2026届高三英语一轮复习读后续写之环境描写知识清单

读后续写 之 环境描写 环境描写，是续写重要描写手段之一，可以起到融情与景的效果，衬托人物的内 心世界。适当的环境描写可以使文章读起来有真实感。 比较下面两种表达： I go to school happily.(我愉快地去上学。) 加上环境描写： The morning sunshine shining gently, fragrant flowers smiling from ear to ear, green trees swaying cheerfully, I together with Tom and Jerry set out early riding my bike,talking and singing all the way. (早晨的阳光温柔地照耀着，芬芳的花儿笑得合不拢嘴，绿树欢快地摇曳着，我和汤姆、杰瑞一起骑着自行车早早地出发了，一路上又说又唱。) 环境描写示例： I can well remember that there was a time when a deep blue sky, the song of the birds, moonlight and flowers could never have kept me spellbound.我清楚地记得，曾经有一段时间，深蓝色的天空、鸟儿的歌声、月光和鲜花都无法让我着迷。 The wind was howling dreadfully and the rain was pouring heavily, whipping against the branches of lined tress, a strong feeling of horror creeping on me. 狂风怒嚎，大雨倾盆，抽打着一排排的树枝，一种强烈的恐惧感向我袭来。 ● 环境描写大招一 刘德华演唱《冰雨》: (冷冷的 冰雨 在我脸上 胡乱地 拍形容词 意象 介短 副词 动词) The icy rain is whipping my face mercilessly. 大招一：形容词+意象+动词+副词/方位介短 招式体验： (1)The wind blew.(风吹过) 改写： The gentle warm wind blew softly on the face.和煦的风轻轻地吹在脸上。 (2)The trees waved.（树在摇摆。） 改写： The tall green trees waved quietly on the roadsides. 高大的绿树在路边静静地摇曳。 (3)The sun shone.（太阳照耀着。） 改写：The morning sun shone on the ground warmly and gently. 早晨的阳光温暖而温柔地照在地上。 The warm morning sunlight fell on the ground mildly. 温暖的晨光温和地洒在地上。 具体续写过程中，可将三个(多个)意象结合起来，形成排比句，综合表达，构 建更动感的画面。如： That night wind howled ruthlessly. 夜风无情地呼啸着。 Some unknown creatures murmured in the dark. 一些不知名的生物在黑暗中喃喃自语。 The moonlight shone weakly on the ground. 月光微弱地照在地上。 合并： The night wind howled ruthlessly, nameless creatures murmured in the dark and the moonlight shone weakly on the ground. 排比句：意象1+动词1；意象2+动词2；and 意象3+动词3. 场景综合表达示例： 1.stream 溪流：The afternoon sunlight fell on the grass, the wind blew lightly ,and the water flew silently down the stream. （午后的阳光洒在草地上，风轻轻地吹着水静静地顺着小溪流下来。） 2、flame 火灾：Hot air enveloped the room, the lights glowed in the smoke, and flames spread wildly in all directions. （热空气笼罩着房间，灯光在烟雾中闪烁，火焰疯狂地向四面八方蔓延。） 3.beach 海边：The mild sunlight fell on the sand ,the air blew softly from the sea ,and the crowds played happily on the beach. （柔和的阳光洒在沙滩上，海风轻轻地吹来，还有人群在海滩上愉快地玩耍。） 4、lake 湖边 ：The thin clouds flew slowly in the sky,the tall green trees waved wildly in the wind, and the sunlight shone on the lake. （薄云在天空中慢慢地飞翔，高大的绿树在风中疯狂地摆动，阳光照在湖面上。） 5.classroom 教室: Lights shone brightly on the floor, tidy desks and chairs lined up neatly, and the students listened to the teacher attentively（地板上灯火通明，整齐的桌椅排得整整齐齐，学生们聚精会神地听着老师讲课。） 6.playground 操场: Blazing sunlight burned like an oven, hot air surrounded the playground, the crowds were cheered wildly the runners. (炽热的阳光像火炉一样燃烧着，热空气包围着操场，人群疯狂地为运动员欢呼。) ● 环境描写大招二 伍佰《与你到永久》:风儿轻轻的吹，雨也绵绵下个不停 The wind blows gently, and the rain keeps falling. A gentle wind breezing, a fine drizzle was falling steadily like my missing for you. 写景+比喻+特点： 写景句(本体),+like+喻体+that从句/非谓语动词 招式体验： 1.The stars are in the sky.(1.星星在天上。) The bright stars scattered in the sky, like gems twinkling brilliantly. 