Unit 2 Great minds 单元话题满分范文必背-2025-2026学年九年级英语上册单元重难点易错题精练（沪教牛津版）

Unit 2 Great minds 单元话题满分范文必背 Unit 2 Great minds单元话题：科学家 本资料共10篇专题训练，从上到下依次按照难度分为基础语篇巩固练和重难语篇提升练 基础语篇巩固练 1．（24-25九年级上·北京通州·期末）某英文网站正在开展以“我最喜欢的科学家”为主题的征文活动。假设你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，介绍你最喜欢的一位科学家，并说明原因。 提示词语：invent, develop, useful, helpful 提示问题：● Who is your favourite scientist? ● Why do you like him/her? I’m glad to introduce my favourite scientist. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．（24-25九年级上·天津红桥·期末） 假如你是李华，请根据以下提示，用英文写一篇关于我国著名女科学家屠呦呦的短文并谈谈你的感受。 (1) 屠呦呦1930年出生在宁波，她因发现青蒿素而闻名； (2) 青蒿素能有效对抗疟疾——种很严重的疾病； (3) 历经190次失败后，她在中草药中发现了青蒿素，这种药已拯救了数百万人的生命； (4) 2015年获得诺贝尔生理学或医学奖； (5) 你认为…… 参考词汇：草药herb  青蒿素qinghaosu  疟疾malaria  有效地effectively  对抗fight  诺贝尔生理学或医学奖Nobel Prize in Physiology or Medicine 要求：    (1) 词数：80~100个。 (2) 短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。 (3) 要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Tu Youyou Tu Youyou is a well-known woman scientist from China. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．（23-24九年级上·四川广安·阶段练习）请根据提示以“Madam Curie” 为题，写一篇80～100词的英语短文。 内容： 1．居里夫人 (1867～1934) 是世界闻名的科学家； 2．她从小就酷爱读书，16岁中学毕业，24岁赴法国巴黎 (Paris) 的大学学习。在学校时，她学习刻苦努力； 3．她一生致力于科学研究，于1903年、1911年分别获得诺贝尔物理和化学奖 (Nobel Prize of Physics/Chemistry)； 4．她作为一名伟大的女性将永远被人们铭记。 提示：一生致力于做某事 devote oneself to doing      科学研究 science research Madam Curie _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．（24-25九年级上·四川广安·期中）根据提示，写一篇英语短文，介绍一下你心目中的英雄——袁隆平。 内容包括：袁隆平的基本信息，主要成就以及他是你心目中英雄的原因。不少于80词。 要点： 1.基本信息：be born in 1930, graduated from the Southwest Agriculture College in 1953, died in 2021 (3 points) 2. 被誉为“杂交水稻之父 (the Father of Hybrid Rice)” (1 point) 3. 被授予“共和国勋章”。(1 point) 4. 培育出更好的水稻，帮助人们解决饥荒问题。(2 points) 5. 适当发挥。(2 points) 注意：书写工整。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．（24-25九年级上·湖北·开学考试）泱泱大国，伟人辈出。莫言的梦想是获得诺贝尔文学奖；桂海潮的梦想是探索太空；袁隆平的梦想是解决中国粮食短缺的问题……人人都有梦想，那作为青少年的你们，梦想是什么？请根据以下提示，并结合自身实际，用英文写一篇短文，题目自拟。 Mo Yan, the first Chinese writer to win the Nobel Prize Gui Haichao, one of the youngest space science professors in China Yuan Longping, the father of Hybrid Rice, a Chinese scientist and agriculture expert What’s your dream? What can you learn from them? What are you going to do to achieve your dream? 注意： （1）不得在作文中出现真实校名、地名和考生的真实姓名。 （2）语句连贯，词数80左右。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．（2024九年级上·全国·专题练习）在我们成长的过程中，每个人的心中都有一位偶像。他（她）或许是一位伟大的科学家、一位辛勤的医务人员，他（她）也可能是一个尽职尽责的普通人……在本期学校论坛上，请你以“My Hero —___________”为题,，完成一篇短文，向大家分享你心目中的偶像及原因。 内容提示： 1. Who is your hero? 2. Why? 要求： 1. 补全标题，中心突出，语义连贯，层次清晰，书写规范； 2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名； 3. 词数80左右。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．（2025·广东广州·二模）假如你是李华，你校英文报开展征文，请以“My role model”为题，根据思维导图的提示写一篇短文，介绍一位你敬佩的当代杰出人物并分享你的体会。 要求： 1. 可在内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息； 2. 词数80左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 3. 不得透露学校、姓名等个人信息，否则不予评分 My role model Role models make us become a better person. And my role model of our time is ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．（2025·山东聊城·模拟预测）请根据以下提示，以“My hero—Thomas Edison”为题介绍你心目中的英雄——托马斯·爱迪生。   1. 爱迪生是美国著名发明家，被称为”发明大王”； 2. 他出生于1847年2月11日； 3. 他发明了电灯、留声机等1000多项发明； 4. 他小时候曾被老师认为“太笨”，但母亲在家教他； 5. 他说过：“天才是1%的灵感加99%的汗水”； 6. 他于1931年10月18日去世。 注意事项：   1. 短文词数：80左右   2. 