Unit 5 Play by the rules遵守规则（单元同步写作讲义）英语外研版2024八年级上册

Unit5 Play by the rules 同步写作课讲义-外研版2024八年级上册 ( ⭐话题解读⭐ ) 本单元以“规则”为话题，主要围绕公共场合的规则以及规则的重要性来展开。规则广泛存在于学校、家庭、社会公共场所等各个领域。在学校，规则规范着学生的学习和日常行为，像课堂纪律、考试规则等；家庭中，有作息安排、家务分担等规则；社会层面，交通规则、公共场合的行为准则等保障着社会秩序。 ( ⭐写作任务⭐ ) 写作通常涉及以下几个方面： 1.讲述一个有关遵守规则的故事； 2.介绍家规/校规/班规等； 3.就规则发表评论或建议。 写作时，人称多用第一人称和第三人称，时态主要为一般现在时或一般过去时，介绍规则时注意情态动词can、have to和must的使用。 ( ⭐审题指导⭐ ) 学校的英语俱乐部正在举办“Rules Around Me”的征文活动，请你写一篇短文介绍你在学校和家里的规则，并谈谈你对这些规则的看法。词数80左右。 要求：1.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3.词数：不少于80。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 审主题：规则 审体裁：记叙文 审人称：以第三人称为主 审时态：以一般过去时为主 审要点：时间、地点、人物、事件、评价 ( ⭐写作框架⭐ ) ( ⭐素材宝库⭐ ) ( 词汇积累 ) ( 7 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 动作 notice sb. doing sth.注意到某人在做某事 talk to sb.和某人交谈 see sb. doing sth.看到某人在做某事 ask sb. to do sth.请求/要求某人做某事 refuse to do sth.拒绝做某事 return to回到…… solve the problem解决问题 explain the situation解释情况 warn sb.警告某人 remind sb. about sth.提醒某人某事 评价 brave勇敢的 moved感动的 set a good example树立一个好榜样 without hesitation毫不犹豫地 learn from向……学习 ( 句型积累 ) 开头句 I’m writing to share a story about my classmate, Wang Liang.我写这篇文章是想和大家分享我的同学王亮的故事。 中间句 1.起因 Wang Liang noticed a man taking someone else’s window seat. 王亮注意到一名男子占了别人的靠窗座位。 A man was sitting in another passenger’s window seat. 一名男子坐在了别的乘客的靠窗座位上。 2.经过 Wang Liang went to talk to the man. 王亮上前与这名男子交谈。 Wang Liang politely asked him to return to his own seat. 王亮礼貌地请他回到自己的座位上。 Wang Liang reminded him about the rules. 王亮提醒他要遵守规则。 But the man refused and said he didn’t care about the rules.但那人拒绝了，还说他不在乎规则。 Wang Liang went to find a train attendant to solve the problem.王亮去找乘务员解决问题。 The attendant warned the man.乘务员警告了这名男子。 3.结果 Finally, the man went back to his own seat.最后，那人回到了自己的座位上。 结尾句 I think it’s very brave of Wang Liang to stand up to bad behaviour.我认为王亮非常勇敢，能够直面不良行为。 We should learn from him.我们应该向他学习。 If everyone could follow the rules in public places, the world will be better.如果每个人都能在公共场所遵守规则，世界将会更加美好。 Rules are there for us to follow!规则的存在是为了让我们去遵守！ ( ⭐参考范文⭐ ) In my daily life, there are many rules that I need to follow. At school, we have to wear uniforms and be on time for every class. We can't talk or eat in the classroom, and we must keep quiet during the lessons. After school, we need to finish our homework on time and help clean the classroom. I think these rules are very important because they help us keep order and focus on our studies. At home, there are also some rules. I have to make my bed every morning and keep my room tidy. I can't play computer games too long on weekdays. I must also help my parents with some housework, like washing the dishes or taking out the trash. These rules teach me responsibility and how to take care of myself. Although sometimes I feel these rules are a bit strict, I understand that they are good for me. They help me develop good habits and make my life more organized. I believe following rules is important for everyone. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文。 ②时态：时态为 “一般现在时”。 ③提示：文章为第一人称，介绍自己学校和家中的一些规则。适当增加细节，并表达了自己的看法。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点明主题，介绍生活中存在很多规则； 第二步，介绍学校规则和家庭规则； 第三步，表达自己的看法。 第四步，强调规则的重要性。 [亮点词汇] 1. rules（规则） 2. uniforms（校服） 3. keep quiet（保持安静） 4. homework（家庭作业） 5. housework（家务） 6. responsibility（责任） 7. organized（有条理的） 8.develop good habits（养成好习惯） [高分句型] 1.There are many rules that I need to follow. （使用定语从句，增强句子的复杂性。） 2.We can't talk or eat in the classroom, and we must keep quiet during the lessons. （使用并列句，使句子更丰富。） ( ⭐写作拓展⭐ ) ( 变式提升训练 ) （1） 孟子言“无规矩，不成方圆。”规矩，是一种准则，更是一种分寸，是每一个人一生的必修课。请你根据以下思维导图提示，以“No Rules, No Standards (标准)”为题，用英文写一篇短文。 