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高频话题06 节假日活动
同步写作课讲义
节假日活动 类文章主要包含:①介绍假日经历与感悟;②介绍自己最喜欢的节日活动等
(一)介绍假日经历与感悟
今年五一,襄阳凭借丰富的旅游资源和优质的服务,吸引了各地的游客前来“打卡”。在校园英语文化周,你将代表班级做关于“旅行”的英语演讲。请根据以下要点提示,结合你的旅游或出行经历,写一篇英语演讲稿。
1.要点提示:
(1)简要介绍你对旅行的态度或看法;
(2)详述你的一次旅游或出行经历;
(3)根据你的旅行感受,为襄阳的旅游发展提出一条合理的建议或希望。
2.注意事项:
(1)词数90左右,开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数;
(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3)作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
Dear schoolmates,
Good morning! I’m glad to make a speech here.
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That’s all. Thank you!
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写作框架设计
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写作指导
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③提示:根据内容提示,介绍自己的旅游经历和感受,不要遗漏要点,可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步,简要介绍你对旅行的态度或看法;
第二步,详述你的一次旅游或出行经历;
第三步,提出自己的建议。
【参考范文】
【答案】例文
Dear schoolmates,
Good morning! I’m glad to make a speech here.
Now more and more people are interested in travelling. I think trip is an opportunity for us to experience life and increase knowledge. At the same time, it can also broaden our horizon.
Last Wednesday, we went on a trip to Yixing. Yixing is a modern and tidy city, where there are many places of interest. It was a fine warm day. In the morning, we climbed the hill in the Bamboo Park. On the way, we met an Australian. He was kind and patient. We had fun practising speaking English. In the afternoon, we rowed boats along the underground river in the Shanjuan Cave. It was a great day.
I think if we want to attract more tourists, we should provide better service for tourists.
That’s all. Thank you!
总体分析:
[亮点词汇]
①be interested in对……感兴趣
②at the same time同时
③places of interest名胜古迹
[高分句型]
①Yixing is a modern and tidy city, where there are many places of interest.(非限制性定语从句)
②I think if we want to attract more tourists, we should provide better service for tourists.(宾语从句;if引导的条件状语从句)
(2) 介绍自己最喜欢的节日
越来越多的中国元素走向世界舞台,彰显了中国力量。中国元素包罗万象,从有形的物质符号到无形的精神内容,如风筝、剪纸等民俗艺术,春节、中秋节等节日文化……你心中的中国元素是什么?请以“The Chinese element in my heart”为题,根据以下要点和要求,用英语写一篇短文,向校刊英文栏目投稿。
1. 要点:1)你心中的中国元素是什么。
2)介绍这个中国元素及其意义。
2. 要求:1)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称。
2)词数100左右。
The Chinese element in my heart
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Step 1 审好题,定方向
定体裁:本文是一篇说明文,介绍自己心中的中国元素。
定时态:以一般现在时为主,介绍中国元素时可能会涉及一般过去时。
定人称:第一段引出自己心中的中国元素需用第一人称;第二段介绍中国元素时用第三人称;第三段总结时用第一人称。
定选材:①自己心中的中国元素是什么。
②介绍这个中国元素及其意义。
Step 2 列框架,谋布局
运用三段式“开头—中间—结尾”写作模式,列出思维导图,形成初步写作框架。
开头:引出话题——自己心中的中国元素是什么(可从传统节假日、传统艺术形式、传统手工艺品、传统乐器、传统美德等能象征中国传统文化的元素中进行筛选)。
The Chinese element in my heart is the tea art.
结尾:应强调中国元素能够彰显国家力量,也可以从青少年角度出发,倡导对中国元素的继承与弘扬。
In a word, behind each Chinese element is a door that leads to the spirits of Chinese people. As teenagers, what we should do is just to open the door and spread the Chinese element to the world.
Step 3 巧衔接,成篇章
The Chinese element in my heart
With the development of our country, more and more Chinese elements are spread to the world. ①The Chinese element in my heart is the tea art.
The history of tea art dates back to hundreds of years ago, ②which witnesses the change and the inheritance of Chinese culture. In my opinion, ③not only does the tea art play an important role in promoting cultural exchanges, but
①开门见山地引出“我”心中的中国元素是茶艺,简洁明了。
②第二段第一句使用了非限制性定语从句,witness这一词汇的使用增加了文章语言的高级感。
it also reminds us to live a peaceful life. ③And it’s the tea art that shows the importance of enjoying our lives.
④In a word, behind each Chinese element is a door that leads to the spirits of Chinese people. As teenagers, what we should do is just to open the door and spread the Chinese element to the world.
③第二段最后两句用not only… but also…结构以及强调句型对茶艺的意义进行总结,并与生活实际建立联系。
④使用in a word升华主题。behind each…这一句型来源于课本,体现了活学活用的能力。
(一)介绍假日经历与感悟
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词汇积累
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假期活动:
1.pay a visit to去参观
2.places of interest 名胜古迹
3. around the world/all over the world全世界
4.show sb.around带某人四处参观
5.show sb.sth. =show sth.to sb.向某人展示某物
6.go sightseeing去观光
7.take photos拍照
8.do some reading阅读
9.help my parents with some housework帮助我的父母做家务
10.take part in some voluntary activities 参加一些志愿
11.spend time on/(in) doing sth.花费时间(做)某事
12.be known/famous for...因……而闻名
感受:
1.enjoy oneself过得愉快
2.have a good/great/wonderful time玩得愉快;过得愉快
3.open one's eyes/mind 开阔某人的眼界
4.enjoy the beauty of nature领略大自然的美丽
5.improve oneself提升某人自己
6.look forward to期待
7. can't wait to do sth.迫不及待做某事
必备短语
be known/ famous for:因..而出名
lie in/be located in 位于
a great number of :大量的
from home and abroad:来自海内外的
the places of interest名胜古迹
take a trip 旅行
plan to do sth.计划做某事
have a long history 历史悠久
date back to/date from 追溯到.
be attracted by...被吸引
be covered with 被...覆盖
be crowded with 充满
be worth doing 值得做某事
an unforgettable experience 一次难忘的经历
be open to..对…开放
broadens one's horizons拓宽某人的视野
such as 比如
be proud of以为傲
feel at home 感到自在
be popular with 受欢迎
learn more about.了解更多关于
make a deep impression on sb.给某人留下深刻的印象
have a good time/ have fun/ enjoy oneself 玩得开心
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句式积累
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1.Known for its beautiful lakes.Jiuzhaigou attracts a great number of tourists from home and abroad every year.
九寨沟以其美丽的湖泊而闻名,每年都吸引大量的国内外游客(前来旅游)。
2. Traveling not only broadens my horizons but also opens my eyes to the world. What's more, it refreshes me.
旅行不仅开阔了我的视野,也让我了解这个世界。更重要的是,它让我精神焕发。
3. Beijing is a modern city as well as a historic city where there are many places worth visiting
北京是一个现代的城市,也是一个历史悠久的城市,那里有许多值得参观的地方。
4. I hope that you will visit Beijing during your vacation and enjoy your stay there
我希望你在假期能来北京玩,并享受你的假期。
5. I'm sure you won't be disappointed when you come here.
我相信你来这里时一定不会失望的。
(二)介绍自己最喜欢的节日
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词汇积累
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Customs and Activities:风俗活动
1. Spring Festival (Chinese New Year)春节
setting off fireworks and firecrackers:放鞭炮烟花
exchanging red envelopes (hongbao):派红包
hanging lanterns and couplets:挂灯笼和对联
cleaning house for the New Year: 春节大扫除
preparing a reunion dinner (nian ye fan):准备年夜饭
2. Lantern Festival元宵节
solving lantern riddles (deng mi):猜灯谜
eating tangyuan (sweet rice balls): 吃汤圆
hanging and displaying lanterns:挂花灯
3. Qingming Festival (Tomb-Sweeping Day)清明节
visiting ancestral graves:扫墓
offering sacrifices:祭祀
cleaning the tombstones:清洁墓碑
4. Dragon Boat Festival端午节
dragon boat racing:赛龙舟
eating zongzi (sticky rice dumplings): 吃粽子
wearing a perfume pouch:佩戴香包
5. Mid-Autumn Festival中秋节
appreciating the full moon:赏月
eating mooncakes:吃月饼
family reunions:家庭团聚
6.Double Ninth Festival (Chongyang Festival)重阳节
climbing mountains:登高
drinking chrysanthemum wine:饮菊花酒
wearing cornel flowers:插茱萸
7. Qixi Festival (Chinese Valentine's Day)七夕节
expressing love and affection:表达爱意
*Star gazing:观星
exchanging love tokens:交换信物
8. Laba Festival腊八节
eating Laba porridge:吃腊八粥
making offerings to Buddha: 供佛
9. Winter Solstice Festival冬至
eating dumplings or wonton soup: 吃饺子或馄饨
celebrating the return of longer days:庆祝白日渐长
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句式积累
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1. I am extremely glad you have interest in our Chinese traditional culture.
