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读后续写 之 主题篇:竞赛类
赢:收获友谊
Wild cheers and applause erupted from the stand. When David held the trophy high, he knew that it was the football from his mother that overcame the language barrier and befriended his class.看台上爆发出热烈的欢呼声和掌声。当大卫高高举起奖杯时,他知道是母亲送给他的足球克服了语言障碍,看台上爆发出热烈的欢呼声和掌声。当大卫高高举起奖杯时,他知道是母亲送给他的足球克服了语言障碍,和他的班级成为了朋友。
嬴:团队精神
Since this memorable basketball match, we have been ready for every battle. There is no limit to what we can accomplish as long as we play a team.从这场难忘的篮球赛开始,我们就为每一场战斗做好了准备。只要我们团结一致,我们所能取得的成就是无限的。
平:收获友谊
I grinned. She giggled. “A tie,” Mr. Beal said, shaking his head. But Cassie and I knew that we had won something more important than the Egg Drop Challenge. Some friendships aren’t like eggs after all. They can survive a little bouncing.我咧嘴一笑。她咯咯地说。“打个领带,”比尔先生摇着头说。但卡西和我知道我们赢得了比掉蛋挑战更重要的东西。有些友谊毕竟并不像鸡蛋。它们能活一点。
输:战胜自我
I didn’t come close to placing, but I had given everything I had to finish. “I swam my race. And I think I won.” Race is not only to beat your competitors but also to race against yourself.我并没有接近名次,但我已经付出了我必须完成的一切。“我游泳参加了我的比赛。我想我赢了。”比赛不仅是为了击败你的竞争对手,而且也是为了与你自己竞争。
输:善良
Kevin’s arms shot high into the air and he shouted for joy. The clock ticked off the last few seconds and the first-place team remained undefeated. But on that evening, everyone left the game truly feeling like a winner.凯文的手臂高举在空中,他高兴地喊着。最后几秒钟,比赛结束了,第一名的球队保持不败。但在那天晚上,每个人都离开了比赛,感觉自己是赢家。
输:帮助
The last mile seemed shorter and we enjoyed the moment when we passed the finishing line together with thunderous applause. I know they cheered for us not for winning a race but for something more important.最后一英里似乎更短了,我们享受着在雷鸣般的掌声中通过终点线的那一刻。我知道他们为我们欢呼不是为了赢得一场比赛,而是为更重要的事情。
【写作构思】
一、比赛前
1. 做准备
①The following days witnessed me practicing (running).接下来的几天,我努力练习(跑步)。②The setting sun witnessing my unremitting efforts,I kept sharpening my skill regardless of my aching muscle.夕阳见证了我不懈的努力,我不顾酸痛的肌肉,不断磨练自己的技能。
③Not until the darkness swallowed everything on the horizon did I stop training and dragged aching legs home.直到黑暗吞没了地平线上的一切,我才停止训练,拖着疼痛的双腿回家。
2.准备中
①Hard as I trained, I still made little progress, which put me on the verge of collapse. But as I made another attempt, a wave of excitement welled up inside me.尽管我训练得很努力,我仍然没有取得什么进步,这使我处于崩溃的边缘。当我再次尝试时,一阵兴奋涌上心头。②Whenever I was exhausted/full of fatigue, the guy’s words echoed in my mind , which instill power into me. I would not let his wife beat me again. 每当我疲惫不堪的时候,那家伙的话就在我脑海里回荡,给我注入了能量。我不会再让他妻子打败我了。
③Sometimes I was burned out, but I was determined that nothing would weigh me down.
