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2025-2026学年上学期七年级英语知识点梳理与巩固(北师大版2024)
Unit 1 Family书面表达
必备知识清单
单元写作指导
一、写作主题
(一)主题内涵
本单元写作要求以电子邮件的形式介绍自己的家庭。通过描述家庭成员的基本信息、性格特点、兴趣爱好等内容,向收件人展现自己家庭的独特风貌,增进彼此了解,同时锻炼用英语进行家庭相关话题表达的能力。
(二)审题要点
体裁:明确是写电子邮件,需注意邮件格式,开头要有称呼(Dear...),结尾要有署名(Yours sincerely/ Love, + 自己名字)。
人称:主要使用第一人称 “I” 来介绍自己的家庭情况,在描述家庭成员时会用到第三人称,如 “He/ She is...” 。
时态:介绍家庭成员的基本信息、性格爱好等通常用一般现在时,因为这些情况是常态。
内容:涵盖家庭成员的姓名、年龄、职业、性格特点、兴趣爱好等方面。要突出每个成员的特点,使介绍生动具体。
二、写作框架
电子邮件通常包含开头、正文和结尾三个部分。
(一)开头(Introduction)
简要说明写信目的,引出要介绍家庭的话题。
例如:Dear Ben, I'm so glad to hear that you will come to my home. Now, I want to introduce my family to you.
(二)正文(Main body)
分点详细介绍家庭成员。
介绍父亲:先介绍基本信息,如姓名、年龄、职业,再描述性格特点和兴趣爱好。
例如:My father's name is Jack. He is 40 years old. He is a doctor. He is very kind and always ready to help others. In his free time, he likes playing basketball.
介绍母亲:类似父亲的介绍方式。
例如:My mother is called Lucy. She is 38. She is a teacher. She is really patient and loves reading books.
介绍兄弟姐妹(若有):
例如:I have a little brother named Tom. He is 8 years old and in Grade 2. He is very lively and enjoys playing video games.
(三)结尾(Conclusion)
表达对收件人的期待,如希望对方也介绍自己的家庭等。
例如:That's a little about my family. I'm looking forward to hearing about your family. Love, [Your Name]
三、词汇句式
(一)词汇
1.家庭成员称呼
father/dad/daddy 父亲;例句:My dad is a hard - working man. 我爸爸是个勤劳的人。
mother/mom/mummy 母亲;例句:My mom cooks delicious meals every day. 我妈妈每天都做美味的饭菜。
sister 姐妹;例句:My sister is good at dancing. 我姐姐擅长跳舞。
brother 兄弟;例句:My little brother likes to play football. 我弟弟喜欢踢足球。
grandfather/grandpa 祖父;例句:My grandpa tells me interesting stories. 我爷爷给我讲有趣的故事。
grandmother/grandma 祖母;例句:My grandma loves gardening. 我奶奶喜欢园艺。
uncle 叔叔;舅舅;例句:My uncle is a businessman. 我叔叔是个商人。
aunt 阿姨;姑姑;例句:My aunt works in a hospital. 我姑姑在医院工作。
cousin 堂 / 表兄弟姐妹;例句:I often play with my cousin on weekends. 我周末经常和我的堂兄 / 弟 / 姐 / 妹一起玩。
职业
doctor 医生;例句:My father is a doctor and he helps many patients. 我父亲是医生,他帮助很多病人。
teacher 教师;例句:My mother is a teacher. She teaches English. 我妈妈是教师,她教英语。
worker 工人;例句:His uncle is a worker in a factory. 他叔叔是工厂里的工人。
businessman/businesswoman 商人;例句:My aunt is a successful businesswoman. 我姑姑是个成功的女商人。
driver 司机;例句:The driver drives the bus carefully. 司机小心地开着公交车。
farmer 农民;例句:My grandfather was a farmer before. 我爷爷以前是农民。
2.性格特点
kind 友善的;例句:My teacher is very kind to us. 我的老师对我们很友善。
friendly 友好的;例句:She is a friendly girl and has many friends. 她是个友好的女孩,有很多朋友。
patient 有耐心的;例句:My mother is always patient with me. 我妈妈对我总是很有耐心。
strict 严格的;例句:My father is strict with my study. 我父亲对我的学习要求严格。
funny 有趣的;例句:My brother is very funny and always makes us laugh. 我弟弟很有趣,总是逗我们笑。
active 活跃的;例句:The active boy likes all kinds of sports. 这个活跃的男孩喜欢各种运动。
3.兴趣爱好
like/love 喜欢;例句:I like reading books in my free time. 我在空闲时间喜欢读书。
enjoy 喜爱;例句:She enjoys listening to music. 她喜爱听音乐。
be fond of 喜欢;例句:My father is fond of fishing. 我父亲喜欢钓鱼。
hobby 爱好;例句:My hobby is collecting stamps. 我的爱好是集邮。
read 阅读;例句:He likes to read interesting stories. 他喜欢读有趣的故事。
watch 观看;例句:We often watch movies on weekends. 我们周末经常看电影。
play 玩;打(球等);例句:They play basketball after school. 他们放学后打篮球。
draw 画画;例句:My sister loves to draw pictures. 我姐姐喜欢画画。
sing 唱歌;例句:She can sing many English songs. 她会唱很多英文歌。
dance 跳舞;例句:The girl likes to dance to the music. 这个女孩喜欢随着音乐跳舞。
swim 游泳;例句:I often go swimming in summer. 我夏天经常去游泳。
run 跑步;例句:He runs every morning to keep fit. 他每天早上跑步保持健康。
cook 烹饪;例句:My mother likes to cook delicious food for us. 我妈妈喜欢为我们做美味的食物。
garden 从事园艺活动;例句:My grandmother gardens in the backyard. 我奶奶在后院从事园艺活动。
4.其他
age 年龄;例句:What's your age? 你多大了?