包含所有要点，可适当发挥   My hero—Thomas Edison _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 重难语篇提升练 9．（24-25九年级上·重庆·期中）中华民族从来都是一个勇敢且不乏英雄的民族。中国历史上有英雄，中国文学作品中有英雄，体育竞技赛上有英雄，甚至华夏大地的日常生活中也有英雄。请你以 “The Hero in My Heart” 为题，介绍一位你心目中的中华英雄人物。 要求：1.80~120词； 2.文中不得出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 参考信息： The Hero in My Heart _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．（23-24九年级上·湖北武汉·期末）“崇尚英雄才会产生英雄，争做英雄才能英雄辈出。”——习近平。 英语杂志社正在开展以“My Great Hero”为题的征文活动。请根据下面的要点提示，从人物事迹和对你的影响等方面写一篇征文稿。 要点提示： 1. Who is your hero in your heart? 2. What made him/her a hero? 3. How has he/she changed you in your life? 4. Share more ideas about it. 注意：文中不得透露个人真实信息；词数 100 词左右；标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。 My Great Hero Everyone has a hero and the hero in my heart is ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ Unit 2 Great minds 单元话题满分范文必背 Unit 2 Great minds单元话题：科学家 本资料共10篇专题训练，从上到下依次按照难度分为基础语篇巩固练和重难语篇提升练 基础语篇巩固练 1．（24-25九年级上·北京通州·期末）某英文网站正在开展以“我最喜欢的科学家”为主题的征文活动。假设你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，介绍你最喜欢的一位科学家，并说明原因。 提示词语：invent, develop, useful, helpful 提示问题：● Who is your favourite scientist? ● Why do you like him/her? I’m glad to introduce my favourite scientist. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: I’m glad to introduce my favourite scientist. My favourite scientist is Wang Xuan. He invented the technology for printing Chinese characters. I like him because he tried his best to solve problems and was not afraid to try new technology. When he met difficulties, he never gave up. His invention is used all over the world and is extremely helpful to the Chinese newspaper publishing industry. He changed the world with his ideas and hard work, and I look up to him as my favourite scientist. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当发挥，完善表述内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步：表明写作意图，借用“我很高兴向大家介绍我最喜欢的科学家”来引出重点介绍的内容； 第二步：具体介绍最喜欢的科学家是谁以及喜欢的原因等； 第三步：书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①try one’s best to do sth. 尽某人最大努力做某事 ②be afraid to do sth. 害怕做某事 ③gave up 放弃 [高分句型] ①I like him because he tried his best to solve problems and was not afraid to try new technology. (Because引导的原因状语从句) ②When he met difficulties, he never gave up. (When引导的时间状语从句) 2．（24-25九年级上·天津红桥·期末） 假如你是李华，请根据以下提示，用英文写一篇关于我国著名女科学家屠呦呦的短文并谈谈你的感受。 (1) 屠呦呦1930年出生在宁波，她因发现青蒿素而闻名； (2) 青蒿素能有效对抗疟疾——种很严重的疾病； (3) 历经190次失败后，她在中草药中发现了青蒿素，这种药已拯救了数百万人的生命； (4) 2015年获得诺贝尔生理学或医学奖； (5) 你认为…… 参考词汇：草药herb  青蒿素qinghaosu  疟疾malaria  有效地effectively  对抗fight  诺贝尔生理学或医学奖Nobel Prize in Physiology or Medicine 要求：    (1) 词数：80~100个。 (2) 短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。 (3) 要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Tu Youyou Tu Youyou is a well-known woman scientist from China. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Tu Youyou is a well-known woman scientist from China. She was born in Ningbo in 1930. She is famous for discovering qinghaosu. It can effectively fight against malaria, a very serious disease. After 190 failures, she succeeded in discovering it in Chinese herbs. The medicine has saved millions of lives. In 2015, she became the first woman to win the Nobel Prize in Physiology or Medicine. I think she is one of the greatest scientists in China because her discovery is seen as a great contribution to human health. I think we should learn from her. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：这是一篇材料作文，为记叙文； ②时态：主要是“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据所给要点进行写作，适当补充，注意时态，要求语法正确、条理清晰。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍屠哟哟的个人经历； 第二步，介绍自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①be famous for 因……而出名 ②succeed in doing sth. 成功做某事 ③a great contribution to 对……的巨大贡献 [高分句型] I think she is one of the greatest scientists in China because her discovery is seen as a great contribution to human health. （宾语从句，原因状语从句） 3．（23-24九年级上·四川广安·阶段练习）请根据提示以“Madam Curie” 为题，写一篇80～100词的英语短文。 内容： 1．居里夫人 (1867～1934) 是世界闻名的科学家； 2．她从小就酷爱读书，16岁中学毕业，24岁赴法国巴黎 (Paris) 的大学学习。在学校时，她学习刻苦努力； 3．她一生致力于科学研究，于1903年、1911年分别获得诺贝尔物理和化学奖 (Nobel Prize of Physics/Chemistry)； 4．她作为一名伟大的女性将永远被人们铭记。 提示：一生致力于做某事 devote oneself to doing      科学研究 science research Madam Curie _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Madam Curie Madam Curie was a well-known woman scientist all over the world. She was born in 1867 and passed away in 1934. She loved reading books when she was a young child. She finished middle school at the age of 16. When she was 24 years old, she left for Paris to study in Paris University. When she was at school, she lived a simple life and studied very hard. Madam Curie devoted all her life to studying science. She won the Nobel Prize for Physics in 1903 and for Chemistry in 1911. I think it’s not easy for a woman to get such success. Madam Curie will always be remembered as a great woman. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，首先介绍居里夫人是世界闻名的科学家； 第二步，介绍她从小就酷爱读书。在学校时，她学习刻苦努力； 第三步，介绍她一生致力于科学研究，并获得诺贝尔物理和化学奖； 第四步，介绍她作为一名伟大的女性将永远被人们铭记。 [亮点词汇] ①all over the world全世界 ②love doing sth.喜欢做某事。 ③at the age of在……岁时 ④devote oneself to doing一生致力于做某事 [高分句型] ①She loved reading books when she was a young child. (when引导的时间状语从句)   ②When she was at school, she lived a simple life and studied very hard. Madam Curie devoted all her life to studying science. (when引导的时间状语从句) 4．（24-25九年级上·四川广安·期中）根据提示，写一篇英语短文，介绍一下你心目中的英雄——袁隆平。 内容包括：袁隆平的基本信息，主要成就以及他是你心目中英雄的原因。不少于80词。 要点： 1.基本信息：be born in 1930, graduated from the Southwest Agriculture College in 1953, died in 2021 (3 points) 2. 被誉为“杂交水稻之父 (the Father of Hybrid Rice)” (1 point) 3. 被授予“共和国勋章”。(1 point) 4. 培育出更好的水稻，帮助人们解决饥荒问题。(2 points) 5. 适当发挥。(2 points) 注意：书写工整。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Yuan Longping is a hero in my heart. Yuan Longping was born in 1930 and he studied in Southwest Agriculture College from 1950-1953. After graduation, he devoted himself to agricultural research. During his lifetime, he spent about 60 years doing research on hybrid rice and successfully developed the hybrid rice, which benefited the people over the world. His dream was to cultivate better rice and solve people’s hunger problems. For his achievement, he was called “the Father of Hybrid Rice”. In 2019, he was also awarded the Order of the Republic. He passed away in 2021 due to illness. In my opinion, Yuan Longping is a famous scientist who is worthy of the praise of the whole world. He will live in our hearts forever. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：材料所要求内容不得遗漏，写作过程注意时态切换。