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主题写作——介绍一个地方
[写作指导]
◎文体感知
介绍一个地方属于说明文的范畴,写此类文章需注意以下几个方面:
1.内容:一般包括该地区的地理位置、地貌特征、历史文化、风土人情等,也可以描述该地区的发展变化。
2.结构:写作时可分为三部分。开头部分对该地区进行简单概括;主体部分详细介绍其特点;结尾部分对该地区进行总体评价。
3.时态:如果对该地区进行一些客观描写及主观发挥,一般以现在时为主;如果对比过去则用过去时;展望未来则可以用将来时。
◎增分佳句
1.段首常用语
(1)Located in...it covers an area of...with a population of...
(2)The beauty of...is in the east of...
(3)I'd like to introduce my hometown to you.
2.介绍一个地区的常用语
(1)I would like to introduce...
(2)It's a beautiful city/place of...It faces the sea.
(3)The place is located in...covering an area of.../covering...square metres.
(4)There are a variety of attractions such as...
(5)...is famous/wellknown for...
(6)In addition, there are...with a history/population of...
3.段尾常用语
(1)If you want to have fun and more than fun, do come to...
(2)It attracts millions of visitors all over the world.
(3)You are sure to have a good time here.
(4)That's all, thank you. You are welcome to...
[典题示例]
写作要求
最近,某中学英语报向学生征文,主题为“New Look of My Hometown”。请你根据以下内容提示,用英语为该报写一篇短文,介绍家乡的情况并发表自己的看法。
概况
1.位于福建东部;
2.气候温暖多雨,常年绿树成荫;
3.近年经济发展迅速,城市面貌焕然一新,高楼林立,道路宽阔,环境优美;
4.人民生活条件不断改善,不少人搬进新居,拥有私家车
你的
看法
家乡人民将更加努力工作……
注意:1.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2.词数80左右。
审题谋篇
项目
结论
体裁
说明文
话题
介绍一个地方
时态
一般现在时
人称
第三人称
词句推敲
1.词汇
①位于……的东部 lie in the east of...
②充足 plenty of
③一年到头 all the year round
④看起来像 look like
⑤呈现出新的面貌 take on a new look
⑥一天又一天 day by day
⑦属于自己的 of one's own
2.句式
①我的家乡位于福建东部。一条小河穿过我的家乡。
普通表达:My hometown lies in the east of Fujian. A small river flows through my hometown.
高级表达: My hometown lies in the east of Fujian, with a small river flowing through. (用with复合结构改写句子)
②一年到头都有绿树和漂亮的花朵。这使得我的家乡看起来像个大花园。
普通表达:There are green trees and beautiful flowers everywhere all the year round. This makes my hometown look like a large garden.
高级表达: There are green trees and beautiful flowers everywhere all the year round, which makes it look like a large garden. (用定语从句改写句子)
妙笔成篇
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One possible version:
My hometown lies in the east of Fujian, with a small river flowing through. It is a gorgeous city. The climate here is warm with plenty of rain. There are green trees and beautiful flowers everywhere all the year round, which makes it look like a large garden.
In recent years, the economy of the city has been developing rapidly. The city is taking on a new look with high buildings, wide roads and better surroundings. People's living conditions are improving day by day. Many people have moved into new apartments and many even have cars of their own.
I'm sure people in my hometown will work even harder to make our hometown more beautiful and our life happier.
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