我非常高兴你对我们的中国传统文化感兴趣。
2. The Spring Festival is the most significant traditional holiday in China, which usually lasts for 15 days.
春节是中国最重要的传统节日, 通常持续15天。
3.The Spring Festival is an important traditional Chinese festival which is full of love and fun. It’s also a time of reunion and thanksgiving.
春节是一个充满爱和欢乐的中国传统节日, 也是团圆和感恩的时间。
4.The Dragon Boat Festival is a Chinese tradition which dates back more than two thousand years. 龙舟节是一个可追溯二千多年的中国传统。
5. Kids enjoy themselves on Children’s Day, which is a day to encourage children and bring joy to them around the world.
孩子们在儿童节玩得很愉快, 这是鼓励全世界的孩子们并给他们带来欢乐的一天。
6. The Mid-Autumn Festival is a day for family reunion. It is full of joy and happiness.
中秋节是家庭团圆日, 充满欢乐和幸福。
7.The Qingming Festival, or Tomb-Sweeping Day, is a time for honoring ancestors and remembering the past with traditional ceremonies and offerings.
清明节,或称扫墓节,是通过传统仪式和祭品来纪念祖先和缅怀过去的时节。
8. The Double Ninth Festival, also known as Chongyang, is a day to respect the elderly and
to climb high, symbolizing the ascent to longevity and good fortune.
重阳节,也称为重九节,是尊敬老人和登高的日子,象征着长寿和好运。
(一)开头句
1. My favorite festival is the Spring Festival, which is full of joy and hope.(我最喜欢的节日是春节,它充满了欢乐和希望。)
2. Among all the festivals, I like the Mid - Autumn Festival best because of its special meaning of reunion.(在所有的节日中,我最喜欢中秋节,因为它有着团圆的特殊意义。)
3. The festival that I love most is Christmas, as it brings warmth and happiness to everyone.(我最喜爱的节日是圣诞节,因为它给每个人带来温暖和幸福。)
(二)中间描述句
1. The Spring Festival is a time for family members to come back home from all over the world and enjoy a wonderful reunion.(春节是家庭成员从世界各地回家享受美好团聚的时刻。)
2. During the Dragon Boat Festival, people usually race dragon boats on the river, cheering loudly for their favorite teams.(在端午节期间,人们通常在河上赛龙舟,为他们喜欢的队伍大声加油。)
3. On Thanksgiving Day, families gather around the table, enjoying a big meal of turkey and expressing their gratitude for each other.(在感恩节,家人们围坐在餐桌旁,享用火鸡大餐,并相互表达感激之情。)
4. The food during the Mid - Autumn Festival is really delicious. For example, mooncakes with different fillings are everyone's favorite.(中秋节期间的食物非常美味。例如,各种馅料的月饼是大家的最爱。)
5. Christmas is a festival when people decorate their houses with beautiful lights and put up Christmas trees, making everywhere look so lovely.(圣诞节是人们用漂亮的彩灯装饰房屋并竖起圣诞树的节日,让每个地方看起来都那么可爱。)
(三)结尾句
1. The Spring Festival is a wonderful festival that not only brings families closer but also makes us feel the strong power of traditional culture.(春节是一个很棒的节日,它不仅让家人关系更亲密,还让我们感受到传统文化的强大力量。)
2. I always look forward to the Mid - Autumn Festival every year, as it gives me a chance to enjoy the beauty of the full moon and the warmth of family love.(我每年都期待着中秋节,因为它让我有机会欣赏满月之美和感受家庭之爱。)
3. Thanksgiving Day is a time to cherish what we have and express our love and thanks to those around us. It is truly a special festival.(感恩节是一个珍惜我们所拥有的,并向身边的人表达爱和感谢的时刻。它确实是一个特别的节日。 )
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变式提升训练
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(1)
根据中文和英文提示,写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于50词的短文。所给英文提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
我国的传统节日源远流长,越来越多的外国友人也开始热衷于了解中华传统节日。假如你是李华,你校正在举办“一起向未来,用英语讲好中华传统节日”的活动。请你以“My Favourite Chinese Traditional Festival”为题,向外国友人介绍你最喜欢的一个传统节日。并描述过节当天可以做哪些活动,你的感受如何。提示词语:celebrate (庆祝), lanterns, traditional, mooncake, couplets (对联)
提示问题:
·What is your favourite Chinese traditional festival?
·What do you often do on that day?
·How do you feel?
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【答案】例文:
There are many traditional festivals in China. My favourite Chinese festival is the Spring Festival. I can have lots of fun at this festival. The Spring Festival is a popular holiday in our country. It is in January or February. Our family members get together. We have a big dinner at my grandparents’ home. I always eat a lot of delicious food. My cousin and I both get red packets from our grandparents. My parents usually go shopping with me. We buy some nice clothes for ourselves. We often greet other people on the phone. The Spring Festival is the most important festival for us because it’s the beginning of a new year. I’m always happy at the Spring Festival.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:文章要点已经给出,按照话题展开阐述,可以适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出自己最喜欢的中国传统节日;
第二步,介绍该节日的时间以及在节日当天会进行的活动;
第三步,表达自己在这个节日里的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①get together团聚
②red packets红包
③the beginning of……的开始
[高分句型]
①The Spring Festival is the most important festival for us because it's the beginning of a new year.(because引导的原因状语从句)
(2)
读万卷书不如行万里路。不少人利用假期去旅行,丰富自己的假期生活,轻松愉悦的假期旅行总是能给我们留下美好的回忆。现你校校刊正在开展主题征文活动,请以“My ________ Trip”为题,用英语写一篇短文,向专栏投稿,分享你的一次旅行经历,并谈谈你的感受,或说说旅行给你带来的积极影响。
要求:(1) 请先将题目补充完整, 全文词数不少于80;
(2) 语言流畅,内容连贯,书写规范;
(3) 文中不得出现真实地名、校名和人名。
My ________ Trip
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【答案】例文
My Exciting Trip
Last summer vacation, my family and I went on a trip to the mountains. It was a wonderful experience for all of us. We climbed along the mountain paths, enjoying the fresh air and beautiful scenery. At the top, we saw a breathtaking view of the valley below. We also picked wild flowers and took lots of photos.
This trip made me realize the importance of family time and the beauty of nature. I felt relaxed and happy during the trip. It also gave me the courage to face challenges in life.
