2025年上海中考&二模作文专题荟萃：书信邮件类作文

2025年上海中考&二模作文专题荟萃：书信邮件类作文 解析版 【题型解读】 上海中考英语作文部分所要考察的内容很全面，单词积累、句意理解、思路逻辑等都是考察的方面。历年中考题目虽有变化，但存在很大的延展性，英语作文考察方向、考察题材是可以参考的。邮件书信类英语作文是经常考查的写作形式，其命题规律通常包括以下几个方面： · 情景设置：**题目会给出一个特定的情景或背景，例如写给朋友、写给老师、写给家人等。 · 写作目的：**题目会明确要求写信的目的，例如提出建议、请求帮助、表达感谢、邀请参加活动等。 · 内容要点：**通常会列出几个要点或问题，希望在信中得到解答或涉及的内容。 · 语言风格：**根据情景和收信人的关系，语言风格可以是正式的、友好的、感激的等。 · 结尾方式：**题目可能会要求写出合适的结尾，例如道谢、邀请回信等。 书信邮件类应用文的共性在于： 主题贴近生活，注重实用性。 考查语言表达、逻辑组织和交际能力。 格式规范，语言得体，内容完整。 开头、主体、结尾三部分结构清晰，语言流畅。 掌握这些共性内容，考生可以更好地应对书信邮件类作文，提升写作水平。 【解题技巧】 确定写作目的：**首先要明确写作的目的，是提出建议，还是请求帮助、表达感谢、邀请参加活动等。 选择合适的格式：**邮件和书信有不同的格式，邮件通常更简洁直接，而书信可能更正式一些。确保选择适合情境的格式。 确定收件人和称呼：**根据情景确定收件人是谁，例如朋友、家人、老师等，并使用适当的称呼。 清晰明了的开头：**在开头部分简要介绍自己的情况，说明写信的原因或目的。 详细阐述主题：**在信件的主体部分详细阐述写作目的，并回答分析题目列出的要点或问题。 礼貌和感谢：**在信件中要表达礼貌和感谢之情，例如使用合适的礼貌用语和表达感激之词。 请求或建议：**如果信件的目的是请求帮助或提出建议，要清晰明了地陈述请求或建议的内容。 合适的结尾：**在结尾部分，再次表达感谢并恳请收件人采取行动，例如回复邮件、提供帮助等。 【考点诠释】 （一）命题考向 ▶主题聚焦 围绕日常生活、学习、社交等场景展开，贴近学生实际。 常见类型：邀请信、感谢信、道歉信、建议信、申请信、通知邮件等。 ▶能力考查 语言表达能力：使用得体的语言表达意图、情感或建议。 逻辑组织能力：内容条理清晰，结构完整。 交际能力：根据对象和场景调整语气和措辞。 ▶语言要求 语言简洁明了，避免冗长复杂的句子。 语气得体，正式与非正式场合区分明确。 格式规范（如称呼、正文、结尾、署名等）。 （二）写作思路 ▶ 三维结构模型 格式规范： 正式邮件：称呼（Dear Sir/Madam）→ 正文 → 结束语（Yours sincerely） 非正式邮件：Hi + 名字 → 结尾（Best wishes） ▶ 功能分段： 开头段：表明意图（I'm writing to...） 主体段： 说明背景（时间 / 事件） 陈述细节（原因 / 建议 / 请求） 补充支持（举例 / 数据 / 个人经历） 结尾段：礼貌请求 / 感谢 / 期待回复 ▶ 语气适配： 正式：使用书面语（I would appreciate it if...） 半正式：适当口语化（Looking forward to your reply） （三）高分句式库 ▶开头句型 I'm writing to express my heartfelt gratitude for...（感谢信） I'm writing to bring to your attention an issue regarding...（投诉信） I'm honored to recommend... for your consideration（推荐信） ▶主体细节 We would be honored if you could join us for… （表达邀请） I am inviting you to…（表达邀请） I am deeply grateful for…表达感谢） Thank you very much for…表达感谢） I suggest that you…（表达建议） It would be a good idea to…（表达建议） ▶结尾表达 Please don't hesitate to contact me at [email] for further details.（咨询信） I sincerely hope that my suggestions will be of help.（建议信） Thank you again for your generosity; it meant a lot to me.（感谢信） 高级句式 非谓语动词：Hoping to receive your favorable reply, I remain... 强调句：It was your encouragement that enabled me to... 【典题举隅】 （2025·上海杨浦·一模）你是学校图书馆的志愿者李枫，负责每周一下午的图书馆整理工作。这周你因为某个原因而忘记了图书馆的任务。你需要写一封道歉信给你的图书馆负责人Mr. Wang，表达你的歉意。 道歉信内容须包括： ·表达歉意； ·解释缺席的原因； ·提出补救措施。 注意： 1. 短文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分； 2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Dear Mr. Wang, I am Li Feng, the volunteer who assists at the library every Monday afternoon. I am extremely sorry for missing my shift for the library organization work this week. The reason for my absence was a sudden and severe stomachache that prevented me from attending. I was in so much pain that I couldn’t make it to the library. I deeply regret the inconvenience this may have caused. To make amends for my mistake, I would like to volunteer to work extra hours this Saturday. Furthermore, I will be more mindful of my schedule to ensure that this won’t happen again. I sincerely hope you can forgive me for my oversight. Thank you for your understanding and patience. Yours sincerely, Li Feng 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为一封书信； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：文章应该包括所有提示信息，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己，表达写信意图； 第二步，陈述自己缺席的原因； 第三步，提出补救措施； 第四步，表达感谢。 [亮点词汇] ①make amends for my mistake  补过 ②prevent sb. from doing sth.  