Unit 6 When disaster strikes自然灾害（单元同步写作讲义）英语外研版2024八年级上册

Unit6 When disaster strikes 同步写作课讲义-外研版2024八年级上册 ( ⭐话题解读⭐ ) 本单元围绕自然灾害与勇气展开，主要涉及自然灾害及其影响，人物面对灾难的反应与心理变化，人物走出灾难阴影、勇敢面对生活的过程。 ( ⭐写作任务⭐ ) 在具体的写作中，主要涉及以下几个方面： ①自然灾害的类型及应对措施； ②灾难发生的过程及自己的感受 ③灾后的恢复过程或相关暖心故事。 在写作时,可首先介绍自然灾害发生的时间和危害;其次,详细描述自然灾害发生过程中人的活动和感受;最后,向人们发出倡议,共同保护环境预防和减少自然灾害的发生。 写作时可用第一人称和第三人称,在描述自然灾害发生的时间和危害及过程时,常用一般过去时和过去进行时。发出倡议时,可用祈使句或一般将来时。 ( ⭐审题指导⭐ ) 请你根据下面的要点写一篇70词左右的报道。 1.8月14日（星期六）发生了一次山崩(landslide);2.连续两天大雨后，早晨山崩发生； 3.那天有个女孩与她母亲在家，父亲在下午到家，并叫她们赶快离开；4.雨大，父亲劝告她们带好雨伞； 5.这时房子开始摇晃，她们非常害怕，迅速跑开了； 6.第二天上午回家时，女孩发现房子没有了，到处是玻璃和砖块，女孩感到很悲伤。 ( ⭐写作框架⭐ ) ( ⭐素材宝库⭐ ) ( 词汇积累 ) 灾难类型 earthquake地震flood洪水storm暴风雨tsunami海啸tornado龙卷风drought干旱volcano eruption火山爆发 影响 move from side to side左右摇晃 be thick with smoke弥漫着烟雾 damage损害destroy摧毁homeless无家可归的break弄坏，损坏bleed流血uncomfortable不舒服的 应对措施 rush out冲出去stay calm保持冷静help each other互相帮助shelter避难所 support支持 volunteer志愿者/自愿做 感悟 courage勇气 never give up永不放弃 encouragement鼓励come out from the shadows走出阴影 find oneself重新找回自我 ( 句型积累 ) 开头句 Three years ago, a terrible earthquake struck our city.三年前，一场可怕的地震袭击了我们的城市。 Our city experienced a flood/ an earthquake three years ago.三年前，我们的城市经历过一次洪灾/地震。 中间句 1.灾难发生 When/ While I was..., the ground shook very hard and things around me began to move from side to side.当我在……时，地面剧烈晃动，我周围的东西开始左右摇晃。 The ground started shaking hard as the earthquake struck.地震发生时，大地开始剧烈摇晃。 Heavy rain made the river overflow, and the water rushed into houses and streets.大雨使河水泛滥，洪水涌进了房屋和街道。 2.人们的反应 Many people ran out of their houses quickly.许多人迅速跑出家门。 My classmates and I had to rush out of the classroom quickly.我和我的同班同学不得不迅速冲出教室。 I was so scared that I searched for my teachers and friends everywhere.我害怕极了，到处找我的老师和朋友。 We stayed together and helped each other.我们待在一起，互相帮助。 3.灾后恢复 Thanks to the doctors' treatment in time, I recovered at last.多亏医生及时治疗，我最终康复了。 With the support of my family and friends, I slowly came out from the shadows.在家人和朋友的支持下，我慢慢从阴影中走了出来。 We rebuilt our home with the help of volunteers.在志愿者的帮助下，我们重建了家园。 Life slowly went back to normal.生活慢慢恢复正常。 结尾句 This disaster has taught me to be strong and never give up.这次灾难让我学会坚强，永不放弃。 I have realised that helping others can bring warmth and hope.我意识到帮助他人能够带来温暖和希望。 ( ⭐参考范文⭐ ) There was a landslide on Saturday, l4th August. After two days of heavy rain, the landslide happened in the morning. A girl was at home with her mum that day. Her dad came home in the afternoon and. told them to leave the flat. Because of the heavy rain, he advised them to bring umbrellas. They got out quickly. Suddenly the building started shaking. People were frightened and ran away quickly. The weather was really terrible. The following morning. They went back home. The girl found there was no house at all. There were only pieces of glass and bricks everywhere. The girl felt very sad. ( ⭐写作拓展⭐ ) ( 变式提升训练 ) （1） （23-24八年级上·黑龙江绥化·期中）Daming所在的城市昨天晚上发生了一场暴风雪。很幸运，暴风雪时间并不长，他们全家安然无恙。假如你是Daming请描述一下暴风雪发生时家里人的活动情景。 写作要点： 1.写明暴风雪的时间：yesterday evening 2.暴风雪时全家人都在做什么：My mother was... 3.暴风雪时的心情：scared... 4.暴风雪的后果：all safe 提示词：luckily...  Remember to... 写作要求： 1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名； 2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯； 3. 