I’ll never forget this family trip!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇话题作文。
② 时态:时态主要为“一般过去时”。
③ 提示:补全标题。注意行文连贯,逻辑清晰,无拼写和语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步:详细介绍去年暑假的爬山之旅;
第二步:介绍旅行给自己的感受;
第三步:表示不会忘记那次旅行。
[亮点词汇]
①went on a trip to去……旅行了
②enjoying the fresh air享受着新鲜的空气
③a breathtaking view of the valley山谷中令人叹为观止的景色
④took lots of photos拍很多照片
⑤face challenges面对挑战
[高分句型]
We climbed along the mountain paths, enjoying the fresh air and beautiful scenery. (现在分词短语做伴随状语)
(3)
每个人都有自己心仪的地方,它可以是图书馆、公园、博物馆或者某个城市。你去过最好的地方是哪里?请结合自身经历,以“The best ________ I have ever been to”为题,写一篇英语短文。
要求:
1. 请把题目补充完整,不计入总词数;
2. 条理清楚、语句连贯;
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名等信息;
4. 不少于80词。
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【答案】例文
The best park I have ever been to
Last summer, I visited Green Lake Park with my family. It’s the best park I have ever been to.
The park is beautiful with a big lake in the center. We rented a small boat and rowed on the lake. The water was clear, and we could see fish swimming below. There were many trees around, so it felt cool even on hot days.
What I loved most was the flower garden. Colorful roses and sunflowers were everywhere, and bees were dancing among them. My little sister ran around happily, picking up fallen petals. We also had a picnic on the grass, sharing sandwiches and laughing loudly.
It was such a wonderful day. I’ll never forget the peace and joy I felt there.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为话题作文;
②时态:时态主要为“一般过去时”;
③提示:文章应该包括所有提示要点,要适当补充,使文章内容充实;行文时多用第一人称,尽量多使用短语和句型;写作中适当使用连接词,使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步,点明去绿湖公园的时间、同行者,及该公园是自己去过的最好的公园;
第二步,描述公园景色 (中心湖、树木) 及在湖上划船的经历;
第三步,讲述最爱的花园场景、妹妹的活动及野餐的欢乐;
第四步,书写总结,表达感受。
[亮点词汇]
①pick up 捡起
②have a picnic 野餐
[高分句型]
①What I loved most was the flower garden. (what引导的主语从句)
②It’s the best park I have ever been to. (定语从句)
(4)
在你的生活中,你肯定有过给你留下深刻印象的出行,可能是游历祖国的名山大川,可能是一次愉快的户外远足,也可能是一次难忘的研学活动。请你根据写作要求,以“A Wonderful Trip”为题,用英语写一篇短文,叙述一次你的出行经历,并谈谈你的感受。
写作要求:
1)介绍你的出行伙伴、目的地、出行方式等;
2)描述你出行中的主要活动,并谈谈你的出行感受;
3)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称;
4)词数100左右。
A Wonderful Trip
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【答案】例文
A Wonderful Trip
Last Sunday, my classmates and I went on an unforgettable trip to Mount Qifeng. We gathered at school early in the morning and took a bus there.
As we climbed the mountain, we enjoyed the fresh air, the green trees and beautiful flowers. The river was flowing and the birds were singing around us. When we reached the top, we sat down to share snacks and take pictures. We even played fun games together. On the way down, we collected colorful leaves and stones.
This trip was amazing! It not only let us get close to nature but also strengthened our friendship. I felt relaxed and excited, and I hope to have more outdoor activities like this.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:本文应使用“一般过去时”为主;
③提示:应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充,使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己的出行伙伴、目的地、出行方式等;
第二步,根据题干的要点,描述主要活动和出行感受;
第三步,给出评价并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①sit down坐下来
②hope to do希望做某事
[高分句型]
①When we reached the top, we sat down to share snacks and take pictures.(when引导的时间状语从句)
②It not only let us get close to nature but also strengthened our friendship.(not only…but also)
(5)
假定你是李华,你校将举办艺术节。请你根据以下内容提示,写一封邮件,邀请你的笔友Peter参加。
注意:词数100左右,信的格式和开头已给,不计入总词数。语句通顺,意思连贯,可适当发挥,语法正确,书写规范。请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。
Dear Peter,
How is everything going?
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】范文:
Dear Peter,
How is everything going? Our school will hold a school art festival in the school hall next Sunday. It will last from 9:00 a.m. to 11:00 a.m.
There will be different kinds of programs during the school art festival. Some students will have a fashion show to model the clothes. Others will tell interesting stories in English. What’s more, you can also enjoy wonderful songs, instrument performances and so on. They are really worth watching.
Welcome to our school art festival. I’m sure you’ll add color and fun to our festival. Write back to me as soon as you receive it.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇电子邮件;
②时态:主要时态为“一般将来时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的每一项提示,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出邀请对方参加艺术节的目的;
第二步,介绍不同种类的节目;
第三步,书写结语,表达期待。
[亮点词汇]
①be worth doing值得做某事
②write back回复
③what’s more此外
[高分句型]
①There will be different kinds of programs during the school art festival. (There be句型)
②I’m sure you’ll add color and fun to our festival. (宾语从句)
(6)
假如你是李华,你打算在校报专栏“Traditional Chinese Art”介绍你最喜欢的剪纸艺术,请以“Paper Cutting”为题写一篇不少于100词的英语短文。
要求:1.语言准确,语句通顺,表达连贯;
2.书写认真规范,卷面整洁。
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【答案】例文:
Paper Cutting
Paper cutting is one of the most popular traditional Chinese arts. With a long-standing history, it has been an integral part of Chinese culture.
Using scissors and paper, craftsmen create various patterns, like flowers, animals and Chinese characters. These works are not only beautiful but also carry deep meanings. For example, the “Fu” character cut out represents good fortune, and the peony pattern stands for prosperity.
I’m fascinated by paper cutting because it shows the wisdom of our ancestors. It’s also a wonderful way to spread Chinese culture. Many people around the world are now interested in it, making it a bridge between different cultures.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文。
②时态:为一般现在时。
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示中剪纸艺术的地位、制作方式、文化寓意、个人感受的介绍要点,适当添加细节,突出剪纸艺术的传统价值与文化魅力。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。引出介绍对象(剪纸艺术)及地位。
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从历史、制作、文化寓意几方面,说明剪纸艺术的特点。
第三步,书写结语。表达对剪纸的喜爱,及对传播文化的意义。
[亮点词汇]
①traditional Chinese arts中国传统艺术
②long-standing history悠久历史
③integral part不可或缺的部分
④carry deep meanings蕴含深刻意义
[高分句型]
①Paper cutting is one of the most popular traditional Chinese arts. (“one of the+形容词最高级+可数名词复数”)
②These works are not only beautiful but also carry deep meanings. (“not only... but also...”并列结构)
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亲爱的同学们,今年暑假你们一定过得非常丰富多彩吧! 请你以“My Summer Holiday”为题,按照下面思维导图提示,写一篇文章在英语课上向同学们介绍一下你今年的暑假是如何度过的吧。
要求:
1. 所写内容应意思连贯、语法正确,书写工整;
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;
3. 100 词左右。
My Summer Holiday
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【答案】例文
My Summer Holiday
During the summer holiday, my family and I went to Guilin.
We arrived by train in the morning. Guilin is famous for its beautiful scenery. The Elephant Trunk Hill (象鼻山) and the Lijiang River are must-sees. The water and mountains are as beautiful as a painting. We took a boat ride on the river, and it felt like rowing in a picture. We took lots of photos there. In the evening, we just couldn’t wait to try the local food—Guilin Rice Noodles. They tasted very delicious.
