2026届高三英语读后续写专项复习---冬日买花记---导学案

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 A very cold day! As I approached the supermarket, I noticed an elderly lady standing outside the back of the supermarket. And she was holding a basket of flowers. “Lady, would you like some flowers? Only $2,” she asked me in a soft voice as I was walking past. I politely responded, “No, thank you.” and went inside the supermarket. I was walking around the supermarket searching for things that I needed. At the same time, I was thinking of that lady, standing in the cold holding her basket of flowers. Visualizing the beautiful flowers I had admired, her polite quiet voice and kindness, I wondered I had my own personal struggles --- my unfinished paper, my due rent and my broken relationship with a historian. Actually, I had to budget for everything and even $ 2 was a lot for me, like many of us all and probably for her too. But it wasn’t my first thought when she asked me about buying her flowers. My first thought was that I didn’t have the cash but not as an excuse. I had not carried cash with me for a few years now and I could only guess that not many of us did.  When I went to the register to pay with my card, I asked for $ 2 cash out. The staff member questioned me about the $ 2 and I felt anxious about it. At the same time, she pressed the button to process it. I mentioned that I wanted to buy flowers from the lady who was selling them outside.  Sigh of relief! I was glad to see it all had been accepted by the machine and the staff member handed me the $2. I walked around the corner of the supermarket to the lady. 注意： 1、 续写词数应为150左右; 2、续写部分分为两段，每段的开头已为你写好。 “Sorry I didn't have the cash on me. Now I would like to buy some flowers.” ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ As I walked away, I was guessing why she mentioned the pots of plants. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 文本分析​ 1.角色：_____________________________​ 2.视角：第________人称​ 3.时空线：________→________→________→________→________→（续写）→（续写） 4.可能的线索：​ “我” 最初为什么拒绝买花？：_____________________________​ “我” 后来为什么又决定买花？：_____________________________​ 超市工作人员对 “我” 取 2 美元现金的态度是怎样的？：_____________________________​ 老妇人卖花可能是出于什么原因？：_____________________________​ 老妇人提到盆栽可能有什么含义？：_____________________________​ 5.情节线：________→________→________→________→（续写）→（续写）​ 6.情感线：​ “我”：→________→________→________→（续写）→（续写）​ 老妇人：→________→（续写）→（续写）​ 7.文章大意：​ 中文：_____________________________​ 英文：_____________________________​ 8.句式（宾语从句、同位语从句、定语从句、非谓语动词、with 的复合结构）：_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________​ 9.主题：_____________________________​ 情节构造​ 第一段提示句：“Sorry I didn't have the cash on me. Now I would like to buy some flowers.”​ 衔接 1（对这句话提问 “？”）：_____________________________​ 过渡句推演：衔接 1→________？←衔接 2​ 衔接 2（对后续情节提问 “？”）：_____________________________​ 第二段提示句：As I walked away, I was guessing why she mentioned the pots of plants.​ 衔接 3（对这句话提问 “？”）：_____________________________​ 过渡句推演：衔接 3→________？←主题​ 主题：_____________________________​ 段落构思​ 第一段提示句：“Sorry I didn't have the cash on me. Now I would like to buy some flowers.”​ ① _____________________________​ ② _____________________________​ ③ _____________________________​ Para1: _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 第二段提示句：As I walked away, I was guessing why she mentioned the pots of plants.​ ① _____________________________​ ② _____________________________​ ③ _____________________________​ Para2: _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 文本分析​ 1.角色：“我”（在生活中面临诸多困难，最终决定从老妇人那里买花）、 elderly lady（在超市外寒冷天气中卖花的老妇人）、超市工作人员​ 2.视角：第____一____人称​ 3.