有时我筋疲力尽,但我下定决心,没有什么能把我压垮。
④From then on, sb. put his heart and soul into sth. like never before, determined to sharpen skills with endless efforts and unchanging commitment rain or shine.从那时起,某人前所未有地全身心投入某件事中,决心通过不懈的努力及不变的承诺来提升技能,不管风雨无阻。
准备后变化
The following+时间(一般是days/weeks等) witnessed one’s gradual progress and proficiency(熟练) in sth., renewing one’s confidence and passion consumed by self-doubt and a sense of inferiority(自卑感) and strengthening one’s resolve to brace oneself for(为.....做好准备) the event. 接下来的时间见证某人不断地取得进步,并熟练某事(某技能等),使某人曾被自我怀疑和自卑感所吞噬的自信与热情得到了恢复,并增强了某人的决心去为该事做好准备。
赛前心理及赛中表现:
Then came one's turn. With spotlight(聚光灯) settling over sb. and eyes locking on sb., sb. took a deep breath, composed one’s mind and bathed oneself in the performance, skillfully(pleasantly/elegantly) displaying one’s talents (voice/dance moves/melodies等), leaving the audience breathless and spellbound. 接下来轮到某人了。在聚光灯下,众人眼睛聚在某人身上,某人深呼吸、冷静下来、然后沉浸在表演中,技艺高超地(愉快地、优雅地)展现某人的才能(歌喉、舞步、乐曲),使观众叹为观止。
二、比赛中
1. 比赛开始
①With the sound of the starting gun (piercing through the air), the race began as expected.
发令枪发射(响彻天空),比赛如期开始了。
②The whistle went off and the competitors began to take their places.
哨声响起,所有参赛者各就各位。
2.遭遇打击
(1)突发意外
①He lost the balance and fell to the ground. 他失去了平衡,倒在了地上。
②He tripped over and fell, breaking the skin on his knee. 他被绊倒摔了一跤,磕破了膝盖。③He got cramp in the last 200 meters of the race.在比赛的最后200米,他抽筋了。
(2) 身心疲惫
①Her whole body ached, not just her legs. 她全身疼痛,不只是腿疼。
②She was so tired that her legs just wouldn’t obey her any longer.
她太累了,腿已经不听使唤了。
(3) 局面落后
①He quickened his pace, but still couldn’t catch up with them.
他加快了步伐,但仍然追不上他们。
②I outdistanced the other players at first, but soon they sped up and left me in the dust.
起初我超过了其他选手,但很快他们加快了速度,把我甩在了后面。
3. 受到鼓励,调整心态
①I was about to give up when my teacher cast an encouraging glance at me, which instilled power into me. 我正要放弃时,老师向我投去鼓励的目光, 这给我注入了能量。
②I was about to give up when I found my teacher smiling and cheering for me, which instilled power into me.
我正要放弃时,这时我发现我的老师在微笑着并且为我欢呼,这给我注入了能量。
③I was about to give up when teacher’s encouraging words echoed in my mind, (“If you believe in yourself,nothing is impossible,”)which instill power into me. 我正要放弃时,这时老师鼓励的话语我脑海里回荡,(“如果你相信自己,就没有什么是不可能的,”)这给我注入了能量。
④Courage found its way back the moment she caught sight of the blue ribbon.
当她看到蓝丝带的时候,她又找回了勇气。
4.全力以赴跑步类:
①I willed my legs to keep going. 我用意志力驱使我的腿继续前进。
②I made every effort to run faster. 我拼尽全力,跑得更快。
③Straightening up,I gathered up all my strength to make a dash for the finish line.
我挺直身子,用尽所有力气冲向终点线。
④Refusing to give up at this point,he jumped to his feet and ran as fast as he could.
他拒绝在这个时候放弃,于是一跃而起,以最快的速度奔跑。
游泳类
①Swiftly adjusting his breath, he swam forward like an arrow off the bowstring.
他迅速调整呼吸,像出弦的箭一样向前游去
②He swam to the finish line with all his strength, with his arms pushing forward fast and his legs hitting the water hard.他用尽全力游到终点,双臂快速向前推进,双腿用力撞击水面。
③So dynamic was he that he swam swifter than ever. With his arm waving, he cut through the water smoothly like a flying fish. 他活力四射,游得比以前更快了。他挥动着手臂,像飞鱼一样平稳地划水。
5.击败劲敌/输掉比赛
①Hard as I tried, I failed the race. 虽然我非常努力,我还是输掉了比赛。
②I had my arms held high as I crossed the finish line. It was a narrow victory.