字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。80词左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 My name is Daming. In my city, there was ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （2） （23-22八年级上·广西崇左·期末）每到夏天，总有些地方洪水肆虐。如何在洪水中保护自己呢？你班在英语课上就这一问题进行了讨论。请你根据以下提示，用英语说说自己的观点。 Before the disaster ●often watch news about the flood ●prepare water, food and medicine How to protect ourselves in the flood During the disaster move to higher places at once don’t try to swim ... 要求： 1. 包含所有给出的提示要点，可适当发挥，省略号部分要求至少自拟1点； 2. 70词左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Good morning, everyone! Floods happen nearly every summer. Today I’d like to talk about how to ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （3） （22-23八年级上·全国·单元测试）请你根据下面的要点写一篇70词左右的报道。 1.8月17日（星期六）发生了一次山崩（landslide）； 2.连续两天大雨后，早晨山崩发生； 3.那天有个女孩与她母亲在家，父亲在下午到家，并叫她们赶快离开； 4.雨大，父亲劝告她们带好雨伞； 5.这是房子开始摇晃，她们非常害怕，迅速跑开了； 6.第二天上午回家时，女孩发现房子没有了，到处是玻璃和砖块，女孩感到很悲伤。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （4） （22-23八年级上·全国·课后作业）假设你叫张翔，是一名初二学生。你们英语老师让同学们在课堂上准备一个英语演讲，主题是“How to deal with accidents”，请你根据下表内容，写一篇英语演讲稿。 意外事故 处理办法 做饭烫伤手 首先把手放在冷水中10分钟；然后用干净的手巾盖上烫伤处；赶紧去看医生 遇到火灾 用湿手巾捂住口和鼻子，贴近地面，尽快出去； 绝不要回到着火的房子里拿东西； 拨打119，…… 拨打120，…… 要求: 1.包含所有给出的信息，可适当发挥; 2. 80词左右开头和结尾已给出.不计入总词数。 Hi, everyone. Here are my tips on how to deal with some accidents. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （5） （23-24八年级上·河南洛阳·期末）2023年12月，我们国家的部分地区遭遇了多年不遇的罕见暴雪。请以“The Snowstorm”为题，根据提示并结合所学内容，写一篇不少于80字的英语作文。 提示词: suffer (遭受), destroy (破坏), fall down, traffic (交通), suffer (遭受), send ①What was the result of the snowstorm? ②What did our country do to do with (应对) the snowstorm? ③What should we do as a student? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （6） （23-24八年级上·河南信阳·期末）假如昨天下午全校师生进行了一次地震逃生演练(a practice of escaping from an earthquake)。请展开合理想象，写一篇短文介绍这次演练的情况。词数100左右。 提示词：under the desk, cover the head, run out, one after another, walk on the right down the stairs, get to ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （7） （23-24八年级上·江苏无锡·期末）近年来，人类活动对大自然的破坏引发了各种自然灾害。你是一名中学生，正参加英语写作大赛，请你根据以下内容写一篇英语短文：介绍在不同的自然灾害中保护自己的方法。同时，提出预防措施，拯救地球。 Types of natural disasters floods earthquakes forest fires . . . → Ways to protect ourselves get to high ground use a wet towel hide under . . . → Actions to prevent future disasters plant more trees protect wild animals . . . 注意事项： 1. 要求要点齐全、语句通顺, 意思连贯, 符合题意； 2. 词数在90个左右，开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 文中不得使用真实的个人姓名或学校名称； 4. 必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。 In recent years, there have been many natural disasters caused by human activities, such as ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Hope we can have a better world in the future. ( 7 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ Unit6 When disaster strikes 同步写作课讲义-外研版2024八年级上册 ( ⭐话题解读⭐ ) 本单元围绕自然灾害与勇气展开，主要涉及自然灾害及其影响，人物面对灾难的反应与心理变化，人物走出灾难阴影、勇敢面对生活的过程。 ( ⭐写作任务⭐ ) 在具体的写作中，主要涉及以下几个方面： ①自然灾害的类型及应对措施； ②灾难发生的过程及自己的感受 ③灾后的恢复过程或相关暖心故事。 在写作时,可首先介绍自然灾害发生的时间和危害;其次,详细描述自然灾害发生过程中人的活动和感受;最后,向人们发出倡议,共同保护环境预防和减少自然灾害的发生。 写作时可用第一人称和第三人称,在描述自然灾害发生的时间和危害及过程时,常用一般过去时和过去进行时。发出倡议时,可用祈使句或一般将来时。 ( ⭐审题指导⭐ ) 请你根据下面的要点写一篇70词左右的报道。 