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外研英语第一册
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主题写作——有关人际关系、友谊的文章
[写作指导]
◎文体感知
与人际关系、友谊相关的文章的体裁以议论文为主。议论文的写作是就某一方面的问题通过摆事实、讲道理的方式来发表自己的看法。一般说来,议论文由论点、论据、论证三部分构成,通常按提出问题、分析问题、解决问题的逻辑顺序来安排写作。
◎增分佳句
1.He is honest and always ready to help others.
2.He is very kind and talkative.
3.It goes without saying that...
4.A friend in need is a friend indeed.
5.A life without a friend is a life without the sun.
6.He is such a warmhearted man that we all admire him very much.
[典题示例]
写作要求
你校某研究学习小组正在开展关于“处理学生与家长、老师、同学之间的关系”的调查。请你就这一话题,按照下列要点写一篇80词左右的英语短文。
1.现状:关系处理总体情况较好,但仍存在一些问题,如与同学吵架、不听家长和老师的建议等。
2.你个人的改进意见(至少两条)。
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审题谋篇
项目
结论
体裁
议论文
话题
处理人际关系
时态
一般现在时
人称
第一、三人称
词句推敲
1.词汇
①存在 exist
②焦虑 anxiety
③发脾气 lose one's temper
④对……充耳不闻 turn a deaf ear to
⑤吵架 quarrel
⑥与某人关系不好 be on bad terms with sb.
⑦记住…… keep...in mind
⑧反过来 in turn
2.完成句子
①一些学生因为焦虑和学习负担很容易发脾气。
Some students are easy to lose their temper because of anxiety and study burden.
②他们有时和别人吵架,甚至对父母和老师的意见充耳不闻,这很让人失望。
They sometimes quarrel with others.They even turn a deaf ear to their parents and teachers.It is very disappointing.
③在我看来,我建议我们高中学生应努力改善这种情况。
In my opinion,I suggest us senior school students making our efforts to improve the situation .
④我们和朋友、老师或者父母关系不好,我们可以敞开心扉地和他们聊天。
We are on bad terms with them and we can have a hearttoheart chat with our friends,teachers or parents.
3.句式升级
⑤用并列句和非限制性定语从句升级句②
They sometimes quarrel with others, and even turn a deaf ear to their parents and teachers, which is very disappointing.
⑥用when引导的时间状语从句升级句④
When we are on bad terms with them,we can have a hearttoheart chat with our friends, teachers or parents.
妙笔成篇
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One possible version:
A survey about the relationship between students and teachers, family members and classmates is being made by a research study group of our school.
Generally speaking, we get on well with each other.However, there still exist some problems.Some students are easy to lose their temper because of anxiety and study burden.What's worse, they sometimes quarrel with others, and even turn a deaf ear to their parents and teachers, which is very disappointing.
In my opinion, I suggest us senior school students making our efforts to improve the situation.First, we should respect our parents and teachers as well as our classmates.Second, when we are on bad terms with them, we can have a hearttoheart chat with our friends, teachers or parents.We should keep their advantages in mind and apologise to them.In return, they will forgive us from the bottom of their hearts.
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