2026届高三英语读后续写专项复习---篮球暖心事，亲情驱阴霾---导学案

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 It was still light out and Dad wasn’t home yet. He worked all day cleaning pools. Mom told us we needed to wait for Dad so all of us could eat dinner together. It meant I could spend more time outside playing basketball with my brother. Before COVID (新冠肺炎), there had been more money to spend and life had been normal. Dad had bought us a backboard and hoop (篮筐) and had paid someone to install a tall metal pole on the side of the driveway so we could have our own basketball court. We came pretty close to spending as much of the day as we could on the court. We practiced all sorts of shots, holding a ball and sending it into the air and waiting for it to drop into the basket. It felt like magic—all the problems of the world seemed to fade away—and I felt like I was the magician making the magic happen each time I arced the ball (投篮) toward the basket and watched it fly toward its destination. Dad once told me he had felt pretty much the same way about cleaning pools. It had been like being a magician, he said, turning the water from cloudy to clear. Lately, though, it didn’t seem like Dad had seen a lot of magic anywhere. He told us he’d lost some customers to COVID, to job losses. I heard the familiar engine clunk-clunking-click. It was earlier than when Dad usually arrived home. “Hi guys!” Dad said as he got off the car. His shoulders sank heavily, and he couldn’t hide the worry in his eyes. He stood a moment by the side of the car to stretch his arms and catch his breath, and for a moment he closed his eyes. In that moment his face was caught in the fading rays of the sun, and the light revealed a lot more wrinkles than I remembered. He might have thought of himself as a magician with water, but he couldn’t make these worry lines on his forehead or the new wrinkles around his eyes disappear. 注意： 1.续写词数应为150左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Para 1 “Want to shoot a few hoops, Dad?” I asked, thinking it might cheer him up. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________ Para 2 “Another shot tomorrow!” Dad said, “Mom is waiting for us to have dinner now.” ___________________________________________________________________________________________________ 文本分析​ 1.角色：_____________________________​ 2.视角：第________人称​ 3.时空线：________→________→________→________→________→（续写）→（续写）​ 4.可能的线索：​ Why did Dad install a basketball court for "us"?：_____________________________​ How did "I" feel when playing basketball?：_____________________________​ What made Dad's work affected?：_____________________________​ What did Dad think of cleaning pools before?：_____________________________​ How might playing basketball with Dad affect him?：_____________________________​ 5.情节线：________→________→________→________→________→（续写）→（续写）​ 6.情感线：​ “我”：→________→（续写）​ 爸爸：→________→（续写）​ 7.文章大意：​ 中文：_____________________________​ 英文：_____________________________​ 8.句式（宾语从句、同位语从句、定语从句、非谓语动词、with 的复合结构）：_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________​ 9.主题：_____________________________​ 情节构造​ 第一段提示句：Para 1 “Want to shoot a few hoops, Dad?” I asked, thinking it might cheer him up.​ 衔接 1（对 “asked, thinking it might cheer him up” 提问 “？”）：_____________________​ 过渡句推演：衔接 1→________？←衔接 2​ 衔接 2（对后续情节提问 “？”）：_____________________​ 第二段提示句：Para 2 “Another shot tomorrow!” Dad said, “Mom is waiting for us to have dinner now.”​ 衔接 3（对 “said, ‘Mom is waiting for us to have dinner now’” 提问 “？”）：_____________________​ 过渡句推演：衔接 3→________？←主题​ 主题：_____________________________​ 段落构思​ 第一段提示句：Para 1 “Want to shoot a few hoops, Dad?” I asked, thinking it might cheer him up.