清楚，字迹工整。 4. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名及地点名。 Winter in my hometown Hello! Welcome to my hometown Yancheng. I like winter best in my hometown. It’s a beautiful place to visit in winter. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ( 7 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ Unit 6 Seasons 同步写作课讲义-译林版2024八年级上册 ( ⭐话题解读⭐ ) Unit 6 的主题围绕 “人与自然：季节” 展开。认识四季、了解季节变化规律、认识季节中有代表性的自然变化等，不仅有助于我们感受大自然的魅力，也是英语学习中培养观察力与语言表达能力的重要内容。在具体的英语写作中，学生应做到以下几点： 准确运用与季节相关的词汇和短语，描述不同季节的特点。 正确使用合适的时态，通常描述季节的一般性特征用一般现在时，若涉及过去某个季节发生的事情则用一般过去时。 合理组织文章结构，使内容条理清晰、逻辑连贯。 ( ⭐写作任务⭐ ) 本单元的写作任务是写有关自己最喜欢的季节的短文。通过写作，要让读者清晰地了解你最喜欢的季节是什么，这个季节有怎样独特的景色、气候特点，以及你在这个季节喜欢做的事情等。 ( ⭐审题指导⭐ ) 本单元主要话题是季节及其变化规律，与本单元相关的写作题目可以与个人经历、喜好、活动 相结合。命题内容以描述季节特点、个人在季节中的体验为主，根据提示记叙或描述某个季节的情况。写作时应注意短文写作的内容、格式以及时态的运用。 内容一般从以下几方面着手： Where do you usually go in this season? （你在这个季节通常去哪里？） How is the weather in your favorite season? （你最喜欢的季节天气如何？） What special things can you see in this season? （在这个季节你能看到什么特别的东西？） How do you feel in this season? （你在这个季节感觉如何？） How do people usually dress in this season? （人们在这个季节通常如何穿着？） ◆写作步骤 步骤一：确定主题和框架 明确自己最喜欢的季节，思考从哪些方面来描述它，比如季节的天气、景色、活动等，构建文章的大致框架。 步骤二：组织语言和内容 运用积累的词汇和句型，描述季节特点，阐述喜欢该季节的原因，注意语言表达的准确性和流畅性。 步骤三：检查和修改 检查语法错误、拼写错误，语句是否通顺，逻辑是否合理，对文章进行修改完善。 ( ⭐写作框架⭐ ) 1.开头引入 可以通过提问、引用诗句或者直接陈述来引入话题。 提问：Do you have a favorite season? Well, my favorite season is... 引用诗句："Autumn winds rise and white clouds fly." Just like the poem says, autumn is my favorite season. 直接陈述：I love summer more than any other season. 引入话题：进一步说明为什么要写这个季节，引起读者兴趣。 For me, summer is full of joy and excitement, so I want to share it with you. There are so many reasons why autumn has a special place in my heart, and I'm going to tell you all about them. 2.主体部分 Weather：描述季节的天气特点。 Summer is usually hot and sunny. The sun shines brightly in the sky, making everything look so lively. （夏天通常炎热且阳光明媚。太阳在天空中明亮地照耀着，使一切看起来都那么生机勃勃。） Winter is very cold. Sometimes it snows, and the world becomes a white wonderland. （冬天非常寒冷。有时会下雪，世界变成一个白色的仙境。） Scenery：描写这个季节独特的景色。 In spring, the grass turns green, and flowers are in full bloom everywhere. The trees put on new clothes of green leaves. （春天，草变绿了，到处鲜花盛开。树木披上了绿叶的新衣。） Autumn is a season of harvest. The fields are full of golden wheat, and the leaves on the trees turn red and yellow, falling down like dancing butterflies. （秋天是收获的季节。田野里满是金黄的小麦，树上的叶子变红变黄，像飞舞的蝴蝶一样飘落下来。） Activities：讲述在这个季节喜欢进行的活动。 In summer, I often go swimming in the pool. It's a great way to cool off and have fun. （夏天，我经常去游泳池游泳。这是消暑和娱乐的好方法。） In winter, I like to make snowmen with my friends. We also enjoy skiing on the slopes. （冬天，我喜欢和朋友们一起堆雪人。我们也喜欢在斜坡上滑雪。） 表达情感：表达对这个季节的喜爱之情。 I really love spring. It brings me so much happiness and hope. （我真的很喜欢春天。它给我带来了很多快乐和希望。） Summer is truly my favorite. I can't wait for it to come every year. （夏天真的是我的最爱。我每年都迫不及待地盼着它到来。） 3.结尾部分 总结全文，再次强调自己对这个季节的喜爱。 All in all, autumn is the most wonderful season for me. I hope you can also enjoy its beauty. （总之，秋天对我来说是最美妙的季节。我希望你也能欣赏它的美丽。） To sum up, winter has its own charm. I will always cherish the memories in this season. （总而言之，冬天有它独特的魅力。我将永远珍惜这个季节的回忆。） ( ⭐素材宝库⭐ ) ( 词汇积累 ) spring 春天 summer 夏天 autumn/fall 秋天 winter 冬天 season 季节 warm 温暖的 hot 炎热的 cool 凉爽的 cold 寒冷的 sunny 晴朗的 cloudy 多云的 rainy 下雨的 snowy 下雪的 windy 有风的 flower 花朵 grass 草 tree 树 leaf 树叶（复数 leaves） swim 游泳 ski 滑雪 skate 滑冰 picnic 野餐 harvest 收获 temperature 温度 ( 句型积累 ) 1. 基础句型 (1) My favorite season is... 我最喜欢的季节是…… (2) It is + 描述天气的形容词 + in... 在……（季节）天气是…… (3) There are many... in... 在……（季节）有很多…… (4) I like to... in... 