name 名字;例句:My name is Lily. 我的名字叫莉莉。
job 工作;职业;例句:What's your father's job? 你父亲的工作是什么?
family 家庭;家人;例句:I love my family very much. 我非常爱我的家人。
home 家;例句:We have a big and nice home. 我们有一个又大又漂亮的家。
happy 快乐的;例句:We are a happy family. 我们是一个快乐的家庭。
together 一起;例句:We often have dinner together. 我们经常一起吃晚餐。
(二)句式
1.介绍家庭成员基本信息
My father's name is... 我父亲的名字是……;例句:My father's name is David. 我父亲的名字是大卫。
My mother is called... 我母亲被叫做……;例句:My mother is called Mary. 我母亲被叫做玛丽。
He/She is... years old. 他 / 她…… 岁了;例句:She is 35 years old. 她 35 岁了。
My... is a... 我的…… 是一名……;例句:My uncle is a driver. 我的叔叔是一名司机。
2.描述性格特点
He/She is very... 他 / 她非常……;例句:He is very kind. 他非常友善。
My... is really... 我的…… 真的……;例句:My grandmother is really patient. 我的祖母真的很有耐心。
She/He is + adj. + to sb. 她 / 他对某人……;例句:She is friendly to everyone. 她对每个人都很友好。
3.表达兴趣爱好
He/She likes/loves + doing sth. 他 / 她喜欢做某事;例句:He likes playing football. 他喜欢踢足球。
My... enjoys + doing sth. 我的…… 喜爱做某事;例句:My sister enjoys reading novels. 我姐姐喜爱读小说。
My... is fond of + doing sth. 我的…… 喜欢做某事;例句:My father is fond of watching TV. 我父亲喜欢看电视。
One's hobby is + doing sth. 某人的爱好是做某事;例句:My hobby is dancing. 我的爱好是跳舞。
4.其他常用句式
There are... people in my family. 我家有…… 口人;例句:There are four people in my family. 我家有四口人。
They are... 他们是……;例句:They are my father, mother, sister and me. 他们是我的父亲、母亲、姐姐和我。
I love my family very much. 我非常爱我的家人;例句:I love my family very much because they care about me. 我非常爱我的家人,因为他们关心我。
We often... together. 我们经常一起……;例句:We often go for a walk together on weekends. 我们周末经常一起去散步。
My... and I both like... 我…… 和我都喜欢……;例句:My mother and I both like cooking. 我妈妈和我都喜欢烹饪。
My... is good at... 我的…… 擅长……;例句:My brother is good at math. 我弟弟擅长数学。
My... wants to... 我的…… 想要……;例句:My sister wants to be a singer. 我姐姐想成为一名歌手。
In my free time, I... 在我空闲时间,我……;例句:In my free time, I like to play the piano. 在我空闲时间,我喜欢弹钢琴。
On weekends, we usually... 周末,我们通常……;例句:On weekends, we usually watch movies at home. 周末,我们通常在家看电影。
My... always... 我的…… 总是……;例句:My father always gets up early. 我父亲总是很早起床。
My... sometimes... 我的…… 有时……;例句:My mother sometimes goes shopping alone. 我妈妈有时独自去购物。
I am lucky to have such a... family. 我很幸运有这样一个…… 的家庭;例句:I am lucky to have such a happy family. 我很幸运有这样一个幸福的家庭。
My family is full of... 我的家庭充满……;例句:My family is full of love. 我的家庭充满爱。
My... is the... in my family. 我的…… 是我家…… 的;例句:My grandfather is the oldest in my family. 我爷爷是我家年纪最大的。
My... and I have... in common. 我的…… 和我有…… 共同之处;例句:My sister and I have the same hobby. 我姐姐和我有相同的爱好。
I hope you can meet my family someday. 我希望有一天你能见到我的家人;例句:I hope you can meet my family someday and we can have a great time together. 我希望有一天你能见到我的家人,我们可以一起度过愉快的时光。
四、范文例析
Dear Ben,
I'm so excited to write to you and introduce my family. There are four people in my family, my father, my mother, my little brother and me.
My father is called John. He is 38 years old and he is a doctor. He is very kind - hearted and always ready to help his patients. In his free time, he loves playing badminton.
My mother's name is Emily. She is 36 and she works as a teacher. She is really patient, especially with her students. She enjoys reading books at home.
My little brother, Tom, is 6 years old. He is very lively and his hobby is watching cartoons.
I love my family very much because we always support each other. I hope you can meet them someday.
Yours,
Jack
【范文分析】
格式正确:开头有恰当的称呼 “Dear Ben”,结尾有署名 “Love, [Your Name]”,符合电子邮件格式要求。
结构清晰:开头点明写信目的是介绍家庭,正文分别介绍了父亲、母亲和弟弟的基本信息、职业、性格特点和兴趣爱好,结尾表达对家人的爱以及对对方的期待。
词汇运用恰当:使用了丰富的关于家庭成员称呼、职业、性格和爱好的词汇,如 “doctor”“kind - hearted”“lively”“enjoy reading” 等,使描述生动形象。
句式多样:运用了多种介绍人物的句式,如 “My father is called...”“He is... years old and he is a...”“She enjoys + doing sth.” 等,避免了句式的单一性。
五、优化策略
增加细节描写:在介绍家庭成员时,除了基本信息和常见特点,可以加入一些具体事例。比如介绍父亲乐于助人,可以说 “He once helped an old man find his way home in the heavy rain.” 介绍母亲耐心,可举例 “She spent hours teaching me how to ride a bike when I was young.” 这样能让人物形象更丰满。
运用连接词:在句子和段落之间适当使用连接词,如 “and”“but”“also”“besides” 等,使文章逻辑更连贯。例如,“My father is a doctor. And he is very busy every day.” “My mother likes reading. Besides, she also loves cooking.”
