Unit 2 Colours 颜色和情绪（单元写作精练）英语牛津译林版九年级上册

Unit2 Colours 颜色和情绪 单元写作精练 写作主题 识 写作主题：颜色和情绪的关系 核心写作目标： 学生能够运用本单元所学词汇、语法（宾语从句）表达，清晰、连贯地描述颜色，特别是颜色对人的情绪、感觉和行为的影响，并能结合文化背景进行简单说明。 写作主题建议： ①颜色与心情 (Colours and Moods/Feelings): 描述不同颜色如何影响你的情绪（如：蓝色让我感到平静，红色让我精力充沛）。 ②我生活中的重要颜色 (An Important Colour in My Life): 选择一种对你个人有特殊意义的颜色，描述它以及它带给你的感觉或联想（如：绿色让我想起家乡的田野，感到放松和快乐）。 ③为某个场所选择颜色 (Choosing Colours for a Place): 为你的房间、教室、图书馆或餐厅选择颜色方案，并解释你的选择如何影响在那里的人（如：我认为图书馆应该用浅蓝色和米色，因为它们能帮助人们集中注意力和放松）。 ④颜色与文化 (Colours and Culture ): 简要介绍一种颜色在你文化中的象征意义（如：在中国，红色常象征好运和喜庆；白色在西方常用于婚礼，但在一些东方文化中可能用于葬礼 - 注意表述的客观性）。 写作框架： 开头 (Introduction): 引出主题：简要说明颜色无处不在且对我们有影响。 点明主旨：清晰陈述你将要描述的重点（是某种颜色、颜色与心情的关系、为某个地方选色，还是颜色的文化意义） 例如： Colours are all around us and they have a powerful effect on how we feel. I want to talk about how different colours influence my moods. Green is a colour that holds special meaning for me. If I could choose colours for our classroom, I would pick... because... 主体段落1 聚焦颜色 1 或 方面 1： 选择第一种关键颜色或第一个主要方面（如颜色对心情的影响）。 描述与影响： 使用感官词汇和情感词汇描述这种颜色本身（bright, warm, soft, relaxing, exciting）。 核心： 使用本单元重点句型描述其影响： 宾语从句: I find that blue makes me feel calm and peaceful. / Some people believe that yellow can bring them wisdom and warmth. 不定式作宾语: Green helps me to relax. / Red is known to make people feel energetic or even hungry. 可以加入一个简短的个人经历或观察作为例子支持观点。For example, when I wear my blue sweater, I often feel more focused during study. 聚焦颜色 2 或 方面 2： 选择第二种关键颜色或第二个主要方面（如颜色在特定场合的应用或文化含义）。 描述与影响/意义： 如果涉及文化意义，使用客观语言介绍（In Chinese culture, red is often connected with good luck and happiness. It is commonly seen during festivals like the Spring Festival.） 如果是为场所选色，解释这个颜色为什么适合这个场所的特定功能或氛围。Therefore, I think light yellow walls would be good for the dining hall because they help to create a warm and cheerful environment, which encourages people to enjoy their meals. 主体段落2 对比或补充： 可以简要对比两种颜色的不同影响，或补充说明颜色组合的效果、个人偏好等 While red is exciting, too much of it might make people feel stressed. That's why I think it's better to use it as an accent colour rather than the main colour. 结尾 (Conclusion): 总结要点： 简要重申颜色的重要性及其对你/他人的主要影响或你选择/描述的核心观点。 最终感想： 表达你对颜色力量的看法，或鼓励读者关注身边的颜色及其影响。例如： In short, colours play a much bigger role in our daily lives than we might think. Understanding their effects can help us create better environments and understand different cultures. So next time you see a colour, think about how it makes you feel! 真题示例： 我国的传统文化源远流长，博大精深 。我们随时都能感受到传统文化的气息，它绽放在异彩纷呈的民俗节日中 。假如你是李华，你的英国朋友 Jack来信说对“中国红”很感兴趣，想了解“中国红”在我们日常生活中的体现，请你根据下面提示写一封回信。 写作要求： ( 1)内容包括提示信息，可适当发挥，文中不得出现真实人名、校名和地名。 ( 2)字数不少于 80词。 (3)卷面整洁，条理清楚。 参考词汇：红包 red packets 剪纸 paper cutting Dear Jack, It’s great to receive your letter. Knowing that you’re interested in Chinese red, I’m writing to tell you something about it. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Jack, It’s great to receive your letter. Knowing that you’re interested in Chinese red, I’m writing to tell you something about it. Chinese red, considered as the symbolic color of China, is extremely popular with Chinese people. It usually represents happiness, and we believe that it can bring us good luck．   People in our country attach such great importance to Chinese red that they use many red objects in some important events. For instance, in a wedding, you can see that the bride is in a red wedding dress and the wedding room is decorated with red. What’s more, the houses are also filled with red paper cuts, lanterns and Chinese Knots during the Spring Festival. Children will get red packets for best wishes as well. Obviously, Chinese red plays a significant role and enjoys the highest popularity in China. I truly hope my letter will help you understand better about Chinese red. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出本文主题； 第二步，介绍红色所代表的意义； 第三步，介绍红色的应用； 第四步，表达自己的希望。 [亮点词汇] ①be interested in对……感兴趣 ②be popular with受欢迎 ③what’s more并且 [高分句型] ①People in our country attach such great importance to Chinese red that they use many red objects in some important events.（such…that引导结果状语从句） ②I truly hope my letter will help you understand better about Chinese red.（宾语从句） 1．假定你是林晓，你最近新结交的英国笔友David给你发了一封电子邮件，请认真阅读下面的邮件并根据邮件中的内容及你的实际情况用英语写一封回信。 Dear Lin Xiao, Glad to be your new friend. I want to know more about you, so could you please tell me something about your personalities? Since we are in the ninth grade, are you confident enough to take so many exams? I often feel tired and stressed because of the exams. I know you are good at colour therapy. Could you offer me some advice on colours? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon. All the best, David 注意事项： 1. 邮件内容根据回信内容自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合语境； 2. 词数90个左右，邮件的收尾已在答题卷给出，不计入总词数； 3. 邮件必须写在答题卷指定位置上，且文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 Dear David, Thank you so much for your email. I’m very happy to tell you something about myself and give you some advice. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes, Lin Xiao 【答案】例文 Dear David, Thank you so much for your email. I’m very happy to tell you something about myself and give you some advice. I'm a happy girl. My hobbies are listening to music and reading. I like pop music very much. I dislike sports because I'm not strong. It's hard for me. Although we are in the ninth grade, I am confident enough to take exams. In my school, I have many friends. All my friends are polite and helpful. My friends are all nice to me. They can make me happy. So I like playing with them. It is true that color can be incredibly enlightening and transforming. This wonderful planet does not contain all the beautiful colors of the rainbow without reason. However, more often, many people may not realize how we attach importance to colors unknowingly and express out feelings through colors. Colors have certain energy in them, and these have a kind of control over the way we feel or we may even use certain colors to express ourselves unknowingly. If you feel stressed and tired, maybe you can wear white or blue clothes. Both of them are peaceful and calm colors. If you aren't doing very well in your lessons or you feel worried, I think you should use yellow or orange stationery. You can also paint bedroom yellow or orange. Orange represents joy and it can bring you success. Yellow is the color of wisdom. It can help you do better in the exams and become more confident. Best wishes, Lin Xiao 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。要求根据邮件的内容，给David写一封回信，主要包括两方面的内容，个人介绍和颜色方面的建议；注意要点要齐全，可适当发挥。 2.写作指导：写作时要以第一和第二人称来介绍，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段介绍个人信息和对考试的看法；第三段给出颜色方面的建议。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。 2．现在喜欢中国文化的外国友人越来越多， 并且他们希望能和中国学生成为朋友。假定你是李华，你的网友Robert想更多地了解你。请认真阅读他写给你的邮件，根据邮件内容用英语写一封邮件回复。 