As the saying goes, “Guilin scenery is the best in the world.” I really enjoyed this trip. And I look forward to visiting Guilin again.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
② 时态:以“一般过去时” 为主;
③ 提示:文章围绕暑假的旅行展开,介绍了目的地、交通方式、景点、活动及美食等内容,需涵盖关键信息,注意语法正确、书写工整,不出现真实人名和校名,保证语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,点明暑假和家人去了桂林及出行方式;
第二步,介绍桂林的著名景点、在当地的活动(乘船、拍照)及美食;
第三步,引用俗语表达对桂林景色的赞美,抒发旅行感受并表达再次游览的期待。
[亮点词汇]
① be famous for 因……而著名
② must-sees 必看之处
③ take a boat ride 乘船游览
④ local food 当地美食
⑤ look forward to 期待
[高分句型]
As the saying goes, “Guilin scenery is the best in the world.”(as the saying goes引用俗语,增强表达的生动性)
(8)
多彩旅途,学思践悟。假如你是李明,你国外的笔友Jack来信想了解你假期旅行的情况,请根据下图提示,给他回一封邮件,谈谈你旅行中的所见所闻与所做所思。
要求:
1.根据上图所给提示,适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名;
3.词数80左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
EMAIL
To: jackbrown@happymail. com
From: liming173456176@qq. com
Hi Jack,
Thanks for your email.
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Yours,
Li Ming
【答案】例文
Hi Jack,
Thanks for your email. I had a wonderful trip to Beijing during the summer holiday. It was hot there. I visited the Great Wall, which was amazing and full of history. I also tried some local food like Beijing roast duck, and it was delicious. In the evening, I walked around the city and enjoyed the beautiful night views. I learned a lot about Chinese culture and history during this trip. I hope that you can visit China someday and experience it yourself.
Yours,
Li Ming
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇电子邮件;
②时态:本文应使用“一般过去时”为主;
③提示:应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充,使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步,借用文章已给开头,引出主题;
第二步,根据题干的要点,介绍旅行中的所见所闻与所做所思;
第三步,发出邀请,并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①local food当地食物
②night views夜景
[高分句型]
①I visited the Great Wall, which was amazing and full of history.(非限制性定语从句)
②I hope that you can visit China someday and experience it yourself.(宾语从句)
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假如你是李华,你校刚刚结束 “中国传统艺术进校园” 系列活动,你参与了其中一项活动。请你给本校英文报“School Life”栏目投稿,介绍此次活动的目的,分享参与经历并表达个人感受。
注意:
1.80词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
2.文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名;
3.适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
4.条理清晰,书写规范。
Last week, our school held a special event called “Chinese Traditional Arts on Campus”.
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【答案】例文:
Last week, our school held a special event called “Chinese Traditional Arts on Campus”. I was lucky to take part in one of the activities— “Classic Cartoons with Me”. It aimed to help students explore the beauty of traditional Chinese cartoons.
During the activity, we watched several classic cartoon films. The special cartoon styles, bright colors, and beautiful background music made the stories come alive. I was especially surprised to see traditional art forms like shadow puppet shows and ink painting used in some of the films.
This experience made me realize the value of our traditional culture. It also deepened my love for Chinese cartoons and made me feel proud of our culture.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
②时态:一般过去时;
③提示:考生应注意不要漏写个人感受,适当发挥,使上下文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍你参与了哪个活动;
第二步,具体描述参与经历;
第三步,谈谈你的个人感受。
[亮点词汇]
①take part in参与
②explore探索
③value价值
④proud自豪的
[高分句型]
①I was especially surprised to see traditional art forms like shadow puppet shows and ink painting used in some of the films.(过去分词作后置定语)
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年年岁岁花相似,岁岁年年人不同。年复一年的春节又过了一年,照旧亲朋好友总要相聚,我们也回乡下看爷爷奶奶外公外婆,我们和亲人们也聊天交流,大人孩子也会独自耍手机,离别也比较感伤。随着带着大包小包的年轻人逐渐远去,整个乡村又安静下来。而这个春节也有些不同。眉山城外允许放烟花爆竹(play fireworks)了,整个城市显得也更加热闹而富有生命力了。人们对未来的期许也更加强烈了。请你以“The Spring Festivals of 2025”为题,根据要点和要求写一篇短文。
要点:1. 春节是我们的传统节日。你的家乡有哪些过春节的习俗呢?你是如何看待它们的?
2. 陪伴是最长情的告白。你是如何和家人一起过节的,你都做了哪些自己喜欢或觉得有意义的事?哪吒和唐探你看了吗?
3. 努力是生活的常态。过去的一年你是否还有些遗憾,新的一年你打算如何努力?
4. 感恩是力量的源泉。对那些曾经关心你,爱护你的亲人,师长,朋友,同学,你想对他们说……
(下划线部分主要起到提示作用,可以不需要完整翻译)
要求:80词以上。
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【答案】 The Spring Festival of 2025
The Spring Festival is our most important traditional festival. In my hometown, we always clean our house, put up red couplets, and enjoy a big family dinner on New Year’s Eve. I think these customs are fun and meaningful because they bring us good luck and family togetherness.
During the holiday, the best part was spending time with my family. We visited my grandparents in the countryside. I helped them cook and played games with my cousins. Giving them a warm hug was the sweetest memory.
Looking back at last year, I feel a bit sorry for not studying harder. This year, I will listen more carefully in class and finish my homework on time every day. I want to be a better student.
Finally, I want to say thank you to my parents, teachers, and friends. Your care and help light up my heart! I will always remember it and study hard to make you proud.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为一般现在时态; 一般过去时态和一般将来时态;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示,并适当添加细节,无语法和拼写错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步:开篇点题,指出春节是最重要的传统节日,并介绍家乡的春节习俗及习俗的意义;
第二步:具体阐述春节假期的美好经历,并提及对过去的反思;
第三步:书写结语,表达新年的决心,并向父母、老师和朋友表达谢意。
[亮点词汇]
①put up张贴
②say thank you to sb.向某人道谢
③light up照亮
[高分句型]
I think these customs are fun and meaningful because they bring us good luck and family togetherness.(宾语从句、原因状语从句)
【中考真题链接】
1.(2025·黑龙江·中考真题)
话题作文:春节、清明节、端午节、中秋节……中华民族上下五千年形成了内涵丰富、形式多样的节日文化。学校英语社团决定开展“多彩的传统节日”主题宣传活动,请用英语介绍一个你最喜欢的中国传统节日。1. 话题作文。
2. 词数:80—100之间。
3. 字迹工整,语法正确,意思连贯,合乎逻辑,可适当发挥。
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【答案】例文
My favourite traditional festival is the Spring Festival. Let me introduce it to you.
It is on the first day of the first lunar month. Family members usually get together to eat a big dinner. We can see red things everywhere, because they mean happiness and good fortune. Children will get lucky money from their parents. People always have a long holiday to relax. It’s a new beginning of the year. It not only means family reunion, but also shows Chinese traditional culture.
I like the Spring Festival very much.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇说明文,为话题作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意介绍节日的时间、庆祝方式、象征意义等,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开门见山,点明最喜欢的传统节日;
第二步,具体介绍节日的时间、庆祝方式、象征意义等;
第三步,总结并表达对这个节日的喜爱之情。
[亮点词汇]
① get together 团聚
② good fortune 好运
③ lucky money 压岁钱
④ family reunion 家庭团聚
⑤ traditional culture 传统文化
[高分句型]
① Family members usually get together to eat a big dinner.(动词不定式作目的状语)
② We can see red things everywhere, because they mean happiness and good fortune.(because引导的原因状语从句)
2.(2025·江苏苏州·中考真题)
假如你是李华,正在英国参加短期交流项目。在学校的“文化周”活动中,作为中国交流学生代表,你准备展示并介绍一把自制的手工扇,请你写一份发言稿。
内容包括:
(1)扇子制作过程(如图);
(2)扇面设计内容和寓意;
(3)你的感受与愿望。
要求:
(1)词数100左右;
(2)适当展开想象,增加细节;
(3)照抄试卷中语篇内容不得分;
(4)文中不得出现真实校名和姓名等信息。
参考词汇:brush n. 毛笔
Hi, everyone! Welcome to the cultural week! Chinese fans are both practical tools and beautiful works of art. Here is the fan I made.
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【答案】例文
Hi, everyone! Welcome to the cultural week! Chinese fans are both practical tools and beautiful works of art. Here is the fan I made.