阻止某人做某事 [高分句型] ①I am Li Feng, the volunteer who assists at the library every Monday afternoon. (who引导限制性定语从句) ②I was in so much pain that I couldn’t make it to the library. (so … that引导结果状语从句) 第一套 （2023·上海中考真题） Write at least 60 words according to the given situation（根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格） 假如你是一名初三学生李华，所在的社区计划在暑假期间组织一个关于“时间管理”(time management)的培训活动。请给社区负责人Mr. Wang写一封邮件，要包含以下内容。 1.说说你是否参加，简要说明理由； 2.请对表格中列出的一项内容，提出修改意见建议。 Training Plan 对象 13-17岁 学生 时间 7月每周六上午7：00-10：00 地点 社区广场 内容 阅读 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ‌Email to Community Director‌ Dear Mr. Wang, I’m Li Hua, a ninth-grade student, writing to confirm my participation in the summer “Time Management” training. As I’ll enter high school soon, improving my efficiency in balancing study, hobbies, and rest is crucial. This program aligns perfectly with my needs.我是九年级学生李华，写信确认我参加了暑期“时间管理”培训。由于我即将进入高中，提高我在平衡学习、爱好和休息方面的效率至关重要。这个项目完全符合我的需求。 While I appreciate the plan’s focus on reading, I suggest revising the ‌schedule‌. Holding sessions from 7:00 to 10:00 AM every Saturday in July at the community square poses challenges. First, early mornings in summer are already hot, and outdoor activities under direct sunlight may reduce focus. Second, many students, including myself, attend weekend tutoring or sports classes later in the morning. A 3-hour session might cause fatigue and scheduling conflicts.虽然我很欣赏该计划对阅读的关注，但我建议修改时间表。7月每周六上午7:00至10:00在社区广场举行会议会带来挑战。首先，夏天的清晨已经很热了，阳光直射下的户外活动可能会降低注意力。其次，包括我在内的许多学生都会在上午晚些时候参加周末辅导或体育课。3小时的会议可能会导致疲劳和日程安排冲突。 Could we adjust the time to 8:30–11:00 AM and move it indoors (e.g., the community library)? This would ensure a cooler environment and allow attendees to join other activities afterward. A slightly later start time would also better accommodate teenagers’ sleep patterns.我们能否将时间调整到上午8:30-11:00，并将其移至室内（例如社区图书馆）？这将确保更凉爽的环境，并允许与会者在之后参加其他活动。稍晚的开始时间也能更好地适应青少年的睡眠模式。 Thank you for organizing this valuable initiative!感谢您组织这次宝贵的活动！ Sincerely, Li Hua 第二套 （2023·上海青浦·二模）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation (根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格) 假设你是李华，收到一封来自笔友Paul的邮件，请阅读邮件内容并进行回复。 From: paulyoung@nymail.com To: lihua666@shmail.com Subject: $500！！！ Hi, Li Hua Great news! I got the first prize in a school competition and won a $500 prize. I’m wondering how to spend it. Shall I buy something I can use like a computer, or pay for an experience like a trip, an online course or something like that? Please give me your advice. Waiting for your reply. Paul From: lihua666@shmail.com To: paulyoung@nymail.com Subject: Re：$500！！！ Hi, Paul _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________                                                                         Li Hua 注意：1. 文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。 2. 照抄试卷中内容不得分。 ‌Email Response to Paul‌ Dear Paul, Congratulations on your well-deserved victory! It’s exciting to hear about your prize, and I’d gladly share some thoughts. While both options have merits, I strongly recommend investing in ‌an educational experience‌, such as an online course or a cultural trip.祝贺你当之无愧的胜利！很高兴听到你获奖的消息，我很乐意分享一些想法。虽然这两种选择都有优点，但我强烈建议投资于教育体验，例如在线课程或文化之旅。 Firstly, knowledge and experiences often yield long-term benefits. For instance, enrolling in a programming course could enhance your digital skills, which are invaluable in today’s tech-driven world. Alternatively, a trip to a historical city might broaden your perspectives and inspire creativity—something no gadget can offer.首先，知识和经验往往能带来长期利益。例如，参加编程课程可以提高你的数字技能，这在当今技术驱动的世界中是无价的。或者，去历史名城旅行可能会开阔你的视野，激发你的创造力——这是任何小工具都无法提供的。 