2026届高三英语专项复习读后续写---打针风波里的姐妹真情--续写导学案

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 That Saturday, after an early morning cup of coffee with Mama, Leonard, our grown brother, picked up his heavy tools and headed out for the old henhouse. Mama wanted him to tear it down for she was scared of me and Angie to play near it. I was twelve and dogged Leonard’s every step. Angie, our six-year-old sister, insisted she wanted to help, too. Mama told we would be in the way, but Leonard said, “Oh, they’ll be all right.” “Well, alright, but you girls watch out for rusty (生锈的) nails.” Leonard worked hard to pry (撬) the stubborn, gray boards. Angie and I carried the boards to a pile he would later burn. Suddenly, Angie started to scream and Mama came running. Sure enough, she had stepped on a rusty nail. Mama examined my sister’s foot while Leonard looked at mine. On my way to see about Angie, I’d stepped on a nail, too. The grownups agreed we needed tetanus (破伤风) shots. I hated shots. I would rather swallow a thousand pills for a thousand days than have one shot. While Leonard drove us to hospital, Mama cupped a hand around my ear. “Arlene, I need you to be brave so Angie won’t be too scared. You know how she can put up a fight.” Determined to be a brave girl, I didn’t cry a single tear though my arm felt like it was on fire. Then Mama lowered Angie onto the table to get the shot. That’s when she made her big mistake. “Arlene, tell Angie it didn’t hurt at all.” Her huge blue eyes stared into mine. I thought about how Angie trusted me the way I trusted Leonard. “If I tell her it won’t hurt”, I thought, “she won’t ever believe me again.” I knew what I had to do. I cupped my hands around my mouth and yelled, “DON’T LET THEM DO IT TO YOU, ANGIE!” 注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Several things happened all at once. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ On the way home after our shots, a tiny finger touched my shoulder. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 文本分析​ 角色：________________________________________________ 视角：第______人称​ 时空线：from that Saturday morning (哥哥拆鸡舍) --- ______________________ --- ____________________________---________________________________ ---（续写）医院里（Angie 打针时）--- 打完针后（回家路上） 线索：​ 姐妹俩为什么会被钉子扎到？：_____________________________________​ Arlene 对打针的态度：______________________________________________​ Mama 让 Arlene 做什么？：_________________________________________​ Arlene 内心的想法：________________________________________________​ Arlene 最后做了什么？：_____________________________________________​ 情节线：​ 周六早上，哥哥 Leonard 拆除旧鸡舍，Arlene 和 Angie 帮忙搬运木板时都被生锈的钉子扎到脚，需要打破伤风针。→ ___________→ ___________（续写）医院里发生了一系列事情；打完针后回家的路上，姐妹俩有了互动。