To: Lihua@China.com From: Robert2008@Canada.com Subject: Making friends Dear Li Hua, How are you? I’m really interested in Chinese culture and wants to make friends with you. ● Could you share something about Chinese animal signs? ● Would you please tell me something about your personality? ● Would you like to let me know something about your favourite colour? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon! Best withes! Robert 要点： 1.文中不得提及真实的人名及校名等相关信息。 2.回复须回答所有问题并适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。 3.词数100左右，文章开头与结尾已写好，不计入总词数。 Dear Robert, I’m very glad that you’d like to make friends with me. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I also want to know more about you. I’m looking forward to your reply. All the best! Li Hua 【答案】例文： Dear Robert, I’m very glad that you’d like to make friends with me. The Chinese zodiac features 12 animal signs in this order: Rat, Ox, Tiger, Rabbit, Dragon, Snake, Horse, Sheep, Monkey, Rooster, Dog and Pig. It has a history of more than 2,000 years. There is an animal for each year. My animal sign is the Dragon. I am very outgoing and I like making friends with people around me. I have extremely high expectations of myself and I am very careful. I’m considered to be energetic and ambitious, which might be related to my animal sign. My favourite colour is green. When spring comes, everything comes to life and everything is green. So I think green is a symbol of life and energy. I also want to know more about you. I’m looking forward to your reply. All the best! Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：根据邮件中的信息进行写作，适当增加细节，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍一些关于中国生肖的信息； 第二步，介绍自己的性格； 第三步，介绍自己最喜欢的颜色和原因； [亮点词汇] ①be considered to be被认为是 ②be related to和……有关 ③a symbol of……的象征 [高分句型] ①I’m considered to be energetic and ambitious, which might be related to my animal sign. (which引导的定语从句) ②So I think green is a symbol of life and energy. (宾语从句) 3．现在，随着中国的快速发展，越来越多的外国友人开始关注中国文化，并希望和中国学生做笔友。假定你是李华，加拿大学生 Robert希望了解有关你的爱好，成为你的笔友。请认真阅读他写给你的邮件，根据邮件内容及你的了解用英语回复。 To: Lihua@ china.com From:Robert2008@ canada.com Subject: Making friends Dear Li Hua, How are you? I’m really interested in Chinese culture and wants to make friends with you, would you please tell me something about yourself: ● What is your animal sign? ● What personalities do you have? Are they connected to your animal sign? ● What’s your favourite colour? Why do you like it? Please write back soon. Best withes. Robert 注意： 1.词数100左右，文章开头与结尾已写好，不计入总词数。 2.回复须包括注所有内容要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺； 3.文中不得提及真实的人名和学校名称等相关信息。 Dear Robert, I’m glad that you like to make pen friends with me. Let me tell you something about myself to you. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Robert, I’m glad that you like to make pen friends with me. Let me tell you something about myself to you. My animal sign is the Dragon. I am very outgoing and I like making friends with people around me. I have extremely high expectations of myself and I am very careful. I’m considered to be energetic and ambitious, which might be related to my animal sign. My favourite colour is green. When spring comes, everything comes to life and everything is green. So I think green is a symbol of life and energy. I really hope we can be pen friends. I am looking forward to your early reply. Best wishes, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：根据邮件中的信息进行写作，适当增加细节，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，介绍自己的生肖和性格； 第三步，介绍自己最喜欢的颜色和原因； 第四步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①be considered to be被认为是 ②be related to和……有关 ③a symbol of……的象征 [高分句型] ①I’m considered to be energetic and ambitious, which might be related to my animal sign. (which引导的定语从句) ②So I think green is a symbol of life and energy. (宾语从句) 4．