我喜欢在……（季节）…… (5) The... looks... in... 在……（季节）…… 看起来…… (6) It's a good time to... 这是做…… 的好时机 (7) The weather is suitable for... 天气适合…… (8) When... comes, everything... 当……（季节）来临时，一切都…… (9) In...，people usually... 在……（季节），人们通常…… (10) I can see... everywhere in... 在……（季节）我到处都能看到…… 2. 升级句型 (1) Among the four seasons, I like... best because... 在四个季节中，我最喜欢…… 因为…… (2) Not only is the weather... in..., but also I can... 在……（季节）不仅天气……，而且我能…… (3) With the arrival of..., the world becomes... 随着……（季节）的到来，世界变得…… (4) It is a season full of... 这是一个充满…… 的季节 (5) The most attractive thing in... is that... 在……（季节）最吸引人的事情是…… (6) In...，the scenery is so beautiful that it makes me... 在……（季节），景色如此美丽以至于让我…… (7) Compared with other seasons,... has its own unique charm. 与其他季节相比，…… 有它自己独特的魅力。 (8) Whenever... comes, I always feel... 每当……（季节）来临时，我总是感觉…… (9) It's a season when people can... 这是一个人们可以…… 的季节 (10) One of the reasons why I love... is that... 我喜欢……（季节）的原因之一是…… 3. 高分句型 (1) Just as the saying goes, "April showers bring May flowers." Spring, the season of hope and renewal, never fails to enchant me. 正如谚语所说：“四月雨带来五月花。” 春天，这个充满希望与新生的季节，总是让我着迷。 (2) Summer, with its scorching sun and clear blue sky, provides the perfect backdrop for outdoor adventures that fill my heart with joy and freedom. 夏天，有着炽热的太阳和湛蓝的天空，为户外探险提供了完美的背景，让我的心充满喜悦和自由。 (3) Autumn, a season painted in warm hues of gold and red, not only brings a bountiful harvest but also evokes a sense of tranquility and nostalgia within me. 秋天，一个被金色和红色温暖色调描绘的季节，不仅带来了丰收，也在我心中唤起了一种宁静和怀旧之情。 (4) Winter, with its magical snow - covered landscapes and cozy indoor gatherings, is a time when the world seems to slow down and we can cherish the simple pleasures of life. 冬天，有着神奇的白雪覆盖的风景和温馨的室内聚会，是一个世界似乎慢下来，我们可以珍惜生活中简单快乐的时候。 (5) The changing of seasons is like a grand symphony, with each season playing its unique melody, and my favorite among them is... 季节的更替就像一首宏大的交响乐，每个季节都演奏着它独特的旋律，而我最喜欢的是…… (6) Spring, emerging from the slumber of winter, awakens the earth with a burst of vibrant colors and the sweet symphony of chirping birds, making it a season truly worth celebrating. 春天，从冬天的沉睡中苏醒，用一阵鲜艳的色彩和鸟儿欢快的歌声唤醒了大地，使它成为一个真正值得庆祝的季节。 (7) Summer, the season of endless sunshine and carefree days, offers a plethora of opportunities to create unforgettable memories, from beach vacations to star - filled nights. 夏天，这个充满无尽阳光和无忧无虑日子的季节，提供了大量创造难忘回忆的机会，从海滩度假到繁星点点的夜晚。 (8) Autumn, as if nature's own artist, transforms the landscape into a breathtaking masterpiece, where every leaf tells a story of the passing year. 秋天，仿佛是大自然自己的艺术家，将风景变成了一幅令人惊叹的杰作，每一片叶子都讲述着过去一年的故事。 (9) Winter, with its icy touch and silent beauty, brings a sense of peace and stillness that allows us to reflect on the year gone by and look forward to new beginnings. 冬天，有着冰冷的触感和寂静的美丽，带来一种平和与宁静，让我们反思过去的一年，期待新的开始。 (10) Each season has its own allure, yet... holds a special place in my heart, for it is a season that resonates with my soul and fills my life with countless precious moments. 每个季节都有它自己的魅力，然而…… 在我心中有着特殊的地位，因为它是一个与我的灵魂产生共鸣，用无数珍贵时刻充实我生活的季节。 ( 谚语名句 ) April showers bring May flowers. 四月雨带来五月花。 One swallow does not make a summer. 一燕不成夏。 If winter comes, can spring be far behind? 冬天来了，春天还会远吗？ Make hay while the sun shines. 晒草要趁太阳好。（抓紧时机） The spring wind blows and the flowers bloom. 春风吹，百花开。 Summer is the time when one should enjoy the outdoors. 夏天是享受户外时光的时候。 Autumn is a second spring when every leaf is a flower. 秋天是第二个春天，每片叶子都是一朵花。 In winter, nature goes to sleep, but hope stays awake. 在冬天，大自然沉睡，但希望清醒着。 Spring is the time of plans and projects. 