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点题——袁隆平是自己心目中的英雄； 第二步，详细介绍袁隆平的基本信息和主要成就； 第三步，表达个人观点，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①devote to致力于 ②pass away去世；逝世 ③due to由于 ④in my opinion在我看来 [高分句型] ①Yuan Longping was born in 1930 and he studied in Southwest Agriculture College from 1950-1953. （并列复合句） ②In my opinion, Yuan Longping is a famous scientist who is worthy of the praise of the whole world. （定语从句） 5．（24-25九年级上·湖北·开学考试）泱泱大国，伟人辈出。莫言的梦想是获得诺贝尔文学奖；桂海潮的梦想是探索太空；袁隆平的梦想是解决中国粮食短缺的问题……人人都有梦想，那作为青少年的你们，梦想是什么？请根据以下提示，并结合自身实际，用英文写一篇短文，题目自拟。 Mo Yan, the first Chinese writer to win the Nobel Prize Gui Haichao, one of the youngest space science professors in China Yuan Longping, the father of Hybrid Rice, a Chinese scientist and agriculture expert What’s your dream? What can you learn from them? What are you going to do to achieve your dream? 注意： （1）不得在作文中出现真实校名、地名和考生的真实姓名。 （2）语句连贯，词数80左右。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 I Have a Dream There are many great people that make our country stronger. They achieve their dreams by working hard. And thanks to them, we can live a happier life. As a teenager, I have a dream, too. I want to be a scientist in the future. When I learn something about Yuan Longping, I respect him for what he has done for our country. To achieve my dream, I will set clear goals so that I can know what I should do. I will try my best to enter a good senior high school, then a good university. After I graduate, I will serve the people in the areas where I am needed. Everyone is responsible for our country, and I will learn from others to become better and help more people. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开头点明主题为——我的梦想； 第二步，具体介绍梦想内容及怎样做； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①in the future在未来 ②so that以便 ③try one’s best尽力 [高分句型] ①There are many great people that make our country stronger. (there be句型，that引导的定语从句) ②When I learn something about Yuan Longping, I respect him for what he has done for our country. (when引导的时间状语从句) ③After I graduate, I will serve the people in the areas where I am needed. (where引导的定语从句) 6．（2024九年级上·全国·专题练习）在我们成长的过程中，每个人的心中都有一位偶像。他（她）或许是一位伟大的科学家、一位辛勤的医务人员，他（她）也可能是一个尽职尽责的普通人……在本期学校论坛上，请你以“My Hero —___________”为题,，完成一篇短文，向大家分享你心目中的偶像及原因。 内容提示： 1. Who is your hero? 2. Why? 要求： 1. 补全标题，中心突出，语义连贯，层次清晰，书写规范； 2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名； 3. 词数80左右。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Hero — Albert Einstein My hero is Albert Einstein who is one of the most famous scientists of the 20th century. Einstein was born in Germany. He was very clever and successful as a scientist. In fact, he always spent so much time on puzzles that he often paid no attention to the world around him. To develop the theory of relativity, he read a lot of books, did plenty of research and wrote many articles. Though he met much trouble, he still kept studying. He was absorbed in the study and always lost himself in it. He never cared about other things except science, especially his appearance. Once, he was even wearing a sweat shirt, appearing in the street. His appearance was so silly that people failed to recognise him! However, it’s just such a scientist that makes me regard him as a hero in my heart because from him I have learnt: as long as you put your heart into your work, you will realise your dreams. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文； ②时态：时态以一般过去时为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，按题目要求填入短文标题“My Hero — Albert Einstein”。 