注意语法和拼写:完成写作后,仔细检查语法错误和单词拼写。注意第三人称单数形式的正确使用,如 “He likes...” 而不是 “He like...” 确保语法准确、拼写无误能提升作文的整体质量。
使用高级词汇和句式替换:在有把握的情况下,用一些稍微高级的词汇和句式替换常见表达。比如用 “be keen on” 替换 “like”,“My sister is keen on dancing.” 用 “It is + adj. + of sb. + to do sth.” 结构描述人物性格,“It is kind of my father to help others.” 这样能提升作文的档次。
突出家庭氛围:在描述家庭成员时,可以适当提及家庭成员之间的互动,展现家庭氛围。如 “We often have family dinners together and share our funny stories of the day.” 让读者能更好感受到家庭的温暖。
核心知识回顾
介绍家庭/家人的电子邮件范文示例
(一)
Dear Tom,
I'm so glad to write to you and introduce my family. I'm 12 years old and I live in a beautiful city. There are four people in my family, my parents, my little brother and I.
My father is a kind man. He is a doctor. He likes reading books in his free time. My mother is a teacher. She is always busy with her work, but she still manages to take good care of us. My little brother is only 6 years old. He is really cute and loves playing games.
We often have a great time together on weekends. We might go to the park for a picnic or just stay at home watching movies. I love my family very much.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Jerry
(二)
Dear friend,
Let me tell you about my family. I'm from a big family with six members: my grandparents, my parents, my sister and I.
My grandfather is a retired worker. He loves telling us stories about the old days. My grandmother is a wonderful cook. She always makes delicious meals for us. My father is a bus driver. He works hard every day. My mother is a housewife. She keeps our home clean and comfortable. My sister is a middle school student. She is good at drawing.
We have a lot of fun together. On holidays, we usually visit our relatives or go on short trips. I'm lucky to have such a lovely family.
Take care!
Yours,
Lily
(三)
Dear Jack,
I want to share my family with you. There are three people in my family, my parents and I.
My father is tall and he has short black hair. He is a manager in a company. He likes playing basketball in his spare time. My mother is a gentle lady. She works as a nurse. She loves gardening. She plants many beautiful flowers in our garden.
I am a Grade Seven student. I enjoy reading books and playing the piano. On weekends, we often have a family dinner and talk about our week. It's so warm. I love my family to the moon and back.
Hope to hear from you soon!
Yours,
Alice
(四
Dear Alex,
How are you? I'm writing to introduce my family. My family has five members, my parents, my two elder brothers and I.
My dad is a strong man. He is a construction worker. He always tells us to work hard. My mother is a kind-hearted woman. She is a tailor. She makes beautiful clothes. My elder brothers are both in high school. They are very smart and help me with my homework.
We often play board games together at home. We laugh a lot during the games. My family gives me so much love. I'm proud of my family.
Have a great day!
Yours,
Tom
(五)
Dear Jeff,
I'm excited to tell you about my family. There are four people in my family, my parents, my younger sister and I.
My father is a strict but loving man. He is an engineer. He likes watching football games. My mother is a caring person. She is a shop assistant. She loves cooking. My little sister is in Grade Four. She is full of energy and loves dancing.
On weekends, we sometimes go to the zoo. We watch different animals there. It's so much fun. I really cherish my family.
Write back soon!
Yours,
John
综合实战演练
1.假如你是李华(Li Hua),请给你在美国的网友David写一封电子邮件,介绍一下你的家庭生活(重点围绕 a family moment这个主题)。
要求如下:
1. 邮件内容健康。
2. 内容至少包括:
1)表达关心问候;
2)你的家庭成员;
3)你的家庭生活片段(family moment);
4)你的家庭生活感受;
3. 不能出现你的学校名称和你的真实姓名。
4. 词数不少于80。
Dear David,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
2.假如你是李明,你远在英国的笔友Mike下个月要来成都交流学习并住在你家。请写一封e-mail,介绍一些自己的情况。
提示:
1.介绍一下你的个人情况 (包含名字、年龄、爱好等);
2.简单介绍一下家庭成员 (包含外貌、性格);至少两个成员
3.介绍一下你的房间 (包含物品的位置,用上There be结构),至少两个物品。
要求:
1.语言流畅,语法正确,书写规范。
2.内容根据所给的信息可适当发挥。
3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名及其他相关信息,否则不予评分。
4.不少于60词。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总字数。
Dear Mike,
I’ m happy you will live with us soon. Now let me tell you about myself and my family first._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Ming
3.朋友是我们人生旅途中的温暖陪伴。假如你是亚明,你远在加拿大的新朋友Emma给你发来邮件,请你根据邮件内容写一封邮件进行回复。
Dear Yaming,
How are you doing?
I want to know more about you. Can you tell me about your family? What is your school like? And which place do you like best in your school? Write to me.
Yours,
Emma
注意:
(1)短文必须回复邮件中的所有问题,可适当发挥。
(2)短文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名和地名。
(3)词数60个左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Emma,
I am happy to get your e-mail.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Write to tell me more about you, please.
Yours,
Yaming
4.假如你是李辉,你远在英国的笔友Mike下个月要来济南交流学习。并住在你家,请根据下面提示,写一封邮件。
要点提示:
1. 介绍你的个人情况;
2. 介绍你的家庭成员。
注意事项:
1. 短文不少于80词。
2. 短文中不得出现真实校名、姓名。
3. 开头已给出,不计入字数。
Dear Mike,
I’m happy to hear that you will come to Jinan.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5.假如你是李华,你的英国朋友Coco想了解你的家庭日常活动情况。请你根据以下思维导图, 写一封电子邮件,向他介绍你的家庭日常活动情况。
要求:
1. 包含提示内容,可适当增加细节;
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名;
3. 不少于60词。开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Coco,
I am writing to tell you something about my family’s daily activities.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
6.假如你是Bob,请根据邮件的内容和所给提示,给Peter写一封邮件回复他的问题。
Dear Bob,
How are you doing? I want to know more about your family. Can you tell me? How many people are there in your family? Who are they and what are they like? What are their hobbies? Do you love your family? Why?