春天是制定计划和项目的时节。 A snow - year, a rich year. 瑞雪兆丰年。 Summer smiles at us with its warm sunshine. 夏天用温暖的阳光对我们微笑。 Autumn paints the world with colors of gold and red. 秋天用金色和红色描绘世界。 Winter's cold is a test of our strength. 冬天的寒冷是对我们力量的考验。 The spring breeze rejuvenates everything. 春风使万物复苏。 Summer days are filled with endless possibilities. 夏日充满了无尽的可能。 Autumn's harvest is a reward for hard work. 秋天的收获是对辛勤劳作的回报。 Winter's silence is a canvas for new dreams. 冬天的寂静是新梦想的画布。 Spring is nature's way of saying, "Let's party!" 春天是大自然在说：“让我们狂欢吧！” Summer nights are made for stargazing and storytelling. 夏夜是用来观星和讲故事的。 Autumn leaves dance in the wind, telling tales of the past. 秋叶在风中舞动，诉说着过去的故事。 ( 写作模板 ) My favorite season is [season name]. There are several reasons why I love it so much. Firstly, the weather in [season name] is [describe the weather, e.g., warm and sunny]. It makes me feel [your feeling, e.g., energetic and happy]. Secondly, the scenery in this season is really amazing. [Describe the unique scenery, such as flowers blooming in spring, golden fields in autumn]. I can see [special things, e.g., colorful butterflies flying among the flowers]. Moreover, I enjoy many activities in [season name]. I often [mention your activities, e.g., go hiking in the mountains in autumn, swim in the river in summer]. These activities bring me a lot of fun. In a word, [season name] is the best season for me. I really look forward to its coming every year. ( ⭐参考范文⭐ ) （范文一） My favorite season is spring. Spring is like a lovely girl who brings hope and joy. The weather in spring is warm and comfortable. The sun shines gently, and the wind blows softly. It makes me feel relaxed and full of energy. Everywhere in spring, there are beautiful sceneries. The grass turns green, and colorful flowers are blooming. The trees put on new green clothes. I can see bees and butterflies flying among the flowers. In spring, I like to fly kites in the park. It's so interesting to see the kite flying high in the sky. I also enjoy having a picnic with my family. We sit on the grass, eat delicious food, and enjoy the warm sunshine. In conclusion, spring is a wonderful season. I love it because it makes the world full of life. （范文二） Summer is my favorite season of the year. It is a season full of excitement and fun. The weather in summer is usually hot and sunny. The bright sun makes everything look so lively. I can wear my favorite T - shirts and shorts. During summer, the scenery is beautiful. The blue sky, the clear rivers, and the green trees form a wonderful picture. I often go to the beach, where I can see the sea stretching as far as the eye can see. There are so many activities I can do in summer. Swimming is my favorite. I feel so cool and happy when I swim in the pool. I also like to go camping with my friends. We sleep in the tent, listen to the sounds of nature, and watch the stars at night. To sum up, summer is really great. I love it and can't wait for it to come every year. （范文三） Autumn is my most beloved season. It has a unique charm that attracts me deeply. The weather in autumn is cool and pleasant. The sky is clear and blue, and the air is fresh. It is very comfortable to go outside. The scenery in autumn is extremely beautiful. The leaves on the trees turn red and yellow, just like a painting. The fields are full of golden wheat, and the farmers are busy with the harvest. In autumn, I like to go to the orchard to pick fruits. It's so much fun to pick apples, pears, and oranges. I also enjoy taking a walk in the forest, listening to the sound of the fallen leaves under my feet. All in all, autumn is a wonderful season. It gives me a lot of beautiful memories. ( ⭐写作拓展⭐ ) ( 考情分析 ) 近三年考情示例 年份 卷区 话题 命题形式 2024年 四川 介绍家乡（包括及季节变化）并邀请来访 书信类 ( 变式提升训练 ) 1．