2026届高三英语读后续写专项复习---青柠的滋味--导学案

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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写词数应为150左右。 It was my first week in the big city, and I stayed with my Aunt Mary. Everything felt boring—the towering buildings, the constant noise, and the endless streams of people. I missed the quiet, familiar fields of my countryside home. That morning, Aunt Mary decided to take me to a downtown supermarket. “You’ve never seen a place like this before, have you?” She asked with a smile. “It’s just a market.” I replied, showing disinterest. Aunt Mary smiled, “Oh, but it’s so much more. Think of it as an adventure. Each stand has something new to show you. Every item here has a story, if you’re willing to listen.” I rolled my eyes. “Things in the market don’t have stories. I prefer our small market back home in the countryside. At least everything there is simple and straightforward.” She didn’t argue, just guiding me to a fruit stand. My eyes widened at the sight of unfamiliar fruits in all shapes and colors. Aunt Mary picked up a strange-looking fruit: a green orange. I frowned (皱眉). “That’s not ripe. Oranges are supposed to be orange,” I said immediately. Aunt Mary smiled gently, “Why not give it a try?” I shook my head. Without a word, she bought a few green oranges and placed them in her basket. We continued walking through the supermarket, passing by stands filled with items I’d never seen before. I was curious but kept my questions to myself, determined to appear uninterested. On our way back to her apartment, Aunt Mary stopped by a park bench and sat down, bending over to find something in her basket. 注意:1.续写词数应为150个左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: She took out one green orange, peeled (剥皮) and shared it with me._________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: I changed my mind and decided to have a taste.__________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 文本分析​ 1.角色:_____________________________​ 2.视角:第________人称​ 3.时空线:________→________→________→________→________→(续写)→(续写)​ 4.可能的线索:​ Why did Aunt Mary take "me" to the downtown supermarket?:_____________________________​ What did "I" think of the green orange at first?:_____________________________​ How did "I" feel about the big city at first?:_____________________________​ What was in Aunt Mary's basket?:_____________________________​ What might "I" discover after tasting the green orange?:_____________________________​ 5.情节线:________→________→________→________→________→(续写)→(续写)​ 6.情感线:​ “我”:________→________→(续写)​ Aunt Mary:________→(续写)​ 7.文章大意:​ 中文:_____________________________​ 英文:_____________________________​ 8.句式(宾语从句、同位语从句、定语从句、非谓语动词、with 的复合结构):_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9.主题:_____________________________​ 情节构造​ 第一段提示句:She took out one green orange, peeled (剥皮) and shared it with me.​ 衔接 1(对 “took out one green orange, peeled and shared it with me” 提问 “?”):_____________________​ 过渡句推演:衔接 1→________?←衔接 2​ 衔接 2(对后续情节提问 “?”):_____________________​ 第二段提示句:I changed my mind and decided to have a taste.​ 衔接 3(对 “changed my mind and decided to have a taste” 提问 “?”):_____________________​ 过渡句推演:衔接 3→________?←主题​ 主题:_____________________________​ 段落构思​ 第一段提示句:She took out one green orange, peeled (剥皮) and shared it with me.​ ① _____________________________​ ② _____________________________​ ③ _____________________________​ Para1:​ ​____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 第二段提示句:I changed my mind and decided to have a taste.