To make this fan, I first prepared materials like paper, scissors, a brush, and ink. Next, I carefully cut out two circular pieces of paper for the fan’s surface. Finally, I used the brush to paint my design on one side. The design features a traditional Chinese landscape with mountains, waterfalls, and pine trees, symbolizing harmony between nature and humanity.
This project was not only fun but also taught me about patience and creativity. I hope you enjoy it as much as I enjoyed making it. Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇发言稿,描述了作者亲手制作中国扇子的过程以及其背后的意义;
②时态:时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,要求结合提示内容进行写作,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍主题和背景,引出自己制作的扇子;
第二步,详细描述制作过程、材料及设计特点;
第三步,总结经验与感悟,表达对作品的喜爱和分享的喜悦。
[亮点词汇]
①practical tools 实用工具
②works of art 艺术品
③traditional Chinese landscape 中国传统山水画
④harmony between nature and humanity 自然与人类之间的和谐
[高分句型]
①Chinese fans are both practical tools and beautiful works of art.(使用both...and结构,突出了扇子的功能性与艺术性)
②The design features a traditional Chinese landscape with mountains, waterfalls, and pine trees, symbolizing harmony between nature and humanity.(通过具体描写设计元素,生动表达了主题意义)
③This project was not only fun but also taught me about patience and creativity.(运用not only...but also结构,强调了收获)
2. (2025·四川达州·中考真题)
暑期将至,腾飞中学根据学校“五育并举”实施方案,对100名学生的暑期活动安排进行了调查,请根据下图和以下内容提示,以“What Will Tengfei High School Students Do in Their Summer Vacation?”为题,用英语写一篇调查报告
内容提示:
体育活动:球类运动…… 艺术活动:学习乐器……
烹饪活动:制作菜肴…… 阅读活动:读书看报……
其它活动:
写作要求:
1.内容必须包括表格中所给要点,适当发挥一至两点,并阐明自己的观点。
2.语句通顺,语法正确,书写规范。
3.文中不能出现考生的真实姓名、校名、和地名。
4.不少于90词(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
What will Tengfei High School Students Do in Their Summer Vacation?
Last week, we asked 100 students about their summer vacation activities. Our questions were about sports, art, cooking, reading and others. Here are the results.
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【答案】例文:
What will Tengfei High School Students Do in Their Summer Vacation?
Last week, we asked 100 students about their summer vacation activities. Our questions were about sports, art, cooking, reading and others. Here are the results.
It is clear that sports are the most popular. 40% of students will do ball games like basketball and football. They think it is a great way to keep fit and have fun with friends. Only 10% of them take up art activities like learning a musical instrument. 20% of them prefer to cook. They want to make delicious dishes. 25% of them enjoy reading. Reading books or newspapers can open their minds. And the rest choose other activities such as traveling and volunteering in summer vacation.
In my opinion, these activities can make students’ summer vacations colorful and meaningful. They can not only develop skills but also relax themselves.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏内容提示,适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,开门见山,引出下文调查内容;
第二步,具体阐述调查结果内容;
第三步,阐述自己的观点,讲述暑期活动的意义。
[亮点词汇]
①such as比如
②prefer to do 更喜欢
③take up从事
④ not only...but also...不但……而且……
[高分句型]
①It is clear that sports are the most popular. (主语从句)
②They think it is a great way to keep fit and have fun with friends.(省略that的宾语从句)
4.(2024·山东淄博·中考真题)
某英语杂志社开展“我们的节日”主题征文活动,请你写一篇100词左右的英语短文投稿,介绍一个有特色的中国节日。
要点提示:
1.节日简介;
2.节日活动;
3.过节的感受;
4.……
注意:
1.书写规范,表达连贯,可根据内容适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现真实的区县、学校及姓名。
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【答案】例文
Double Ninth Festival is a traditional Chinese festival for the elderly, falling on September 9 of the lunar calendar. On the festival people often go to climb hills and do something for the elderly.
On the special day this year, our school organized us students to visit the Nursing Home nearby, where we visited the elderly, presenting them with flowers and self-made cards to show our respect and love. Also, we gave them some performances like singing, dancing, and so on.
The elderly, I think, is the wealth of the society. Had it not been for their labor, we wouldn’t enjoy our happy life and a harmonious society. Thus, respecting, loving and supporting the elderly is the right thing to do.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:按照题干中所给的要点提示介绍一个有特色的中国节日,注意要点齐全,语法正确,语句通顺。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开门见山,直入主题,介绍重阳节的时间和习俗;
第二步,介绍自己是怎么度过这个节日的;
第三步,表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①a traditional Chinese festival中国传统的节日
②go to climb hills去爬山
③a harmonious society和谐社会
[高分句型]
①On the special day this year, our school organized us students to visit the Nursing Home nearby, where we visited the elderly, presenting them with flowers and self-made cards to show our respect and love. (定语从句,不定式表目的)
②Had it not been for their labor, we wouldn’t enjoy our happy life and a harmonious society. (虚拟语气)
5. (2023·浙江宁波·中考真题)
为了弘扬传统文化,你校结合“宁波元素”在今年5月19日(中国旅游日)开展了丰富多彩的文化活动(cultural activities)。假如你是李华,请根据表格中的信息并结合自身经历,写一篇英语短文向学校英语报投稿。
注意:
(1)短文必须包括表格中的所有要点,并适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;
(3)词数80—100;标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
When
What I did
What I learned
Feelings
in the morning
visit Ningbo Museum
the long history of the city
...
at noon
make Ningbo Tangyuan
a symbol of family get-togethers
in the afternoon
...
...
My Traditional Cultural Experiences
On May 19, our school organized
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【答案】例文
My Traditional Cultural Experiences
On May 19, our school organized many traditional cultural activities. I was happy that I learned a lot.
In the morning, I visited Ningbo Museum with my classmates and enjoyed the beauty of traditional arts. Everyone was excited to learn about the long history of the city. At noon, we made Ningbo Tangyuan (Dumplings). We learned it was a symbol of family get-togethers. In the afternoon, we read many ancient local stories and shared them in the story-telling competition, learning about the traditional values of our city.
These activities have not only helped me have a better understanding of our city, but also left a lasting influence on my heart and mind.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,不能遗漏信息,以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步,根据表格提示介绍一天做的事情和自己学到的东西;
第二步,表达自己的个人感受。
[亮点词汇]
①learn about了解
②a symbol of……的象征
③not only...but also...不但……而且……
[高分句型]
In the morning, I visited Ningbo Museum with my classmates and enjoyed the beauty of traditional arts.(and连接两个并列结构)
6. (2023·浙江·中考真题)
在学校“探寻中华传统文化”英语综合实践活动中,你班对“元宵节”和“端午节”两个中国传统节日开展了小课题研究,经过探究与实践,你们收集了一些信息与资料(见下表),假设你是李华,请选择其中一个节日,用英语写一篇短文,在英语拓展课上代表小组就你们的研究成果以及下阶段计划进行交流。
Project: Exploring the Chinese Culture and Customs
Research Subject
the Lantern Festival
the Dragon Boat Festival
Methods(How we did it)
•watch a lantern show
•…
•visit a local museum
•…
Information(What we’ve learned)
History
•about 2,000 years
•about 2,000 years
Time
•the 15th day of the first lunar month
•the 5th day of the fifth lunar month
Celebrations
•riddle(谜语) games
•…
•boat races
•…
Food
•tangyuan
•zongzi
…
…
…
A New Plan(What we’ll do)
…
…
注意:
(1) 短文必须包含表中你所选节日的所有信息,并适当发挥。
(2) 文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息。
(3) 词数:80~100,短文开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear classmates, I’m very happy to share our research with you. The subject we’ve chosen is
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That’s all. Thank you!
【答案】Possible versions:
Version 1
Dear classmates, I’m very happy to share our research with you. The subject we’ve chosen is the Lantern Festival. We’ve collected much information about the festival by doing some reading in the library and watching a lantern show.
