2026届高三英语读后续写专项复习---美食节风波---续写导学案

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Ever since my dad passed away, my life changed. My Mom was always busy with work, leaving little time for me. Every day after school, I had to go to daycare until she finished her work. Even Sundays were no exception. One day, at dinner time, I asked Mom, “Can we please go to the food festival this Sunday?” I begged. “I’m sorry, Lilly. I have to work,” she replied. “But we never spend time together anymore! Can’t you take the day off?” I begged. Mom placed a plate of freshly baked cherry pie in front of me and kissed my head. “We’ll see,” she said with a slight smile. On Sunday morning, I heard the rhythmic chop（切）of fruit and the sound of blender（搅拌机）as if Mom was making something special in the kitchen. When I rushed to the kitchen, I was surprised to see Mom, in her work clothes, busy preparing some food. My heart sank. “You’re going to work again?” I asked tentatively（试探性地）. Mom bent down next to me and put her hand on my shoulder, “Sorry, Lilly! I have to go today.” Tears streamed down my face as I yelled, “You never have time for me anymore!” Overwhelmed with disappointment, I ran to my room and slammed the door. As I was crying on my bed I could hear Mom talk on the phone, “Hi, Betty. I have work today and Lilly is in a bad mood. I was wondering if you could come over and watch her for a few hours? ...Great!... Thanks so much! See you soon.” A few hours later, my aunt Betty came over and Mom left. I heard Betty knock on my bedroom door. “Lilly, your Mom left a note for you on the kitchen table.” 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Curious, I opened the door and hurried to the kitchen. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Back from work, Mom prepared the mini food festival as promised. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 文本分析​ 1.角色：_____________________________​ 2.视角：第________人称​ 3.时空线：________→________→________→________→________→（续写）→（续写）​ 4.可能的线索：​ Why was the food festival important to Lilly?：_____________________________​ What caused Mom to be unable to go to the food festival initially?：_____________________________​ How did Mom prepare for the food festival before leaving?：_____________________________​ What was Lilly's reaction when Mom said she had to work?：_____________________________​ How might the problem of Lilly's disappointment be solved?：_____________________________​ 5.情节线：________→________→________→________→________→（续写）→（续写）​ 6.情感线：​ Lilly：→________→（续写）​ Mom：→________→（续写）​ 7.文章大意：​ 中文：_____________________________​ 英文：_____________________________​ 8.句式（宾语从句、同位语从句、定语从句、非谓语动词、with 的复合结构）：_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________​ 9.主题：_____________________________​ 情节构造​ 第一段提示句：Curious, I opened the door and hurried to the kitchen.​ 衔接 1（对 "opened the door and hurried to the kitchen" 提问 "？"）：_____________________​ 过渡句推演：衔接 1→________？←衔接 2​ 衔接 2（对后续情节提问 "？"）：_____________________​ 第二段提示句：Back from work, Mom prepared the mini food festival as promised.​ 衔接 3（对 "prepared the mini food festival as promised" 提问 "？"）：_____________________​ 过渡句推演：衔接 3→________？←主题​ 主题：_____________________________​ 段落构思​ 第一段提示句：Curious, I opened the door and hurried to the kitchen.​ ① _____________________________​ ② _____________________________​ ③ _____________________________​ Para1: ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________​ 第二段提示句：Back from work, Mom prepared the mini food festival as promised.​ ① _____________________________​ ② _____________________________​ ③ _____________________________​ Para2: ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________​ 参考答案 文本分析​ 1.角色：Lilly（“我”）、Mom（妈妈）、Betty（姨妈）​ 2.视角：第一人称​ 3.时空线：爸爸去世后→一天晚餐时→周日早上→妈妈打电话后→几小时后→（续写）→（续写）​ 4.可能的线索：​ Why was the school arts festival important to the class?：（此处原材料为美食节相关，应改为）Why was the food festival important to Lilly? ：Because she wanted to spend time with her mom as they rarely got to be together after her dad passed away.​ What caused Mom to be unable to go to the food festival initially?