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英 语
八年级上册 YL
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Unit 7 The natural world
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课时同步训练
Period 6 Integration (Ⅱ) &Assessment &Further
study
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写作
第1阶 高分词句储备
一、话题词汇
1.生态系统 ___________
2.气候 _________
3.起作用;行动 _____
4.伤害;损害 ______
5.知识 ___________
6.环境的 _______________
7.导致 _________
ecosystem
climate
act
harm
knowledge
environmental
lead to
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二、佳句仿写
8.【教材原句】Each ecosystem has a role to play and helps keep the balance
between all its members and the greater environment.(have a role to play)
→仿写:每个人在湿地保护中都能发挥作用。
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Everyone has a role to play in wetland protection.
9.【教材原句】Forests make up nearly a third of the earth’s land area.(make up)
→仿写:像不乱扔垃圾这样的小行动构成了保护海洋的大作为。
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Small actions like not littering make up big efforts to protect the
ocean.
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10.【教材原句】It is meaningful to join an environmental group and work as a
volunteer.(It is +adj.+to…)
→仿写:每年种树来保护森林是有意义的。
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It is meaningful to plant trees every year to protect the forest.
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第2阶 经典范文模版
Forests(陈述介绍对象) are important for our earth, providing oxygen,
shelter, and balancing ecosystems (介绍作用).Yet, they face some problems:
people cut down too many trees, rubbish pollution harms wildlife and soils, and
climate change makes forests drier and hotter (介绍所面临的问题).
To protect forests, we must act not to throw rubbish in forests and recycle
or reuse waste to prevent pollution. Join clean-up projects to restore damaged
areas. Bring your own chopsticks instead of disposable ones (保护森林的措施).
Small actions make a difference. Every effort helps to keep the “lungs” of
our earth.
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第3阶 高分范文赏析
美丽的草原对地球生态很重要,请你以 “Protecting the Grasslands”为题,根
据下面的提示写一篇80词左右的短文(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
提示:(1)草原的重要性(至少两点);
(2)人类活动对草原的危害;
(3)保护草原的措施。
Protecting the Grasslands
Grasslands are important.____
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第一步审
体 裁:说明文
时 态:以一般现在时为主
人 称:以第一人称和第三人称为主
内容要点:首先表述草原对动物和生态的重要性,然后介绍人们正在伤害草原并
提出拯救草原的可行方案,最后呼吁所有人来保护草原。
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写作框架:
Protecting the
Grasslands 重要性 importance for animals
importance for the ecosystem
危害行为和保
护措施 how people hurt grasslands
governments’ action
farmers’ action
号召 call on others
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第二步列
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高分范文
Protecting the Grasslands
Grasslands are important. Many animals live
there. On the grasslands, there are horses and cows,
and there are also lions and giraffes.Without
grasslands 名师点评
①介词短语Without
grasslands作条件状语,科
学阐明草原的生态功能,
凸显逻辑严谨性。
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Now people are hurting grasslands in two main
ways : Too many animals are eating grass.If
horses, sheep and cows eat too much grass, nothing
grows back. Some people cut down grass to
grow crops. This kills plants and makes the soil
weak. ②in two main ways总领下
文论述,结构清晰,体现
分析问题的系统性。
③If 引导的条件状语从句
精准揭示过度放牧的后
果,增强说服力。
续表
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To save the grasslands, our government makes
rules to stop people from using grasslands wrongly.
Let farmers take turns grazing their animals. This
gives grass time to grow back.
Let’s do something to save the grasslands.
Grasslands are not empty fields—they are homes
for animals ④短语take turns搭配动名
词grazing,准确描述轮牧
措施,展现语言灵活性。
⑤破折号强化对比,升华
主题思想。
本文逻辑严密,层次分明。首段以草原的重要性切入,第二段叙述过度放牧与开
垦种植的危害,第三段提出解决措施,结尾呼应开头,深化主旨。
续表
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第4阶 实战演练
假设你是李辉。你校英语报“Protect the Environment”专栏面向全校学生征集
主题宣传稿,需要用英语向大家宣讲环保的重要性以及作为中学生应怎样保护环
境。请你以“Save the Earth: Let’s Do Our Part!”为题,用英语给专栏写一篇稿件。
要求:(1)条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
(2)词数80左右,已给出部分不计入总词数。
Save the Earth: Let’s Do Our Part!
The earth is the only home for everyone on it.____
Let’s do our part to save the earth!
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【参考范文】
Save the Earth: Let’s Do Our Part!
The earth is the only home for everyone on it.It provides all the
resources we need for survival, from fresh water to rich land.However,
human activities cause serious problems.Climate change, pollution, and
loss of biodiversity are now harming it.Our planet is crying for our
help now.As middle school students, we have the power to make a
difference and help save the earth!
To protect the earth, we can start by saving water, planting more
trees, and reducing pollution.Saving animals and recycling things are
necessary as well.
Let’s do our part to save the earth!
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