第二步，用第三人称来描述英雄人物特征，用第一人称描述跟作者有关的事迹；描述事迹时，情节应描写细致；并且故事发生的背景、起因和过程等需要叙述完整，保证条理清晰。 [亮点词汇] ①pay no attention to毫不在乎 ②plenty of大量，许多 ③regard…as…把……当作…… [高分句型] ①My hero is Albert Einstein who is one of the most famous scientists of the 20th century.（含有定语从句的复合句） ②as long as you put your heart into your work, you will realise your dreams（as long as引导的条件状语从句） 7．（2025·广东广州·二模）假如你是李华，你校英文报开展征文，请以“My role model”为题，根据思维导图的提示写一篇短文，介绍一位你敬佩的当代杰出人物并分享你的体会。 要求： 1. 可在内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息； 2. 词数80左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 3. 不得透露学校、姓名等个人信息，否则不予评分 My role model Role models make us become a better person. And my role model of our time is ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文     My role model Role models make us become a better person. And my role model of our time is Yuan Longping.   Yuan Longping is known as the “Father of Hybrid Rice”. He devoted his life to researching hybrid rice, which has significantly increased rice production. His work has helped feed countless people not only in China but also around the world, making a great contribution to solving the global food problem.   From him, I learn the spirit of dedication and perseverance. No matter how many difficulties he faced in research, he never gave up. His selfless devotion to helping others and making the world a better place inspires me to work hard and contribute to society in my own way. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：依据思维导图提示，从“谁是榜样”“为国家做了什么”“能从中学到什么”展开，需涵盖要点，可合理拓展细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点明榜样人物，开篇直接表明 “my role model of our time is Yuan Longping” ，清晰给出核心人物。 第二步，介绍人物事迹与贡献。 第三步，分享学习体会，从袁隆平身上学到奉献和坚毅的精神。   [亮点词汇] ①devote...to...把……奉献给…… ②make a great contribution to...对……做出巨大贡献 ③inspire激励；鼓舞 [高分句型] ①He devoted his life to researching hybrid rice, which has significantly increased rice production. （which引导非限制性定语从句） ② No matter how many difficulties he faced in research, he never gave up.（No matter how引导让步状语从句） 8．（2025·山东聊城·模拟预测）请根据以下提示，以“My hero—Thomas Edison”为题介绍你心目中的英雄——托马斯·爱迪生。   1. 爱迪生是美国著名发明家，被称为”发明大王”； 2. 他出生于1847年2月11日； 3. 他发明了电灯、留声机等1000多项发明； 4. 他小时候曾被老师认为“太笨”，但母亲在家教他； 5. 他说过：“天才是1%的灵感加99%的汗水”； 6. 他于1931年10月18日去世。 注意事项：   1. 短文词数：80左右   2. 包含所有要点，可适当发挥   My hero—Thomas Edison _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Hero—Thomas Edison Thomas Edison is my hero. He was a famous American inventor, known as the “King of Inventions”. Born on February 11th, 1847, he invented over 1,000 things, among which the light bulb and the phonograph are the most well-known. When he was young, his teacher thought he was “too stupid”. But his mother, who had great faith in his potential, taught him at home. He once said, “Genius is 1% inspiration and 99% perspiration.” Edison passed away on October 18th, 1931. His inventions have greatly changed our lives, and his spirit still encourages us today. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏信息，考生适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出主题，表明爱迪生是自己心目中的英雄； 第二步，介绍他生平信息：出生日期、出生地、教育经历、发明成就、名言和去世时间； 第三步，最后总结爱迪生的贡献和对自己的激励。 [亮点词汇] ①be known as作为……而出名 ②had great faith in对……满怀信心 ③pass away去世 [高分句型] ①When he was young, his teacher thought he was “too stupid”. (when引导的时间状语从句) ②But his mother, who had great faith in his potential, taught him at home. (who引导的定语从句) 重难语篇提升练 9．