时间飞逝，转眼间同学们进入初三已经两个多月了。假如你是Dick,最近你的好友李华在繁忙的学习中感觉压力很大，吃不好睡不香，学习效率低下，成绩不如人意，学习和兴趣不能兼顾……他写信给你寻求帮助。 希望你能从 1. 学习方法及效率； 2. 颜色疗法； 3. 身边的榜样等方面给他写一封回信。 要求： 1. 文字不能出现真实的人名、班级和校名。 2. 词数在100 字左右。信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 3. 内容涵盖要点，建议合理，全文连贯通顺。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Dear Li Hua, Thank you for your letter. I know you have some stress in your study. First of all, I suggest you make a reasonable study plan. Learn according to your plan every day, and you will certainly improve your learning efficiency. Second, I suggest that when you can’t sleep well, you should find a warm and blue room, which will help you relax and sleep well. Third, I suggest you look for an example. We all know that role models are very powerful. He can encourage you to learn. When you want to give up, when you think of him, you will immediately be full of strength. I hope my advice is helpful to you. Yours sincerely, Dick 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作开头以及要点已给出，考生注意不用遗漏写作要点中的信息，并适当添加内容，使文章语句通顺，无语法和拼写错误。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开门见山，直接引出关于学习压力话题； 第二步，从要点提示的三个方面具体介绍自己给出的建议； 第三步，书写结语，希望自己的建议对朋友有所帮助。 [亮点词汇] ①thank you for因……而感谢 ②help sb. do sth.帮助某人做某事 ③look for寻找 ④give up放弃 ⑤think of想起 ⑥be full of充满 [高分句型] ①I know you have some stress in your study.（宾语从句） ②Second, I suggest that when you can’t sleep well, you should find a warm and blue room, which will help you relax and sleep well.(that引导宾语从句、which引导非限制性定语从句) 5．时间飞逝，转眼间同学们进入初三已经两个多月了。假如你是Dick，最近你的好友李华在繁忙的学习中感觉压力很大，吃不好睡不香，学习效率低下，成绩不如人意，学习和兴趣不能兼顾……他写信给你寻求帮助。 希望你能从 1：学习方法及效率； 2：颜色疗法 3：身边的榜样等方面给他写一封回信。 要求：1. 文字不能出现真实的人名、班级和校名。 2. 词数在100字左右。信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 3. 内容涵盖要点，建议合理，全文连贯通顺。 Dear Li Hua,    Thank you for your letter. I know ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________    I hope my advice is of some help to you. Yours sincerely, Dick 【答案】例文 Dear Li Hua, Thank you for your letter. I know you have some stress in your study. First of all, I suggest you make a reasonable study plan. Learn according to your plan every day, and you will certainly improve your learning efficiency. Second, I suggest that when you can’t sleep well, you should find a warm and blue room, which will help you relax and sleep well. Third, I suggest you look for an example. We all know that role models are very powerful. He can encourage you to learn. When you want to give up, when you think of him, you will immediately be full of strength. I hope my advice is of some help to you. Yours sincerely, Dick 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作开头以及要点已给出，考生注意不用遗漏写作要点中的信息，并适当添加内容，使文章语句通顺。 [写作步骤] 第一步，看门见山，直接引出话题——学习压力； 第二步，从要点提示的三个方面具体介绍自己给出的建议； [亮点词汇] ①look for寻找 ②give up放弃 [高分句型] ①First of all, I suggest you make a reasonable study plan.（宾语从句） ②Second, I suggest that when you can’t sleep well, you should find a warm and blue room, which will help you relax and sleep well.（定语从句） 6．学校学生会（the Students’ Union）要推选一名主席（chairperson），假设你是Mary，你准备推荐你们班的班长Tom，请根据提示对Tom做简要介绍，写一封100词左右的推荐信给李老师，并作适当补充和发挥。信的开头已经给出。要点提示： 1. 属兔，又高又帅，爱好广泛，精通电脑，擅长演讲。 