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英 语
八年级上册 JJ
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Unit 3 Better you, better me!
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单元话题与写作
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刷写作
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写作
第1阶 高分词句储备
一、话题词汇
1.才能;天资 ________
2.有信心做某事 __________________________
3.熟能生巧。 _________________________
4.相信自己 ____________________
talent
feel confident to do sth
Practice makes perfect.
believe in oneself
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二、佳句仿写
5.【教材原句】You are a special person and unique in your own way!
(in one’s own way)
→仿写:他通过为家人做饭,以自己独特的方式表达爱。
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He expresses his love in his own way by cooking meals for his family.
6.【教材原句】From then on, I started dreaming of becoming an opera singer.
(dream of doing sth)
→仿写:她梦想着有一天能环游世界。
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She dreams of/about travelling/traveling around the world one day.
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7.I hope to make great progress and make my parents proud of me.
(make progress)
→仿写:我们希望这学期在学习英语方面取得很大的进步。
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We hope to make much progress in learning English this term.
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第2阶 经典范文模版
Looking at myself in the mirror, I know I am an outgoing girl. (总体介绍)
I like to make friends and I’m always ready to help them.(分析优点) So
I’m very popular in my school. But I have a big problem. I’m less interested in
my lessons.(引出短处)
I hope to get along well with my classmates and try to make more friends.
(以后的计划) I hope we can help and learn from each other. I will make a
good study resolution and try my best to go for it. (表明决心) I decide to
have a healthier lifestyle. I’ll spend more time on my schoolwork and develop
good learning habits. What’s more, I will read more books and master good
learning methods. I hope to make great progress and make my parents proud of
me.(期望)
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第3阶 高分范文赏析
[2025原创]假如你是Sue,你的朋友Henry给你写信交流生活中遇到的困惑。
请你用英语写一封回信,和他分享一下你的做法和建议。
Dear Sue,
I’m unhappy with myself. There’s nothing special about me. I like playing
basketball, but I’m not tall enough. Worst of all, I get average grades in all my
subjects, especially in maths. I’m weak in maths. My friends are all talented
and smart. I feel bad about myself. I’m so stressed. What should I do?
Can you give me some advice? Thank you.
Yours,
Henry
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要求:(1)包含信中全部要点,并适当发挥,使行文连贯;
(2)文中不能出现真实的姓名和学校名称;
(3)词数80左右,开头和落款已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Henry,
I’m very glad to hear from you.____
Yours,
Sue
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第一步 审
体 裁:本文是应用文
时 态:以一般现在时为主
人 称:以第二人称为主
写作框架:
开头 理解Henry的困扰,表明会给出建议。
中间 针对身高、特长、学习给出建议。
结尾 鼓励Henry积极行动,相信他会改变。
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第二步 列
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Dear Henry,
I’m very glad to hear from you. I understand your worries. But don’t be hard on yourself !
Being short doesn’t stop you from playing basketball. You can focus on speed and skills. Everyone has a talent. You just need to find yours. Maybe try painting or singing. Believe in yourself and you are the best. For maths, make a study plan and ask teachers or classmates for help. Do some exercises. Practice makes perfect.
It’s normal to feel stressed, but with small steps, things will get better.
Yours,
Sue ①运用短语be hard on oneself、stop sb from doing sth、focus on、believe in oneself给出建议,使表达更加地道自然,提升了文章的质量。
②运用简洁有力的表述,以直接明了的方式鼓励Henry挖掘自身特长,语句简洁却富有感染力。
③详细且清晰地给出了具体建议,提升了文章内容的针对性和逻辑性。
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这篇习作运用了“总分总”的写作结构。开篇以“I understand your worries. But
don’t be hard on yourself!”直截了当地表达对Henry困扰的理解并给予鼓励。接
着分别针对Henry在身高、特长、学习方面的困扰给出具体建议,结尾以“It’s
normal to feel stressed, but with small steps, things will get better.”总结,强调
有压力正常,只要逐步行动就会改善,以给Henry信心,总结全文。文中“stop…
from…”、focus on、believe in等短语以及but等连词的运用,体现了作者对英语
词汇和逻辑关系的掌握。同时,作者给出的建议具体且贴合Henry的实际情况,
使文章具有较强的针对性和逻辑性。
续表
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第4阶 实战演练
[2025河北承德期中]假设你是李明,你所在的学校正在举办一场主题为
“This is me!”的演讲活动。请你根据以下提示写一篇英文演讲稿,向同学们介绍
自己。
要点:(1)What are your strong points?
(2)What is your dream for the future?
(3)How will you improve yourself to realise your dream?
注意:(1)短文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名;
(2)词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
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This is me!
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Ming from Class Four. I’m very glad to stand here
to introduce myself.____
This is me, Li Ming. Thanks a lot.
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【参考范文】
This is me!
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Ming from Class Four. I’m very glad to
stand here to introduce myself. I’m a good person and I’m nice to
others. I work hard at school and I do well in maths and English. I get
along well with all my teachers and classmates. I love singing and I
got first prize in the singing competition last term.
As for my future, I would like to be a doctor, just like my mother.
I hope to help sick people. To realise my dream, I need to improve
myself. I must work harder and get into a good university. I also need
to be more careful and patient. I’m sure I can make it.
This is me, Li Ming. Thanks a lot.
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