（24-25九年级上·重庆·期中）中华民族从来都是一个勇敢且不乏英雄的民族。中国历史上有英雄，中国文学作品中有英雄，体育竞技赛上有英雄，甚至华夏大地的日常生活中也有英雄。请你以 “The Hero in My Heart” 为题，介绍一位你心目中的中华英雄人物。 要求：1.80~120词； 2.文中不得出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 参考信息： The Hero in My Heart _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： The Hero in My Heart The hero in my heart is Yuan Longping, the “Father of Hybrid Rice.” His achievements changed not only China but also the world. Before his research, many people suffered from hunger. Through years of hard work, he developed high-yield hybrid rice, which greatly increased food production. What makes him a hero is not just his scientific success, but also his spirit. He was humble, hardworking, and dedicated to helping others. Even in his old age, he kept working in the fields. His influence goes beyond agriculture—he showed us that perseverance can solve big problems. Yuan Longping is a true hero because he used his ability to improve lives. His story inspires me to work hard and contribute to society. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ② 时态：一般现在时，一般过去时； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上、下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，直接表明心中的英雄是谁； 第二步，介绍英雄的故事或成就； 第三步，介绍这个人是你心目中英雄的原因。 [亮点词汇] ① suffer from 遭受 ② help others 帮助他人 ③ inspire sb. to do sth. 激励某人做某事 [高分句型] Through years of hard work, he developed high-yield hybrid rice, which greatly increased food production.（定语从句） ②Yuan Longping is a true hero because he used his ability to improve lives. （原因状语从句） 10．（23-24九年级上·湖北武汉·期末）“崇尚英雄才会产生英雄，争做英雄才能英雄辈出。”——习近平。 英语杂志社正在开展以“My Great Hero”为题的征文活动。请根据下面的要点提示，从人物事迹和对你的影响等方面写一篇征文稿。 要点提示： 1. Who is your hero in your heart? 2. What made him/her a hero? 3. How has he/she changed you in your life? 4. Share more ideas about it. 注意：文中不得透露个人真实信息；词数 100 词左右；标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。 My Great Hero Everyone has a hero and the hero in my heart is ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： My Great Hero Everyone has a hero and the hero in my heart is Qian Xuesen, one of the most famous scientists in China. When he was young, he was very hard-working and studied in many famous universities in the world. He was persecuted by the U.S. government for more than five years before being deported to his homeland. He won many big prizes and made many famous discoveries. He is known as the “Father of Space Technology” and “King of Rocketry”. I will learn from him and work hard to make a good contribution to our motherland. He was one of the greatest persons who made our country stronger and stronger. Everyone in China will never forget him. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏题目中的要求，并适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] ①第一步，表明写作意图。借用“我心中的英雄是谁”来引出下文中对钱学森的介绍； ②第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“事迹和影响”两方面入手，重点介绍钱学森的伟大之处； ③第三步，书写结语。要向他学习，报效祖国。 [亮点词汇] ①more than 超过 ②be known as 被称为 ③learn from sb 向某人学习 ④make contribution to 为……做贡献 [高分句型] ①When he was young, he was very hard-working and studied in many famous universities in the world.（when引导的时间状语从句） ②He was one of the greatest persons who made our country stronger and stronger.（who引导的定语从句） 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$