2. 最喜欢绿色和红色，绿色是大自然的颜色，给他活力；红色使他更容易采取行动。 3. 推荐理由：许多方面优秀，但很谦虚，从不炫耀；乐于助人、友好，愿意与他人人分享，同学们都乐意和他结交朋友；自信、勇敢、做事有条理…… 10th October Dear Mr Li, I am writing to recommend Tom as the new chairperson of the Students’ Union. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________    Yours sincerely Mary 【答案】例文： 10th October Dear Mr. Li, I am writing to recommend Tom as the new chairperson of the Students’ Union. His year is the year of the rabbit. He is tall and handsome. He has a wild interest in many fields and is good at computer and speech. He likes green and red best. Green is the color of nature, giving him vitality. Red makes it easier for him to take action.    Tom is excellent in many aspects, but he is very modest, and she never shows off. He is always ready to help others. When we have trouble, he often offers us some help. He is very easy-going, and everyone wants to make friends with him. He is friendly, and he is willing to share with others. He is confident, brave and organized. We all like him and we hope that he can be the new chairperson of the Students’ Union. Yours sincerely, Mary 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，也是一篇书信作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：写在要点已给出，学生要要注意不要遗漏“要点提示”中Tom的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并要提出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，推荐Tom做主席。介绍Tom的属相、爱好； 第二部，具体阐述Tom的优点，作为推荐Tom的理由； 第三部，书写结束语，最后表达希望Tom能成为学校学生会主席的愿望。 [亮点词汇] ① have a wild interest in many fields爱好广泛 ② be good at擅长 ③ like…best最喜欢…… ④ be excellent in many aspects在许多方面优秀 [高分句型] ① Red makes it easier for him to take action.（it做形式宾语，代替不定式） ② When we have trouble, he often offers us some help.（when引导时间状语从句） 7．书面表达 假设你是李华，你的英国朋友 Tony 对"中国红"一词很感兴趣，想了解"中国红"在中国人日常生活中的体现，请你根据以下表格信息写一封回信帮助他了解． 地位 最受欢迎的颜色之一 代表 幸福，可以带来好运 使用场所 婚礼，春节等 表达方式 剪纸，中国结，红包，灯笼 提示词：婚礼 wedding，中国结 Chinese Knot，红包 red packet， 代表 stand for Dear Tony， It's great to receive your letter． I'm writing to tell you something about Chinese red． ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I truly hope my letter will help you understand better about Chinese red． Yours， Li Hua 【答案】Dear Tony， 　　It's great to receive your letter． I'm writing to tell you something about Chinese red． Chinese red， considered as the symbolic color of China， is extremely popular with Chinese people． It usually represents happiness， and we believe that it can bring us good luck． 　People in our country attach such great importance to Chinese red that they use many red objects in some important events． For instance， in a wedding， you can see that the bride is in a red wedding dress and the wedding room is decorated with red． What's more， the houses are also filled with red paper cuts， lanterns and Chinese Knots during the Spring Festival．Children will get red packets for best wishes as well． Obviously， Chinese red plays a significant role and enjoys the highest popularity in China． 　　I truly hope my letter will help you understand better about Chinese red． Yours， Li Hua 【详解】1.题干解读：本文属于书信作文，向你的英国朋友介绍“中国红”，包括地位、代表、使用场所以及表达方式。注意时态的准确运用，灵活运用所学的单词、短语以及句型。切记不要遗漏要点。 2.例文点评：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。 3.高分亮点： 单词短语：for instance, be decorated with, what’s more, be filled with, as well以及play a significant role等。 亮点句型：we believe that it can bring us good luck中，that引导的宾语从句。 8．请以Colours and Moods为题，选两种颜色，分别代表energetic colour和strong colour，适当介绍它们对情绪的影响，并谈谈你最喜欢的颜色。 