假如你是李华，你在美国的笔友David要来中国参观，他向你询问中国的天气情况以及来中国的最好时间等。请你根据提示给你的笔友写一封电子邮件，介绍一下中国的气候特点，并为他的参观提供一些建议。 要点提示：(1)What’s the weather like in each season in China? (2)What’s your advice? 写作要求：(1)不少于80词；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； (2)所写内容必须包括提示的信息，可作适当发挥。 Dear David, I’m very glad that you will come to visit China. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 2．你在学校英文校刊KIDS MAG上看到征稿启事。请根据征稿要求，用英语写一篇短文投稿。 Your favourite season at school Different seasons give us different feelings. We would like you to share your ideas about your favourite season at school. You need to write about: ★What does the school look like during that season? ★What do you often do at school in that season? ★What kind of activity would you like your school to hold in that season? 注意： 1.内容涵盖要点，全文连贯通顺； 2.不少于 80词（已给出的文章开头，不计入总词数）； 3.文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。 My favourite season at school My favourite season at school is __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．假如你是Joan，就读于阳光中学，Sandy是你的笔友，下面是她给你的来信，请你根据她的来信，用英语给她写一封回信。 Dear Joan,     The other day, I saw some pictures of your school in different seasons online. How beautiful! I believe your school life must be colourful. So I’m writing to ask for more information about you and your school life. Would you please tell me:     What is your favourite season and why?     How is the weather in your favourite season?     What’s your school like in your favourite season?     What do you and your classmates often do in your favourite season?       Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours, Sandy 注意： 1. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称； 2．条理清楚，要点全面，书写规范； 3．词数100左右，文章的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Sandy, I’m very glad to get your letter. ———————————————————————————————————————————————————————— ———————————————————————————————————————————————————————— ———————————————————————————————————————————————————————— Hope to get your letter soon. Yours, Joan 4．春之繁华，夏之碧叶，秋之硕果，东之静雪，四季更迭，每一季都有它独特的韵味。 你校将开展以“My favourite season in my hometown”为主题的英语演讲比赛，假如你是 Peter,  请你根据以下问题提示并适当发挥想象，写一篇英语演讲稿。 提示： 1. What is the weather like? 2. What does your city look like? 3. Why do you like this season? (at least two points) 4. What activities do people enjoy doing in this season? (at least two points) 5. What do you think of your hometown in this season? 要 求： （1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； （2）必须包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥； （3）词数：100 词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）； （4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。 My favourite season in my hometown Good morning, everyone! My name is Peter. It’s my great honor to introduce my favourite season in my hometown here！ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thank you for listening! 5．为了丰富同学们的课余生活，阳光中学英语俱乐部开展了一次以“一年四季”为主题的演讲比赛。假定你是李华，请你用英语写一篇演讲稿。内容包括： 1. 介绍每个季节（时间、活动等）； 2. 你最喜欢的季节及原因。 注意： 1. 词数为80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称： 4. 开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Good morning, everyone. I’m glad to talk about seasons here today. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thanks for your listening! 6．春赏繁花，夏享纳凉，秋忙采摘，冬乐滑雪，四季流转，各有韵味。鹿鸣英语社团正在组织题为 “一段季节回忆” (A Seasonal Memory) 的征文比赛，请根据以下提示，写一篇短文参赛。 