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英 语
七年级上册 YL
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Unit 7 Be wise with money
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课时同步训练
Period6 Integration (Ⅱ) & Assessment & Further
study
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写作
第1阶 高分词句储备
一、话题词汇
1.明智的 ______
2.明智地使用 ________
3.预算 ________
wise
manage
budget
【解析】知识拓展
budget作动词,意为“谨慎花钱;把……编入预算”;作形容词,意为“价格低
廉的;花钱少的”。
4.账户 _________
account
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5.支付 _________
6.零花钱 ______________
7.压岁钱 _____________
8.在贫困中;在困难中 _________
pay for
pocket money
lucky money
in need
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二、佳句仿写
9.【教材原句】It’s a good idea to save for a rainy day.(It’s + n.+ to do sth)
→ 仿写:为未来制订计划是个好主意。
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It’s a good idea to make plans for the future.
10.【教材原句】I try to manage my money well.(try to do sth)
→ 仿写:我尽力为我们的旅行做好预算。
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I try to make a budget for our travel well.
11.【教材原句】It helps me plan what to do with it and have good spending
habits.(what to do with sth)
→ 仿写:他们钱多得不知道怎么花好。
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They have so much money that they don’t know what to do with it.
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第2阶 经典范文模版
How to Spend Our Pocket Money
As families are now living a better life, we kids can have some pocket
money. We usually get our pocket money from our parents.Sometimes, we can
get some by selling waster paper and bottles.(介绍零花钱的来源)
We often spend our pocket money on buying breakfas___.We also buy some
books to help us with our lessons with our pocket money.(介绍零花钱的用途)
I think we can do something more meaningful. For example, we can donate
our pocket money to help poor children (介绍做法) so that they can go to
school and live happily.If everyone can do like this, I believe that our world
will be better.. .(表达观点)
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第3阶 高分范文赏析
[2025江苏镇江一模]假如你是林涛,你们学校的英语社团正在举办关于
“How do you manage your pocket money?”的征文活动。
征稿内容包括:
1.你管理零花钱的方式(至少2种)及理由,如储蓄、购买学习用品等;
2.现在流行用零花钱购买昂贵的运动鞋或衣服等,你是否会采用这种方式?为
什么?
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要求:
1.所写内容必须包括题目要求的所有信息,可适当发挥;
2.词数不少于110,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
3.不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等信息。
How I Manage My Pocket Money
I usually get some pocket money from my parents.____
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第一步 审
体 裁:说明文
时 态:以一般现在时为主
人 称:以第一人称为主
内容要点:资金来源、管理方式、观点等
写作框架:
第一步 介绍明智地管理零花钱的重要性。
第二步 介绍自己管理零花钱的方式及理由。
第三步 表明自己不会用零花钱购买昂贵的运动鞋或衣服,并说明理由。
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第二步 列
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高分范文 名师点评
How I Manage My Pocket Money
I usually get some pocket money from my
parents.Learning to manage it wisely is very
important to students. ①动名词短语作主语,既说
明明智地管理零花钱的重要
性,也体现了作者运用语言
的能力;
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高分范文 名师点评
First , I always save 30% of my pocket
money in a piggy bank. Saving helps me develop
good spending habits and prepares me for future
needs. It can help me save for a rainy day.For
example , last month I used my savings to buy a
gift for my grandma’s birthday.Second , I spend
50% on necessary things like notebooks, pens and
English magazines. These tools improve my
learning skills and open up my eyes. ②First和Second的运用使文
章层次清晰;
③文章通过两次使用For
example,引出可做的有意
义的事情,增强文章的说服
力;
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高分范文 名师点评
Nowadays, some students use pocket money to
buy expensive trainers or clothes. I won’t follow it.
I’d rather spend it on meaningful things.For
example , I sometimes donate part of my savings
to charity. Simple clothes work just fine if they’re
clean and tidy
By managing money properly , I learn to
value what I have and make wise decisions. ④if引导条件状语从句,号
召大家合理使用零花钱,过
节俭的生活;
⑤通过使用介词短语表明明
智地管理零花钱的意义。
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高分范文 名师点评
全文围绕零花钱展开,内容包括如何得到零花钱、在日常生活中如何使用零花钱
以及如何将零花钱用得更有意义。文章条理清晰,层次分明。文中good spending
habits、For example、By doing sth、“spend… on” “donate… to”等结构的运用
充分展示了作者的语言运用能力。
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第4阶 实战演练
[2025江苏常州质检]当前,“厉行节约,反对浪费”在全社会蔚然成风。那
么孩子们该怎样支配父母给的越来越多的零花钱呢? 谢太太是一名有理财观念的
妈妈,她经常跟自己13岁的女儿谈节约的重要性,并教她如何有计划地使用零花
钱。假如你叫王宁,请你给谢太太写一封信,信中包括以下两个方面:
1.教育孩子计划用钱的重要性;
2.谈谈父母是否应给孩子零花钱。
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要求:
1.条理清楚,语义连贯,句式规范,字迹工整;
2.词数80左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Mrs Xie,
I agree with you about teaching and talking to your daughter about pocket
money.____
Yours,
Wang Ning
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【参考范文】
Dear Mrs Xie,
I agree with you about teaching and talking to your daughter about
pocket money.This can help children spend money wisely and develop good
habits.Children need to know it is important to save money.
I think parents should give children pocket money and let them buy
things by themselves.Parents should tell children to use pocket money
to buy something for their study and also use the money to help
children in need.Children also can save pocket money in their bank
accounts.It is good to save for a rainy day.
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In this way, they can learn how to save money, what to spend money
on, and how to manage their money well.
Yours,
Wang Ning
【解析】知识拓展
in need of意为“需要”。如:The young man is in need of a coffee.这个年
轻人需要一杯咖啡。
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