Secondly, experiential choices create lasting memories. Imagine learning to cook local dishes during a journey or earning a certification that boosts your university applications. These opportunities not only enrich your life but also build resilience and adaptability.其次，经验选择会创造持久的记忆。想象一下，在旅途中学习烹饪当地菜肴，或者获得一份证书，以提高你的大学申请率。这些机会不仅丰富了你的生活，还培养了你的韧性和适应性。 Of course, if your current computer hinders your studies, upgrading it could be practical. However, prioritize what aligns with your long-term goals. Whatever you choose, make sure it brings you joy and growth!当然，如果你目前的电脑妨碍了你的学习，升级它可能是可行的。然而，优先考虑与你的长期目标相一致的事情。无论你选择什么，都要确保它给你带来快乐和成长！ Looking forward to hearing your decision!期待听到您的决定！ Best wishes, Li Hua 第三套 假如你是李雷，你的笔友Anna给你发了电子邮件诉说她的烦恼，请根据邮件内容进行回复。 要求：1.逻辑清晰，内容完整，书写规范。 2.词数80左右，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Li Lei, My sister practices playing the violin in an after-school class, so my parents asked me to go and learn it too. But I’m just not a music girl. You know, I’m interested in sports and I want to choose what I like. Now, I’m so upset. What should I do? Anna Dear Anna, _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li lei Dear Anna， I understand your feeling.Here is what I think.（引出话题）Maybe your parents won't know how you feel if you don't talk to them about it.Why not let them know you are not good at music？Meanwhile，you'd better tell them you have had a clear life goal and are old enough to make your own decisions.【高分句型一】Furthermore，try to get a proper chance to prove that you are talented in sports.Only then will they know you better and let you choose what you love to do.I'm sure your parents will help you explore different options.（我的建议）I hope what I said is helpful to you.【高分句型二】（结束语） Yours， Li Lei 第四套 假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Tim给你写了一封电子邮件，询问你对娱乐(entertainment)的看法，请根据邮件内容进行回复。 TimTim@thinkmail.com Dear Li Hua, Hope everything goes well. I’m doing a research project on teenagers’ opinions on entertainment. Here are my questions: 1. Among different forms of entertainment, such as watching TV, seeing movies, enjoying art and reading, which one do you like best? Why? 2. Can you share a story about your favourite form of entertainment? I hope to hear from you soon! Best, Tim 注意： 1.要点齐全，适当拓展； 2.行文连贯，语法正确，书写规范； 3.文中不得出现真实的校名、学生名； 4.80词左右，邮件开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Tim, I’m so glad to receive your email. In reply to your questions, here are my answers. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope what I said will be helpful to you. Yours, Li Hua 例文 Dear Tim, I’m so glad to receive your email. In reply to your questions, here are my answers.I enjoy seeing films most in my free time. For me, films are like magical doors that can transport me to different lives. What’s more, many characters in films can help light up my path of growth.As you know, I am not confident in my body shape. So I was moved to tears when I watched the film YOLO the other day. The story of an over-weighted loser changing to an excellent boxer through boxing training really inspired me. I even started to run for half an hour every day after school! Now I am not only a film lover but also a fan of sport.I hope what I said will be helpful to you. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是电子邮件写作；②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述，适当发挥。[写作步骤]第一步，引出主题，引出对Tim电子邮件疑问的回答；第二步，分点阐述回答Tim电子邮件中提出的几个问题；第三步：书写结语。表达“希望建议对你有用”的期待。