：She had to work.​ How did Mom prepare for the food festival before leaving?：She was making some special food in the kitchen in her work clothes and left a note for Lilly.​ What was Lilly's reaction when Mom said she had to work?：She was very disappointed, cried, yelled, and ran to her room slamming the door.​ How might the problem of Lilly's disappointment be solved?：Mom might keep her promise to have a mini food festival after work, which could cheer Lilly up.​ 5.情节线：爸爸去世后母女相处时间少→Lilly 请求妈妈周日去美食节→妈妈说要工作→Lilly 失望哭闹→妈妈打电话请姨妈来→姨妈告知 Lilly 妈妈留了便条→（续写）→（续写）​ 6.情感线：​ Lilly：→期待→失望→（续写）​ Mom：→无奈→牵挂→（续写）​ 7.文章大意：​ 中文：爸爸去世后，妈妈忙于工作，莉莉很少有机会和妈妈相处。莉莉请求妈妈周日一起去美食节，妈妈起初说要工作，莉莉非常失望。妈妈打电话请姨妈来照看莉莉，离开后姨妈告诉莉莉妈妈留了便条。​ 英文：After Lilly's dad passed away, her mom was always busy with work, leaving little time for her. Lilly begged her mom to go to the food festival on Sunday, but her mom said she had to work. Lilly was extremely disappointed, cried and ran to her room. Mom called Aunt Betty to look after Lilly, and after Mom left, Aunt Betty told Lilly that Mom had left a note for her.​ 8.句式（宾语从句、同位语从句、定语从句、非谓语动词、with 的复合结构）： 宾语从句："I was wondering if you could come over and watch her for a few hours?"​ 非谓语动词："Ever since my dad passed away, my life changed，"leaving little time for me"（现在分词作结果状语）； "Overwhelmed with disappointment, I ran to my room"（过去分词作状语）​ with 的复合结构："With his thorough attention to detail, adjusted the props repeatedly" 主题：亲情，母女之间的理解与关爱，即使忙碌也会尽力满足对方的心愿​ 情节构造​ 第一段提示句：Curious, I opened the door and hurried to the kitchen.​ 衔接 1（对 "opened the door and hurried to the kitchen" 提问 "？"）：What did Lilly see or find when she got to the kitchen?​ 过渡句推演：衔接 1→What was written in the note?←衔接 2​ 衔接 2（对后续情节提问 "？"）：How did Lilly feel after reading the note?​ 第二段提示句：Back from work, Mom prepared the mini food festival as promised.​ 衔接 3（对 "prepared the mini food festival as promised" 提问 "？"）：What did Mom do to prepare the mini food festival?​ 过渡句推演：衔接 3→How did Lilly and Mom feel during the mini food festival?←主题​ 主题：The deep love between mother and daughter, and that love can be expressed through keeping promises and understanding.​ 段落构思​ 第一段提示句：Curious, I opened the door and hurried to the kitchen.​ ① I spotted a piece of paper on the kitchen table, which was Mom's note.​ ② I picked it up and read it, and Mom's words made me feel regretful for yelling at her.​ ③ Aunt Betty came over and comforted me, and I started to look forward to Mom's return.​ Para1: Curious, I opened the door and hurried to the kitchen. There, on the wooden table, lay a crumpled note with Mom's familiar handwriting. I reached for it, my fingers trembling slightly. "Dear Lilly, I'm sorry I can't go to the food festival with you today. But I promise, when I get back, I'll make a mini food festival just for you with all your favorite snacks. Please don't be angry, my sweet girl. Love you always." Tears welled up in my eyes as I finished reading, and I felt a pang of guilt for yelling at her. Aunt Betty walked in and patted my shoulder softly, "Your mom really cares about you." I nodded, a small smile tugging at my lips.​ 第二段提示句：Back from work, Mom prepared the mini food festival as promised.​ ① Mom took out various ingredients and started making Lilly's favorite foods.​ ② Lilly helped her mom happily, and they chatted while preparing the food.​ ③ They enjoyed the mini food festival together, feeling warm and happy.​ Para2: Back from work, Mom prepared the mini food festival as promised. She took out bowls of colorful fruits, bags of crispy chips, and a plate of freshly baked cookies—all my favorites. With a tired but warm smile, she said, "Let's start our own food festival, honey." I rushed to help her set the table, and the kitchen was soon filled with laughter. As we sat down and tasted the food, I hugged Mom tightly, "Thank you, Mom. I love you." Mom kissed my forehead, "I love you too, Lilly. I'm sorry I've been so busy." That night, the mini food festival was the most wonderful one I'd ever had.​ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$