1.8月14日（星期六）发生了一次山崩(landslide);2.连续两天大雨后，早晨山崩发生； 3.那天有个女孩与她母亲在家，父亲在下午到家，并叫她们赶快离开；4.雨大，父亲劝告她们带好雨伞； 5.这时房子开始摇晃，她们非常害怕，迅速跑开了； 6.第二天上午回家时，女孩发现房子没有了，到处是玻璃和砖块，女孩感到很悲伤。 ( ⭐写作框架⭐ ) ( ⭐素材宝库⭐ ) ( 词汇积累 ) 灾难类型 earthquake地震flood洪水storm暴风雨tsunami海啸tornado龙卷风drought干旱volcano eruption火山爆发 影响 move from side to side左右摇晃 be thick with smoke弥漫着烟雾 damage损害destroy摧毁homeless无家可归的break弄坏，损坏bleed流血uncomfortable不舒服的 应对措施 rush out冲出去stay calm保持冷静help each other互相帮助shelter避难所 support支持 volunteer志愿者/自愿做 感悟 courage勇气 never give up永不放弃 encouragement鼓励come out from the shadows走出阴影 find oneself重新找回自我 ( 句型积累 ) 开头句 Three years ago, a terrible earthquake struck our city.三年前，一场可怕的地震袭击了我们的城市。 Our city experienced a flood/ an earthquake three years ago.三年前，我们的城市经历过一次洪灾/地震。 中间句 1.灾难发生 When/ While I was..., the ground shook very hard and things around me began to move from side to side.当我在……时，地面剧烈晃动，我周围的东西开始左右摇晃。 The ground started shaking hard as the earthquake struck.地震发生时，大地开始剧烈摇晃。 Heavy rain made the river overflow, and the water rushed into houses and streets.大雨使河水泛滥，洪水涌进了房屋和街道。 2.人们的反应 Many people ran out of their houses quickly.许多人迅速跑出家门。 My classmates and I had to rush out of the classroom quickly.我和我的同班同学不得不迅速冲出教室。 I was so scared that I searched for my teachers and friends everywhere.我害怕极了，到处找我的老师和朋友。 We stayed together and helped each other.我们待在一起，互相帮助。 3.灾后恢复 Thanks to the doctors' treatment in time, I recovered at last.多亏医生及时治疗，我最终康复了。 With the support of my family and friends, I slowly came out from the shadows.在家人和朋友的支持下，我慢慢从阴影中走了出来。 We rebuilt our home with the help of volunteers.在志愿者的帮助下，我们重建了家园。 Life slowly went back to normal.生活慢慢恢复正常。 结尾句 This disaster has taught me to be strong and never give up.这次灾难让我学会坚强，永不放弃。 I have realised that helping others can bring warmth and hope.我意识到帮助他人能够带来温暖和希望。 ( ⭐参考范文⭐ ) There was a landslide on Saturday, l4th August. After two days of heavy rain, the landslide happened in the morning. A girl was at home with her mum that day. Her dad came home in the afternoon and. told them to leave the flat. Because of the heavy rain, he advised them to bring umbrellas. They got out quickly. Suddenly the building started shaking. People were frightened and ran away quickly. The weather was really terrible. The following morning. They went back home. The girl found there was no house at all. There were only pieces of glass and bricks everywhere. The girl felt very sad. ( ⭐写作拓展⭐ ) ( 变式提升训练 ) （1） （23-24八年级上·黑龙江绥化·期中）Daming所在的城市昨天晚上发生了一场暴风雪。很幸运，暴风雪时间并不长，他们全家安然无恙。假如你是Daming请描述一下暴风雪发生时家里人的活动情景。 写作要点： 1.写明暴风雪的时间：yesterday evening 2.暴风雪时全家人都在做什么：My mother was... 3.暴风雪时的心情：scared... 4.暴风雪的后果：all safe 提示词：luckily...  Remember to... 写作要求： 1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名； 2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯； 3. 字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。