[亮点词汇]①enjoy doing喜欢做②be confident in对……有信心③not only … but also不仅……而且……[高分句型] ①For me, films are like magical doors that can transport me to different lives. (定语从句)②So I was moved to tears when I watched the film YOLO the other day. (when引导时间状语从句) 第五套 Write a letter of at least 60 words according to the given situation. (根据所给情景写一封不少于60词的信，标点符号不占格。) 学校公众号近期准备增设一个专栏，以更好地向外界宣传校园文化与特色等，现向学生征集方案。假如你是该校学生王一鸣，请给张老师写一封电子邮件，表明你想增设的专栏名称和内容，并结合自身经历，阐述理由。 注意： 1. 信中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息， 否则不予评分。 2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 例文： Dear Mr. Zhang,   I am writing to propose a new column for our school’s public account called “Student Growth Stories”. This column can feature the personal growth experiences of students in our school. For example, it could include stories about how students overcame difficulties in their studies. I once had a hard time with math. I was really frustrated because I couldn’t understand some complex problems. But with the help of my teacher and my own efforts, I gradually improved. I believe such stories can inspire other students.Also, it can show students’ achievements in various fields like sports and arts. It would be a good way to present our school’s vibrant campus culture and the unique characteristics of our students.Thank you for considering my proposal. Yours,   Wang Yiming 【详解】[总体分析]  ① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件。  ② 时态：一般现在时为主。  ③ 提示：根据题干中所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。  [写作步骤]  第一步，表明写作意图，提出专栏名称“Student Growth Stories”；  第二步，描述专栏内容，并结合自身经历说明；  第三步，阐述理由；第四步，书写结束语。  [亮点词汇]  ① propose 提议  ② For example比如③ with the help of 在某人的帮助下④ commitment to 致力于  [高分句型]  ① I was really frustrated because I couldn’t understand some complex problems. (because引导的原因状语从句)  ② I believe such stories can inspire other students. (宾语从句)   第六套 假如你是李华，你的朋友Peter来中国旅游，回国前他给你发了一封邮件，表达想给家人买一件代表中国文化的礼物的想法。请你根据所给内容，回复邮件。 I am about to go back to my own country. I want to buy a gift for my family that represents Chinese culture, but I don’t know what to buy. Can you give me a recommendation? Why do you recommend this gift? 注意： （1）回复邮件须回答所给邮件内容中的两个问题，可适当发挥； （2）回复邮件中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名； （3）词数80个左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 Dear Peter, Glad to hear from you. It’s easy to choose a gift which stands for Chinese culture. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope my advice is helpful. Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 例文： Dear Peter, Glad to hear from you. It’s easy to choose a gift which stands for Chinese culture. I’d love to give you my suggestion about Chinese gifts. From my point of view, paper-cut is a good choice to be special Chinese gifts for your family. Paper-cuts are usually used to decorate the house. They are put on windows, doors and walls to celebrate the Spring Festival. Paper-cuts are a traditional Chinese culture, from which you can have a better understanding of China. People like them very much because they are seen as symbols for good luck and a happy new year. I hope my advice is helpful. Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；②时态：时态为一般现在时；③提示：根据题干中的提示信息介绍一件代表中国文化的礼物，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作方法]第一步，介绍推荐的礼物是什么；第二步，介绍这个礼物；第三步，说明推荐理由。 [亮点词汇] ①from my point of view依我看来②be used to do被用来做某事③be seen as被看成 [高分句型 ]①Paper-cuts are a traditional Chinese culture, from which you can have a better understanding of China.（介词+which引导的非限制性定语从句）②People like them very much because they are seen as symbols for good luck and a happy new year.