要点如下: 1.绿色是活力之色，它能给你能量，因为它是自然之色，代表新生。所以当你疲惫或虚弱时，你应该穿绿色的衣服。 2.红色是强烈的颜色，它会使你看起来更加强大、有力。在中国红色还代表幸运，在过去许多女性都喜欢在结婚之日穿红色。 3.我最喜欢的颜色是白色，因为……(请用1-2、点理由阐述) 注意:80词左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 Colours and Moods Do you  know anything about  the relationship between colours and moods? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Colours and Moods Do you know anything about the relationship between colours and moods? Green is an energetic colour.  It can give you energy, as it is the colour of nature and represents new life. So when you are tired or weak, you should wear green clothes. Red is a strong colour. It can make you look more powerful. It also represents luck in China and many women preferred to wear red on their wedding day in the past. My favourite colour is white because it is the colour of purity and it can help me calm down when I feel nervous. All the colours make our world colourful and wonderful 【详解】 亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如between colours and moods，tired or weak，make sb. do，prefer to，on their wedding day，in the past，help sb. do，calm down，colourful and wonderful等。而So when you are tired or weak, you should wear green clothes./ My favourite colour is white because it is the colour of purity and it can help me calm down when I feel nervous.等复杂从句结构的综合运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。 【点睛】本专题是书面表达题。英文写作既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 6 / 11 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ Unit2 Colours 颜色和情绪 单元写作精练 写作主题 识 写作主题：颜色和情绪的关系 核心写作目标： 学生能够运用本单元所学词汇、语法（宾语从句）表达，清晰、连贯地描述颜色，特别是颜色对人的情绪、感觉和行为的影响，并能结合文化背景进行简单说明。 写作主题建议： ①颜色与心情 (Colours and Moods/Feelings): 描述不同颜色如何影响你的情绪（如：蓝色让我感到平静，红色让我精力充沛）。 ②我生活中的重要颜色 (An Important Colour in My Life): 选择一种对你个人有特殊意义的颜色，描述它以及它带给你的感觉或联想（如：绿色让我想起家乡的田野，感到放松和快乐）。 ③为某个场所选择颜色 (Choosing Colours for a Place): 为你的房间、教室、图书馆或餐厅选择颜色方案，并解释你的选择如何影响在那里的人（如：我认为图书馆应该用浅蓝色和米色，因为它们能帮助人们集中注意力和放松）。 ④颜色与文化 (Colours and Culture ): 简要介绍一种颜色在你文化中的象征意义（如：在中国，红色常象征好运和喜庆；白色在西方常用于婚礼，但在一些东方文化中可能用于葬礼 - 注意表述的客观性）。 写作框架： 开头 (Introduction): 引出主题：简要说明颜色无处不在且对我们有影响。 点明主旨：清晰陈述你将要描述的重点（是某种颜色、颜色与心情的关系、为某个地方选色，还是颜色的文化意义） 例如： Colours are all around us and they have a powerful effect on how we feel. I want to talk about how different colours influence my moods. Green is a colour that holds special meaning for me. If I could choose colours for our classroom, I would pick... because... 主体段落1 聚焦颜色 1 或 方面 1： 选择第一种关键颜色或第一个主要方面（如颜色对心情的影响）。 描述与影响： 使用感官词汇和情感词汇描述这种颜色本身（bright, warm, soft, relaxing, exciting）。 核心： 使用本单元重点句型描述其影响： 宾语从句: I find that blue makes me feel calm and peaceful. / Some people believe that yellow can bring them wisdom and warmth. 不定式作宾语: Green helps me to relax. / Red is known to make people feel energetic or even hungry. 可以加入一个简短的个人经历或观察作为例子支持观点。For example, when I wear my blue sweater, I often feel more focused during study. 聚焦颜色 2 或 方面 2： 选择第二种关键颜色或第二个主要方面（如颜色在特定场合的应用或文化含义）。 描述与影响/意义： 如果涉及文化意义，使用客观语言介绍（In Chinese culture, red is often connected with good luck and happiness. It is commonly seen during festivals like the Spring Festival.） 如果是为场所选色，解释这个颜色为什么适合这个场所的特定功能或氛围。Therefore, I think light yellow walls would be good for the dining hall because they help to create a warm and cheerful environment, which encourages people to enjoy their meals. 主体段落2 对比或补充： 可以简要对比两种颜色的不同影响，或补充说明颜色组合的效果、个人偏好等 While red is exciting, too much of it might make people feel stressed. That's why I think it's better to use it as an accent colour rather than the main colour. 