内容正文:
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Arizona had two best friends, Ollie and Maria, who never seemed to get along well. But a recent experience brought them closer.
Last week, Arizona’s neighbor asked her to help walk his three dogs for a few days. Arizona happily agreed, thinking it would be fun. When she ran into Ollie, she eagerly shared the news. Ollie raised an eyebrow and warned her the dogs were anything but angels (天使). Arizona felt curious but still optimistic. Later that day, when the news reached Maria, she expressed concern that it would be too much for Arizona to handle them alone. Arizona started to feel nervous.
The big day arrived, and Arizona immediately realized Ollie and Maria were right. “Hey, stop pulling!” she shouted, but the dogs just dragged her along. Things were getting out of hand. Just then, both Ollie and Maria showed up to help. But Arizona worried that might cause more trouble. As expected, the two immediately started arguing about who should be in charge. Their voices grew louder and louder.
Arizona stepped in, trying to calm them down. She suggested they each take one dog to walk, hoping to share the work and end the chaos. Shortly after the dogs were assigned, another problem popped up. Ollie got so excited that he tangled their leashes (狗绳) together. Maria got mad at him, while Ollie insisted that he could fix it.
At the sight of the rising tension, Arizona quickly offered a solution. “Let’s drop the leashes for a second to sort out which is whose?” she suggested. But as soon as they let go of the leashes, the dogs sensed the lack of control and started running around. “Nooooooo!” Arizona cried hopelessly, seeing the dogs running wildly. “Come back!” she shouted, her voice filled with urgency. The dogs, now free and excited, were running between trees and bushes, completely ignoring the calls. The friends froze there, shocked and speechless.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Suddenly, Ollie thought of the hot dogs in his bag.
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With the dogs settling beside them, they reflected on the whole event.
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文本分析
1.角色:_____________________________
2.视角:第________人称
3.时空线:from Arizona agreeing to walk the dogs---______________ ---the dogs running wildly
4. 请在文章中将可能的线索都找出来。
How did Ollie react when Arizona shared the news of walking dogs?:______________________________________________
What was Maria's concern about Arizona walking the dogs alone?:____________________________________________
Why did Arizona worry when Ollie and Maria showed up to help?:____________________________________________
What problem occurred after the dogs were assigned?:____________________________________________
What happened when they let go of the leashes?:____________________________________________
5.情节线:Arizona 答应帮邻居遛三只狗,Ollie 警告狗不好管,Maria 担心她独自应付不来。 →________________________→_____________________________→____________________________→(续写)Ollie 想到包里的热狗后的举动,以及狗安静下来后三人对整件事的反思。
6.情感线:Arizona:开心、乐观(答应遛狗时)→紧张(听到 Maria 担忧后)→无奈(面对两人争吵时)→绝望(狗失控时)→___________(续写)
Ollie:(提醒 Arizona 时)→(争吵时)→___________(续写)
Maria:(担忧 Arizona 时)→(争吵时)→___________(续写)
7. 综合以上信息,请用 3-4 句话概括文章大意。(中英各一个)
中文:__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
英文:________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
8. 句式:(3---5个句子)
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9. 主题(本文属于人与他人):_______________________
情节构造
第一段提示句:Suddenly, Ollie thought of the hot dogs in his bag.
衔接句 1——— 对 “thought of the hot dogs” 提问 “Ollie 想到热狗后做了什么?”:What did Ollie do after thinking of the hot dogs in his bag?
过渡句推演:衔接 1→______←衔接 2
衔接句 2——— 对 “dogs' reaction” 提问 “狗对热狗有什么反应?”:How did the dogs react to the hot dogs?
第二段提示句:With the dogs settling beside them, they reflected on the whole event.
衔接句 3——— 对 “reflected on the event” 提问 “他们在反思中意识到了什么?”:What did they realize while reflecting on the whole event?
过渡句推演:衔接 3→______←主题
主题:_________________________________
段落构思
第一段:Suddenly, Ollie thought of the hot dogs in his bag.
→①__________________→②__________________→③__________________;
英文:____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
第二段:With the dogs settling beside them, they reflected on the whole event.