​ ① _____________________________​ ② _____________________________​ ③ _____________________________​ Para2:​ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 文本分析​ 1.角色:“我”(来自乡村、初到大城市的人)、Aunt Mary(“我” 的阿姨,居住在大城市)​ 2.视角:第 一 人称​ 3.时空线:“我” 初到大城市的第一周→某天早上→Aunt Mary 带 “我” 去市中心超市→在超市里→返回公寓的路上在公园长椅旁停下→(续写)→(续写) 4.可能的线索:​ Why did Aunt Mary take "me" to the downtown supermarket?:她想让 “我” 体验大城市超市的特别之处,改变 “我” 对大城市的看法。​ What did "I" think of the green orange at first?:“我” 认为它没熟,因为橙子应该是橙色的。​ How did "I" feel about the big city at first?:觉得很无聊,想念乡村的宁静。​ What was in Aunt Mary's basket?:有她买的几个青橙以及在超市买的其他东西。​ What might "I" discover after tasting the green orange?:青橙可能味道很好,让 “我” 对不熟悉的事物改观。​ 5.情节线:“我” 初到大城市感到无聊→Aunt Mary 带 “我” 去市中心超市→“我” 对超市不感兴趣→看到青橙并认为它没熟→Aunt Mary 买下青橙→返回途中在公园长椅停下→(续写)→(续写)​ 6.情感线:​ “我”:无聊、怀念乡村→好奇却装作不感兴趣→(续写)​ Aunt Mary:温和、有耐心→(续写)​ 7.文章大意:​ 中文:“我” 初到大城市的第一周,觉得很无聊,想念乡村。阿姨 Mary 带 “我” 去市中心超市,“我” 不感兴趣,认为乡村小超市更简单。在超市里,“我” 看到青橙觉得没熟,Mary 买下了青橙。返回途中,她们在公园长椅旁停下。​ 英文:It was "my" first week in the big city, and "I" found everything boring, missing the countryside. Aunt Mary took "me" to a downtown supermarket, but "I" was disinterested, preferring the simple small market in the countryside. At the supermarket, "I" thought the green orange was unripe, but Aunt Mary bought some. On the way back, they stopped by a park bench.​ 8. 句式(宾语从句、同位语从句、定语从句、非谓语动词、with 的复合结构): 定语从句 “Everything felt boring—the towering buildings, the constant noise, and the endless streams of people.”; 非谓语动词 “Without a word, she bought a few green oranges and placed them in her basket.” “We continued walking through the supermarket, passing by stands filled with items I’d never seen before.” 等。​ 9.主题:不要凭外表或固有印象判断事物,要勇于尝试和体验新事物。​ 情节构造​ 第一段提示句:She took out one green orange, peeled (剥皮) and shared it with me.​ 衔接 1(对 “took out one green orange, peeled and shared it with me” 提问 “?”):“我” 会接受她分享的青橙吗?​ 过渡句推演:衔接 1→“我” 当时的反应是怎样的?←衔接 2​ 衔接 2(对后续情节提问 “?”):这会促使 “我” 改变对青橙的看法吗?​ 第二段提示句:I changed my mind and decided to have a taste.​ 衔接 3(对 “changed my mind and decided to have a taste” 提问 “?”):“我” 品尝青橙后有什么感受?​ 过渡句推演:衔接 3→这会让 “我” 对大城市的其他事物产生怎样的影响?←主题​ 主题:勇于尝试新事物能带来不一样的体验和认知。​ 段落构思​ 第一段提示句:She took out one green orange, peeled (剥皮) and shared it with me.​ ① “我” 起初拒绝了阿姨的分享,坚持认为青橙没熟不好吃。​ ② 阿姨没有勉强,自己先尝了起来,脸上露出愉悦的表情。​ ③ “我” 看着阿姨的样子,心里的好奇心更加强烈了。​ Para1:​ She took out one green orange, peeled (剥皮) and shared it with me. I shook my head quickly, saying, "I'm sure it's not good. Oranges should be sweet when they're orange." Aunt Mary didn't insist. She took a piece and put it in her mouth. A look of pleasure appeared on her face. "Mmm, it's really delicious. Sweet and a little sour, very special," she said. I stared at her, my curiosity growing stronger.​ 第二段提示句:I changed my mind and decided to have a taste.​ ① “我” 拿起一块青橙放进嘴里,味道出乎意料地好。​ ② “我” 向阿姨承认之前的想法是错误的。​ ③ “我” 开始觉得大城市或许也有有趣的地方。​ Para2:​ I changed my mind and decided to have a taste. I picked up a piece and put it in my mouth. To my surprise, it was really tasty. The sweetness mixed with a little sourness danced on my tongue. I looked at Aunt Mary and said, "I was wrong. It's so delicious." Aunt Mary smiled. "Many things are not as they seem. The big city has many interesting things waiting for you to discover." I nodded, feeling that maybe the big city wasn't so boring after all.​ 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 $$

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