Look forward to your reply.
Yours,
Peter
提示:
1. 我有一个大家庭。爸爸、妈妈……
2. 爸爸喜欢钓鱼,妈妈喜欢园艺……
写作要求:
1. 邮件应包括所有要点,可适当发挥;
2. 字迹工整,语言精练,表达准确,条理清晰;
3. 词数:至少60词,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
How are you doing these days? __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours,
Bob
7.假设你是来自America 的Mary,请写一封e-mail,给你的朋友Tony介绍自己的情况,具体内容见表格。
Name
Mary
Age
Thirteen
Class
Grade 7, Class 4
School
NO.7 Middle School
Sports
Ping-pong, tennis
Favourite
Food and drink
Apples, rice, hamburgers and milk
Family
Father (worker) mother( teacher)
要求:
(1)包含所提供的信息,条理清晰,语句通顺,语法正确。
(2)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。
(3)字数不少于60词。信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Tony,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Mary
8.Jack Miller是一名来自美国格林中学的初中生。他将来到重庆育才中学做交换生,并且寄宿在你家。请你写一封电子邮件给Jack,并附上两张照片,简单介绍自己的信息、家庭和房间的情况,并对他表示欢迎。
Chongqing Yucai Secondary School
First name: Xiaozhi
Last name: Tao
Age(年龄): 13
Phone number: 257—8900
要求:1. 词数60—80词,文章开头和结尾都已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 内容包含图片所给信息,可适当发挥;
3. 卷面整洁、书写工整。
参考要点:1. 根据图片信息介绍自己(姓名、年龄、电话号码……);
2. 根据图片信息介绍家人;
3. 根据图片信息介绍房间。
Dear Jack,
You are coming to Chongqing Yucai Secondary School and live in my home. I’m very happy.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I really hope to see you soon!
Yours,
Tao Xiaozhi
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2025-2026学年上学期七年级英语知识点梳理与巩固(北师大版2024)
Unit 1 Family书面表达
必备知识清单
单元写作指导
一、写作主题
(一)主题内涵
本单元写作要求以电子邮件的形式介绍自己的家庭。通过描述家庭成员的基本信息、性格特点、兴趣爱好等内容,向收件人展现自己家庭的独特风貌,增进彼此了解,同时锻炼用英语进行家庭相关话题表达的能力。
(二)审题要点
体裁:明确是写电子邮件,需注意邮件格式,开头要有称呼(Dear...),结尾要有署名(Yours sincerely/ Love, + 自己名字)。
人称:主要使用第一人称 “I” 来介绍自己的家庭情况,在描述家庭成员时会用到第三人称,如 “He/ She is...” 。
时态:介绍家庭成员的基本信息、性格爱好等通常用一般现在时,因为这些情况是常态。
内容:涵盖家庭成员的姓名、年龄、职业、性格特点、兴趣爱好等方面。要突出每个成员的特点,使介绍生动具体。
二、写作框架
电子邮件通常包含开头、正文和结尾三个部分。
(一)开头(Introduction)
简要说明写信目的,引出要介绍家庭的话题。
例如:Dear Ben, I'm so glad to hear that you will come to my home. Now, I want to introduce my family to you.
(二)正文(Main body)
分点详细介绍家庭成员。
介绍父亲:先介绍基本信息,如姓名、年龄、职业,再描述性格特点和兴趣爱好。
例如:My father's name is Jack. He is 40 years old. He is a doctor. He is very kind and always ready to help others. In his free time, he likes playing basketball.
介绍母亲:类似父亲的介绍方式。
例如:My mother is called Lucy. She is 38. She is a teacher. She is really patient and loves reading books.
介绍兄弟姐妹(若有):
例如:I have a little brother named Tom. He is 8 years old and in Grade 2. He is very lively and enjoys playing video games.