A Seasonal Memory Introduction Which season holds a special memory for you? Main Body What did you do in the season? How did you feel at that time? Conclusion Why do you think this memory is special to you? 注意事项： (1) 文中不能出现真实的班级和姓名等信息； (2) 文章必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺； (3) 词数：100词左右。 (文章开头已给出，不计入总词数) A Seasonal Memory The season with a special memory for me is _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．假设你们学校英文校报正在举办以“家乡美”为主题的征文活动，请根据以下问题，以“Spring in my hometown”为题，写一篇英语短文投稿。 1. What is spring like in your hometown? 2. What do people in your hometown usually do in spring? 3. How do you like your hometown in spring? 要求： 1.短文需包含所有问题要点，并适当发挥； 2.词数：80词左右。 Spring in my hometown ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．盐城的冬季很美，有很多有趣的事情可以做。请以“Winter in my hometown”为题向你的朋友介绍一下家乡的冬季。 提示： 1. What is the weather like in winter in your hometown? 2. What do people in your hometown usually do in winter? 3. How do you like your hometown in winter? 要求： 1. 所写内容必须包含所给要点，适当发挥。 2. 80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 3. 语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，条理清楚，字迹工整。 4. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名及地点名。 Winter in my hometown Hello! Welcome to my hometown Yancheng. I like winter best in my hometown. It’s a beautiful place to visit in winter. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 1． Dear David, I’m very glad that you will come to visit China. You asked me about the weather in China. There are four seasons—spring, summer, autumn and winter. Summer is the hottest season of the year. It often rains heavily. And winter is the coldest. Sometimes it snows, especially in the north of China. If you like snow, you can come at this time of year. But I think the best time to visit China is spring or autumn because the weather is not too cold or too hot. It’s very pleasant to visit many places of interest in China, such as the Great Wall, the West Lake and Mount Tai. I hope you can come soon. Yours, Li Hua 【写作解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件，围绕向笔友David介绍中国气候特点及参观建议展开。 ②时态：时态为一般现在时。 ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示中中国四季气候、参观建议的介绍要点，适当添加细节，突出气候特点与参观时机的关联。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。借已给开头回应笔友询问，引出邮件内容。 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从中国四季气候说明气候情况；再从参观建议给出意见。 第三步，书写结语。表达期待，结束邮件。 [亮点词汇] ①season季节 ②heavily大量地 ③pleasant宜人的 ④places of interest名胜 [高分句型] ①There are four seasons—spring, summer, autumn and winter. (破折号解释说明四季，清晰开启气候介绍) ②If you like snow, you can come at this time of year. (if引导条件状语从句，给出针对性建议) ③But I think the best time to visit China is spring or autumn because the weather is not too cold or too hot. (because引导原因状语从句，说明春秋季适合参观的原因) 2． My favourite season at school My favourite season at school is spring. With colourful flowers and green leaves around, our school looks like a beautiful garden. We can always enjoy the fresh air and hear birds sing. In my free time, I often love reading under the trees and relaxing in the warm sunshine. I also like doing sports after school, as the weather is neither too hot nor too cold. I hope a spring sports meeting will be held. Students can both have fun and develop teamwork spirit during different games. Spring, full of new life and energy, is my favourite season at school. 【写作解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：一般现在时为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍你在学校最爱的季节，以及学校在这样的季节下的样子； 第二步，介绍在这样的季节下你喜欢做的活动； 第三步，介绍你想要学校在这样的季节下举办的活动。 [亮点词汇] ①fresh air新鲜空气 ②relaxing放松 ③neither…nor既不……也不 [高分句型] ①I also like doing sports after school, as the weather is neither too hot nor too cold.（as引导的原因状语从句） ②Students can both have fun and develop teamwork spirit during different games.（both…and句型结构） 3． Dear Sandy, I’m very glad to get your letter. My favourite season is autumn. I like it because Mid-Autumn Festival is in this season. My family and I eat moon cakes and enjoy the full moon at the festival. It is cool and sunny in autumn and the sky is blue. If you walk around my school, you can see leaves on the trees turn brown or yellow and fall into piles upon the ground. At this time of year, our school looks so beautiful. During this season, I can go for different activities with my classmates. Our school holds a sports meeting every autumn. My classmates and I always take an active part in it. We have fun chatting with each other and cheering for our friends. Sometimes, we go cycling in the park. How happy we are! Hope to get your letter soon. Yours, Joan 【写作解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封书信； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据信件内容作出相应回答，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表达自己收到来信的心情（已给出）； 第二步，根据信件内容做出回应，具体介绍自己喜欢的季节，喜欢这个季节的理由，天气情况，在这个季节学校的样子以及这个季节经常和同学们做的事情； 第三步，表达期待收到回信（已给出）。 [亮点词汇] ①turn brown or yellow变成棕色或者黄色 ②look so beautiful看起来如此美丽 ③take an active part in积极参与 [高分句型] ①If you walk around my school, you can see leaves on the trees turn brown or yellow and fall into piles upon the ground.（if引导的条件状语从句） ②How happy we are!（感叹句） 4．                                                                                         My favourite season in my hometown Good morning, everyone! My name is Peter. It’s my great honor to introduce my favourite season in my hometown here! My favorite season is autumn. The weather in autumn is neither too hot nor too cold. It’s usually sunny and comfortable. My city looks like a golden world. The leaves on the trees turn yellow and fall gently. I like autumn for several reasons. Firstly, it’s the harvest season. We can enjoy the fruits and grains that we have worked hard for. Secondly, the temperature is just right for outdoor activities. People enjoy going for a picnic in the park and taking beautiful photos of the scenery. Some also like to climb mountains and enjoy the views from the top. I think my hometown is most charming in autumn. The peaceful and beautiful scene makes me feel relaxed and happy. That’s all. Thank you for listening! 【写作解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿，作者向大家介绍自己家乡最喜欢的季节。 ②时态：全文主要使用一般现在时。 ③提示：讲述家乡最喜欢的季节的特点和喜欢的原因。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开头向大家问候，并表明演讲主题。 第二步，介绍最喜欢的季节是秋天，描述秋天的天气、景色等。 第三步，阐述喜欢秋天的原因，包括是丰收季节和适合户外活动。 第四步，描述人们在秋天的活动。 第五步，结尾总结，表达对家乡秋天的喜爱。 [亮点词汇] ①honor 荣誉；荣幸 ②harvest 收获；丰收 ③comfortable 舒适的；安逸的 ④charming 迷人的；有魅力的 [高分句型] ①The weather in autumn is neither too hot nor too cold.（使用 “neither...nor...” 结构，简洁明了地描述秋天的天气适中。） ②The peaceful and beautiful scene makes me feel relaxed and happy.（使用“make + 宾语 + 宾语补足语”结构，生动地表达出景色给人的感受。） 5． Good morning, everyone. I’m glad to talk about seasons here today. There are four seasons in a year: spring, summer, autumn, and winter. In spring, everything comes back to life. People enjoy outdoor activities like picnics and flying kites. Summer is hot and a good time for swimming and eating ice cream. Autumn brings cool weather and beautiful colors, perfect for hiking. Winter is cold; many people like skiing and making snowmen. My favorite season is autumn because I love the cool weather and the falling leaves. It feels very relaxing and peaceful to me. Thanks for your listening! 