参考词汇：share housework with parents, keep quiet in public, hand in homework on time, not run in the hallways, not use mobile phones while crossing the road or riding, … 要求： 1. 可选择使用参考词汇，亦可适当发挥； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3. 文中不得出现任何真实信息，姓名、校名和地名等； 4. 词数：不少于70词，开头已给出，但不计入总词数。 No Rules, No Standards As an ancient Chinese saying goes, “No rules, no standards”. Here I want to talk about the rules in our lives. __________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （2） （22-23九年级上·湖北十堰·期末）我们学校正在落实社会主义核心价值观，创建美好、和谐校园活动，作为一名中学生，请你以“Rules of Our School”为题写一篇英语短文，谈谈你对校规的认识。 要点如下：请你从学习、卫生、衣着等方面构思，按顺序表达，并增加一条；谈论你对这些校规的认识；并对改善校规提出自己的建议。 要求：行文连贯，条例清晰，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范，可适当发挥，词数在80—100左右。 Rules of Our School At present, there are lots of rules in our school. __________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （3） （24-25九年级上·江西南昌·期末）俗话说：“国有国法，家有家规”，“没有规矩，不成方圆”。你有哪些家规呢？ 哪些你不赞同又应该如何改变呢？ 请根据下面提示，谈谈你的看法。 写作要点： Useful expressions: 1. What rule(s) do you have at home? 2. Which rule(s) do you disagree with? 3. How to make the rule(s) better? I do not agree with… I think I should be allowed to... I would like to... I could…if I… 写作要求： 1. 短文应包含所有的写作要点，语句通顺，字迹工整，意思连贯； 2. 文中不能出现真实学校和人名； 3. 不少于80词，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。 In my family, there are several rules. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （4） （2022·黑龙江哈尔滨·中考真题）假如你是李平，你的英国笔友Peter因为学校和家庭中有太多的规则需要遵守而苦恼。请你根据以下信息，给他写一封回信，谈谈你的看法，并告诉他如何做一名遵守规则的中学生。 写作要点： 1.因他的信任而高兴。 2.你的看法： (1)遵守规则是重要的； (2)遵守规则使人受欢迎。 3.告诉他如何做一名遵守规则(obey the rules)的中学生。 写作要求： 1.不得使用其实的姓名和学校名。 2.可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。 3.字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。 4.至少80词。 Dear Peter, How’s it going? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes! Yours, Li Ping （5） （24-25九年级上·四川凉山·阶段练习）假设你是红星中学初三学生李华。现请你根据以下要点提示，以“Rules of My School”为题，写一篇英语演讲稿。 写作要求： 1. 写出至少2条你觉得合理且赞成的校规，并说明理由。 2. 写出2条你不赞同的校规，并给出理由及改善的措施和建议。 3. 全文不少于80词。 Rules of my School Hello, my name is Li Hua. I’m a fifteen-year-old boy from Hongxing Middle School. There are a lot of rules in my school. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （6） （23-24九年级上·黑龙江哈尔滨·期中）假如你是李平，你的英国笔友Peter因为学校和家庭中有太多的规则需要遵守而苦恼，请你根据以下信息，给他写一封回信，谈谈你的看法，并告诉他如何做一名遵守规则的中学生。 写作要点： 1. 得知他的情况，你感到很遗憾。 2. 你的看法： （1）遵守规则是重要的。 （2）遵守规则使人受欢迎： 3. 告诉他如何做一名遵守规则（obey the rules）的中学生。 写作要求： 1. 不得使用真实姓名和学校名。 2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。 3. 字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。 4. 至少80词。 Dear Peter, How is everything going? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes Li Ping $$ Unit5 Play by the rules 同步写作课讲义-外研版2024八年级上册 ( ⭐话题解读⭐ ) 本单元以“规则”为话题，主要围绕公共场合的规则以及规则的重要性来展开。规则广泛存在于学校、家庭、社会公共场所等各个领域。在学校，规则规范着学生的学习和日常行为，像课堂纪律、考试规则等；家庭中，有作息安排、家务分担等规则；社会层面，交通规则、公共场合的行为准则等保障着社会秩序。 ( ⭐写作任务⭐ ) 写作通常涉及以下几个方面： 1.讲述一个有关遵守规则的故事； 2.介绍家规/校规/班规等； 3.就规则发表评论或建议。 写作时，人称多用第一人称和第三人称，时态主要为一般现在时或一般过去时，介绍规则时注意情态动词can、have to和must的使用。 ( ⭐审题指导⭐ ) 学校的英语俱乐部正在举办“Rules Around Me”的征文活动，请你写一篇短文介绍你在学校和家里的规则，并谈谈你对这些规则的看法。词数80左右。 要求：1.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3.词数：不少于80。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 审主题：规则 审体裁：记叙文 审人称：以第三人称为主 审时态：以一般过去时为主 审要点：时间、地点、人物、事件、评价 ( ⭐写作框架⭐ ) ( ⭐素材宝库⭐ ) ( 词汇积累 ) ( 7 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 动作 notice sb. doing sth.注意到某人在做某事 talk to sb.和某人交谈 see sb. doing sth.看到某人在做某事 ask sb. to do sth.请求/要求某人做某事 refuse to do sth.拒绝做某事 return to回到…… solve the problem解决问题 explain the situation解释情况 warn sb.警告某人 remind sb. about sth.提醒某人某事 评价 brave勇敢的 moved感动的 set a good example树立一个好榜样 without hesitation毫不犹豫地 learn from向……学习 ( 句型积累 ) 开头句 I’m writing to share a story about my classmate, Wang Liang.