(三)结尾(Conclusion)
表达对收件人的期待,如希望对方也介绍自己的家庭等。
例如:That's a little about my family. I'm looking forward to hearing about your family. Love, [Your Name]
三、词汇句式
(一)词汇
1.家庭成员称呼
father/dad/daddy 父亲;例句:My dad is a hard - working man. 我爸爸是个勤劳的人。
mother/mom/mummy 母亲;例句:My mom cooks delicious meals every day. 我妈妈每天都做美味的饭菜。
sister 姐妹;例句:My sister is good at dancing. 我姐姐擅长跳舞。
brother 兄弟;例句:My little brother likes to play football. 我弟弟喜欢踢足球。
grandfather/grandpa 祖父;例句:My grandpa tells me interesting stories. 我爷爷给我讲有趣的故事。
grandmother/grandma 祖母;例句:My grandma loves gardening. 我奶奶喜欢园艺。
uncle 叔叔;舅舅;例句:My uncle is a businessman. 我叔叔是个商人。
aunt 阿姨;姑姑;例句:My aunt works in a hospital. 我姑姑在医院工作。
cousin 堂 / 表兄弟姐妹;例句:I often play with my cousin on weekends. 我周末经常和我的堂兄 / 弟 / 姐 / 妹一起玩。
职业
doctor 医生;例句:My father is a doctor and he helps many patients. 我父亲是医生,他帮助很多病人。
teacher 教师;例句:My mother is a teacher. She teaches English. 我妈妈是教师,她教英语。
worker 工人;例句:His uncle is a worker in a factory. 他叔叔是工厂里的工人。
businessman/businesswoman 商人;例句:My aunt is a successful businesswoman. 我姑姑是个成功的女商人。
driver 司机;例句:The driver drives the bus carefully. 司机小心地开着公交车。
farmer 农民;例句:My grandfather was a farmer before. 我爷爷以前是农民。
2.性格特点
kind 友善的;例句:My teacher is very kind to us. 我的老师对我们很友善。
friendly 友好的;例句:She is a friendly girl and has many friends. 她是个友好的女孩,有很多朋友。
patient 有耐心的;例句:My mother is always patient with me. 我妈妈对我总是很有耐心。
strict 严格的;例句:My father is strict with my study. 我父亲对我的学习要求严格。
funny 有趣的;例句:My brother is very funny and always makes us laugh. 我弟弟很有趣,总是逗我们笑。
active 活跃的;例句:The active boy likes all kinds of sports. 这个活跃的男孩喜欢各种运动。
3.兴趣爱好
like/love 喜欢;例句:I like reading books in my free time. 我在空闲时间喜欢读书。
enjoy 喜爱;例句:She enjoys listening to music. 她喜爱听音乐。
be fond of 喜欢;例句:My father is fond of fishing. 我父亲喜欢钓鱼。
hobby 爱好;例句:My hobby is collecting stamps. 我的爱好是集邮。
read 阅读;例句:He likes to read interesting stories. 他喜欢读有趣的故事。
watch 观看;例句:We often watch movies on weekends. 我们周末经常看电影。
play 玩;打(球等);例句:They play basketball after school. 他们放学后打篮球。
draw 画画;例句:My sister loves to draw pictures. 我姐姐喜欢画画。
sing 唱歌;例句:She can sing many English songs. 她会唱很多英文歌。
dance 跳舞;例句:The girl likes to dance to the music. 这个女孩喜欢随着音乐跳舞。
swim 游泳;例句:I often go swimming in summer. 我夏天经常去游泳。
run 跑步;例句:He runs every morning to keep fit. 他每天早上跑步保持健康。
cook 烹饪;例句:My mother likes to cook delicious food for us. 我妈妈喜欢为我们做美味的食物。
garden 从事园艺活动;例句:My grandmother gardens in the backyard. 我奶奶在后院从事园艺活动。
4.其他
age 年龄;例句:What's your age? 你多大了?
name 名字;例句:My name is Lily. 我的名字叫莉莉。
job 工作;职业;例句:What's your father's job? 你父亲的工作是什么?
family 家庭;家人;例句:I love my family very much. 我非常爱我的家人。
home 家;例句:We have a big and nice home. 我们有一个又大又漂亮的家。
happy 快乐的;例句:We are a happy family. 我们是一个快乐的家庭。
together 一起;例句:We often have dinner together. 我们经常一起吃晚餐。
(二)句式
1.介绍家庭成员基本信息
My father's name is... 我父亲的名字是……;例句:My father's name is David. 我父亲的名字是大卫。
My mother is called... 我母亲被叫做……;例句:My mother is called Mary. 我母亲被叫做玛丽。
He/She is... years old. 他 / 她…… 岁了;例句:She is 35 years old. 她 35 岁了。
My... is a... 我的…… 是一名……;例句:My uncle is a driver. 我的叔叔是一名司机。
2.描述性格特点
He/She is very... 他 / 她非常……;例句:He is very kind. 他非常友善。
My... is really... 我的…… 真的……;例句:My grandmother is really patient. 我的祖母真的很有耐心。
She/He is + adj. + to sb. 她 / 他对某人……;例句:She is friendly to everyone. 她对每个人都很友好。
3.表达兴趣爱好
He/She likes/loves + doing sth. 他 / 她喜欢做某事;例句:He likes playing football. 他喜欢踢足球。
My... enjoys + doing sth. 我的…… 喜爱做某事;例句:My sister enjoys reading novels. 我姐姐喜爱读小说。
My... is fond of + doing sth. 我的…… 喜欢做某事;例句:My father is fond of watching TV. 我父亲喜欢看电视。
One's hobby is + doing sth. 某人的爱好是做某事;例句:My hobby is dancing. 我的爱好是跳舞。
4.其他常用句式
There are... people in my family. 我家有…… 口人;例句:There are four people in my family. 我家有四口人。
They are... 他们是……;例句:They are my father, mother, sister and me. 他们是我的父亲、母亲、姐姐和我。
I love my family very much. 我非常爱我的家人;例句:I love my family very much because they care about me. 我非常爱我的家人,因为他们关心我。
We often... together. 我们经常一起……;例句:We often go for a walk together on weekends. 我们周末经常一起去散步。
My... and I both like... 我…… 和我都喜欢……;例句:My mother and I both like cooking. 我妈妈和我都喜欢烹饪。
My... is good at... 我的…… 擅长……;例句:My brother is good at math. 我弟弟擅长数学。
My... wants to... 我的…… 想要……;例句:My sister wants to be a singer. 我姐姐想成为一名歌手。
In my free time, I... 在我空闲时间,我……;例句:In my free time, I like to play the piano. 在我空闲时间,我喜欢弹钢琴。
On weekends, we usually... 周末,我们通常……;例句:On weekends, we usually watch movies at home. 周末,我们通常在家看电影。
My... always... 我的…… 总是……;例句:My father always gets up early. 我父亲总是很早起床。
My... sometimes... 我的…… 有时……;例句:My mother sometimes goes shopping alone. 我妈妈有时独自去购物。
I am lucky to have such a... family. 我很幸运有这样一个…… 的家庭;例句:I am lucky to have such a happy family. 我很幸运有这样一个幸福的家庭。
My family is full of... 我的家庭充满……;例句:My family is full of love. 我的家庭充满爱。
My... is the... in my family. 我的…… 是我家…… 的;例句:My grandfather is the oldest in my family. 我爷爷是我家年纪最大的。
My... and I have... in common. 我的…… 和我有…… 共同之处;例句:My sister and I have the same hobby. 我姐姐和我有相同的爱好。
I hope you can meet my family someday. 我希望有一天你能见到我的家人;例句:I hope you can meet my family someday and we can have a great time together. 我希望有一天你能见到我的家人,我们可以一起度过愉快的时光。
四、范文例析
Dear Ben,
I'm so excited to write to you and introduce my family. There are four people in my family, my father, my mother, my little brother and me.