【写作解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。 [写作步骤] 第一步，借用文章已给开头，引出主题； 第二步，根据题干的要点，详细描述四个季节的时间和活动等； 第三步，重点说明自己最喜欢的季节以及原因，并收尾。 [亮点词汇] ①there be有 ②like doing喜欢做某事 [高分句型] ①There are four seasons in a year: spring, summer, autumn, and winter.（there be句型） ②My favorite season is autumn because I love the cool weather and the falling leaves.（原因状语从句） 6． A Seasonal Memory The season with a special memory for me is spring. When spring arrives, nature wakes up and my heart is filled with hope and joy. Last spring, my family and I went to the local park to enjoy the lovely flowers. The air was full of the sweet smell of roses and the gentle wind was refreshing. I remember running on the grass, feeling the warmth of the sun on my face. At that time, I felt truly happy and free. This memory is special to me because it makes me think of the simple joys of life and the love of my family. 【写作解析】 [总体分析] ②题材：本文是一篇材料作文。 ②时态：时态主要为 “一般现在时” 和 “一般过去时” 。 ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点，包括：注意行文连贯、逻辑清晰、无拼写和语法错误。 [写作步骤] 第一步：介绍哪个季节有特别的记忆； 第二步：展开阐述在这个季节你做了什么和当时你是什么感觉； 第三步：阐述为什么这段记忆对你来说很特别。 [亮点词汇] ①wake up 唤醒 ②be full of... 充满…… ③refreshing 清爽的 [高分句型] ①When spring arrives, nature wakes up and my heart is filled with hope and joy. (when引导时间状语从句) ②This memory is special to me because it makes me think of the simple joys of life and the love of my family. (because引导原因状语从句) 7． Spring in my hometown Spring in my hometown is very beautiful and we can see different kinds of flowers. The weather is not hot or cold. In spring, people like to do all kinds of outdoor activities. Children are busy flying kites and playing games in the playground. The elderly go on their morning exercises and evening dances. Young people like hiking and jogging. I like my hometown on spring days. After a long winter, everybody gets warm and lively again. We go outside and enjoy natural beauty. What’s more, spring is the season of life. Everything starts to grow in spring. 【写作解析】 [总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍家乡天气； 第二步，具体阐述家乡人们春天通常做的事； 第三步，最后表达你对家乡春天的看法。 [亮点词汇] ①different kinds of不同种类的 ②be busy doing sth忙于做某事 ③what’s more而且 [高分句型] Spring in my hometown is very beautiful and we can see different kinds of flowers. （and并列句） 8．范文： Winter in my hometown Hello! Welcome to my hometown Yancheng. I like winter best in my hometown. It’s a beautiful place to visit in winter. My favourite season is winter. It usually comes in December and ends in February. It’s very cold in winter. And it often snows. When it’s snowing, I always go out and make a snowman. And I can go skiing with my friends. Sometimes, we play snowball fights. It’s very exciting. Now it’s snowing outside. I’m making a snowman with my sister. Wow! The snowman looks like my sister. We are very happy. I take it back home. But I don’t find it after I put it on the floor. Oh, it’s only a snowman. Winter is great! I like it very much! 【写作解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：根据提示问题介绍家乡的冬季，可适当发挥，注意语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，条理清楚。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍家乡的冬季是什么样子的； 第二步，介绍人们在冬季进行的活动； 第三步，表达自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①make a snowman堆雪人 ②play snowball fights打雪仗 ③take it back home把它带回家 [高分句型] ①When it’s snowing, I always go out and make a snowman. (when引导的时间状语从句) ②It usually comes in December and ends in February. (and连接的并列句) ( 7 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$