时空线：寒冷的一天，“我” 走近超市看到卖花老妇人→老妇人向 “我” 推销花，“我” 拒绝后进入超市→“我” 在超市购物时想着老妇人及自身困境→“我” 结账时要求取 2 美元现金想买花→工作人员处理后 “我” 拿到现金走向老妇人→（续写）“我” 向老妇人说明并买花→（续写）“我” 离开时思考老妇人提到盆栽的原因​ 4.可能的线索：​ “我” 最初为什么拒绝买花？：因为没带现金，且自身经济拮据，2 美元对 “我” 来说也很重要。​ “我” 后来为什么又决定买花？：想到老妇人在寒冷中卖花的情景，以及她的礼貌和善良。​ 超市工作人员对 “我” 取 2 美元现金的态度是怎样的？：先提出疑问，之后还是按流程处理了。​ 老妇人卖花可能是出于什么原因？：可能是为了维持生计。​ 老妇人提到盆栽可能有什么含义？：或许是想推荐更多商品，也可能有其他特殊原因。 5.情节线：“我” 遇外在寒冷中卖花的老妇人，拒绝买花→“我” 在超市购物时心系老妇人及自身困境→“我” 结账时取 2 美元现金准备买花→“我” 拿到现金走向老妇人→（续写）“我” 向老妇人买花，老妇人提及盆栽→（续写）“我” 离开后思考老妇人提盆栽的原因​ 6.情感线：​ “我”：→最初拒绝买花时的平淡→在超市时对老妇人的同情与对自身困境的感慨→决定买花后的坚定→（续写）买花时的真诚→（续写）离开时的疑惑与思考​ 老妇人：→卖花时的礼貌温和→（续写）“我” 回来买花时的反应→（续写）提及盆栽时的状态​ 7.文章大意：​ 中文：在一个寒冷的日子，“我” 走近超市时看到一位老妇人在外面卖花，老妇人向 “我” 推销，“我” 因没带现金拒绝了。在超市购物时，“我” 想着老妇人在寒风中卖花的场景以及自己的诸多困难，但还是决定买花。“我” 结账时取了 2 美元现金，然后走向老妇人。​ 英文：On a very cold day, as I approached the supermarket, I noticed an elderly lady selling flowers outside. She asked me to buy some, but I refused because I had no cash. While shopping in the supermarket, I thought about the lady standing in the cold and my own struggles, but still decided to buy flowers. I got $2 cash when checking out and walked towards the lady.​ 8.句式（宾语从句、同位语从句、定语从句、非谓语动词、with 的复合结构）：​ 宾语从句：“I wondered if I had my own personal struggles --- my unfinished paper, my due rent and my broken relationship with a historian.” “I mentioned that I wanted to buy flowers from the lady who was selling them outside.” 定语从句：“the lady who was selling them outside” 非谓语动词：“Visualizing the beautiful flowers I had admired, her polite quiet voice and kindness” “standing in the cold holding her basket of flowers” 9.主题：即使在生活困境中，小小的善意也能传递温暖，人与人之间的理解和关怀能给人力量。​ 情节构造​ 第一段提示句：“Sorry I didn't have the cash on me. Now I would like to buy some flowers.”​ 衔接 1（对这句话提问 “？”）：How did the elderly lady respond to "me"?​ 过渡句推演：衔接 1→What did the lady do after "me" wanted to buy flowers?←衔接 2​ 衔接 2（对后续情节提问 “？”）：Did the lady mention anything else while selling flowers?​ 第二段提示句：As I walked away, I was guessing why she mentioned the pots of plants.​ 衔接 3（对这句话提问 “？”）：What possible reasons did "I" think of for the lady mentioning the pots of plants?​ 过渡句推演：衔接 3→What did "I" realize from this incident?←主题​ 主题： Small kindnesses can bring warmth in difficult times, and people's interactions are full of touching moments.​ 段落构思​ 第一段提示句：“Sorry I didn't have the cash on me. Now I would like to buy some flowers.”​ ① The elderly lady looked surprised and then smiled.​ ② She picked out some beautiful flowers and handed them to "me".​ ③ She mentioned the pots of plants nearby while "I" was paying.​ Para1: “Sorry I didn't have the cash on me. Now I would like to buy some flowers.” The elderly lady's eyes lit up, and a warm smile spread across her face. "Thank you, dear," she said softly. She carefully selected a bunch of vibrant red flowers and handed them to me. As I gave her the $2, she glanced at the pots of small plants beside her and added, "These little ones would look nice on a windowsill, too." I nodded, taking the flowers, and thanked her.​ 第二段提示句：As I walked away, I was guessing why she mentioned the pots of plants.​ ① "I" thought maybe she wanted to sell more items.​ ② Then "I" realized she might just want to share something nice.​ ③ This incident made "I" feel warm in the cold day.​ Para2: As I walked away, I was guessing why she mentioned the pots of plants. Maybe she hoped to sell more, but there was no urgency in her voice. Perhaps she just wanted to share the beauty of the plants, thinking they might bring me joy. Holding the flowers, I felt a warmth in my heart despite the cold. That small interaction reminded me that even in tough times, kindness and connection can make a difference.​ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$