80词左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 My name is Daming. In my city, there was ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My name is Daming. In my city, there was a snowstorm yesterday evening. My mother was cooking dinner in the kitchen when it started. My father was watching TV, and my little sister was playing with her toys. I was doing my homework in my room. Suddenly, the wind howled loudly, and the snow fell heavily. We were all scared because it was so loud and unexpected. Luckily, the storm didn’t last long. After it ended, we checked everything and felt relieved that we were all safe and sound. Remember to stay indoors during bad weather. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一和第三人称为主。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接开头，首先描述暴风雪的时间及场景——昨天晚上暴风雪开始时家人的活动； 第二步，然后表达暴风雪时感到惊吓的心情； 第三步，最后总结暴风雪不久就结束了，大家都安然无恙，体现幸运的结局。 [亮点词汇] ①Suddenly突然 ②Luckily幸运地 ③remember to do sth记得做某事 [高分句型] ①My mother was cooking dinner in the kitchen when it started.（时间状语从句） ②We were all scared because it was so loud and unexpected.（原因状语从句） （2） （23-22八年级上·广西崇左·期末）每到夏天，总有些地方洪水肆虐。如何在洪水中保护自己呢？你班在英语课上就这一问题进行了讨论。请你根据以下提示，用英语说说自己的观点。 Before the disaster ●often watch news about the flood ●prepare water, food and medicine How to protect ourselves in the flood During the disaster move to higher places at once don’t try to swim ... 要求： 1. 包含所有给出的提示要点，可适当发挥，省略号部分要求至少自拟1点； 2. 70词左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Good morning, everyone! Floods happen nearly every summer. Today I’d like to talk about how to ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文 Good morning, everyone! Floods happen nearly every summer. Today I’d like to talk about how to protect ourselves in the flood. Firstly, we should often watch the news about the flood during the rainy season. We need to prepare water, food and medicine before the disaster comes. Secondly, when there is a flood, we must move to higher places at once and stay there to wait for rescue. Remember not to try to swim through the flood water. Thirdly, if the flood washes us away, we should keep calm. We can catch something made of wood and it can help us get out of the water. If we need help, we can also call the police. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点中的“省略号”部分，这需要进行适当的发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点题，介绍在洪水中应如何保护自己； 第二步，介绍在洪水来临前应该怎么做； 第三步，介绍遭遇洪水时该怎么做。 [亮点词汇] ① at once 立即 ② remember not to do sth. 记得不做某事 ③ keep calm 保持冷静 [高分句型] ① Today I’d like to talk about how to protect ourselves in the flood.（疑问词+不定式作宾语） ② if the flood washes us away, we should keep calm.（if引导的条件状语从句） （3） （22-23八年级上·全国·单元测试）请你根据下面的要点写一篇70词左右的报道。 1.8月17日（星期六）发生了一次山崩（landslide）； 2.连续两天大雨后，早晨山崩发生； 3.那天有个女孩与她母亲在家，父亲在下午到家，并叫她们赶快离开； 4.雨大，父亲劝告她们带好雨伞； 5.这是房子开始摇晃，她们非常害怕，迅速跑开了； 6.第二天上午回家时，女孩发现房子没有了，到处是玻璃和砖块，女孩感到很悲伤。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文 There was a landslide on Saturday, 17th August. After two days of heavy rain, the landslide happened in the morning. A girl was at home with his mum that day. Her dad came home in the afternoon and told them to leave the flat. Because of the heavy rain, he advised them to bring umbrellas. They got out quickly. Suddenly the building started shaking. They were frightened and ran away quickly. The weather was really terrible. The following morning, they went back home. The girl found there was no house at all. There were only pieces of glass and bricks everywhere. They girl felt very sad. 