结尾 (Conclusion): 总结要点： 简要重申颜色的重要性及其对你/他人的主要影响或你选择/描述的核心观点。 最终感想： 表达你对颜色力量的看法，或鼓励读者关注身边的颜色及其影响。例如： In short, colours play a much bigger role in our daily lives than we might think. Understanding their effects can help us create better environments and understand different cultures. So next time you see a colour, think about how it makes you feel! 真题示例： 我国的传统文化源远流长，博大精深 。我们随时都能感受到传统文化的气息，它绽放在异彩纷呈的民俗节日中 。假如你是李华，你的英国朋友 Jack来信说对“中国红”很感兴趣，想了解“中国红”在我们日常生活中的体现，请你根据下面提示写一封回信。 写作要求： ( 1)内容包括提示信息，可适当发挥，文中不得出现真实人名、校名和地名。 ( 2)字数不少于 80词。 (3)卷面整洁，条理清楚。 参考词汇：红包 red packets 剪纸 paper cutting Dear Jack, It’s great to receive your letter. Knowing that you’re interested in Chinese red, I’m writing to tell you something about it. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Jack, It’s great to receive your letter. Knowing that you’re interested in Chinese red, I’m writing to tell you something about it. Chinese red, considered as the symbolic color of China, is extremely popular with Chinese people. It usually represents happiness, and we believe that it can bring us good luck．   People in our country attach such great importance to Chinese red that they use many red objects in some important events. For instance, in a wedding, you can see that the bride is in a red wedding dress and the wedding room is decorated with red. What’s more, the houses are also filled with red paper cuts, lanterns and Chinese Knots during the Spring Festival. Children will get red packets for best wishes as well. Obviously, Chinese red plays a significant role and enjoys the highest popularity in China. I truly hope my letter will help you understand better about Chinese red. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出本文主题； 第二步，介绍红色所代表的意义； 第三步，介绍红色的应用； 第四步，表达自己的希望。 [亮点词汇] ①be interested in对……感兴趣 ②be popular with受欢迎 ③what’s more并且 [高分句型] ①People in our country attach such great importance to Chinese red that they use many red objects in some important events.（such…that引导结果状语从句） ②I truly hope my letter will help you understand better about Chinese red.（宾语从句） 1．假定你是林晓，你最近新结交的英国笔友David给你发了一封电子邮件，请认真阅读下面的邮件并根据邮件中的内容及你的实际情况用英语写一封回信。 Dear Lin Xiao, Glad to be your new friend. I want to know more about you, so could you please tell me something about your personalities? Since we are in the ninth grade, are you confident enough to take so many exams? I often feel tired and stressed because of the exams. I know you are good at colour therapy. Could you offer me some advice on colours? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon. All the best, David 注意事项： 1. 邮件内容根据回信内容自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合语境； 2. 词数90个左右，邮件的收尾已在答题卷给出，不计入总词数； 3. 邮件必须写在答题卷指定位置上，且文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 Dear David, Thank you so much for your email. I’m very happy to tell you something about myself and give you some advice. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes, Lin Xiao 2．现在喜欢中国文化的外国友人越来越多， 并且他们希望能和中国学生成为朋友。假定你是李华，你的网友Robert想更多地了解你。请认真阅读他写给你的邮件，根据邮件内容用英语写一封邮件回复。 To: Lihua@China.com From: Robert2008@Canada.com Subject: Making friends Dear Li Hua, How are you? I’m really interested in Chinese culture and wants to make friends with you. ● Could you share something about Chinese animal signs? ● Would you please tell me something about your personality? ● Would you like to let me know something about your favourite colour? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon! Best withes! Robert 要点： 1.文中不得提及真实的人名及校名等相关信息。 2.回复须回答所有问题并适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。 3.词数100左右，文章开头与结尾已写好，不计入总词数。 Dear Robert, I’m very glad that you’d like to make friends with me. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I also want to know more about you. I’m looking forward to your reply. All the best! Li Hua 3．现在，随着中国的快速发展，越来越多的外国友人开始关注中国文化，并希望和中国学生做笔友。假定你是李华，加拿大学生 Robert希望了解有关你的爱好，成为你的笔友。请认真阅读他写给你的邮件，根据邮件内容及你的了解用英语回复。 To: Lihua@ china.com From:Robert2008@ canada.com Subject: Making friends Dear Li Hua, How are you? I’m really interested in Chinese culture and wants to make friends with you, would you please tell me something about yourself: ● What is your animal sign? ● What personalities do you have? Are they connected to your animal sign? ● What’s your favourite colour? Why do you like it? Please write back soon. Best withes. Robert 注意： 1.词数100左右，文章开头与结尾已写好，不计入总词数。 2.回复须包括注所有内容要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺； 3.文中不得提及真实的人名和学校名称等相关信息。 Dear Robert, I’m glad that you like to make pen friends with me. Let me tell you something about myself to you. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes, Li Hua 4．时间飞逝，转眼间同学们进入初三已经两个多月了。假如你是Dick,最近你的好友李华在繁忙的学习中感觉压力很大，吃不好睡不香，学习效率低下，成绩不如人意，学习和兴趣不能兼顾……他写信给你寻求帮助。 希望你能从 1. 学习方法及效率； 2. 颜色疗法； 3. 身边的榜样等方面给他写一封回信。 要求： 1. 文字不能出现真实的人名、班级和校名。 2. 词数在100 字左右。信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 3. 内容涵盖要点，建议合理，全文连贯通顺。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．时间飞逝，转眼间同学们进入初三已经两个多月了。假如你是Dick，最近你的好友李华在繁忙的学习中感觉压力很大，吃不好睡不香，学习效率低下，成绩不如人意，学习和兴趣不能兼顾……他写信给你寻求帮助。 希望你能从 1：学习方法及效率； 2：颜色疗法 3：身边的榜样等方面给他写一封回信。 要求：1. 文字不能出现真实的人名、班级和校名。 2. 词数在100字左右。信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 3. 内容涵盖要点，建议合理，全文连贯通顺。 Dear Li Hua,    Thank you for your letter. I know ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________    I hope my advice is of some help to you. Yours sincerely, Dick 6．学校学生会（the Students’ Union）要推选一名主席（chairperson），假设你是Mary，你准备推荐你们班的班长Tom，请根据提示对Tom做简要介绍，写一封100词左右的推荐信给李老师，并作适当补充和发挥。信的开头已经给出。要点提示： 1. 属兔，又高又帅，爱好广泛，精通电脑，擅长演讲。 2. 最喜欢绿色和红色，绿色是大自然的颜色，给他活力；红色使他更容易采取行动。 3. 推荐理由：许多方面优秀，但很谦虚，从不炫耀；乐于助人、友好，愿意与他人人分享，同学们都乐意和他结交朋友；自信、勇敢、做事有条理…… 10th October Dear Mr Li, I am writing to recommend Tom as the new chairperson of the Students’ Union. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________    Yours sincerely Mary 7．书面表达 假设你是李华，你的英国朋友 Tony 对"中国红"一词很感兴趣，想了解"中国红"在中国人日常生活中的体现，请你根据以下表格信息写一封回信帮助他了解． 地位 最受欢迎的颜色之一 代表 幸福，可以带来好运 使用场所 婚礼，春节等 表达方式 剪纸，中国结，红包，灯笼 提示词：婚礼 wedding，中国结 Chinese Knot，红包 red packet， 代表 stand for Dear Tony， It's great to receive your letter． I'm writing to tell you something about Chinese red． ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I truly hope my letter will help you understand better about Chinese red． Yours， Li Hua 8．请以Colours and Moods为题，选两种颜色，分别代表energetic colour和strong colour，适当介绍它们对情绪的影响，并谈谈你最喜欢的颜色。 要点如下: 1.绿色是活力之色，它能给你能量，因为它是自然之色，代表新生。所以当你疲惫或虚弱时，你应该穿绿色的衣服。 2.红色是强烈的颜色，它会使你看起来更加强大、有力。在中国红色还代表幸运，在过去许多女性都喜欢在结婚之日穿红色。 3.我最喜欢的颜色是白色，因为……(请用1-2、点理由阐述) 注意:80词左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 Colours and Moods Do you  know anything about  the relationship between colours and moods? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 6 / 11 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$