我高举双臂冲过终点线,这是一场险胜。
③Running/Swimming right past her,I managed to win the race. (I fell on the grass, tears of joy filling my eyes.) 我超过了她,赢得了比赛。(我倒在草地上,眼里充满高兴的泪水。)
The atmosphere was electric, with fans cheering loudly for their teams.
比赛氛围非常刺激,粉丝们都在为自己喜欢的球队加油打气。
三、比赛后
After a moment of awed silence rang a storm of applause and cheers through+地点( the hall/auditorium/stadium等), all of which bore witness to one’s success(victory/honour等). Encouraged by this heartening scene, sb. found the lost belief in one’s ability restored(coming alive/ making a great comeback) . It was at that moment that one’s words(encouragement) rang in one’s ears, serving as a reminder that...+感悟
在片刻惊叹的沉默,雷鸣般的掌声和欢呼声响彻某地点(大厅、礼堂、体育馆),所有一切都见证了某人的成功(胜利、荣誉)。受这个鼓舞人心场面的鼓励,某人找回了对自己能力的信仰(复活、东山再起)。就在那一刻,某人的话(鼓励)响在耳边,提醒某人.......
1. 比赛结束后观众、亲人、评委等反应
①The moment the host announced that she won the first prize, other players rushed to him and congratulated him, and her parents were grinning from ear to ear, the audience burst into thunderous applause and cheers. 主持人宣布她获得一等奖的那一刻,其他运动员跑向他祝贺他,她的父母笑得合不拢嘴。观众爆发出雷鸣般的掌声和欢呼声。
2. 与在场人物的互动
①I trotted towards Mareya and gave her a big hug.
我小跑着走向Mareya,给了她一个大大的拥抱。
②I threw myself to Mareya’s arms, held back my tears and said, "Thanks , Mareya.”
我扑到Mareya的怀里,忍住眼泪说:“谢谢,Mareya。”
③His Dad rushed in front of him and held Mike in his arms. “You made it, boy! You are the champion!” Dad’s voice was trembling with excitement. 他的爸爸冲到他前面,把迈克抱在怀里。“你成功了,孩子!”你是冠军!”爸爸激动得声音发抖。
3.登台领奖
①As I stood on the podium to receive my award, tears streamed down my cheeks.
我站在领奖台上领奖,泪水顺着我的脸颊流了下来
4.情感升华,主题感悟
①It was then that I came to realize the significance of the team spirit.
就在那时,我意识到了团队精神的重要性。
②Only then did I come to realize the significance of the team spirit.
直到那时我才意识到团队精神的重要性。
③It was this unique experience that made me understand my efforts ultimately paid off.
正是这次独特的经历让我懂得我的努力最终会得到回报。
④It is his hard work and persistence that won him recognition and more friends.
正是他的努力和坚持为他赢得了认可和更多的朋友。
⑤The medal shone brightly under the sunshine, reflecting the tears in my eyes and the sweat on my husband’s forehead. 奖牌在阳光下闪闪发光,折射出我眼中的泪水和我丈夫额头上的汗水。
He talked animatedly about the teams and players, and I couldn't help but smile at his enthusiasm.
他绘声绘色地描述着自己喜欢的球队和球员,我不得不微笑地回应他的热情。
Despite my lack of interest in the sport, I decided to go, thinking it might be a good opportunity to spend some quality time with my brother.尽管我对体育项目不感兴趣,我还是决定去看篮球比赛。我想,我去了可以和我的“兄弟”共度一段彼此陪伴的美好时光。
【微场景语段】
United, they stood on the field, a tapestry of diverse strengths and talents. Each player knew their role, and together, they formed a symphony of teamwork. The ball passed with precision, a testament to their unity. Victory was sweet, but the spirit of camaraderie was the true prize they all cherished.