我写这篇文章是想和大家分享我的同学王亮的故事。 中间句 1.起因 Wang Liang noticed a man taking someone else’s window seat. 王亮注意到一名男子占了别人的靠窗座位。 A man was sitting in another passenger’s window seat. 一名男子坐在了别的乘客的靠窗座位上。 2.经过 Wang Liang went to talk to the man. 王亮上前与这名男子交谈。 Wang Liang politely asked him to return to his own seat. 王亮礼貌地请他回到自己的座位上。 Wang Liang reminded him about the rules. 王亮提醒他要遵守规则。 But the man refused and said he didn’t care about the rules.但那人拒绝了，还说他不在乎规则。 Wang Liang went to find a train attendant to solve the problem.王亮去找乘务员解决问题。 The attendant warned the man.乘务员警告了这名男子。 3.结果 Finally, the man went back to his own seat.最后，那人回到了自己的座位上。 结尾句 I think it’s very brave of Wang Liang to stand up to bad behaviour.我认为王亮非常勇敢，能够直面不良行为。 We should learn from him.我们应该向他学习。 If everyone could follow the rules in public places, the world will be better.如果每个人都能在公共场所遵守规则，世界将会更加美好。 Rules are there for us to follow!规则的存在是为了让我们去遵守！ ( ⭐参考范文⭐ ) In my daily life, there are many rules that I need to follow. At school, we have to wear uniforms and be on time for every class. We can't talk or eat in the classroom, and we must keep quiet during the lessons. After school, we need to finish our homework on time and help clean the classroom. I think these rules are very important because they help us keep order and focus on our studies. At home, there are also some rules. I have to make my bed every morning and keep my room tidy. I can't play computer games too long on weekdays. I must also help my parents with some housework, like washing the dishes or taking out the trash. These rules teach me responsibility and how to take care of myself. Although sometimes I feel these rules are a bit strict, I understand that they are good for me. They help me develop good habits and make my life more organized. I believe following rules is important for everyone. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文。 ②时态：时态为 “一般现在时”。 ③提示：文章为第一人称，介绍自己学校和家中的一些规则。适当增加细节，并表达了自己的看法。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点明主题，介绍生活中存在很多规则； 第二步，介绍学校规则和家庭规则； 第三步，表达自己的看法。 第四步，强调规则的重要性。 [亮点词汇] 1. rules（规则） 2. uniforms（校服） 3. keep quiet（保持安静） 4. homework（家庭作业） 5. housework（家务） 6. responsibility（责任） 7. organized（有条理的） 8.develop good habits（养成好习惯） [高分句型] 1.There are many rules that I need to follow. （使用定语从句，增强句子的复杂性。） 2.We can't talk or eat in the classroom, and we must keep quiet during the lessons. （使用并列句，使句子更丰富。） ( ⭐写作拓展⭐ ) ( 变式提升训练 ) （1） 孟子言“无规矩，不成方圆。”规矩，是一种准则，更是一种分寸，是每一个人一生的必修课。请你根据以下思维导图提示，以“No Rules, No Standards (标准)”为题，用英文写一篇短文。 参考词汇：share housework with parents, keep quiet in public, hand in homework on time, not run in the hallways, not use mobile phones while crossing the road or riding, … 要求： 1. 可选择使用参考词汇，亦可适当发挥； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3. 文中不得出现任何真实信息，姓名、校名和地名等； 4. 词数：不少于70词，开头已给出，但不计入总词数。 No Rules, No Standards As an ancient Chinese saying goes, “No rules, no standards”. Here I want to talk about the rules in our lives. __________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ No Rules, No Standards As an ancient Chinese saying goes, “No rules, no standards”. Here I want to talk about the rules in our lives. There are many kinds of rules, such as public rules, school rules and family rules. Public rules help us behave politely in public places. For example, we should keep quiet in public to avoid disturbing others. School rules are important for our study and safety. We must hand in homework on time and not run in the hallways. Family rules make our family harmonious. We should actively share housework with our parents to show our responsibility within the family. Besides, traffic rules are also essential. We mustn’t use mobile phones while we are crossing the road or riding a bike to ensure our safety. In conclusion, rules are necessary for a better life. We should follow them to make our lives more orderly and safer. 