内容正文:
2025秋广西
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Unit 3 Could you please tell me where the
restrooms are?
第六课时 单元写作指导
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话题概述
本单元的话题是“出行路线”,属于2022新课标“人与社会”主
题范畴中“生活与学习”这一主题群,涉及子主题“跨文化沟通与
交流,语言与文化”。此类书面表达要求学生在日常生活中学会
礼貌地问路和指路。话题写作的角度涉及:①如何给他人指路;
②介绍某地的方位;③向他人礼貌地询问及介绍信息。
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典例探究
假设你是李华,你有一位新同学Tom,周末他打算步行去世
纪公园。请根据提示给Tom发一封电子邮件说明从学校前往公园
的路线,并简单介绍世纪公园的情况。内容包括:
1. 路线(见图)
2.公园里环境优美,是放松身心的好去处,在那里可以野餐、
做游戏,晚上还可以赏月……
3.……
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Hi Tom,
Century Park is not far from our school. It is easy to get
there. Just go straight ____________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
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四步法写作
第一步:思路剖析
(一)仔细审题
①文体:本文以邮件的形式介绍了从学校前往公园的路线及公园
的情况,是一篇________
②人称:向新同学介绍应以第____人称为主
③时态:以____________为主
应用文
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一般现在时
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(二)篇章布局
Beginning:引入主题(已给出部分)
Body:主体包括____个部分:1. __________________;2. 对公园美景的描述以及________________________
Ending:表达自己对本次出游的美好期待
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介绍去公园的路线
在公园可以做的一些活动
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第二步:推敲词汇
1._____________________________在第二个十字路口左转
turn left at the second crossing
2._____________________沿着体育大街走
walk along Tiyu Street
3._____________去野餐
have a picnic
4.__________________放风筝
fly a kite/ fly kites
5.___________做游戏
play games
6._____________________________在夜晚赏月
enjoy/admire the moon at night
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第三步:连词成句
1.在第二个十字路口左转,然后沿着体育街走。
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Turn left at the second crossing and then walk along Tiyu Street.
2.公园里有许多树和花。(There be句型)
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There are many trees and flowers in the park.
3.这也是一个放松自己的好地方。(It is +n.+to do sth.)
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It is also a good place to relax ourselves.
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4.你可以野餐、放风筝和玩游戏。
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You can have a picnic, fly a kite and play games.
5.我希望你可以玩得开心!
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I hope you can have a good time!
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第四步:分阶范文
初阶范文 高阶范文
Hi Tom,
Century Park is not far
from our school. It is easy to
get there. Just go straight,
turn left at the second
crossing and walk along Tiyu Hi Tom,
Century Park is not far
from our school. It is easy to
get there. Just go straight, turn
left at the second crossing and
walk along Tiyu Street. You
can see Century Park on your
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初阶范文 高阶范文
Street. You can see Century
Park on your right. It is very
beautiful. You can see many
trees and flowers in the park.
And you can relax yourself
there. You can have a picnic,
fly a kite and play games. right. It is the most beautiful
park in my eyes. ①There are
many trees and flowers in the
park. ②And it is also a good
place to relax yourself. You
can have a picnic, fly a kite
and play games there.
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初阶范文 高阶范文
And you can also enjoy the
moon at night. You can go to
Zhangyang Restaurant. It is
next to the park. The food
there is very delicious. What's more, you can admire
the moon at night. ③If you
are hungry, you can go to
Zhangyang Restaurant. It is
next to the park. The food
there is very delicious.
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初阶范文 高阶范文
I hope you can have a
good time!
Yours,
Li Hua I hope you can have a
good time!
Yours,
Li Hua
①句使用“there be”句型;②句使用“It is+n.+to do sth.”句型;
③句使用if引导的条件状语从句。
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实战演练
John和你(张斌)是同班同学,他住在你们学校(一中)。
请你用英语给他写封邮件,邀请他明天下午参加你的生日聚会。
内容包括:
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1. 邀请John参加你的生日聚会;
2. 告诉他去你家的路线(图中阴影处是你(张斌)家);
3. 聚会的内容:唱歌、跳舞、吃蛋糕。
注意:1.词数在80词左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
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Dear John,
My birthday is coming. We will have a birthday party at
my home tomorrow afternoon. We will dance, sing and share a
big birthday cake. It would be great if you could join us.
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My home is not far from our school. If you come, you
should go straight along People's Road, then turn right at
Guangming Road, and then go across Xiangyang Road. And
you will find a cinema on the left. My home is just beside it.
Hope to see you tomorrow at the party.
Yours,
Zhang Bin
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