My father is called John. He is 38 years old and he is a doctor. He is very kind - hearted and always ready to help his patients. In his free time, he loves playing badminton.
My mother's name is Emily. She is 36 and she works as a teacher. She is really patient, especially with her students. She enjoys reading books at home.
My little brother, Tom, is 6 years old. He is very lively and his hobby is watching cartoons.
I love my family very much because we always support each other. I hope you can meet them someday.
Yours,
Jack
【范文分析】
格式正确:开头有恰当的称呼 “Dear Ben”,结尾有署名 “Love, [Your Name]”,符合电子邮件格式要求。
结构清晰:开头点明写信目的是介绍家庭,正文分别介绍了父亲、母亲和弟弟的基本信息、职业、性格特点和兴趣爱好,结尾表达对家人的爱以及对对方的期待。
词汇运用恰当:使用了丰富的关于家庭成员称呼、职业、性格和爱好的词汇,如 “doctor”“kind - hearted”“lively”“enjoy reading” 等,使描述生动形象。
句式多样:运用了多种介绍人物的句式,如 “My father is called...”“He is... years old and he is a...”“She enjoys + doing sth.” 等,避免了句式的单一性。
五、优化策略
增加细节描写:在介绍家庭成员时,除了基本信息和常见特点,可以加入一些具体事例。比如介绍父亲乐于助人,可以说 “He once helped an old man find his way home in the heavy rain.” 介绍母亲耐心,可举例 “She spent hours teaching me how to ride a bike when I was young.” 这样能让人物形象更丰满。
运用连接词:在句子和段落之间适当使用连接词,如 “and”“but”“also”“besides” 等,使文章逻辑更连贯。例如,“My father is a doctor. And he is very busy every day.” “My mother likes reading. Besides, she also loves cooking.”
注意语法和拼写:完成写作后,仔细检查语法错误和单词拼写。注意第三人称单数形式的正确使用,如 “He likes...” 而不是 “He like...” 确保语法准确、拼写无误能提升作文的整体质量。
使用高级词汇和句式替换:在有把握的情况下,用一些稍微高级的词汇和句式替换常见表达。比如用 “be keen on” 替换 “like”,“My sister is keen on dancing.” 用 “It is + adj. + of sb. + to do sth.” 结构描述人物性格,“It is kind of my father to help others.” 这样能提升作文的档次。
突出家庭氛围:在描述家庭成员时,可以适当提及家庭成员之间的互动,展现家庭氛围。如 “We often have family dinners together and share our funny stories of the day.” 让读者能更好感受到家庭的温暖。
核心知识回顾
介绍家庭/家人的电子邮件范文示例
(一)
Dear Tom,
I'm so glad to write to you and introduce my family. I'm 12 years old and I live in a beautiful city. There are four people in my family, my parents, my little brother and I.
My father is a kind man. He is a doctor. He likes reading books in his free time. My mother is a teacher. She is always busy with her work, but she still manages to take good care of us. My little brother is only 6 years old. He is really cute and loves playing games.
We often have a great time together on weekends. We might go to the park for a picnic or just stay at home watching movies. I love my family very much.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Jerry
(二)
Dear friend,
Let me tell you about my family. I'm from a big family with six members: my grandparents, my parents, my sister and I.
My grandfather is a retired worker. He loves telling us stories about the old days. My grandmother is a wonderful cook. She always makes delicious meals for us. My father is a bus driver. He works hard every day. My mother is a housewife. She keeps our home clean and comfortable. My sister is a middle school student. She is good at drawing.
We have a lot of fun together. On holidays, we usually visit our relatives or go on short trips. I'm lucky to have such a lovely family.
Take care!
Yours,
Lily
(三)
Dear Jack,
I want to share my family with you. There are three people in my family, my parents and I.
My father is tall and he has short black hair. He is a manager in a company. He likes playing basketball in his spare time. My mother is a gentle lady. She works as a nurse. She loves gardening. She plants many beautiful flowers in our garden.
I am a Grade Seven student. I enjoy reading books and playing the piano. On weekends, we often have a family dinner and talk about our week. It's so warm. I love my family to the moon and back.
Hope to hear from you soon!
Yours,
Alice
(四
Dear Alex,
How are you? I'm writing to introduce my family. My family has five members, my parents, my two elder brothers and I.
My dad is a strong man. He is a construction worker. He always tells us to work hard. My mother is a kind-hearted woman. She is a tailor. She makes beautiful clothes. My elder brothers are both in high school. They are very smart and help me with my homework.
We often play board games together at home. We laugh a lot during the games. My family gives me so much love. I'm proud of my family.
Have a great day!
Yours,
Tom
(五)
Dear Jeff,
I'm excited to tell you about my family. There are four people in my family, my parents, my younger sister and I.
My father is a strict but loving man. He is an engineer. He likes watching football games. My mother is a caring person. She is a shop assistant. She loves cooking. My little sister is in Grade Four. She is full of energy and loves dancing.
On weekends, we sometimes go to the zoo. We watch different animals there. It's so much fun. I really cherish my family.
Write back soon!