2．There are many kinds of rules, such as public rules, school rules and family rules. 3．Public rules help us behave politely in public places. 【解析】1．[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：文章应该包括思维导图所含提示要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开门见山，介绍我们生活中的规则； 第二步，描述规则的具体内容； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①in public 公开地 ②hand in 提交 [高分句型] ①There are many kinds of rules, such as public rules, school rules and family rules. (there be句型) ②We mustn’t use mobile phones while we are crossing the road or riding a bike to ensure our safety.  (while引导时间状语从句) 2．分析题干可知，句子考查there be句型，there位于句首，首字母要大写；many kinds of rules“许多种规则”，作句子的主语，为复数，be动词应用are；such as“例如”，介词短语；public rules, school rules and family rules“公共规则、学校规则和家庭规则”。故填There are many kinds of rules, such as public rules, school rules and family rules. 3．分析题干可知，句子为陈述句；public rules“公共规则”，作主语，位于句首，首字母要大写；help sb. do sth.“帮助某人做某事”，句子为一般现在时，且主语为复数，谓语动词应用原形；us“我们”，人称代词宾格；behave politely“表现得有礼貌”；in public places“在公共场所”，介词短语。故填Public rules help us behave politely in public places. （2） （22-23九年级上·湖北十堰·期末）我们学校正在落实社会主义核心价值观，创建美好、和谐校园活动，作为一名中学生，请你以“Rules of Our School”为题写一篇英语短文，谈谈你对校规的认识。 要点如下：请你从学习、卫生、衣着等方面构思，按顺序表达，并增加一条；谈论你对这些校规的认识；并对改善校规提出自己的建议。 要求：行文连贯，条例清晰，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范，可适当发挥，词数在80—100左右。 Rules of Our School At present, there are lots of rules in our school. __________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Rules of Our School    At present, there are lots of rules in our school. Firstly, we should listen to teachers carefully in class. It can make us much easier to improve the study skills. We have an hour of homework every day. There is a big library with lots of useful books. We can read books there. Secondly, we need keep our schools clean. We can do many things for it, such as cleaning the floor every day, collecting the waste instead of throwing it everywhere and so on. Thirdly, we need to wear school uniforms every day. The problem is that all of our classmates think uniforms are ugly. I think young people should look smart, so I would like to wear my own clothes. If we have to wear uniforms, we should be allowed to design our own uniforms. Fourthly, we need to save the energy at school. We should turn off the lights before we leave the classrooms.      Although we have different views on the rules of our school, I think everyone should obey them. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据要点完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点题； 第二步，介绍学校校规及你对这些校规的认识并对改善校规提出自己的建议； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①improve提高②collect收集③waste废品④instead of 而不是⑤uniform制服⑥smart漂亮的⑦be allowed to do sth.被允许做某事⑧design设计⑨turn off关闭⑩obey遵守 [高分句型] ①The problem is that all of our classmates think uniforms are ugly.（that引导表语从句） ②Although we have different views on the rules of our school, I think everyone should obey them.（although引导让步状语从句） （3） （24-25九年级上·江西南昌·期末）俗话说：“国有国法，家有家规”，“没有规矩，不成方圆”。你有哪些家规呢？ 哪些你不赞同又应该如何改变呢？ 请根据下面提示，谈谈你的看法。 写作要点： Useful expressions: 1. What rule(s) do you have at home? 2. Which rule(s) do you disagree with? 3. How to make the rule(s) better? I do not agree with… I think I should be allowed to... I would like to... I could…if I… 写作要求： 1. 短文应包含所有的写作要点，语句通顺，字迹工整，意思连贯； 2. 文中不能出现真实学校和人名； 3. 不少于80词，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。 In my family, there are several rules. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 In my family, there are several rules. For example, I can’t go out with friends on school nights. I have to clean my room. I must finish homework first. I do not agree with finishing homework first. I have studied all day at school and I feel bored and tired. I think I should be allowed to relax first. I would like to eat some snacks, listen to music or watch TV for a while, I think these can make me feel better and happier. So, I think I should be allowed to relax before dinner. After that, I will go to do my homework. I could concentrate my mind on schoolwork if I get enough rest. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己的家规； 第二步，介绍自己不认可的家规； 第三步，介绍怎样让家规变得更好。 [亮点词汇] ①for example例如 ②agree with同意 ③would like to do sth想要做某事 [高分句型] I could concentrate my mind on schoolwork if I get enough rest. (if引导条件状语从句) （4） （2022·黑龙江哈尔滨·中考真题）假如你是李平，你的英国笔友Peter因为学校和家庭中有太多的规则需要遵守而苦恼。请你根据以下信息，给他写一封回信，谈谈你的看法，并告诉他如何做一名遵守规则的中学生。 写作要点： 1.因他的信任而高兴。 2.你的看法： (1)遵守规则是重要的； (2)遵守规则使人受欢迎。 3.告诉他如何做一名遵守规则(obey the rules)的中学生。 写作要求： 1.不得使用其实的姓名和学校名。 2.可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。 3.字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。 4.至少80词。 Dear Peter, How’s it going? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes! Yours, Li Ping 【答案】例文 Dear Peter, How’s it going? I am very happy for your trust and I would like to give you some advice for your problem. You feel quite upset these days because you have too many rules to obey. Some of them are from your family and some from your school. In my opinion, following some rules is important and even necessary. More often than not, obeying rules will make us popular among our classmates. Since rules are important, what can you do to obey the rules? The most essential thing is to raise your awareness of obeying the rules. That is to say, you have to understand the importance of obeying the rules and accept them from the bottom of your heart. Rules may limit your freedom, but they do regulate your behavior. As long as you have the awareness, you can start from doing small things in daily life. For example, you should listen to teachers carefully in class instead of making noise or disturbing teachers. In the school, you’d better not run after others, because it is dangerous. When you have different ideas from your parents, you should communicate with them patiently rather than quarrel or even turn a cold shoulder towards them. So much for my advice and wait for your good news. Best wishes! Yours, Li Ping 【详解】1.题干解读：本文为一篇书信作文。题目要求根据提示信息，就笔友Peter遇到的苦恼谈谈自己的看法并告诉Peter如何做一名遵守规则的中学生。 2.写作指导：本文时态为一般现在时，人称以第一人称和第二人称为主。第一段要表达因得到对方的信任而感到高兴，并谈谈对遵守规则的看法：(1)遵守规则是重要的；(2)遵守规则使人受欢迎。第二段要告诉对方具体如何做一名遵守规则的中学生，即提建议。提建议时，可用情态动词should和固定句式“You’d better not...”等，使语气更委婉。最后，总结全文、表达祝福，并署名。 （5） （24-25九年级上·四川凉山·阶段练习）假设你是红星中学初三学生李华。现请你根据以下要点提示，以“Rules of My School”为题，写一篇英语演讲稿。 写作要求： 1. 写出至少2条你觉得合理且赞成的校规，并说明理由。 2. 写出2条你不赞同的校规，并给出理由及改善的措施和建议。 3. 全文不少于80词。 Rules of my School Hello, my name is Li Hua. I’m a fifteen-year-old boy from Hongxing Middle School. There are a lot of rules in my school. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文 Rules of My School Hello, my name is Li Hua. I’m a fifteen-year-old boy from Hongxing Middle School. There are a lot of rules in my school. And I have some opinions about them. First, I agree with the rule that we should wear school uniforms. It helps us look united and creates a sense of belonging. Also, it prevents students from wearing inappropriate clothes, which is good for our learning environment. Another rule I support is the one about no mobile phones in class. It allows us to focus on our studies and avoid distractions. With mobile phones away, we can concentrate better on the teacher’s explanations. However, there