→④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥__________________。
英文:____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
参考答案
文本分析
1.角色:Arizona、Ollie(Arizona 的好友)、Maria(Arizona 的好友)、Arizona 的邻居
2.视角:第三人称
3.时空线:from Arizona agreeing to walk neighbor's three dogs---Ollie and Maria offering help but arguing, then dogs running wild after leashes were let go---Arizona, Ollie and Maria dealing with the situation
4. 请在文章中将可能的线索都找出来。
How did Arizona feel when agreeing to walk the dogs?:She happily agreed and thought it would be fun.
What warnings/concerns did Ollie and Maria give?:Ollie warned the dogs were anything but angels; Maria was concerned it would be too much for Arizona alone.
Why did Arizona worry when Ollie and Maria showed up?:She worried they might cause more trouble as they never got along well.
What problem happened after dogs were assigned?:Ollie tangled the leashes, and Maria got mad at him.
Why did the dogs start running around?:Because the three friends let go of the leashes to sort them out, and the dogs sensed the lack of control.
5.情节线:Arizona 答应帮邻居遛三只狗,Ollie 提醒狗不好管,Maria 担心她应付不来。 →遛狗当天,狗果然很难管,Ollie 和 Maria 赶来帮忙却因谁负责而争吵。 →Arizona 建议每人遛一只,Ollie 却弄乱了狗绳,两人再起争执。 →Arizona 提议放下狗绳整理,结果狗失控乱跑,三人震惊无措。 →(续写)Ollie 用热狗引回狗,三人反思此事。
6.情感线:
Arizona:开心、期待(答应遛狗时)→紧张(听了 Maria 的话后)→焦急、无奈(狗失控时)→___________(续写)
Ollie & Maria:争执、不和睦(一开始)→慌张(狗跑时)→___________(续写)
7.综合以上信息,请用 3-4 句话概括文章大意。(中英各一个)
中文:Arizona 答应帮邻居遛三只狗,Ollie 和 Maria 分别提醒或担心她应付不来。遛狗时狗果然很难管,Ollie 和 Maria 前来帮忙却不断争吵,在整理狗绳时不小心让狗失控乱跑,三人一时不知所措。
英文:Arizona agreed to walk her neighbor's three dogs. Ollie warned the dogs were not easy to handle, and Maria was concerned she couldn't manage alone. On the day, the dogs were hard to control. Ollie and Maria came to help but kept arguing, and the dogs ran wild when they let go of the leashes, leaving the three friends shocked.
8.句式:
时间状语从句(When she ran into Ollie...;As soon as they let go of the leashes...);定语从句(Arizona had two best friends, Ollie and Maria, who never seemed to get along well.);
宾语从句(Maria expressed concern that it would be too much for Arizona...);
9.主题(本文属于人与他人):合作的重要性,朋友间在共同应对问题中增进理解与默契
情节构造
第一段提示句:Suddenly, Ollie thought of the hot dogs in his bag.
衔接句 1→Ollie took out the hot dogs and used them to lure the dogs back←衔接 2
主题:面对困境时,朋友的急智与协作能解决问题
第二段提示句:With the dogs settling beside them, they reflected on the whole event.
衔接句 3→Ollie and Maria apologized to each other and realized the need to cooperate←主题
主题:共同经历困境后,朋友间的关系在反思中变得更融洽
段落构思
第一段:Suddenly, Ollie thought of the hot dogs in his bag.
→①Ollie quickly took out the hot dogs and called the dogs ②The dogs were attracted by the smell and ran back ③The three worked together to catch the dogs and tie the leashes properly;
英文:Suddenly, Ollie thought of the hot dogs in his bag. “I have an idea!” he yelled, rummaging through his backpack. He pulled out a pack of hot dogs, unwrapped one, and waved it in the air. “Here, boys!” The dogs perked up at the smell, stopping their wild run. One by one, they trotted over, tails wagging. Arizona and Maria rushed to grab their leashes, and soon all three dogs were under control again.
第二段:With the dogs settling beside them, they reflected on the whole event.
→④Ollie admitted his mistake of tangling the leashes, and Maria apologized for getting mad ⑤They realized arguing only made things worse ⑥They promised to work together next time, and their friendship grew stronger;
英文:With the dogs settling beside them, they reflected on the whole event. “I shouldn’t have snapped at you,” Maria said to Ollie. “And I shouldn’t have messed up the leashes,” Ollie replied. Arizona smiled. “We’re better when we work together, right?” Both nodded. As they walked the dogs back, chatting and laughing, it was clear their bickering days were fading—this messy adventure had brought them closer than ever.
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