The Lantern Festival has a history of about 2,000 years. It’s celebrated on the 15th day of the first lunar month. People get together to enjoy colourful lanterns and play riddle games. Small gifts are usually offered when they get right answers. It’s a tradition to eat tang yuan on this special day.
As for the next step, we will focus on designing lanterns and making English riddles. This will help us understand the meaning of the festival better.
That’s all. Thank you!
Version 2
Dear classmates, I’m very happy to share our research with you. The subject we’ve chosen is the Dragon Boat Festival. To do the research, we searched for information online and visited a local museum about culture and customs.
We’ve learned a lot about the festival. With a history of about 2,000 years, the Dragon Boat Festival falls on the 5th day of the fifth lunar month. People usually celebrate it by watching boat races. Zongzi is the most traditional food that is eaten to honour the great poet Qu Yuan.
Next, we plan to learn how to make zongzi, and produce an English video to make the festival known by more people around the world.
That’s all. Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇说明文,为材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,不能遗漏信息,并适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步,从“元宵节”和“端午节”中选择一个节日叙述;
第二步,根据表格提示具体阐述你们的研究成果。
第三步,介绍下阶段计划。
[亮点词汇]
①as for至于
②focus on专注于
③help sb do sth帮助某人做某事
[高分句型]
Small gifts are usually offered when they get right answers. (when引导的时间状语从句)
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高频话题06 节假日活动
同步写作课讲义
节假日活动 类文章主要包含:①介绍假日经历与感悟;②介绍自己最喜欢的节日活动等
(一)介绍假日经历与感悟
今年五一,襄阳凭借丰富的旅游资源和优质的服务,吸引了各地的游客前来“打卡”。在校园英语文化周,你将代表班级做关于“旅行”的英语演讲。请根据以下要点提示,结合你的旅游或出行经历,写一篇英语演讲稿。
1.要点提示:
(1)简要介绍你对旅行的态度或看法;
(2)详述你的一次旅游或出行经历;
(3)根据你的旅行感受,为襄阳的旅游发展提出一条合理的建议或希望。
2.注意事项:
(1)词数90左右,开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数;
(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3)作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
Dear schoolmates,
Good morning! I’m glad to make a speech here.
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That’s all. Thank you!
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写作框架设计
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写作指导
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③提示:根据内容提示,介绍自己的旅游经历和感受,不要遗漏要点,可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步,简要介绍你对旅行的态度或看法;
第二步,详述你的一次旅游或出行经历;
第三步,提出自己的建议。
【参考范文】
【答案】例文
Dear schoolmates,
Good morning! I’m glad to make a speech here.
Now more and more people are interested in travelling. I think trip is an opportunity for us to experience life and increase knowledge. At the same time, it can also broaden our horizon.
Last Wednesday, we went on a trip to Yixing. Yixing is a modern and tidy city, where there are many places of interest. It was a fine warm day. In the morning, we climbed the hill in the Bamboo Park. On the way, we met an Australian. He was kind and patient. We had fun practising speaking English. In the afternoon, we rowed boats along the underground river in the Shanjuan Cave. It was a great day.
I think if we want to attract more tourists, we should provide better service for tourists.
That’s all. Thank you!
总体分析:
[亮点词汇]
①be interested in对……感兴趣
②at the same time同时
③places of interest名胜古迹
[高分句型]
①Yixing is a modern and tidy city, where there are many places of interest.(非限制性定语从句)
②I think if we want to attract more tourists, we should provide better service for tourists.(宾语从句;if引导的条件状语从句)
(2) 介绍自己最喜欢的节日
越来越多的中国元素走向世界舞台,彰显了中国力量。中国元素包罗万象,从有形的物质符号到无形的精神内容,如风筝、剪纸等民俗艺术,春节、中秋节等节日文化……你心中的中国元素是什么?请以“The Chinese element in my heart”为题,根据以下要点和要求,用英语写一篇短文,向校刊英文栏目投稿。
1. 要点:1)你心中的中国元素是什么。
2)介绍这个中国元素及其意义。
2. 要求:1)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称。
2)词数100左右。
The Chinese element in my heart
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写作框架设计
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Step 1 审好题,定方向
定体裁:本文是一篇说明文,介绍自己心中的中国元素。
定时态:以一般现在时为主,介绍中国元素时可能会涉及一般过去时。
定人称:第一段引出自己心中的中国元素需用第一人称;第二段介绍中国元素时用第三人称;第三段总结时用第一人称。
定选材:①自己心中的中国元素是什么。
②介绍这个中国元素及其意义。
Step 2 列框架,谋布局
运用三段式“开头—中间—结尾”写作模式,列出思维导图,形成初步写作框架。
开头:引出话题——自己心中的中国元素是什么(可从传统节假日、传统艺术形式、传统手工艺品、传统乐器、传统美德等能象征中国传统文化的元素中进行筛选)。
The Chinese element in my heart is the tea art.
结尾:应强调中国元素能够彰显国家力量,也可以从青少年角度出发,倡导对中国元素的继承与弘扬。
In a word, behind each Chinese element is a door that leads to the spirits of Chinese people. As teenagers, what we should do is just to open the door and spread the Chinese element to the world.
Step 3 巧衔接,成篇章
The Chinese element in my heart
With the development of our country, more and more Chinese elements are spread to the world. ①The Chinese element in my heart is the tea art.
The history of tea art dates back to hundreds of years ago, ②which witnesses the change and the inheritance of Chinese culture. In my opinion, ③not only does the tea art play an important role in promoting cultural exchanges, but
①开门见山地引出“我”心中的中国元素是茶艺,简洁明了。
②第二段第一句使用了非限制性定语从句,witness这一词汇的使用增加了文章语言的高级感。
it also reminds us to live a peaceful life. ③And it’s the tea art that shows the importance of enjoying our lives.
④In a word, behind each Chinese element is a door that leads to the spirits of Chinese people. As teenagers, what we should do is just to open the door and spread the Chinese element to the world.
③第二段最后两句用not only… but also…结构以及强调句型对茶艺的意义进行总结,并与生活实际建立联系。
④使用in a word升华主题。behind each…这一句型来源于课本,体现了活学活用的能力。
(一)介绍假日经历与感悟
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词汇积累
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假期活动:
1.pay a visit to去参观
2.places of interest 名胜古迹
3. around the world/all over the world全世界
4.show sb.around带某人四处参观
5.show sb.sth. =show sth.to sb.向某人展示某物
6.go sightseeing去观光
7.take photos拍照
8.do some reading阅读
9.help my parents with some housework帮助我的父母做家务
10.take part in some voluntary activities 参加一些志愿
11.spend time on/(in) doing sth.花费时间(做)某事
12.be known/famous for...因……而闻名
感受:
1.enjoy oneself过得愉快
2.have a good/great/wonderful time玩得愉快;过得愉快
3.open one's eyes/mind 开阔某人的眼界
4.enjoy the beauty of nature领略大自然的美丽
5.improve oneself提升某人自己
6.look forward to期待
7. can't wait to do sth.迫不及待做某事
必备短语
be known/ famous for:因..而出名
lie in/be located in 位于
a great number of :大量的
from home and abroad:来自海内外的
the places of interest名胜古迹
take a trip 旅行
plan to do sth.计划做某事
have a long history 历史悠久
date back to/date from 追溯到.
be attracted by...被吸引
be covered with 被...覆盖
be crowded with 充满
be worth doing 值得做某事
an unforgettable experience 一次难忘的经历
be open to..对…开放
broadens one's horizons拓宽某人的视野
such as 比如
be proud of以为傲
feel at home 感到自在
be popular with 受欢迎
learn more about.了解更多关于
make a deep impression on sb.给某人留下深刻的印象
have a good time/ have fun/ enjoy oneself 玩得开心
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句式积累
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1.Known for its beautiful lakes.Jiuzhaigou attracts a great number of tourists from home and abroad every year.