天上的星星像宝石一样闪闪发光。 2.The tree is waving.(树在摇摆。) The trees waved wildly in the air,like drunken man trembling from side to side. 树在空中疯狂地摆动着，像一个醉汉左右发抖。 3.The stars sparkled.(星星闪闪发光。) The stars sparkled vividly, like a curious child glazing at us. 星星生动地闪烁着，像一个好奇的孩子在盯着我们。 The stars sparkled vividly, like naughty children looking at us with curiosity. 星星生动地闪烁着，像顽皮的孩子好奇地看着我们。 大招二表达示例： wind 风: The icy wind started howling, like a sharp knife scratching my face. 冰冷的风开始呼啸，就像一把锋利的刀在刮我的脸。 2.sun 太阳: The morning sunlight flooded in through the curtain, like pieces of gold dancing on the floor. 清晨的阳光透过窗帘照进来，像一片片金子在地板上跳舞。 3.tree 树: Tall trees lined up on both sides of the street, like soldiers throwing long shadows on the ground. 街道两旁排列着高大的树木，像士兵在地上投下长长的影子。 4.cloud 云: The white clouds hang low in the sky, like pieces of cotton sailing with the wind.白云低低地挂在天上，像一片片棉花随风飘动 5.rain 雨: The dreadful rain was pouring down, like monsters beating wildly against the windows. 可怕的大雨倾盆而下，像怪物一样疯狂地拍打着窗户。 6.flower 花: The flowers dotted the garden, like spirits dancing gracefully in the air. 鲜花点缀着花园，像精灵在空中优雅地跳舞。 ● 环境描写大招三 《漂洋过海来看你》:在漫天风沙里望着你远去，我竟悲伤的不能自已 I was too sad to control myself as seeing you going away in the sandy storm. ---The sand all over the sky, your familiar figure fading away, a flood of grief welled up in my heart, sweeping over my body. 方法三：情景交融：写景+感受 意象+动词ing,+感受： 句式一：(无灵主语) a ripple of+情感名词 ran through sb's heart; a flood of+情感名词 welled up in sb. 句式二：(人称主语)sb. was brimmed over with+情感名词； sb. was immersed in +情感名词. 大招体验： The wind was howling dreadfully and the rain was pouring from the heaven, whipping against the branches of lined trees. I was seized with the roaring power of nature. A sense of horror creeping up on me. 风可怕地嚎叫，雨从天倾泻而来，拍打着成排的树枝。我被一股自然发怒的力量抓住了。 一种恐惧感悄悄爬到我身上。 表达示例： wind 风: The icy wind howling, a ripple of tension ran through his heart. 刺骨的寒风呼啸着，一阵紧张的情绪在他心里荡漾。 sun 太阳: The morning sunlight flooding in through the curtain, a ripple of satisfaction ran through the twin's heart. 早晨的阳光透过窗帘照了进来，一种满意的涟漪在双胞胎的心里荡漾。 moon 月亮: The silvery moon glowing in the sky, a ripple of grief ran through Jane's heart. 银色的月亮在天空中闪烁，一阵悲伤的涟漪掠过简的心。 4.snow 雪: Feathery snowflake falling from the sky ,I was immersed in delight. 鹅毛般的雪花从天上飘落，我沉浸在喜悦中。 5、rain 雨: Heavy rain beating down on the street, I was immersed in remorse. 大雨打在街上，我沉浸在悔恨之中。 6.crowd 人群: Crowds of people gathering into the classroom, I was immersed in awkwardness. 教室里人山人海，我沉浸在尴尬中。 综合运用：先尝试概括性描述，在概括描述的基础上增加细节描述，注意逻辑关系及语意的合理。 示 例 ：It got dark.（天黑了。） ---It was completely dark except the faint light given out by a few stars in the sky. 除了天空中几颗星星发出微弱的光外，四周一片漆黑。 ---The world was burdened with a sea of darkness. A sense of horror creeping up on me. I immediately turned around to slide into the bed and curled up. 世界被黑暗的海洋所笼罩。一种恐惧感向我袭来。我立刻转身滑进床上，蜷缩起来。 大招综合运用： 风： 1)外面刮起了大风，地上的灰尘乱飞。 (概述)Outside, there was a strong wind, the dust on the ground flying in disorder。 (细节) Outside, there was a strong wind, blowing the branches in all directions. The dust on the ground was flying in disorder, which made people unable to open their eyes. 外面刮起了大风，吹的树枝乱摆，地上的灰尘乱飞，让人睁不开眼睛。 雨： 2)昨天下了倾盆大雨。 (概述) It was raining cats and dogs. (细节) It was raining cats and dogs yesterday when school was over. I was all wet when I got home. 昨天放学的时候在下着倾盆大雨。我到家时全身都湿了。 3)汤姆在暴雨中淋湿了。 (概述) Tom was caught in a heavy downpour. (细节)Unfortunately, Tom was caught in the heavy rain, wet through from head to toe, like a drowned rat. 真不幸，汤姆在暴雨中被淋成了落汤鸡。 4)刚才还是白云朵朵，一霎时狂风暴雨起来了。 (概述) Just now there were still white clouds, but in a flash, it poured down. (细节)The weather in summer is unpredictable. Just now there were still white clouds, but in a flash, lightning and thunder broke out, and there came a downpour. 夏天的天气真 是变幻莫测。刚才还是白云朵朵，一霎时就电闪雷鸣，狂风暴雨起来了。 5)天气闷热得要命。 (概述)The weather was so hot. (细节) The weather was so hot that there was no wind, and the thick air seemed to be frozen. 天气闷热得要命，一丝风也没有，稠乎乎的空气好像凝住了。 6)天气热得吓人，我汗流浃背。 (概述)The weather was terrible and I was sweating like a pig. (细节) Though not doing anything, I was sweating like a pig. It was not just hot. It was African hot, which was too terrible to tolerate. 虽然我什么都没做，但还是汗流浃背。 不止是热，是像非洲一样热!天热得吓人。 7)天很冷。 (概述)It's freezing cold. (细节) I can't stop shivering from the cold trembling all over. 我冷得不停打哆嗦。 8)这寒风真是刺骨. (概述)The wind was bone-chilling. (细节) The wind was so bone-chilling that it cut right through me. 这寒风如此刺骨，直接穿过我的身体。 应试素材积累： 1.夏夜： 宁 静 的 夜 空 中 挂着一轮明月和 闪 烁 的 星 星，与 慢 节 奏 的 村 庄 形 成 一 幅 和 谐 的 美 景。 There is harmony between the moon and stars in the quiet sky and the slow pace of the village. 2.春天户外：小鸟像音乐家一样，在树上唱着优美的歌，蝴蝶像多采多姿的舞蹈家一样，拍动着翅膀，飞来飞去。 The birds, like musician, sang their melodious songs in the trees, and butterflies, like colorful dancers,were fluttering here and there. 3. 露水： 当阳光照耀在露珠上时露珠像珠宝一样闪闪发光。 The drops of dew sparkle like jewels when the sun shines on them. 路边长满了嫩绿的草，草上沾满了小小的露珠，他们静静等待着大地母亲的苏醒。 The grass is soft and green on the side of the road, with little dewdrops on each piece of grass, they quietly welcome mother earth to wake up. 4. 日出：第二天，日出的光线很早就将他唤醒。夜晚的星星都被阳光藏在粉蓝色 的天空下。 The next day, the sunlight woke him very early, hiding the stars under a pink blue and blue sky. 旭日从雾霭中冉冉升起，东升红彤彤，新鲜而充满生机. The sun coming up from its flatbed of fog, red and new and full of promises. 5. 月光：一个美丽而宁静的夜晚，月亮像一个圆盘挂在黑暗的夜空中，淡淡的月光普照万物。 It is a beautiful and quiet night. The moon is like a disc hanging on the dark sky, which casts its light on everything. 6.夏雨： 开始雨点很大，溅起地上的灰尘，打在屋顶上丁当作响. The first drops of rain are huge; they split into the dust on the ground, and plunk on the roof. 7.冬雪： 当我第二天早晨起床时，我看到大地被厚厚的白色毯子覆盖着。 When I got up the next morning, I saw that the ground was covered with a vast blanket of whiteness. 8. “安静祥和” When I was bathed in the sunlight, it felt like the amber-like sunshine was kissing every inch of my skin. (沐浴在阳光下；琥珀色的阳光亲吻着全身的肌肤) ( 1 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$