are two rules that I don’t agree with. One is the curfew time, which I think is too early. Sometimes we have a lot of homework and need more time to finish it. I suggest extending the curfew time by an hour so we can have enough time to rest and study. The other rule I dislike is the ban on bringing snacks to school. I understand the school wants to keep the classrooms clean, but sometimes we get hungry between classes. My advice is to set up specific snack areas where we can eat healthily without making a mess. In conclusion, school rules are important, but they should also be reasonable and consider our needs. Thank you for listening. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示： 写作要点已明确，包括赞成与反对的校规各两条，以及相应的理由和建议。考生需围绕这些要点展开，确保内容全面且逻辑清晰。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明演讲主题和自我介绍。通过介绍自己的姓名、年龄和学校，引出今天要讨论的主题——“Rules of My School”； 第二步，具体介绍两条自己赞成的校规并说明理由； 第三步，具体介绍两条自己不赞同的校规并给出理由，以及改善的措施和建议； 第三步，书写结语。总结自己的观点，强调合理校规的重要性，并呼吁学校能听取学生意见，不断完善校规制度。 [亮点词汇] ①agree with同意 ②a sense of  belonging归属感 ③prevent sb from doing sth阻止某人做某事 ④focus on 集中注意力于 ⑤in conclusion总之 [高分句型] ①Also, it prevents students from wearing inappropriate clothes, which is good for our learning environment.（which引导非限制性定语从句） ②I suggest extending the curfew time by an hour so we can have enough time to rest and study.（so引导结果状语从句） （6） （23-24九年级上·黑龙江哈尔滨·期中）假如你是李平，你的英国笔友Peter因为学校和家庭中有太多的规则需要遵守而苦恼，请你根据以下信息，给他写一封回信，谈谈你的看法，并告诉他如何做一名遵守规则的中学生。 写作要点： 1. 得知他的情况，你感到很遗憾。 2. 你的看法： （1）遵守规则是重要的。 （2）遵守规则使人受欢迎： 3. 告诉他如何做一名遵守规则（obey the rules）的中学生。 写作要求： 1. 不得使用真实姓名和学校名。 2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。 3. 字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。 4. 至少80词。 Dear Peter, How is everything going? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes Li Ping 【答案】例文： Dear Peter, How’s it going? I’m sorry to hear that you feel upset these days because you have too many rules to obey. Some of them are from your family and some from your school. I would like to give you some advice for your problems. In my opinion, following some rules is important and even necessary. More often than not, obeying rules will make us popular among our classmates. Since rules are important, what can you do to obey the rules? The most essential thing is to raise your awareness of obeying the rules. That is to say, you have to understand the importance of obeying the rules and accept them from the bottom of your heart. Rules may limit your freedom, but they do regulate your behavior. As long as you have the awareness, you can start from doing small things in daily life. For example, you should listen to teachers carefully in class instead of making noise or disturbing teachers. In the school, you’d better not run after others, because it is dangerous. When you have different ideas from your parents, you should communicate with them patiently rather than quarrel or even turn a cold shoulder towards them. So much for my advice and wait for your good news. Best wishes! Yours, Li Ping 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，为书信。 ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中如何做一名遵守规则的中学生的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。借用“就笔友Peter遇到的苦恼谈谈自己的看法并告诉Peter如何做一名遵守规则的中学生”来引出重点介绍的内容； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“感受、看法、建议等”几个方面重点介绍如何做一名遵守规则的中学生的具体情况； 第三步，书写结语，表达“我的建议到此为止，等待你的好消息”的想法。 [亮点词汇] ①as long as只要 ②for example例如 ③communicate with与……交流 [高分句型] ①The most essential thing is to raise your awareness of obeying the rules. (动词不定式作表语) ②When you have different ideas from your parents, you should communicate with them patiently rather than quarrel or even turn a cold shoulder towards them (when引导时间状语从句) $$