九寨沟以其美丽的湖泊而闻名,每年都吸引大量的国内外游客(前来旅游)。
2. Traveling not only broadens my horizons but also opens my eyes to the world. What's more, it refreshes me.
旅行不仅开阔了我的视野,也让我了解这个世界。更重要的是,它让我精神焕发。
3. Beijing is a modern city as well as a historic city where there are many places worth visiting
北京是一个现代的城市,也是一个历史悠久的城市,那里有许多值得参观的地方。
4. I hope that you will visit Beijing during your vacation and enjoy your stay there
我希望你在假期能来北京玩,并享受你的假期。
5. I'm sure you won't be disappointed when you come here.
我相信你来这里时一定不会失望的。
(二)介绍自己最喜欢的节日
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词汇积累
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Customs and Activities:风俗活动
1. Spring Festival (Chinese New Year)春节
setting off fireworks and firecrackers:放鞭炮烟花
exchanging red envelopes (hongbao):派红包
hanging lanterns and couplets:挂灯笼和对联
cleaning house for the New Year: 春节大扫除
preparing a reunion dinner (nian ye fan):准备年夜饭
2. Lantern Festival元宵节
solving lantern riddles (deng mi):猜灯谜
eating tangyuan (sweet rice balls): 吃汤圆
hanging and displaying lanterns:挂花灯
3. Qingming Festival (Tomb-Sweeping Day)清明节
visiting ancestral graves:扫墓
offering sacrifices:祭祀
cleaning the tombstones:清洁墓碑
4. Dragon Boat Festival端午节
dragon boat racing:赛龙舟
eating zongzi (sticky rice dumplings): 吃粽子
wearing a perfume pouch:佩戴香包
5. Mid-Autumn Festival中秋节
appreciating the full moon:赏月
eating mooncakes:吃月饼
family reunions:家庭团聚
6.Double Ninth Festival (Chongyang Festival)重阳节
climbing mountains:登高
drinking chrysanthemum wine:饮菊花酒
wearing cornel flowers:插茱萸
7. Qixi Festival (Chinese Valentine's Day)七夕节
expressing love and affection:表达爱意
*Star gazing:观星
exchanging love tokens:交换信物
8. Laba Festival腊八节
eating Laba porridge:吃腊八粥
making offerings to Buddha: 供佛
9. Winter Solstice Festival冬至
eating dumplings or wonton soup: 吃饺子或馄饨
celebrating the return of longer days:庆祝白日渐长
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句式积累
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1. I am extremely glad you have interest in our Chinese traditional culture.
我非常高兴你对我们的中国传统文化感兴趣。
2. The Spring Festival is the most significant traditional holiday in China, which usually lasts for 15 days.
春节是中国最重要的传统节日, 通常持续15天。
3.The Spring Festival is an important traditional Chinese festival which is full of love and fun. It’s also a time of reunion and thanksgiving.
春节是一个充满爱和欢乐的中国传统节日, 也是团圆和感恩的时间。
4.The Dragon Boat Festival is a Chinese tradition which dates back more than two thousand years. 龙舟节是一个可追溯二千多年的中国传统。
5. Kids enjoy themselves on Children’s Day, which is a day to encourage children and bring joy to them around the world.
孩子们在儿童节玩得很愉快, 这是鼓励全世界的孩子们并给他们带来欢乐的一天。
6. The Mid-Autumn Festival is a day for family reunion. It is full of joy and happiness.
中秋节是家庭团圆日, 充满欢乐和幸福。
7.The Qingming Festival, or Tomb-Sweeping Day, is a time for honoring ancestors and remembering the past with traditional ceremonies and offerings.
清明节,或称扫墓节,是通过传统仪式和祭品来纪念祖先和缅怀过去的时节。
8. The Double Ninth Festival, also known as Chongyang, is a day to respect the elderly and
to climb high, symbolizing the ascent to longevity and good fortune.
重阳节,也称为重九节,是尊敬老人和登高的日子,象征着长寿和好运。
(一)开头句
1. My favorite festival is the Spring Festival, which is full of joy and hope.(我最喜欢的节日是春节,它充满了欢乐和希望。)
2. Among all the festivals, I like the Mid - Autumn Festival best because of its special meaning of reunion.(在所有的节日中,我最喜欢中秋节,因为它有着团圆的特殊意义。)
3. The festival that I love most is Christmas, as it brings warmth and happiness to everyone.(我最喜爱的节日是圣诞节,因为它给每个人带来温暖和幸福。)
(二)中间描述句
1. The Spring Festival is a time for family members to come back home from all over the world and enjoy a wonderful reunion.(春节是家庭成员从世界各地回家享受美好团聚的时刻。)
2. During the Dragon Boat Festival, people usually race dragon boats on the river, cheering loudly for their favorite teams.(在端午节期间,人们通常在河上赛龙舟,为他们喜欢的队伍大声加油。)
3. On Thanksgiving Day, families gather around the table, enjoying a big meal of turkey and expressing their gratitude for each other.(在感恩节,家人们围坐在餐桌旁,享用火鸡大餐,并相互表达感激之情。)
4. The food during the Mid - Autumn Festival is really delicious. For example, mooncakes with different fillings are everyone's favorite.(中秋节期间的食物非常美味。例如,各种馅料的月饼是大家的最爱。)
5. Christmas is a festival when people decorate their houses with beautiful lights and put up Christmas trees, making everywhere look so lovely.(圣诞节是人们用漂亮的彩灯装饰房屋并竖起圣诞树的节日,让每个地方看起来都那么可爱。)
(三)结尾句
1. The Spring Festival is a wonderful festival that not only brings families closer but also makes us feel the strong power of traditional culture.(春节是一个很棒的节日,它不仅让家人关系更亲密,还让我们感受到传统文化的强大力量。)
2. I always look forward to the Mid - Autumn Festival every year, as it gives me a chance to enjoy the beauty of the full moon and the warmth of family love.(我每年都期待着中秋节,因为它让我有机会欣赏满月之美和感受家庭之爱。)
3. Thanksgiving Day is a time to cherish what we have and express our love and thanks to those around us. It is truly a special festival.(感恩节是一个珍惜我们所拥有的,并向身边的人表达爱和感谢的时刻。它确实是一个特别的节日。 )
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根据中文和英文提示,写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于50词的短文。所给英文提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
我国的传统节日源远流长,越来越多的外国友人也开始热衷于了解中华传统节日。假如你是李华,你校正在举办“一起向未来,用英语讲好中华传统节日”的活动。请你以“My Favourite Chinese Traditional Festival”为题,向外国友人介绍你最喜欢的一个传统节日。并描述过节当天可以做哪些活动,你的感受如何。提示词语:celebrate (庆祝), lanterns, traditional, mooncake, couplets (对联)
提示问题:
·What is your favourite Chinese traditional festival?
·What do you often do on that day?
·How do you feel?
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(2)
读万卷书不如行万里路。不少人利用假期去旅行,丰富自己的假期生活,轻松愉悦的假期旅行总是能给我们留下美好的回忆。现你校校刊正在开展主题征文活动,请以“My ________ Trip”为题,用英语写一篇短文,向专栏投稿,分享你的一次旅行经历,并谈谈你的感受,或说说旅行给你带来的积极影响。
要求:(1) 请先将题目补充完整, 全文词数不少于80;
(2) 语言流畅,内容连贯,书写规范;
(3) 文中不得出现真实地名、校名和人名。
My ________ Trip
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(3)
每个人都有自己心仪的地方,它可以是图书馆、公园、博物馆或者某个城市。你去过最好的地方是哪里?请结合自身经历,以“The best ________ I have ever been to”为题,写一篇英语短文。
要求:
1. 请把题目补充完整,不计入总词数;
2. 条理清楚、语句连贯;
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名等信息;
4. 不少于80词。
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(4)
在你的生活中,你肯定有过给你留下深刻印象的出行,可能是游历祖国的名山大川,可能是一次愉快的户外远足,也可能是一次难忘的研学活动。请你根据写作要求,以“A Wonderful Trip”为题,用英语写一篇短文,叙述一次你的出行经历,并谈谈你的感受。
写作要求:
1)介绍你的出行伙伴、目的地、出行方式等;
2)描述你出行中的主要活动,并谈谈你的出行感受;
3)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称;
4)词数100左右。
A Wonderful Trip
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(5)
假定你是李华,你校将举办艺术节。请你根据以下内容提示,写一封邮件,邀请你的笔友Peter参加。
注意:词数100左右,信的格式和开头已给,不计入总词数。语句通顺,意思连贯,可适当发挥,语法正确,书写规范。请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。
Dear Peter,
How is everything going?