（because引导原因状语从句） 第七套 Write at least 60 words according to the given situation. (根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的信件，标点符号不占格)假设你是 Frank，你的好朋友 Tim 由于爸爸工作调动，来到了一所新的学校学习。身处陌生的环境，缺少朋友，他感到寂寞，学习成绩也不如从前，为此他感到很苦恼。 请给他写一封信，谈谈你的看法，并给予建议。 注意：1. 文章中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。 2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ‌Letter to Tim‌ Dear Tim, I’m truly sorry to hear about the challenges you’ve faced since moving to the new school. I understand how lonely and overwhelming it must feel to adjust to an unfamiliar environment, but please remember that this transition takes time, and you’re not alone. First, let’s talk about making friends. Starting fresh is tough, but small steps matter. Try joining a club or sports team that matches your interests—whether it’s basketball, chess, or art. Shared hobbies naturally spark conversations. Also, don’t hesitate to smile and greet classmates casually. Many might be curious about the “new student” but unsure how to approach you. Regarding your studies, temporary setbacks don’t define your abilities. Create a simple daily routine: review notes after class, ask teachers for clarification, and break tasks into smaller goals. Schools often offer study groups or tutoring—take advantage of these resources. Lastly, stay connected with old friends (like me!) through calls or messages. Venting helps, but also share fun memories to lift your spirits. You’ve always been resilient, Tim. New beginnings are opportunities in disguise. Keep going—I’m cheering for you! Warmly, Frank 第八套 假定你是李华，你班交换生Simon即将返校，他对即将在1月18日举办的“校园艺术节”非常感兴趣。他写了一封邮件向你询问相关信息，请你根据邮件内容写封回信。 Dear Li Hua, I’ll be back soon. I’m very interested in the school Art Festival. Can you tell me when the Art Festival will take place and what activities there are in the Art Festival? As you know I’m crazy about music. Are there any activities I can take part in? Yours, Simon 注意： 1.涵盖所有要点，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范； 2.词数80词左右。邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 3.文中不得提及有关个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。 Dear Simon, I’m very happy to tell you about our school Art Festival. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope to meet you at the school Art Festival soon. Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Simon, I’m very happy to tell you about our school Art Festival. The school Art Festival will take place on January 18th. Students can choose and take part in different kinds of activities. Those who are interested in painting can go to the painting exhibition. There they can enjoy lots of wonderful pictures and works of art. Other students who enjoy dancing can join the dancing party. There will also be comedies played in the school hall. Since you are crazy about music, why not come and join the live concert show? The school band will play beautiful songs and you can sing with them. I’m sure you will have a good time. I hope to meet you at the school Art Festival soon. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作时要涵盖所有要点，包括艺术节的时间、活动以及Simon可以参加的活动，同时要注意语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范。 [写作步骤] 第一步，首先表达对于Simon对校园艺术节感兴趣的高兴之情，并引出下文要介绍的内容； 第二步，详细介绍艺术节的时间、活动安排以及Simon可以参加的活动； 第三步，总结全文，并表达期待在艺术节上与Simon见面的愿望。 [亮点词汇] ①take part in参加 ②enjoy oneself过得愉快 ③be crazy about对……着迷 [高分句型] ①Those who are interested in painting can go to the painting exhibition. (who引导定语从句) ②Since you are crazy about music, why not come and join the live concert show? (since引导原因状语从句) 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$