Yours,
John
综合实战演练
1.假如你是李华(Li Hua),请给你在美国的网友David写一封电子邮件,介绍一下你的家庭生活(重点围绕 a family moment这个主题)。
要求如下:
1. 邮件内容健康。
2. 内容至少包括:
1)表达关心问候;
2)你的家庭成员;
3)你的家庭生活片段(family moment);
4)你的家庭生活感受;
3. 不能出现你的学校名称和你的真实姓名。
4. 词数不少于80。
Dear David,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
2.假如你是李明,你远在英国的笔友Mike下个月要来成都交流学习并住在你家。请写一封e-mail,介绍一些自己的情况。
提示:
1.介绍一下你的个人情况 (包含名字、年龄、爱好等);
2.简单介绍一下家庭成员 (包含外貌、性格);至少两个成员
3.介绍一下你的房间 (包含物品的位置,用上There be结构),至少两个物品。
要求:
1.语言流畅,语法正确,书写规范。
2.内容根据所给的信息可适当发挥。
3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名及其他相关信息,否则不予评分。
4.不少于60词。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总字数。
Dear Mike,
I’ m happy you will live with us soon. Now let me tell you about myself and my family first._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Ming
3.朋友是我们人生旅途中的温暖陪伴。假如你是亚明,你远在加拿大的新朋友Emma给你发来邮件,请你根据邮件内容写一封邮件进行回复。
Dear Yaming,
How are you doing?
I want to know more about you. Can you tell me about your family? What is your school like? And which place do you like best in your school? Write to me.
Yours,
Emma
注意:
(1)短文必须回复邮件中的所有问题,可适当发挥。
(2)短文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名和地名。
(3)词数60个左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Emma,
I am happy to get your e-mail.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Write to tell me more about you, please.
Yours,
Yaming
4.假如你是李辉,你远在英国的笔友Mike下个月要来济南交流学习。并住在你家,请根据下面提示,写一封邮件。
要点提示:
1. 介绍你的个人情况;
2. 介绍你的家庭成员。
注意事项:
1. 短文不少于80词。
2. 短文中不得出现真实校名、姓名。
3. 开头已给出,不计入字数。
Dear Mike,
I’m happy to hear that you will come to Jinan.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5.假如你是李华,你的英国朋友Coco想了解你的家庭日常活动情况。请你根据以下思维导图, 写一封电子邮件,向他介绍你的家庭日常活动情况。
要求:
1. 包含提示内容,可适当增加细节;
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名;
3. 不少于60词。开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Coco,
I am writing to tell you something about my family’s daily activities.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
6.假如你是Bob,请根据邮件的内容和所给提示,给Peter写一封邮件回复他的问题。
Dear Bob,
How are you doing? I want to know more about your family. Can you tell me? How many people are there in your family? Who are they and what are they like? What are their hobbies? Do you love your family? Why?
Look forward to your reply.
Yours,
Peter
提示:
1. 我有一个大家庭。爸爸、妈妈……
2. 爸爸喜欢钓鱼,妈妈喜欢园艺……
写作要求:
1. 邮件应包括所有要点,可适当发挥;
2. 字迹工整,语言精练,表达准确,条理清晰;
3. 词数:至少60词,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
How are you doing these days? __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours,
Bob
7.假设你是来自America 的Mary,请写一封e-mail,给你的朋友Tony介绍自己的情况,具体内容见表格。
Name
Mary
Age
Thirteen
Class
Grade 7, Class 4
School
NO.7 Middle School
Sports
Ping-pong, tennis
Favourite
Food and drink
Apples, rice, hamburgers and milk
Family
Father (worker) mother( teacher)
要求:
(1)包含所提供的信息,条理清晰,语句通顺,语法正确。
(2)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。
(3)字数不少于60词。信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Tony,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Mary
8.Jack Miller是一名来自美国格林中学的初中生。他将来到重庆育才中学做交换生,并且寄宿在你家。请你写一封电子邮件给Jack,并附上两张照片,简单介绍自己的信息、家庭和房间的情况,并对他表示欢迎。
Chongqing Yucai Secondary School
First name: Xiaozhi
Last name: Tao
Age(年龄): 13
Phone number: 257—8900
要求:1. 词数60—80词,文章开头和结尾都已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 内容包含图片所给信息,可适当发挥;
3. 卷面整洁、书写工整。
参考要点:1. 根据图片信息介绍自己(姓名、年龄、电话号码……);
2. 根据图片信息介绍家人;
3. 根据图片信息介绍房间。
Dear Jack,
You are coming to Chongqing Yucai Secondary School and live in my home. I’m very happy.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I really hope to see you soon!
Yours,
Tao Xiaozhi
参考答案
1.
Dear David,
How is it going? I am so happy to talk with you again. Let me tell something about my family life. There are 4 people in my family. They are my father, mother, sister and I. We all love sports. My father likes playing table tennis. I love playing football. My mother is good at playing tennis and my sister is a good swimmer. Every weekend we go out to do sports in the morning. We often talk about something interesting about sports at lunch time or dinner time. From Monday to Friday, we often share something fun in study or work. We enjoy every family moment every day. I love my family and the nice family moment. I am very happy to be with my family.
David, can you tell me something about your family moment?
Yours,
Li Hua
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,不要遗漏信息,可适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,问候对方;
第二步,介绍自己的家庭成员以及家庭生活片段;
第三步,书写结语,表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①like doing sth.喜欢做某事
②be good at擅长
③talk about谈论
[高分句型]
①There are 4 people in my family.(there be句型)
②My mother is good at playing tennis and my sister is a good swimmer.(and连接并列成分)
2.
Dear Mike,
I’m happy that you’ll live with us soon. Now let me tell you something about myself and my family first.
My name is Li Ming. Li is my last name and Ming is my first name. I am 13 years old. There are five people in my family. They are my parents, my sister, my brother and me.