他们团结地站在场地上,是一幅由不同的长处和才能组成的挂毯。每个队员都知道自己的角色,他们一起形成了团队合作的交响乐。球以精确的方式传递,证明了他们的团结。胜利是甜蜜的,但同志情谊的精神是他们真正珍视的奖品。
With a deep breath, he stepped onto the podium, his voice steady and clear. The words he spoke were not just a speech, but a journey, a story that resonated with the audience. As he finished, the silence was broken only by applause, a testament to the power of his message.
他深吸一口气,走上讲台,声音稳定而清晰。他说的不仅仅是演讲,而是一段旅程,一个与听众共鸣的故事。当他结束时,寂静只被掌声打破,这是他信息力量的证明。
As the race began, David positioned himself at the starting line, his figure dwarfed by his peers yet his spirit towering. With a deep breath, he launched forward, each step a testament to his tenacity. His movements were uneven, yet there was a graceful rhythm in his persistence, his feet tapping a personal melody against the earth. The other children surged ahead, but David’s journey was his own—a vibrant display of courage that drew cheers from onlookers. As he rounded the bend, his face was alight with a fierce joy, each stride pushing the boundaries of his personal best.
比赛开始后,戴维站在起跑线上,他的身影在同龄人面前相形见绌,但他的精神却巍然屹立。他深吸一口气,向前冲去,每一步都是他顽强精神的见证。他的动作并不整齐,但在他的坚持中却蕴含着优美的节奏,他的双脚在大地上敲打出个人的旋律。其他孩子在前面奋勇向前,但戴维的旅程是他自己的--一种充满活力的勇气展示,引来围观者的欢呼。当他绕过弯道时,脸上洋溢着无比的喜悦,每一步都在挑战个人最好成绩的极限。
The stage lights glared, but she stood unafraid, her heart pounding in rhythm with her dreams. Each step, each leap was a declaration of her passion, and as the music peaked, so did her spirit. This was her moment, her chance to shine, and shine she did, like the star she was born to be.
舞台灯光刺眼,但她毫不畏惧地站立,她的心随着她的梦想而跳动。每一步,每一次跳跃都是她热情的宣言,随着音乐的高潮,她的精神也在高涨。这是她的时刻,她发光的机会,她确实发光了,就像她天生的明星一样。"
The pool water sparkled under the harsh lights as she stood at the edge, her heart pounding. This race was more than just a test of speed; it was a battle against her own fears. With each stroke, she felt the rush of adrenaline, propelling her forward. As she touched the finish, she knew she had won not only the race but also her struggle within.
在刺眼的灯光下,泳池的水闪闪发光,她站在边缘,心怦怦直跳。这场比赛不仅仅是速度的考验;这是与她自己恐惧的战斗。每一次划水,她都感到肾上腺素的冲动,推动她前进。当她触到终点时,她知道自己不仅赢得了比赛,也赢得了内心的斗争。
The day when Larry invited me to see the basketball game with him came. Despite my lack of interest in the sport, I decided to go, thinking it might be a good opportunity to spend some quality time with my brother. As we drove to the venue, Larry's excitement was palpable. He talked animatedly about the teams and players, and I couldn't help but smile at his enthusiasm. It reminded me of how he used to share his passions with me when we were kids, and I felt a sense of nostalgia.
拉里邀请我和他一起去看篮球比赛的那一天来了。尽管我对这项运动不感兴趣,但我还是决定去,认为这可能是一个和我哥哥共度美好时光的好机会。当我们驱车前往会场时,拉里的兴奋之情溢于言表。他兴致勃勃地谈论着球队和球员,我忍不住对他的热情微微一笑。这让我想起了我们小时候他是如何和我分享他的激情的,我有一种怀旧的感觉。
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