​ ① _____________________________​ ② _____________________________​ ③ _____________________________​ Para 1:​ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________​ 第二段提示句：Para 2 “Another shot tomorrow!” Dad said, “Mom is waiting for us to have dinner now.”​ ① _____________________________​ ② _____________________________​ ③ _____________________________​ Para2:​_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________​ 参考答案 文本分析​ 1.角色：“我”、爸爸（从事泳池清洁工作，受疫情影响失去部分客户）、妈妈、哥哥（“我” 的兄弟，和 “我” 一起打篮球）​ 2.视角：第一人称​ 3.时空线：白天（爸爸未归）→“我” 和哥哥在户外打篮球→爸爸提前开车回家→爸爸下车后疲惫的状态→（续写）→（续写）​ 4可能的线索：​ Why did Dad install a basketball court for "us"?：疫情前家里经济状况较好，爸爸想让 “我们” 有自己的运动场所。​ How did "I" feel when playing basketball?：感觉很神奇，世间的烦恼都消散了，自己像创造魔法的魔术师。​ What made Dad's work affected?：新冠肺炎疫情，许多客户因失业等原因不再让他清洁泳池。 What did Dad think of cleaning pools before?：觉得像魔术师一样，能把浑浊的水变清澈。​ How might playing basketball with Dad affect him?：可能会让他暂时忘却烦恼，心情变好。​ 5.情节线：白天 “我” 和哥哥等爸爸回家，在户外打篮球→回忆疫情前爸爸安装篮球场及打篮球的感受→爸爸曾觉得清洁泳池像变魔术，如今因疫情工作受影响→爸爸提前回家，神情疲惫，皱纹增多→（续写）→（续写）​ 6.情感线：​ “我”：开心（打篮球时）→关心（看到爸爸疲惫的样子）→（续写）欣慰（爸爸心情好转​ 爸爸：疲惫、忧虑→（续写）放松、愉悦（打篮球时）​ 7.文章大意：​ 中文：白天，“我” 和哥哥等爸爸回家一起吃晚饭，期间在户外打篮球。疫情前家里经济状况不错，爸爸给 “我们” 安装了篮球场。“我” 打篮球时感觉很神奇，能忘却烦恼。爸爸曾觉得清洁泳池像变魔术，如今因疫情失去一些客户，神情疲惫。爸爸提前回家，“我” 看出他的忧虑。​ 英文：It was still light out, and "I" and my brother were playing basketball outside while waiting for Dad to come home for dinner. Before COVID, the family was better off financially, and Dad installed a basketball court for us. "I" felt magical when playing basketball, forgetting all troubles. Dad used to think cleaning pools was like magic, but now he's tired because he lost some customers due to COVID. Dad came home early, and "I" could see his worries.​ 8. 句式（宾语从句、同位语从句、定语从句、非谓语动词、with 的复合结构）： 非谓语动词结构，如 “holding a ball and sending it into the air and waiting for it to drop into the basket”“thinking it might cheer him up”； 定语从句 “Dad had bought us a backboard and hoop and had paid someone to install a tall metal pole on the side of the driveway so we could have our own basketball court” 等。​ 9.主题：家庭亲情的温暖，运动能缓解压力、增进感情。​ 情节构造​ 第一段提示句：Para 1 “Want to shoot a few hoops, Dad?” I asked, thinking it might cheer him up.​ 衔接 1（对 “asked, thinking it might cheer him up” 提问 “？”）：“我” 为什么觉得打篮球能让爸爸开心起来？​ 过渡句推演：衔接 1→爸爸会同意 “我” 的提议吗？←衔接 2​ 衔接 2（对后续情节提问 “？”）：爸爸打篮球时的状态会如何？​ 第二段提示句：Para 2 “Another shot tomorrow!” Dad said, “Mom is waiting for us to have dinner now.”​ 衔接 3（对 “said, ‘Mom is waiting for us to have dinner now’” 提问 “？”）：爸爸说这话时的心情是怎样的？​ 过渡句推演：衔接 3→这次打篮球的经历会给爸爸带来什么影响？←主题​ 主题：家人间的互动能驱散阴霾，带来温暖与力量。​ 段落构思​ 第一段提示句：Para 1 “Want to shoot a few hoops, Dad?” I asked, thinking it might cheer him up.​ ① 爸爸起初有些犹豫，说自己很累，但在 “我” 和哥哥的劝说下还是答应了。​ ② 爸爸拿起球投篮，没中，“我们” 鼓励他，他又试了一次，球进了，他露出了久违的笑容。​ ③ 哥哥也加入进来，父子三人在球场上玩得很开心。​ Para 1:​ “Want to shoot a few hoops, Dad?” I asked, thinking it might cheer him up. Dad hesitated, saying he was tired, but he agreed after my brother and I persuaded him. He picked up the ball and shot, but missed. “Try again, Dad!” we shouted. He took another shot, and the ball went in. A smile spread across his face, which was rare these days. My brother joined in, and the three of us had a great time on the court.​ 第二段提示句：Para 2 “Another shot tomorrow!” Dad said, “Mom is waiting for us to have dinner now.”​ ① 爸爸的语气轻松了许多，眼里的忧虑淡了不少。​ ② 走回家的路上，爸爸和 “我们” 聊起了篮球，还说明天要再较量一番。​ ③ 晚餐时，爸爸的话多了起来，家里的气氛也变得温馨和睦。​ Para 2:​ “Another shot tomorrow!” Dad said, “Mom is waiting for us to have dinner now.” His tone was much lighter, and the worry in his eyes had faded. On the way home, Dad talked with us about basketball and said he would compete with us again tomorrow. During dinner, Dad talked more, and the atmosphere at home became warm and harmonious.​ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$