​ 情感线：​ Arlene：害怕（对打针）→ 坚定（决定勇敢给妹妹做榜样）→ 纠结（妈妈让骗妹妹时）→ 果断（大喊不让给妹妹打针）→ ___________（Angie 打针时）→ ___________（回家路上）​ Angie：害怕（被钉子扎到尖叫）→ 信任（看着姐姐）→ ___________（听到姐姐大喊时）→ ___________（打完针后）​ Mama：担心（孩子被扎到）→ 期望（对 Arlene）→ ___________（Arlene 大喊时）→ ___________（打完针后）​ 文章大意：​ 中文：_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 英文： _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 句式：(3---5个句子)​ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 主题（本文属于人与他人）：​ 情节构造​ 第一段提示句：Several things happened all at once.​ 衔接句 1—— 对 “all at once” 提问 “当时现场的人们有什么反应？”：​ 过渡句推演：衔接 1→Angie 打针的过程以及大家的表现←衔接 2​ 衔接句 2—— 对 “事情的发展” 提问 “Angie 最终有没有打针？过程顺利吗？”：​ 第二段提示句：On the way home after our shots, a tiny finger touched my shoulder.​ 衔接句 3—— 对 “touched my shoulder” 提问 “是谁碰了 Arlene，有什么目的？”：​ 过渡句推演：衔接 3→姐妹俩的对话以及情感的变化←主题​ 主题：​ 段落构思​ 第一段：Several things happened all at once.​ →①​_____________________________________________ →②​—————————————————————— →③_____________________________________________​ 英文：​ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 第二段：On the way home after our shots, a tiny finger touched my shoulder.​ →④​_____________________________________________________________________ →⑤​_____________________________________________________________________ →⑥​____________________________________________________________________ 英文： ​______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 文本分析​ 角色：​ Arlene：12 岁的女孩，疼爱妹妹，内心纠结于是否要对妹妹说实话，有责任感。​ Angie：6 岁的妹妹，信任姐姐 Arlene，面对打针可能会抗拒。​ Mama：Arlene 和 Angie 的妈妈，关心孩子，希望 Arlene 能让妹妹不害怕打针。​ Leonard：她们的哥哥，负责拆除旧鸡舍，关心妹妹们。​ 视角：第一人称（以 Arlene 的视角叙述）​ 时空线：from that Saturday morning (哥哥拆鸡舍) --- during the process of tearing down the henhouse (姐妹俩被钉子扎到) --- going to the hospital (去打预防针) --- in the hospital (Arlene 打完针，即将给 Angie 打针) ---（续写）医院里（Angie 打针时）--- 打完针后（回家路上） 线索：​ 姐妹俩为什么会被钉子扎到？：在帮哥哥 Leonard 搬运拆除旧鸡舍的木板时不小心踩到了生锈的钉子。​ Arlene 对打针的态度：讨厌打针，宁愿吃很多药也不愿打针。​ Mama 让 Arlene 做什么？：希望 Arlene 勇敢，给妹妹 Angie 做榜样，告诉 Angie 打针一点也不疼。​ Arlene 内心的想法：知道 Angie 信任自己，如果骗妹妹说不疼，妹妹以后就不会再相信自己了。​ Arlene 最后做了什么？：对着 Angie 大喊不让他们给她打针。​ 情节线：​ 周六早上，哥哥 Leonard 拆除旧鸡舍，Arlene 和 Angie 帮忙搬运木板时都被生锈的钉子扎到脚，需要打破伤风针。​ 去医院后，Arlene 虽讨厌打针，但为了给妹妹做榜样强忍疼痛没哭。​ 妈妈让 Arlene 告诉 Angie 打针不疼，Arlene 因不想失去妹妹的信任，反而大喊不让给 Angie 打针。​ （续写）医院里发生了一系列事情；打完针后回家的路上，姐妹俩有了互动。​ 情感线：​ Arlene：害怕（对打针）→ 坚定（决定勇敢给妹妹做榜样）→ 纠结（妈妈让骗妹妹时）→ 果断（大喊不让给妹妹打针）→ 愧疚又释然（Angie 打针时，既因让妹妹受惊而愧疚，又因坚守诚实而释然）→ 温暖与安心（回家路上，感受到妹妹的理解，姐妹情谊更加深厚） Angie：害怕（被钉子扎到尖叫）→ 信任（看着姐姐，相信姐姐的指引）→ 慌乱与茫然（听到姐姐大喊时，不知该听谁的，内心慌乱）→ 委屈又理解（打完针后，虽因疼痛委屈，却隐约明白姐姐是为了不欺骗自己）​ Mama：担心（孩子被扎到，忧心她们的健康）→ 期望（对 Arlene，希望她能安抚妹妹，让打针顺利进行）→ 错愕与无奈（Arlene 大喊时，没想到她会如此，一时不知所措）→ 欣慰与认同（打完针后，看到姐妹间的信任未减，理解了 Arlene 的做法并感到欣慰） 文章大意：​ 中文：周六，Arlene 和妹妹 Angie 帮哥哥 Leonard 拆旧鸡舍时，都被生锈的钉子扎到脚，需要去医院打破伤风针。Arlene 讨厌打针但为了给妹妹做榜样强忍疼痛，可当妈妈让她骗妹妹说打针不疼时，她因不想失去妹妹的信任而大喊不让给妹妹打针。​ 英文：On Saturday, Arlene and her sister Angie got pricked by rusty nails while helping their brother Leonard tear down the old henhouse and needed tetanus shots. Arlene hated shots but endured the pain to set an example for her sister. However, when their mother asked her to tell Angie that the shot didn't hurt at all, she shouted to stop them from giving Angie the shot because she didn't want to lose her sister's trust.