This is my room. There is a bed and a desk in it. My family photo is on the wall. My clock and my books are on the desk. My schoolbag is on the bed. You can see a ball under the desk. I love my room very much.
Please write to me soon and tell me about you.
Yours,
Li Ming
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己的个人信息;
第二步,介绍自己的家庭情况;
第三步,介绍房间布局。
[亮点词汇]
① tell sb sth 告诉某人某事
② on the desk 在书桌上
③ write to sb 给某人写信
[高分句型]
① Now let me tell you something about myself and my family first.(祈使句)
② There are five people in my family.(there be句型)
3.One possible version:
Dear Emma,
I am happy to get your e-mail. I live in Zhengzhou with my family. I have a big family. They are my grandparents, my parents, my brother and me. We all love sports. My grandparents like walking. My parents like playing tennis. My brother and I like playing ping-pong. We always have fun together.
I’m a new student in Grade 7. My school is big and beautiful. There are many modem buildings in my school. My favourite place is the school library. Because I like reading very much. I often read books there after school.
Write to tell me more about you, please.
Yours,
Yaming
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,很高兴收到对方邮件;
第二步,具体介绍自己的家庭成员信息;
第三步,书写结语,期待收到回复。
[亮点词汇]
①like doing sth喜欢做某事
②be happy to do很高兴做某事
[高分句型]
There are many modem buildings in my school. (there be句型)
4.
Dear Mike,
I’m happy to hear that you will come to Jinan. I invite you to live in my home. Now I introduce my family to you.
I am a middle school student. I like playing sports in my free time. There are four people in my family. My father is a doctor. My mother is a teacher. I have a brother. He likes playing basketball with me on weekends.
I believe you will have a great time if you live with us.
Yours
Li Hui
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件。
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”。
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中你的个人情况和介绍你的家人的要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。借用“你远在英国的笔友Mike下个月要来济南交流学习。并住在你家,请根据下面提示,写一封邮件。”来引出重点介绍的内容;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“你的个人情况、你的家人等”几个方面重点介绍你的个人情况和你的家人的具体情况;
第三步,书写结语,表达“我相信如果你和我们住在一起,你会过得很愉快的”的观点。
[亮点词汇]
①invite sb to do sth邀请某人做某事;
②introduce…to…向……介绍……;
③like doing sth喜欢做某事;
④have a great time玩得高兴。
[高分句型]
①There are four people in my family. (“there be”句型)
②He likes playing basketball with me on weekends. (动名词作宾语)
5.
Dear Coco,
I am writing to tell you something about my family’s daily activities. We often go shopping together on weekends, which is a great way to relax and enjoy each other’s company. Sometimes, we also go on a picnic in the park. These activities help us have fun and know each other better. I always feel happy and find these moments meaningful.
How was yours? I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇电子邮件;
②时态:主要时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述,适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步:表明写作意图。借用“我写信是想告诉您一些有关我家人的日常活动的信息。”来引出重点介绍的内容。
第二步:具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——具体的日常活动、意义及感受等均要一一阐述。
第三步:书写结语。表达“我期待您的回复。”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①go shopping购物
②go on a picnic去野餐
③have fun玩得开心
[高分句型]
①We often go shopping together on weekends, which is a great way to relax and enjoy each other’s company. (定语从句)
②These activities help us have fun and know each other better. (and表并列)
6.
Dear Peter,
How are you doing these days? I am glad to share about my family with you. I have a big family with six members. There are my father, mother, two sisters, my brother, and me. My father is a kind man who loves fishing, and my mother enjoys gardening. My sisters are both in high school and they love reading books. My brother is younger and he likes playing soccer. I love my family because they are supportive and caring. We always spend time together on weekends.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Bob
[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇电子邮件;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:根据所给提示和邮件的问题完成写作,注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍家里有多少人以及他们是谁;
第二步,简单介绍家人的爱好情况;
第三步,最后表达对家人的爱。
[亮点词汇]
① love doing sth爱做某事
② enjoy doing sth喜欢做某事
③ spend time...on在……上花时间
[高分句型]
My father is a kind man who loves fishing, and my mother enjoys gardening. (定语从句)
7.
Dear Tony,
I am Mary. I come from America. I’m 13 years old. I study in NO.7 Middle School. I’m in Grade 7, Class 4. I like playing ping-pong and tennis best because they’re easy for me. My favorite food and drink are apples, rice, hamburgers and milk. My father is a worker and my mother is a teacher. I love them very much.
Yours,
Mary
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,简单介绍个人和学校班级信息;
第二步,介绍个人喜欢的运动、食物和饮料;
第三步,介绍父母的职业。
[亮点词汇]
①come from来自
②like doing sth.喜欢做某事
③like sth. best最喜欢某物
[高分句型]
I like playing ping-pong and tennis best because they’re easy for me.(because引导的原因状语从句)
8.
Dear Jack,
You are coming to Chongqing Yucai Secondary School and live in my home. I’m very happy. My name is Tao Xiaozhi. I am 13 years old. I am in Class 5, Grade 7. I’d like to introduce my family to you. There are three people in my family. They are my parents and I. My telephone number is 257-8900. This is my room. There is a bed, a desk, a bookcase and a chair in it. There are two pictures on the wall. My computer is on the desk. My quilt is on the bed. A cell phone is on my bed, too. You can see some books in the bookcase. The clock is on the bookcase. I love my room very much.
I really hope to see you soon!
Yours,
Tao Xiaozhi
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示,并适当添加细节,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍作自我介绍;
第二步,介绍家庭情况;
第三步,介绍自己的房间。
[亮点词汇]
①live in住在
②would like to do sth.想做某事。
③on the wall在墙上
④on the bed在床上
[高分句型]
There are three people in my family.(there be句型)
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