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作，根据汉语提示的要点写一篇报道。写作时要包括山崩的时间、地点、过程及危害。 2.写作指导：本文应该以第三人称来叙述事件内容；时态采用一般过去时。叙述故事时，场景应描写细致，并且事件发生的背景、起因和过程等需要叙述完整，保证条理清晰。 （4） （22-23八年级上·全国·课后作业）假设你叫张翔，是一名初二学生。你们英语老师让同学们在课堂上准备一个英语演讲，主题是“How to deal with accidents”，请你根据下表内容，写一篇英语演讲稿。 意外事故 处理办法 做饭烫伤手 首先把手放在冷水中10分钟；然后用干净的手巾盖上烫伤处；赶紧去看医生 遇到火灾 用湿手巾捂住口和鼻子，贴近地面，尽快出去； 绝不要回到着火的房子里拿东西； 拨打119，…… 拨打120，…… 要求: 1.包含所有给出的信息，可适当发挥; 2. 80词左右开头和结尾已给出.不计入总词数。 Hi, everyone. Here are my tips on how to deal with some accidents. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Hi, everyone. Here are my tips on how to deal with some accidents. If you burn your hands when you cook, first keep your hands in cold water for ten minutes, and then cover the burn with a clean towel and go to see the doctor quickly. If your building is on fire, you should cover your mouth and nose with a wet towel. Stay low to the ground and try to get out as soon as possible. Never go back into the burning building for anything. Don't try to put out the fire by yourself. Remember to call 119. If anyone is hurt in the fire, you should call 120. I hope my tips will be of some help to you. 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇讲稿作文。主题是“How to deal with accidents”，根据表格内容，写一篇英语演讲稿。注意要点要齐全，可适当发挥。 2. 写作指导：本文主要采用第二人称来展开写作，时态主要用一般现在时。第一段引出主题；第二段分别叙述两种意外事故下的处理办法；第三段收尾。语言的表述要符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；层次要分明、条理要清晰。 （5） （23-24八年级上·河南洛阳·期末）2023年12月，我们国家的部分地区遭遇了多年不遇的罕见暴雪。请以“The Snowstorm”为题，根据提示并结合所学内容，写一篇不少于80字的英语作文。 提示词: suffer (遭受), destroy (破坏), fall down, traffic (交通), suffer (遭受), send ①What was the result of the snowstorm? ②What did our country do to do with (应对) the snowstorm? ③What should we do as a student? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文： The Snowstorm In December 2023, some parts of our country suffered from a heavy snowstorm that was rarely seen before. Many trees fell down, blocking the roads and destroying power lines. The traffic was seriously affected, and many people had to stay at home. Our country took quick action to deal with the snowstorm. The government sent rescue teams to clear the roads and restore the power supply. They also provided food and warm clothes for those in need. As students, we should also do our part. We can help clear the snow in our neighborhood or volunteer to help those affected. We should learn to understand how to deal with natural disasters. The snowstorm was a challenge, but with everyone’s efforts, we overcame it. 【详解】[总体分析]   ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；   ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；   ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。   [写作步骤]   第一步，介绍这次暴雪的结果；   第二步，介绍我们国家是如何应对这次暴雪灾害的；   第三步，介绍作为学生应该做什么。   [亮点词汇] ①take quick action立刻行动 ②provide sth for sb为某人提供某物 ③those in need有需要的人 ④with everyone’s efforts在大家的努力下 [高分句型] In December 2023, some parts of our country suffered from a heavy snowstorm that was rarely seen before. (定语从句) （6） （23-24八年级上·河南信阳·期末）假如昨天下午全校师生进行了一次地震逃生演练(a practice of escaping from an earthquake)。请展开合理想象，写一篇短文介绍这次演练的情况。词数100左右。 