​ 句式：​ 比较状语从句（I would rather swallow a thousand pills for a thousand days than have one shot.）​ 时间状语从句（While Leonard drove us to hospital...；On my way to see about Angie, I’d stepped on a nail, too.）​ 直接引语（妈妈、哥哥、Arlene 的话语）​ 让步状语从句（though my arm felt like it was on fire）​ 主题（本文属于人与他人）：姐妹之间的信任与真情，以及在诚实与顺从之间的选择​ 情节构造​ 第一段提示句：Several things happened all at once.​ 衔接句 1—— 对 “all at once” 提问 “当时现场的人们有什么反应？”：Mama 听到 Arlene 的喊声很惊讶，医生和护士也停下了动作，Angie 则瞪大了眼睛看着 Arlene。​ 过渡句推演：衔接 1→Angie 打针的过程以及大家的表现←衔接 2​ 衔接句 2—— 对 “事情的发展” 提问 “Angie 最终有没有打针？过程顺利吗？”：Angie 虽然还是很害怕，但或许是因为姐姐的呼喊，她没有激烈反抗，医生趁机快速给她打完了针，她哭了一会儿就停了。​ 第二段提示句：On the way home after our shots, a tiny finger touched my shoulder.​ 衔接句 3—— 对 “touched my shoulder” 提问 “是谁碰了 Arlene，有什么目的？”：是 Angie 伸出小手碰了 Arlene 的肩膀，她看着 Arlene，眼神里没有责怪。​ 过渡句推演：衔接 3→姐妹俩的对话以及情感的变化←主题​ 主题：真诚的对待能维护彼此的信任，姐妹情谊在经历小波折后更加深厚​ 段落构思​ 第一段：Several things happened all at once.​ →①Mama turned to me with a shocked look, and the doctor paused with the needle in hand. Angie, hearing my shout, started to squirm on the table, her eyes filled with fear and confusion.​ →②Leonard stepped forward, gently holding Angie's hand, while Mama sighed and said softly, "It's over quickly, honey." The doctor moved swiftly, and Angie let out a loud cry that lasted only a few seconds.​ →③When it was done, Angie looked at me, tears still in her eyes, but there was a hint of understanding, as if she knew I hadn't meant to make it worse.​ 英文：Several things happened all at once. Mama stared at me in surprise. The doctor stopped with the needle. Angie, frightened by my shout, struggled on the table. Leonard hurried to hold her, saying gently, “It’s quick, Angie.” The doctor took the chance to give her the shot. Angie cried loudly but stopped soon. She looked at me with tears in her eyes, not angry but confused. I walked over and patted her hand, feeling sorry but knowing I did the right thing. 第二段：On the way home after our shots, a tiny finger touched my shoulder.​ →④I turned to see Angie looking up at me, her blue eyes no longer filled with tears. "Arlene," she said in a small voice, "does your arm still hurt?"​ →⑤I shook my head and smiled, "A little, but it's okay. I'm sorry I yelled earlier, but I didn't want to lie to you." Angie nodded and reached for my hand, holding it tightly.​ →⑥Mama glanced back at us in the rearview mirror and smiled, a look of relief on her face, while Leonard patted my shoulder from the front seat, as if praising me for being honest.​ ​英文：On the way home after our shots, a tiny finger touched my shoulder. I looked at Angie. She said, “Arlene, your arm hurts?” I shook my head. She then said, “Thank you for not lying.” I smiled, “I don’t want to lose your trust.” She held my hand. Mama smiled while driving. Leonard said, “You two are brave.” I felt warm, knowing our sisterhood was stronger because of honesty.​ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$