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Yours,
Li Hua
(6)
假如你是李华,你打算在校报专栏“Traditional Chinese Art”介绍你最喜欢的剪纸艺术,请以“Paper Cutting”为题写一篇不少于100词的英语短文。
要求:1.语言准确,语句通顺,表达连贯;
2.书写认真规范,卷面整洁。
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(7)
亲爱的同学们,今年暑假你们一定过得非常丰富多彩吧! 请你以“My Summer Holiday”为题,按照下面思维导图提示,写一篇文章在英语课上向同学们介绍一下你今年的暑假是如何度过的吧。
要求:
1. 所写内容应意思连贯、语法正确,书写工整;
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;
3. 100 词左右。
My Summer Holiday
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(8)
多彩旅途,学思践悟。假如你是李明,你国外的笔友Jack来信想了解你假期旅行的情况,请根据下图提示,给他回一封邮件,谈谈你旅行中的所见所闻与所做所思。
要求:
1.根据上图所给提示,适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名;
3.词数80左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
EMAIL
To: jackbrown@happymail. com
From: liming173456176@qq. com
Hi Jack,
Thanks for your email.
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Yours,
Li Ming
(9)
假如你是李华,你校刚刚结束 “中国传统艺术进校园” 系列活动,你参与了其中一项活动。请你给本校英文报“School Life”栏目投稿,介绍此次活动的目的,分享参与经历并表达个人感受。
注意:
1.80词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
2.文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名;
3.适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
4.条理清晰,书写规范。
Last week, our school held a special event called “Chinese Traditional Arts on Campus”.
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年年岁岁花相似,岁岁年年人不同。年复一年的春节又过了一年,照旧亲朋好友总要相聚,我们也回乡下看爷爷奶奶外公外婆,我们和亲人们也聊天交流,大人孩子也会独自耍手机,离别也比较感伤。随着带着大包小包的年轻人逐渐远去,整个乡村又安静下来。而这个春节也有些不同。眉山城外允许放烟花爆竹(play fireworks)了,整个城市显得也更加热闹而富有生命力了。人们对未来的期许也更加强烈了。请你以“The Spring Festivals of 2025”为题,根据要点和要求写一篇短文。
要点:1. 春节是我们的传统节日。你的家乡有哪些过春节的习俗呢?你是如何看待它们的?
2. 陪伴是最长情的告白。你是如何和家人一起过节的,你都做了哪些自己喜欢或觉得有意义的事?哪吒和唐探你看了吗?
3. 努力是生活的常态。过去的一年你是否还有些遗憾,新的一年你打算如何努力?
4. 感恩是力量的源泉。对那些曾经关心你,爱护你的亲人,师长,朋友,同学,你想对他们说……
(下划线部分主要起到提示作用,可以不需要完整翻译)
要求:80词以上。
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【中考真题链接】
1.(2025·黑龙江·中考真题)
话题作文:春节、清明节、端午节、中秋节……中华民族上下五千年形成了内涵丰富、形式多样的节日文化。学校英语社团决定开展“多彩的传统节日”主题宣传活动,请用英语介绍一个你最喜欢的中国传统节日。1. 话题作文。
2. 词数:80—100之间。
3. 字迹工整,语法正确,意思连贯,合乎逻辑,可适当发挥。
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2.(2025·江苏苏州·中考真题)
假如你是李华,正在英国参加短期交流项目。在学校的“文化周”活动中,作为中国交流学生代表,你准备展示并介绍一把自制的手工扇,请你写一份发言稿。
内容包括:
(1)扇子制作过程(如图);
(2)扇面设计内容和寓意;
(3)你的感受与愿望。
要求:
(1)词数100左右;
(2)适当展开想象,增加细节;
(3)照抄试卷中语篇内容不得分;
(4)文中不得出现真实校名和姓名等信息。
参考词汇:brush n. 毛笔
Hi, everyone! Welcome to the cultural week! Chinese fans are both practical tools and beautiful works of art. Here is the fan I made.
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2. (2025·四川达州·中考真题)
暑期将至,腾飞中学根据学校“五育并举”实施方案,对100名学生的暑期活动安排进行了调查,请根据下图和以下内容提示,以“What Will Tengfei High School Students Do in Their Summer Vacation?”为题,用英语写一篇调查报告
内容提示:
体育活动:球类运动…… 艺术活动:学习乐器……
烹饪活动:制作菜肴…… 阅读活动:读书看报……
其它活动:
写作要求:
1.内容必须包括表格中所给要点,适当发挥一至两点,并阐明自己的观点。
2.语句通顺,语法正确,书写规范。
3.文中不能出现考生的真实姓名、校名、和地名。
4.不少于90词(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
What will Tengfei High School Students Do in Their Summer Vacation?
Last week, we asked 100 students about their summer vacation activities. Our questions were about sports, art, cooking, reading and others. Here are the results.
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4.(2024·山东淄博·中考真题)
某英语杂志社开展“我们的节日”主题征文活动,请你写一篇100词左右的英语短文投稿,介绍一个有特色的中国节日。
要点提示:
1.节日简介;
2.节日活动;
3.过节的感受;
4.……
注意:
1.书写规范,表达连贯,可根据内容适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现真实的区县、学校及姓名。
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5. (2023·浙江宁波·中考真题)
为了弘扬传统文化,你校结合“宁波元素”在今年5月19日(中国旅游日)开展了丰富多彩的文化活动(cultural activities)。假如你是李华,请根据表格中的信息并结合自身经历,写一篇英语短文向学校英语报投稿。
注意:
(1)短文必须包括表格中的所有要点,并适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;
(3)词数80—100;标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
When
What I did
What I learned
Feelings
in the morning
visit Ningbo Museum
the long history of the city
...
at noon
make Ningbo Tangyuan
a symbol of family get-togethers
in the afternoon
...
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My Traditional Cultural Experiences
On May 19, our school organized
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6. (2023·浙江·中考真题)
在学校“探寻中华传统文化”英语综合实践活动中,你班对“元宵节”和“端午节”两个中国传统节日开展了小课题研究,经过探究与实践,你们收集了一些信息与资料(见下表),假设你是李华,请选择其中一个节日,用英语写一篇短文,在英语拓展课上代表小组就你们的研究成果以及下阶段计划进行交流。
Project: Exploring the Chinese Culture and Customs
Research Subject
the Lantern Festival
the Dragon Boat Festival
Methods(How we did it)
•watch a lantern show
•…
•visit a local museum
•…
Information(What we’ve learned)
History
•about 2,000 years
•about 2,000 years
Time
•the 15th day of the first lunar month
•the 5th day of the fifth lunar month
Celebrations
•riddle(谜语) games
•…
•boat races
•…
Food
•tangyuan
•zongzi
…
…
…
A New Plan(What we’ll do)
…
…
注意:
(1) 短文必须包含表中你所选节日的所有信息,并适当发挥。
(2) 文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息。
(3) 词数:80~100,短文开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear classmates, I’m very happy to share our research with you. The subject we’ve chosen is
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