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英 语
七年级上册 LJ
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Unit 7 Avoid Danger, Keep Safe
A 课时同步训练
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Section B
How can we avoid being
hurt?
Period 4 2a—2b(大单元话题与写作)
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写作
第1阶 高分词句储备
一、话题词汇
1.避免;防止 _______
2.不小心的 __________
3.事故;意外 __________
4.严重地;严肃地 ___________
5.检查;查看 _______
6.遭受电击 _____________
avoid
careless
accident
seriously
check
get shocked
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二、佳句仿写
7.【教材原句】Also, make sure you stay away from electrical outlets.
(make sure+宾语从句)
→仿写:为了安全起见,你一定要戴上头盔。
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Make sure you wear your helmet for safety.
【解析】知识拓展
make sure意为“确保”。
8.【教材原句】How can we avoid being hurt?(avoid doing sth)
→仿写:学生应避免在网上分享个人(personal)信息,以保护自己的安全。
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Students should avoid sharing personal information online to protect
their safety.
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9.【教材原句】Peter was excited to try out his new skateboard.(be+adj.+to do…)
→仿写:昨晚找到这些火柴我们很开心。
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We were glad/happy to find these matches last night.
10.【教材原句】It took Peter a moment to catch his breath.(It takes sb some
time to do sth)
→仿写:在骑自行车前,戴上头盔花费你几秒钟(second)的时间。
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It takes you a few seconds to put on your helmet before riding your
bike.
【解析】知识拓展
it takes sb some time to do sth意为“做某事花费某人一些时间”。
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第2阶 经典范文模版
The winter holiday is coming.We students should learn to protect ourselves
and keep safe during the winter holiday. (交代背景) Here are some
suggestions.
We should pay attention to buses, cars and traffic lights when we are out.
(户外安全) Also, try to eat healthy food, such as tomatoes, carrots,
eggs and apples. Don’t eat too much fast food although it’s delicious.. .
(饮食安全) It’s not good for our health.Another thing is to be careful when
making friends online. Don’t meet strangers alone. (网络交友安全) If we have
any problems,we can ask the policemen and parents for help (遇到问题时应如
何解决).
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In a word, it’s very important for us to keep safe during the winter
holiday. (结论)
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第3阶 高分范文赏析
学校安全教育旨在把以生命为本的意识埋进青少年心灵深处。 假定你们学校
英语报正在开展题为“How to Keep Safe in Daily Life”的征文活动,请根据要点
提示写一篇短文投稿。
要点:
(1)遵守交通规则;
(2)不吃垃圾食品;不去河里游泳;
(3)注意心理健康 (mental health),积极锻炼。
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要求:
(1)所写内容必须包括提供的所有信息,并适当发挥;
(2)文章词数80左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
(3)语义通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范;
(4)文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。
How to Keep Safe in Daily Life
Recently, people have paid more attention to teenagers’ safety.____
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第一步 审
体 裁:说明文
时 态:以一般现在时为主
人 称:以第一人称为主
内容要点:根据要点提示及命题给征文投稿
写作框架:总——分——总
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第二步 列
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How to Keep Safe in Daily Life
Recently, people have paid more
attention to teenagers’ safety.Here are
some suggestions about how to keep safe
in our daily life. ①点明主题,引出下文。
②使用First、Second、Third、What’s
more、Lastly和All in All,使文章层
次分明。
③用obey the traffic rules、never run
after、exercise regularly等动词短语说
明安全建议,清楚明了。
④用shouldn’t和Make sure说明安全规
则。
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First , we should obey the traffic
rules .When the traffic lights are red,
we shouldn’t cross the road.Second
we should pay attention to food
safety.Make sure not to eat too much
junk food.Third ,when we go upstairs
or downstairs, we should keep to the
right and never run after each other. ①点明主题,引出下文。
②使用First、Second、Third、What’s
more、Lastly和All in All,使文章层
次分明。
③用obey the traffic rules、never run
after、exercise regularly等动词短语说
明安全建议,清楚明了。
④用shouldn’t和Make sure说明安全规
则。
续表
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What’s more , remember not to swim
in the river. It’s dangerous.Lastly , we
should pay attention to mental health.
And we should exercise regularly to
keep fit.
All in all , safety must come first. ①点明主题,引出下文。
②使用First、Second、Third、What’s
more、Lastly和All in All,使文章层
次分明。
③用obey the traffic rules、never run
after、exercise regularly等动词短语说
明安全建议,清楚明了。
④用shouldn’t和Make sure说明安全规
则。
本文结构紧凑且具备条理性,值得我们学习。
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第4阶 实战演练
在生活中,我们可能会遇到一些危险或灾难,如果我们有良好的安全意识和
自救常识,就可以保护自己,远离危险。为进一步提高广大师生的安全意识,阳
光中学英语俱乐部正在举办主题为“保护自己,远离危险”的英文演讲比赛。假如
你是该校学生李威,请你以“Away from Danger”为题,根据以下思维导图写一份
80词左右的英文演讲稿参加比赛。
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注意事项:
(1)演讲稿须根据思维导图自拟,要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意;
(2)思维导图中所给内容为非限定性内容,仅供参考;
(3)词数80左右,演讲稿的首尾已给出,不计入总词数;
(4)演讲稿中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息;
Away from Danger
Good afternoon, everyone. I’m Li Wei. It’s a great honour for me to speak
here.
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That’s all for my speech. Thank you.
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【参考范文】
Away from Danger
Good afternoon,everyone.I’m Li Wei.It’s a great honour for me to
speak here.
Lots of danger is around us, such as fire.When a building catches
fire, there will be heavy smoke. It makes it hard for people to see
things clearly. People may run in all directions because they are
afraid to get hurt.
If we are in a fire, we should cover our mouth and nose with a wet
towel.To protect ourselves from thick smoke, we must stay low to the
ground and try to get out as soon as possible.
That’s all for my speech.Thank you.
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Value statement:Prevention is better than cure.
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