提示词：under the desk, cover the head, run out, one after another, walk on the right down the stairs, get to ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文 Yesterday morning, our school gave us a practice of escaping from an earthquake. All the teachers and students took part in the activity. Before it, our head teacher, Miss Wang, told us the rules for escaping again. It started on time at 8:00 a.m. Miss Wang shouted, “Under your desk !” All the students stayed under the desks, covering their heads with their hands. Next, she shouted “Group One, go!”. “Group Two, go!”…My classmates ran out of the classroom one after another. When I was walking down the stairs on the right, Lucy, who was in front of me, fell down suddenly. I held her up quickly. All of my classmates got to the playground at 8:01 a.m. No one was left. “We only spent one minute,” said Miss Wang happily. This activity is popular with both parents and students. We learnt a lot from it. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：本文应使用“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，应注意不要遗漏题干中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍学校举行了一次地震逃生演习； 第二步，展开合理想象，详细描述地震逃生演习的过程； 第三步，点评这次地震逃生演习，并收尾。 [亮点词汇] ①take part in参加 ②in front of在……的前面 [高分句型] ①When I was walking down the stairs on the right, Lucy, who was in front of me, fell down suddenly.（when引导的时间状语从句+who引导的非限制性定语从句） （7） （23-24八年级上·江苏无锡·期末）近年来，人类活动对大自然的破坏引发了各种自然灾害。你是一名中学生，正参加英语写作大赛，请你根据以下内容写一篇英语短文：介绍在不同的自然灾害中保护自己的方法。同时，提出预防措施，拯救地球。 Types of natural disasters floods earthquakes forest fires . . . → Ways to protect ourselves get to high ground use a wet towel hide under . . . → Actions to prevent future disasters plant more trees protect wild animals . . . 注意事项： 1. 要求要点齐全、语句通顺, 意思连贯, 符合题意； 2. 词数在90个左右，开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 文中不得使用真实的个人姓名或学校名称； 4. 必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。 In recent years, there have been many natural disasters caused by human activities, such as ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Hope we can have a better world in the future. 【答案】例文 In recent years, there have been many natural disasters caused by human activities, such as floods, earthquakes, forest fires, sandstorms and so on. When there is a flood, we should get to high ground and make sure not to walk through the flood water. If an earthquake happens, we can hide under a strong desk and stay away from a window. If a fire happens, we can use a wet towel to cover our mouth and nose and stay low to the ground. Of course, we should take action to prevent future disasters. We can plant more trees and protect wild animals. We also share some related information with others. Hope we can have a better world in the future. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据提示内容介绍在不同的自然灾害中保护自己的方法，同时，提出预防措施，拯救地球，可适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自然灾害的类型； 第二步，介绍不同自然灾害中保护自己的方法； 第三步，提出预防措施。 [亮点词汇] ①and so on等等 ②make sure确保 ③stay away from远离 ④share sth with sb和某人分享某物 [高分句型] ①When there is a flood, we should get to high ground and make sure not to walk through the flood water. (when引导时间状语从句) ②If a fire happens, we can use a wet towel to cover our mouth and nose and stay low to the ground. (if引导条件状语从句) ( 7 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$